Heyy, It’s Anjali back with the next chapter!!!
Thnxx for comments and to my silent readers….

Swasan phone conversation
Swara ( entering the hall) : Ma, What the hell is the matter…..(seeing someone sitting down on the sofa) Sanskaar?
Sanskaar (amiably) : Good Morning Swara!
Sumi (prodding Swara excitedly) : Look! Look! Swara, Look!
Swara : Yeah, Yeah, I’m looking….
She stared at the envelope and opened it, looking at Sanskaar. He urged her to open it. She took out the contents of the envelope and glanced at it.
Swara (absolutely gob-smacked) : Whaaaa…
She looked at Sanskaar in shock….
Swara (with awe) : San….skaar?

Ragini, astounded to see her mother’s and sister’s reactions went near Swara.
Ragini (puzzled) : Swara? (receiving no response, She took the paper from Swara’s grasp) Swara, What is in this?
She also read the contents of the letter and looked at Sanskaar with an expression similar to Swara.
The three Gadodias looked at him with expressions akin to shock, disbelief and awe. Sanskaar looked at them perplexed.
Sanskaar : Hello? Aunty? Ragini? Swara? ( Receiving no response ) Gadodia parivaar??? Hello??? PARIVAAR GADODIA? Have you gone deaf?
The three women came to their wits and Sumi teared up.
Sumi : I can’t believe you did this, beta!
Sanskaar : Aunty….
Sumi : No! No no no no no…. You are not to call me aunty anymore. Pleasem If you don’t mind, Call me Ma from today?
Sanskaar smiled and nodded. He hugged Sumi and kissed her on the cheek.
Sanskaar : From today, You are my Ma as well.
sumi smiled and blessed him. She patted his cheek and went to clear her tears and get her emotions in control.
Ragini : Sanskaar! Even I can’t believe it. You are so thoughtful.
Sanskaar : Nothing like that, Ragini! I just felt it was my duty. After all, I too am a Gadodia son now.
Ragini grinned and hugged him.
Ragini : You’re going to be the best jiju ever!! I’ll go calm Ma now. Byee….
She too left the room leaving only Swara and Sanskaar in the room.
Sanskaar (softly) : Swara?

Swara stood in the middle of the room staring unfocusedly at him.
Sanskaar : Swara? What happened?
Swara still stared at him while he looked at her with a concerned and perplexed look. Suddenly Swara dropped the bare envelope which was still in her hand and ran towards Sanskaar.
Sanskaar : Sw…
Before he could finish telling her name, She enveloped him in huge bear hug. He almost stumbled and fell, due to the forcefulness of her hug, But at the last moment stood straight, his face showing his shock.
Sanskaar : Swara?
Swara (clutching Sanskaar tightly, sobbing ) : I didn’t know you cared about us so much. I didn’t know… I didn’t know…. Sanskaar! I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU PAID OFF ALL OUR DEBTS. I never told you anything about the financial prolems we were facing, yet you were so thoughtful for Ma that you paid everything and put in a pension for Ma! All because she could live so happily…….
She clutched him even tighter. Sanskaar’s heart was racing with pleasure and her speech made him feel like he was on Mount Everest.
Swara (continued) : I don’t know how I could have ever thought that you were an arrogant jerk. You are the nicest man I’ve ever met. The nicest. I’m sorry (her voice broke down) I’m sorry..I’m sorry….

Sanskaar (touched and broken hearted to see his strong Swara cry) : Swara! Why are you crying? And how could I have not done this? This is going to be my parivaar too from now on, na? Then why will I not take care of my Ma and my sister….
She looked up at him, with tears in her eyes, wonderingly. He smiled at her.
Sanskaar : Swara! I did this to see a smile on your face. I thought you will be happy to know that your Ma will be taken care of from now on. This beta will make sure she’s always aright. Then why
are you crying? Why Swara? I can’t see you cry..Please….
He hugged her tightly and she clinged on to him. Finally,
Swara : These were tears of joy and relief, Sanskaar! Do you know how much I had stayed up the whole night this past year wondering how I was going to pay all the debts? After Papa died, We were fine for a while, But then soon our financial problems increased so much that I had no other choice than to borrow. And when I found a job in Kolkata, I thought I could pay it back. But I had to wait 3 months before I started. I was so worried for Ma and Ragini. How was I going to support them? How will they lead a comfortable life?
Sanskaar listened to her silently, understanding that she needed to pour the secrets she had been harbouring all these months. He just held her close to him.
Swara (continued) : And then, You came into our lives. I knew from the very first day that if Ragini married you, Our problems might be solved. But I didn’t want that for her. I didn’t want her to marry a man who I thought was the worst man alive. But now, I realise how wrong I was. I do. You are the best person alive. Please forgive me! Please… Please… (she starts sobbing again)
Sanskaar slowly raised her head and wiped her tears. He kissed her forehead and hugged her sideways.

Sanskaar : No Swara! You don’t have to be sorry. It wasn’t your fault. I was an arrogant jerk. I was not who I am now. The Sanskaar that you see now isn’t the same Sanskaar who was there a month ago. It is you and your family who brought about this change in me. Especially you, Swara Gadodia! You taught me how to be more relaxed and more amiable. And after all, What do you have to be sorry for? Even i had misconceptions about you. I thought you were a selfish girl. I misunderstood you so badly…..
Swara stared at him.
Sanskaar : Swara! I’m sorry too. I was too judgemental about you. I thought you must be jealous of Ragini’s beauty and popularity that I failed to see your love for your family. I failed to see the pain you took upon yourself so that the others can lead a comfortable life. I’m so sorry!
Swara stopped him.
Swara : No Sanskaar! From now on, No more sorries and no more thank you’s…. We are to be husband and wife. I’m just glad that we understood each other so well. There are no misconceptions between us now.

Sanskaar : Yes Swara! Till today, we were friends. But today we are something more. We are best friends and partners for life.
Swara, though disappointed that he didn’t mention love, smiled at him, nodded and hugged him, which he reciprocated with vigour.
After some time,
Sanskaar (murmuring in her ear) : Swara!
Swara : Mmmm…
Sanskaar : I have to tell you something.
Swara (straightening herself) : Toh bolo!
Sanskaar : I’m glad I came so early. You want to know why?
Swara nodded. He stepped forward and whispered in her ear, making her shiver with anticipation.
Sanskaar (lowering his voice dramatically) : Swara….I am glad because….because…
Swara (breathless and whispering) : What Sanskaar?
Sanskaar : I’m glad I came because I got to see you in your mickey mouse pajamas. It’s so funny. The great Swara Gadodia, who can frighten anyone and intimidate anyone wears mickey mouse pajamas?? Hahahah….LOL Swara!! C’mon, Ek picture toh we have to take.
Swara stood with her mouth open to see Sanskaar laughing at her and taking out his phone…
Swara (screeching) : SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI!!! Ughhh…. How can you be the sweetest guy the first minute and the most irritating guy the next?
Sanskaar (laughing) : Your influence, Baby!! Your influence.
Swara glared at him and Sanskaar laughed.

Swara : Today, I won’t leave you! Just you wait…
She started chasing him through the house. He ran laughing all the way until Swara’s room. He entered the room and locked himself in the washroom.
Swara (banging the door from outside) : YOU COWARD! Come out! Are you scared of me?
Sanskaar : Haan! Daayan ho na tum…
Swara : Sanskaar! Watch what you say… Itna bhi irritate mat karo….
Tired of banging the door, She stopped and leaned against the washroom door, utterly silent.
Sanskaar : Swara? (No response) Swara? Has this girl left? Oh God! What if she locked the door from outside? Sanskaar Maheshwari, Open the door! This girl is capable of taking even with me. SWARA!!!
He opened the door so fast that Swara lost her balance and fell straight in Sanskaar’s arms. They stare at each other for a long time admiring one another.
Swara : Mr Maheshwari! First, You call me a kid, Then you call me a daaysn and finally, you want me to fall. You’re very bad…. Jao…I don’t want to talk to you.
Sanskaar (amused) : Arre! Did I tell you to lean on the door? You did that yourself. How is that my fault?
Swara glared at him.
Swara : I don’t know. I don’t care. It is your fault….Bas.
She went near the basin to wash her hands. He came near her and closed the tap. She looked at him with irritation.
Swara : Now what are you doing?
Sanskaar shrugged, looking innocent.
Sanskaar : I am not doing anything. I’m just conserving water.
Swara : Uff…
She opened the tap again and he closed it again.

Swara (in a warning tone) : Sanskaar!
Sanskaar (in the same tone) : Swara!
She turned and threw a brush on him.
Sanskaar (after catching the brush, amused) : Arre! What the hell! What are you doing?
Swara : Exactly what you are doing…Disturbing me…
She threw many more things until his hands were finally full. He dropped everything and caught Swara’s hand which was ready with more stuff to throw. He pushed her back until the wall near the shower nozzle.
Sanskaar (in a low voice) : Swara Gadodia! Murdering your future husband is a criminal offense.
Swara (innocently) : It is an offense only if your body is found, Mr Maheshwari!
He stared at her open-mouthed. She smirked at him evilly and escaped from his grasp with a triumphant light in her eyes. However Sanskaar pulled her back and she hit the shower nozzle which turned on and water started pouring on them both.
Swara : Sanskaar! Leave me. C’mon! We have to go to a dry place otherwise you’ll get cough…. Sanskaar!
Sanskaar (staring at her with a passionate intensity) : Kyun Swara? I like this spot a lot.
He moved closer to her and slowly removed the wet hairs from her face. He slowly kissed her cheeks and bent down to touch her lips when…
Ragini (from below) : Swara! Breakfast! Come fast… You have to go out na?
Swara and Sanskaar blush and come back into their senses.
Swara : Ab toh tum jao… And let me get ready….
Sanskaar : Haan! I’m going… I have a spare set of clothes in the car, So I’ll change.
She nodded.

Sanskaar : By the way, Before we go on our kind of a date, We have to go to the temple and give our engagement invitation there. So, dress appropriately.
Swara : Ok!! Ab jao!
Swara (picking up the things that she had thrown on the floor) : Yeh Mr Maheshwari bhi na! Why is he so annoying? First he gives us this wonderful news, then irritates me to shit, and now again he’s taking me on a date. Ugh!!!
She turns on the shower and steps inside.
Swara : And I love this pagla! Bhagwan Ji, How come you gave me such a man to love? Either he’s too khadoos, ya he’s too fun and bubbly. Or else he’s so irritating, I feel like strangling him. But even then, I cannot imagine a life without my Mr Maheshwari! This guy is sure to make me pagal as well, But I will be happy. I will have him and I will be with my love. What else do I need? Mr Maheshwari, With each gesture you make, I am sure that you like me better and better. Surely, One day, This will turn into love.
She dressed up and looked into the mirror.
Swara : I hope Sanskaar likes this dress…. Swara! What’s wrong with you? Your world seems to revolve around Sanskaar now. You were never like this before. I guess that the so called “Pyaar ka Bhoot” has caught you too…Pagal ladki…. Ab chal!
She went down to the dining hall where Sanskaar was with Ragini and Sumi having breakfast……

Guyss, I know this epi was long, but not as long as my other chapters…. But don’t worry…It will soon be the same size again…
How did you like this chapter? And my suspense? Was it realistic enough?
And don’t worry…I won’t drag this on much more….Swasan’s engagement will soon happen….So sit back and relax and hopefully continue to enjoy the chapters…
Guys!!! I finished 20 CHAPTERSSS 😀 😀 😀
Thnxx for supporting me through this journey…. I really really hope that this continues to entertain you from now on as well….I don’t know how long this ff is going to go on. First, I thought 25 chapters, But now I can write more…So let’s see how much we see of Mr Maheshwari and I …..

Credit to: Anjali

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  1. Great epi

    1. Thnxxx kanika

  2. Loved the ep… loved to c carefree sanskar… I just loved their fight… its true sanskar is no more earlier sanskar… He has changed bt for good… waiting for karan entry…plz don’t even thnk of stopping this ff now. .. There is lot’s happen in this story… atleast 50 ep I thnk so… I know I am lil more demanding… BT ur writing is really demanding…n soon upload same more long ep… waiting for swasan date…n dear also take care of your health…

    1. Thnxxx Sujata!!!

      I’m definitely not stopping this for now, But let’s see how far I can go..
      I’m perfectly fine now, Thanksss 🙂 🙂
      From today, It will be longer epis….

  3. Amazing ep…..It was so sweet of sanskar….But I want longer size..plz do it as soon as you can…….plz post it asap…….

    1. Thnxx Jiya!!!
      Will post one tonight….

  4. Superb episode..
    Love this shade of swara…she cant be strong every time…
    Carefree sanaskar was adorable.
    He is not yhe same he was a month ago..
    Glad they speak their heart out…

    1. Thnxx Kiara!!
      Glad you loved this portrayal!!

  5. U rock anjali!
    Plz post d nxt part asap!

    1. Thnxx Jaf….
      I actually have read only the first chapter of ur hurdles ff… But today I will read the rest… Loved the first chapter itself though….

      Will upload new chapter by tonight

  6. As usual u did it amazingly anjali…. It was so considerate of sanskar to clear off the debts n the cute fight n swara’s mirror confession is too goood to read…. As i have said earlier dont worry abt the length of d ff just upload it … It makes my day usually… Congrats on d completion of 20 episodes buddy… Take care n have a nice weekend …. Again it was a early morning feast to me in my bed…

    1. Thnxxx dev…..
      Glad you liked it…..

      Thnxxx you’ve been commenting since the first few epis….
      Happy ur supporting me…

  7. Wow superb epi anjali…. its realistic , and sanskar surprise for swara was so emotional… and sanskar is changing like u mentioned.. nice to c diz side of sanskar.. okieee waiting for swasan date…..
    Hw r u????

    1. Thnxxx navi……..

      Glad this was realistic….

      Swasan date is in the next chapter….????
      I’m perfectly fine now….
      I saw ur comment in the previous chapters but couldn’t reply…. sorry…

      How did ur presentation go??
      It was supposed to be yesterday right??
      Hope you did well

      1. S dr… did wel…
        No need of asking sorry….

  8. As usual amjali u nailed it again…awesome dear…

    1. Sorry its anjali…

    2. Thnxxx dolly…..??

  9. Aa good morning treat from you anjali..after getting up in the morning the first thing I did was to read this.. My my..we readers get excited lyk kinds watching the link on telly bytes.. Superb yaar.

    1. Awww….
      Thank you sooo much anandi…..
      Glad you all love this ff…..

  10. Wow amazing ultimate. Anjali. From where I get all these ideas? U just rocked dear. I believe it is gonña be around 35-40 episodes in these ff. Fingers crossed.

    1. Thank you sooo much dhara…..
      UK what…everything I type ur .and I’m my phone it automatically gets corrected to swara….???
      I have my fingers crossed too…lets see how far I can take it….

  11. Its awesome..super nw eagrly waiting fr nxt part..m bi fan of swasan nd ur ff..update soon

    1. Thnxxx Soo much kittu….
      Will submit next part tonight…
      Glad you love my ff……

  12. Its awesome..super nw eagrly waiting fr nxt part..m bi fan of swasan nd ur ff..update soon..

    1. Thnxxx Kittu!!!
      Glad you love my ff….
      will submit by tonight!!

  13. Wow what a wonderful treat this morning!!!
    Couldn’t have started any better?
    Lovely episode Anjali!!!
    So it’s their debts that he cleared hmmm very thoughtful of Mr Maheshwari ?
    Loved their tom n jerry fight hahah???
    In short subha subha dil khush kardiya anjaliii!!!
    Waiting for their date??haww first date

    1. Thanksss shraddha!!!! ???
      Glad you liked it…

      Next epi will be the date….
      Until then wait karna padega!!!

  14. Awesome!,!!!l

    1. Thnxxx sasha!!!!

  15. sudharshna udhayakumar

    Epi was so good anjali! just loved it?
    1 more request I have started a fanfic on dahleez named saga of love hence give it a look because I was a silent reader because of your fanfics I got inspired and started to write .sorry don’t take me wrong for the request. …?

    1. Thank you sooo much sudharshana…..

      I’m so glad that you decided to come forward and comment…
      And I’m really honoured that you started writing one because I inspired you….in really really surprised but pleased….

      And yeah, I have read the 2 chapters you posted….I love dehleez and love the way you have started….
      Do continue…. I just haven’t commented but did read it in the bus….I was so happy that a dehleez ff was already started….

  16. Awesome plz update sanskar’s pov also

    1. Thnxxx shagun….
      Sure..ill write his pov as well…

  17. superb part anjali ….continue soon

    1. Thnxxx Esha…will upload next by tonight…

  18. Amazing dear

    1. Thnxxx juan……thnxx juan….

  19. I am eagerly waiting for that episode in which sanskar will say that he loves swara….yupieee…il be on cloud 9 that day????

    1. Ik you will kavya….

      But that will be a while still…. you’ll have to wait and watch…

      1. Now a days its like i am waiting for two things that’s your ff and your reply….seriously its soo different to be friends whom u have never even met for once… Will u accept my friend request Anjali???

      2. Ik it’s different…..
        But ofc we are friends…
        Is that even a question ?? 😮 😮
        But I don’t know what you do…Are u a student or in college or what?

      3. Yup i am Sweety,chotku,motku wali school student??

  20. Lovely episode…swara and sanskar scenes superb..plz introduce Laksh and ragini scenes also.. Plz.

    1. Thnxxx richa….

      I’m really sorry for no raglak in this….but I def can’t write about them in this…
      Only in my next story….sorry

  21. Awwwwww…..so sweet of Sanskaar.Mr.Maheswari is driving me crazy day by day.Loved swasan’s convo.sumi’s reaction was ultimate.Thanka dear for making my day.Eagerly waiting swasan date.Take care .

    1. Thnxxx needhi!!!!?????

      You too take care….
      Swasan date next chapter!!!!

  22. Awesome episode……specially swasan part nd bathroom scene just loved it…….nd hope u r fine now….take care dear….love U ?

    1. Thnxxx L Khan!!!

      Im perfectly fine now 😀 😀
      Love you toooo….. <3

  23. Each chapter u make it so interesting..i just love it..waiting for next part dear..??

    1. Thnxx Pranami…..
      Am so happy you love it <3 <3
      Will upload next tonight…..
      <3 <3

    1. Thnxxx newbie…. 😀


    1. Hii Divya!!! I’m perfectly fine now, Thnxxx for asking…

      So sorry , but I haven’t finished writing it yet, So it will come only tom morning…
      The thing is that I have Saturday college 🙁 otherwise I would have posted….Please wait patiently…

  25. Really superb epi Anjali swasan masti is awsome yaar I Lvd it……

    1. Thank you sooo much Fatima!!! <3 <3

  26. Awesome chapter waiting for d nxt

    1. Thnxx Jasmine, Will submit by tonight!!

  27. superb..

    1. Thnxx Darsh!!!

  28. I was a silent reader till now.But ur ff forced me to comment. Your ff is just AWESOME.I mean the way you portray is just mind-blowing

    Waiting for the next part.?

    1. Thank you soo much for coming forward and commenting Angel…..
      Glad you like my portrayal…..

      Will submit next part by tonight!!

  29. oh ..god..amazing mind blowing as usual… waiting for the next chapter eagerly…hatts off to you dear…..
    anjali u r one of the best writers dear…loved it..

    1. Thnxxx so much smitha!!!
      Idk about the best writers comment… There are so many amazing authors out there… But I’m really honoured and mind blowingly happy :* :*

      Will submit nexxt by tonight!!

    1. Thnxxx Payal 🙂 🙂

  30. Guysss,
    I’m too busy watching the india-pakistan match so will be submitting the chapter late….
    I can’t help it…. I LOVE CRICKET <3 <3

  31. Guyss…. I finished writing half chapter…
    Will finish the other half tomorrow and post it later ok…

    Please wait patiently…. :* : *
    It’s a long one so I need some time…

  32. Anjali can you plzz tell how much late you will post because the first thing after opening my eyes i think is ur ff ……
    You know cant help it …

    1. Sorry sejal…..
      I guess it will take some time…
      As I just woke up….
      But ill do my best to post asap….

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