SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I (Chapter 18)

SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
Heyy, It’s Anjali back with the next chapter!!!
Thnxx for comments and to my silent readers….
HAVE FUN!!!
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Swara tells the truth to Sanskaar. Sanskaar announces that he will marry Swara
CHAPTER 18
Sanskaar : Swara! I will be a good and faithful husband to you. But I have to tell you one thing. This marriage won’t have love. I can never love you, Swara!
Swara stared at him, shocked , an awful lump in her throat. Why, she felt shocked, she didn’t know. It was what she had been expecting.
She didn’t know if what she felt for him could be called love. but she was fairly certain she could love him, and deathly afraid that after a few weeks of marriage, she would love him.
And it would be so nice if he could just love her back.

Sanskaar (continued, unable to understand the turmoil in Swara’s heart) : Friendship between the husband and the wife is of the utmost importance, even more important, in my opinion, than love. ( Swara’s expression remained the same, But her heart sank) Our marriage will be one based on mutual friendship and respect, and I for one could not be more pleased.
Swara ( echoed, Because Sanksaar was looking at her expectantly ) : Respect! I’m so glad you thought that I needed respect.
She knew he was saying nothing she did not expect, and yet she found it somewhat needling all the same. She was cranky now and had to snap at someone.

Sanskaar’s eyes narrowed.
Sanskaar : Are you taking this seriously Swara?
Swara : Of course I am.
Sanskaar ( giving her a funny look, Not sure if he believed her) : Good! There are certain things I cannot give you,…………and love, I’m afraid, is one of them.
Swara nodded, each movement of her neck causing pain in her heart.
Swara : I see.
Sanskaar : Do you?

Swara (practically snapping) : Of course, You could not make it any plainer if you wrote it on my arm.
Sanskaar (taken aback at her forceful reply) : Swara! I never planned to marry for love.
Swara : That’s not what you told me when you were trying for Ragini’s hand.
Sanskaar (sighing) : That’s because I was trying to impress you.
Swara (crossing her arms) : Well, You are certainly not impressing me now.
Sanskaar (letting out a long breath) : Swara! I don’t know what to tell you. I did not come here to argue. I merely thought it best if we were honest with one another before the wedding.
Swara (sighing) : Of course.
Sanskaar (softly) : It is best that we understand each other now.
Swara just kept nodding. A body in motion tended to remain in motion, and she was afraid that if she stopped, she might do something really stupid, like cry. He reached across and took her hand, which made her flinch.

Sanskaar : I didn’t want you to enter this marriage with any delusions. I didn’t think you’d want that.
Swara : Of Course not Mr Maheshwari.
Sanskaar (frowning) : Mr Maheshwari? Call me Sanskaar!
Swara (glad with the change of subject, smiled cheekily) : Ookay…….Mr Maheshwari.
She giggled and removed her hand from his grasp and started running. He laughed and chased her.
Swara (dodging him by pushing a table towards him) : You’re so slow Sanskaar! Will you ever catch me?
Sanskaar : Ab dekh! Look how I’ll catch you.
Swara : Haan! Haan! I already saw your running skills that day. You couldn’t even outrun Zozo!
Sanskaar ( wildly reaching out to catch her, but failing ) : It is not my fault if your stupid, fat dog is a freak of nature. Who knew that such a hippo could run so fast?
Swara (eyes blazing, stopped in her tracks) : What did you just tell? Did you just INSULT my lovely Zozo, Mr Maheshwari? Bhaad me jao! My Zozo is the best…
Sanskaar : Your Zozo, the best? Hahahaha!
Swara : Did you just laugh at me, Mr Maheshwari?

Sanskaar : Aargh! Stop calling me that.
Swara came near Sanskaar and stepped close to him. She stepped closer and closer until Sanskaar felt that their hearts were beating at the same time. She moved still closer and covered his eyes with her palm. He closed his eyes and his breathing became more and more shallow.
Just as he thought Swara was about to kiss him on the cheek, He felt a sharp thwack on his shoulder. He opened his eyes in surprise and saw Swara smirking at him evilly.
Swara : Now you know not to insult my dog or laugh at me…
She stuck her tongue out at him, laughed and turned.
Sanskaar : One minute Swara!
And he grabbed her hand and turrned her around so fast she stumbled and fell down pulling him on top of her.
Their worlds stopped. They only thing they felt that mattered was the person they were staring at. Sanskaar looked into Swara’s eyes and drank the sight of her. She looked so innocent, so sweet, so perfect for him.
She fit perfectly in his arms…
She was amazing. She was…
She was…

She was….
SHE WAS HIS!
Sanskaar smiled at the thought!
Swara (looking at him as if he were mad) : What are you suddenly smiling about?
Sanskaar (unthinkingly) : I was thinking about how you are going to be mine…
Swara blushed.
Swara : Ohh!
Sanskaar smiled and ran his finger over her pink cheeks.
Sanskaar : I didn’t know you knew how to blush, Miss Swara Gadodia! I think I like it. I’m going to do everything in my power to make sure you blush like this. I will…( he brought his finger down to her neck, Swara closed her eyes) I will kiss you here.
He bent closer and breathed softly near her ear. The hot breath made Swara shiver.
Sanskaar (whispering, and moving his hand to hold her) : I will….AAAAHHH!
He clambered off her in a hurry. Swara opened her eyes shocked as to what the hell suddenly happened.
Swara : Sanskaar?
Sanskaar : Aargh! Your bl**dy dog, Swara! (pointing to Zozo)
Swara looked at Zozo and understood everything that had happened. She began laughing. As Sanskaar had been moving his hand, He had by mistake placed it on top of sleeping Zozo’s tail which had caused the dog to wake up. Zozo had then licked Sanskaar which had startled him as he did not know that the dog was there.

Sanskaar : Haan! Laugh nicely at my expense! Here, I almost died due to that dog and you are laughing? What sort of a fiancee are you?
Swara (laughing hysterically) : You got scared by a foot long dog? The great Sanskaar Maheshwari, terror of the society, the most feared by all businessman was terrified by the sweetest dog alive?
She sat down and laughed long and hard. Sanskaar scowled at first, But then seeing her glowing laugh and vibrant face softened and smiled, looking at her.
Finally, Swara stopped laughing and placed both her hands on her ears.
Swara : Achcha Baba! Sorry! Nahi hasungi…. Don’t get angry.
Sanskaar : Nahi! I wasn’t. Anyways, I ought to be going. Mom wants me to come and choose your engagement ring.
Swara nodded and walkedd with him till the door. Sanskaar made a motion to leave, but then turned back and looked at her.
Swara : What happened Sanskaar?
He hesitated, but then dropped a feathery light kiss on her forehead.
Sanskaar (softly) : I’ll see you later!
And he left.

Swara closed the door and came and sat down, thinking of the events that had taken place since morning.
Swara : Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari! You may not love me yet, But I do know you care for me. And that gives me confidence. I will show you that our marriage will be one full of friendship, happiness AND LOVE! I don’t know what demons are preventing you from accepting that you can love another person, but I will vanquish them. My love is not so weak that it will never be reciprocated.
Swara stood up determinedly.
Swara : Yes! My Mr Maheshwari! You will learn to love. You will have a true marriage. With me. This is a story of Mr Maheshwari and I….And we will write it together!!
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PRECAP : SAME AS CHAPTER 17

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I know that I had given a different precap…But I had writer’s block today..And couldn’t think of a single good idea to show Karan and other scenes. I could have written a filmy unrealistic chapter. But that ruined the entire ff. And I wasn’t willing to post a disappointing chapter.
At first, I thought not to post anything at all. But then I felt bad, Everyone expects so much from me and I had to keep up to their expectations. So I decided to write a short chapter…
Will post long epi tomorrow…
Hope you like this…And thnxxx all those who gave me suggestions…I found many new ideas in addition to the ones I had already thought of!!
Love you guys!

Again, Sorry for not posting a long epi…But I would rather post a short satisfying chapter than a long, disappointing chapter.
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Credit to: Anjali

111 comments

  1. Pranami

    Awesome…superb..mind blowing..what else to say? I’m speechless…l’m running out of words day by day..just feeling happy to get a morning gift i.e. your ff..???

  2. Misti

    No worry…it was swasan part only dat matter to me…keep writing nd keep giving us best…i really lyked it?

  3. sujata

    Sweetest ep of till now… just loved it. …. plz upload nxt ASAP. …. n a long one plz….n how r u? …. In this ff… We forget dat u give your precious tym to this ff for our entertainment. ….. n it’s the best one I said ur earlier so thought to even ask you how’s u? .. waise I am a student of 11th… soon after 1 month be 12th… n how’s ur college going?

    • Anjali

      So nice of you to think about me…

      Thnxx Sujata!! I’m fine…Coll is a little less hectic now, but soon my tests start so have to stsart preparing…
      Ohh 12th next year? All the best…. Do well…It’s an important and frustrating year, But the feeling you get next March when you complete, There’s nothing like it… You’ll have many many distractions, but keep them to a minimum as much as you can..
      Again, ALL THE BEST!!
      LOVE YOU… <3

  4. Dhara

    Really loved it. I like their nok-jhok.. Plz add it in ur each episode..

    Even if it is short it has that charm of SwaSan..

  5. Harleen

    Don’t worry if it was not a long episode. By the way it was soo good can wait for the next one!!!!

  6. kavya

    Its ok Anjali…dont be sorry…your short episode too made me feel happy…i hope that sanskar’s fear of dying at 42 just vanishes after he gets married to swara. ??

  7. Dev

    A determined swara….now what will happen in this ff waiting eagerly for the next n dont worry abt the length of the ff just upload it….good going n keep it up

    • Anjali

      Thnxx Dev…
      We all know how this Swara is… Especially when is determined…..
      So hopefully we’ll see many things happening….
      thnxx once again!

    • Anjali

      Thnxx Pooja!!!
      Will try to upload as fast as possible….
      And will make it longer…Don’t worry

  8. Now words to praise ur dr anjali…. im left nill…. and swara’s determination to get back her love.. though sanskar is ignoring to accept his feeling.. our swara wil surely make a way to confess his feelings….
    Happy sunday…

    • Anjali

      Thanks Aastha!!
      I forwarded the books….
      Urs is only the soniaastha email id right? I sent it..
      But issok…Ill check in which chapter u gave me and ill send it again

  9. Ira

    Hey ….I ure ff is truly amazing and no words to says .I have been reading from the 1 chapter but never commented …..it’s like amazing ,awesome etc . I really hope ure ff reaches at least 40-50 chapters …And a request plsss upload it daily and the books name also . I hope u reply?????

    • Anjali

      Thnxxx so much ira for coming forward and commenting…
      Glad you love it…
      I hope so too that this becomes a long ff…but lets see…
      Ill do my best to upload it daily….
      And the books name is THE VISCOUNT WHO LOVED ME by JULIA QUINN….

  10. Sejal

    Anjali u really are a very nyc writer ur story it is jst mindblasting..
    My 12th exams are going but i jst cant control myself from reading this… Please update soon..
    This is the first ff of swasan about which i m getting hell crazy..

    • Anjali

      Thnxxx sejal….
      Glad you love my story….
      All the best for ur 12th
      Please don’t let my ff distract you completely….do well!!!! ?????

      Thnxxx once again

  11. Isabel

    It’s so cute and lovely, I love it.. I hope to read more.. Pls update more asap.. Keep on writing happily and peacefully.. πŸ™‚

  12. musku

    Unbelievable…. U r so good dear…..I can’t express ….u make me speechless….I just love ur ff…

  13. jaf

    Hey anjali I don’t have words to express its soooooo amazing…..
    Luv u dear….
    And ya when u post late ni8 it gets postd in d morning…. if u can plz try to post early…….
    N all d best fr ur exams love u!

    • Anjali

      Sorry for replying so late…was out the full day, that’s why….
      Thnxx jaf….
      Ill try to write earlier…but as I come back from coll only by 7 :30, I cannot start until 8 or 8:15…
      And then it takes me to me to write…plus coll work and stuff
      Sorry…
      Will do my best to post earlier

  14. Shraddha

    Ah this Mr Maheshwari and his Mrs Maheshwari are certainly driving me crazyy !!!
    Very honestly Kate n Antony’s this convo was good but Swara and Sanskaar s convo was great!!
    N I really liked this tom n Jerry fight of theirs n zozo s part also???haha was funny!!
    Well done anjali..
    You always live up to readers expectations n even more much more at times?
    Ur consultancy is what drives me sooo much to this ff…..

    • Anjali

      Thank you sooooo much shraddha!!!! ???
      Lol…. I didn’t know that swasan convo would be greater than Kate Anthony….but Thnxxx
      I guess its just because their convo is more old fashioned than our thoughts…

      I am really happy I have lived up to ur expectations….

      Consultancy???? ??

      • Shraddha

        Lol sorry consistency I meant typo mistake????
        ROFL it seems so funny ur consultancy drives me crazy???hahahah lol

      • Anjali

        Ohhhh…..lol….
        Didn’t really think about consistency….
        Yeah it sounded funny…
        That’s y i asked

  15. L Khan

    Awesome……Awesome……Loved it especially dog scene can’t wait for plzz try to upload it today itself will be very grateful to you

  16. esha

    awesome part anjali ……I loved it ……though it was short but really it was superb …..waiting for next part

    • Anjali

      Thnxxx Esha….???
      Glad you loved it…
      I just came home…so have to start writing…
      Will post later

  17. Anjali

    Guyss……
    Guess what happened…..
    Yest, I was out the whole day and came back only at 7:20
    Then after freshening up and answering your comments and all that, I sat down to start writing….
    I felt uncomfortable in the chair so I shifted to the bed and I just FELL ASLEEP.
    WITH THE LAPTOP OPEN….
    And I got up only now….
    So I did not write anything???
    Sorry….
    Will write tonight and post it…
    I srsly don’t know how I slept sooo early

  18. Nishitha

    Anjali!! Anjali !! Alkali! I really love Γ½our ff and you too
    You have just nailed it !!
    You are a splendid writer..it was just fabulous, amazing,interesting,fatastic….incredible!!
    And I have no words to appreciate your work! I must probably ask the head of Oxford university to make more words!!
    Please post the next chapter as soon as possible……..it should be so lengthy that it should take an hour for me to read! (I am a speed reader!) Really long one…really long!

    • Anjali

      Thnxxx nishitha…
      Sorry for a short reply but I have no energy to type…
      I’m feeling very sick…

  19. Anjali

    Guys, I hate to do this…
    I’m crying right now, I want to write but my head hurts at the thought of thinking of words…
    I am very sick…I am half closing my eyes and typing..
    I hate being so irregular and not staying up to ur expectations..
    I’m.so sorry just pls hope that I get better by tom

  20. Muskan

    anjali!!!!! its been three days……………. atleast ek chotu chotu part upload yaaar!!!! im really anxious abt mr.maheshwari… daily im checking for ur updates!!! n i agree with shraddha ,we readers ready to peep in there lives?

    sorrrrryyyyyyy to disturb u!!! i know u r not feeling well!!! but still im forcing u!!! sorry for tat?… get well soooon asap!! misssingggg u badly…. im a silent reader… but ur absence killing ur fans… omg … im really addicted to ur story… get well soon… an post a part asap for ur fans… take care..

    muskan☺

  21. Anjali

    Heyy everyone. Thank you Soo much for ur wishes…
    I saw them only a while ago….
    Was really sick for two days but now I’m feeling better…so will start writing again from tomorrow and you can expect a long one on Friday
    And thanks all,for waiting sooo patiently…
    I really felt bad for not posting one for three days…sorry…
    But will start writing again from tomorrow…
    Love you all???
    Again thnxx for the wishes..

    • Anjali

      Heyy akshi…I’m feeling much better. Though not. Completely…
      Will start writing from tom and will upload in the night…
      So prob Friday morn it’ll get posted.
      Sorry for the long wait…

  22. Anjali dear..how are u feeling??
    If u are better then plz try to upload a small part..
    Dont take much stress to upload…
    N yeah Get well soon…
    Tc

  23. Anjali

    Heyy guys!!!!
    I am back…….
    Have submitted my next episode…
    Should get posted tomorrow…
    Hope you like it… Please comment and help me improve!!

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