SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I

SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
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Sanskaar tells the truth. Swasan confess their love to each other!
CHAPTER 51
Sanskaar yawned slightly as his eyes fluttered open. He looked to his right to see if his wife was there, but she wasn’t. As he focused, he saw that Swara was sitting on the damask sofa, in deep thought.
Sanskaar (amused) : Swara! (She turned) Penny for your thoughts?
Swara (coolly) : My thoughts are worth much more than that, Mr Maheshwari!
Sanskaar (surprised) : Swara! You’re calling me Mr Maheshwari again? Are you angry with me?
Swara got up from the sofa and came to the bed. As Sanskaar watched her, She picked up a pillow and threw it at him.
Swara : Yes, Im angry with you.
Sanskaar got down from bed astonished. He caught her hand and made her face him.
Sanskaar : You are angry with me? But why? What did I do?
Swara made a face at him and pulled away her arm from his grasp.
Swara : Sanskaar! I told you, I’m angry with you. Ok… Now I don’t want to talk about it… Go get ready! You.. are late for work.
She gave him a glare and began to make the bed.
Sanskaar : Arre! At least tell me why you’re angry..
Swara : That’s for me to know and you to find out, Husband!
She walked out of the room wearing a high and mighty attitude leaving Sanskaar bewildered and amused.
Sanskaar (staring at his wife’s retreating form) : Why on Earth are women so confusing?
Adarsh (who had been passing by) : Bhai? Did you tell something?
Sanskaar : Adarsh! Come here one minute please…
Adarsh complied and Sanskaar made him sit down.
Adarsh : Bhai! What’s wrong?
Sanskaar : Adarsh! Why are women so mad?
Adarsh looked blank for a moment, then he chuckled.
Adarsh : Swara reject your love? Well, I can’t say I’m surprised.

Sanskaar (scowling) : Are you on my side or not?
Adarsh : You mean, Am I going to support you in bashing the feminine gender? Well…… Sure!
Sanskaar (beaming) : Now that’s my brother! So listen… I have done absolutely nothing to warrant her anger. She’s being stubborn.
Adarsh (raising an eyebrow) : You didn’t know that?
Sanskaar : Are you going to ask superfluous questions? I thought you were on my side.
Adarsh : Uff! What the hell is your problem? Did you confess your love?
Sanskaar (his face softening) : I did…
Adarsh : Did she tell you she loved you?
Sanskaar (a smile lighting his features) : She did!
Adarsh (surprised) : She did? Is she okay?
Sanskaar (frustrated) : OH FOR GOD’S SAKE! Why do I have such a family? Swara is angry with me for some reason.. You are useless, Laksh is not here and you all still manage to irritate me.
Adarsh (chuckling) : You love us!
Sanskaar (rolling his eyes) : Yeah, Well! I’m rethinking it. Fratricide sounds like heaven right about now.
Adarsh : Bhai! Just go find out what’s the matter!
Sanskaar (muttering) : Yeah, yeah, yeah!

Adarsh (getting up) : Maybe she’s just playing with you… Why don’t you go and find out instead of snapping at me?
Sanskaar : Now that’s a good idea! Finally, Acting like my brother. See, Why can’t you be like this more?
Adarsh (almost out of the door) : Sanskaar! We are your family.. That’s why we behave like that!
Sanskaar rolled his eyes and got dressed. Just as he finished buttoning up his coat, Swara entered.
Sanskaar : Mrs MAheshwari?
Swara : Haan? What do you want?
Sanskaar : Why are you angry with me?
Swara : As I said, That’s for me to know and for me to find out.
Sanskaar (putting his arms around her) : But you love me?
Swara (shrugging away from him) : Of Course I do… But I still don’t want to talk to you.
Sanskaar (slightly relieved) : Accha! But Shona! Please… Bolo na! What did I do?
Swara (turning towards Sanskaar) : Priyalochanisaptamishankari!
Sanskaar looked at her blank for a moment, then recognition flashed on his face. Swara was just jealous. Or acting at being jealous.
Sanskaar (hiding his smirk) : Accha! So you’re jealous?
Swara (swatting him on the elbow) : I AM NOT JEALOUS!
Sanskaar (chuckling) : Oh yes! You are…
Swara : Go away! No, I’m not… I am not jealous! I’m just angry.
Sanskaar : Haan.. (whispering in her ear) Because you’re jealous!
Swara : I AM NOT JEALOUS! Now go away… Go away! Go work! BYE!!
Sanskaar (astonished) : You’re throwing me out of my own room?

Swara : Our room.. And yes! You are late for work. Go shout at your employees, Go shout at your brothers par aaj I don’t want to see your face. Get out! Bye…
She pushed him out of the room and then locked it so that Sanskaar couldn’t get in again. He stared at the closed door thoughtfully.
Sanskaar : She says she’s angry with me. She says she is not jealous and I agree. Swara didn’t look like she was jealous. She didn’t look angry either. Why is she behaving like this? Something is odd here.
She looked at the door for some more time before going down the stairs. He stopped midway and thought aloud.
Sanskaar : She kept telling me to get out. Why? Why doesn’t she want me here?
He ran back upstairs to find the door unlocked and Swara folding clothes. She had her back to him so didn’t notice he was there.
Swara (folding Sanskaar’s shirt) : Mr Maheshwari!
Sanskaar’s eyes grew wide. He thought he had been caught but Swara didn’t appear to be talking to him. She was just thinking aloud. He hid behind the curtain and listened to her.
Swara : I know that you’re confused. But what else could I have done? I needed you to go and I know you wouldn’t have. So I had to pretend to be angry with you. Sorry! But I really wanted to surprise you…. And for me to accomplish that, I had to send you away.
Sanskaar beamed. He knew Swara wasn’t really angry with him. She just wanted to surprise him.
Sanskaar (whispering) : I love you, My jaan! I love you so much!
He smiled looking at her thoughtful planning face and left quietly.

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Sanskaar felt like he was being tortured.
He couldn’t stop thinking about his surprise. He was sitting in his office for the past four hours but he hadn’t got any of his work done. He hated not knowing what it was.
Sanskaar (crumpling a piece of paper in his fists) : Oh For God’s sake, Grow up Sanskaar! She is planning a surprise for you. Stop thinking about it. It will be wonderful but you have to STOP thinking about it. Swara won’t like it if you spoil it for her.
He opened the sheet of paper again and gazed at it.
Sanskaar : Vaise, I wonder what the surprise will be? What have you planned Swara?
He crumpled the paper again and then stood up.
Sanskaar : It’s 3:00pm now. Surely it’s time to go home?
He grinned and quickly left.

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AT MAHESHWARI MANSION
Sanskaar (bewildered) : What do you mean she won’t open the door?
Uttara : Sanskaar bhai! I don’t know all that. Swara told me not to allow anyone to disturb her. She said she would be in the studio all day and that no one was to interrupt her.
Sanskaar (frustrated) : But….
Uttara (grinning) : She’s torturing you, isn’t she? What did you do?
Sanskaar (groaning) : NOTHING!
Uttara : Don’t lie to me. What did you do?
His eyes narrowed.

Sanskaar : Uttara ki bacchi!
Uttara (hastily) : Sorry bhai! Couldn’t resist… That’s all. Anyways, Don’t disturb her if you want to remain in her good books.
She walked off and a frustrated and impatient Sanskaar walked along the corridor in thought.
Sanskaar : Irritating women. I’m sure men would never trouble anyone as much as this.
He took out a box from his coat pocket and opened it.
Sanskaar (thinking) : I spent two hours finding this… Please come out so that I can see how it looks on you.
He sighed as he waited outside the studio for another hour. He paced the corridor back and forth until he could stand it no longer.
Sanskaar (knocking on the studio door) : SWARA! Open the door please!
Swara (voice laced with irritation) : SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI! I thought I told you to stay away?
Sanskaar : Yeah, well! It’s 6:15 now. I had to come home.
Swara : Then go to our room.. Go to the hall, Go anywhere. I don’t want to see you now.
Sanskaar (exasperated) : For God’s sake Woman! Just come out…
Swara : NO! I’m angry with you, Mr Maheshwari!

Sanskaar (finally having had enough) : Swara! I know you are not angry with me.. I know that you are planning a surprise for me. Please, please just come out. I really want to see you.
There was a long silence. Sanskaar wondered if something had gone wrong… Was Swara alright? Was she? He was just about to rap the door again when it opened. His heart melted as he watched his wife.
She was wearing a red and black saree and she had wrapped her pallu around her waist so that it wouldn’t distract her from her work. She also had an apron on which was spattered with paint stains. Her face was streaked with slight paint drops and sweat. Her hair was a mess. Even then she looked like an angel in Sanskaar’s eyes. But Sanskaar did not care about her saree, nor did he care about her hair. He only cared about the tears in her eyes.
Sanskaar (anxious) : Swara! Why are you crying? Swara…
He grabbed her hand as she tried to move past him and held her firmly but gently.
Sanskaar (softly) : Shona! Please tell me what happened? Please… Did I do something wrong?
Swara : I did something wrong.
Sanskaar was puzzled. What was she telling?

Sanskaar : Swa…
Swara (cutting him off, turning towards him holding her ears) : I’m sorry!
Sanskaar (gobsmacked) : Sorry? But why? You didn’t do anything wrong.. Why are you telling sorry?
Swara : I just wanted to make you smile. I wanted to see the look on your face when you saw it. I didn’t want you to know and so, I acted like I was angry with you. I’m sorry… I couldn’t get this right. You’ve done so many gestures from your part. So many, Sanskaar! Taking me for karaoke, The room filled with pictures during our engagement, supporting me when everyone was taunting me, The Punjabi troupe during our Sangeet… You’ve done so much to make me happy… And the one time I try something, I failed. I failed.
Sanskaar was startled. And guilty. He had known that Swara was planning it for him and yet, yet he was too impatient to wait for her. He had made a mistake today.
Sanskaar (pulling Swara towards him) : No, My jaan! You didn’t make any mistake. You didn’t do anything wrong. IT was me… I am to blame for all this. If only I wasn’t so impatient to know what you did.. I’m sorry. I’m so sorry!
Swara : I love you Sanskaar!

She hugged him fiercely as she calmed down. Finally she wiped her tears away and smiled at him.
Swara : Anyways, I finished the surprise. Do you want to see?
Sanskaar nodded, suddenly nervous. What was it?
Swara (seeing his stiff face) : You’re scared?
Sanskaar shook his head and walked inside the studio decisively. Swara had made this for him. Whatever it was, it would be a moment to treasure forever.
Swara : Stop Sanskaar!
Sanskaar turned around in surprise. Swara smiled gently at him.
Swara : First, We’ll have dinner and then we’ll come here.
Sanskaar (astonished) : Dinner at 7?
Swara : Arre! Toh kya hua? We’ll come back for a midnight meal later.

Sanskaar chuckled and acqueised. They went downstairs and Swara quickly made rotis for them while Sanskaar helped make the lassi. They had their dinner and Swara left everything read for Mom, Badi Ma and the rest of them to have dinner later.
Sanskaar started up the stairs and went to the studio. He opened the door indecisively, but eager to see his surprise. Sanskaar stopped and waited for Swara to join him. She gestured for him to stay there.
Swara : Don’t you move an inch. I’m warning you, Mr Maheshwari!
Sanskaar grinned. This was his Swara! Spitting fire and a streak of stubborness. She walked towards the corner where a huge canvas was present, the back facing Sanskaar. He waited for Swara to show the canvas… But she didn’t. She stood there hesitating, not knowing what to do.
Sanskaar (gently) : Swara?
Swara : I… I thought this would be a wonderful surprise for you… But now that you’re actually going to see it, I don’t know.. I..I don’t know..
Sanskaar : Why don’t you just let me see it? I’m sure it will be perfect.
Swara looked at him with doubtful eyes but his reassuring ones calmed her down and she nodded. Sanskaar smiled and walked towards her. He stood beside her and entwined her fingers in his.
Swara (softly) : I really hope you like it.

She removed the cloth that was covering the canvas and looked at Sanskaar. As he took in the picture, Swara observed the changes in emotion on his face.
Eagerness followed by a blank expression then shock and finally happiness and some sort of calm serenity passed over his face. Swara remained quiet as he stared at the painting without even blinking. Smiling, she turned towards the painting herself.
Swara had made a portrait of Bade Papa and Sanskaar together. Bade Papa had his arms crossed and was looking dapper and smart sitting on a chair. Sanskaar was behind him, his arms crossed as well. Their expressions mirrored each other’s with looks of compassion and power.
Swara (softly) : He may not be here anymore, Sanskaar! But I don’t feel like I don’t know him. I see him in you. I sense his words and values in you.
Sanskaar nodded, a tear forming in his eye, but didn’t turn to look at her. Swara leaned forward and gave him a chaste kiss on his cheek.
Swara (whispering) : I think you like my surprise. But you want to remain here for some more time. I understand. I will be in the room if you need me.
Sanskaar nodded but was unable to speak. He just held her hand firmly and didn’t allow her to go. Swara smiled softly and took her hand out of his.
Swara : I love you Sanskaar!
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AN HOUR LATER
Sanskaar entered their room, still reeling from the gift that Swara had given him. As soon as he opened the door, he saw Swara still wearing the same saree, looking out of the window! Her pallu was loose and her hair was in a loosely made bun. She seemed to be gazing at the stars, her arms crossed.
He couldn’t resist. He closed the door behind him and ran over to Swara putting his arms around her from the back. She leaned against him sighing contentedly.
Sanskaar (quietly) : Just when I think I couldn’t love you anymore… Just when I think that my life is perfect, You make it more unique.. More ethereal and make me fall in love with you more! Swara, This surprise… This wasn’t just a surprise.. This was a breath of fresh air, this was my release. No more will I think that I owe my Bade Papa something! No more will I allow my thinking to affect my decisions. Swara, You are the best thing that ever happened to me. Swara.. I love you!
Swara (clenching him tightly) : I love you too! I love you too Sanskaar!
Ni Mein Devaan Duvavaan
Ni main Shagan Manavaan
Ni Mein Devaan Duvavaan
Bhaavein Kamli Naam Dharavaan-2
Par Iko Hi Rattan Lagaanva.
Tuuuu…… Meri Jaan Hai
Tuuu…. Mera Armaan Hai
Tuuuu…… Meri Jaan Hai
Tuuu…. Mera Armaan Hai
Ni main Shagan Manavaan
Ni Main Devaan Duvavaan

Rabba Mere Pyaar Ko Nazar Lag Jaave Na-2
Mangiyaan Duvavaan Lakhaan Dukh Hun Sataave Na
Tainun Dil Da Haal Sunavaan
Ni Mein Lakh Lakh Shukar Manavaan
Ni Mein Kamli Naam Dharavaan
Par Iko Hi Rattan Lagavaan
Tuuu…. Meri Jaan Hai
Tu… Mera Armaan Hai
Tuuuuuu…. Meri Jaan Hai Tu Mera Armaan Hai

Ni main Shagan Manavaan
Ni Main Devaan Duvavaan
Ni main Shagan Manavaan
Ni Main Devaan Duvavaan
Bhaaven Kamli Naam Dharavaan
Par Iko Hi Ratan Lagavaan
Tuuuuu…. Meri Jaan Hai
Tu… Mera Armaan Hai
Tuuuuuu…. Meri Jaan Hai
Tuu… Mera Armaan Hai
They held each other for some time like that just gazing at the stars which held a special meaning to both of them. Swara turned towards Sanskaar and he gently dropped a kiss on her forehead.
Something changed at that moment. The air grew electric and sparks seemed to fly between them. As Swara met Sanskaar’s eyes, The desire and love in them made her blush and she turned the other side and moved to the bed post.
In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein
Pakiza Se Riste Hain
Koi Kalma Mohabat Ka
Dohrate Farishte Hain

Sanskaar smiled and closed the window. He came near Swara but didn’t touch her. Swara could feel his hot breath on her shoulders and she closed her eyes in anticipation.
Khamosh Si Hai Zameen Hairaan Sa Falak Hai
Ek Noor Hi Noor Sa Ab Aasman Talak Hai
( Nagmein Hi Nagmein Hai Jagti Soti Fizaon Mein
Husn Hai Sari Adaon Mein
Ishq Hai Jaise Hawaon Mein )โ€ฆ (2)
Sanskaar placed one finger lightly on Swara’s bare back and she straightened, shivering slightly with desire. He slowly traced the finger along her back. Swara held the bed post with one hand to support her shaking legs. The other, she held Sanskaar’s free arm while his finger tortured her.
Tanana Dom Ta Dom Tanana Dom Ta Dom
Tanana Dom Ta Dom Tanana Dom Ta Dom
Tanam Tanam Tanam Tanana Dom Tom
Tanana Dom Ta Dom Tanana Dom Ta Dom
Tanana Dom Ta Dom Tanana Dom Ta Dom
Tana Dom Tom Tana Dom Tom Tanana Dom Tom
Dom Tom Tana Nana Dom Tom Tana Dom
Dom Tom Tana Nana Dom Tom Tana

Ohhoo
Dom Dom Tom Tana Nana Dom Tom Tana
Dom Tom Tana Nana Dom Tom Tana Nana
Sanskaar had reached Swara’s blouse dori and he slowly, tantalizingly pulled the knot apart. Swara was clutching him even tighter now, if that were possible. Sanskaar gently turned her around and made her look at him. Then he slowly placed his mouth on hers.
Kaise Yeh Ishq Hai
Kaisa Yeh Khwab Hai
Kaise Jazbaat Ka Umda Salab Hai

Kaise Yeh Ishq Hai
Kaisa Yeh Khwab Hai
Kaise Jazbaat Ka Umda Salab Hai
Din Badle Raatein Badli, Baathein Badli
Jeene Ke Aandaz Hi Badlein Hai
In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein
Pakiza Se Riste Hain
Koi Kalma Mohabat Ka
Dohrate Farishte Hain
Swara placed her palms on Sanskaar’s cheeks and tousled his hair. She couldn’t seem to stop touching him or tearing her gaze away from him. She kissed his hands and hugged him.
Samay Ne Yeh Kya Kiya
Badal Di Hai Kaya
Tumhe Mene Paa Liye
Mujhe Tumne Paya

Mile Dekho Aise Hai Hum
Ke Do Sur Ho Jaise Madham
Koi Jyada Na Koi Kaam
Kise Aag Mein
Ke Prem Aag Mein
Jalte Dono Hi The Tan Bhi Hai Maan Bhi
Maan Bhi Hai Tan Bhi
Tan Bhi Hai Maan Bhi
Maan Bhi Hai Tan Bhi

Sanskaar picked her up and placed her on the bed. He was suddenly everywhere, touching her in places that Swara couldn’t even fathom. Their desire to be with each other increased. As he placed his mouth over hers and claimed her, The world grew still. Only Sanskaar and Swara remained. Time didn’t matter, Space didn’t matter. All that mattered was that they had each other.
Mere Khwaabon Ke Is Gulistaan Mein
Tumse Hi Tum Bahar Chai Hai
Phoolon Mein Rang Mere The Lekin
In Mein Khusboon Tumhi Se Aaye Hai
As they progressed with their love making, they could not help but realise that today, they were one. They needed each other.. They were each other’s support, each other’s strength, each other’s salvation.
( Kyon Hai Yeh Arzoo
Kyon Hai Yeh Zustzu
Kyon Dil Bechain Hai
Kyon Dil Betaab Hai )โ€ฆ (2)
Din Badle Raatein Badli Baatien Badli
Jeene Ke Andaaz Hi Badle Hain
Sanskaar kissed Swara lightly over the mouth.
Sanskaar : I loved my surprise, Mrs Maheshwari!
Swara ( moving closer to him) : I love you , Mr MAheshwari!
Sanskaar (smiling sleepily) : I love you too.. I love you so much!
In Lamhon Ke Daaman Mein
Pakiza Se Riste Hain
Koi Kalma Mohabat Ka
Dohrate Farishte Hain

Khamosh Si Hai Zameen Hairaan Sa Falak Hai
Ek Noor Hi Noor Sa Ab Aasman Talak Hai
Nagmein Hi Nagmein Hai Jagti Soti Fizaon Mein
Husn Hai Sari Adaon Mein
Ishq Hai Jaise Hawaon Mein
Ishq Hai Jaise Hawaon Meinโ€ฆ
The house of marriage has many locked doors. Today, Swara and Sanskaar had opened one and from now on, This door would remain open forever! Swara and Sanskaar were one person in their minds. One soul in two bodies. They were the Maheshwaris!

Did you miss me??? I missed TU a lot!!
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Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry
I know some of you might feel like killing me.. Please don’t ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
I was actually busy with college work and as I returned home late at night, I couldn’t write much…
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I know this part isn’t really good. I’m sorry about that ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™
I ruined both the starting and the ending, I know!!1 ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™
I just wrote whatever I could.
I tried not to make this tooo descriptive or anything. Some of the readers are really young, so keeping that in mind, I’ve done my best… But if it is still too vulgar or anything for you all, Please excuse me.
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Will try to be more regular from now on. But if not, Please be patient! Also, I’m starting to think of ending it. Not soon, but I’ve started to think.
I’m running out of plots ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
LOVE YOU ALL!!!!
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105 comments

  1. Sreeharini

    Sreeharini

    |Registered Member

    Is this anju? I guess yes… Well after uploading fiction, I just scrolled down and saw comments on this name but without episodes de number and also a different name but still I can make it dear. I am so happy to know that you still didn’t end when I thought that I was some lame unable to support my friend here….
    In a hurry deqr

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Heyy sree…. Didn’t really expect to see you here… but im really glad u came to comment even though u havent read it….

      And U r a member here ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      YAYY!!!!
      Will send u a message soon ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      And yeah.. No more telling sorry ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      LOVE YOU!!!!

  2. niya

    amazng..dont end it so soon..
    i m a silent reader..i love reading urs and nisha’s ffs..
    do u knw why she is not udating her ffs??
    tc..

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx Niya ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      For coming up and commenting ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Nisha.. Well that’s a long story…

      in short, they werent her stories.. she copied from somewhere else.. and now she’s left the platform..

      thnxxx again ๐Ÿ˜€

  3. Disha

    Hi anjali awsome chappy. Whatever u write is so perfect. One personal question. R u married bcoz someone said u bhabhi

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx Disha ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

      Lol.. im not married.. im only 19.. Few of us here are really close and we have like a virtualfamily ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      but in real life, I’m as single as you all ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

  4. Payal Mehra

    OMG!! This part was so nice…hope this is not the end…if it is please please start season two…just a suggestion…rest is for you to decide bcoz this is one ff we readers are really going to miss

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Thnxxx Payal ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      It’s not the end right now…

      But I’m thinking of the end…

      Will try and think of season 2….

      Glad you like this ff ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

  5. Rain_Lightwood

    Rain_Lightwood

    |Registered Member

    Anjuuuuuuu! I missed uuuuuu! U know I had typed a huuuuge para out but I had to go for my theatre auditions so left it midway and now it got deleted! I have to re type the comment for u. But no problem. I’ll type it 100 times and yet it won’t be enough to praise u.

    First of all:-

    HAVE U GONE NUTS? First u leave me dying wid curiosity as to what will happen. Then when u do update, u say you’ve written bakwass?! How dare u huh? Do u even know how well u write? I will really scold u for saying my Anju writes horribly. My Anju is the best writer ever!

    Second of all:-

    WHAT IS UR SECRET? U write so well, there must be some secret method. And don’t say Boost (that milk drink) is the secret. I know what you’ll say to this. ‘I don’t know. Lol boost. But I didn’t know I write well blah blah”. But lemme tell u, u don’t write well, u write amazingly well. (Did I manage to scare u for a sec?) haha. Anyways, I’m super hyper Coz u updated. I was so happy.

    Third of all:-

    About the epi (u must be thinking “yeh ladki kitni type karti hai par epi ke baare mein ab likh rahi hai). So yea about the epi… All the praises you’ve taken already, what more can I say? I mean it’s so so so so hard for thinking up some good words Coz seriously all the praises r drained out. I’ve told them to u a 100 times and u must be bored reading them again and again. All I can say right now is I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WRITING. DONT U DARE END THIS FF EVER!

    It was perfect. The way u described it,the emotions, etc. And the gift was sooooo thoughtful of Swara. Seriously when u described the pic, as to how they stood and all, I cud arsly imagine SRK and Amitabh Bacchan from Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Gham. U know where they r having father son moments in the start of movie.

    And Swasan love making- well honestly saying I’m a young reader. First few times I read these things, I didn’t understand them even tho many ppl my age did understand them. Later when I started understanding, I felt disgusted at myself for reading such stuff but realised these things happen in real life. But I always felt these things were written in a very vulgar fashion. There r very few writers who manage to write it decently. Very few. And u r one of them. In fact I think ur the only one who I know. I’m not on FB but I was able to view some ff’s on FB. I was looking for a ff and I cud see some other FB ff’s and I thought I’ll try reading the chap posted there and believe me, some r damn Vulgar. The moment I realised what was happening, I shut it down immediately. I mean I’m old enough to know these things happen but I really don’t need to know it in detail. Everything has its own time and knowing these things have its own time too. But I didn’t feel uncomfortable reading urs at all. It was awesomely put across. Not too mature, not too childish. Just perfect. I didn’t cringe even for a sec Coz reading it made me feel that thank god at least there r a few writers who do a decent job of explaining what happens between a ,arrived couple when they decide to move another step forward. Seriously Anju, Hats off to u! U weren’t too vulgar at all.

    Ok that got too philosophical. So coming to fangirling, GUESS WHAT? I GOT THE CURSED CHILD ON THE DAY IT RELEASED AND I FINISHED IT THE DAY I GOT IT!!! It’s sooooo good. Have u read it? If u have, well we have a loooot to discuss and if u haven’t, lol I’ll try not to accident,y reveal anything. ACCIDENTALLY. ๐Ÿ˜‚

    Anyways, I’m expecting a Ramayana Reply to my Ramayana Comment.

    And remember, U CANNOT SAY THANK YOU OR SORRY. I WILL PERSONALLY POP OUT OF UR SCREEN TO SHOUT AT U IF U SAY SORRY OR THANK YOU. And ignore any typos u find in the comment. I generally don’t proof read my comments.

    Love,
    Rainโค๏ธ

    • Anjali30

      Anjali30

      |Author

      Heyy!!!!

      wow… first of all… u seem to have realized my writing pattern… that is like really astounding!! I would have typed almost the same thing…
      But u didnt scare me.. chill…

      to reply to ur ramyana like comment…

      Firstly, Nope… Anjali has not gone nuts ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› I’m still clueless as to why u like this sooo much!! but I’m scared of u.. so no telling thnxxx ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      second, when i saw the word secret, i was really surprised.. what was this girl telling.. Then you go and tell that and i can’t stop laughing ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      if u wanna know my secret or whatever.. I have no idea what to say.. i just imagine the scene and try to describe as well as i can!!

      i completely agree with you!!! I feel that there is an age limit for these things.. I mean.. knowing about it is not wrong!! but u don’t need details.. u don’t need to know everything now.. You may feel better and wiser or what not.. but ur not!! it’s dangerous!!

      Plus.. I don’t know the exact age of everyone here… what if someone is really young and starts talking about it to their parents.. IT’ll be my fault.. and it’s not fair of me to do something the parents might not like… so tried to write as little as possible ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      Now I don’t reallly can’t write a ramayana comment to ppl.. i can write ffs and all.. but to ppl, it;’s different!! so forgive me

      And who cares about typos man??

      I understood what u were trying to tell….

      btw the srk scene in kkkg is what gave me the idea in the first place ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

      U FINISHED CURSED CHILD!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

      I am in the second act now!!
      downloaded the ebook… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      LOVE YOU!!!!!

      • Rain_Lightwood

        Rain_Lightwood

        |Registered Member

        Ya. I guess even I’m young reader. Not too young not too old. Just there in between. So I know of this but I don’t particularly enjoy reading it in detail. U shud just go and check some ff’s out in FB. You’ll be really disgusted.

        OMG UR IN THE SECOND ACT? Haha you’ll get the shock of ur life in the fourth act. I felt my life was lie in that.

        And u gave half a Ramayana comment to me.

        The secret to Ramayana comments r just keep pressing the space button after every sentence:p and Ofcourse I love this ff. Pls it’s my fav.

        Anddddd… HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAYYYYYYYYYYYY! I’m so lucky to have ppl like u as my friend. Love u

  6. chanu

    โ˜†โ˜†โ˜†โ˜…โ˜…โ˜…HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY ANJALI.!!!!โ˜†โ˜†โ˜…โ˜…โ˜…
    be happy always
    love youโ™กโ™กโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

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