swasan@ MOVIE WORLD episode 12

hey guys!! kritika here..not feeling to end this in next 5 episodes..sorry for late update..i have lots of projects and homework.cant neglect it.next update will be of swasan” WAPFEO…

Epi 12
Hey guys!! Kritika here..!! happy gudi padwa..(new year for all marathians)…
Precap- swasan consummation..& ragini’s accident..!!
Lets start

Ragini is going back home.. it was raining heavily..the sky is screaming..i.e. its thundering..ragini is driving the car rashly.. the wipers are not working..so there’s a frown on her face.. there are many emotions on her face..like happiness.coz she got her family..sadness…coz she believed her dadi with her eyes closed, she is greatfull for whatever her dadi gave her in these years..but is sad because its basis was on a lie..there was pain also on her face..pain of betrayal, separation from her family..
She was thinking how she spend all those years without her family..she remembers her past when she was with shemishtha waiting for the new baby..she remembers how she expressed her wish for a little baby girl to her parents…she remembers how she told her mother that she wanted to name her baby sister SWARA.. she remembers how she was kidnapped…everything just flashes her mind… she just wants to go and run to her family and tell them everything..she feels bad that she missed her sister’s childhood…she fells more bad because she missed the first word of swara, Her first steps, her first day in this world, her first day in school and college, her first day in school n college, her first movie, her.. her… everything..
She was thinking all these n driving rashly to reach home..she just wished that her swara doesn’t leave the party…as it was raining heavily, she coulnt drive properly and on the top of that the wiper was also not working..so she was using her hand in b/w..
Suddenly, she her car hit to a tree..the accident was a minor one…her head hit the steering, but not roughly because the car was filled with air bags till then,.. the people around there came to help her…they enquire about her health..she just tells them that she’s ok..just for some formality..

She drives home…when she reaches she asks sanskar about swara..
Rags- sanskar!! Swara…where is she!!? (eyes searching for her)I need to talk to her..you were together na!!??
Sanskar- but bhabhi!!? What happened to uh?? U are shivering!! Where were uh?? Are u ok!?? And swara why are you asking about her?? anything imp??
Rags- sanskar leave about me!!? Where is swara??
Sanskar- she went b4 15 mins only she went..
Rags- oh no!! hey…sanky give her address..
Sanskar- bhabhi!! This time..no u wont go…she might be sleeping and u are too not well..
Rags- urrghhh!!
She thinks then she decided to tell her In a grand way tomorrow..
Sanskar- but bhabhi!! Why do u want her?
Rags( with a smile)- that I will tell her first then you..tomorrow is last day of shoot na!! after shoot please bring her and her family here for dinner..plz..
Sanskar- ok bhabhi!! Seems like sisssi’s secrect…right!!?? You wont tell me!!
Rags- yah!! Even she doesn’t know anything…

Swasan’s consummation scene is to be shooted as the last scene..
Actually not swasan but the characters, yuvraj and manyata.. i.e. manraj..
Swara is wearing strapless white dress…
sanskar is wearing a plain black full sleeves t shit which is folded till his elbow…

last second scene starts,,
swasan/manraj are hugging in their room…
then yuvraj turns and ons the music system…
aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai..from hate story 2.plays in bg..
they dance passionately withot breaking eylock…
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai (x2)
Toote toh toote teri baahon mein aise
Jaise shaakhon se patte be-haya
Bikhre tujhi se aur simte tujhi mein
Tu hi mera sab le gaya

she keeps her hands on his shoulders…while he keeps his hands on her waist..
Na fiqar, na sharam, na lihaaj, ek baar aaya
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai

He then twirls her and twirls her..when the 3rd time her twirled her, she crashed her back to his chest..
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai (x2)

Then he rests his chin on her shoulder, back hugging her…which sed shivers down her spine..her eyes are closed…he whispers in her ears in a husky voice “I love u”… “love u too” reply comes..
Tu hi meri awaaragi
Tu hi duaa har shaam ki
Tu khamakha, tu laazmi
Tu hi razaa, tu hi kami
Aur tu hi wo, firaaq hai jisko
Hai silsilon ne mere pass laaya
he then turns her and leans to kiss her..her eyes closed…his too..
And they kissed.. (not really..coz swasan didn’t wanted to cross their limits..so they requested the directors to not to stress more on that part..)
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai (x2)
He then carries her in bridal style and slowly places her on bed…
Then last scene,,,
They are seen sleeping on the bed… sanky/yuvraj on the bed shirtless…but blanket covered till/ below his shoulders…
Swara/manyata also lying beside him..n blanket covered till/ below her shoulders..and then she was wearing her strapless dress…
Sanskar/yuvraj- I love you manyata…
Swara/manyata- I love you too yuvraj…
Scene ends…
Every1 hug each other..click selfies…cut cake….become emotional..and so on.. sanskar invites her to dinner..
__swara was wearing her strapless dress n both the scenes …she didn’t cross her limits,,making sanskar proud…_____

i know guys u must feel like killing..but this was it i planned…first i thought to keep that accident anagha’s dream,..but then, i kept it in real…sorry!! plz comment…support needed badly.. :)….

Credit to: kritika


  1. Jyotii

    Nahh! It not killing types! But bacchu uh r too naughty uff sorry uh r too mad! Nyways it was damn awsm! Just love it n uh! 🙂

    • Hey tq jyoti di…u have always been my support n the best friend given by swasan….love u loads…lots of hugs n kisses too…uummmahh..:*

  2. Actually ur very small but u think like genius superb lastly one question in karnataka all secondary school student has holiday wat about ur school..how many subjects do u hv…

    • Hey divya di,..belated happy birthday….n tq sooo mucn dear…actually in our school 9th n 10th portion is very much…so they take our classes for one extra month in april and they take exams on std 8 early…usually its in april but they take in march evry year…so that v can study in april…

  3. Dharsha

    Hey kritika! I just read the 1st part u uploaded in FB….and I couldn’t wait more… so I randomly searchEd in telly updates and see I am here who have read all the 12 parts u have posted ? and still I eagerly wait for the next……..I can’t believe u r in class 8 coz ur writing style is awesome…am loving it……plzzzzzzzzzzzz post next ASAP ? and tell me abt ur other ff please ….coz I don’t know abt them ?(PS:my problem is that this comment while typing was deleted thrice and am finally succeeded in posting…yippee)

    • Nice to see u here dharsha…n tq soooooo much for ur comment…n u commented 3 times…oh…may be due to so prblm…
      My other ff is-
      swasan: we are perfect for each other
      Im sorry cant send u link…my tab is showing error

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