Swasan… . Married to a drunkard part 8

What’s this guys… Itna less comments… Itna bura tha last epi… I thought to post yesterday but after seeing your comments i was less interested to write… Koi nei this all dedicated to my that readers who commented… I thought it’s my responsibility to finish it… Warna i am less interested to write the next part….

So here we go…

Both reach home and had their lunch and came for press conference…
Sanskar : thanks to all… For coming in short notice… I know you all are thinking why i call you all so suddenly… Ok… I wanna introduce you with a special person of my life…
Reporters : who?? (all frowns)…
Sanskar stands up… At corner swara was standing gaurded by aman and many other personal guards of sanskar…
Sanskar comes and holds her hand… Swara was wearing red and wite combo brosho net saree with minimal make up… And open hair… Looking damn gorgeous… Sanskar takes her to the stages… In no time thousands of camera flash falls on them… Swara was bit scared… She hold sanskar’s arm tightly… Sanskar looks at her and smile… Swara also… He pulls chair for her and swara sit… Sanskar also sit beside her…
Sanskar : i know you all are confused… She is my better half my wife swara sanskar maheshwary…
All are shocked… Swara smiles and folds her hand…
Reporter : sir… Matlab why so sudden… Sir no one have information about it…
Sanskar : well they would have information if i informed them… Right??
One lady reporter : sir… Can i talk with mam…
Sanskar : Yeah sure…

Reporter: mam… I was a small reporter before.. I saw you in a singing competition… Am i right??
Swara : hmm yes… I love to play guitar…
Swara tucked her hair behind the ear…
Reporter : mam are you bengali??
Swara : yes…
Reporter : so it’s a love marriage right??
Swasan looks at each other… Swara remember sanskar’s antics and smiles… Sanskar looks at her with narrowed eyes…
Sanskar : no comments…
Like this they throw many questions… Sanskar answer them smartly and carefully…
At last…
Reporters : sir one photo please…
Sanskar : sure…

Sanskar hold swara by waist… Swara placed her one hand on his chest… And smiles… Both look at each other… Swara unknowingly blush… Sanskar feels it smiles brightly… Reporters take photos of their this cute moments… Then both looks at them… They clicked photos… After that both comes in home…
Both changed… Swara tells dolly to make food… And starts to settle the idon in a suitable conrner of house.. .. After that she comes in room… Find no one… She goes to towards window and saw sanskar is sitting on ground in garden… Swara takes a sigh… She went to him…
At garden…
Sanskar is thinking about his past… When he felt a hand on his shoulder… He looks back and finds swara is standing… He holds her hand and gesture her to sit beside him… Swara smiles and sits.. Both sits silently for sometime… They were silent… But sometimes silence tell lots of things… They were just feeling their presence and was somewhat expressing their own thoughts…
Swara : everything will be fine sanskar…
Saying this while turning towards himm.. Sanskar looks at her… She feels pain in his eyes… Sanskar wrap her like a exhausted tired child is taking shelter in his mother’s arm… And hide his face in her…
(you know what guys… A person whether it’s he/she… Always wants there life partner in all shades like mother father teacher siblings friend lover and as husband /wife… And if we someone with all of this shades then that person will be the best)
Sanskar feels same… After sometime sanskar looks at her… And departs… He looks away…
Swara : come for dinner…
Sanskar : swara…
Swara : hmm..
Sanskar looks at her…
Sanskar : i can’t bear this pain swara… It’s destroying me swara… I need…
He stops…

Swara (teary eyes cups his face) : sanskar… You have to face it…
Sanskar just hugs her tightly… : i can’t… I can’t…
And cries… Swara Cares his hair… Sanskar cries for half an hour hugging swara…
Sanskar (at Last… Kiss her neck) : i love you swara… Please never ever leave me and don’t mistrust me… I can’t bear that pain swara… It will ruin me completely…
Swara’s body gets stiffened… Sanskar feels it and departs… Sanskar looks at her face… He wipes his tears and gets up…
Sanskar : let’s go for dinner…
Swara stands up Sanskar moves forward…
Swara : sanskar.. Wo.. (looking down)…
Sanskar comes to her lift her face by chin… And make her look at him…
Sanskar : i know swara… U don’t love me… I am ur friend… I will wait swara… I will wait until my last breath…. It’s not filmy swara i am telling true…and for now our friendship will not change for my love…
He kiss her forehead and smile..
Swara hugs him… Sanskar cares her hair…
Sanskar : now come…
Both go for dinner…
Both sleep after dinner…
2 days passes… Swara and sanskar both are upset but can’t show to each other… Both talked eat together… It’s getting very difficult for sanskar…. But he is controlling just for swara… Swara is trying her best to keep sanskar away from his bad habits…
One day… Swara is getting ready and sanskar is seeing his files… He looks at swara with confusion…
Sanskar : swara you are going somewhere??

Swara : ummm… Han… I have some work…
Sanskar : oh ok… Which work??
Swara : i will tell you later…
Sanskar confused : but swara…
Swara : sanskar please…
Sanskar nodes…
Swara left… Sanskar also left for office…
At night…
Sanskar is standing in balcony… Swara comes with two coffee…
Swara : sanskar??
Sanskar looks and take one mug…
Again silence… Both are looking at sky and hoping that they will prove each other innocent by tomorrow… Swara’s eyes fills with tears thinking of ragini dadi and baba…
Sanskar makes her turn to Towards himself… And slide his one hand through her cheek and wipes her tears by thumb and nodes in no…
Sanskar side hugs her… And hope for best…
Next day… At mondir the same temple where ragini pushed swara …
All maheshwary family along with gadodia family comes for puja… As it’s 1st puja of raglak…
All comes in temple and shocked to see swara and sanskar also there doing puja… All fumes in anger except shomi…
Swara smiles seeing shomi… Dadi greeted her teeth…
Dadi : ye kalmohi always come in between my granddaughter happiness…
Sanskar looks away from his family…
Adarsh : lo vai… Aa gaye…
Ap taunted swara and sanskar…

Ragini : chhodiye na ma… Let’s do our own work…
Ragini and laksh comes ragini was about to hold the aarti plate… Sanskar takes the plate…
Laksh: what the hell sanskar??
Sanskar : a killer can’t do ma durga’s arti…
Dadi : aey chhoda… Hold on your tongue…
Sanskar : truth is always bitter…
Laksh : i don’t want to listen your useless talks… We are not entering in your life na then why you…
Sanskar : i just want to prove my wife innocent… And i will prove today that ragini tried to kill swara…
Ragini : just shut up sanskar… Swara 1st you already ruin my life… Now pls give me some peace…
Sanskar : just shut up Ragini… Arey ku6 toh sharam karo… You are standing in front of god and telling this much lie…
Ragini : huh i don’t want to listen anything from a guy who tried to…
Swara : Ragini… (top of her voice)…
Sanskar turns and gesture her to keep quiet…
Sanskar : hmm.. So mrs Ragini laksh maheshwary… Sorry killer Ragini maheshwary… No no betrayer ragini maheshwary…
Laksh : sanskar… Just be in your limits…
Sanskar : what are you thinking laksh… I am blaming Ragini without any reason… I have proper proof…
Ragini shocked…

Ragini : pro.. Proo.. Proof… What proof…
Sanskar : arey ragini… Why your face became so pale… Arey pasina bhi aa raha…
Ragini : you.. You are lying you have no proof…
Sanskar : i have ragini… What you thought you did this much big crime no one will notice you…
Ragini : what… No… You are lying… You give them money to tell lie… There was no one…
Sanskar : really how could you say like this… There were some people who saw you pushing swara in river…
Ragini : no this can’t happen… There was no one…
Sanskar : oh really how could you know there was no one… There was…
Ragini : no… There was not… Not a single animal…
Sanskar : how can you say with this much confident… There was 2 men…
Ragini : no there was not… Because when i pushed swara… I my self checked that if there was anyone or not…
Ragini said in flow… But in a second she realized what she said… She shuttered… All looks at her…
Sanskar cross his hand near his chest and looks at her with a smirk… Swara close her eyes… Tears comes out… But she widely open her eyes after Listening a slap sound… She sees laksh slap ragini…
Sanskar looks at swara and goes near her… Swara hugs him and hide her face in his chest… And cries clutching his shirt tightly… All are feeling guilty… Shekhar comes forward… But sanskar stops him by showing his hand…
Sanskar : bas bas bas… Kitna royegi…
He departs from swara… And wipes her tears… Shomi comes and cares her head… And also hold sanskar’s hand…
Shomi : thank you beta…
Sanskar : it’s my duty aunty…
Sanskar : swara… Don’t you tell something to your culprits…
Swara : nei sanskar… I don’t wanna say anything to them… But i want to show something to you all… Specially to you maheshwary family…
Swara : sanskar please give me my phone…
(guys i forgot to tell… Swara knows about Sanskar’s plan but sanskar didn’t)…
Swara open a vedio…
Vedio…
Swara : i know everything vabi… So stop your fake cry in front of me… I know you and Adarsh vai trapped him…
Parineeta who was crying still now… Stops crying and laughs…
Parineeta : chalo man lia… Man lia tumhari baat… Yes we trapped him… How dare he refuse to sign in property papers… We told him results will be not good… But your stubborn husband didn’t paid any attention to our talks… So we have to throw him out na…
Swara : how dare you vabi… You are a girl… How can you do such disgusting thing…
Parineeta : yes i am girl… That’s why i planned this… That night your hubby was quite Drunk… So i just took that opertunity… And executed our plan…
Swara : i will tell everyone about you…
Parineeta : oh really swara… Oh ho ho… Mai to dar gayi…
Parineeta laughs aloud…
Parineeta : but who will believe you swara… Who will believe an eloped bride… Now just be in your limits and don’t mess with me… It will be not good…
Parineeta left…
Vedio end…
All are shocked… Sanskar was standing there with stiff body and still teary eyes not even blinking… Looking down… Swara looks at him…
Swara goes to him.. And cups his face… Sanskar hold her both palm between his… And kiss it… Then rest his forehead and cries…
Sanskar looks at her… Swara smiles…
‘sanskar? ‘ sanskar looks at sujata rp dp and ap…
Sanskar (wipes his tears) : swara let’s go…
Sujata comes running tries to cups his face… Sanskar steps back…
Dp : sanskar beta please forgive us…
Sanskar : it’s so easy right?? Saying sorry… I agree that… You all had no trust on me… But don’t you have trust on yourself.. . Your upbringings… How could you believe that your son can stoop so low…
Ap : hamein maaf kar de…
Uttara comes forward : i am sorry vai…
She tries to hug him…
Sanskar again steps back…
Sanskar : i am not so mahan… I can’t forget those black days easily… And jo rista ek bar tut jata h wo jurna… I am sorry (folds her hands) i am sorry… But i can’t… I just hope ki oneday i will forgive you all… I am sorry…
Uttara cries… Swara comes to her…
Uttara : bhabi… I am so sorry… Sorry… Please tell vai to forgive me… I am sorry to you too… I am so sorry…
Swara : i told you na uttara… One day you will repent for your behavior… Look…
Uttara cries…
Swara : dadi… Thank you so much… Jane unjane mein you give me the world best gift… Thank you…
Shekhar : i am sorry beta… Pls forgive me…
Swara : ask from ma… And take care of her…
Swara goes to ragini who was standing like a statue…
Swara : i don’t know how much you hate me… But i love you a lot… You are my sister… My best friend… I never want this ragini… I never want this…
Sanskar comes : swara chalein…??
Swara smiles… She hugs shomi… Sanskar take blessings…
Shomi : aise hi ek dusre ka sath deti rahna… May god bless you…
Then hugs both…
Sanskar holds swara by shoulder and about to go… But stops as laksh calls swara…
Laksh : swara…
Swara looks back…
Laksh : please forgive me… I wanna start our lives again…
Sanskar departs his hand and looks other direction… Swara feels it and looks at sanskar… Then looks at laksh with blood shot eyes… Then gives him a tight slap… Sanskar looks at her shockingly…
Swara : if you wouldn’t laksh… Then i would tell sanskar to break your limbs… After knowing that i am married to sanskar you are saying such cheap things… Laksh i can suggest you as a friend accept Ragini cause none can love you rather than Her… She tries to kill her oen sister for you… She keeps silent even after seeing her family is breaking… She loves you than anything in this world… Don’t let her go… And fault was yours also… You also played with her heart for 2 times… So… Before blaming her look at your self also
..
Ragini cries…
Laksh : swara don’t you love me??
Swara chuckles… Sanskar looks at her deeply…
Swara : now also you are asking me this question laksh?? Then i can say you are really a blind…
Swara gives a death glare to sanskar and March out of temple… Sanskar looks at all… Then follow her…
(guys… I don’t wanna concentrate on them… Let’s hope they will except the truth… Laksh will also accept ragini… And for Shekhar shomi… I can say… If shomi can walk this much path of life alone then she can walk further… She don’t need any hand or shoulder… In serial i really didn’t like shomi’s character… Love him who deserves… One day shekhar left her for her mother… He left her for her daughter… I just wanna ask him one question if shomi was his 1st and last wife and mother of both swaragini… Then also he would left her taunt her… Blame her… I felt disgusting when she forgave him in serial… But in my ss shomi is not spine less… She can live alone… So she will…)
At sanskar home…
It’s afternoon…
Sanskar is sitting on swara’s favorite place which is beside window… And thinking about today’s incident… Swara comes… She angrily Looks at sanskar but gets sad after seeing him sad… She goes to her and place her hand on his shoulder…
Sanskar looks at her and wraps her by waist and hide his face in her tummy… Some tears escape from his eyes… He pecks her hand which is Caressing his hair…
Sanskar (murmur) : thank you…
Swara departs him and sit in front of her on floor…
Swara : you also proved me innocent… Did i tell you thank you???
Sanskar nodes in no… And smiles.. Swara remembers how he take out his hand when laksh was talking rubbish…she gets angry… She gets up … And start to search something… Sanskar confused.. She finds a stick and starts to beat sanskar…
Sanskar : ooouuuch… (jumps here and there) arey swara…😲😲 Ouuch.. Arey what happened… 😨😨
Swara : you monkey donkey idiot… 😑😑
Swara stops…
Sanskar : arey kia kya maine…😦😦
Swara (now cries) : you thought i wil leave u and will go to laksh?? How dare you think like that… 😑😒
Sanskar : swara… I didn’t… πŸ˜•
Swara : don’t lie… I will not talk to you….
Sanskar : wo swara… I thought… You loved him..
Swara : get out… Just get out 😑😑
Sanskar πŸ˜”: ok…
He goes out…
At evening…
Swara (blubbering) : look… Till now he didn’t came… Huh… Is this a hotel… Jab chahe auun… What happened to this aman… He also is not lifting my phone… Huh… Idiots…
Sanskar peeps in from main door… And comes in with unstable feet… He sees swara is blubbering….he grins widely and Goes upstairs…
Here swara finish her work and goes to their room… As soon as she enters she smells that bad smell which she hate most…
Swara looks at sanskar… Who is sitting on bed and giving her a tight smile 😁
Swara : sanskar… You drunk 😯
Sanskar : 😁yes… 😁😁
Swara : what??? 😑but why??
Sanskar : why?? Umm wo wo… πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”… I don’t know 😞😞
Swara : sanskar… You…
Sanskar pulls her and she sat on his lap…
Swara : leave me sanskar…
She struggled but he tighten the grip…
Sanskar : no 😁… Wife you know when you become angry your nose tip.. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Swara : what’s funny in my nose tip.. 😑
Sanskar : its become red and you look like a joker πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Swara beats his chest : leave me… Sanskar : why you always become angry on me?? πŸ˜”πŸ˜” you never give me love… Always angry πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
Swara is shocked…
Sanskar (pecks her both cheek) : don’t yoh love me wife?? πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
Swara looks at him like what to say…
Swara : sanskar come for dinner 1st…
Sanskar : no 1st answer…
Swara : no… Happy??
Sanskar suddenly pecks her lips…
Sanskar : why?? 😞😞
Swara shocked and somewhat blushed…
Sanskar : bolo na… πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
Swara : sanskar leave me… And listen i can’t love a drunkard…
(says in anger)…
Sanskar 1st makes a crying face 😒😒😒… Then start crying loudly 😭😭😭
Sanskar : no… I love you… You also love me… 😭😭😭
Cries loudly…
Swara : uuuurrrrggghhh sanskar stop shouting… I will be deaf…
Sanskar (stops instantly and makes a pout) : Then love me… πŸ˜€
Show his cheek… Swara shocked…
Sanskar : wife πŸ˜” please…
Swara slightly pecks his cheek… And push him and runs out…
As soon as he gone… Sanskar jumps in happiness….
Actually sanskar was acting… As she was angry thats why he did this…
Later sanskar sleep with swara… Hugging her…
Days passes… Swara starts to fall for him completely… Their life is going so perfect… Swara become bubbly naughty like before… Shomi dida often come to meet them… Maheshwary family tried to talk with sanskar… But no use… Some hurts are really very deep that it needs morr time to heal… But swara assures them that sanskar will forgive them oneday… Laksh is trying to adjusting with ragini… But swara doesn’t convey her feelings… They are still friends… Oops sorry best friend… Sanskar is rude in only office… At home he is a prankster… Always disturb swara… Both fight… Both beat each other… Play prank on each other… Sanskar in heart is still waiting for his soul mate.. Like this 2 months passed…
One day… Sanskar comes and sees swara going towards kitchen hurriedly… Sanskar happily comes to her running… And lifts her by wrapping her by waist and twirls her round and round…
Swara :sanskar… Sanskar… Kya kar Rahe ho… Sanskar leave me.. I have works…
Sanskar : swara swara… Swara… I… I am sooooooooooooooooooooo happy today…
Swara : a66a ok.. Leave me now…
Sanskar stops still lifting her…
Sanskar : huh… You are a bad wife… How can you…
Swara : uuuurrrrgghhh… Sanskar put me down. .
Sanskar makes faces and makes her stand… And swara rush to kitchen…
Sanskar confused… And also goes behind her…
Swara was standing there with pout face…
Sanskar : what happp….
Stops after seeing the burned cake… Sanskar starts laughing…
Swara gives him a death glare…
Sanskar stops…
Swara : it’s all because of you… My cake 😒😒😒
Sanskar back hugs her and kiss her hair : don’t worry i will give you most delicious cake in london…
Swara : 😒😒my 1st cake… What london…
Sanskar : han… I got London project… We are going london…
Swara departs… : πŸ˜“ you have work… What will i do there… I won’t come… πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’
Sanskar : 😁arey we will roam all around after my work…
Swara was chopping vegetables… Sanskar was playing with tomato…
Swara (looks back) : sidhe sidhe kiun nehi kahte… You are taking me for honeymoon… 😏😏
Sanskar (in excitement and in flow) : yes of course… πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
Then looks at swara… Who is seeing him with knife in hand and frown face…
Sanskar gulps… : i mean… No yaar… It’s just a trip…
Swara shrugs… Ok…
Sanskar excitedly hugs her…
Swara : don’t forget… I will take revenge for wasting my cake…
Sanskar : is that… I will not let you succeed… Ok now listen today night is flight ok??
Swara nodes…
At night at plain…
Swara and sanskar is sitting in the row containing two sits… Swara is sleeping peacefully fully in his embrace and he was seeing her… And slightly pecks her lip…
Sanskar everyday do this to sleeping swara… As he can’t resist himself…
At London… They reached in afternoon… Swara is soo happy… After little freshen up… Both decide to go out…
Swara goes to washroom… When she comes out sanskar awestruck to see her…
She was wearing a deep voilet colored skirt below knee leanth and white blacked horizontal stiped woolen off shoulder blouse… Her bare belly is slightly visible in between skirt and blouse… With open hair but still with her marriage signs..
Sanskar : swara you… You are.. You are looking damn beautiful yaar .
Swara blushes : thank you…
Both roam out and enjoy a lot… Both were too tired when they came in room… Swara slept with same dress with sanskar ….
At morning… Swara wakes up and sees sanskar is getting ready for work…
Swara : good morning sanskar…
Sanskar : good morning my princess…
Suddenly swara’s phone beeps she gets happy…
Swara : sanskar (with smirk)… I told you na i will take revenge…
Sanskar confused…
Swara : see this.. What i get…
Sanskar widen her eyes after getting his childhood pic..
Sanskar : no swara… Delete it… Both runs through rooms… Suddenly sanskar loose balance and falls on swara on bed… Their lips brushed… Swara shocked… Sanskar also… Swara looks at sanskar… Who is staring her lips with desire… Sanskar can’t resist And leans to her… Before swara could say… Sanskar smashed his lips on her.. . He starts to suck and bite her lips wildly… Swara was shocked.. . She doesn’t respond or can say she can’t as sanskar was really hungry and not letting her responding…. Swara moans slightly. . His hands travel to her bare belly and starts to cares her navel… Swara moans in pleasure loudly… With this Sanskar comes in sense… He immediately departs… And gets up feeling guilt…
Sanskar (chocked voice) : i am sorry… I don’t know i was just..
Sanskar takes his bag and left the room… Swara was still there thinking about the kiss… She feels immense happiness… She touched her lips and smiles blushingly… Hide her face in pillow…
Swara : i… I… Love you sanskar… Yea i love you…

The end…

What?? Cursing me?? Kya behuda ending hai… Ye soch rahe ho… Arey ruko ruko… Jute chappal mat feko… Picture abhi bhi baki h… Epilogue abhi bhi baki h…
But but but if i find low comment then definitely i won’t get interest to write… Then no epilogue… So guys… Comment… And force me that i can submit it today itself….

97 comments

  1. Nagamanasa

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    Nice dear but u made me wait a long time for this part…Now i can’t wait to read epilogue so post of soon if possible today itself try to post it

  2. chandu

    Amazing yaar..!!loved it…!! Their romance is soo cute…!! Sanky became a prankster…!! Hawwww…!! This episode is soo rocking…!! If possible continue yaar..!!don’t end…!! I am soo eagerly waiting for next one…!!! Pleaseeee post soon..!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

  3. SHAN

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    Awesome….. But i do no y u r saying as low comments no post….. Bcox u got 42 comments…. Is that low for u???? Many are getting only less than 30 but u are getting more than 40 then y u lost interest???? Dont u think about who commented??? Sry if i hurted u…..

  4. deepti

    No jutta chappal only praises for u dear n also a small request if possible continue writing other such wonderful stories even if u end this..
    Will be waiting for sure for your next work…

  5. Hadi

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    Finally u posted was waiting since yesterday Awww so much good n wonderful epi with finally Swara’s confession n kiss ah what a kiss so unexpected n fabulous I missed naughty sanky the acting of being drunkard is just awsum overall episode is marvellous just superb n thanks for accepting my request of epilogue i am eagerly waiting

  6. aami

    such a good story with a very cute ending i say one thing i want Sanskar to remember his drunk state will he??

  7. Jana

    So swttttttt of u……. 😊😊😊 waiting 4 next part….. update soonnnnnnnnnn πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

  8. Geethu

    Finally u posted was waiting since yesterday. Awesome episode.eagerly waiting for epilogue plz update tdy if possible.

  9. Shinchan1205

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    Finally u posted…jab tumne last part post kiya tha us mein u said ki u might submit it that day n i waited till 4 in the morning just to read that n yesterday i waited till 2 n now u r finally dere….part was awsm n just waiting for the epilogue……post soon

  10. sudha

    what a story dear… I m a silent reader here and i never commented on any ff. But ur story is just awesome , i cant stop myself . waiting for the epilogue . Keep smiling and keep writing dear !

  11. Jannat

    epilogueeeeeeeeeee i want it… im waiting yaar. i check my phone for every hour for this. n ur ending it😯😞😞😟😟😞😟..

    ok… but plzzz want epilogue.
    love this ff a lot it will be my obe of the best ff of swasan
    thnk u..
    love u…
    n soon come with new n dhamakedaar ff… plzzz

  12. Jannat

    epilogueeeeeeeeeee i want it… im waiting yaar. i check my phone for every hour for this. n ur ending it😯😞😞😟😟😞😟..

    ok… but plzzz want epilogue.
    love this ff a lot it will be my obe of the best ff of swasan
    thnk u..
    love u…
    n soon come with new n dhamakedaar ff… plzzz…πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

  13. Pooja26

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    aisa mat karo mere saath naaa……. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
    i commented in every part yr…. πŸ™ πŸ™ πŸ™
    awsm superb chappy…. dear……
    post nxt chappy asap…… πŸ˜‰
    waiting eagerly…….

  14. Akshiiii

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    Pikachu yrr m kbhi comment kr nh pai dat doesn’t means u ll stop writing mjh aj tk saare ff Nd os me bs yhi ek ff mjh hasata h I jst lovvvvvveeeeeeee it yrr Abhi to srf 8 episodes hue h so y ending half century nh to silver jubilee hi kr Jao I dnt nw u r gal or guy bt I think u r gal after reading ur author view so pls accept my request dnt stop writing I promise I ll comment on evry episode Nd y d hell u care abt comment write fr urself Nd fr dos who r commenting dats it ol writers give dese type of warning y I dnt understand bt I think u r diff frm dem so please dnt think abt comments jst write fr urself swasan Nd fr ur fans dats it my frm my side I nw m bit or I cn sae vry much talkative as m Akshita is lyk dis nly

  15. Tara

    Awesome….. M wanting for the epilogue…. Just waiting for it…..finally swara admitted that she loves him……just loved the episode……..

  16. Rosey

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    Wow yar it was so awesom and amazing
    At first truth revealing part was such a mwlo drama but I lie the easy both SwaSan spport each other
    222nd their last Sence of kissing was so dazzling I really enjoyed it I love u for this episode yar😍😘😘

  17. Shagun

    I was gonns kick you if u will not give an epilogue
    I love this ss
    So u have to give an epilogue
    Its not my request. ..its my order. ..

  18. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    Awesome awesome awesome. Loved it. Their innocence was proved. They are so in love with each other. Sanksar acting like drunk n demanding kiss from swara…cute.

    Aww that kiss…i m blushing. Plz upload the epilogue ASAP. Excited to see sanskar’s happiness when she ll confess and ofcourse their romance too

  19. helina

    Plzzz submit today itself awsm pa rt luvd it a lot n cm back wid a new storystory I liked a lot fantastic

  20. Romaisa

    Wow loved it gonna miss this a lot plz plz plz epilogue bhi ajj post Kar doπŸ™πŸ»β€οΈ

  21. Drishty

    Hi.. it was an awesome update.. I totally loved it…and yaa I absolutely agree with wat said abt shomi..she had been a single parent almost her whole life..such strong person doesn’t need life partner like shekhar.. anyways I wanted to say dat Im new in tellyupdates. This is 1st ff which I have read completely n I also waited fr d updates egarly.. good job.. πŸ™‚ :-*

  22. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Oye,post soon😑😑…I am in love with your ff….chappy is awesome, marvelous dear…you described each and every scene perfectly…Aww, swasan kiss😘😘😘… Keep it up dear… Waiting for nxt….
    Take care
    Keep smiling😊

  23. shalini

    Oh thank God yr picture abhi baki h πŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ
    Amazing epi yr or plzzzz plzzzz comments ko judge krke apna decision mat Lena yr plzzz nahi to m suspense m maar jaungi πŸ™πŸ™ plzzz
    Plzz NXT part jldi jldi post krdena yr mujhe Swara k confession ka intzar rahega
    Lv u sooo much 😘😘😘😘😘😘

  24. Raina

    |Registered Member

    plz plz plz eplogue post karo. and if u can plz make it romantic and the part was fantastic, specially when swara said thanks to dadi for making her marry sanskar

  25. xavia

    It wz superb dear…n thnx fo adding drunkard wala part…i just luv sanky’s madness……
    Keep smiling…..
    Post nxt epi soon….

  26. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    In last chappy i told u dat dere r so many things to b solved n shown how wil u cmplte in one chappy bt u did it… loved it totally πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
    M in love wid ur story… u wrote it so beautifully πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
    I wish it nvr ends n i can read more of it…
    Its srsly so amazing.. now so much exctd for epilogue 😍😍 post it ASAP

  27. Yogholick

    I’m a secret writer but seeing ur skills I’m dumbfold it was sooooo awesome n yes I want epilogue

  28. Paru

    Oh I thought it ended abruptly….. Superb yaar loved. It….you r getting comments more than 80 still u saying…here no one get more 20 plus if it s a good Ff….rarely.30 comments is up to the mark……
    Plz post next part soon epilogue.. Don’t wanna kids and pregnancy…. Every time looks like cliche scene…..

  29. saloni

    wow it was awesome plzz don’t stop writing if possible I loved it u wrote a fab episode At last swara excepted that she loves sanky wow.. loved it… n plzzz post the epilogue soon

  30. rosh

    wow, this short story really is carefully written. I’ve read all the previous chaps in one go, superbly written. Although a bit disappointed that I’ve got to read such lovable story when now that it’s ending……
    Non the less, I do look forward to a justified epilogue though, take care πŸ™‚

  31. myna

    very awesome amazing story amazing feelings awesome dialogues
    why are u ending it here u should write more

    not a silent reader the title caught my eye and i read the whole thing
    write more stories

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