swasan loves journey episode 2

sry guys if my ff is boring as i am not a gud writer and i am writting with my mind closed as i have my bords nxt month so u r free to give bad comments and reviews..
Those who wants to read my previous episode here is the link
http://www.tellyupdates.in/swasan-loves-journey-episode-1/Recap: swara and ragini’s introduction

Scene 1
gadodia mansion
Swaragini gets ready gets ready to go for the first day in college..
Swara wears a black hot pants and a white shirts that ends a little above her navel with black boots and open hair.whereas ragini wears a royal blue dress that ends on her mid thigh with heels and hair done in a braid.
They goes downstairs and takes blessings of sumi and shekhar
Shekhar: may god gives all d happiness to my both daughters. You both look very prety.shekhars then adds sare ladke tum dono ko dekh kar behosh ho jaiyenge.
Sumi: both of u look stunning.Go and take d blessing of god so ur day goes gud.
Swara: ma our day will go gud and no one will misbehave with us as no one can misbehave with d daughters of a commisioner.she makes a funny face.
Ragini: aab bhut mazak ho gaya swara hurry or else we will get late on d first day and it will not be gud.

Swaragini bids audieu and goes for d college.
Scene 2
maheshwari mansion
Ap is seen in d kitchen making food with sujata.
Ap: sujata today is a big day for the sons of this house they are going to kolkata to aquire higher education and u r acting as if ur not happy.
Sujata: bhabi i am happy but i don’t want my son to stay so far from home,from me….
Ap: don’t worry they are now big enough to take care of themselves…
Sujata:vaise bhabi ye dono hai kahan dikhai nahi diye subha se.
Ap: they have gone to mall for shopping. Vaise ye kaam ladkiyon ka hota hai but …. Don’t take tension aate hi honge..
just then the bell rings and two boys are seen carrying shoping bags (just like girls they have many bags)..

A boy with little dark complection come and hugs Ap. He is wearing a dark blue denim with black shirt and lether jacket. His face is revelied he is our laksh.
Laksh: maa dekho hum app sabke liye bhi shopping karkar aaye hain. When we will go to kolkata who will shop for all of u
The other boy: badi maa aapka ye beta na bhut tang karta hai. The whole day he was shouting that we have to shop for other and didn’t let me buy things for myself.
The other boy’s face is revelied he is sanskar. He is wearing a black denim with white shirt and black blazer.

Laksh: koi na bhai kal tu kolkata jakar humare shopping kar lena. Anyways lets go and pack our stuff as we have to board our flight in nxt 3 hours remember.
Sanskar: i am not in a mood to go lucky. How will i live without our family.
Laksh: choti maa(pointing to sujata).dhayan rahkho he is just going to cry. Right mama’s boy(taunting sanskar)
Sanskar:lucky tu tou gaya. And hee runs behind laksh to beat him.
They runs to their room.
Ap says that kal se is ghar ki raunak khatam ho jaygi and exits to the kitchen….

Precap: swaragini and sanlak in the same college….

Credit to: shagun


  1. Nice yr u should not think like this that ur bad writer You should think that you are the best writet and ya we are here to tell u whether u are bad or not ..atlest you can share ur veiws see me i can not write
    si don’t think like this …
    and ya plzz make swalak lzzzzz

  2. Sahima

    It’s superb dear. U should not think it’s boring. In fact ur story is very beautiful and I like it a lot. Don think like that. Everyone have different ideas and urs is also very different from other.

    Ur ff is fabulous. Waiting for the next epsidoe.

    • shagun dhiman

      dear sahimi thanx for ur motivation and i am happy that u liked my ff

      Sahima my nxt parts r already updated till 4 and 5th have gone for publishing

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