Swasan : I love you Swara (chapter 1)

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April 14 2017
Bengali New Year

Badi
Bose house

Sharmistha POV

It’s been 1 year shona you left me….. You left your Maa….. My one wrong decision of marrying Shekhar destroyed your life…. I’m sorry beta I couldn’t be a good mother….. I still remember when doctor said that you’re no more…..

FLASHBACK

Doctor : I am sorry but MRS. Maheshwari is no more…..

FLASHBACK ENDS

Please forgive me shona…. Please forgive me….

Badi
Gadodiya House

SHEKHAR POV

A man is drinking beer and laughing at himself and his fate……
Congratulations Shekhar Gadodiya congratulations…… I’m proud of you just proud of you….. You showed the world that you’re the GREATEST SPINELESS PERSON….. You may be the best son for Mrs Parvati Gadodiya…. The best father for Mrs. Ragini Maheshwari but you’re the worst lover for your Misti….. The worst husband of Misti…. The worst father of shona….. My daughter….. I’m sorry beta because of me only you’re not with us…..

Maheshwari mansion
Raglak room

Ragini POV

Thank you God for removing the obstacle of my life….. I can’t tell you how much I am happy….. I knew it the day when Swara will go from my life….. I will get my all happiness….. See I got it…. After that bangalan Swara went from my life…. Laksh Ji accepted me…. Not only him but whole family accepted me…. Now I am 7 months pregnant….. It got all the things I wanted….

Sanskar room

Sanskar POV

Where are you Swara?? Please comeback….. May the world says you’re no more but I still believe you’re here….. If you would died then till now I had also been died……

Age
Swara – 24
Anjali – 28
Arnav – 26
Arjun – 22
Aditya -21
Ragini – 23

Precap :Girl : Bhai I came…..
Boy : Come shona…..

Guys I am confused to start from flashback or give flashbacks between the present…..

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53 Comments
  1. Soujanya

    Awesome

  2. Praju

    Awesome and u can show the way ur comfortable

  3. Loved it ❤❤❤❤

  4. awesome show present and past or u can show what u want

  5. Sus

    Nyc

  6. Madhu.r

    write as per your convient bit post nxt update soon

    1. SammieR

      Thank you and will post soon

  7. Nice dear

  8. Continue soon

  9. Awesome dear

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  10. It is really awesome

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  11. Awesome

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  12. Saeedah

    Awesome sam!
    Witing to read more;
    tc..

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  13. Give flashback with present. Plz post the next part soon.and I want little longer.

    1. SammieR

      Thank you and will post soon

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  14. Gayathri.visu

    Very good. Post next part soon….

    1. SammieR

      Thank you and will post soon

  15. Ira

    Nice ?

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  16. Awesome…..First flashback

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  17. Nice……. Flashbacks with present….

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  18. Mumpi

    nice one

      1. SammieR

        Thank you *

  19. Simi

    Awesome
    Present with flash back

    1. SammieR

      Thank you

  20. Who is playing role of Arjun and Aditya ?

    1. SammieR

      Aditya singh raizada – Dulquer salmaan
      Arjun singh raizada – Prithvi Raj

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