Swasan : I love you Swara (chapter 1)

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April 14 2017
Bengali New Year

Badi
Bose house

Sharmistha POV

It’s been 1 year shona you left me….. You left your Maa….. My one wrong decision of marrying Shekhar destroyed your life…. I’m sorry beta I couldn’t be a good mother….. I still remember when doctor said that you’re no more…..

FLASHBACK

Doctor : I am sorry but MRS. Maheshwari is no more…..

FLASHBACK ENDS

Please forgive me shona…. Please forgive me….

Badi
Gadodiya House

SHEKHAR POV

A man is drinking beer and laughing at himself and his fate……
Congratulations Shekhar Gadodiya congratulations…… I’m proud of you just proud of you….. You showed the world that you’re the GREATEST SPINELESS PERSON….. You may be the best son for Mrs Parvati Gadodiya…. The best father for Mrs. Ragini Maheshwari but you’re the worst lover for your Misti….. The worst husband of Misti…. The worst father of shona….. My daughter….. I’m sorry beta because of me only you’re not with us…..

Maheshwari mansion
Raglak room

Ragini POV

Thank you God for removing the obstacle of my life….. I can’t tell you how much I am happy….. I knew it the day when Swara will go from my life….. I will get my all happiness….. See I got it…. After that bangalan Swara went from my life…. Laksh Ji accepted me…. Not only him but whole family accepted me…. Now I am 7 months pregnant….. It got all the things I wanted….

Sanskar room

Sanskar POV

Where are you Swara?? Please comeback….. May the world says you’re no more but I still believe you’re here….. If you would died then till now I had also been died……

Age
Swara – 24
Anjali – 28
Arnav – 26
Arjun – 22
Aditya -21
Ragini – 23

Precap :Girl : Bhai I came…..
Boy : Come shona…..

Guys I am confused to start from flashback or give flashbacks between the present…..

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