Swasan- Love Story In Heaven chapter 3

Love story in Heaven part 3

Hey guys thanks for ur wonderful response…..love u all….

Important note: iss ff ka udeshaya kissi ki dharmik bhavnao ko thes pahuchana nhi hai….( wah meri hindi kitni achi ho gyi…hahaha?) kripaya isse apne dil se na lagaye….?

Here we go
Part 3

Scene starts wid swasan coming out of the room all tensed…
Swara- yr sanskar hum itni jaldi kaise mar sakte hain…
Sanskar- mujhe kya pta mujhe bhagwan ne uthane se pehle pucha nhi tha….varna main keh deta ki ya toh isss utha le ya mujhe kam se kam swarg mein toh jeene de….
Swara-( seriously) no problem tujhe yahan jeena hai toh jee liyo. Main test fail karlongi and u enjoy being here….
Saying this she left…
Sanskar( in mind) isse kya hua????
Jo essi behki behki baate kr rhi hai.todhi der pehle toh bhali changi thi…..
Saying this he left behind her bt was nt able to find her….
On the other hand
Swara( in mind) yeh mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai… vaise acha hua ki yeh ho gya varna meri aur sanskar ki dosti bhi toot jati as i get to know tat how much i irritate him nd he didnt like it…..i promise i will nt trouble him and will also nt talk to him much…..

( literally mahan atma…? kya kya sochti hai..??)

Then after sme tym they were asked to go to their rooms for taking rest….
? .
Sanskar was lying on his bed and was involved in deep thoughts….
Sanskar( in mind)- swara yaar tujhe kya ho gya why was u ignoring me whole day.. i know u r upset as u dont want to die same wid me bt plz be happy as we r together here also….which is nt in everyones destiny…..i can bear anything bt nt ur silence…..i love that bubbly swara….
I dont have guts to tell it directy to u tat i love u from very first moment i saw u…..i still remember….
*****Flash back*****

Sanskar ws seen staring at a specific point from last 10 minutes…..
Lets check wat is in tat direction
A beautiful girl was standing near a panipuri stall and was arguing wid the vendor for chilly in pani and all….


Sanskar-(in mind)- u know wat i saw u first tym at pani puri stall and u was fighting their only i got to know tat u r a nautanki?…ur beautiful big eyes, cute expressions nd continously blabbrring mouth…. i fell then and their only 4 u….
Bt my stupid friend interupted me in b/w and in tat moment u left me i thought i lost u forever as mumbai is a big city….bt destiny plays its card….

@ college
Sanskar- wow first day of new college jst loved it….

He started walking seeing here and there
And suddenly collides wid someone and tat someone was abt to fall wen he hold that person by waist nd ssaved the person…( filmy scene u know ?)

That someone was a BOY to his utter shock…. oops!!!
Their comes her lady love from behind till now whole college was laughing at their situation….leaving both embarassed….
Swara goes towards them and asked the boy that if he is fine and thanked sanskar 4 saving him…..

Sanskarwas very happy hearing her musical voice bt on the other hand was alsoo jealousedd as he ws taking care of that man……

While leaving…
Swara- thank god bhai u r fine i was soo tensed hamesha shatabdi train bnana zaroori hota haH agr aap ko khi lag jati toh….

Sanskar felt out of the world hearing worde’bhai’….

Sanskar( in mind)- i ws soo happy thinking tat i met u again….. i was thanking god all tym and now also as he had not separated us.
I love u yaar….

Thinking all this he slept….

@ next day…

Swasan were w8ing for god to conduct the test in a big hall type place….
Then before god a girl enters and joins them… she was totally lost in sanskar….she ws jst adoring his personality…..
Seeing this swara feels jealoused bt sanskar didnt notice this….
Girl- hey my name is ria Nd i died today nd u ( to kunj)
Sanskar ws abt to say smthng bt swara interupts…
Swara- i m swara and he is sanskar. And u died today nd we yesterday so we r ur seniors and respect us….
Ria was totally shocked….
Sanskar was like lagta hai jo bhagwan ne isss thoda dimag diya tha woh bhi wapas ke liya….
Bt after sme tym ria again tried talking to sanskar and swara was feeling bad…
Swara- yaar i hate this kirli( chipkali ). Kitna chipak rhi hai issse jaise dewar ho….or yeh gadha isse kuch samaj hi nhi aa rha…kuch soch swara….

Sw- ria apne baare mein kuch aur batao apne bhai ko….

Ria- kaun bhai….
Swara points towards sanskar…..
Ria( understands swara’s intentions) nhi yaar he is nt my bhai. He is my senir na vaise bhi he must be ur bhai or i can say u bth must be twins as came on same day….

Swara was like wat the hell ??? How cud she say tat???

Even sanskar was nt liking it nd want to kill ria 4 this statement bt he was majboor as she is already dead….( awkward situation)

Swara was abt to open her mouth to say smthng bt

God- gd mrng my children…lets begin the test….

To be continued….

How ws this guys…??? Do leave ur precious comments????

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  1. Waah yaar what a chappy
    Upar bhi jealousy ha

  2. Crazy

    Wahhhh panipuri…
    Muhhh mein pani aagaya ridhiiiii
    Now c I m coming t ur home as punishment to u
    Muhhh mein pani Jo laya tuneeee
    (Kripiyakarke yeah na soche ki yeah vakya meine yane tere crazy he kaha Hai
    Yeah sab badmasshhh puh ki likhavat Hai…)
    Hai ridhi this z pub nt crazy
    N yup ur amazing

  3. Maryum

    Hehehe its awesome too good

  4. Awesome

  5. Mica

    Goodd!!! even Ridhima killed me with the hindi part.. huhuhuhu

  6. Kakali

    Ridhimaa !! i love ur Hindi… it’s beautiful… love d chappy too..

    SWASAN twins ¿¿¿¿ wahh Ria wahhh !!!
    agar tu ajj zinda hoti,, toh mai khud tujhe dhund k apne haato se swarg ka nazara dikha deti !!!badi aati TWINS bolne wali…
    thnk u Ridhimaa !!!
    n yeah use English more as there r soo many people who don’t know Hindi properly… hope u understand….

  7. Khushiii


  8. Soujanya


  9. AnuAnn

    Toooo cute and funny yaar

  10. Niku

    Awesome chp. N u know what ye swara ko tum ne hi mahan aatma banaya h ……as u r d author…..I love d way u write ur story….
    Today chap. It’s funny????

  11. Dharani


  12. Sanjanaagrawal

    Awesome yaaaaaarrrrrrrrr ….. so funny ?????????? …. really u rocked ridhima …. and yes ur hindi is so pure yaaaar …. and I just loved that line when ria considered swasan as twins as they died on same day ????? and sanskaar hold a boy I thought it was swara … ?????? and really its an interestong story …. I will recommend readers to read it ….
    Take care
    Keep smiling ????

  13. Super fun

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