Swasan- Love Story in Heaven chapter 1

Hey guys ready wid part 1
Here we go

The scene starts on a highway. The two cars were coming towards eo wid high speed…
They were a few metres away then suddenly a truck b/w them and both the cars looses balance and move to opposite directions and strike wid the trees and then and their only they both died…. ( guys plz try to imagine a scene i know i am nt gud in telling this and u might be confused bt plz try

The people came running towards them and the truck driver elopes fastly…..
A few people called ambulance and the bodies were taken from their…..
after sometym the bodies were given to their parents for last rights and the family of both were crying hard….. :'(

Other place

A huge palace like place was shown. I guess much better then palace. The floor was made of clouds, water was flowing thru the waterfall, few girls are roaming in beautiful dresses and gowns and few were playing instruments. Every thing ws jst like heaven.
But in one corner of a room someone ws sitting and ws shedding tears
Man- i know i have done wrong these kids need to live their life bt wat can i do i am also helpless that world which i made is very cruel fir these pure souls. I willl allow them to stay here and will treat them as my kids….

An angel came from behind and said plz god plz dont cry u know na wen u cry ur one tear splits into thousands and u know it is raining heavily on earth. I know u r hurt bt this is for their benefit only.

Scene shifts to a big gate which is sooo beautiful. Outside that gate two men were standing wid some sort of magical rods in their hands as if they r protecting the land…

Then a car came and stop jst infront of the gate. In the front seat a handsome dashing person ws sitting known as yamraj ( consider vivian dsena ) for the role….
And at back a couple was sitting and sleeping peacefully.
Our yamraj wake them up and said u two go inside….
Swara- no i will nt go anywhere. U kidnapper u kidnapped me i will kill u and started hitting him.

He somehow stops her and (to sanskar) u look smewhat intelligent plz take her inside wid u. I know i can understand that wat u both r thinking bt trust me i have nt kidnapped u and u will get ur answers inside plz go in and take this siyapa also wid u( pointing towards swara)
Swara’s jaw dropped whereas sanskar started laughing loudly….

After some more stupid discussions tey both get ready to go inside…
They stand near the gate and the gate automatically opens…

Swara- nice india developed too much bt wat if someone else enters instead of us. They shud take care…

Sanskar- swara u know nothing yaar. This type of gate has sensors it will open only after proper identification of person. I must say u need to join school again…
Swara– very funny Mr. Maheshwari
They were busy fighting wen
Yamraj – abe andar bhi chale jao.
They both realisesand go inside. They were awestruck to see such a beutiful scene, they were nt able to beleive their eyes, their mouth were widee open…..
A boy came near them aand asked them to follow him. He ws getting close to swara and sanskar was fuming and swara ws enjoying his state.
After following him they reached a room where god was present……….

to be continued…

Precap- swasan to know the reality of their death.

How was this guys…?? Do leave ur comments😁😁


  1. Mahjabeen

    Ahhhh i cnt bl rlly so awesome story nd totally different..nice concept..u made me speechless…loved it…waitng fr nxt

  2. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Oohhhooo !!! Swara from which School u passed 10th…?? i also wanna join that school… cozz u r soo damn intelligent in all this matter… huhuhuh…. love it Ridhima… thnk u…

  3. Mica

    |Registered Member

    oh shit Ridhimaa!!!! you know what…
    firstly, i was reading you story soo seriously, imagining about accident and heaven guardian angel.. but then the word “siyapa’ made me shocking, bursting out of laugh
    bhahahahhaha… what is that???

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