SWASAN: If this is your love, my Prince… Then, please hate me! [Episode 12]

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Swara approaches the still fuming filled with soup spoon to her lips closing her eyes, her mouth waters as honestly, now she was really hungry.
But at the moment the spoon reaches her mouth, it’s snatched from her hand and jerked on the floor… She opens her eyes shocked at her mother in law’s angry expression, she asks surprised:
“- mum?”
Sujatta stays a long moment silent, her eyes fixing her frowning which confuses Swara more. When she’s about asking again, Sujatta mimes the silent putting a finger on her own lips saying:
“- shup! Bilkul shup!”

She takes the plate of food at her other side on the bed, cuts a big piece of bread which she plunges in the soup and before Swara could say anything, she pushes it in her mouth almost choking her:
“- mera potta eats from his dadi’s plate, ha!”
Her fake admonishing tone makes Swara smile wide, her eyes filled with tears of happiness, she shews hardly, her cheeks drowned which make Sujatta’s eyes teary too, she wipes her bahu’s tears scolding her:
“- silly choree! Stop crying like that… Don’t you know that the baby feels all his ma’s sentiments?”
Taking another piece of food, she adds extending her hand toward swara:
“- becchara baby… Don’t know until when I didn’t saw you eat prop..”
She’s cut at the middle as Swara plunges in her arms hugging her tight at her big surprise, she smiles repressing her tears and caresses her hair gently, when they broke their embrace, Swara takes the food from her hand and feeds her back…
Ragini who was watching the scene from the door, wipes her tears smiling and whispers a thankful prayer, this baby is surely a gift from God, a gift bringing happiness to their house again and now she’s sure, soon all the bad events they lived will be forgotten when his laughs and cries will fill the Maheshwari mansion… Washing off all the tears and sorrow!
***

At Adarsh instructions, Sanskar drives him to a huge mansion hidden in the middle of the forest, out of the town, a beautiful stone built old house where there were armed guards all around.
As soon as Adarsh enters the house, Sanskar gets out of the car searching a way to go inside without being seen by the guards, he hears a car coming behind him and hides himself.
The car parks and an old classy woman goes out of it, he’s surprised to reorganize hi aunty, bade ma’s childhood friend and Parineetha’s mother, Zulikha ji. She enters the mansion smiling.
When Sanskar passes an opened window, after having climbed a tree in the surrounding garden, he’s surprised to hear a familiar voice.
Parineetha was welcoming her husband a pooja plate in hands.
As she’s already turning away from him after giving him prasad, he catches her hand asking:
“- kya hua. Pari? Didn’t miss me?”
She replies with a small voice:

“- nahi… YOU didn’t miss me! I waited for you yesterday but what you did at the moment you were free… You hurried to the people who jailed you!”
He hugs her smiling and says:
“- kya karo, Pari? It was his instructions… You really think that I wanted to see that Durga Prasad again?”
Zulikha enquires:
“- I hope they didn’t hurt you more”
“- oh don’t worry… They were too occupied by their miseries… I arrived just in the middle of a big drama as their so beloved Swara is pregnant!”
At that news, the plate escapes from Parineetha’s hands making a deafening sound the floor. She was fuming…
Zulikha ji holds her shoulders in support while Adarsh smiles caressing her cheek:
“- don’t be sad sweetheart, with what baba has planned for them, they’ll never enjoy this baby’s birth… You really think that I can let this family see happiness again?.. First they lost their beloved Sanskar, then one after the other will be destroyed… I’ll never be peaceful until I have my revenge from that Durga Prasad and his parivar!”
He walks to a big framed paint on the wall; it portrays a happy married couple, a strong man in his thirties standing beside a beautiful young woman who was sitting, her baby in her lap.
Tears fill his eyes when he says:
“- they destroyed my family… fooled me all my life… How can they be so heartless, that they kept looking in my eyes without any regret!?”
Parineetha presses his shoulder saying:
“- they thought that no one can expose their secret one day… Hai na mummy ji?”
Zulikha ji smirks saying:
“- ha beta… Annapurna was so heartless breaking my daughter’s life, she has forgotten that the problem if your closest friends turn to be your enemies, your somber secrets will be turned against you”
A male voice reasons from the entry:
“- ha zulikha ji… I’ll never be able to express you my gratitude”
The old man with the scar walks inside, Parineetha bends down to his feet eagerly, he blesses her smiling, greets the old woman joining his hands then give blessings to Adarsh. Caressing his cheek, his eyes on the photo hanged on the wall, he adds:
“- you brought my son back and gave me the occasion to take revenge from Durga Prasad and his so perfect family… Looking to Adarsh again he says, don’t worry beta, he’ll be punished for what he did… He took your mother’s life and I promise you that he’ll see the closest to his heart’s life taken… Soon… Very soon!”
They hug each other happily… A disgusting view for Sanskar’s eyes who holds himself hardly not bearing their devil plan, he looks from the window, discovering that domestics are bringing lot of bags inside, he hears the old man’s voice again:
“- Lovely bahu… I come to this house for the first time in thirty years… Meals smell is watering my mouth”
Parineetha exclaims confused:
“- aree! Sorry baba ji! Of course… Lunch is served I was waiting you all!”
***

In the evening, at Maheshwari mansion.
Shekar, sharmista holding the little Ayush in her arms and Dida arrive at the up of stairs, their faces illuminated with beautiful smiles and their hands full of gifts. They are warmly welcomed in by the Maheshwaris who greet them happily, exchanging congratulations and wishes loudly under the richly decorated roof of the house.
Sujatta takes the small boy in her arms kissing him and teases Sharmistha:
“- I don’t care, ask your beti to give me a potta as handsome and healthy as this little angel”
Her serious tone makes everyone laugh, Sharmistha replies:
“- she’s your beti too… And she’s carrying your potta, I’m sure he’ll be as handsome as his dadi!”
Ram adds:
“- I hope he’ll talk as much as his Dada! Cause if he’s like you…. ”
Everybody burst out laughing when Swara exclaims upstairs:
“Ma…”
She was standing by Ragini’s side who finally succeeded convincing her to take off the black color at least for today, for her baby’s aarti.
In a deep blue embroidered sari, keeping her silky curled long hair loosened on her shoulders, just her necklace and bangels for jewelry and a wide smile on her lips, she was stunning…
Instinctively, she wants to hurry toward her mother but Ragini hold her hand while everyone is startled. She tells her:
“- aram se swara! You have to be careful na?”
Swara smiles shaking her head to agree, letting her sister guide her down, Sharmistha goes to meet to her, tears of happiness shining in her eyes:
“- you didn’t find it as important to tell your ma?”
She slaps her cheek playfully making her smile and cry at the same time, they hug each other tightly. Swara closes her eyes saying:
“- sorry ma…”
And thinks silently:
“- it was important to tell HIM first”
Sharmistha caresses her hair tenderly saying:
“- congratulations Shona…”
Kissing her forehead she repeats:
“- congratulations beta”
They break their embrace wiping their tear, Swara feels shy seeing her father who comes toward her, he stops her from bending down and caresses her head blessing her before she plunges in his arms too, he smiles fondly to her too:
“- congratulations beta… How are you feeling?”
She looks up to him smiling and says:
“- fine baba… Bilkul fine”
Dida complains in his back:
“- aree! Aren’t you giving me a chance to see her?”
Swara plunges in her warm embrace willingly, the old woman makes her look up and wipes her tears saying:
“- I should be crying not you Sorroo… You’re making this poor Dida too old so early!”
Swara smiles happily and the whole family goes in the living room waiting for all the preparations to be done.
Durga prasad excuses himself and goes out in the garden to receive a phone call:
“- ha beta… She is fine, and you?”
“- I’m OK bade papa, just take care of Swara…”
Durga prasad feels sad to hear his broken voice, he’s joined by Shekar and Dida who escaped the attention of everyone. He puts the phone on speaker asking him the news:
“- we’re almost reaching the goal bade papa, I succeeded to hack his laptop and I really hope that all the files will be decrypted by Nikhil’s team, he’s installed in the mansion you talked about bade papa… Parineetha has been living there since her disappearance from house…
Shekar enquires:
“- beta… You’re taking so much risk with that matter… This man is dangerous!”
“- don’t worry baba… As long as they keep thinking that I’m dead, they’ll never suspect us!”
Dida asks him pleading:
“- when will stop all this beta? Swara is suffering like hell… She’s acting like if everything is OK but… Even today, her happy smile is not reaching her eyes…”
“- ma!”
Shekar stops her pressing her hand, they all know how difficult is the situation for sanskar who replies with a strangled voice:
“- soon Dida… Very soon… When swara will be out of danger!”
Bade papa asks him worried:
“- won’t you come today, beta?… We can manage to…”
“- nahi bade papa, not today… I will never be able to stop myself from…”
His voice breaks aching their hearts, his papa tries to convince him as he knows how important is this event for him:
“- beta… But…”
“- take care of Swara…”
He hangs off letting them speechless, at that moment Adarsh appears at the entrance frowning, they all look surprised wondering if he was listening to their conversation.
But he greets them joining his hands and smiling:
“- namaste Shekar ji, dida ji… Pap….”
They let him there and go inside joining the family for tchai… Pandit ji was ending the preparations. Adarsh walks in surprised at the decor, he looks to the family members smiling at the sight of the small Ayush in his dida’s arms, he says:
“- aree wah… Isn’t that the cute chotto? You’re so bigger beta!”
Ragini takes the small boy away giving him a death look, he’s about joining everyone when Laksh stands in his way saying:
“- sorry… This is a family celebration, strangers are not allowed!”
“- As I remember without me, you would be still in the yesterday drama… No celebration at all… Hai na swara babhi?”
“- don’t dare talk to her and…”
“- ek second Laksh…”
Swara stops him walking to them, Annapurna tries to stop her but in vain, she looks straight in Adarsh eyes and says:
“- I’m not your babhi! But it’s true you’re this family’s son, so no one can stop you from joining us, bade papa?..”
She turns to the old man asking:
“- you said that at Sanskar’s recommendations, everyone in this family became shareholder of the Maheshwari will… This man is one of them, hai na?”
“- ha beta… It was Laksh’ idea that Sanskar concretized after he went missing for months”
“- exactly… this is just in case you’re asking yourself, why no one has already thrown you out since yesterday? and never think that I owe you any kind of help, Adarsh!”
Her accusing gaze and angry tone shock him, he tightens his fists to calm down replying with a faked hurt tone:
“- just Adarsh? Baihya nahi? Come on Swara even if my little brother is dead, you’re still like my little sister!”
“- Adarsh!”
Everybody exclaims in the same time, Annapurna holds Swara by her shoulders sustaining her while Sujatta is about slapping him. But Durga Prasad stops her:
“- Sujatta! Swara beta is right! He’s still this family’s son… Let’s start the pooja…”
They all join the pandit ji, Ragini still taking her little brother in her arms, walks at Swara’s side giving her hand to make her seat. Trying to lighten her mood, she says teasingly:
“- Swara… soon I’ll have to take vitamins to support your weight!”
Swara smiles but sadness has already submerged her again, she looks around to the family members smiling faces, enjoying the present blessed moment and feels so lonely…
Her hand caresses her belly secretly thinking that she shouldn’t spoil everyone’s joy…
When the prayer start, she join her hands holding tightly on her “SS” pendant…
***
On a river’s bridge…
Sitting on the bridge’s edge, Sanskar takes out his phone, puts it aside and takes over his gloves wincing in pain, the injuries over his fists are scratched again and covered with blood… He takes his phone back, scrolls in its gallery over Swara’s photos… Hundreds and hundreds of unseen photos, Swara didn’t even notice the photographer, smiling, walking, talking, eating and mostly sleeping.
Smiling, he lets his tears roll over his tired cheeks while he takes a long sip of his bottle of somber wine, which goes throw his throat burning its way down to his empty stomach… sighing, he closes his eyes tightly enjoying the physical pain wishing it erases the heart’s one…
Recalling her wide eyes looking straight in his soul while she said that she’s pregnant, he takes another sip before putting the bottle aside and caresses her image saying:
“- you’ll never forgive me that, princess… Hai na?… as soon as you’ll see me, you’ll shout at me and say GO AWAY SANSKAR… I hate you! Ha… You’ll hate me… and you’re right… I’m a hateful person…”
Thinking of her begging words and tears that last night:
“- I’m really sorry sanskar!”
“- please sanskar…”
He looks aside to the bottle recalling her scolding worried words:
“- why did you drive when you’re drunk… I’m your wife, I have all rights…”
He wipes his nose childishly with his sleeves crying loudly as he remembers when she wipes hers on his shirt playfully, he draws with his trembling fingers her image adding:
“- what are you saying to our little one, Swara? Tell me… When he wonders where is his dad… are you telling him… he’s a coward who preferred jumping over the void letting you … instead of taking you in his arms and says that he can’t bear the life without you…”
He takes another sip putting the bottle aside again and add:
“- he’ll … He’ll ask… Ma? How is my dad?”
“- Will you tell him how bad am I, Swara?”
“- How I made you suffer? How I failed fulfilling my promises?… ”
His vision is blurred with tears, he recalls the moment he proposed to her that beautiful day and repeats like in trance:
“- I’ll spend every moment of my life with you… I failed!”
“- I’ll make you always happy… I failed!”
“- I’ll never bring tears to your eyes… I failed!”
“-… Failed!… Failed… FAILED!”
He’s haunted by the images of her on the funeral order, her shouting calling him… Her unbearable words asking him to come back…
“- SANSKAR!!!…. SANSKAR!!!”
He puts one of his hands on his ear trying to stop the sound reasoning in his head, his trembling other hand is about dropping the phone down which startles him, and makes him grip it tightly trying to stand up difficulty, almost falling on the river…
He laughs hysterically his face drowned with tears:
“- aree wah! Sanskar Maheshwari… You’ll fall here now?”
Straightening himself, he adds:
“- no one will come and find you! Na!”
“- No one is even waiting for you…”
He looks to the photo again and says smiling:
“- it’s funny princess hai na? Our story started here… No one was waiting for you too… No one sirf me… Just me… Your prince…”
He bends over to the bottle taking and says:
“- but don’t worry, princess…”
He takes a big gulp of alcohol then starts walking:
“-Nothing can happen to me, Swara…”
“- Who will protect you if I’m not here?””
Dragging his feet lazily on the stoned floor of the bridge, he walks to the academy’s enceinte for what seemed to him the whole night.
Whistling the gerua song anthem, he arrives at Swara’s office, approaches their photo’s wall scrutinizing every immortal moment hanged there.
Feeling no more forces, he lets himself lay on the ground closing his eyes and drift immediately in a deep sleep.
***
Later in the night…
The door of the office is opened slowly without noise, someone walks in, the steps are stiffened on the marbled floor toward Sanskar’s sleeping silhouette.
Bending next to him, Swara’s eyes are immediately filled by heavy tears… The smell of alcohol, the opened injuries on his fists, the bruises over his right shoulder appearing under his shirt opening… She wipes his wetted cheeks softly breathing heavily.
She couldn’t even blink afraid that the sight of his face disappears when she’ll open her eyes again… Will she ever be able to look away again?
Her tears waters his face making his lashes move menacing to wake him up, but he just moans in his sleep which breaks her heart more.
She stands up going to one of her drawers to take the first aid box, then brushing her tears away, she sits on her heals face to him and takes one of his hands after the other, putting a healing cream on his injuries, she opens his shirts buttons and applies another one on his shoulder massaging it slowly which make him groan painfully again.
When she finishes she can’t resist but print a small kiss on it, magic healing kiss like he used to say. Afraid that he could open his eyes at anytime, she closes her eyes tightly repressing her tears and starts to go…
But as soon as she turns away, she feels her dupatta griped in her back, her heart skip a beat… Is he awake? She hesitates for a moment scolding herself for ruining whatever he’s supporting all that for! She hears him say:
“- don’t let me, Swara… Please!”
His heartbreaking plea makes her turn to him, she smiles tears escaping her filled with love eyes, he was still fast sleeping but yet gripping her dupatta almost tearing it… She returns back to him.
Not really thinking of what she’s doing, she lays down just at his side, putting her head on his chest enjoying the sound of his heart beats like the sweetest melody of her life… and says:
“- listen to that, little one… this is your dad’s heart beating just for your ma… don’t hear my name on in it…”
“- your dad loves you and your ma so much, that he’s suffering hell on earth away of us, protecting us from something he’s even not allowing us to know…”
She looks up to his face smiling:
“- will you be as handsome as he is? His long straight nose, his curved lips, his beautiful chocolate eyes?… cute, hai na?”
She nests her nose in the bare skin of his chest, smelling his so missed odor and adds with a small voice:
“- see… he’s here… he’s just here, you believe me now? don’t listen to them… hamara Sanskar would never let us…”
When she tightens her hug on him, he instinctively surrounds her silhouette by his possessive arms holding her tighter to him. For the first time since ages, she closes her eyes not afraid of her nightmares and drift in the most peaceful sleep she has ever had… tonight, the villain guy with the scar will not come and scare her in her dreams because as long as her Sanskar will be there, she’s safe.
A passing nightingale’s song cradles them until the first lights of the day…
TO BE CONTINUED…

PRECAP:
Sanskar faces Adarsh in Maheshwari Mansion…
Swara meets the man with the scar at Badi!
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69 Comments
  1. RithuparnA

    I really liked the title… And ur lines are beautiful… really unique ff.. Waiting for next…

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear… It seems I see your comment for the first time, so happy that you liked my story and I hope you’ll like the following chapters too

  2. Simi

    Amazing ?
    Precap seems scary… Will he harm Swara n baby

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much seat simi my dear, I hope too or all what did sanskar was vain 🙂

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  3. Simin

    Mind blowing di
    This adarsh just throw him from that bridge
    Swara n sanskar together after soo long
    feels really awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      Yes! Don’t worry sanskar will give him a good lesson soon!
      Thank you so much, this scene wasn’t in the program, just popped in my mind as I was writing the whole chapter… I missed them so much

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you dear 🙂

  4. Mynalove

    I was sooooooooooo surprised and happy to see this chapter posted as I was going through your posts

    I’m again crying
    Tears are rolling down my eyes
    But I love crying on this story

    Sujata always has a sudden change of mind, she is a bit eccentric
    Now the mystery is a bit clear

    I don’t understand how do you write such sad, soulful, emotional, heart wrenching stories and capture my mind and heart
    I’m totally in the story when I read this

    Sanskar’s phone conversation and the last Swasan part had soooooooo much feeling
    Swara has nightmares about the scar man(*shocked)
    The last part was soooooooooooo awesome and amazing

    Di you have really put me in a dilemma
    I want the mystery to end soon and swasan back together whereas I don’t want this story to ever ever everrrrrrr end

    Take care di

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you soooo much dear myna for your sweet words, sorry for making you cry, but you know what, I love making cry stories :p
      I missed Swasan so much so even in my imagination, I reunited them surprisingly for myself… Such unexpected turn in my thoughts….
      But ha, even me, I want them reunite soon but then the story will end and I’ll miss them “mad woman… Yes, this is me” lol

      1. Mynalove

        No sorry
        Even I love cry stories till they have a happy end

    2. MAHIRA

      i promise… it will be a happy end 😀

  5. Awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much:)

  6. You know mahira di …..
    you really inspire me to write my story. ..
    but somewhere I m also not confident that will I be able to write so beautifully and with this magic which will create atleast 10% of contentment in me and my writers which you do in your every para….
    I was reading it once again all over yesterday night and was crying like hell….
    you described all the emotions so beautifully that I myself imagined everything happening just in front of me…..

    1. Mica

      Vrishti….. just write dear !!!!! just pen it !!! don’t think about the result.. please, we ‘ll waiting your work…

      1. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

        Vrishti..Write dear…Don’t be scared…We will definitely love it…likne se your writing skill zyada acchi hogi…So,pen it.. Darr ke aage jit hain??

    2. Kakali

      Vrishti,dear..!! Mica is correct..!! Dun think of the result..just pen down ur thoughts in ur own way..n m sure ev1 will love it.!! We readers will be waiting for ur works.!!

    3. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear,
      I’m really proud to be an inspiration for you and dear don’t even think about your story, just stay with yourself and lay in words what comes to your mind… You have a story to tell and we’ll all be happy to know it…
      If I listened to my fears, I would be sadly saying I have story to tell but my English isn’t so good for writing all what I want, I write in French style which can be strange for anglophone people because it too descritif, too emotionful less action…
      But then… How could we meet here? And form this Swasan family…
      Don’t hesitate dear… Don’t be afraid… Tell your story and you’ll see…

  7. Tamil

    Awesome……dear

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  8. Kaynatk01

    wow awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 😀

  9. Prashasti7

    Awwww Diiii I love u soooooooooooooo much u r the best u r such an incredible writer how could u describe every emotions soo perfectly soo smoothly I really love u sooo much I knew Sujata can’t be heartless she is just very innocent n about swasan this is very painful to see them suffering bt I know after this suffering they’ll get lot of happiness only n Diii I change my mood plz no punishment for Sanskar leaving alone away from swara is already a punishment for him

    1. MAHIRA

      Prashasti my dear… Thank you so much 🙂
      Soooo happy that you loved it… You know, with every chapter I wonder what will everyone of you all think about it, hoping being at your wishes not failing to give a small bit of Swasan’s dream…
      Thank you again 🙂
      And yes Sujatta can’t really be a baby killer cause sanskar isn’t Shekar… He would be unstoppable in his toofan madness

  10. update next soon

    1. MAHIRA

      I’ll try, but you had 3 chapters in 1 week

  11. AnuAnn

    Loved it

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much 🙂

  12. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Diiiiiiii,how’s u???I read all chappys yesterday.. I was not in tu for a month na*childish tone..I am dumbstruck di, after reading it… You are a great writer.. You deserve???…Seriously di, the way you described their emotions,love,pain.. It’s just… No words…Swasan!! Their unconditional love,strong bond,their faith,understanding are beyond words…Diiii,unite them soon na*most sweetest tone and puppy face… And that Adarsh na??pack him in a dust bag and throw him in Pluto*kakali ke pass?… Keep it up dear di.. Waiting for nxt..
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

    1. MAHIRA

      God!!! Dear! I was wondering where did you gone… You’re even not registered so I can send a msg for news.. So long time… I though you just stopped reading my story “puppy eyes”
      Thank you soooooo much, they’ll be reunited soon but… Shhh can’t say anything 🙂
      And yes, adarsh will finish in pluto or hell :p

  13. Arshaanya

    Bt how wil he suffr as swara frgve him alrdy?? Okay not frgve him exctly bt by dese scenes it luks lyk shez not angry on him at all..????
    Anywyz nyc chappy

    1. Mica

      seem Swara forgave him already Arshuu! you know na, Swara never can be angry at him moreover after knowing that he did something confidential thing .

      1. MAHIRA

        She would be really is he was really dead… But as he’s alive… Ha she’s angry…. But he’s her sanskar… She loves him more than her life 🙂

    2. MAHIRA

      She’s not yet in forgiving step… She just missed him so much, worried so much and wanted to somehow be sure it’s not just a dream… More than a month she’s asked to accept that he’s dead… Angry or not, she loves him…
      Then yes, he’s doing that for a good reason so…
      But don’t worry he’ll be punished…. Just as her punishment (part1) wasn’t really a punishment, so his punishment will not mean for punishment but yet… He’ll see hell on earth :p

      1. Arshaanya

        Got ur point mahira ?

      2. Arshaanya

        N i dun mean dat punishmnt bt want him to feel same lyk swara felt…
        Swara shud b away from him for some tym aftr clrng all d mess ??

    3. MAHIRA

      i can’t tell more as you’ll see in the story… but sure it will not be so simple^^

  14. Shreeyu

    Amazing diii

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  15. Raina

    i will comment after i stop crying!

    1. MAHIRA

      Wiping your eyes with my dupatta and giving you a beer hug… But ek second!!!!
      You made me cry in your story too!!!

      1. Raina

        in which story i made you cry? *silently escaping* aww!!!!!! your duppatta, no i don’t want that! i want sanskar’s kerchief, will you bring it for me? *puppy eyes*

    2. MAHIRA

      You didn’t make me cry…. Look to your nose Pinocchio… It’s becoming longer longer longer….
      Handkerchief? Even him has no more, all for swara he keeps using his sleeves

  16. Mica

    yeah everything FAILED, Sanskaaarr !!!! even on me, after lost 5 lives, still i’m stuck on my candy crush and now, my lappy got crash and boom !!!! my 10 lives from my friends vanished.. huh!

    1. MAHIRA

      If I was a player I would give you more lives!
      Big bear di’s hug for consolation

  17. Mica

    oh ya, you bad Mahira !!!!! you made me crying only.. huh! i hate youuuu!!!!!

    1. MAHIRA

      I love you too :p
      Thank you so much twiny

  18. Aarushi_99

    I loved it soooooo much Mahira!
    Finally Sujata is positive again… that’s the thing about her, sometimes I don’t like her for her behaviour and sometimes I love her soo much!

    Normally I don’t cry that easily (which makes me wonder if I’m heartless…. jk?), even when you describe Swara’s pain, I do feel really bad but don’t cry and this time, you described Sanskar’s emotions so well that even I got tears.. I was sitting in my class reading this and I got teary eyed, when my friends noticed they were soo shocked, they were like what are you reading? And I was like it’s just an Indian fanfiction on my favourite pair, their faces were worth watching?
    And about the mystery, it feels like 25% of the mystery is solved but my overthinking mind claims that it knows the story now? Let’s see if it is right or not?

    Anyways, it was an amazing chapter! Everytime I read a new chapter, I feel like that this is the best chapter yet but you prove me wrong everytime! Waiting for the next chapter eagerly to know if Sanskar wakes up and sees Swara or not..??
    Update soon, take care!

    1. MAHIRA

      Aww dear… Thank you soooo much ! Can’t say how your words are warming my heart with happiness! So glad you love it as much and that my words can translate the emotions of every character… Hope you’ll love what comes next too 🙂

  19. Kakali

    I love it..!! Mahiraaaaaaa Diii, this pain is sooooooooooooooooo amezing..!! didn’t cry..!!
    but when Sujhata feed Swara with our Own hands..omg, that was soo hurt touching ..!! i just cried..!!
    Loved it very much Diii..!! Emotions overloaded.!! Continue soon..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

    1. MAHIRA

      Kaku sweetheart… So happy that you loved it..I know that it was a so typical filmi scene but kya karo this why I love Indian drama…. All is about emotions 🙂
      And Sujatta has always changing every 2 episodes but she deeply loves swara as much as her son, just it’s her nature to be so senseless… Happy for nothing angry for nothing :p

  20. Soujanya

    Awesome

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear 🙂

  21. Thank u.. The baby is safe.. Happy that suji didn’t let swara to drink that soup. Suji-swara scene was heart touching. Feeling sad for sanskaar. He is too much broken.Hope everything get fine soon. The whole episode was superb. Precap seems interesting.
    Waiting for the next part dear. ?
    And mahira.. Don’t say sorry dear. Did u forget sanskaar’s rule?? ?

    1. MAHIRA

      Thank you so much dear Pramudi 😀
      kya karo, even Sanskar never applies his own rule, if we count all the times he says sorry to Swara….

  22. Divyanshri

    ur writing style is too awesome……love it…… I am always ur silent reader……. the way u describe the scenes….. presentation amazing…..

    1. MAHIRA

      Hi Divy, thank you so much dear 😀
      first time i read your comment i guess, so thank you again 🙂
      hope you’ll keep reading me ^^

  23. nice one..tc..

    1. MAHIRA

      thank you dear 😀

  24. Hey, I just love your FF! I loved every chapter! It’s so emotional but very soulful!
    Feeling bad for SwaSan Bt I’m not tensed for Swara & SwaSan’s unborn baby! Bcoz I know Sanskaar is there to protect them!

    Btw why Sanskaar should be punished by Swara? Ain’t he suffering enough? He is suffering since Adarsh turned negative! Bt he is living in hell since Swara left him & walked out of his life! And now also he is suffering as much as Swara, that too for her & their family’s betterment! He is doing everything & suffering hell for everyone’s betterment, not for himself! He even couldn’t attend the function of his child!

    And if Swara punish him for this, won’t it degrade her character more? Already she did wrong by leaving Sanskaar!

    Anyways till now every chapter were mindblowing!

    Btw I want to request something! If you don’t mind can you please make a link where we will find all chapters in 1 place? That will be very useful.

    1. MAHIRA

      thank you soooo much dear Nupur, happy to read your review 😀
      i agree with you that Sanskar is going throw so much pain, from the turning evil of Adarsh till now, he’s doing his best but no one is knowing about it…
      the punishment isn’t mean for punishment and i do love so much Swara to give her any behavior degrading her character, this why for example i made it that Swara leaved the house for more than the missing issue of Laksh…
      This why i made it that Sanskar tried to kill his brother for more than just wining the stupid childish fight they had
      i made Sanskar going so mad at Swara for more than blaming him for his brother….
      and if Sanskar has gone mad just thinking that she was about killing herself to prove his innocence, what is Swara feeling for him making her believe that he’s dead…
      like i said above, Swara loves him as madly as he does, whatever they are angry or not at each other…
      but yet, the ending will not be so simple… just wait and see 😀

      For the link, i don’t know how to create such page as we can’t edit pages after posting … but you find all the posts on my profile / posts; here:
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/5984/?profiletab=posts

  25. Superb episode Mahira di…!!!! Just loved it sooo much…❤❤ such a wonderful episode…full of emotions right from d beginning till d end…!! that breakdown of sanskar on d bridge and swara’s care for him at last made me cry….!!!!? and i liked that line too much which u wrote for swara dat she was not ready to blink her eyes so dat sanskar’s glimpse doesn’t get away from her sight……?..god how do u manage to pen it down so beautifully…..!! A big bear hug from my side…??
    And di pari’s mother’s name is sulekha not zulikha….?

    1. MAHIRA

      oooh! thank you so much dear DA 😀
      beautiful words of yours making me blush till my hair roots
      a big bear di’s hug from me too 😀
      sorry for Sulikha, it’s a problem of dubbing in arabic version i watched… Ragini/Rajini, Sujatta/Sajeetee… and Selikha/Zulikha… didn’t remember the original version… thank you so much ^^

  26. Raina

    episode was tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good didi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it very much. that means adharsh is not the son of maheshwa……..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????????? *my widened eyes are searching for someone so that they can hold me, because i am going to faint!* such a shocking and fabulous epi didi!!!!!! aww!!!!!!!!!!!!!! last moment, last line, ‘until the first lights of the day’ was sooooooooo….. i am not getting words! i don’t know why i like it that much!!!!!!
    love you didi!!!

    1. MAHIRA

      Cuuuty rains 🙂
      Thank you so much … Ha I can’t bear bad child torturing family for no reason.. Hard limit for me

    2. MAHIRA

      Raina! Stupid portable’s touches!!!

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