Swasan- does love need perfection ? Episode 53

hello friends sinin here back with the next part of does love need perfection ? sorry for the delay. actually I’m not doing fine these days. i have given blood for the 3rd time .and in new year all my best friends have left me alone.I don’t feel to write anymore. but don’t worry I’ll try my best to give updates earliest. please pray for me.
thanks for the comments on last part.


But where is she ? I didn’t saw her for some times.
joy : nandu where is SHONA ?
nandu : SHONA..last I saw her getting phone from 3rd floor.

Laksh : excuse me MR Mittal
JOY : yes Mr Maheshwari ??
laksh : have u seen my brother around here ?
joy : no…but if u want we can check upstairs .
laksh : I would appreciate that. we both stated for the stairs

laksh : he called me sometimes ago but now it’s unreachable.
joy : swadheenta is missing too or maybe they are together.

joy : wait the lift…i rushes towards the lift with laksh.
laksh : these noises….hello is somebody there ?
Sanskar : laksh ! laksh Hurry up ! get us out of here
joy : us…that means SHONA too ??
Sanskar : yes and she is not in a good condition..u guys hurry up

we both feel the urgency in his voice which tensed us more. laksh tried to break it like a wooden door but I didn’t allowed as it could invite more problems. I quickly called the reserve mechanic. he started to open the lift door by a buzzing machine. nandu came and started panicking.
joy : stop panicking… and call an ambulance fast !
by ten minutes the lift door were open but half of the lift was under ground… I saw the vulnerable face of Swara…she was fully drenched in her sweat.
Sanskar first passed Swara carefully and I took her to the ambulance…. she was breathing very fast and really her condition were not fine.
soon Sanskar and laksh joined us. even in this condition she said me to stay and handle other..
Sanskar and laksh took her to hospital.

nandu : hope nothing is serious..
joy : but how can the lift……
nandu : leave it…she is fine na..
joy : still…let me check…once
nandu : not now….let us dismiss the party first
I nodded OK….I really feel something is not good here.

Sanskar POV
her conditions were getting worse. its just her 5th month . oh god please save my life…I want both fit and fine. we reached the hospital and the stupid nurse started her interrogation.
Sanskar : listen I don’t have time. my wife’s condition is serious.. so call the doctor right now !
laksh : bhai…cool down…
the doctor came and took her inside the ICU.
I kept paceing in the corridor.

God please have some mercy..just now she forgave me..just now I got her in my arms and now I don’t want to loose her at any cost. this time I won’t be able to bear it. I want my Swara forever beside me with our symbol of love
and u have to give her to me.

the doctor comes out
Sanskar : doctor… what happened… is she okay…and what about my baby ?
doctor : actually Mr Maheshwari…she’s having breathing problems…we have given her oxygen… and excess and suffocation can lead to abortion at this stage..our gynecologist will be here soon only then we’ll be able to say something.

I felt someone took the ground off from my leg and I sat on floor with a thud…the possibility of abortion shakes me to the core. what will be her condition then. this extreme blissful feeling of fatherhood can’t be taken away like this…oh god don’t punish my child for my deeds…save them….
minutes looked like days and hours like decades… waiting is the worst thing anyone can have.
I’m just waiting to hear that both are fine and I can take them home back.
the doctor came out…
and now I was feeling like my final exam result has come and I have to face it.
doctor : Mr Maheshwari indeed ur lucky…ur wife and child both are fine and u can take them back home tomorrow morning but you’ll have take care.

I just felt some heavenly kind of relaxation which I was waiting for. I looked through the round window… Swara was sleeping there peacefully..
I carefully went inside… she had her oxygen mask for breathing. I felt my baby and a layer of happiness flow across me.thank u sooo much God… now everything is fine . we will live happily ever after.

precap – someone removing the oxygen mask !!

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  1. Awesome…..

  2. Maryum

    Awesome happy new year dear stay bless

  3. Awesome dear….. Who is dis new villan

  4. Meher

    Ye Kon hai Jaan ka Dushman ????

  5. Simi

    Who is that?

  6. Take care …
    Get well soon….
    I think it’s nandu….

  7. Akankshanna

    Awesome……. Bt d precap.. Really dangerous……….

  8. Simin

    Awesome dear
    But who is this new villain in the story now

  9. Mariyajap

    u made me cry

  10. awesome and take care

  11. Vyshu10

    awesome…such a tensed ep…pheww she is fine. Who is dis unknown person? I doubt kavita

  12. Awesome ?

  13. Awesome……

  14. IQRA222

    but scared for the next episode

  15. Chanu

    hi sinin dr!
    wt hpn 2 u? r u ok?
    rest first and when u gt well, write ff! no prob dr!
    2dy epi ws fuuu i ws soo much tensed bz f ur precap! awww thank u soo much 4 save them both. ummmah!
    im soo hpy!
    bt who is behine my swasan? huhu
    hey plz let them stay safe atlest 4 few days. my poor swasan!
    dr im leaving tu till my exams! its in augest! will cm back after da exam and will read all ur epis 4 sure dr!
    4m nw nwrds i cdnt cmnt here! im soo sry!
    keep writing dr
    and dnt stop writing in swasan
    be happy always
    take care!

  16. Kaynatk01

    it’s awesome

  17. Soujanya


  18. awesome

  19. Shreeyu

    It was awesome Dr…. R u fine? Don’t stress urself sinin

  20. Swarna01

    Ab toh nandu par v doubt ho raha hai

  21. Awesome..
    Me too feeling doubt about nandu.. Don’t know, who is this mysterious person..
    And get well soon dear.
    Take care..

  22. Abirsha


  23. Deeksha gupta


  24. Wow loved it plz don’t kill the baby ❤️

  25. Mirna

    Awesome dear 🙂

  26. Sweeta

    Great update ????
    Bt who is that mystery man????

  27. Hadi

    Aww thank God that U came n also Swara got saved I think the villain is kavita let’s see as always good but plZ dear be regular post next soon

  28. Sanji


  29. NDSG

    Superbbbbb.. But whose this new villain

  30. Shifa96

    Awesome..I am your regular commentor with a new user I’d..take care and update soon.

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