Swasan- does love need perfection ? Episode 45

I’m back with next episode… The comments means a lot for me..thank u all very much for the support. But where r my other friends… Did u lost interest in this ff…

Swara : what happened doctor..why can’t I feel the heartbeat.. Is anything wrong..is my baby OK…say na doctor..
Doctor : don’t be stress.. Let me cheek..

Sanskar point of view

This heartbeat….sounds soo familiar.. As if it is mine..
Swara…am I dreaming.. Yes she is here…my feelings were right…she was there also..I did feel her..my love..I missed u so much for these never ending 60 days…I just though about u…and my baby..u looks so pale my love..don’t u take care of yourself.. Do u work much.. Where do u live love…

Wait wait…these heartbeat… U here..does this mean it was our baby’s heartbeat… And I heard them first even before u..my dream came true…
Now do a favour on me..please return back…

POV ends

Nurse takes out the plug of speaker from the other room
And heartbeat starts in swaras room..
She breathes in relief….

Sanskar smiles seeing her soothing face…..

Doctor : your baby is absolutely fine..but you should take care u yourself too….don’t take much stress…

Sanskar worries listening to doctor….
Swara nods and comes out
Sanskar hides seeing her…

She goes towards the reception…
She cries….

She stumbles in the stairs but holds the railings…

Sanskar shocks and goes to help her but joy comes…

Joy : shona r u OK…careless girl…is everything OK ?
Swara : yes..fine..normal…
Joy : let’s go….

Sanskar looks at them from far….

Joy : shona get on the car…
Swara looks back at the hospital
She gets on the car..

The car starts and sanskar looks at it…

Sanskar : swara…r u OK…have u really move on..did u forgot me already ? Is it so easy…

Joy : heyy..r u OK..wanna go back hospital ?
Swara : joy…nothing just tired..u go home I’ll take rest now….

Joy goes

Swara enters into her house….
She goes on the bedroom..she throws her bag…n falls on floor..

Swara : its not easy sanskar.. Moving on is difficult….

Swara point of view

What did u thought ha..I’m still that stupid idiot illiterate village girl… What did u thought I won’t see u in hospital… I won’t see what devdas u have made yourself…
Did u really change sanskar… U felt happy hearing our child’s heartbeat ? Did u care for me..did u miss like I missed u in these days..

U will never change…n ever u will leave troubling me..if u cared for me then I would have never see u in the hospital.. Suiciding like a coward !

What did u think if u look at me with puppy eyes then I will melt..good happened with u..u should also feel how I felt seeing u with Kavita..
Now u bear the consequences…

Couldn’t u came and stand infront of me..peeping like intruders.. Earlier u used to command swara come here..more near..now what..
Don’t think I will forgive u…,cause I hate u the most..never in this life I will love u…that’s it no more swasan…

I should have seen his reports.. Who knows what new diseases he have invited now…..

Precap : crying and emotions…

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  1. Tweetypankaj

    Awesome yaar. Sinin. Loved it next part soon please

  2. Awesome…… Continue soon………

  3. Simin

    Are mera baby so much pain
    Plz shona forgive him he has suffered a lot

  4. Ols dont do that…Sanskar is repenting for his mistakes… Pls Swara…forgv Sanskar

  5. awesome yaar .please next update soon yaar.i felt like crying reading this.vry heart tuching

  6. Unite them

  7. Meher

    Sanskar ko Kya hua????

  8. Divyanshri

    hey S sisters…. how r u???I missed ur ff yaar….. n u guys Rocks….. ???

  9. Abirsha

    Awesome….. Pls post soon

  10. NDSG

    Aww poor sanky…… I can feel his pain… Shona forgive him… Soon na..? he loves u alot..

    Anyways chappy is awsome dear…+ jealousy sanky is also awsome..???

  11. Is she become a bipolar, when he said something with his right then she had and now when he not said anything again she have problems.

    Now wat he did she is cursing him

  12. Ayonti(swasan)

    awesome…… nw swasan ko unite kardo plz

  13. mou(swasan lover)


  14. Dharshini


  15. Kaynatk01

    aww so much pain but waiting for next impatiently

  16. Mariyajap

    Awesome post next part soon

  17. wow
    nice epi dr i lv it!

    sankys happiness!
    i lv it!
    their pov is soo heart touching.
    and they r right at their point!
    bt swara nw enough!
    4gv ur sanskar! he sufferd a lot! jst like u.

    keep writing
    be happy always

  18. Soujanya


  19. Rabia

    Awesomeee ?

  20. awesome

  21. Interesting
    What next

  22. Love it !!! Aww that was so sweet when only sanskar hear there baby heartbeat that to before swara !! Thats lovely !! Swara knew that sanskar was there in the hospital !! Plz made swara believe that he is really changed now and didnt do any suicide or something !! He is just missing his swara nd there baby alot !! Plz unite them nd yeah update soon !!

  23. awesome..tc..

  24. Nice dear…feeling bad fo both of dmm…..

  25. As usual..awesome..epi i felt like crying..plzzz unite swasan..i can’t see their pain…??update next soon

  26. Simi

    Make Swara forgove him

  27. Kakali

    Nice.. love it.. thnk u.;-*

  28. Ifza

    Awesome and loved it dear

  29. awesome…!!

  30. Vyshu10

    awesome…aww my swasan…emotional ep

  31. story is going realy good waiting for next

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