SwaSan! I Love You!! {Episode-35}

***********EPISODE-35**********

Swara: I Love u Sanskar

She whispers rubbing her nose against his shirt … He doesn’t hugs her back …as he was still feeling guilty

Sanskar : (soft tone) swara ..
Swara:hmmm
Sanskar: I’m sorry …
Swara: sorry? But for wat??

She asked confusedly still hiding in his chest

Sanskar: swara ..o ..hmm…for the thing I was going to do with u …. U know….

His voice struks in his throat he wasn’t able to speak … Swara understands and looks at him .. He looks at her face which was turned crimson red …. His gaze makes her shy …she downs her eyes fixing it to the floor

Swara: Sanskar …. It …it … Was it
Was….

She said tucking back her fringes with a blush ..he interrupts

Sanskar :(confused) wat ??
Swara:hmm ..o …u and….
Sanskar:(tensed) me and …wat??
Swara:(blushes) hmmm Sanskar understand na …how can I say!!
Sanskar:(confused) y can’t u swara (thinks something & gets sad) 😞 oh hmm..I can understand swara u were feeling uncomfortable rgt ..I’m sorry swara….I’m really sorry

He was abt to move back … But she holds his hand and looks at him in unbelievable

Swara:😊 alley melle bhudhu .. Idiot Amul baby ….I never thought u r soo Stupid … If I would’ve felt uncomfortable .. Then i might have not allowed u to touch me itself

She said pulling him closer to her and running her fingers in his hairs messing it … While he raises his eyebrows looking ?ly

Sanskar:😳 swara tat means u didn’t felt uncomfortable
Swara:(blushes)😊 no …Sanskar I love u …so I’m all yours then y would I feel uncomfortable tell me

He feels so happy hearing thz from her….he immediately hugs her tightly

Sanskar: I Love u more swara
Swara:😊 I know

He smiles and As keeps his hand on her back he realises that her top zip is still open … His hands touches her bare back and she closes her eyes feeling his touch .. While Sanskar controls himself and was abt to realise the hug …but Swara tightens the hug more and more …pressing her lips on his bare chest

Sanskar:(whispers) swara …
Swara:sshh Sanskar don’t move stay like thz only closer to me … Until my death take me away from u

She said shushing his lips … His eyes turned red shot as he registered the word “death” in his mind ….he immediately releases the hug and holds her by the shoulder tightly

Sanskar:😑 Just shut up swara …are u gone mad how can u tell dat …that (choked voice) that. ..
Swara:(interrupts)😞 wat wrong I told Sanskar …it is true and u also know that I’m going …
Sanskar:(cuts off) 😑 no swara no remember one thing swara .. If no swara then no sanskar

Swara gets teary eyes while
He was abt to get up …but swara wipes her tears & holds his hand not letting him to do so

Swara:Sanskar …
Sanskar:😑 Swara leave me
Swara:😒 Sanskar if u go ..I will not talk to u
Sanskar:😑 okay ..ur wish

He jerks his hand angrily …and was abt to walk but swara hugs him wrapping her hands around his waist

Swara:😒 I’m sorry …plzz don’t be angry . .I’m sorry Sanskar

She said b/w her sobs …he melts and immediately cups her face sitting beside her

Sanskar:Sshh don’t cry …don’t cry

He wipes her tears …she looks at him lovingly and cups his face

Swara:Sanskar I’m sorry
Sanskar:u should be

He pulls her into his embrace and hugs her tightly ….

Swara:😊sanskar …my back is….

She left her words incomplete with blush …Sanskar understand …. thinks something. … And smiles naughtily

Sanskar: if u aren’t feeling uncomfortable …y don’t we continue which we left in b/w πŸ˜‰

He said winking at her ..she blushes

Swara:😊 u r teasing me
Sanskar: no I’m serious darling
Swara:😊 Sanskarrrr plzzzz
Sanskar:my 4fut 2inch wild cat stop blushing …πŸ˜‰
Swara:😠 Sanskar u again started

She lifts her hand to beat him but her sleeves fall from her shoulder exposing her milky shoulder ….She widens her looking at Sanskar. ..sanskar smiles naughtily and pulls her closer to him ..she falls on his chest

Swara:😊 Sanskar …
Sanskar: swara u liked it na … πŸ˜‰

Swara shys and hides her face in his shoulder …he smiles and makes her look towards him … Both looks into each other eyes where they can see only love for them

Sanskar: Swara let’s get marry … Now itself …I’m unable control myself now darling

He said rubbing his hand on her bare shoulder …she closes her eyes feeling his touch

Swara: Sanskar I Love you
Sanskar: I know baby …but I asked u something give me my answer πŸ˜‰

He said placing his lips on her shoulder …she shivers due to the contact of his lips to her bare skin …and moans

Swara : aahhh ..Sanskar .. Ummm Hmmmm …Sanskar I’m ready …

She moans as he licks her shoulder passionatly and lovingly

Sanskar: (teases) ready for wat ? Darling πŸ˜‰
Swara: Sanskarrr

She pouts …he smiles and pecks her pout

Sanskar: Accha okay my shona my baby my darling …u sleep now it’s already late …goood night and Sanskar’s dreams πŸ˜‰

He said cupping her face …he was abt take off his hand from her cheeks ..but she holds his both the hands still on her cheeks

Swara:arrey arrey where r u going ..1st put thz zip (pouts)
Sanskar:😳. Swara don’t test my patience …put it by urself
Swara:😠 Sanskar how can my hand reach there …don’t u remember u removed it … U r acting too much wait let me tell suju aunt abt u
Sanskar:Ahem Ahem ..accha calm down baby ..I will keep …turn

He makes her turn …..looking at her bare back he immediately closes his eyes and zips her top with his shivery hands

Swara: hogaya ??
Sanskar: (relief) huh! Yes !!

He said back hugging her placing his chin on her shoulder …. She smiles

Swara: Sanskar I’m getting sleep
Sanskar: hmm accha u sleep .. I’m going
Swara:no don’t go …u also sleep here only na

She said turning towards him holding him tightly

Sanskar:😳 swara …
Swara:(interrupts) plzzz na (pouts)

He melts and smiles

Sanskar; okay darling

He said pecking her pout .. She gets happy and pushes him on the bed

Sanskar: arrey …swara …

She giggles and comes top of him …places her head on his chest and hugs him tightly

Swara:hehehehe …
Sanskar: wat is thz swara …
Swara: hehehe sshh keep quite .. Sleep

She said hugging him tightly … He smiles seeing her happy and hugs her back …soon both dozes off in each other embrace

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Mid night

Swara starts sweating badly ..as the result She opens her eyes ….her head starts paining badly ….she holds her head with both her hands and gets up from Sanskar …sits on the bed

Swara:aaaa….aaaa…

She winces as her head pains very badly …suddenly she nauseous in her stomach … She holds her head with one hand and keeps her other palm on her mouth ….she gets down from the bed and walks towards the washroom with the support of wall ….and vomits again and again still her face turned pale … She feels weak in her legs and falls down in the washroom

Swara:s…a..n..s..kar….sa..n…s .kar

She was trying to call Sanskar with all her strength but her voice wasn’t able to reach Sanskar ….tears makes a way from her beautiful hazel eyes … All goes blur…her head started paining like hell …she falls unconscious on the floor holding her head tightly 4

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Guys I’m really sorry for irritating u all with my ff’s…really sorry I never thought my ff’s would irritate u all tat extend tat u will msg me personally abt thz …but don’t worry guys inshallah I will end my both the ff very soon in 3 or 4 epi’s …
Waise bhi my exams r near … It’s better if I end my ff’s …. Inshallah I will never write any ff further …
But swasan will always remain in my heart …thank u all

56 comments

  1. Crazy Kupkakes

    Crazy Kupkakes

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    Please don’t end this nnaaa pls, if someone is personaly messaging u that means they are Supar excited so don’t dare to end it. ff are never irritating.😊

  2. Scooby

    Scooby

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    Who is that culprit tanu u who hurted u.. u forward their names… hw cn thy do this… no one has right to hurt others…
    coming to chapie it was awesome…
    Msg to readers never hurt othrs..

  3. Kakali

    Kakali

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    Yeah Tanuuuu ,, u should really stop writing.. why to waste ur time on those peoples who supported u from the starting n till doing now..
    yh yh u can stop writing for that particular one person who just msgd u n said something … good decision dear..!! carry on..!! Don’t u dare to think about US or ur regular readers…!! today u really showed ur Reader’s value through these few words.. Thnk u dear.. !! God bless u.. ;-*

  4. Jj

    No no u cant do this u r not end the ff please i will like u r all ff ,but i can’t commentend i am silent reader but now i will break my silence. please donot do this.

  5. Adi

    Adi

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    nooooo😣😣😠who the hell told u this diii i love ur writting pls don’t end plsssss atleast for your bigggest fan (obvio its me)
    and sorry not able to comment as school is open but plzz don’t end it

  6. parul

    dr tanu plz dont stop writing we really luv u n its ur talent which shouldnt be stop due to someone saying its habit of some people 2 poke der nose in everymatter either it is good or bad so dr just keep writing it was awesome one n dare 2 say sorry u dont know baba srk had said in frndship mein no sorry n no thanku bye keep smiling n also writing

  7. tani

    Wat happened yaar…. ur ff is really marvelous…. I personally like it very much…. n pls dont end for those who dont have value…. pls write for all of us who always supports u…. please dont end

  8. shona

    Hey tanu dear what happened suddenly?……. Who are those moron jerks who tried to hurt u tell us their names yaar… ………but for them don’t stop writing……… U are wonderful writer…….. Plzzzzzz …….plzzzxzxx. …….plzzzz…..dont end ur ffs

  9. crazy princess

    hey tanu log toh bolte rahenge kyunki unka kaam hai bolna aur burai wahi karte hai jo khud kuch nhi karpate so chill …..πŸ™„πŸ™„πŸ™„and plzzzz dont end ur ff i am a big fan of ur ff’s aur kisne kaha ki tumhare ff irritate karte hai shouldπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Šdere faces i love all ur ff plsss dont end it u can take break for xams but plsss continue dem πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡πŸ™‡plzzzzzz u r fabulous in ur work nd aweome in presenting sentiments nd emotions so plsssss dont leave dont end d ff nd let ppl say wat ever dey want caus by saying dey cant change our mind nd cant reduce ur ff’s fandom so maja ma rehenka aur dusro ko tension deneka πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

  10. Shilpi99

    Shilpi99

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    Please tanu don’t say like that i love your ff very much I am a silent reader till now but after seeing your note i thought to tell that that you are best but please don’t stop writing 😒😒😒😒😒😒😣😣😣please

  11. Shivangi

    Ok…
    Stop writing………

    Leave all of us…….you only consider those few person instead of your hundred fand who are supporting tou from the starting

    Bye bye………and ya don’t care about our feelings

    And never write again.

  12. Arshaanya

    Arshaanya

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    Tanu for dat one person u cannot hurt ur all fanz who love ur ff… write for d onez who reads ur ff alwayz comment who apprciate ur work… dun spoil ur mood for some one person…
    Dun end ur ffz v al love dem…
    N coming to d chappy as usual awesome

  13. Shivika

    Don’t be negative, if you are comfortable with your story line then you should continue. Why don’t you consider the positive opinions given by others? Don’t stop your ff, continue till you can.
    I am a silent reader, i only commented in two or three ffs. But today I wrote this comment only to give you positive thoughts. Really you are a good writer. Eagerly waiting for next parts. God bless you. You can always count me as one of your strong fan not only you almost all the Swasan ff. Bye… Take care and be positive and confident always. All the best.

  14. s

    i have always supported u from d starting..u r an awesome writer..
    some people only knw hw to hurt othres..u hv so many readers and they all love u so much..then y r thinking about those who dont care about u??
    pl dnt end ur ffs..they r awesome..i love reading them..tc..

  15. saheli

    why r u going to stop ur ff’s…don’t feel bad…jisko jo bolna hoin eo bolne do…u r tooo good…i loved it…u know i read ur “swasan u r my life ” ff 3 time….and now both of your ff’s are toooo good…i came here regularly for checking if you update or not…when i see your new episode i just feeling butterfly in my stomach…so don’t stop…plzzz

  16. Vyshu10

    Vyshu10

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    Awesome ep….hope swara gets well soon.

    Dont end the ffs plz… Plz dont take keep some stupid ppl’s words in mind. Plz dont get disheartened….i like ur ffs very much

  17. Niku

    Niku

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    It’s awesome dear ….
    U want to end ur ff ‘s bcz u r having exams that’s kk… N i should say study is very imp.
    But why r u not going writer any other ff after this….this is wrong…I don’t want u to stop writing ever in ur life …..bcz u r so talented …..I hope u never stop writing n come back with many stories on this site…..U can take a gud one break to think about story concept or anything…..but pls.its my heartily request NEVER STOP WRITING…..
    R u on wattpad?? If u thn pls. Tell me ur username if u don’t mind….I hope I didn’t said any thing wrong …..

  18. Rekha

    Rekha

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    Awesome as always………
    Pls don’t end soon……
    Continue writing……. U r an awesome writer…… Pls.. .pls.. ..pls.. … Don’t end any of ur ff’s dr…….

  19. Milestone

    Awesome dear

    ……loved it….
    ………Pls don’t listen to those who don’t know writing n pulling others leg…….. Please be positive because no one can make it feel low unless n until u allow them…….U love Helly right …….so be positive n keep smiling…….no rona dhona……..

  20. Shifa96

    Shifa96

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    Awesome..I have changed my username from afra..
    And sry I wasn’t able to comment on few of your previous parts..update soon and plz don’t end it abruptly..

  21. tanuja

    Tu asa kyu keh rahi hai 😞😞😞😞 teri ff hume kabhi bore nai karta samji end mat kar 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 BTW epi bohat acca tha

  22. nehasuhana

    Tanu don’t say like that u know I love to read ur ff yaar don’t stop it please u r a awesome romantic writer and those who trying to discourage you leave them dear they are jealous towards you we know that our hellu beared a lot of such issues she ignore them like her u also ignore them and continue ur work dear we are always with u

  23. Mynalove

    Mynalove

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    the episode was amazing and the last part was sad

    what is this di
    u can’t stop writing just bz of 1 basher
    the last note made me so sad and angry
    just give me that person’s name and i will personally msg her
    nobody has the write to hurt anyone
    just give the person’s name di
    we will complain to TU

    i love ur stories very much di
    if ur exams are coming then i’m ready to wait till they end but pls don’t end this

    take care di and all the best

  24. SRSL

    SRSL

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    Who the hell send you those messages..*beating him\her with a rod….dii you are thinking about that one idiotic basher and stopping it…think about us naa….you know how much suspence you left in Lust obsession and love…and this ff too….so no way I am not gonna allow you to stop this….you will continue writing for your regular readers…

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