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Home»Fan Fiction»Swasan-Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 17…
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Swasan-Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 17…

FROZEN CHOCOBy FROZEN CHOCOOctober 28, 201671 Comments11 Mins Read
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Guys not have any idea suppose if it is bored then pls forgive me… I’m sorry… 🙁 🙁

Link to Previous Chap: Chapter 16

Chapter 17:

Swa: kaki in my whole life first time I awoke too earlier… it’s all bz of him…  once everything get fine… I’ll take revenge from him… she made face… kaki laughs… kaki: U can tk revenge later now go and do ur work…

Swa: if suppose he found… kaki: think positive… kaki signs all the best… Swara nods and leaves….

Swara slowly peeps into sanky room… She heard shower sound… swara sighs then she entered his room… his shirt was in bed… swara simply cut button in his shirt… then she silently comes out and stand outside of his room…

After few minutes sanskar comes out only with towel wrapped in his waist… swara closed her eyes using her palms… Swa (to herself): Swara baby he is ur hubby only… it’s not wrong… when she takeoff her hand,  he is all dressed up and searching shirt in his wardrobe… she sigh with disappointment…

She pretend to be casually entering his room… swa: handsome still you didn’t ready… oh God did ur shirt button is broken… what u going to do now… already we’re late… don’t wry will stitch it… turn this side… she said in single breath… Sanskar turns towards her… looks her surprised and confused…

Sans: swara how u knw my shirt button is broken… swa smiles sheepishly (to herself) u r idiot swara… (to sanskar) oh 6th sense She point broken button in bed… Sans smiles: oh ok… he again starts to search shirt in his wardrobe… Swa: sanskar I said I’ll stitch ur shirt… what u r dng eh..? 

Sans: it’s ok swara, ll change some other shirt… Swa: arre I’m saying na, if u tk another shirt thn u need to press it… already we’re late… Sans: but u dnt knw stitching na… Swa: I watched in so many serials… dnt wry… she doesn’t give him any option, so he agrees…

She wet the tip of thread and pressed her thin layer of lips between her teeth and focused her eye in threading a needle… with much of difficulties she insert thread into needle… he couldn’t help himself from admiring her action… swara with a wide a grin: hogya…

Swara steps close to sanskar…. her closeness affected him too much… Sanskar feels hesitate and look aside… she slipped her fingers inside of his shirt to hold the button… he felt electric wave… He is not at all standing straight and sweating profusely…

Swa: handsome Stand straight na, otherwise it’ll hurt… he stiffened lil… swara is enjoying his tension… Swa(innocently): Sanskar why you’re sweating… 

Sans: hmm… wo… um.. ac temperature is low na so only… he stammers… Swara chuckles… swa: U r the one who sweating in low temperature… Sans: swara stitch it or leave me…

Swara not even know how to keep knot in thread… she shows her tooth to sanskar…button continuously falls from her hand… Swa (to herself): god what should I do now…  Sans: swara leave it, I’ll change some other shirt… u r taking so much time… he moves… swara make face…

Swa: you’re right I don’t know anything… I’m good for nothing…  she said with fake tears and sits aside… he feels bad to see her like that… 
Sans: who said..? u are good for nothing… u r the best in the bestest…

Swa: no you’re lying see I can’t even sew this button… sans: you know Which is very difficult in stitching..? Swara looks him… Sans: Inserting thread in needles, see na u did it perfectly…

Swa: but I didn’t stitch ur button… she pouts… he forwards needle to her and signs to stitch… swa: I don’t knw to stitch… she bows… he smiles and place button in his shirt using her hand… and starts to stitch holding her other hand…

Swara (to herself): u can’t see me upset for a second thn y u r hurting me by the word attraction…She stares him lovingly without blinking her eyes and cursed her eye lids whenever it hide her handsome sight…

Sans: hogaya see we did it, perfectly… by making final knot…  swa: haan sanskar when we did together thn everything will be perfect, hain na… she winks… Without  giving heeds to her words… Sans: hm.. now we need to cut this thread… wr is scissor… 

Swa:  no need of scissor, when I’m here… she leans towards him and cut the thread using her teeth… her lips touches him, nope utmost she kissed his bare chest… Which made him numb, he holds his breath… as soon swara cuts thread,  he hastily moves from there without looking her… swara smiled at her effect on her handsome…
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Suj: I thought u love her… by caressing arjun hair… arj: Mom we were, are always friends… Suj: thn why you’re upset now…

arj: mom he hurts her… he is not ready to accept her love… Suj: maybe he needs some time… arj: no mom he just need treatment arjun treatment… he smiles…

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Swara and her friends are enjoying together by teasing and chatting with each other in swasan home… kaki adores there friendship…

Arj: hey wr is ur old man… Swa: who..? Arj: huh, ur husband the great Sanskar Maheshwari…

Swara gives him death glare, but he is not at all mind her and continues to tease swara by saying sanskar is old man…

Swa: not again then ll kill you, he is not old… Arj: haan but he is older than me na… he chuckles… Swara anger reached peeks…

Arj: Guys u all knw how he made his face when I hug ammu… the reaction on his face chanceless… lol… his face bcm just like boiled potato… he he he… after he complete his sentence cushion hits his chest hard… Arj: ouch…

Swa: don’t dare… arj: I’m… swa: then ready to die… she throws all things on him… he runs all over the room and falls on sofa… she take flower vase and tries to hit him… arj rolled his eyes…
 

Arj: ahhh… leave me please… swa: U dnt listen me na… Arj: meri maa I’m sorry…   arjun holds her hand… swa: Sorry not accepted…

Arj: if you killed me then life time u sentenced to be jailed… swa: U forget one thing my handsome is advocate…

Arj: huh… if I die then I’ll bcm ghost and disturb, no no will watch live show of u and urs handsome romance… swara blushes and keeps vase aside…

Arj: he he he… look na guys husband is boiled potato, now wife bcm Red tomato… Karthi: wah wah… vegetable family… kav: then what about thr kids…

Raj: haan baby corns… Deepi: for God sake pls stop ur these vegetable jokes…huh… She frowns…

All hear some weird sound and turns direction towards the sound… there one jeevan is eating samosa without care about anything… her stomach is growling… Roshi(with mouth full of samosa):  I think I’m hungry… she place her hand on her stomach… all together: bhukad… all laughs…

Kaki calls them for lunch… Calling bell rang… swara: kaki I think sanskar came… she runs and happily opens the door… after seeing arjun sanskar smiles fade…

** Sans: I knw u are still lil upset with her marriage truth…but pls… arj: no bro why should I..? You knw now oly my love and respect towards ammu increased… you’re right she is not only my frnd more than that… I realised her importance in my life… he hugs sanky…sanskar just stand like statue by hearing this…**

Arjun smirks looking at sanskar… sanskar plastered a fake smile and welcome her friends… All seat for lunch… swara goes to sit with sanskar… arjun pulls her by ponytail…

Swa: ahhh… aju leave me… arj: sit here… swa: no will sit with sanskar only… Sanskar had a huge smile on his face…

Arj: huh…ok… before she seat karthi and raj sits either side of sanky… they not ready to move from there… So without any option she sits with arjun… sanskar looks her like lost puppy… arjun and kaki signs each other…. 

Kaki clears her thought: Sanskar beta don’t they look together…  Sans: whom..? She points swaraj… Sanskar choked his food…He is already fuming with thr closeness… now this kaki… huh… 

Sans (irritatingly): kaki I think u need to do eye check-up… huh, look at them they both look alike twins…  he frowns and looks at swarj… 

arjun is flirting with swara and she is laughing for his silly jokes… arjun take a piece of aloo and feeds her…  sanskar burns with jealous… he feels something breaking inside of him…

Raj: swara nxt wk arjun bday… swa: really… arjun nods…  Swa: aju it means you’re 3 months younger than me… Sanskar face glow hearing this…

Arj: so what u knw Sachin also younger than anjali… karthi: haan… haan… In vallavan (Tamil movie) simbu is younger than nayanthara… Sans (to himself): why these idiots are saying this now… what they all mean by this… he fumes…

Raj: even my mom is younger than my dad… (arjun glares him..) wo I mean haan… In Premam (Malayala movie) George is younger than Malar teacher…

Sans(happily): but she is not pair … Swa: haan I heard in that movie climax he gt married to his frnd sis… kav: seriously that movie is so irritating first he love a girl who is 3yr older than him but finally he marry a girl 8yr younger than him…  

Kaki: It’s not like that… every story has some moral beta… kav: then tell me the moral of that movie… Kaki: hmm as far I knw it has 2 morals, one is “we cant always marry the person we love but we can love the person we marry” Raj: then what about 2nd one…

Kaki(looking at sanky): when we love someone truly then there age doesn’t matter to us… whether the person is 3yr or 30 yr older than us… love is always love…

Swara Without moving her gaze from sanskar… swa: ha kaki love is always love… age is only just number… but some fails to understand that… even if they understand they won’t accept it… Sanskar doesn’t say anything he just understand kaki saying all this words to  him…

Aarj: uff.. ok ok enough of this talk… ammu if u think I’m younger than u thn I’m sorry u knw after my schooling I discontinued my studies for 2yrs.. so I’m 2yrs elder than u…

Swa: u r elder or younger I dnt care bz we all share the bonding called friendship… ? She side hugs him… sanskar mutters in low voice ‘friendship’ and made face…
 
After spending sometime, all bid bye to Swasan and kaki…  Arj: oh shit… swa: what happen aju… arj: I forget this… he takes bunch of roses from his bag and forwards to swara…

Sans: bro she loves only Lilly… Swa: handsome I love Lilly it doesn’t mean I hate roses… (looks at arj) aww thank you so much aju… you knw its first time someone giving flowers to me… she smiles widely… sanskar makes face…

Deep: oh god bhai u nvr gv flowers to shona… so unromantic…Swa: Huh I knw how romantic my hubby is… U dnt need to say… (by holding sanskar hand) babiee u dnt tk this idiot words… sanskar eyes widened with lil shock, she never used this word before…but he smiles inwardly… deepi: ok ok madam I won’t say anything I’m sorry.. now smile… Swa: that’s better…

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Swara replaces flowers in vase…  Sans: swara don’t change flowers… swa: why handsome its look good na… sans: yeah, but… swa: but… sanskar coughs to think some reason… (how could he say he is jealous) swara looks for his answer… sans: wo… wo… haan… I allergic to rose fragrance…

Swa: what but I never knew about this before… san: so what now u knew it na… see just now bz of this rose how I coughed badly… he coughs… swa: oh its bz of this only… Sans: yeah… swa: u dnt wry… sans smiles… swa: I’ll keep this in my room safely… sans: what..?

Swa: haan… Its better na… by saying this she takes flowers with her… Sans: u r stupid sanskar now she is keeping those  roses in her room … he fumes… but soon his face lightened like 1000 watts bulb with scenario…  There Swara is giving those roses to kaki…

Swa: kaki when u return ur home u tk this flowers with you… dnt keep this near handsome… he is allergic to rose… kaki(surprisingly):from when he is allergetic to rose…

‘When I hug ammu his face bcm lyk boiled potato’, she remembers arjun word… Swa(to kaki): after I received these flowers from aju… she slowly whispers, both giggles…

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☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆WISH YOU ALL HAPPY DIWALI FRIENDS ?? 😀 😀 ☺☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

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    71 Comments

    1. Purvi on October 28, 2016 11:21 pm

      awesome epi…… Continue soon……

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 10:51 pm

        Thank you..☺☺

    2. Simin on October 28, 2016 11:24 pm

      Awesome hayyeeeee jealous sanskar
      Tooo cutee

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 10:51 pm

        Thank you..☺☺

    3. keerthi on October 28, 2016 11:31 pm

      Really nice… If possible please post regularly or weekly twice or thrice…

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 10:55 pm

        Thanks dr..☺☺ till nov 10 lil busy after that will try to post weekly twice…☺☺

    4. Abeda sultana on October 28, 2016 11:36 pm

      Amazing love it so sweet and lovely story but don’t be late friend post next part soon plz plz plz…………….

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 10:57 pm

        I’m already late dr… sorry 🙁 will post after Nov 10…. Thank you. .☺☺

    5. rabia on October 28, 2016 11:39 pm

      Hahahahha awesome dearrr ???

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 10:58 pm

        Thank you ☺☺

    6. Shreeyu on October 28, 2016 11:52 pm

      A very happy Diwali to u too…. Awesome chappy

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:00 pm

        Thanks for ur comment and wishes..☺☺

    7. NDSG on October 28, 2016 11:59 pm

      love is always love… age is only just number…

      Awsome lines… From where u get these beautiful lines….

      Now day by day I’m becoming mad. For this ff…??????

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:03 pm

        “Age is just number” I read that line in one forward message dr… he he he… ??I used it here.. Thank you..☺☺

    8. Manasvi on October 29, 2016 12:12 am

      Hii dear… I juz created my id yesterday … Love this story of yours….
      Coming to the ff, it was so amazing…
      It was a smile on my face till the end…

      And one more thing-Are you the writer of a PLAYFUL LOVESTORY???
      I dont remember but I guess it was you only dear…
      And if you are the writer of PLAYFUL LOVESTORY, then plz post the next part of that ff soon, I juz love that story☺☺☺☺

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 10:38 pm

        that was not me.. she is another nive dr… Thank you for commenting… ☺☺

      • Manasvi on November 7, 2016 2:37 pm

        Oh so sorry for the misunderstanding!!!

    9. Arshaanya on October 29, 2016 12:21 am

      Omg m loving it…
      Hahahahhahahaha jls sanky…
      Want more swasan scenes plzzz plzzzz

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:14 pm

        yep sure… Thank you ☺☺

    10. rabia0032 on October 29, 2016 12:22 am

      Awesome yaar I am sooo sceard with your teaser plzzzzzzz dont seprate swasan with ragini entry plzzzzz give ragini laksh but not sanskar plzzzzz….

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:19 pm

        Teaser is still incomplete dr… dnt wry… he he he… Thank you..☺☺

    11. s on October 29, 2016 12:23 am

      nice..continue soon..

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:20 pm

        Thank you..☺☺

    12. Priya on October 29, 2016 12:27 am

      Superb

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:20 pm

        Thank you..☺☺

    13. Misti on October 29, 2016 12:37 am

      Hahahahaha…this part was awesome

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:21 pm

        Thank you..☺☺

    14. Mirna on October 29, 2016 1:09 am

      Awesome nive dear loving the sankys jealously if ucan plzzzzzz upload fast.

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:24 pm

        Thanks mirna dr… ☺☺

    15. Febi on October 29, 2016 1:28 am

      I’m still laughing…..It’s beyond excellent. Please update soon…..please dear don’t make us wait this much. Love u & take care.

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:26 pm

        Thank you febi☺☺ I’m sorry I’ll be late.. 🙁 🙁

    16. chanu on October 29, 2016 1:39 am

      Awwwwwwww sooo cute cute chappy dr…
      lv it sooo much

      Rly hw u guys write dis much cutely?????
      Soooo sweet.

      oh hoo sankys jealousy is worth 2 watch.
      He looks soo cute while jealous. Even in sr… :-* :-* :-*
      I lv swara arjun and of crz kakin here..
      oh hooobso nw swara also gt 2 knw dat sanky is j.. 😉

      Waiting 4 ur nxt epi..
      After sèeng ur teaser I cdnt wait… hwwww…
      and bring rags after 2 epis..

      Keep writing
      be happy

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:30 pm

        yep… u r ryt he looks cute in SR… I too love arjun… and yeah will bring rags after 2 epi’s. .. be ready chanu dr next epi should be very long… I think so… but not yet posted… Thank you..☺☺

    17. mariyajap on October 29, 2016 3:17 am

      Awesome

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:31 pm

        Thank you..☺☺

    18. mica on October 29, 2016 4:37 am

      aaawww i love jealous khaddos old man Maheswary, he acts silly childish than his kid wife 😀 :D..
      Niveeeee…. gimme this Arjun.. i want to pull his cheek..cute cute cute..good job!

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:39 pm

        he is not old man… if swara heard you, Omg then ? he he he… mica see I gv arjun to you… u keep him wid u till next epi… arjun don’t be naughty be a good boy??

      • Nive.. on November 7, 2016 12:07 am

        Thank you ☺☺

    19. SwaSanFan.Goldie on October 29, 2016 4:53 am

      Awww..amzing..n soooo Cute Part..So Handsome id Jealous seeing His Kiddo Enjoying wod someone else haa..amzing..hope doom swasan confess their Love to Eachother..continue soon..

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:52 pm

        thank you so much dr☺☺

      • SwaSanFan.Goldie on November 7, 2016 3:28 am

        Continue soon

    20. SNY on October 29, 2016 8:24 am

      No words to describe…..
      Awsm epi akka…
      &&&& hpy diwali…….

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:53 pm

        thanks thangachi☺☺

    21. xavia on October 29, 2016 9:34 am

      It wz amazing…m still laughing …hw cute dey both r….n happy diwali dear…

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:53 pm

        Thank u dr☺☺

    22. sammykapoor on October 29, 2016 10:37 am

      so sweet….happy diwali dear

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:54 pm

        thank you ☺☺

    23. maryum on October 29, 2016 11:17 am

      Awesome

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:55 pm

        Thank you ☺☺

    24. vyshu10 on October 29, 2016 11:34 am

      haha…awesome. Nice to see jealous sanskar

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:55 pm

        thank you ☺☺

    25. SHAN on October 29, 2016 11:37 am

      Awesome nivi….. Loved it a lot…. Very nice….. Amazing…. This is my diwali gift dr…… Very very nice

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:56 pm

        aww thank you shan..☺☺

    26. Nikita on October 29, 2016 12:50 pm

      Its soo cute Yarr plzz post soon I loved it

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:56 pm

        thank you ☺☺

    27. Simi on October 29, 2016 1:42 pm

      I loved swata’s last dialogue

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 11:57 pm

        Thanks dr☺☺

    28. Navi on October 29, 2016 1:57 pm

      awwww… love u so much nive ummahhhhh…
      ***** happy deewaaliiiii for u and family*************
      what to do indha varsham saturday la deewali vandhruchu… dnt feel…
      btwn swara ku thappu panna olunga act panna therla.. send her to me i will give her coaching. thappu pannuradhu thappu illa but adha mattikama pannanum. sans loving huubby nala think panna dumbo.. how she knws abt shirt buttton..
      then cute arjun and kaki…. love them alot but credit to my choco or eli or mahathala or ssoniyakaari…
      awesm chapie nive…
      tc…

      • Nive.. on November 6, 2016 10:43 pm

        he he he… she is just lyk my sis adha matti kitta.. Huh navi enakku evlo name..?? Thank you for wishes dr..☺☺

    29. tani on October 29, 2016 3:31 pm

      Marvelously awesome

      • Nive.. on November 7, 2016 12:00 am

        Thank you ☺☺

    30. mumpi on October 29, 2016 7:54 pm

      very nice

      • Nive.. on November 7, 2016 12:00 am

        thank you ☺☺

    31. chandu on October 29, 2016 8:59 pm

      superb…!! Soo nice…!! Soo cute to imagine sanky being jealous…!!

      • Nive.. on November 7, 2016 12:00 am

        thank you ☺☺

    32. Shiksha on October 30, 2016 3:26 am

      Awesome… Happy Diwali for u too nice n all my friends here…
      Well the teaser was shocking but please don’t make ragini’s entry so soon..
      Love you…

      • Nive.. on November 7, 2016 12:02 am

        thanks dr..☺☺ Teaser is still incomplete… dnt wry..?

    33. hadi on October 30, 2016 12:37 pm

      awsum scene of jealousy full epis is so nice hubby potato wife tomato hahaha laughing so much arjun is so funny n a true friend no doubt he is so good i love the way he is thinking to realize sanky his love post soon dear but han dont make ragini entry soon

      • Nive.. on November 7, 2016 12:03 am

        he he he. .. thanks hadi..☺☺ rags entry after 2 epi’s only..?

    34. Sethooty on October 30, 2016 7:35 pm

      Loved this epi…darling….read previous part and promo….but couldn’t able to post comments… My phone stucked tried many times…..Aju treatment is working very well on sanky lol…hHa kaki also partner in crime….awwe shona baby wakeup early…
      Haha sanku jealousy loved it…

      • Nive.. on November 7, 2016 12:06 am

        yeah… kaki and aju are partners ? huh it’s all bz of sanky… poor shona… but surely she ll tk revenge for tat… Thank you☺☺

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