Swasan-Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 16…

Read at ur own risk… It may be long chappy and lil blunder…

Link to previous Chap:  Chapter 15

 

Chapter 16:

Swara is scared to face to all her friends… Sanskar holds her hand and assures ‘ he will make everything fine between them’… swara smiles and get down from car… he goes to park his car in college parking lot… as soon all her frnds surrounds her with shooting draggers… there looks is enough to tell swara they all knw about her marriage… she looks down…

 

Ros: we want to talk with you… 

Deepi: can we..?

Kav: shona… oops sorry Mrs. Swara Sanskar Maheshwari…

Swa(slowly) : Kavi…

Kav: oh still u remember my name… I thought u forget my name like u forget about ur marriage…

They taunts her indirectly and not letting her to speak… swara is in verge of crying as her friends never behave with her like this before… she is expect sanskar to come soon for her support but he is busy with his mobile in parking lot…

 

Deepi (angrily): we knw y u hide about ur marriage… bz u never treated as friend…

Swara: no… Nothing like that, actually…

Ros(cuts her): actually what..?

Kav: if you ever treated as friend u should gv us treat before ur marriage na… she pouts…

Swara: haan…? by seeing swara reaction they all break into laughter… swara looks them clueless… kavitha hugs her tightly…

 

Kav: My shona baby what u thought…? We are angry..? Nope…
Deepi: actually we were… but arjun na he only persuade us…

swara wipes her tears: really..? Ros: yeah…

Swara gets happy arjun is not angry with her…

Swa: wr is aju now..? kav: I think he is in canteen… come lets go… swara left msg to sanskar and leaves with her frnds…

 

@Canteen,
Arjun karthi Raj are seated in their usual place… swara and her frnds join them… arjun turns his face away from swara… swa: dont act, I knw ur nt st all angry… already thy told…

Arjun: huh, I thought to tease u but they… he frowns… kavi deep Roshi look away… swara chuckles… 
Swa: yesterday after ur behaviour I thought hereafter u won’t talk with me and think me as bad…

arjun: sometimes our angry will over power us…

Swa: I swear… I don’t mean to hide from u all…

arj: swara you know if our frnd hide anything from us it doesn’t mean they intent to hide it, they never treated us frnd and all… it means they need to do for our better relation or bz of circumstance… we need to understand that…

Not only he understood her and also he made all other frnds to understand her… she is really lucky to get a frnd like him… he is indeed friend… Swara thank arjun with her smile… he assures her ‘I always there for you’ with smile…

 

Karthi: Ugh… both stop ur melo drama…

Raj: Thank god karthi u stopped them… otherwise I would die seeing this… swarj pouts… 
Roshi: waise swara why don’t you tell us about ur marriage before..?
Kav: shona don’t u think u married too early…?  all shots their question about her marriage… swara tells them how Swasan marriage happened and she gets upset…

 

To lighten up the environment kavi started convo… Kavi: aww shona u married to Mr.Handsome … wr is ur hotty hubby…

swa: I messaged him tocm canteen but dnt knw why he tks(she realised what kavi said) Swara glares her…

Deepi: ha ha ha… kavi I think u need to buy another mobi now… kavitha gulps… all laughs…
Swa: dont worry… I’ll ask sanskar to buy new iPhone to you… kavi: really..?

Swa: haan but on one condition, u hv to tie  rakhi n his hand… 

Kavi: huh..? Kavi shocks swara rocks…

 

Karthi: you know swara if our frnd gt married we have lot of advantages… that too if suppose they live alone…

Raj: yeah karthi hereafter party hangout night studies all in ur home only…
Swa: party hangout and all ok… but night studies that too we… you all don’t know about sanskar he is very strict in studies… dont dare to choose night studies in my home…

Kavi: haan.. haan… dont dare to choose night studies… madam will do some other study at night na…  swara feels embarrassed: Idiot… she hits her…

Karthi: Girls do u all know one thing… she is romancing with her husband in centre of hall…

 

Raj: you all won’t believe if I say how she welcomed her husband… 

swa: Raj shutup… all start to pull swara leg… swara is blushing hard… but arjun… he simply stares her every reaction… he feels something odd…

 Arj: ammu… Swa: haan… arj: are you happy…? 

Swara smiles fade lil: what..? Arj: are you happy..?

Swa: don’t u see how happy I’m… she start to stammer…

arj: haan I don’t see happiness in ur face…

Swa: arjun in all of sudden what happen to you…

 

Arj: I feel something different… you are forced to marry him… do u really happy with this marriage…? He is top most advocate, handsome, settled, good in nature, but his age… don’t u feel hard… isn’t it bother you..? are you really happy..?

Karthi: arjun what question is this… Deepi also 3 months older than me, did I ever worry about that… she throws water bottle on him… he catches it…

Deepi: Idiot duffer don’t flirt with me… (To swara) yeah shona arjun is right… you said he is nearly 10yrs older than you…

 

Swa: arjun if someone in ur place, my answer should be different… yeah I was forced to marry him… that was the best think happened in my life… he was the man every woman dreamed… but I’m the only one lucky to get him as husband… hmm you both are right he is bothering me… bothering me lot when I thinks did I lucky enough to always be with him… its bothered me whenever he treat me as princesses instead of his Queen… it’s bothered me when I think his 10yrs of fragrance not present in my life… he is not  older than me it’s me who born too late… it’s hurt me when my age bcm hurdles to my relation… its ached me when he says mere love is just attraction… tears were brimmed in her eyes….

 

She don’t want to fall wk in front of her frnds… quickly she wipes her tears which is not unnoticed by her frnds… she excuse herself from there and walk away remembering her confession… arjun run behinds her…

 

*After their dance… Sans: I’m also happy bz my kitten is happy… Happiness in the air… She rolls towards him… he is facing ceiling, her head on his shoulder and she is playing with his shirt button…

Swa: sanskar did I really lookalike kitten… she pouts… he turns towards her… pulls her nose… 
Sans: nope… but you’re my pyari bubbly chubby kitten… only for me… he smiles…  

Swa: haan… Only yours…

 

She hides her face in his chest and he was caressing her hair lovingly… She sense their closeness… her hearts starts to beat faster… she feels her heart will come out anytime and tries to move, but his arms wraps around her tightly… she raises her eyes and glances him, his gaze already fixed on her… they both had an eye lock… his breath sent electrical shiver to her spine… he gently smoothing her hair away from her forehead and pressed his lips against her forehead … she started to tremble… he slowly pecks her cheeks… she holds her breath…

 

Swara(with heavy stammering voice): Sa…san… Sanskar… 

Sanskar: Hmmm… He is out of his sense…

Swara: Wo… I… he kisses her chin, closes his eyes and leans her lips…

Swa: I… I… (Closes her eyes tightly) I Love You… her sudden confession break his trance… he realised what he was upto do…

When he hear I love you from her his heart flutter with happiness… his heart beat like till it has been waited to hear this… he want to say love you too swara but he feels he is not reliable to her… he thinks kaki and dadi between her love confession… If suppose she is not married him by circumstance… if suppose she is not too younger than him… if suppose he doesn’t know her from her childhood…. if suppose he never treated as lil girl… its easy to accept his love… but now all he can do is keep numb…

he immediately stands from there, swara held his hand… Sans: it’s late, sleep… good night… he caressed her hair and leaves…

swara looks at the way he left: sanskar I love you… swara realised she confess her feeling… she closes her mouth wiht her palm… swara u did it… u did it… he should say yes or no but he leaves without answering… she goes to his room…

 

@Sanskar room,
Sans: swara I ask u to sleep…

Swa: don’t u heard what I said… 
Sans: I’m feeling sleepy…

Swa: but I don’t… he sighs and make her sit… swara is lil bit nervous… he place his palms on her hand… 

Sans: Swara see it’s not love… It’s just ur attraction…

Swa: no sanskar u mistaken I… I really love you… 
Sans: Swara u r just 18… U hv to do lots of things… it’s not age of love… in this age everyone hv this problem… they just confuse themselves between love and attraction… since 8 yrs we both are together in every thin and thick lines… may be bz of this u assumed ur attraction towards me is love…

Swara: U mean I attracted to you… then what about you… what you did few minutes before is also attraction…huh..? She shouts…

Sans: Of course it’s not only attraction and also a mistake… I’m not any saint to be control in always… I’m just a human… I won’t repeat again… look swara u r still young… immature… u hv a better future, don’t spoil it just for ur attraction…

Swara let allow tears to flow from her eyes… Swa: if u say my love is attraction then ok I don’t have any prob bz I attracted to my husband only…  may be u feel I’m immature but I knw I’m mature enough to understand  the difference between love and attraction sanskar… I know which is better future for me you don’t need to say that…

She tip-toe, encircled his neck… swa: I Love you and I meant it… she kissed his chin…

Swa: what do you think… haan… she winks…  it’s enough to me I knw u too love me… you always say we do mistake only once… now why you allowed me… it’s too late… sleep… good night… she leaves from his room…
Sans: Swara I knew u hurt… I’m sorry… I’m not suitable one to you… u’ll understand that…
*

Arjun shouts swara…  swara stops… sanskar who is searching canteen building past 15 mins in the vast campus heard arjun voice and spots swarj together…. he doesn’t have any idea what they’re talking but there action are clear to him…

Arj: Do you love him…?

Swa: he said I’m in the age of attraction… 

arj: it’s not answer for my question…

Swa: but it was his reply to me… tears start to flow from her eyes…. arjun remembers how sanskar used to say about swara whenever they meet… my wife from his mouth with full of affection…
Arj: then ok I will get urs and my answer from him…

 

He hugs her looking at sanskar… he wraps his one arm around his waist and another one his patting her back… sanskar fumes, how dare he hugs her and he made my kiddo cry… what kind of friend he is..? He headed towards them…

arj: ur husband is coming here … wipe ur tears… but before that sanskar comes there…
He possessively held swara wrist and drags her towards him… to show all he only having rights towards his kiddo… he wipes her tears…

 

Sanskar: arjun atleast u hv to listen her once… actually it’s me who ask her to hide…
arj (cuts him): boss u are too late…you know boss whoever it is they are 3rd person in friendship even our life partner… I think u r not needed now… we are already patched up …
Swa:haan sanskar aju makes everything fine…
Sanskar frowns at the thought he is not needed for her… he fumes with the word 3rd person…’
Sans: then why you cried..?
Arj: that was her happy tears I’m right na ammu…  swa: yeah.. she smiles…
Sanskar with fake smile: oh.. ok.. Im also happy… arjun smirks…

Swara introduce all her frnds to sanskar… after spending few minutes with them sanskar left from there to his work…

To be continued…

76 comments

  1. NDSG

    |Registered Member

    he is not older than me it’s me who born too late… best lines…

    And sanky jealousy… 😍😍😍😍😍😘 it’s best part…

  2. Mumpi

    |Registered Member

    really long episode!!!.. bt sanskaar’s reaction after her confession is very natural.. i think arjun will help him to realize his love(though he s well aware of it) i mean to accept her love.:-)

  3. chanu

    Oh!!! Finally my lazy grl nive uplode nxt part.
    Thank you drl.. ws waited 4 dis epi soo eagerly.

    and is dis a long chappy??? I dnt feel so!! 😉 😉 😛
    U hv 2 write more & more 2 make me feel its a long chappy… 😉 😉 lols..

    Coming 2 dis epi. awww nice epi dr.. lv it as always.
    U write it so nicely dr..

    swara confessed!! 😮 😮 I nvr thnk it ll hpn dis suddenly. Sankys reaction is right at his point I think.. waiting 4 his confession.
    And I think arj wiill hlp swara 2 gt her lv..
    sankys jealousy!!! 🙂 he look cute when he gt jealous. 🙂
    And swasan lvly moment is… awwww.. sooo sweet..
    waiting 4 sm more lvly cute parts dr.

    dnt take long long gaps dr.. cdnt wait 4 ur nxt epi..
    keep writing
    be happy always
    ♥♥♥♥♥

    • Nive..

      |Author

      huh… chanu see one day ll really gonna to gv u a very very long chappy and gonna to make u bore with that … 😋😋 he he he… 😆😆

      swara confession I too didn’t expect dr… sanskar jealousy still on track… he rejected his kiddo… so punishment he he he…

      • chanu

        Lols nive dr!!!

        Yaaa im eagerly awaiting 4 dat… plz write long long loooooooonnnggg chappy!!! 😉 😉 🙂 😛
        Then we ll see ho will win!!
        Im 2000% sure abt me that im nt gonna be bore with ur story.
        😀
        soo bet????? 🙂 😉

        Its k.. I lv ddat punishment.

        Keep writing
        plz upload nnxt part asap… cdnt wait after ur teaser.
        🙁
        Bye
        lv ya
        ♥♥♥

      • chanu

        Ya I knw abt dat…
        bt I thought 2 gv it a try… 😉 😉 😉 😛

        dnt wry im enjoying ur evry epi.. if its long 1 or short 1..

        Bt plz uplode nxt part asap dr..
        cdnt wait..

        bye
        lv ya

  4. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Oh toh swara already cnfsd her love to her handsome 💃💃💃
    Aaawww arjun u r so bad dun make sanky jealous 😉😉
    W8ng for swasan love story to start ..😍
    Loved it 👍

  5. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Nivi chelakutii.. en ammu kutti jangeri umaahhh….
    semma chapie… wah wah differnt kind of friends. Who understood her… im happy she got lovly friends.. and sans how dare u cn tell its attraction.. swara pavam.. ipadhn love nu kandu piducha..
    yup friends are more thn close frm life partner..
    nive loved it….

    • Nive..

      |Author

      huh… navi u missed bhoondhi😕 he he he… yeah yeah they are different and lovely… oh don’t yell him dear… he is poor boy… think in his situation… he knws her frm her 10yrs… he seen her as lil girl… it’s difficult to him na…
      thank you..😊😊

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        Aww ama boondhi maradhuten…
        aprm sanski south indian ah irundhurundha its common dr.. bcz inga 10 yrs gap sadharanam…. bt he shud hav used d word attraction.. im sad for dat 🙁 :'(
        na teaser pathu merisalaayten 😀 😀

    • Nive..

      |Author

      ama navi inga 10yrs gap la onnum ila… enga vetla kuda elders ella huge age different tha… ana ipo namma generations 4yrs kuda perusa nenaipanga… seri next epi sanky kitta revenge yeduthurean ena solrea… 😉

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        Nive nee solradhum correct.. ipa age prblm younger generations pakuranga…
        thn definitely sans ah revenge edukanum…
        illa naney kalaichuruven…

  6. Anisha

    |Registered Member

    Is this long? 😕😕
    I didn’t feel so.. The line…
    He’s not older than me, it’s me who was born too late!
    I love it 👆 😍😍😍
    When will you post next part? Waiting eagerly!! 😘😘

  7. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Swara’s description about love regarding Sanskar age is justt something which i can’t express….
    Nive it’s beautiful dear … LIVE it …
    waaa Arjun !!! Cupid… I love this Arjun..
    Thnk u..

  8. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    Hey nive this is shreeyu here …. I don’t know whether I commented on initial episodes or not … May b I started reading when u took a leap. … But wanna say ur story is amazing Dr …. Continue soon …. 😘😘😘

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