Swasan…Love Beyond Ages… Chapter 1

Hi frnds… its Nive afterlong back with Sethooty challenged FF…  Before reading these please do read Intro/Prologue written by sethu…

Link: http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-fan-fiction-writing-challenge-sethooty-1

 

Sanky proposes Rags… Swara drags Rags and run from there… Sanskar runs behind them “I won’t leave you kiddo…” 

Swara: let see Mr.Handsome… Sans: haan… See… he holds swara and ask her “kidoo whats ur problem..? Why don’t u allow ragini to accept my proposal…”
Swara:  bcoz you’re not lawyer… you’re liar… Sans: ugh… what I did..? Swara: rewind ur mind 7yrs back…

*Swara 10yrs-cute chubby lil girl, sanky 20ys- handsome young man…
Swara get ready for fancy dress competition… swara (looks at sanky): sanskar how I’m looking… Sanky pulls swara cheeks: oh my sweet doll… my kiddo… teddy bear… you looking so beautiful…

swara smiles: really… sans: haan… if you’re big girl… right now I will marry you… but what to do you’re too little na… sanky made pout face…

swara: you too looking handsome… so don’t worry… after I’m becoming big girl… we both will marry… ok… sanskar laughs: haan… ok ok… he kisses her head… swara wipes it and smiles..*

Swara(in dramatic way): you said u will marry me after I’m bcm big but now instead of me, you are proposing my di… you are liar… she made a face… Sans: oh my kiddo See how pretty you’re but look at your sis poor girl…

Ragini looks at him angrily… sanky gave pleading looks to rags… sanky: who will marry her… swara: you don’t want to marry her… how dare you to call my didi as poor girl…  I’m rejecting your proposal… didi don’t marry him… hmm… she turns her face away… Rags: my shona decision is my decision…

Sanky make puppy face: kiddo… swara: dnt call me kiddo… I’m not ur kiddo anymore…  Rags laugh looking at sanskar condition…sanskar smirks at her and take one gift box… swara got excited to see gift box…  

San: I thought to give this to my kiddo… but now… he gives one sigh… swara thinks you’re stupid shona… sanky notices her reaction… sans: you know rags this box full of all kind of chocolates… swara mouth starts watering…

Swara goes near sanky and looks at rags: oh… di… you’re too bad… why don’t you accept my sweetie-cutie handsome jiju proposal… haan… (Looks at sans) don’t worry jiju you have my full support…

Rags mouth opened ‘o’ she widened her eyes… how swara changes her statement within fraction of second after hearing the word chocolate and also she calling him as jiju… swara takes gift box from sanky and leaves from there… Sanskar winks at rags…

Rags: don’t think will accept you… Sans: Ragini… Rags: after all I’m poor girl why you’re behind me… sans: who said..? Rags: I think you have short term memory loss… sans: oh… ragini you’re my angel… you’re… Rags cut him: I don’t need any cheesy filmy dialogue…  sans: haan me too don’t want to say any cheesy filmy dialogue…

 

Rags look on… he knelt down: ragini all I knows r I like you… will you marry me…  Rags: huh..? She hits her head… Rags: you’re the one who says I like you to ur girl friend instead of I love you… sanky bites his tongue and hold his ear…

Rags smiles and forward her hand: I will… Sanky slipped a ring on her finger… he stands and cupped her face… he was about to kiss…before that swara starts to shout: Sanskarrrrrrrr…!!! Rags: shona… she runs to her… Sans: ugh… this girl…

Rags: shona what happened..? R u alright… swara: di I told na he is not lawyer… he is liar… Rags: sankar what you did… sanskar notices gift wrapper in her hand and understands what might be happened…

Sans: ohho… I forgot to say one thing…that gift box fully all kind of chocolateeeeee wrappers not chocolates… he smiles mischievously looking at swara… swara stamps her foot… he laughs by holding his stomach… swara: youuu…!!! I won’t leave you… Sans: kiddo… first catch me if you can… swara runs behind him… Rags nod her head they both won’t change…

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Done with first chappy… sethu you only responsible for this FF… he he he… just kidding… Guys lemme know,shall I continue this..? Bz I’m very Irregular… and yeah this one is swasan FF…

Credit to: Nive...

34 comments

  1. Sethooty

    Omg nive….haha…am very very very happy…superb superb superb.. I know it will be a master piece…
    Nive you portrayed what I had in my mind if its a swasan story…well done Dr..I think our thinking, wave length is same.Everytime in my fiction ‘bz I loved her’ u easily understand what I exactly want to say. Everytime ur prediction was correct ..
    So cute swasan yaar.the way swara said u r a lier .. not lawyer .Fb convo..when she was 10,and he was 20 ..loved it ..so cute yaar
    I just want know what happen next…plz plz.. Post next epi yaar….

    • Nive...

      ha ha ha… sethu… thanks dr..!!! i just thought this storyline after reading ur intro… and swasan Flashback was happened between my sis and brother in law… I adapted her love story… he he he… 😀 😀 hmm… nxt epi maybe not upto ur expectation…!!!

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