Hello everyone my name is TARA… i write ffs on few other shows…swaragini was one of my favourite show…and SWASAN is still one mf my fav couple..so I thought to write this OS…it may be a bit too long…so here u go..
Swara Bose, a young, charming and beautiful girl of 21 yrs is born to a rich family. She aspires to become an I.P.S officer. Not that she was to brave or something…but three years back her father who was also a renowned officer died in a terror attack. Since then Swara aims at becoming I.P.S officer as she wants her father to be proud of her. She is admitted to the academy and her training period starts.
In the academy Swara meets Ragini(age 22), who also aspires to become an I.P.S officer. Both of them become friends. They are also roommates. They share everything with each other and become kinda besties. Ragini has a crush on Laksh(age25) , who is a senior officer in the academy. Ragini tells this to Swara. Swara was very talented in these cases. She instantly went to Laksh nd asked if he liked Ragini (actually Laksh used to secretly look at Ragini,during the training and our Swara had noticed this. When she came to know about Ragini feelings she couldn’t resist herself but told Laksh)
L: actually…kya bolu….
SW: see, no one is forcing u..bt don’t lie at least…
L: okk..yes i like her.
So amidst the tough, and tiring training, raglak’s love start. Initially they were dating, but soon they started loving each other.
One day, before the training an announcement was made for the approach of a new officer to train the students. And there he entered with a bang!! One could understand trough his expression that he was a man of experience. He had a strict look. He was none other than Sanskar Maheshwari . at the moment he entered Laksh whispered… “ u ppl are gone..!!”
SW: y??
L: he is damn strict….during our training we had him..nd he made our life hell…
M: ur traing?? Is he so experienced??
L: pta nhi yaar..
SW: jo hi ho..banda hot hain.. (smiles)
Sanskar notices her.
S: u…girl…
SW: me??
S: yes u..can u plzz tell us whats so funny??
Swara gets ashamed..
S: listen..its not a joking class… nd anybody who feels they are here to laugh nd joke can leave the academy… dismiss!!
Swara to herself “ khadoos!!” Sanskar hears this… “wait..we need to talk”
Ragini and Laksh made a weird face.
After a few minutes, Swara comes rushing to the room. Ragini asks her what happened. She told that Sanskar gave her last warning..!! she was very angry so raglak decided to lighten up her mood.
Many days passed since Sanskar undertook the training session. And as Laksh said their life was made hell. Sanskar (age 29) was a quiet guy , who loved to concentrate on his work. He hated if anyone broke rules. He worked hard and expected others to do so. Swara hated him for being so rude, but she loved his determination. One day Swara was late for the training. Sanskar was furious. And as we know punishments for breaking rules are harsh, so it happened in Swara’s case. She was told to take 20 rounds of the field bare footed. Raglak were helpless. There was no one except Sanskar on the ground. Swara ran with a lot of difficulty as she had fever. It was also the reason that she was late. After taking few rounds Swara collapsed!! Sanskar went to her thinking that she is acting. But when he touched her body he could feel the heat. He lifted her up and took her to the sick room. When Swara regained consciousness she found Sanskar sitting beside her.
S: u okay now?? Are u mad?? If u had fever u should have told…..
SW: i was scared..
S: what?? M not a ghost that u would be scared…do i look so scary??
SW: (without thinking) no u look hot!!!!!
Sanskar was shocked…. “what??”
SW: ah..I mean u look temped always….so i didn’t say anything.
Sanskar leaves the room smiling.
Swara to herself “ tu na ek no. ki idiot hain..ab pta nehi kya hoga”
Few days later when Swara recovered, she came back to training.
She went to Sanskar… “ah.. can i speak to u… actually m”
S: i haven’t said yes….
SW: sorry??
S: u asked me if we can talk …
SW: ooo…can we plzzzzz
S: say..
SW: actually m sorry….for what i said that day..didnt mean to tell u that….
S: so u mean m not hot??
Swara was shocked!!
S: what happened?? M I not hot??
Swara gulped….she didn’t knew what to say. She found it better to leave.
Again few days passed. Swara and Sanskar now had become friends. Sanskar began to spend more time with Swara, teaching her the tactics of fighting etc. Swara had started to love this caring side of Sanskar. She had started to love Sanskar indeed. But she didn’t know if Sanskar felt the same. So one day she decided to confess her love for him.
It was night time and no one else was there in the hall. Swara took a deep breath a started.. “u know what i hated u for being so rude, i would have killed u for the way u behaved with me…but slowly i came to know u well, and saw ur real face….the sensitive Sanskar Maheshwari ….nd before i realised..I Had fallen for u…” she stopped. Sanskar looked at her. She then said “ yes Mr. Khadoos Maheshwari…..I LOVE U!!” There was pin drop silence for the next few minutes. The Sanskar came towards her…” i have never seen a crazy girl such as u….u r unpredictable..and its more unpredictable to fall for such a girl….I LOVE U TOO….!!” Swara was more than happy…she ran to him and hug him tight…
Everything seemed perfect now. They seemed to be just perfect. Swara continued with her mazaks…and she expected Sanskar to accompany her, which was next to impossible. One day Sanskar scolded Swara in front of everyone. Swara got very angry. Later Sanskar came to tell her sorry but she wont listen. She was sad as well. Sanskar tried to make her understand that rules are the same for everyone and if Swara makes a mistake he cant leave her just becoz u r my…. (Sanskar stopped)…..Swara interrupted “ just becoz….m ur??” she smiled teasingly . Sanskar said “ becoz u r m y girl friend things can’t be changed”
SW: aww…kitna achha lag raha hain..mr. sadu ke mu se yeh sunna..”
S: m not joking Swara… (before he could finish Swara leaned forward and kissed him) he could feel the soft lips upon his. They kissed passionately for next few seconds….
Only one month was left for the training period to end. Swara was sad to depart from Sanskar. But Sanskar ensured her her it doesn’t matters if they are far away as their heart and souls will be connected always by the chain of love.
It was the last week in the academy. All the students would become a rank holding officers after the departure. During the last month swasan had spent a quality time with each other. They decide to spent the last week together as well. It was on Thursday (two days before departure) when Swara was waiting in the courtyard for Sanskar. They had decided to meet there. But y was he late today?? Already 30 mins have passed. And he is supposed to be a punctual guy…Swara was tensed. She called him bt he didn’t receive the call. She was furious. She straight away went to his room..without thinking what if anyone sees her. She knocked at the door. a voice said “come in”. She opened the door to find Sanskar is with his laptop. Swara was really very angry…
SW: what are u doing here??
Sanskar was surprised to see her there..
S: u here?? What if anybody saw u….now go ..
SW: no one saw me..and i won’t go….first u answer me…y didn’t u come..i was waiting…
S: see Swara two days left… u will become an IPS as u had wished..so I would suggest concentrate on that and forget what all happened….
SW: WHAT??? What did u just say…. are u drunk?? How can u even think that….and what happened suddenly…everything was fine till yesterday….
Sanskar kept quiet.
Swara went to him and held his shoulders. “what happened plzz tell me the truth”
S: u wanna hear the truth..fine, it thought and realised we r not compatible …u are still a kid..not mature enough…”
Swara stopped him and said “ what m a kid?? I M 21…”
S: yeah nd m 29…u see , much experienced..nd mature..
SW: but what does love got a do with maturity?? I love u nd u love me right??
S: i don’t think so…i meant it might be ur infatuation nd my mistake..
SW: mistake?? (she was in tears)
S: plzz understand..we can never be happy…
SW: i can never be happy without u …
She left…. Sanskar was also in tears…
S: m sorry Swara i know i have hurt u..bt i had no choice….
Flash back :
Swara and Sanskar hug each other and said “good night” Sanskar was returning to his room when he saw few students talking…
St1: u saw them…
St2: shit man..they were so close..
St1: i don’t like that Swara..she is always in air…and if she becomes IPS m sure she s gonna boast more…
St2: what if we complain about their affair….m sure both will be fired…at least Swara
St1: bt no will will believe us..
St2: don’t worry..we will make a video when they meet again….
Both of them smirk..Sanskar is tensed.
Fb ends.
Sanskar to himself… “ Swara i cant let u go down before the starting of ur career…so i had no choice..and its better”
The last day:
Everyone receives their batches and certificates…they take oath to transform the conditions of the country and to be lawful and honest. After the ceremony everyone gets into their room to pack their bags. The time has almost come. Swara was sad. She was in tears looking at Sanskar who seemed not even to bother. She hugged Ragini and Laksh. They said bye to each other and left. After everyone had left Sanskar stood there alone. The sky was orange, with a pinch of azure….it was the most beautiful evening sky. Birds were returning to their nests. Standing there Sanskar said “ Mr. Maheshwari…time to ‘return’…”
After 5 years:
Sanskar arrives at the given venue. He checks the address. Then he finds the house decorated and in front of the gate was a banner “ RAGINI WEDS LAKSH” Sanskar stepped inside. He was nervous. (the reason is known to u all..Swara would also be there”
Sanskar had tried to give a lot of excuse to Raglak bt they wont listen. They forced him to come there. Sanskar didn’t knew how to react if Swara comes in front.
After getting inside he found Laksh…he congratulated him. All the preparations were going on. Sanskar was looking around when he saw Ragini…she greeted him. Laksh again came their and said that Sanskar’s room is ready. Sanskar went there and changed his clothes. He came down for some rituals. He was looking here and there. Suddenly he saw Ragini coming (for haldi) and beside her was…Swara. she had turns more beautiful…Sanskar was stunned. He was constantly staring at her. It appeared that she noticed him but ignored. After the haldi, photo session was going on. Laksh demanded a friend’s picture. He called Swara and Sanskar. Sanskar was hesitating.
Swara said in a teasing tone “ Laksh..tell ur friend ek photo khichwane se maturity kam nehi ho jayegi” everyone laughed. Sanskar was like “ she would never change”
After the photo session everyone was having their lunch. Sanskar saw Swara and decided to speak normally to her. He went up to her nd said “hi”
SW: oh..mr. Maheshwari…hello…
S: kaisi ho??
SW: mein toh theek hu…
S: good..
SW: toh biwi kyun nehi ayi..
S: what??
SW: shaadi toh hogyi hogi aapki..
S: not yet…
SW: oh..how can i forget u need a mature girl na..to be compatible…omg..how can i talk with u..may be m not even mature enough to talk with u…such an experience man… (in a sarcastic tone)
S: stop it Swara…y are u dragging old issues??
SW: the issues may be old mr. Sanskar Maheshwari..but the injuries my heart got are still not recovered….
S: Swara….
SW: no..i won’t listen anymore to u…have u ever thot how i lived for these five years..or should i say..i somehow survived….nd u must be enjoying…
Sanskar couldn’t take anymore…
S: just shut up…(at the top of his voice)
Everyone looked at them.
Sanskar saw that. He caught her hand and brought her to his room…
S: tum janna chahti ho ki meine is panch saalo mein kya kiya hain?? Toh suno…i have just regretted the last five years of my life…to have been parted from u…there wasn’t a single day when i didn’t miss u…i had always loved u Swara..always…
Swara was again in tears….” then y did u do this??”
Sanskar told her the whole incident….
SW: at least u should have told me..then i wouldn’t have the feeling that we cant be together….
S: at that time whatever came to my mind i did…at least ur career was secure..
SW: stupid…
S: i know m stupid..bt do u knw this stupid still loves u a lot…
SW: (happily) aww my stupid …i love u too…
She rushes to him and hugged him tight…they break the hug..and end up kissing each other passionately…..
That is love..love beyond age limits…love beyond prejudices ..love beyond everything else. Love can happen anywhere at anytime and to anyone of any age…no matter what happens..in the end love wins. So keep falling in love as its a great feeling….
*****The end*****
I hope u all liked…please let me know..as it is my first attempt for this show..i don’t know all of ur tastes..so please comment…and if u all like it then i will write more of these sorts…please please..comment…best regards ..

Credit to: tara

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  1. Awesome…

    1. thnks a lot

  2. It was amazing..

    1. thnk u so much..

  3. Awesome. Nice os tara

    1. thanks … 🙂

  4. reallyy superb………
    amazing cncept………….

    1. thnks..m glad u liked it

  5. awesome…..

  6. wow what an os

    1. thnk u so much

  7. Superb

    1. thanks a lot

  8. Amazing ??

    1. thnks .. 🙂

  9. Awesome

    1. thnks 🙂

  10. awesome………………

    1. thank u..

  11. i really loved d concept…. a diffrnt one bt i ws really smilin while reading it … it ws awsum keep writing bae

    1. thank u so much …now m blushing… 🙂

  12. It is a copy of os of twinkle and kunj but nice

    1. its not the copy dear..i m only the writer of the ff.. i write for tei as well
      btw thnks

  13. Loved it nice concept

    1. thanks a lot

  14. Awww lovely tara
    it was so cute

    1. thnkew dear…. 🙂

  15. Nice dear

  16. Hey it was really amazing…!!! 🙂

    1. thanks a lot

  17. It’s too good simply amazing and the profession I like it so much

    1. thnks..yeah the profession is simply amazing..

  18. Amazing it was such a good OS and the message was awesome!!!

    1. thank u so much..

  19. Awesome OS.. 🙂 Loved it girl.. 😀 Stay blessed dear.. 🙂 Keep writing such beautiful stuff.. 🙂

    1. thank u so much…

  20. I have read it before… It was twinj I guess…

    1. yes it was…. i write mainly twinj ffs..
      thnks for reading

  21. Awesome yaar!!?? Great message through it nd I also believe that love has no ages?

    1. thanks a lot..dear

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