SWASAN – KRISHNA AUR UNKI RADHA!!!!!!(one shot)

The scene starts with a girl playing basketball in a basketball court , a few other girls are accompanying her , but she is playing very well , her face is not shown , only her eyes are shown.
She is wearing shorts with a loose t-shirt , she throws the ball towards the goal but it doesn’t hit the goal and while it is falling back , someone catches it.
His face is covered by the ball while a few boys are accompanying him.
The girl stopped and a girl from back in her ears : yaar , he catched it so well….
The girl eyes the boy’s face covered with ball and says : oh , it was just a coincidence ,no one can play better then swara……………swara khanna……………….
She smiles proudly while the boy removes the ball from the front of his face and his face is revealed to be sanskar.

A couch comes from back and sees sanskar and then says to swara smiling : swara , he is the captain of the next intercollage competition of collage so you’ll explain him all the rules….
Swara eyes him shocked and says : but sir , i am the captain of girls team and also of the mixed girls and boys team from past 1 year , why this change now……………….
The couch : swara , he is a great player and everyone should get chance so…………….
Swara eyes him angrily while the couch goes.
Swara comes to him and says angrily : oh , so new captain but no one can be better then swara……………….
Sanskar smiles and says : oh , so thats why your short got missed…
Swara eyes him and then : it was just once , you’ll soon see……..
She goes from there with her friends saying this while sanskar stands there smiling.
Next day:

Swara is sitting in canteen with her friends while sanskar enters
the collage.
She hears a girl saying ; see , so handsome na, you know he was called Krishna in his last collage……………..
A girl smiles and says : oh Krishna…………….then you all become his gopian , his radha will only be me……….
Sanskar comes to her and says : of course…………….
He smiles shaking hands with her while swara smiles and says from her table : yaa ,, you steel makhan only and i’ll make my collage win the match…
Sanskar comes to her and greets her friends and says to her : we’ll see………….
Swara eyes him angrily as he goes.
After a few days :
Sanskar is becoming the charm of collage while swara is getting angry by every step of his.
In basketball court:
Sanskar is practising there with his friends when suddenly swara comes there with her friends and starts playing with him.
They both are giving each other equal competition when suddenly swara falls , she is badly hurt on her knees.

She is not about to stand up while people are surrounding her , everyone else is playing when sanskar leaves the ball and picks her up , she eyes him angrily while sanskar makes her hold his neck comfortably.
After they both left , everyone stops playing while sanskar makes her sit on a nearby bench and is about to do first aid.
Swara stops him ; no..no..no…it will hurt….
Sanskar smiles at her childishness and says : so , a tough basketball player like you is also afraid of these small injuries…………….
Swara angrily : oh hello , i am not afraid of anyone……………….i am very strong…………….these small injuries can do nothing of swara and you…you would tell me huh…………………….i am swara …………………….ok leave just do first aid…………………you’ll see i’ll not even scream a little……………..
She eyes him eyeing her innocently and says : now do na………………..
Sanskar smiles , holds her shoulder and says : you are really strong, you didn’t even scream a little , you are really brave……………
He points towards her injury , he had done first aid.
Swara eying it shocked : when did you do it???

Sanskar smiles and says : when you were speaking continuously……………..
He laughs while swara too laughs.
Sanskar : so friends…………..
Swara nods smiling.
After about a month :
Now swasan are best friends , everyone in the collage knows this , but no one ever thinks that they can be in a relationship because they think that sanskar would never be interested in a tomboy like swara and swara and boys is just an impossible thing but they don’t know that both swara and sanskar now have feelings for each other.
They are afraid to say it to each other being afraid of the fact that the other may not like it and break their friendship.
One day:
Swara is walking in the collage when she comes across the canteen , there she finds sanskar talking to the “most beautiful girl of the collage “(tagged by people) , the girl, monica is trying to woo him and trying to get closer to him, though sanskar feels uncomfortable but refrains from saying anything as that would really look bad.
Swara sees this and his heartbroken.
She moves from there to go when sanskar comes to her and stops her and says : swara , tomorrow is my birthday………………i wanna introduce someone special in it……………….you will come na…………..
Swara agrees instantly as she just wanted to go to her home now and cry.
Sanskar smiles and leaves .

He has invited the whole collage , swara while going out in parking hears someone say: yaar , who will he introduce ??
Another girl : maybe swara…
First girl : oh please , swara , that basketball player , she can never be his choice , he would like some hot chick na…………………….i guess monica….
Swara remembers the scene she just witnessed and goes to her car and drives home angrily.
She cries the whole day and at night calls sanskar and says : sanskar , i won’t come tomorrow , i am having some important work………………sorry ……………happy birthday in advance…
Sanskar angrily : oh hello, if you don’t come na, then i’ll come to your home and take you by picking you up so do come or else………………
Swara angrily thinks : idiot ..
She then says : ok , i am coming …………………..
She cuts the call saying this.
Next day at party :
Swara has worn a beautiful blue gown while sanskar is in simple black formal suit.
Every boy is staring swara as she never before wore girlish clothes and today she was looking like a fairy.
Sanskar was always stared by girls so it was not new.
Sanskar suddenly goes to stage and takes the mike , he says smiling : guys , so its my birthday but one more special thing today as i promised you all that i’ll introduce someone special today………………..as in maybe my radha…………………

He laughs and says : when she smiles na , i feel like she is the most innocent girl in the world(he remembers how he first saw her smiling proudly ) when she laughs , it feels like no one else is around and only she’s there(he remembers how she laughed that day while he applied medicine) she is very innocent , 1 in a million for me…………
A girl from back says to monica : you monica……………
Swara listens this and goes from there angrily crying , she goes in a room on 1st floor and in the rooms washroom , she starts crying there locking it from inside.
She suddenly feels a knock at the window, it is a translucent window.
She wipes her tears and opens the window , she is shocked to see sanskar who is climbing on a ladder.
Swara afraid : sanskar , you’ll fall……………come fast…………..
Sanskar jumps inside smiling and says : why did you came to washrrom and crying here??
Swara angrily : you go…………..introduce your someone special na……………….why wasting time here??

Sanskar smiling : how will i do it without you??
Swara angrily thinks : so he wants me to see that how beautiful that monica is…
Swara angrily says : sanskar you go na , introduce her……………………its your birthday………………….go…………..
Sanskar smiles and cups her face and says : the time i spend with you is the best time in my life , don’t dare call it waste my someone special………………….
Swara is shocked and then says : were you talking about me???
Sanskar makes her face the mirror and says : see , this innocent face , 1 in million…………….
Swara smiles and he says : see , my innocence queen………………………..
Swara laughs and he says : who even sometimes becomes bomb………………
Swara beats him playfully , she is a little shy while sanskar smiles.
Swara suddenly remembers something and says : but Krishna ji had so many wifes??
Sanskar beats his head at her innocent question and says : but i only have one radha who is my life’s every queen…………………….
Swara smiles and hugs him while sanskar suddenly says scared : you didn’t see this room na??
Swara eyes him questionably and then quickly runs outside the washroom and sees the room , there were curtain all around , even on the walls.
Sanskar : swara , no need to see na………….
Swara angrily : why , are there any heroine’s paintings , i’’ll surely see.
Sanskar tries to stop her but she opens the curtains.
She is shocked to see her face painted on the walls , her playing basketball , swasan first meet scene , sanskar caressing her wound , their friendship scene………………

Swara smiles and says : you painted these walls with my face but why….
Sanskar smiles and says : if i have painted my heart with your thoughts then these walls are not big things……………….after seeing you, i couldn’t get a better topic for my paintings.
Swara stares him smiling and again hugs him.
Sanskar : oh hello, where my gift…??
Swara shows him a wrapped gift and he opens it and finds a ball which had a photograph of a boy and a lady.
Sanskar is shocked to see it and says : where did you got it?? ma gifted me …………………….it had mine and her photograph………………..you know i lost it in childhood….(sanskar’s mother is no more)
Swra smiles and says : i saw it in dustbin while playing in childhood , it had this photo so i thought it must be someone’s special thing so i kept it and when i saw your mother’s photo na then i got it that its your so gave it……………
Sanskar hugs swara and says thanks a lot swara.
After five years:
Swasan are now married and sanskar is now a national level basketball player while swara is a writer which was her dream and teaches the underprivileged children to play basketball.
They are back in their collage as chief guests for a function.
Swasan are told to share their views.

Swara : you know , i was a mad person always with that spark that i have to come first in everything…
Sanskar says : and i was a person who just knew nothing beyond basketball………………
Swara : we both achieved our dreams …………………………….but the thing that matters the most to us is that how we achieved it………………..
Sanskar : people say that behind every successful man there’s a woman and i agree with it ……………….
Swara : but i say a new saying and that is that behind every successful woman there ‘s a successful man…………………..
Swasan smile seeing each other.
Sanskar : our love for each other gave us the way to our dreams , after our marriage we separated ourselves from our families to prove ourselves , when i used to come late from practises swara used to be awake , no matter what the time was but she used to never let me sleep without eating anything………………

Swara : and when i used to go early morning 4 a.m. to teach children , he used to never let me go without having breakfast and was to have it with me……………….no matter he ate his dinner just an hour ago……………………
Swasan smile and together say : so achieve your dreams but the best thing would be to achieve it with someone by your side …………………………….
They suddenly see a girl and boy between the crowd.
The girl : oh hello , no one can be better than me in studies…………
The boy : oh , so how were you not able to solve the question which i just gave……………??
The girl : that was just once , you’ll see soon….
Swasan smile as they remember their first fight and swara asks the principal : who are those??
Principal : oh god , these both , the boy is new admission laksh and the giri is collage’s topper ragini , they always fight only…..sorry …
Swara smiles while sanskar : one more love story begins………………
The end.

So guys , i hope you liked it .

Credit to: Piyali

41 comments

  1. Eva

    Last part was awesome and cute..another love story as in Rags and Laksh’s love story…….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot eva and yaa another love story means ragini and laksh’s love story…………………………thanks a lot for the appriciation…………………………..be happy dear……………………….

  2. Bisha

    WOW!! Its so beautiful!! It brought smile to my lips! Loved it. Keep writing stories like this!!

    • Piyali

      hey bisha , thanks a lot for such a beutiful comment , its really a pleasure to me that i was able to make you smile…………………………….thanks a lot dear and i am surely gonna continue writing…………………be happy………………..

    • Piyali

      oh harshitha , thanks a lot dear………………………….thanks a lot ………………….be happy dear…………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot arohi………………………really thanks and be happy dear………………..

    • Piyali

      hey tweety, don’t call me dii dear , you never know , maybe i am smaller than you , to be honest i am just 13 so please decide accordingly…………………..thanks a lot for your comment and my other ffs , you may not like them , they are not swasan , but let me just name them:
      swaragini(dli ki dor) -swarlak-ragsan
      swaa aur ragini-ek hi sikke ke do pehlu-ragsan as well as swasan , laksh as a vilian..
      fanaah tere ishq mein- not a swaragini ff
      junnon-not a swaragini ff
      pyaar thoda hetke-yeh hai mohobbatein ff
      by the way i wrote a three shot on swasan-raglak named swaragini hidden chapters…
      one os on swasan named- swara aur sanskar ki prem kahani..
      so thats all…………………
      you were asking about eva’s fff na , yes she has started and its name is rishton ki dastan if i am not wrong………………be happpy dear…………..

    • Piyali

      oh nandana , i just got it now that krishna ji and radha ji never met so it may look like a tragic love story………………this was the name that came to my mind first so i just wrote it…………….i am sorry for the confusion…………………….but you liked it…………..its a pleasure to me…………..thanks a lot dear…………….be happy……………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot mitti……………it just came to my mind and i wrote it but you liked it and thats my pleasure……………….really thanks a lot dear………………be happy…………..

    • Piyali

      first of all , i must say nita your dp is so beautiful , madirakshi is looking really cute…………….thanks for the compliment……………….be happy dear……………….

  3. Anu

    I’m still smiling specially the end was too cute 🙂

    Keep writing and making us smile Piyali !! Love you ?

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot anu and thanks for such a compliment , its an honour for me dear………………………i’ll surely write and if that is to make you smile , then i’ll write to my best level, promise dear……………….thanks again…………….be happy dear………..

    • Piyali

      hey nagma , thanks alot for such a beautiful comment……………….but i wanna say not only piyali but her readers like you who motivate her also rock…………………………thanks a lot again dear…………………………be happy………………

  4. Zuha (Asya fan)

    Beautiful love story it made me felt good and the last part was Jhakaasss……… ☺

    • Piyali

      oh , thanks a lot zuha………………………i am really happy that i was able to make you feel good…………..thanks again………………….be happy dear……………….

    • Piyali

      hey dharsha , thanks a lot dear ,by the way dear i guess you should read meher’s os , i guess you’ll forget that you ever read this os, she is a brilliant writer , you just check out her os , you would surely love them………………….thanks a lot for this compliment dear………………..be happy……………

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot prateeksha………………..i am happy that you liked it……………be happy dear………….

    • Piyali

      thanks a lot patakha princess,by the way are you writing an ff , i guess you are so please tell me its name……………………..thanks again dear……………..be happy………..

    • Piyali

      tthanks a lot dheemahee, i am happy that you liked my thoughts……………….thanks again dear…………….be happy…………

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