Swasan – The kidnapper 8 ” You have a great voice “


Hi everyone. Please everyone tell me whether is it getting less interesting or boring because comments are getting lower by each episode. I am really sad about it. It’s not that I am not happy with all those who comment.

Please , it’s humble request, check the last chapter , I have replied to all your comments. Link


There is, I have heard, a little thing called sunrise, in which the sun reverses the process we all viewed the night before. You might assume such a thing as mythical as those beasts that guard the corners of the earth, but I have it on the finest authority, and have, indeed, from time to time, regarded it with my own eyes.

Sunrise looks spectacular in the nature; sunrise looks spectacular in the photos; sunrise looks spectacular in our dreams; sunrise looks spectacular in the paintings, because it really is spectacular!

I sat on my bed more awake than ever my life hoping that that the new day could bring light to the events in this ship. Watching sunrise from the sea is a very different process than from land.

The kidnapper entered with breakfast. His face was hard and serious. He kept the food on the desk and turned back to leave the room.

“ Hey “ , I called him. I really have no idea why did I do that but it came out of my mouth automatically.

He heard it and paused for one second and then again walked towards the door . He stopped in front of the door and turned around.

“ You have a great voice “ , he said in the soft voice. His face expression less but hidden factor in his eyes was getting clearer day by day. He locked the door and I heard his foot steps die away.

I kept on looking towards the place he stood just a moment before. I was feeling really happy hearing his words of appreciation. Since childhood I am hearing that appreciation from everyone I gets acquainted with. I was used to it. But hearing that words from him looked really special. HE LIKES MY VOICE.

Who is he ? First he kidnapped me. Then I felt something hidden in his eyes and later I found it was care but after that I am feeling that it’s something more than care but I can’t find what is it. Then I saw him watching me when I was sleeping and now he is telling that I have nice voice and above all this I am getting attracted towards him. I made my heart hard as iron towards him but I didn’t know that his heart is a magnet and it will attract me towards him.

“ No no Swara what are you thinking. You are not so stupid. You should not thinking like this. You should use this time by making some revenge plans on him for kidnapping you. Not by thinking stuffs like this. “ Tells one part of my mind.

While the other part continued in the thoughts which really liked to think. But my only uneasiness was their fight. I was jammed between them without getting chance to say something.

Guys please tell how’s pic of my ff. I edited it ☺?

Credit to: Mona (ash)

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  1. It’s nice n Intresting but it’s short n ur edited pic is b good

  2. Swara falling for sanskar. …yayy… plz upload nxt ASAP

  3. Hey,
    the edit is indeed as good as your story. I have read all the parts but mostly prefer not to comment as i may not be that good with words.

  4. Amazing……..that’s cute…and update the next part soon

  5. Nice dear bt too short

  6. amazing chapter and edit

  7. Nice..

  8. who said its not interesting be positive and confident always. we are few maybe but we all enjoy ur ff vry much dont discourage yourself keep writing coz u do it wonderfully ok. And its awesome both pics and ur update. ok .

  9. U tor awesome yaar…..same goes wit ur ff and ur edited pic is just fab…..i’ve read all ur parts….and i really luved it……i did not comment most of the tym bcoz i use a phone to read and comment and it gets tooo late for the comment to get uploaded…..and seriously i’m not a gal wit that much patience…..,so sry dear for not commenting regularly…….but belive me all ur epi’s were out of the world????????

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