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Sujata – Thanks di. Actually I thought to write a little more yesterday because yesterday I got much free time. So I updates 2 chapters yesterday but I wanted to stop in that part because that only can give that suspense and shock and I am happy that you like it.
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Rosey – Sorry Rosey di, I didn’t update it yesterday. But two chapters are maximum that I could update in a day. But I really happy that you are reading it. I think I am seeing your name in the comment box from the first chapter onwards. Where are you from di? And what are you studying ?
Needhi Singh – Thanks di, keep reading it.
Hope – Actually, I only said happy vishu but this year we didn’t celebrate it because of a death in family. But I hope that you had a good one dr. And I am really happy of what you said. You consider as a little sister . it’s really means a lot to me being a single child. And you said I am improving, yeah it’s only because your all support. Thank you so much dr. So you are from tsr , I am from pkd. Where exactly it tsr? And tomorrow is pooram na ? Enjoy it dr . What are you studying?
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Mishi – I can understand di and thanks for liking it. I know I am not such a good writer. Sorry that you felt it is dragging. But I don’t feel bad di. Don’t worry. As a writer I really didn’t know it. It had started to drag because I never looked at it in a reader’s point if view. And I am really thankful to you for pointing that out because I am never know about if you didn’t tell. I will try maximum not to drag and one more thing please di don’t expect a great story because I am not a person with great imagination.
Anu Ann – Thanks Any di for reading it regularly and commenting every time. It really encourages me a lot.
So here it is the 7th chapter
I was shell shocked seeing laksh in front of me. But that face was really different. It was scary with scars and wrinkles all over it and patches of blood over the whole face. It looked like devil. He stared at me and keen towards with the name in his hand.
I screamed in the top of my voice closing my eyes. Looking at his face was really unbearable. A few seconds later I could find comforting hands around me. I hugged him and cried. I cried like I has seen a grim. His hard hands were trying to comfort me but I was still crying loudly.
It was a lot time until I came into my senses. I leave kidnapper but I was still in that shock. Kidnapper’s face looked worried and I slowly muttered Laksh.
Kidnapper heard it even though I said it in low voice. I saw expressions changing over his face. At last he stopped in anger but this was not his usual one but it was hard as it was when I tried to jump off the ship.
Then he laughed as a mad person but it was evil,really evil.
“ You are really underestimating me. Do you think a silly girl like you could fool me? Are you trying to scare me by taking your fiancee’s name. I could kill him one click of my hand. And do you reckon that he is in here in this ship? And do you think that we will keep him alive then!!! You are really a fool to think that. “ , He said turning towards me with full harshness in his voice.
I gets scared with this sudden change. For a lot of days he was behaving much calmly with me . This sudden change terrified me. Already I was half out of mind by seeing Laksh and now he is seen nowhere. I don’t of I imagined him or not but I could say that it was not the Laksh I knew. His face was the most terrifying one I have ever seen. But whole thing have affected me so much that I lose my consciousness. I fainted all fall I the floor.
When I opened my eyes I was feeling much relaxed. Kidnapper was there itself but his anger was not extinguished.
“ I don’t know I imagined him or not but he was standing here in the same where you are now. You will not have blamed me if you had thought about why I had screamed. He was not in a way he usually was. He was changed and he had a knife. I screamed being afraid, I needed help. “ , I said.
“ I came here hearing your scream and as far as I know there was no one in here. And if he is here , then why? If for saving you, then what is he waiting. If course he can’tsave you but he haven’t made any attempt. He is not in here. “ , he said but his voice was as hard as last time.
I was in verge of tears. I was having no idea on what was going on. Is Laksh in here, then what had happened to him? And what about the kidnapper ? Why he is behaving like this?
OH GOD PLEASE GIVE ME ANSWERS
Is there something going fishy in this ‘great white’
WHAT’S HAPPENING ???
I’m sorry I couldn’t write the chapter properly. My mother came telling me that guests are coming when I was half way through it. I don’t why my house is always filled with guests. So I am really that I wrote it really fastly.
Credit to: Mona (ash)