Swasan ki love story (Part 4)

Hi guys I know I am late what yo do
My justification :
Reason 1 : Telly updates rejected my fan fiction 3 time saying that is not proper
Reason 2 : got busy with holidays as I have winter vacation from 18th dec
Reason 3 : really bothered bcz of TU they were not posting it
Reason 4 : my ff was deleted 1 time so had to write again

Here is mini part
Short summary
Drama , entry of Kunj , twinkle and meera
Here goes the episode
Swara enters the house and is shocked to see the scenery and was about to faint anytime
Swara fainted ( don’t think our hero will rescue her everytime ) Kunj got panicked
Kunj : Shona wake up dear and he sprinkled water
Swara (holding her head) what is all this my head is spinning . Who did all this , my whole house is scattered with thing everywhere.

Saying this she walked in the house and was about to slip bcz of a toy at the nick time she holdedthe sofa ( my room is always like this )
Meera (extra cutely ) Didi dad and mom did this
Twinkle : Shona she. Is lieing , ye Sab bap aur beti ka kartuth ka Natija hain
( this all dad and daughter โ€˜s work result )
Kunj : no no this all done by meera I was asking her to bring her clothes so that I will help twinkle in arranging the house but this girl removed everything in order to find her clothes
Meera : no di dad didn’t tell me which is my clothes box
They keep on arguing like this , (close ur ears first before reading ) bcz Swara shouted on top of her voice STOP IT , STOP ARGUING ! Like small children .

All three of them kept finger on lips
Meera : di di I am small only
Swara stared her with angry open eyes
Ragini : swara cool down. I will help u guys
Swara : it’s ok Ragini I will do it Myself staring at three of them
Twinkle : the lioness had woke up
Swara : I heard what u said
Laksh : hain Swara we will help u
Sanskar : there is no problem
Swara : no thanks
Ragini : swara !!!!!!
Swara : ok baba
Meera lucky u will help me
Ragini : than I will help Bhabhi
Sanskar : I will help Kunj
Swara : I will clean the hall as my clothes are kept

After 2 hours
The whole house is clean
Everyone came and sat in the sofa
Twinkle : I will go and bring food and no one will say nothing and that’s final
Ragini : so Swara now tell me y r u not staying with ma and baba in the house
Swara : Ragini I will tell when time come
Laksh : there is n time Swara tell us now only
Kunj assured her to tell with eyes
Swara : when I was coming home Dadi stopped me
Dadi : hey chorey , what r u doing , whT will society think about us that there daughter was rejected by their in laws , her husband disowned her and is doing 2nd marriage an she is the wedding planner . My ladoo got her sasural because she love Them and they loved her . I don’t want this girl in my house
Shumi : ma what r u doing
Dadi : Shomi u stay out of this if want ayushโ€™s future safe , if u want ayush to live with out father like her or stay without mom like my ladoo it is better if u stay out of this .
Shomi stayed quite
Swara : wan wah clap ur hands , Dadi I accepted this from u , mama but u from when did u start showing partiality between us , from when ma say na
Shomi : swara listen beta
Swara : don’t call me ur beti Mrs Shekhear , u r a mom to Ragini and ayush for me u dead 6 months back only when u cared Ragini forgetting about me , I was the one who broke with sanskar for her sister , when I came her what everyone cared for Ragini did u even once came to console me all the nights when I cried for someone no one was there except my Dida , who was there. By my side everytime , when I was broken , she sold her house for me so that I can start my life she went to village not because she had work bcz she had no place to live in , she took the place of mom in my life better than u
Dadi : Bad bas bohat Boliya , get out of my house with ur belonging
Swara took her belongings with her and went out of the house.
Enough for today

Pre cap : drama again , meeting with twinkle and Kunj of Swara
Thanks guys

Sorry for not updating so many days as I also was having exams
He he he he
Please comment
I know non of u will be remembering me
To remind u I am tehreemfathima
Stay happh


  1. Priya23

    Hlw… tehreem….how r u ?…. M twinj big fan and i love them to the infinity….
    M also like swaragini but never read any story of them…I only read my twinj story….
    And U posted ur ff tei Tu instead of sawaragini Tu…but no pblm issi bahane haame read karneko mil gaya…he he..lol..
    And wow m surprised because u guy’s also include our twinj in ur ff ……I never seen it b4…..thank u….and m 1st time cmnting in another serial’s ff and its ur ff….
    The epi was just amazing and awesome….. I love it very much dear….its too good…
    Keep writing and smiling…..
    Lodss of love….

    • Tehreem28


      Dear I have posted on swaragini TU only but these TU people. Posted on TEI
      Thanks for ur comment
      I was such a big one
      Thanks again and keep commenting

  2. SidMin23

    |Registered Member

    this is beautiful but try to give more of twinj as in this is tei tu and hope u understand but Iam glade other members are including twinj into their story.

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..