Swasan-An incomplete love story (Epi 15)


Recap: Swasan marriage functions
Sumi: Ragini beta will you please take Shona to the temple.
Ragini: Haan aunty sure! I will take her.
Sumi: But where is she?
Ragini: Aunty she is trying her bridal dress.
Sumi: After her trial gets over,take her haan. Don’t forget.
Ragini: Haan aunty!
Ragini: Swara where are you??
Swara: Haan Ragini just coming.
Ragini: What were you doing in washroom? You were trying your bridal dress nah?
Swara comes out of the washroom wiping her face with a towel.
Ragini: What hapeened Swara you are looking so pale and low.
Swara: Nothing yaar! Bass headache and vomiting.
Ragini: Are you fine now?
Swara: Haan!
Ragini: Accha listen aunty has asked me to take you to the temple,while returning we will consult to a doctor.
Swara: Haan chalo!
Ragini: Doctor everything is fina nah?
Doctor: Where is her husband? I want to talk with him.
Ragini: He is out of town. Everything is fine nah? Swara is okay nah? Nothing serious??
Doctor: No nothing serious! Calm down. There is a good news. She is pregnant.
Swara and Ragini look at each other shocked.

Swara: Ragini please don’t say about this to anyone.
Ragini: I will not say but….
Swara: No but. Sanskar and I are getting married today so no worries.
Ragini: I understand. But atleast say this to Sanskar.
Swara: Haan I will definitely say him today.
Rp:Beta you are going to be responsible from today. Swara is your responsibility.
Sanskar: Yes dad.
RP: Never do anything which would make her sad. It is your duty to protect her. Alkways stand with her no matter what the situation is.
Sanskar: Dad, I will always be with her afterall she is my life.
RP: Beta,it is not going to be easy. It’s very hard. You both will fight a thousand times but never leave each other’s hand.
Sanskar: Dad,I am not going to hold her hand to leave it. 
RP: Marriage is a thousand little things. It’s giving up your right to be right in the he4at of an argument. It’s forgiving another when they let you down. It is loving someone unconditionally. It’s the place of forgiveness that welcomes one home,and arms they can run to in the midst of a strom.
Sanskar: Thanks dada for advising me. You are my superhero! <3
Sanskar was proud of his dada. The fact is that anyone can be father but only special ones can be DAD! 
Swara was ready in her beautiful attire.She was wearing a red bridal lehenga that has Kashmiri Zari embroidery,small choli blouse fully embellished sleeves,scroop neck and tie up at the back. The duppata is net and golden in combination. Weraing a stunning traditional outfit on your day of marriage has its own charm.Sanskar was in red and white sherwani.
Swara called Sanskar. Uttara picks up the call.
Swara: Sanskar,I need to say you something.
Uttara: Bhabi,bhai is busy in all the rituals. Do you have any message for him? I will pass it on.
Swara: Utta please give him the phone,I have something serious talk with him.
Uttara: What happened bhabi? Everything is fine nah? Wait a min,I will call him.
Sanskar: Yes princess say.
Swara: Sanskar,I I want to meet you. Please come to the backroad. I want to say you something.
Sanskar: Now??
Swara: Hann please come.
Sanskar: Now is not possible,when I will reach your house, I will call you. Fine?
Swara: Hann but please do come.
After sometime the groom’s procession reaches Swara’s house. Swara was waiting alone on the deserted road. There was an unsual breeze blowing. It appeared as if it can take the form of storm at any moment, a dangerous dust storm. The road was quite empty. Then suddenly someone grabbed Swara by her shoulder. It happened at the blink of eye. Swara identified that man as vaibhabh. Swara was about to shout when he pressed her mouth,the tight grip hutred her. Swara tried to free her but couldnot. She could not retaliate what was happening.
Swara: Vaibhabh please leave me.
Vaibhabh: Swara I love you.
Swara: Just stop your damn mouth. I am going to get married to Sanskar.
Vaibhabh: No Swara you cannot marry anyone else rather than me. I will make you mine.
He stated to take steps towards Swara and she backened her steps. With her heart pounding Swara looked around for anyone for help.Swara begged Vaibhabh to leave her. But she was pleading to a heartless man. Worse,he was drunk as well. Back there Sanskar was waiting for Swara.Then he thought to go further. Swara kept crying. She kept begging. Just as Vaibhabh was going to push himself inside Swara ,he felt a hand dragging his collar. It was Sanskar. Seeing Sanskar,Swara got up and hugged her sobbing.
Kaise bataaye, kaise jataaye

Subah tak tujhme jeena chahein
Bheege labon ki, geeli hansi ko
Peene ka mausam hai peena chahein
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Ehsaas tere aur mere toh
Ik dooje se judd rahe
Ik teri talab mujhe aisi lagi
Mere hosh bhi udne lage
Mujhe milta sukoon teri baahon mein
Jannat jaisi ek raahat hai
Sanskar then pulled Vaibhabh and pounced him like a mad dog. He beat him severely for touching his would be wife. After some beating Vaibhabi closed his eyes. Sanskar turned to Swara. She again hugged him.
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Kyun sabse juda, kyun sabse alag
Andaaz tere lagte..
Besaakh ta hum saaye se tere
Har shaam lipat’te hain
Har waqt mera, qurbat mein teri
Jab guzre toh ibadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko..
Aadat hai o.. aadat hai..
Aadat hai o.. teri aadat hai..
Sanskar: Princes don’t cry. Everything is fine. You were about to say something nah?
Swara: Sanskar… I… am.. Pregnanat.
Just then Vaibhabh opened his eyes and got up. He took out a knife from his pocket.
Vaibhabi: Swara,if you cannot be mine,then you cannot be nobody else’s.
He was about to stab Swara but Sanskar swapped their place. Vaibhabh had stabbed Sanskar. The knife fell from his hand and he ran away. Blood gushed out of Sanskar’s stomach.
Swara: SANAKSR!!!
Sanskar fell down on her lap.
Swara: Sanskar! Why did you do this? Why did you take my place?
Sanskar: I had said nah any danger have to pass by me before reaching you. It is my duty to protect you. See I kept my words.
Swara: Sanskar,let us go to hospital.
Sanskar: No… I need a promise from you Swara.
Swara: I will keep every promise but let us go to the hospital.
Sanskar: If we will have a daughter you will name her….
His eyes began to close… His words slowed down. He breath heavily.
Sanskar: You would name our daughter Kritika. And if son you would name him………..
His words remain incomplete. Sanskar breathe his last that day. He never wanted to die like that without marrying his shone and withour seeing his child. How could life end like this? The curtains of his life had shut forever. Death is so uncertain. All the dreams that Sanskar had seen with Swara remains incomplete.
Swara crys vigoursly resting her head on his chest…..
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Reporter: I cannot hold back my tears maam. It was such an emotional story. What a beautiful story.
Swara with a smile says-Yet incomplete.
After the interview,she gets up from the place and walks out. She opens the door of her car.
Swara: My baby. You came from school? How was your first day in school Kritika?
Kritika: It was good mumma. How was your interview?
Swara: It was good beta. Now let us go back home.
Just as Swara was about to get inside the car,she was about to hurt her head but Kritika saved her by hurting her hand.
Swara: Kritika! Why did you hurt your hand beta?
Kritika: Mumma it is my duty to protect you.
Swara then remembers Sanskar saying this. She hugs her and a layer of tear form within her eyes. The car drives off.
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..
Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Is this the end? Nah! It is just the beginning of life. Nah! it’s just the beginning of life. It is said-Don’t let life past by you, because any moment can change your life. we have no control over our fate. some people often think moving on is impossible,but it is because they never felt unconditional love. Swara has left behind her past and move on her life with her daughter.
#kritika! got your surprise?? Thnax for being such a wonderful support throughout my journey. It was impossible for me without you. I know this surprise is not so much big as you had expected but still it is like chalega types.  My chotu you are the best friend I got from Swasan!!!  Hope we will always remain in each other’s contact throughout our life. I need a promise that our friendship should not fade away after some months. We will remain in each other’s heart not fb friend list..
Bye everyone!
Love you all forever! 

Credit to: JYOTII

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  1. As expected. It is true that we should move on leaving our past.

    1. Yes dear moving on is very necessary some times. 🙂 🙂 🙂

    2. Yes but moving on is very difficult. 🙁

  2. yaar i loved this story to the core of my heart.
    u r seriously awesome dr

    1. Ridhima,I think its your first comment. Thank you dear. But there are wonderful writers than me.

  3. omg u ended it in such a sad but beautiful way!!?? what a way to wrap up the story I must say?… And good luck in the future for ur new ff coz I know u WILLmake them!!?????

    1. Sad ending remains in heart forever. Thanks for uhr wishes. I have already started my next ff! 🙂

  4. Di…!!! Omg..such a big wala surprise…can’t imagine.. Me…swasan’s daughter… Omg….n do it was painful yeah…BT the surprise u gave me was the best surprise I got through swasan…swasan joined us..I too promise…our frndship never fades away… We are together n we will..in each others hearts…there’s no day passed till now, I haven’t thought about u…love u loads di…I’m realy overwhelmed…☺???the surprise was soolo awesome…

    1. Glad that you liked your surprise. N where is my surprise?? Love you a loads! Yes you are in my heart!! *lots of hugs and kisses*

  5. very nice but plz post ur another ff soon the rain the …… Autumn

    1. Thanks. I have already uploaded it dont know when will it be posted.

  6. Woww. The ending made me cry. Loved it.

    1. Thanks dear!

  7. Amazing. The most beautiful end I have ever read. Loved it. I am crying after Sanky’s death even tough I knew that he going to die.

    1. Meher,thanks for those late night message which boosted my energy. Thanks a lot.

  8. You nailed it. What a ff!! Fabulous!! Hats off to you. I never thought that this ff is going to end this way. You made me cry. Not fair. Why you ended this. I had started to love this ff! :'(

    1. Thanks Priyanka. This ff was destined to end in 15chaps. You can read my other ff.

  9. Sad ending!!! 🙁 Still it will always remain in my heart. Very good. Keep this spirit always. Hope to see you in another ff.

    1. Dear,I have already started my ff I think you are reading it. Thanks dear!

  10. Truly amazing. Fantastic work. Love this. Plz post your other ff soon.

    1. Thank you. I have already uploaded it. 🙂

  11. It was beautiful….loved it dear!! The way sanskaar protected her. Mind blowing dear!! You are srsly a tremendous writer. I loved your last ff too! Gonna miss it. …love you dear!! Btw what’s your full name dear?? N where do you live? N about your education?

    1. Thanks dear! My full name is Jyotii Das. I live in Cuttack. I have just entered 12th grade.

  12. Nice and I really believe that true love is incomplete

    1. Yes this is true fact of nature.

  13. This was amazing….a real love story for me nd loved the name of their daughter………..make a comeback soon

    1. After all its my name…!! U had to love it na..!! Hehe…jst joking.

    2. I have already made a comeback.

  14. Hi Jyoti , i really like your writings. I have read the os ,written by u and that creared the much needed soft corner to get bound to your writings.i never commented but i must say hats off to u girl. U write beautiful. U r just too good in describing emotions. I knew sowhere ,what’s coming up in this update but still i cried. U just nailed every emotion.Beyond Perfection.Love u dear for giving such beautiful and heart touching ff.Do come up with next one.May god be with u dear.I will miss u.

    1. I have already started next my next ff. Thank you for such a beautiful long comment. Very glad! 🙂

    1. Thanks! 🙂

  15. very nice….

    1. Thank you! 🙂 🙂

  16. Wowww! Beautiful. Hats off to you dear. God knows how can you write so beautiful. To write one article for school I have to strike my head a lot then I come up with a good idea. But you are blessed with a brilliant writing skill. =D

    1. Thank you very much. Just pen down your feelings and uh will be ready with a good story.

  17. You created magic through your writings. It was one of d most amazing end I have read. A very thanks for giving such a beautiful ff. Please update your other ff soon. Love you.

    1. I have already uploaded the other ff. Thanks Tanya! 🙂

  18. Jyotii….
    I have no words… I just read all ur chapters………
    What a lovely sad story… but such a beautiful portrayal….especially that last scene with kritika….

    I now see why so many ppl suggested ur name in the swasan ff analysis…. amazing….

    1. Dear thanks! Praising from a wonderful writer like you means a lot to me. Thank you very much!!!!! 🙂 🙂

    2. Lol…. Wonderful writer and me?
      Anyways I’m glad u think so. Thank you soo much…

  19. oh god itna heart touching.. bt awsm..ab bas next tym sanskar ya swara kisiko mat mar na..

    1. Nahi next tym kisiko nahi marungi. Promise!!

  20. Superb girl. Loved it. Hatss of tovyour writings. Loved it!!!!!!! 😉 🙂 🙂

    1. Thank you

  21. I just read all the 15chaps. Brilliant. This ff ll always remain in my heart. It created an different impact in my heart.

    1. Thankss! 🙂 🙂 🙂

  22. You are amazing writer. You are driving me crazy through your ff. Everytime I search for your ff. 🙂

    1. Manisha,thanks dear! 🙂

  23. Awesome dear…. Too good and emotional ending

    1. Moving is necessary but not always! Thanks a lot!! 😉

  24. Awsm jyotii, I rarely comment and this really deserved, but after losing someone like sanskar I will not be able to move on

    1. Thank you dear!

    2. Thank you very much but sometimes we have to move on!

  25. Hai Jyotii,sorry for being late,this is the first ff that I read from the first chap to the last,like I said, that start and title made me glued to this,but superb ff dear,short and crisp,yet heart touching narration and plot,thank u for this ff,truly happy that I read this, u are really good writer,couldn’t read your second one,,will try to read it for sure,keep going dear.

    1. Vini di! I said nah no formalities! No thanks no sorry! So take back uhr sorry!! N thanks a tonn!! I have messaged uh d link of my new ff!
      M missing uhr ff! Do post soon! 🙁

  26. Thanks a lot!! 😉

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