Swasan-An incomplete love story (Epi 10)

HEY GUYS!! HOW ARE YOU ALL!! SORRY FOR DELAY! ACTUALLY CURRENTLY I AM WORKING ON AN ONE SHOT! IT WIL BE UPLOADED BY TOMORROW !SO HERE IS THE TENTH PART OF THIS STORY….!!!
RECAP:Sanskar gifted Swara a locket and they had a light romance on the last day of their trip.
Sanskar: What? Still you have not talked with your parents? Now come on Shona! Be fast.
Swara: You know how my parents are……….
Sanskar: But you promised me you would talk to them by this month. Now you have only this weekend to keep your promise.
Swara: This weekend! I would promise to them.

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Swara started panicking when the day came she had to talk to her parents about Sanskar. She was waiting for a perfect moment. She was very much pressurized.
Swara(in mind): Come on Swara,say them about Sanskar. This is a fair chance.
Shekhar: Swara! Do you want to say something?
Swara: Baba actually……….
Dadi: You both father and daughter can talk later. Now Swara come I have some work with you.
Swara: Haan daadi, I am coming in 5minutes.
Swara rushed to her room and immediately called Sanskar.
Sanskar: Hello Swara! Talked with your parents?
Swara: Not yet! But today I promise.
Sanskar: Offf!!! How can I love a stupid girl like you??

Swara: Ooooo helloooo!!!! I am not coward like you. You are scolding me a lot,had you talked with your mother?
Sanskar(stammering): M……E….??? Actually my mom….
Swara: Baass!!! I know how foolish you are.
Sanskae: And you are in love with that foolish?
Swara: My bad luck!! 
Sanskar: Aww!!! I love you.

Swara: I love you too. Accha listen bye daadi is calling me.
Sanskar: Byee!
SANSKAR’S HOUSE:
Sanskar: Mom I need to talk with you.
Sujata: Haan chora say.

Sanskar: Mom actually I…
As he was going to say something the sound of the pressure cokker made his mother go back to the kitchen. After some five minutes,she came back.
Sujata: Haan chora, you were about to say something?
Sanskar: Haan Mom.
Sujata: Say.
As he was going to say something he saw his younger sister Uttara watching him with big eyes. He thought that she has got a hint what he was going to say.
Uttara: Bhai say quickly.
Sanskar: Haan.
Sujata: I don’t think you are going to say something today. I am going I have a lots of work.
Sanskar: No Mom listen…..
Sujata: Are chora speak it out…

Sanskar: Actually mom.. I… I… actually I….

Uttara: Bhai what after ‘I’???
Sanskar: Mom… I love a girl.
He said this sentence without a pause and closing his eyes. When he opened his eyes he saw his mother giving him serious look and his sister laughing seeing him.
Sujata: Is she from Kolkata?
Sanskar: Haan of my college.
Uttara: College love han???? *teasing tone*
Sujata: Is she Marwari?
Sanskar: Half Marwari?
Sujata: Half?? What does this mean?
Sanskar: Her mother is Bengali and her father is Marwari.
Sujata: Do her parents know?
Sanskar: I don’t know.
Before his mother could ask him any question “more”,he showed her Swara’s picture.
Finally his mother smiled.

Sujata: Its good that you are thinking about your marriage and now I won’t have to search a lot of girls for you.

Sanskar: Mom are you happy?
Uttara: I am very happy. Finally I got a bhabi. After that 2th grade incident I never thought I would get a bhabi.
Sanskar: sssshhh!!1
Sujata: Which incident?
Sanskar: Nothing mom! You know she is completely mad.
Sujata:Haan chora. I will just call your father and inform him?
Sanskar: Hmmm

Sujata: What happened chora? Are you not happy? After all he is your father. He has the full right to know this.
Sanskar: Please mom……. He don’t have any right on us. He have right on those with whom he went abroad,his brother and his family.
Sujata: Sanskar,we are of one family chora.
Sanskar: No mom! Never! I don’t care his presence here. For me family is you,uttara,me n shone! 
Uttara: Shona???? *teasing tone*
Sujata: When will this boy accept his fsther?
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Swara: Daadi,do you seriously expect me to do this?
Daadi: Swara,now you are no more a child. You have to learn all these household chores. You are of marriageable age.
Swara: Daaddi, I have to marry someone, not to apply the post of maid.
Sumi: Haan Shona! Maa is right.
Swara: But ma..

Swara(thinking): Come on Swara! This is the final chance, Speak up atleast for Sanskar.
Shekahr: What happened?
Swara: Baba… actually….
Shekar? Hmm beta say.
Swara: Baba, you had done love marriage?
Sumi: shone!!!!
Swara: Maa.. please let me say. Baba, you had done love marriage and you expect me to do arrange marriage?
Daadi: Have you gone mad?
Swara: Baba! Actually I love someone, I want to marry him.
Sumi: Shona!!!

Swara: Maa atleast meet him ONCE!
Daadi: Are you watching it Shekhar? See how your daughter have becomed after going to college.
Sumi: Haan maa you are right.
Swara: Baba please say something.
Shekar: Why is he perfect for you?
Swara: Baba! Humans are not perfect, a relation is perfect. And I guarantee you that we have a perfect relation.

Shekhar: I want to meet him.
Swara: I love you baba.
Swara runs to her room and calls Sanskar.
Swara: Mission accomplished.
Sanskar: Your parents agreed?
Swara: Yet not! But they will.
Sanskar: But my mom aggred.
Swara: Wooww!!
Sanskar: She had called you to meet.
Swara: Even baba wants to meet you.

Sanskar: First you come her for lunch then we will go to your hose.
Swara: Done!
Sanskar: Love you!
Swara: Bye!!

Precap: Swara and Sanskar both meet each other’s parents.!

SORRY GUYS! I HAD TYPED THIS IN A HURRY! AND I THINK THIS IS NOT AS GOOD AS YOU ALL EXPECTED FROM ME!
SORRY!!
THANK YOU!

Credit to: JYOTII

4 comments

  1. Vini

    It is good,simply opened,actually to read written update but was very happy to see ur ff title and read it,it is good yaar,I can very well understand your thot if it is good or not because me too type in a hurry and at the end don’t proof read even ,thinking if I read it I may not post it,but I like your ff,in fact right now m reading only yours,because that start has made me love this ff,I really want to know how this story will proceed .I like ur ff n writing and I am not simply saying that..

  2. Jyotii

    Hey Vini! Thank you dear! I am glad that you only read mine!!!!! 🙂 M On cloud nine!!! 🙂

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