Swasan-An incomplete love story (Epi 1)

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Hey guys! I am Jyotii back with another Swasan romantic ff!

Have you ever been in love? Horrible isn’t it? It makes you so vulnerable. It opens your chest and it opens up your heart and it means that someone can get inside you and mess you up.

It happens only in a movie where the hero and the heroine meet in the end. But real life is rarely like that. Every love have a ending,but every love story don’t have a happy ending. Water and air are essential for our survival. Similarly trust is very important in any relation. It will die without trust. Understanding each other makes a relation perfect. A relation based on lie can’t stand any long. Always being together is not love, sometimes being apart from each other for the ahake of each others happiness is real love. Love is that condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own. The gift of love is worth cherishing.If you love someone,say them,express them what you feel. If they don’t agree then don’t break live without any regret because your love was true. Don’ think that’s the end of live instead move on. That was the end of that chapter. Start a new chapter. Some love stories cherish just the abbrevation of love not its full form. Life will try its best to pull the rug under your feet, but it depends on us weather we get up or we sit there. This is the story of a girl, Swara Gadodia. This is all ahout her life before she discovered love,when she was in love and after love ruined her happiness. But when she was about to make her relationship permanent,a misfortune strikes. Her relationship is put to the test when an unforeseen incidents hits her all of a sudden. Her true love lies in Sanskar Maheswari,a young,dashing boy of her college. But will she realize her love? She always try to run away from love. Is she trying to hide something about her bitter past??Love never dies a natural death. It dies because we don’t know how to replenish its source. It dies of blindness and errors and betrayals. It dies of illness and wounds; it dies of weariness, of witherings, of tarnishings.” Please everyone do comment your reaction about the intro.! I will also try to start my another ff but it is not a promise! 

THANK YOU!
COMMMENT NEEDED!

Credit to: JYOTII

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42 Comments
  1. Itz awesome. Ur intro just took me into tears. Each n every word u said was so touching. I’m eagerly waiting fr such scenes in ur ff. Plz start it soon. All the best

    1. Thank you! Aishu!

  2. What is the name of your other swasan ff?
    Waiting for your next update

    1. M not writing that! I ll continue only this!

    1. Thanks kritika

  3. Ur words touch my heart….

    1. Thanxxx!

    1. Thank you Nive!

  4. Awesome. Ur each nd every words are heart touching. Pls start it. All the very best

    1. Thank you very much! πŸ™‚

  5. So excited for ur ff after reading this intro…….waiting for next update!!!

    1. Your waiting will soon be over! πŸ™‚

  6. Absolutly u r rite ur indroduction was superb waiting 4 nxt:-*

    1. I always found you by my side n hope in this ff you will always support me! Thanksss!!!!! πŸ˜‰

  7. Omg wat a heart touching intra my sis

    1. Thank you dear!

  8. Awesome description looking forward for ur story

    1. Thanks dear!

  9. Amazing intro….looking forward for your ff…best of luck dear!!!

  10. Superb intro jyotii…I am impressed…Looking forward to read it…

  11. Wow…the way u have described the feeling of love is amazing..it touched my heart!! The start is impressive indeed but I do hope it ends happy unlike the real life ones…update nxt part soon..!! πŸ™‚

    1. You gave to wait till the story unfolds itself! πŸ™‚

  12. Thsnk you very much! Those were my emotions! What i think about love!

  13. Hey guys! I had already uploaded the next part of my ff! πŸ™‚ Your waiting is now over!

    1. Thanks

  14. Excellent introduction,what a start…superb.

    1. Thanks! N i think you also write a ff!!

  15. Exciting waiting for ur ff…

    1. Its already posted!

  16. i was crying after reading the intro

    1. It is the reality dear! πŸ™

  17. superb continue soon

    1. Thanks dear! πŸ™‚

  18. super intro

    1. Thanks a lot!

  19. its really nice but yar true love story never ends….actually the love story has no ending….the one which ends can never be a true love story…kynk always pictue abhi baki hai mere dost……i hope i didnt hurt u….

    1. No dear it doesnt hurt me! Infact i feel happy that uh r suggesting me something! As a writer uh r suggesting what you opine is right! I take it as a suggestion! πŸ™‚

  20. Its brilliant .. never thought of this diacription of love .. love , four magical being wraps the world ..

    1. Uh said to write what i think n see i wrote! πŸ™‚

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