Swasan: my incomplete love story ( chap-24 )

Hi guys. I am extremely sorry for being late. But have schools and classes. Hope u understand. Lets move on to the story.
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” swara please, listen to me, i am sorry, it was just a joke na?i am really sorry,” sanskaar was pleading swara following swara.
( they r in beach)
Swara turns and glares at him.
Swa- kyu? Why shud i listen to to u, u wanted me to be embarrased infront of ur family right? aur why shud i forgive u, huh?
Sans- becoz we r best friends!
Swara doesnt say anything and walks on.
Suddenly she felt a strong pair of arm around her waist. She gasped. It pulled her closer. Her back hit against someting hard and warm and…..comfortable. She could feel the hot breath no her cheeks.
She knew who it was.
It was her sanskaar of course.
” sanskaar leave me” she said and struggled a bit.
And she felt the arms at her waist tighten more.
” i am sorrry diva! I really am, please forgive me na.” he whispered in swaras ear. swara turns and faces sanskaar.
Swa- i still hate u.
She said and hugged sanskaar tight. Sankaar smiled.
Sans-sorry diva.
swa- its ok! But dont u dare play pranks on me again.
Sans- yes maam. He said and hugged swara tight.
( note: swasan move freely with each other)
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Swasan at home:
“Mom please just one night na! please, agree na, laksh is also coming tell mom will u, u idiot” sanskaar was saying laksh and ap.
” haan aunty oops ma, i will got with him na so no worries.” laksh said.
” but” before ap could complete a voice cut her.
” no ways, laksh wer r u going with this gorilla, i cant trust this hippo and send u, ur my jaan na? U dont go with this duffer!u stay with me Ok?” ragini said.
Sanskaar glared at ragini.
” haan of course baby, which idiot said i am going out?” laksh said and went towards ragini.
Sanskaar stared at laksh in shock.
” but just now u said,?” sanskaar was interrupted by laksh.
” hey mr who r u? I dont know u, i am sorry, chale ragu baby?”
Sanskaar’s jaw dropped. He stared at laksh in rage.
“good for nothing useless idiot dumbo.” he said and turned.
Ragini burst into laughter.
“see , ur not going.” ap said.
” fine, and a very big thank u to u all for showimg how much u hate me especially u mr.laksh raichand.”
Sanskaar said.
Laksh stared back innocently.
At that moment swara came there.
“hey do u all have any plans fot the night?”
” iiii had plans but mr.gorilla here spoilt it so none.” sanskaar said.
” yeah me and laksh are free too. Y?”
” no well i was thinking can we all go out some days u know camping.” swara said
“oh wow count us in.” ragini voulenteered.
“Swara, can i bring my——- friends with me?”
Swara stared at sanskaar.
” you r still in contact with them?”
She asked.
Sanskaar nodded innocently.
” will they———–”
Her voice trailed off.
” div— swara nothing will happen to u, me ragini and laksh are there right?
Sanskaar assured.
” then ok!” she said.
“guys what r u talking about?” laksh asked.
Swara panicked. But sanskaar was cool.
” well, can i know who u are? I dont know who u are and y r u in our house? Swara do u know this person?”
swaragini burst into laughter.
Laksh’s jaw dropped.
” Bhaiii!!???” he said
” bhai??? Who is ur bhai?” sanskaar said.
Laksh understood and grinned widely.
” bhaiiiiii!!!! You are my awesome wala bhai na, u r taking me with u na?” he asked like a kid.
Sanskaar nodded.
” as if u would leave me if i say no. Chalo lets start preparing and swara u can go home we will pick u on the way.”
Sanskaar said.
Ap smiled.
Swara left to her place.
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At night:
Sanskaar picked swara and his friends and they reached their destination.
All built camp fires and tents.
( they were a little far from their homes)
They built a small campfire and everybody sat around it. They started singing and cracking jokes.
Then ragini gave an idea to play truth or dare. They bring a bottle and spun it.
First was laksh.
Laksh chose dare.
Moh- ur dare is dance with someone except ragini and swara.
Laksh stared at mohit for a while and pulled mohit and danced a very funny dance with him.
Everyone laughed holding their stomach.
They spun the bottle again and this time on ragini. She chose dare.
Arj- ur dare is kiss someone here except laksh and sanskaar.
Laksh got angry and was about to say something, but ragini interrupted him by saying ok.
Sanskaar glared at them. Ragini got up and went near swara and kissed swaras cheek.And stuck out her tounge at sanskaars friends.
Sanlak warned his friends not to do these stuff again.
They nodded.
Bottle spins and stops at sanskaar. He chose dare.
His dare was given by ragini.
Rag- kiss swara.
Swasan stared at ragini.
Rag- what? u both r friends na?
Sanskaar kiss swaras cheek.
Swara was never happier.
Next bottle spins and stops at swara. She chooses truth.
Rag- do u love someone and if yes who is that?
Swara gets shocked.
Swa- yes. My mom,dad and family.
Everyone gets surprised at her answer and all laughs.
They play for somemire time and it was late. Everyone was going to sleep.laksh went to the car to bring his phone. Sanskaar was alone in the tent. Ragini enters.
Sanskaar looks up and looks inquiringly at her.
Rag- i wanna talk to u.
Sans- haan bolo
Rag- do u love swara.
Sanskaar looked at ragini for a brief moment and answered.
Sans- yes!
(please read the below note)

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Hey guys. I am back. This episode is specially for chandu/G.chandu. And guys please do read chandu’s ff.
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=my+lovely+biwi…and+her+love+story

MY LOVELY BIWI…AND HER LOVE STORY!!!- swasan FF
Its really a wonderful ff. well more than that. more like amazing and fab.
And guys u know what? I am dissapointed. I keep thinking y am i getting less comments and i have concluded that as my plot is very boring amd i am an extremely horrible writer.
Guys if u think i am not then please comment.
If u think i am then please dont comment. I will permanantly quit writing. If ur only ur comments are not above 15 then i quit. Please do comment. Negative is also accepted.
And there r Only 4 or 5 more episodes. Thank u all for ur support. Sorry kavi, isabel, sree, nive and laddoo.
Keep smiling πŸ™‚

23 comments

  1. Laddoo

    |Registered Member

    Amu dnt do this na. U r sucha marvellous writer nd u r planning to end it for less comments? Dnt do this plzz. Fab epi and love u😍😍😘😘

    • Ameera

      |Author

      awww my lovely sis, thank u for commenting. and me being a marvellous writer no dear not more than u. and for my cute lil laddoo i am reconsidering my decision. love u and yeah always keep smiling πŸ™‚

  2. Khushi

    πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ u do a great job… Don’t be disappointed by less comments and please be happy…
    It’s a great story dear😊😊😊

    • Ameera

      |Author

      aww thank u khushi , am really glad that u like it and thank u for ur support, always remember to keep smiling πŸ™‚

  3. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Ameera dont feel so…. Even i felt like that but after reading readers comment i came to know many like the ffs…. I love ur ff ameera… Pls do post next soon

    • Ameera

      |Author

      aww thank u shan, u made me smile, and yeah read ur ff and its just fab yaar. and i just need a lil time and yeah i think i will continue coz i may have less comments but i have regular reader like u . always remeber to keep smiling πŸ™‚

    • Ameera

      |Author

      aww dear thank u and yeah just need sometime and then i will be back. love ur name. hehe i mean it. remember to always keep smiling πŸ™‚

  4. chandu

    Thank you soooo much Ameera…:D πŸ˜€ !!!! ‘Thank you’ will be a less word even..!! I am unable to find words to express my feelings right now..!! I don’t know most of the symbols for emotions even to show my state ..!! But I think I might be the most happiest person in the world right now..!! I really didn’t expect this…!!

    Infact.. I didn’t expect that you will see my request in comments and write episode..!! I thought you are busy and that’s why unable to post..!! But I don’t know that you lost interest because of less comments and stopped writing..!!

    It’s not the truth..!! Getting less comments doesn’t mean that you are boring writer..!! And you are not..!! Why would I ask your episode if you are soo..!! I would like to accept a fact that… writing my story mostly from sanskar’s POV… came after seeing and reading your ff.. in which you thought of showing from swara’s Pov..!! Your ff is one of them which inspired me to write a story..!! You are really really underestimating yourself..!! May be you got less comments in last episode because you are little bit irregular..!!

    please… don’t quit writing..!! Think about readers like us..!! You are really a great awesome writer..!!

    • Ameera

      |Author

      aww chandu u made u cry!( tears of joy) god knows how many times i read ur comment and each time i did i always smiled. thank u so much. and i have no words, one thank u is not enough na? but still thank u so much. love u so much, always keep smiling. πŸ™‚

  5. Isabel

    |Registered Member

    Princess you know what, I’m out of words, it’s not just awesomee but truly incredible and amazing, though you’re confusing me a lot, I guess you want to kill me, by blasting my head
    Lol
    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ and keep writing,
    Love ya
    One more imp thing try and quit if you can,
    YOU ARE DEAD
    Sorry Princess

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