swasan: my incomplete love story ( chap- 13)

H guys, this is the last epi, I don’t get much of good response from all my previous episodes, so I am not going to post after this. I have ended this. Keep smiling. Loads of love from me and bye….


Swara’s pov:
I looked at the phone and screamed in delight. Due to my scream my mom and Amrith came rushing to my room to ask what happened. I screamed and danced in delight.
“Swara what happened?” mom asked
“Didi what happened?” Amrith asked tugging my arm.
“Nothing happened.” I said pinching both of their cheeks.

They went back to their work. I jumped all over the room. I quickly re read the message.
Sans-swara, ragini’s bestie right? Nice to meet u. if u don’t mind can we meet today at 10:30 am at the park near your college which u and ragini go often? Will be waiting =)
Oh my god? 10:30? Now it’s 11:00 it will take half an hour to reach there. I got ready in two minutes. I wore a knee length blue frock with sleeves. I immediately rushed and got a taxi. But damn my bad luck TRAFFIC!!!!
I got down and paid the driver and ran there. My eyes scanned the place hell! It was crowded. I was looking around when my eyes caught him. Yes it was him. Standing near his car taking a last look around the park and was getting in the car.
I immediately rushed to him and he saw me and smiled. I stood near him holding my waist catching my breath. He was leaning against the car smiling at me. I stood straight and gave a smile to him. He smiled back.

“So is the diva always late? “He asked.
“Not really!” I said.
“Were u waiting long?” I asked
“Actually even I am not a punctual lad.” He said.
We stared at each other for a moment and bust out laughing.
“Well why did u want to meet me? I asked.
“If don’t mind me saying, to hangout, any prob? “He asked
“NOPE LET’S GO!!” I said excited.
“Wait we just knew each other a few days before and you’re asking me to hang out with u, I mean a boy? I asked. I immediately regretted asking it.
“Look, it doesn’t matter how many days we know each other, what matters is how far we got to know each other and I got to know u very well and Ur just perfect. I love everything about u and wanted to get to know u even better and u know become firm friends, but I understand that u don’t want to be friend with a boy. Sorry for disturbing u.” he said.
I felt so bad. I just wanted to go hug him. He turned started to leave.
“Sanskaar!” I yelled.

I ran over to him put my arms around his neck and hugged him. He immediately hugged back.
“I am sorry, dint mean in that way!”
“It’s ok swara. And in friendship no sorry…” he said
“And no thank you” I completed
“Waise where did u learn this kinda filmy dialogues.” I asked teasingly.
“Just by seeing so many films” he said.
I realized I was still hugging him and broke the hug and started to back away looking down. I had hardly took a few steps when I was pulled by my waist into a hard chest. My arms went up the neck. I saw sanskaar looking at me with a smile.
“Is this wrong?” he asked.
“No” I said.
“Leaving me so soon? “He asked.
“No.” I said and hugged him back and rested my head on his chest smiling.
Hi guys! Did I give u all a mini heart attack? Don’t worry unless I get a haters comment or less comment I am not planning to end this.. And I am really happy. I am getting new readers. Thank u all for liking my ff. please keep supporting and commenting. Love u all. Keep smiling. And one more thing. Swara’s final exams are over and she is having her holidays. Plus once this ends I will come up with a new ff. and guys if ur comments are not above 10 , excluding mine, what ever I said in the beginning will become true.
Thank you for my regular commenters. Love u all.

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  1. nice sweet story always love it

    1. Ameera

      thank you ria, keep commenting. love u

  2. Don’t u dare to stop this yr … Lovely ff .. otherwise I will come in your dreams haha keep it up 🙂

    1. Ameera

      dont worry i am not planning to, and thank you for ur lovely comment. please dont scare me in my dreams.(winks) love u keep smiling

  3. It was so cute..loved it..keep writing dear:)

    1. Ameera

      thank u i will. love u, keep smiling.

  4. YEp mini heart attack, never expected this, btw its so sweet, lovely, u r great, wanna read more.. Love u.. and
    NOTE: i ll kill u if u end this ff

    1. Ameera

      i know right, this shock was specially planned for u hahaha.

    2. Ameera

      and i dont wanna die so soon, i am still young(winks) loads of hugs to u, keep smiling

  5. Soujanya


    1. Ameera

      hi soujanya, your profile pic is so nice, glad u liked it, keep smiling.

  6. Yaar..don’t end fast… Atleast gimme swasan romance.. I’m missing dem on tv..

    1. Ameera

      ok! you will see a full romantic epi. atleast will try!!!

      1. Ameera

        keep reading,

    1. Ameera

      thank you, glad u like it, keep reading and smiling. u too keep on smiling hope.

    1. Ameera

      thank you for ur comment. keep reading. keep smiling..

  7. Abirsha

    pls dr dont stop this for less comments…..i love this ff a lot…..and todays part was awesome

    1. Ameera

      thank you . anyways i reconsidered, i have less comments bt regular readers like u didu and some others. thank you, keep smiling.

  8. Omg i got mini not full heart attack…….dont stop this dr…..awesome part dr….update asap

    1. Ameera

      sorry(holding both ears) u will forgive me na? any ways thank you for the comment. loads of love to u. keep smiling.

      1. Ameera

        i said u na i am crazy thats y

  9. Wow…just awam….next part plssssssssss..

    1. Ameera

      thank you will post next tommorow. keep smiling.

  10. Niku

    Don’t make it a dream …n also don’t end up ao soon…..

    1. Ameera

      no its not a dream. i wont end it. dont worry.thank you for ur comment

      1. Ameera

        and yes keep smiling

  11. Shanayasharma

    Hey ameera…. It is a really good one…post the next episode soon…. Lots of love

    1. Ameera

      hey shanaya, u wrote an os ryt? thank you for ur comment, keep reading and smiling

  12. hey, plz plz plz don’t end this ff .its really nice. I’m sure most of the tellyupdate readers like this.

    1. Ameera

      awww thats nice, thank you, keep reading supporting like this and smiling.

  13. Yippee…vryy nyc episode..but is der anythg fishyy frm sanskaar’s side..i mean sudden hug dat too pulling swara towards him n all…did sanskaar also hv feelings towrds swara??i know its a suspense…but nvrmind ill wait till u reveal it…

    1. Ameera

      u almost got the point dear. sanskaar just understand swara as a best friend and close friend. but will reveal his feeling later

      1. Ameera

        keep reading and smiling

  14. Awesome dear

    1. Ameera

      thankyou anu ann

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