“SwaSan in hospital” an os by Sumayyah

Assalamualikum friends how are you all? seems like I’m writing after so many months so thought to give an os to all my lovely readers on my favourite ever green couple SwaSan
no more bak bak let’s start
don’t forget to comment as it is my first ever os .I just wish that it will rock and I just not messed up everything and if I so just forgive me friends

character sketch:

Swara Gadodia :- a young beautiful doctor jolly in nature just passed her MBBS and came to City Hospital of Kolkata for her practice.

Sanskar Maheshwari:- a senior doctor in City Hospital of Kolkata. he has achieved much in his small age by his dedications towards his profession .

the story starts in a lobby of hospital where there are few young doctors gossiping and giggling
there in between the crowd a beautiful indeed very beautiful girl in a white gown looking like an angel with innocence as her makeup chit chating with her friends .all stops when a team of senior doctors come.
the team introduces themselves to the interns .Swara’s eyes shined as she continues to stare angry young man of course our Sanskar bcz he is looking damn handsome in white gown .
Swara’s friend Rita : (shakes Swara) where are you girl???
Swara ( comes out of her dreams) hmm
wonders as everyone present there looking at her like she was an idiot and got hell embarrassed as it was her turn to introduce herself .
Swara (nervous) :Swara
Swara’s POV
I god how handsome he is!
if he continues to look that handsome how on earth am going to complete my internship here ??? olz God help me to take my eyes off him .
Dr Sanskar explains rules and regulations to all but Swara was just stating him like a lost puppy

Sanskar’s POV
how careless she is ! why she is not listening what I am saying am I mad or what that she is staring like that huh
POV ends
the first day goes like this
the next few days passed and due to Swara’s jolly and friendly nature all patients and staff became her friends .her duty was mainly in child’s ward .so she became Swara dii for all
One day the nurse was making one child Rahul eat medicines but hr was refusing and making faces as it was bitter .all laughs .Swara sees him and smiles and come near him
Swara caressing his hair (softly ) : bacha is strong hey na bacha .he will take all the medicines and show it to you all(to others) dont laugh he will show you all he is a super man.
rahul take all the medicines .after that Swara gave him a chocolate as a reward and he happily takes it and kiss Swara’s cheek and say
Rahul: thanks dii
in return Swara also kisses him and whispers : you’re welcome my child
all this is watched by a pair of eyes none other than Sanskar’s and A smile creeps on his face
Sanskar’s POV
she can never change huh mad girl
POV ends
another eyes also staring all these which is burning in rage whose will reveale later
at lunch time
Swara was having her lunch along with a little gossiping with friends
Rita: yaar Dr Sanskar is so hot I wish I would be his better half how lucky I will be (dreamingly)
Swara (jealous) but Rita you have a boyfriend na and you love him right
Rita (ignoringly) :plz Swara leave him na I was just time passing with him
Swara ( shocked): but …..is he also passing time with you??
Rita : yaar plz don’t spoil my mood yaar …
a peon comes and says
peon: Dr Sanskar is calling you all in his cabin
all: OK coming

in Sanskar’s cabin
all were standing except Sanskar as he was sitting on his chair in a bossy way
Sanskar ( with attitude) : Ms Swara seems like you became sincere now .seeing your bonding with the patients our administration decided to make you as the head of the junior doctors ….
all claps for her
Swara ( lil angry but happy) : thanks but I’m always sincere about my profession (angry pout )
all smiles at her
Swara and Sanskar was lost in eo eyes
this was all noticed by Rita
Rita purposely make some noise to make them come back to reality..
Sanskar (avoiding eye contact) : now you all can go.
after few days
in these few days SwaSan was enjoying eo company and coming close to eo
Swara was treating some patients in the children ward when a nurse came and says
nurse : see name Swara dii one child dev is calling you and he wants to take medicines from your hands I can’t handle him.
Swara (smiles): OK am coming
Swara goes and makes him eat medicine
next day
when Swara came she got to know that the medicines she gave dev was expired and his condition is critical now and Sanskar is treating him in OT. she got shocked .

when Sanskar came from the OT .he says
Sanskar: his condition is critical can’t say anything .pray to God .
Swara was now on the verge of crying there and Rita come and
Rita: it was all your fault Swara .why can’t you see properly before giving any medicine to anyone .you should be careful .now see what you have done to the small child tch tch teh……
Sanskar (burns in anger): miss Swara come in my cabin
Swara lifelessly follows him
In cabin
Sanskar: Swara I did not said you to sit
Swara ( guilty ) sorry sir(stands)
Sanskar (angry) :miss Swara there is no place for mistakes and sorry in a hospital .you know one carelessy of doctors make the way to grave .you are so careless .you shouldn’t at least done that.I can’t say forgive you for this .you should have to bear the punishment .you aren’t any more the head .
Swara ( depressed and a tear escapes her beautiful eyes ) :sorry sir
saying this she goes .Sanskar felt bad for her.
two days passed and Swara left no space towards the care of dev and now he is perfectly fit and fine but Swara …she wasn’t fine any more bcz of lack of sleep and tiredness her eyes were puffy and red.she was all pale .
sanskar, after checking dev
Sanskar: now you are perfectly fine
his eyes fell on her .she was lifelessly sitting in a chair near his bed.he was upset seeing her condition .he reminds his harsh behaviour and felt sorry for her
Sanskar: Swara come I will drop you .
Swara again silently follows his order
in car she slept immediately as she was tired .Sanskar keep staring her lovingly.
at home
without disturbing her sleep he carries her in a bridal style to the room and make her lie properly on bed .the room was beautifuly decorated with his and her pictures including SwaSan wedding photos
(lga na shock yes they are married)
he kisses her on her forehead and a tear escapes his eyes and he whispers a sorry
he sits near her and reminds

someone gave the nurse money and said her to change the medicines and she was revealed to be Rita bcz she wants to disgrace Swara in Sanskar’s eyes
and all this came in Sanskar’s knowledge when he checks the CCTV footage of the day as it was his daily routine to check cctv before night and than he realize his mistake on shouting her .
flashback ends
when Swara waked up she finds him sitting near her
Swara (guilty) sorry Sanskar I didn’t knew how it happened how I just….
Sanskar(cut her by putting his fingers on her shivering lips they both felt eclectic shock passing through their spines ) shhh Swara it was all my fault plz forgive me plz forgive your Sanskar plz …..
Swara ( unable to understand) : what Sanskar what are you saying what’s your fault in this …
Sanskar : I scold you without your fault that’s why
Swara : I can’t understand Sanskar …
Sanskar: yaa Swara it was all Rita’s plan and he told her about CCTV footage
Swara ( unbelievably ) : Rita ….but why
Sanskar told her
when he got to knew it he went to Rita and ask her but she refuses then he shows her footage and asked her but she continued to refuse then Sanskar shows her his anger and asked in a little harsh manner there she just bowled and speaked
Rita : sir actually WO WO…
Sanskar (angry) :speak Rita or else
Rita : sirc actually I just only want to disgrace her in your eyes and….
Sanskar ( shocked) : what …what nonsense …why..
Rita : Sir actually she is so popular in hospital and many times you and every member including staff ignores me in front of her and I just became fed up of all these .
Sanskar (with anger filled eyes): Rita you just to disgrace her you put the life of a child in danger …how could you
Rita : sir for her you are taunting me and angry on me I’m more beautiful than her
Sanskar( anger on cloud 10 ) : Ritaaa just shut up she is not only a girl she is my wife and my everything understand
Rita shocked : what ….your wife but you didn’t inform us
Sanskar : bcz she didnot want any favour of my name and now I don’t want to listen anything just get lost an remember now you can’t done your internship here and get lost I don’t want to hear a single word.
Rita helplessly went out
Flashback end
Swara had tears in her eyes
Sanskar : am really sorry swara plz forgive yoyr Sanskar plz
Swara : its OK I know you consider your field as worship and I respect it so its okay
Swara : I love you
Sanskar : I love you too

So how was it friends
I dedicate this is to my sweet friends
Kaku , Raina , Mavo dii , Stella dii and Rabia dii they are my inspiration
Sorry for any mistake as I typed on mobile so no proof reading done
Thanks for reading but don’t forget to comment as it is really will make me happy guys
Good bye

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  1. Phoniex

    Loved it dear

    1. Sumayyah

      thank you so much dear
      glad you like it

  2. Loved it.

    1. Sumayyah

      thank you so much Sneha
      glad you love it

  3. Fenil

    Superb work
    I loved it.

    1. Sumayyah

      thank you so much for your compliment
      glad you love it

  4. nice dear

    1. Sumayyah

      thanks dear

  5. Neptune

    it was awesome dear but please give a part 2 or epilogue if you are okay with it and show some swasan romantic and emotional moments dear…………….

    1. Sumayyah

      thank you so much
      I an really happy that you like it
      I will try but can’t promise
      thank you so much once again

  6. Superb???

  7. Mars

    Amazing dear and the best part was that they were married.

    1. Sumayyah

      Thanks for liking
      yaa Mars I also loved the fact that they are married

  8. Raina

    Inspiration? Me? Hayi!! Hayi!!
    Short and sweet os dear!! Amazing!!
    Loved it to the core!!!
    Love you!!

    1. Sumayyah

      of course you are my inspiration Raina I loved your each and every ff
      Thanks for reading it really means a lot to me
      love you too

  9. nice dear

    1. Sumayyah

      thanks Liza
      glad you read it

    1. Sumayyah

      thanks Ritu

  10. TanuLaksh

    Really very sweet and beautiful story….loved it …

    1. Sumayyah

      Thank you so much dear
      glad you like it

  11. awesome dear

    1. Sumayyah

      Thanks dear
      glad you like it

  12. Tamil

    Amazing dear loved it

    1. Sumayyah

      thank you so much dear
      glad you love it

  13. Aarushi_99

    It was fabulous!! Short, simple and sweet! Loved it!
    If you can then do come back with an epilogue..!
    Take care!! :-*

    1. Sumayyah

      thank you so much
      yaa I will try to write but can’t say surely let’s see
      but thank you so much again

  14. Kakali

    Sumaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..!! Inspiration and me! You killed me now!
    Urghhhhh You gave jhatka like Rabiaaaaa Diiii.! Naughty girl..!!
    Love it love it.! It’s soo simple and cuteee! ???Totally enjoyed reading.! Now m expecting more works from you..! Do write whenever you get time.! Love u dherrrrr saraaaaa *hug..! Thnk u.!! ;-*

    1. Sumayyah

      kakkuuu yaar yup you are my inspiration to write
      thank you so much yaar
      am glad you love it
      yaa I will try to write something for sure
      love you too dher saraa
      what a shock really am like Rabia dii jhatkaa she is a maha suspense creater than maha jhatka creater
      thank you so much once again

  15. awesome loved it

    1. Sumayyah

      thanks Any
      glad you loved it

  16. Seebu_s

    nice dear

    1. Sumayyah

      Thanks dear
      Glad you like it

  17. Awesome….i really want to c her in white coat of doctr…..simple n amazing story….but wanted some more swasan scen’s…..now want epilog…..if u can

    1. Sumayyah

      Yaa sanu I also want to see her in that attire
      about epilogue I am trying to write but can’t say
      thank you so much

    1. Sumayyah

      Thanks Kumu

  18. Wah ji waahh dedication to mee alsoo but naa noww remove my namee from your this list becoz i will never come back on tu acha usko chadooo… let me tell u about os it was really veryy cute and sweet os ???? the way swara said the lines about sanskar ??? bs one complain u didnt slapped that rita ? hehehehehe awesomeee ??

    1. Sumayyah

      Dii what are you saying??
      why are you leaving TU
      thank you so much
      about your complain I have a reason actually Sanskar is a lil sanskari that’s why he can’t slap women

  19. Gayathri.visu

    Excellent! Swasan are married……sweet shock dear! Swara is soo cute. Pleaseeeeee give epilogue dear! I want Swasan scenes……plzzzz!

    1. Sumayyah

      thanks dear
      I am trying to write epilogue
      glad you like the twist

  20. nice dear

    1. Sumayyah

      Thanks dear
      glad you like it

  21. i didn’t expect swasan are married…nice twist..

    1. Sumayyah

      Thank you so much dear
      glad you like it
      your words means a lot to me

  22. loved it…

    1. Sumayyah

      thank you so much dear
      glad you like it

  23. Stella


    First of all, thank you so much for the dedication…!! That really means a lot to me…!!

    Coming to the story, it’s your first OS and you have done a wonderful job…!! I loved it…!! And I started smiling the moment it was disclosed that they were married..!!

    Keep it up…!! Stay blessed and love you loads… ??❤️❤️

    1. Sumayyah

      Thank you so much dii
      Your words means a lot to me
      I’m so happy that one of my favourite writer has complemented me thank u thank you so much once again
      Love you too dii and WO bhi so much
      Thanks for your wishes also

    1. Sumayyah

      Thanks Ashhhuuu
      Glad you like it

  24. Simi

    Good one dear.. Keep smiling ☺

    1. Sumayyah

      Thank you so much Simii

  25. U wrote a beautiful story…? or simply i loved it girl…U Rocked!!!! ?keep up the amazing work dear..hope to read another one soon..and itttyy sary feedbacks..wow..really feeling happy for u…love u…?? ur remi..?

    1. Sumayyah

      Thanks Remi
      you are my Beastie
      And you know what a compliment from a bestie is something wonderful
      I am on cloud 7 heheeehee thank you remi Darling uumuuaaahhh
      Love you a lot

      1. Sumayyah

        Opppsss bestie

  26. Shifa96

    Nice one..do write more stories dear.

    1. Sumayyah

      Thanks shifa
      Glad you like it
      I will write for sure

  27. Meera_s

    i didn’t expected swasan r married…!loved it so much

    1. Sumayyah

      Thanks for reading Merra
      glad you like it

  28. Vyshu10

    Awesome….seeing u after long time

    1. Sumayyah

      thanks Vyshuuuuu
      glad you remembered me
      here is the link of the sequel

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