swasan in the haunted mansion by rabia OS (part-b)

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Guysss u know I love horror movies by writing this I remembered one incident I was watching one movie years back in launch alone.. my sister was upstairs she came down for drinking water and when she saw me sitting she itself settle down and start watching movie butt sheee herself is a darpook (scared kitten) … what I can say she start saying no no don’t watch look he will kill that person… something must happen.. ghost will come… she will die.. bla bla bla she was continuously start saying these type of things that finally I become scared and switched of the tv  hehehehehehe


If anybody says a sorry to mee naaa in any comment then I will not going to update… OOO God… in last epii I got hundreds of sorry.. :/ huhhh..one sorry from anyone then all will suffer 😛 choice is yours 😉 hehehhe and due to sorry session in previousss epiiii im giving u only 2 pagesss.. go and enjoy and throw tomatoes and eggs on those who said sorryyy….this story next epi and other stories epi will going to be posttttttttttttttttt………. When im having a mood 😛 (devil laugh) sticking out the tongue 😛



Next day swara woke up but she didn’t remembered anything and on which sanky signs in relief… but his this relief is of few hrs because he got a call that he is having a meeting for 3 days and which is very imp… he wants to deny.. but swara says that its just a matter of 3 days… sanky goes unwillingly because this meeting is for hospital project which is on his dad’s name…

Sanky goes.. but after instructing his body guards and servants to take care of swara…..swara is in her room and she was reading newspaper.. she was sitting in the balcony and while reading she was also seeing the beautiful view… she has opened the full newspaper with both hands… and she was seen her left side view… when she turned her sight towards newspaper…

Swara: aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh… ther is someone who was peeping between the newspaper…

Swara throws the newspaper and start shouting while the one who is peeping also starting shouting..

Swara being scared:www..hhh…oo.o… rr….rrr..uuu…uuuu?? and how can u peep from the newspaper… then swara realized the it’s a small girl.. but her get up is like ghosts….

Girl: wo..hhh… u were bzy naaa so that’s why I thought to not disturb u…

Swara: is this the way to not disturb anybody??

Girl: im sorrryyyy…

Swara: who r u?? and how come u here?? And why r u in the getup of ghosts??

Girl: because im a ghossttt

Swara: what the hell??

Girl: don’t u believe me??

Swara: noooo

Girl: make the newspaper fly in the air.. she also make the cup and soccer fly in the air… she closed the windows put the curtains..

Swara become scaredd and said : what u want from me?? Plzz don’t kill meee.. she became teary eyes..

Girl: no noo u r very sweet u know after seeing u I remembered my mother she said with a sadt tone..

Swara: where is your mother??

Girl: they killed my whole family…

Swara: whoo??

Girl: some other day.. by the way what is your name?? may name is navi and im 14 yrs old..

Swara: my name is swara.. and she give hand for handshake but they cant because navi is a ghost…

Navi being sad : u cant touch me because im a soul naaa…

Swara saw her sad face: don’t be sad but tell mee how u become ghost??

Navi : because we didn’t got freed naa from this world… nobody did are last rituals…

Swara: oooo..
Navi: okay I have to goo… and by saying this she vanished but due to sudden light swara closed her eyes..

Swara: am I dreaming?? Or this is my hallucination?? I think I should tell sanskar by saying this she grabbed the cell but later she realize that sanky has gone for an important meeting..

Swara: I think I should take some rest…

By saying this swara lay down….and slept after sometime…. While balcony… filled with blood……

Swara woke up and was going to dining hall when she saw towards balcony and become shocked because there were blood spots…

Swara runs outside and calls servant… but when servant came they found nothing just a clean balcony..

Swara in mind: what is happening here…. Sanky please come soon…

To be continued….

Percap: sanky came back after 3 dayss butttt… swara stabbed him…

Actually I suffering from fever and headache soo cant write more…

and navi i hope u liked your character i will give u more scenes dont worry 😉 hehehehe


  1. Pooja26


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    omg !!!!! 😉 u made navi ghost 😉 😉
    hahaha !!!!!!!
    rolling on d ground 😉 😉 😉
    superb chappy yr……
    post asap….

  2. shalini

    WhAt 😱😱😱😱 precap episode SE bhi jayada scary hai ohh God 😱😱
    Or SWARA or navi ki convo awesome 😘😘 superb epi
    Get well soon 😘😘😘😘😘

  3. Manasvi


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    Navi dii Aapki ichha puri ho gayi!! Congrats!
    Rabu dii, just two pages.. This is not fair yaar..
    This time i m reading in afternoon..
    Btw episode is amazing..
    Love u..
    And waiting for the nxt epi..
    Take care..

  4. Swarmayi


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    Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiìiiiii…. Do u wanna give me heart attack? Swara stabbed sanky?? Hmm.. bt I think its a dream or sm soul haunted swara.. lets see.. whatt happen next.. chappie was tooo good n mysterious.

  5. Scooby


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    Haha lady don u really made me ghost.. nw im laughing like manic.. thnk u for giving ghost look.. the chapie ws awesime.. take care f ur health lady don.. get well soon..

    • Rabia



      hahhahahahaa navi i dont want to make u a princess soo thats why i made u a ghost 😂😂😂😂😂🤓🤓🤓🙃🙃🙃😍😍😍 thankuuy sooo much 😘

    • Kakali

      Naviiiiii…. my illegal bitter…. *hug..
      bring pakora to concole Navi.. !! waaa *cry with her…
      finally *push her to pond..😀

  6. Mirna


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    Rabsssssssssss i knw u will not kill sankyyyyyyyyy 🙂 di make it more fearfulllll 🙂 loved it to the core 🙂 waiting for next 🙂

  7. Niku


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    Dii in starting I thought it’s a haunted one but now it’s not I m laughing when u enter d ghost …..😂😂😂 That’s really funny I found….n yeah I never covered my face with hands n peeping from fingers I watch movie ….infact this is done by my bro. I m a big girl😃

    • Rabia



      nikuuuu dont laugh i dont know about mind that what mischief he will done 😂😂😂😂 and i love horror movies but not that in which they use dirty trickss 😡😡 like saw moviee eeeeuuuuuu gandi movie 😤😤😤

    • Niku


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      Dii u take me in a wrong way I m not talking about gandi horror movies ….I m just n only talking about horror diii….👂👌 (Maafi kaan pkd kr)

      • Rabia



        Arrey nikuuu gandi that tye of gandi naii i means in which they add cutting of body parts etc wagairaa naaa it never seems horror to me its disgusting in which u feels like fainting 😂😂😂😂😘😘

  8. Shreeyu


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    Hahaha Rabia di…. Such a cute ghost … I don’t need to say that it was awesome as it was soooooo awesome…. It is so funny di instead of feeling scared m laughing…. BTW sabne aapko sorry kyon bola? And take care diii

    • Rabia



      shreeyu dint underestimate this ghost 🤓🤓🤓🤓 hehhehehehe thankuuuu soooo muchh and i dontt knowww but many said sorry for being latee aur awein bhi bola 😔😔😔😔 thats why i said that 😬😬😬😬😬

  9. aliya123

    sry api i knw nahi bolna par late ho gayi na isliye …..,..cute ghost todays part is nt scary bt cute

    nd one more thing my phone is gone to doc. so fr one week no fb mom ke ph. mein fb nahi chalti(sad) so bye bye

  10. Rabia0032


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    Bhooton ki malika what was that Balkony with blood omg yaar…n swara will Stab sanskar 😱😱😱. ..

    Oye apna dann rakho kitna Bukhaar hai…do need injection should I give u😉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉💉

    • Rabia



      Bilbatori 😛😛😛 andd naaa noooo injection future patients k liye sambhal louu khatam hogaye idhar he touuuu 😁😁😁😁

  11. Srusti


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    Di this part was so fantastic ,mindblowing and i have no words to say bcoz u r a expert in writing ff’s ,os ,ss’s and di take care of ur health and u are fine u can write another part of this and don’t take stress di i am irritating u na bye di

  12. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Okay,my blackmailing queen I will not say sorry for late commenting😉..Haww😱😱you are not well but still blackmailing karna nehi choda*impossible look..About chappy,it’s fantastic.. Loved it.. Haha,Navi is ghost😂😂..Sometimes it’s good for health and mind,if anyone change their character😉😉same goes with Navi,human to ghost😜😜..Keep going di.. Take care of your health..Don’t give much stress yourself.. Eat medicine on time.. Dare to ignore it😠..Keep smiling😀😀..

    • Rabia



      Hahahaha okay ji okayy jii i will take care of myself donttt worrryyy 😙😙😙😙 thankuuu soooo muchhh umaaa 😙😙😙

  13. Amore


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    hehehe here it comes… Told you funny hone wala hai… Yar how can swara b so stupid? Handshake that too so fast? and after she vanished she asks “am i dreaming”? Now Sanskar will be stabbed… dream or reality? Don’t you think Navi should get Justice??? (keede wala brain)
    Yar how will i pass my curiosity???

    Pata nai iss ladki ka kaunsa naya drama chalu karna hai iss keede wali brain wali ko (humph!)

    • Rabia



      hahahaha thankuu soo much dear and in my story u always found funny scenes if it was a serious story also 😉 and dont worry i will end your curiosity soon 😉

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