SWASAN- A hate story (18)

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Swara opened her eyes in the morning when cool breeze touched her face. She saw sanskar getting ready in formals.
Swara: sanskar!
Sanskar: please leave me alone swara. I don’t want to talk to you now!
She jerked listening his words but his heart was broken much more by her two faces..no two identities.
He turned to her and gave a Bluetooth.
Sanskar: I think you don’t have any use of this now..you can talk to me freely..
His taunt stabbed her heart and she remembered how she use to manage talking to varun before sanskar using it.

He left the room while swara went to washroom after taking clothes from wardrobe. She came out and was surprised to see a red crape saree with silver border.
Swara: who has changed my clothes…she heard ragini’s voice downstairs..may be she did.
Swara got ready by wearing the saree, bangles and ear rings. She applied kajal and then filled her hairline with sindoor. Her face became red while filling her maang thinking about sanskar.
She then came down and saw sanskar and ragini discussing something and laughing aloud..for a moment, she felt jealous to see ragini laughing with him where she has to be in her place.
Sanskar didn’t even care to look at her.
Sanskar: ma! Swara and I are going out today. We will come come for lunch.
A smile came on her face. They both started walking towards the entrance but was interrupted by ragini.
Ragini: I think you forgot something!!
Swara: what!

She looked at herself and again ragini.
Ragini tool a bowl from the table and make swara to eat the kheeer.
Swara: kheer..for what?
Ragini: nothing special. I just made it with my own hands
She then fed it to sanskar. Both of them left the hall and ragini smiled happily seeing them together.
At entrance, swara encountered post man.
Postman: who is swara MAHESWARI?
Swara: me..

Postman: here is your parcel.
Swara understood that they were the papers which she asked someone to arrange.she signed the papers and went to the car where sanskar was already waiting for her.
She simply kept staring out of the window and the early morning breeze removed all her tensions as it flew through her. Sanskar stopped infront of a temple and went inside the temple while swara followed him. They made circumambulations and stood infront of the idol of Rama and sita.
Swara: I am sorry sanskar. I really didn’t trap you. Please understand me.
He turned to her and she was surprised to see him smiling at her.
Tears rolled down her cheeks.
Swara: sanskar!
Sanskar: stop crying swara. You don’t look good while crying.
Swara: it means you forgave me.
Her voice was filled with surprise and joy.
Sanskar: I think I ….forgave you.

Swara: sanskar!!
To her surprise, he hugged her.
Sanskar: I was angry with you but not now swara.
Swara broke the hug and looked him with confusion.
Swara: but this quickly? What is the reason behind this.
Sanskar:( smiled) marriage.
He then took her puzzled face in his hands.
Sanskar: yes swara..marriage is reason for my this. Do you why in our tradition, a girl gets married to a guy elder to her.
Swara nodded in no but was eagerly waiting to listen the answer from him.
Sanskar: because the man will treat his wife as a child because of her age and will eventually guide her and forgive..
Swara: I think you did graduation in matter of love and marriage
Sanskar: nothing as such swara. Till yesterday, my hate was dominating all others emotions and today my love is…

Swara smiled at him cause she too experienced.
Swara: yes sanskar! Till date, our hate has dominated other emotions and so we never tried to understand each other but..
Sanskar: if we have balance and control on all emotions equally then we would be in place of those idols.
Swara: you were true sanskar. We will never hate a person but their behaviour.
He smiled nodding yes.
Sanskar: I really don’t want to miss you swara. If I had known that staying together for four months will bring such a change then I would have married you in my tenth class itself…
Swara: and I would have come today to jail for your release….child marriages are crime..aren’t they?
They both smiled.
Swara: a small gift to you from my side
She gave him the papers and his face showed happiness, excitement and surprise after reading it.
Sanskar: are you serious?
Swara: yes sanskar…you can now fulfill your dream of becoming a lecturer.
Sanskar became teary eyed.
Sanskar: but how did you get to know?

Swara: you..sorry varun had once said this to vaishali. I remember you saying that you love staying in village by teaching those students but I was unable to fullfill your wish completely as our family is not so strong to stay away from us .
Sanskar: laksh always used to tease me listening my dream.
Swara: but swara won’t.
He smiled and wiped his tears
Sanskar: I don’t want to make marriage a joke by marrying you again but as a husband…I have this right ( didn’t mean to offend anyone)
He took a pinch of sindoor from the feet of goddesses seetha and filled her maang with it.
Sanskar: the right of filling your hairline and show how important you are to me.
Swara rubbed her eyes when sindoor went into her eyes. She felt bad seeing sanskar smiling at her..
Swara: how mean sanskar..you didn’t even try to help me.
Sanskar: you were looking cute with tears in your eyes.
Swara:Still you love me seeing in tears!!.
She hugged him.

Swara: I hate you sanskar!
He hugged her back.
Sanskar: I hate you too swara!
He then lifted her in his arms and as it was early hours, the temple was almost deserted.
Swara snaked her hands around his neck and stared at his eyes. he too did the same and descended the steps.

Swara: are you going to carry me like this till the car.
Sanskar: actually no..because my hands are aching
He then made her stand while swara placed her hands in his.
Swara: I wish laksh would have been alive. He would surely felt happy seeing us ..
Sanskar: who said that laksh is dead. see …he pointed the sky…he is seeing from there and is blessing us even.
Suddenly, a gentle wind blew and the flowers of the tree under which they were standing has fallen on them.
Swara: you are right!
They both sat in the car and drove off
From there the pilgrimage of love of this hate couple has started.

From there the pilgrimage of their love has started- sanskar maheswari.
He stretched his hands by dropping the pen on the table after writing the last line of his novel.
He turned back listening some familiar voice saying ” finished writing? “. He saw a old women in saree which was draped in traditional style and was holding a cup in her hands.
Sanskar: swara…my granny.
Swara: granny!! You are saying as if you are a young man.
Sanskar got up from his place and walked to the mirror.he then looked at himself. The skin of his body had wrinkles and the hairs on his head were grey evidencing his experiences in life
Sanskar: you are right Mrs. Maheswari but I am still young..I can jog …he moved few steps…can you do this?
Swara: enough of your drama. You know very well that I cannot walk properly even because of my…
Sanskar: arthritis…
He sighed while swara pouted.
Sanskar: but there are many women who…
She interrupted him.
Swara: I think your passion and profession of teaching has not left you even after three years of you leaving it.

Sanskar smiled and looked at his retirement photo which was hung on wall. He was sitting in middle and all his staff members were standing surrounding him.
Sanskar: passion cannot leave us while profession can. Will you proof read my novel?
Swara: I would have surely read if it was written by you but unfortunately Mr. Varun has written it and I know very well about his writing skills.
Sanskar smirked.
Sanskar: but I want vaishali to read it before it gets published.
Swara: enough of flirting now.. I came here to inform you about ragini’s arrival..
Sanskar: what! Ragini is coming. We must do many preparations.
They both turned their heads to entrance hearing a person’s voice.
Ayu: what!! ragini maasi is coming. Why didn’t you inform it ma?
Swara: I am sorry beta.
A girl of six years came running to sanskar.

Girl: grand pa…
He lifted her in his arms.
Sanskar: meena!
Meena: ragini dadi is coming?
Swara: yes..
Meena: then ansh bhayya will also come. Leave me dada. I should inform it to mom.
Sanskar: I will leave you meena but see my cheeks are crying…you need to do something.
She immediately kissed his cheeks.
Meena: see now they stopped crying.
Ayu and meena left the room and they heard meena calling her mother.
Swara: Ayu will always become a child listening ragini’s name.
She turned to sanskar and saw him pouting
Swara: what happened??
Sanskar: my cheeks are still crying!!
Swara: oh! Let me help..

She leaned towards his cheek and pinched it hard.
Sanskar: swara!!
Swara: I am not as sweet as meena. You know very well that I hate you.
Sanskar: I hate you too.
They heard Ayu greeting and shouting” ragini maasi”
Swara: come fast sanskar..we need to go..
Sanskar: yes swara otherwise this Lucky’s girl…he stuck his tongue out seeing swara’s angry face….sorry krish’s girl will see our death.
She smiled while sanskar forward his hand. Swara took support of him and both of them started walking.
The pages of the novel were still flying by the wind that blew from the adjacent window indicating that the whole book is not enough to write the love story of the hate couple.


NOTE: Being last episode , I know that many will comment ‘miss you’ and I won’t reject as I will also equally miss you but its a humble request from my side to give your opinion on this update too. I want to read genuine feedback of this episode. Sorry of I hurt anyone.

Credit to: Sree harini


    • Sree harini

      Thank-you snehahari for commenting from day one. To start another fiction, I need to think some beautiful story line and I guess it takes long time. But I will write for sure.

    • Sree harini

      Hmm..thanks dhara for being a active reader and commenter of this fiction. You have made a spl place in my heart dear.

  1. U said u will write 20 episodes!!!!
    These are only 18..
    Sree harani I wont tell u miss u coz u n this ff will alwayz be in my heart.
    Well, I want u to write 1 more ff on swasan..
    If possible!!

    • Sree harini

      I said that I will complete with in 20episodes. I must think for another plor dear. Even you will be in my heart forever.

  2. sonia

    you are ending it…… so soon!
    no…… i loved reading this ff…..
    gonna miss you a lot seriously…. thanks sree for it.
    hope to read another one from you soon.

    • Sree harini

      I cannot drag it anymore dear because the story looses its charm.and plaese don’t say thanks and being a sanskar fan you should never say thanks to a friend.

  3. Sree harini just wanted to ask..when swara asked her pa that did she had any attitude in her..?at that time pa replied no in a shivering way..why?

    • Sree harini

      Thank-you joya..I was literally waiting for your comment and it really means a lot to me. I am really sorry of I hurt you but trust me that wasn’t intentionally. Love you dear.

      • joya

        hey why r u saying sorry??????
        that was my opinion dear………
        bade bade desho me chhoti chhoti bate hoti rehti hai senorita…… (aisi chhoti baton ko dil pe lagaye itne chhote nahi hai hum…..hahahahaah……)

        stone hearted girl i m…….it’s not easy to hurt me….hehehehe just kidding dear…….
        but ur writing skill is superb………..

      • Sree harini

        Relieved…you really don’t know how I am feeling now. I regularly read your conversation in vini di’s fiction and seriously I keep checking hr update regularly just not to miss anyone of you but seriously I hardly don’t find any time on comment on it. You are really akind hearted one. Love you loads

  4. harsha

    Myself silent reader of your ff but so lazy to type comments but has last episode i have to appreciate you….really its worth for searching you’re ff and reading…all the best for what ever in future you’re upto…

    • Sree harini

      Thanks harsja for breaking your silence and letting me know that you were a silent reader. Really felt happy and overwhelmed reading your comment.

  5. Varu

    Nice .. yaar I’m ur regular reader .. Ur awesome dear…its perfect … it doesn’t feel us dat ur draging it or moving fastly… it’s really good.. u hav good writing skill yaar . Don’t stop writing… re enjoys us by writing another ff..
    And u very well know how to attract d readers by ur wonderful writing skill…

    • Sree harini

      Seriously…but I think many writers here are more blessed in writing. Anyways thanks for your lovely comment and I have seen your comments regularly.

  6. aashi

    it was awesome dear…as i had told uhh..all words are less for uhh..SUPERB ending…sanky with wrinkles….haha…it was so funny to imagine him like that..lol…n the I HATE YOU…i loved it….it was beautiful…loved it dear
    n m bit confuse about line lucky girl and krish girl part….but i enjoyed reading this..hope u will start your next ff soon
    BESt of luck for n gonna miss uhh dear

    • Sree harini

      Lucky’s girl is because ragini was his lover but later she got married to krish and so she is krish’s girl. I hope you got your answer and I am really gonna miss you aashi.ha-ha sanskar with wrinkles…I haven’t imagined him while writing but I am ROFL after reading your comment.. Love you dear.

    • Sree harini

      Thank-you darsh.I know this word is less to express my feelings bit seriously right now I am unable to think of anything.

  7. sweety

    Hi!!!! Harini
    Actually I am a silent reader of your fictions yaar but today I can’t be silent anymore…….just loved your fictions yaar…..even your previous fiction Limitless Love was awesome… Sorry !!! At that time I didn’t commented but today I was not at all able to stop my self from commenting….. U just rocked!! Loved ur fiction….
    Specially the end was awesome…..
    One more thing…..every time ur title will be justifying ur story……..just loved it…

    • Sree harini

      Overwhelmed with your words dear and I am glad to know that you were silent reader of my previous fiction.please don’t say sorry dear.regarding ending, I have planned it before writing the first episode itself.

  8. L Khan

    Woww a very very nce ending we will really miss u…..u write very nicely I just love ur writing skills plzz come back soon with a new ff ???????

  9. hadi

    Another wonderful end with a great n awsum lesson that people are not bad but there behavior are good or bad which decided the personality u r just a fabulous writer dear whole ff describes ur brilliant writing skills keep writing but as u said we all miss u plz dear come soon wid another wonderful story I am waiting as u r d one writer who don’t Want us to wait for her ff … πŸ™‚ live long life n plz come soon dear with lots of love n wishes … hadi <3

    • Sree harini

      Hadi…finally your name. Seriously I am jumping like a small kid now.and yes that was the message I tried to convey. I am not getting words to say thank-you bit God seriously dear I am honored. Love you loads.

  10. Ashrita

    Fabulous Sree!!! Gr8 ending… You are a fantastic writer, these are words from my heart…. Hope to see another ff of yours very soon… Till then will miss ur writings…tc dear

  11. Jwala

    It was a shock reading this epi to get to know that this is the last epi ……i really luv ur ff . uf way of writing can easily reach everyone’s heart …i wish to read another story written by u……and .i really don’t have any words to express my views …and thanks a lot for writing such a wonderful cute hate story………….
    With lots of luv
    JWALA ……..

    And. I am gonna miss this story….?

    • Sree harini

      I am angry with you now…why did you mention your name?? Uhh? I don’t need any explanation for that now because you are in my heart and I can easily recognized your comment. Well coming to your comment, I am overwhelmed seeing that my writings reach your heart which I thought I was poor at. And …what!! Thanks. I am again angry now.

  12. I was thinking to make a movie with this..!! Will you object..?? Hehee… just kidding… it’s a filmy ending but I loved it yaar..!!

    • Sree harini

      Seriously.. Then I don’t object but will suggest you to look at other fictions as they are really better than mine. Vini di’s is perfect example for that. Anyway it shows your love dear.regarding ending, I tried to make it natural but it turned out filmy.

  13. Roja

    wow it’s simply superb
    i really miss this ff
    thank u sree harini for giving a wonderful ff
    the title exactly implies the story other than swaragini serial
    i also want to read one more ff on swasan
    all the best…

    • Sree harini

      Thanks roja. I think this is your first cment on fiction. I am glad that you loved my fiction and I have justified my title.

    • Sree harini

      Ayyo…I will dear but need some time to think about the plot and also this is end of academics . I need to concentrate on my studies even. Thanks dear.

    • Sree harini

      Kittuu.. I have got to know that you are a swalak fan by reading your comment on one of the fictions of this page. Inspire of being a swalak fan, you have read and regularly commented on this and this itself is a honour to me. Gonna miss you.

  14. Fantastic,awesome,fab,ending i will miss u a lot this ff was mine 1 of favourate ff but im confused abuot lucky’s girl & krish girl but all ur 18episode were heart touching &&& plz write another ff plz love it miss it everthing

    • Sree harini

      Thanks tanu. Lucky’s girl because ragini was laksh’s lover. Krish’s girl because she is married to krish. I hope your confusion got cleared.thank-you so much for loving my fiction and commenting regularly. Miss you.

  15. Tania

    Ur ending was a bit filmy, but I love filmy things. It was a very nice story. Surely we will miss u. Hope to see u with another one.

    • Sree harini

      I tried to make it real but it ended in filmy way. Thanks Tania for being a regular reader of my previous fiction too. Love you so much dear and gonna miss you equally.

    • Sree harini

      Thanks xxxx but reky expected a lengthy comment from you. Thank-you so much for being a true encourager dear. Gonna miss you.

    • Sree harini

      Fransi…I used see this name regularly in my previous fiction. Missed you a lot dear..I am really feeling happy seeing your comment.

  16. muski

    plz i cant except this
    now m more crying seeing the end then rest of the episodes
    bt it was as amazing asa always
    will seriously miss u
    and jst loved ur ff

    • Sree harini

      Oh please don’t cry…I don’t even have any hanky to give you dear as they got completed during laksh’s death episode…lol…I am really going to miss your comments so much..and please don’t cry as I cannot see my friend in tears.it worries me a lot.

      • muski

        i want u to be back wid another swasan ff only then i will not need hankey
        i ws really addicted to it and ill miss it badly

        as u called me a friend so i expect this from u right…

      • Sree harini

        I will for sure but not now. Exams are going to start from this Monday and seriously God only knows when they are going to end.

    • Sree harini

      I have replied for three times but it got bounced dear. Miss you so much musky..please don’t cry..I don’t even have a hankt to give you as I fell shortage of them after laksh’s death episode. Please don’t feel bad as I cannot bear tears in my friend’s eye.you were a true encourager dear and had commented from first. Gonna miss you and love you loads.

  17. maya

    I have raeaden ur all episode awsomr u have great future dear plz write another one hands of 2 or novel dear

    • Sree harini

      Thanks Maya.novel…are you serious?? Only few are eligible dear and I am sure that I won’t be in that list. Anyways thanks for your love.

  18. Omg sudden twist in the story and u have ended it so soon.. im in shock sree… short nd lovely cute story.. and their reunion especially their old age, novel writing passion of sanki… and im expecting anothr ff from u… vry soon.. and u perfectly fit in fiction category author.. u always try to give the bst.. bye tc.. and btwn strdy nite till 1.30 i waited for 17 epi.. bt latre slept with sadness in my heart.. frm ep 1- 18 contiunity of story,importance of relation love all made me to read ur ff with love nd eager.. bye sree

    • Sree harini

      Oh God!! Did I do any black magic on you..I guess no..lol…I am glad to know that you waited till late night for my fiction. I have planned this episode even before thinking of first episode . I really wished to see varun kapoor playing a lecturer role because he looks good in formals and finnaly I fulfilled it through my story.. I think you are happy now because you were worried in epi 16 about swara seducing him. I won’t let her do that because this fiction is completely based on my mind set. Many words of the leads are my options. Miss you sooooo much. Love you loads.

  19. alle

    Sree harini?????

    I don’t know u remember me r not but I comment on u r last ff “limitless Love…”
    Actually I don’t know how to start..
    Nenu me last ff regular ga chadividani But last part chadavaledu coz festival busy but taruvata chadivanu kani comment cheyaledu
    After that nenu koncham busy ga undatam tho asalu telly update page kuda open cheya ledu but yesterday n8 onwards i m back with my normal routine soo…….
    Today mrg tellyupdate fanfiction open chesanu But naku ani kotaga kotha titiles kanapadutunai……. Coz of longgggggg gappp
    So edo okati chaduvudam ani chstunte me ff ki previous link tho undatam chusi open chesanu that is 17 part of a hate story firt i go through that 17part and at the end i saw credits to sree harini ani chusi shock
    Sree harini di new ff start ayinda……..?ani shock and slowly go to u r first part of u r ff and then i relaised its same harini
    after few sec i m really very happy and i curse my self y i miss all this remaining 16ff in these days……
    Once again superrrrr ga rasaru…..
    In one ff lak bike riding episode chaduvutu unte ala kalla lo nellu ala vastunay chaduvu tu unte blur avtundhi vision superb narration e ff lo kuda sad story of rag lak anipinchindhi but title its self is swasan so…. I can i understand but plzzzzzzzzz inko ff ral lak happy story narrate cheyandi ma kosam plzzzzz……
    I like that line lucky’s girl
    Actually nenu swasan ki big big fan ni kani me ff’s taruvata raglak ki fan aypoyanu……..
    So if possible onestory on raglak plzzzzz…….

    Nd coming to todays episode no need to say superb coz it’s already superb but me story lo narration hi light kalla ki kanapadtu untadi…..
    ento ento rasanu sorry me time waste chesinandhuku
    And wating for u r next new story

    All the best

    • Sree harini

      Kodata ninnu..last fiction lo miss you ani cheppu appude marchipotana. Infact Nenu Ne comment kosam chala wait chesa and please I am a young girl so antha respect avasaram ledu. Nuvvu ante Chalu. Oh so you have enjoyed your festival nicely. Belated makar sankranti dear. Thank god that Nuvvu na fiction open chesav lepkapothe I would have missed you and you would too. Laksh death episode roju almost andaru adey annaru and really trust me, I never expected it. Chala happy undi that Nuvvu anni episodes chadivavu. Even I love the lone Lucky’s girl. Actually Limitless love epi 38 daggara naaku ee thought occhindi and so rasanu but raglak story ante I need time to think moreover idi academics ending kada..studies mefa concentrate cheyyali. And finally coming to narration, I thought that I was not good at this but you all people made me to accept. But according to my pov, meeru oohinchukuntunnaru kabatti…mere great….I am angry in you now..already previous fiction lo cheppa kada that time waste chesanu lantivi cheppaku ani.infact this is my first lenghty comment dear. Please stop respecting me and you have a special place in my heart. Don’t forget that. Love you loads and gonna miss you to the hell…alm the best for your future. Inko two days, I will be active on this site. If you want to chat then you can.

  20. Needhi

    Hi sree, i just read all the episodes in one go.had practicals and viva , so didn’t get time to read it.oh god ! a beautiful journey has came to en end.it really feels bad. Hope to see u with some other ff.I just loved this ff.i lived each and every emotion of this ff and it wast just heavenly and miraculous.Last episode has managed to cast a spell on me in a way , that i have taken snaps of it.Hats off to u.A big thank u or i should say a beer hug to u for such a fantabulous and incredible work.i will miss u yaar.my heart sank to deep pain after knowing that it is last episode. May god be with u and bless u by granting all your wishes.May u achieve all your dreams and excel in your life.Good Bye. hope to see u soon my friend.

    • Sree harini

      Had waited desperately for your comment. I thought that you have stopped reading because of exams but finally…you commented. BTW how was your exam dear? What!! Did you really take the snaps of this episode. Quote shocking for me I mean I never thought that I would turn into such an impact writer and really I have some special place for you in my heart as our philosophies meet most of the time. I will literally puch your nose of you day thank-you.thanks for your wishes and I wish you the same. Love you to the core dear and I am gonna miss you to hell.

  21. angel

    i loved it a looooot…..i had never expected such a perfect ending….great job….love u loads….i m gonna miss u………

    • Sree harini

      Miss you too angel. Your comments were encouraging as you are. Thanks for this lovely comment. A the best to you dear for your fictions.I got to know your excitement and love after seeing the first line..lol..love you dear.

  22. shazia

    hello shree.. simply ur all ff are supperrrb dupperrrb, fantastic, amazing yar… Infact no words for ur beautiful plot yar… short nd lovely cute hate story… i hope u r back with ur new ff which gave us a broad smile…
    nd i must say if uhh waana to become a writer thn u will become a great Writer yar… dnt mind it yar plzzz i jst think lyk that… thats why i tell uhh…
    nd lastt one thing miss uh nd ur ff so plzz come with ur new ff yar..
    Keep Writing keep Rocking dear..
    Tk cr dear.. mayy god bless uhh nd uh reach all da Appinesss in ur life bye…
    Hope to see uhh soon dear…

    • Sree harini

      Thank-you soooo much for this lovely comment. At first I used to feel a bit awkward listening that I have good skills in writing…I still believe it but became habitual as you all are saying it..I will definitely try to come back with a fiction. Miss you so much and u made a special place in my heart by your regular comments. I will be available for one more day on this site..so you can talk to me. Miss you soon much.

  23. swathi

    hi i was one of ur regular reader of ur ff limitless love…i didnt read dis ff still knw so i didnt comment i didnt knw that ur writing….sorry for that but i read all 18 epi n i totally enjoyed…ur a fabulous writer…miss u dear n love u…i hope u remember me…

    • Sree harini

      Seriously.. If you would have been infront of eyes then I don’t know what I have done to you. How did you think that I will forget you dear. I have mentioned miss you in that fiction and I really mean it. Glad to know that you read all episodes without fail. Love you dear and please don’t say like this. It hurts me.

      • swathi

        hey plz i was just joking i knw u wont forget me… sorry baba…next time pakka i wont hurt u in any of my words….n i want to know if u r writing any other ff…if not plz write ff on ragsan..humble request…

      • Sree harini

        It’s okay dear..I was just kidding. Not now as I don’t have any story in my mind presently but will surely consider your request. Love you loads.

      • swathi

        well..thats okay…i was not able to reply u on time i am really very busy…exams r cuming so sorry for that…what ru studying knw???

  24. dolly

    Loved it very much ..please start a new fan fiction now..ur story is different also and just amazing….

  25. vaishnavi

    Hari akka….wat yaar I know u will end ur ff soon but didn’t thought today itself….u made me cry again…awesome, mindblowing, superbb, fabulous, extraordinarynd wat not……naa studies gurinchi adigavu kada nenu intermidiate 2nd year chaduvutunnanu I mean 12th class , naaku telusu nennu nee kante chinna ani but I donno u like listening akka…when I got to know ff ended …so srry akka …but u always be in my heart as a frnd nd sister…kudirithe vere ff start cheyyi…nenu ninnu miss avanu bcoz nuvvu eppudu naa thoughts lo untavu…

    • Sree harini

      Hello vaishnavi…chala episodes tarvata Ne comment…literally feeling happy.sorry ninnu edipimchinanduku. And yes Nuvvu na kante Chinna and I really love to be called sister infact nakku okka sister matrame undi and rest all are young to me.Nuvvu kids eppatiki na heart lone untav. Serious ga. Love you loads vaishu. All the best for your IPEexam, practicals and EAMCET even. Baaga rayi.

  26. Shraddha

    I donno wat to say because wen I reached bottom I had a wide smile on my face!!!!! But suddenly it went all blank ……… I honestly dinno that u had planned only 20 episodes but u know what all u said in 18 episodes left a very impactful impression!!!!!
    I really like Hate converted to love stories….. N u portray dem very well that’s what makes ur ff Enticing!!!!!
    Well all I would like to say is great job do much more such work because u are loved by many!!!
    That’s because u give us Limitless Love so we are bound to give back the limitless love!!!!
    I hate to see ends but i will love the fact that u will come up with one more …..c u soon Ms Limitless Love!!!

    • Sree harini

      I thought of many things while reading your comment but the last word’ Limitless love’ has made me to forget everything. Now again I have scrolled up and read your comment again to reply. Seriously shradda..the way you say it is so acffeconate that it rejuvenated me always. I am spell bound by your love dear. I don’t know why but I got connected to your very first comment on my fiction and never missed your conversation on vini di’s fiction.you are really a good and true friend and seriously..your words reflect your heart. I am really glad and honored that you felt my fiction impact ful..your comment made my day.and to say frankly I don’t know the meaning of enticing as I am poor at vocabulary but still I will Google it out . love you to the core of my heart for no reason shradda..oops i don’t even whether you are shradda or shradda di but your name has a special place in my heart. Please don’t think that I am buttering but these are the words of my heart which never came out till date.all the best dear.

  27. jaf

    Sree i m angry now… I write so well… & end it vry soon why??… Plz write more or i’ll die out of suffocation. Coz when evr i suffocate i read ur ff…..

    • Sree harini

      Oh!! Tension…tension…what should I do to lessen your anger now? But ate you serious that my fiction will reduce your suffocation..lol..thanks for your love dear. I had planned to end at 18th episode earlier only.

  28. nive

    superbbbbbbb…. superbbbbbbb…..i love this hate story … it was really awesome…. sree you are such an excellent writer… as a reader i loved this lot… its a perfect story… i thought you end at 20th epi… anyways pls comeback with new ff…

    • Sree harini

      Thank-you so much nive. Felt happy seeing your name. Thanks for such lovely words and I will surely consider your request but sorry I cannot comment more than this as it is time for SWARAGINI time.

      • Sree harini

        Thank-you so much dear for regularly commenting.regarding episodes, I have prepared this.love you loads dear and I am gonna miss you badly.

  29. Taani

    Awesome plot sree harini. hats off to u….. really awesome. dis is the 1st ff I’ve read continously vth much eager. My eager increased day by day. loved ur ff sooooooo much. I was always a silent reader. Bt 2day I can’t stop myself frm commenting. really gonna miss ur ff dear. luv u lots…… Tq so much for given this wonderful update of ur ff….. may God bless u dear….

    • Sree harini

      Thanks taani for breaking your silence and I am glad to know that you read every episode with enthusiasm. Thank-you soo much for your wishes and I too pray God to fulfill all your wishes and demands in your life. Stay blessed dear.

  30. Likhitha

    Hey it was just awesome!!!! I can’t find more words than that…But u r an amazing writer…I must say this…A really really amazing writer….I never heard about hate confession…Just read in this epi for the first time… πŸ˜‰ Seriously this story is really hilarious….with this I would suggest you wattpad…Try it..And I’m damn sure u would get thousands of reads over there…May be even more….I really appreciate ur work….Keep going…I hope u would continue writing…I think it is ur passion and that line in this epi was stuck in my mind….Passion cannot leave us while profession can….hahah…I have no words left… πŸ™‚ Hope to see you again.. πŸ™‚

    • Sree harini

      This is not my passion actually. I just penned down the ideas of my heart . well thankyou for your wonderful and lovely comment.no yaar I cannot even think of writing on those sites cause the writers there are really worthy but it shows your love. I am happy to read that you found my fiction hilarious I guess initial episodes. I will definitely consider your request and will be back.

    • Sree harini

      I think I should play a tape to everyone not to say thanks. Arey navi..you are one of my friends and please don’t break it by staying thanks.infact I must thank-you as u have read and encouraged me through comments .miss you.

    • Sree harini

      Thanks mona for supporting me silently till now.thank-you so much for your best wishes and wish you the same.

  31. Harani

    Really it was something beyond expectations and at last quiet sad about the last episode but wat to worry for u have already placed urself in my heart by ur stories and by the characters u portray…no negative vibes only emotions ..love …care found everywhere in ur ff ..waiting for ur ff ..don’t think I am just saying these sentences to show off but I really mean that ….but please write a story if possible πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ :-)I thought like limitless love u would continue this for many episodes but sugar candies never need to be enormous even a little bite gives u complete feel of its sweetness ur ff is one such …bye take care shree

    • Sree harini

      No dear..I won’t think anything as such and seriously your comment touched my heart . your last sentences were true and this fiction was a random idea but never expected it turn into a successful one. Yeah..Limitless live was big as I need to introduce every charecter but here it doesn’t require. You have mentioned about negatives right…actually I hate antagonists because they look good only in serials or movies and according to my pov, one should always try to show some good and inspirational things to the society instead of crap. Hence I never crossed the limit of romance in my previous fiction and didn’t even include it here. This fiction is completely based in my mindset and many words of the leads are my own thoughts. Simple..the things made my fiction free of negativity. Sorry for this lenghty update but I know that you won’t feel bad. Love you so much harani and equally miss you to the core.all the best for your future dear.

      • Harani

        tanq Dr I really didn’t expect this sweet response from you .and yes love u loads …ur mindset hats off …even u don’t like negative vibes in ur ff u r so sweet πŸ™‚

  32. Tanvesha

    I thought there r gonna be 20 episodes.n I wish the story wudnt end..
    Bt the way u summed up the story was superb indeed..!! Each episode was superb n unique in its own way.. πŸ™‚ but hey who is krish…lyk ragini’s husband??

    • Sree harini

      Hi tanvesha..has seen your name twice I guess..the number of episodes were pre planned dear.thanks for your beautiful words to describe my story. Yes ragini is married to krish..miss you.

  33. Aditi Singh

    sree we r really gonna miss u I have read ur full ff n u know I love each n every line no word actually the way u write is epic u r an amazing writer…
    sree will u write 1more ff????

  34. Sree harini

    Hello aditi..thanks for being a regular and commenter on my fiction. Thank-you for your wonderful words about my fiction and regarding another fiction, I need some time to decide the plot dear. Miss you so much.

  35. Jwala

    awww ..my cutie is angry with me …..what will i do ?? ……don’t think that i will say sorry ..because,,,,,,1st rule in friendship “no sorry ..no thanku” and dear those who know me can easily understand my comment ………because there will ………..be ……..milllions……..of …………………..fullstops….. πŸ˜› …..i don’t know when i will start this habit while writing too …………………………………………….during my exams ………………..and if i did so my teacher will like…………what the hell did u do in this anwersheet …………… πŸ˜‰ ………………………………
    take care cutie ……………i luv a looot ( infinity) ……..bff

    • Sree harini

      It’s not because of full stops dear. I can understand it by your words and yeah..even I am not expecting any sorry from you being a sanskar fan….even I scold my friends who say sorry and thanks but you know what….I will be the first person to say that.so my friends regularly tease me and I will end up saying that only I have the rights on those two words..lol…what!! Seriously…you write like this in your exams?? Crazy girl.love you too…double infinity..take care..bfffff

      • Jwala

        yeah ………………oohh u just can uderstand my comment just by reading my words …..that’s awesome …………………. it happens with me too i always says sorry for each and everything ………….well it happens…….and guess wht ………..every1 ………….will start teasing me …………….but ,,,,,,i luv their teasing tooo …………it will be damn funny ………….
        luv u infinty raised to infinity …….and i will take care ………………..best sissy foerever …….

  36. Priya

    Awesome yaar but next ff fast and give imp to both swasan and raglak like before limitless love best ff

    • Sree harini

      No need to swaer dear..I can sense my silent readers and thank you so much for living my fiction silently.

  37. Oh its just fab! You did a great job ! Seriously i also feel marriage is a sacred relationship , a good ending for swasan, i ll miss u & ur ff n one more thing ,i have a doubt who was krish? Did ragini marry some other boy named krish? Ya i also wanted her to marry someone n move on in life ,plz just clarify my doubt,thanx for the lovely ff thanx a lot.

    • Sree harini

      Thank-you do much anam. I am really gonna miss you a lot….yes marriage is something beyond all relationships. Yes ragini is married to some other as no one in life will stuck to any situation..I want to show it and I did it in case of ragini. Hope your doubt got clarified. Love you dear.

  38. sindhuja

    hi hari!!!! sorry for the late comment. I just finished reading the updates. i got little busy with my projects. regarding updates, as usual you nailed it. awesomeness overloaded. feeling good to know that ragini had moved on in her life. perfect ending. you penned it so well. I got some doubts in previous update and got cleared. way to go girl!!! love you, dear!! good luck!!!

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