Swasan happy ending (Intro and Epi 1)

Hi gus I am Ankur and I am a big fan of Swasan so I am going to write m first ever ff.Hope you will except it from bottom of your heart.Please leave comments if you like my ff.Please forgive me as I will only write on saturday and sundays.

Here we go:
Dr.sanskar is a famous 27 year old cardiologist but he treats patients having minor diseases too.His parents live in U.S as his father is a business tycoon and own his company named Maheshwari group of companies.(Sanskar lives in India)
Swara is an aspirant teacher who wants to empower the next generation.She is an orphan having no siblings.Her late parents were very rich and wealthy and now after their death all theit property goes to her name.So,now at this time Swara is an aspirant teacher,a business tycoon and a very humble and childish 25 year old girl.

When Swara was 25 year old her mother and father died in an accident,their faithful widower P.A helps Swara to face this mean world and made her strong enough so that she can handle her family business transaction.At a very young age she used to handle her family business.
After tragic death for her parents,she used to live in a very big mansion having lots of servants.But in spite of that she never became arrogant or greedy.She is very down to earth and leads a simple life.
One day Swara’s stomach starts aching .She ignored that for a week or so as it was a very minor ache but that day it grew and start aching very badly.She went in her simple pink chudidar to Sunshine hospital.Her secretory had already fixed an appointment on Swara’s name and the doctor who was going to check and treat her is none other than Dr,Sanskar.
Precap:
Swara’s fear of injections and Sanskar slowly starts falling far Swara.

Guys please tell me whether you liked my concept or not.

Credit to: S.Ankur

33 comments

  1. kanupriya

    Bht Hi bkwas h…dr sanskaar..
    .n bla bla….huh….no greed..nothing….what is this…it will be boring..so go away and don’t write it…

    • kanupriya there are people in the world who are very rich but are not greedy…if you dont like this ff dont read it…no one is forcing u…just because u dont like he/she will not stop the ff…so please…

    • Vidhi

      My dear friend…maybe u have never written a ff…or ever commented that why u don’t know how to comment and what to comment…..honestly asking…don’t u know how to behave? How can u say such things? Dear…don’t write a ff ever cause people won’t read your one….after reading this comment….TRY TO RESPECT OTHER’S VIEWS…..ATLEAST TRY…..

    • I was crying in my heart when I read your comment but I am surprised as well when you confessed that it was a trick.Anyways whatever it was I am glad that you expressed your thought Kanupriya. Thanks all the other readers for giving me that much love and affection,it meant a lot to me.

      • kanupriya

        Ankur it was a trick..iam crazy for swasan..then there is no point of hating them and their fan fiction..i just said that to build your confidence…your story is nice…and I like it obviously …am sorry if I hurted you..i didn’t meant that…

  2. Shut up kanupriya read it if you want dont discourage others .it is not a rule that buissness people should selfish and greedy there are many buissness men and women who are selfless.so tuink before you talk.there are six like comments and one hate comments including mine seven like comments.no one is begging fkr you to read.

  3. kanupriya

    Sorry guys..it was trick..as many silent readers don’t comment, I used this trick..n see now many people supported Ankur….this was to build his confidence…am a swasan lover forever..den how can I hate them….never ever….it was just a trick…ankur see everyone supported you and your story..so go ahead..its really a nicer story.. …n all the best

  4. Thanks to all the readers of my ff for supporting me.I will write a longer episode next time for sure as I am posting it only on sat and sun due to my tutions and class 12 studies.Please silent readers convey your thoughts too.☺

  5. just curious…but at the end the pairs will be swasan and raglak right…you wont interchange the pairs right…by the way you have not introduced ragini, laksh and all other cast….will they be introduced or is this a swasan only ff….please reply…

    • No it is Swasan ff only but I will introduce ap,sujata,bade papa etc too.As per the requirement I will introduce Raglak. By the way ,Sanskar’s family will be introduced soon.Thanks for your comment.

  6. randheer sha

    hey smriti nice start dear but plese make a bit longer epi ok dear
    @ kanupriya what a crazy idea yarr ha..ha.. ha.. ha

    • I am sorry Randheer Sha,I am going to end my ff as I converted it into a 6 shot due to the fact that this website does not approve my idea of using hindi in my episodes and I can’t tolerate insult of our India’s mother tongue.I know the fact that not each and every people in India uses Hindi but I do and felt hurt whenever someone make fun of my hindi language.It is not that I can’t write them in english but I always prefer to use Hindi.I am sorry if I spoiled your mood with my comment and sudden decision of ending the ff.I hope as a girl you will understand my feelings.

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