Swasan….. Give me your hand to hold episode 57 (sorry but 2nd last episode )

So here is the next part…
At about 4: 30…
Swara wakes up… She smiles to see her love… Sleeping… She gets up and sees her hands… Mahendi dried… She smiles and goes to wash it… Here sanskar who was sleeping with quite difficulty…. Feels swara is no more sleeping on her lap so he opened his eyes and can’t find swara at room…
Sanskar (sleepy voice) : swara…
‘Han ‘ sanskar sees swara coming from washroom… She has changed her dress in long kurti and legins also….
Swara comes and sit beside him…
Sanskar : kaha gayi thi???
Swara (excited) : close your eyes..

Sanskar frowns… And gives a why look…
Swara : arey do na…
Sanskar sighs and closes….
Swara : now open…
Sanskar smiles seeing the deep mahendi in her hand… It’s deep like it showing no other color can’t be deep like this…
Sanskar cares her palm… And kiss it… Swara smiles…
Sanskar : you know sanskar… All say that mahendi ka rang jitna deep hota hai uski pati usse utna payar karta hai….
Sanskar pulls her and takes her in embrace : koi shaq???
Swara pecks his cheek and nodes in no… Sanskar smiles and cares her cheek…
Sanskar : now sleep…

Swara lies on bed sanskar hugs her tightly…. From side and nuzzle his face in her shoulder… Swara smiles and starts to cares his hair… Both dozed off with big smile on their face….
Next day…
Swara Ragini uttara… 3 brides are walking in corridor giggling and gossiping…. Because they have no work… Rest all Are busy in arrangements of sangit… Suddenly trio heard something… Which is coming from sahil’s room…. Trio goes there…
They sees… Sanskar and sahil is sitting and laksh is hanging around…
Sanskar : arey yaar look today is sangit… Then tomorrow morning kuldevi puja then next day is our marriage… When will we do bachelor’s party…
Trio like 😱😱😱😱(whispered) : bachelor’s party… 😠😠😠😠
Laksh : idea… Array tomorrow morning is kuldevi puja na… Night is free…
Sanskar goes to him kiss his cheeks : wow lucky… You are too good… 😁😁😁😁
Lucky makes faces… Then their eyes falls on sahil… Sanskar and laksh sits either sides of sahil.
Sanskar : arey vai what happened you???
Sahil : arey yaar… What will we tell to our brides… πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
Laksh : han yaar… They are such a devils….
Swaraginiutt : we devils??? 😑😑😑😑
Sanskar starts to laugh…
Laksah : what’s funny in this…

Sanskar : arey… You both are joru ka gulam… How much you both are afraid of your wives πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Laksh : huh…. Look who is saying if swara gets to know na then…. You are gone 😏😏😏😏
Sahil : arey my wife is Cid officer… If I tell her na… She will give me one punch then I have to do marriage with plaster in hand… πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Uttara fumes in anger…
Sanskar : huh… I have no problem… I will go like this (walks in macho style…. Rab ne bana di jodi mein sahrukh khan jaise chal raha tha in macho style) then will say… Look swar…
Before he could complete He shocked to see swara Ragini uttara is standing at door… He fuse like leaked balloon…
Sanskar : sas… Sa… Swara 😨😨😨😨
Swara : (tight smile) arey sanskar… Why are you looking like this… Like you saw a ghost…
Laksh and sahil gulps and stands with sanskar…
Laksh (whispered) : ghost nehi devil… 😨😨😨
Ragini: laksh you said something… We can’t hear you…

Sahil : no… No… Nothing… 😨😨😨
Starts sweating…
Uttara : arey sahil ac is on… Then also you are sweating… Why?? πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
Sahil : wo wo…( Gulps…)
Sanskar : swara… Tum teeno ne kuch suna??? (said in fear)…
Swara :han 😠😠😠😠
Sanlaksah : what… 😲😲😲😲😱😱😱kya suna???
Ragini : yehi ki…
Sahil : ki…
Uttara : ki…
Trio gulps in fear…
Sanskar : ki…
Swara : ki jio sim aa gaye… But none told me😠😠😠… We have to register our names…
Sanlaksah : huh???… (then realized) Oh… 😧😧😧😧πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯
Uttara : what did you think???
Sanskar : nothing… Nothing 😁😁😁😁

Swaraginiutt : ok…
Trio left… And stand out side the door…
Sahil sits on sofa with thud… : barbar bache…
Sanskar also : han…
Laksh (excited) : so tomorrow we will go bluemoon pub…
Sahil : bluemoon pub??? 😁😁😁😁arey wahan to…
Sanskar : many hot cheeks use to come πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œ
Laksh : yes πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›that’s why I select that place 😜😜😜😜
Trio join hands and shouts : toh… Bachelor party is on… πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€… Yaaaaaa…
Sanskar : sssshhhh… Slowly
Trio laugh…
Here Swaraginiutt fumes in anger 😑😑😑😑and goes from there…

In uttara’s room…
Swara throw the pillow. : how dare he 😑
Ragini (greeted teeth) : hot cheeks 😑😑😑Han… Now just wait and watch how I make your cheek burn… 😑😑
Uttara : aaaauuuurrrrgghh… Uttara was wearing her punching gloves… And punch on the wall…
Swara : girls relax… They want hot cheeks na… Smirks evily…
Ragini and uttara understand and also Smirks trio gives hi fi…
At evening…
Swara Ragini uttara is getting ready…. Actually they are continually gossiping… So they forget about time…. They only wear their dress… Nothing else…
‘ arey you 3 haven’t get ready yet??? ‘…..

😭😭😭😭😭😭I wanna quit…. I am not getting time… I started write in morning cause today is holiday… But then my dance practice… And for some work I can’t complete… So I am thinking to end it next episode… I thought today itself… Cause I am hell angry…. With me… But for you all… I can’t…. Tell me how can I manage…. I have seminar also next week… Then one day out for factory visit… Our sir has arrange for us… Now tell me how I will complete…. I wanna quit… Please…. Upar se I am participating in an os competition which is for 5 weeks… This is 3rd week… Many of you read 2 os.. But you can’t recognized… That’s mine team… Me and one girl is with me… This week also I have to write… I can’t quit cause I can’t give up suddenly… If I give up that girl will
Also suffer…. I am sorry… Next epi will be my last episode…. Sorry…

23 comments

  1. chandu

    Take your own time dude…!!No need to quit…!! Post whenever you are free…!! End after completing whatever you have planned…!! Episode was superb…!!

  2. Madhu

    😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    Its ok dr we can understand u dr…..feeling sad to know that this is the second last part…..but we can understand ur problem also….
    Will miss u dr….😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞
    Sooo then wait fr last part dr😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞

    But part was awesome drπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
    Swaraguttu scene was soo funny drπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Soo meet u soon with next part dr….

    Love u loads😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž
    πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  3. Kakali

    Thank u dear for d chappy… in ur busy schedule u take ur precious time to write for us that’s really enough for us…. U want to end it…it’s ur decision… n i can understand ur problem… i can only pray to GOD for ur bright future… thnk u.

  4. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    It was a superb one …. I can understand your problem dear but there is no need to end ur ff in hurry
    ….. U know beggining and ending r the most important part of any story … And if u will end it in so much hurry den it will not luk gud … It will b lyk splashing water on ur hard work ….m reading ur ff since beginning but commented in just last few parts so may b u will not recognize me but pls don’t end it lyk this …… Take ur own tym nd update as tym permit but pls don’t get so panic ….. We will patiently wait for your updates ….. I know its quite a long speech but I just wrote whatever I felt I must tell u ….. BTW best of luck for os competition and other activities ….

  5. swarna

    God so much anger. Ok ok do ur work. Bt dnt 4get to tell ur name. R u subhi? N now abt chappy. It was ok ok type. Bt really our hero is a real hero. Gd job sanskaar.

  6. chanu

    Hey dnt end it.. if u cn plz continue it..its ok if u cnt. Bt give us a proper end.
    Keep writing
    be happy always

  7. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Loved d chappy bt too short…
    Nxt is last chappy 😱 how wil u show puja bchlr prty marriage n dan suhagraat πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ in one chapy??

  8. Arunika

    |Registered Member

    Its ok di…we understand but atleat plzz give us an epilogue after ur last epi…I wait 4 ur ff very eagerly….its one of my fav ffs so plzz!!!!
    Btw 2days epi was amazing as always!!!!

  9. Mica

    |Registered Member

    waaa.. A.S hectic day for you..ot’s OK if you want to end the story.. just concentrate on your life.. all the best for you..
    luv this part as always,, ty

  10. Sanswa

    Wats dis yr, epi just came in interesting n exciting mode, ur ff is making crazy n addicted day by day,n u wanna quit it, u don’t luv ur fan hnhn, dats nt fare yr,their is so many things DAT r not completed yet, like fun making bachelor’s party, swasan hot romantic suhaagrat, their marriage life wid full of romance n so many things, u can’t end it yr, its request from ur ff fans plzzzzzzzzz don’t end it so soon, at least make sanskar’s promise completed dat he’ll not let swara 2even breath at their marriage nyt plzzz fulfill dis request

  11. s

    nice..i knw it is really difficult for u to do so many things at d same time..lz do concentrate on ur study..it is imortant for ur bright future..
    bt dont end or quit ur ff or writing..
    i hv a suggestion for u..take ur own time..
    u can udate once in a week or month or whenever u r free..and if u r very busy den be irregular or u can also udate in small sections..
    u r an amazing writer..i love ur ff as well as os..tc..

  12. crazy princess

    no need to quot upload after u get tym we can wait but plz dont quit e love the storyline plzz continue we will support u

  13. sanya

    Its okey dear but I will miss you😒😒😒😒😒but promise me na that you will write another story of swasan story plzzzz

  14. Divyanshri

    |Registered Member

    😱😱😱😱😱😱NEXT LASTTTT CHAPTERRRRR…… NOoooooooooooooo
    πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™plz take one month Noooooo two month leap but plz dnt end this ff soon soon 😭😭😭😭😭😭
    rest ur wish….. I will seriously miss u

  15. ishu

    heyyy atleast don’t end plzzz wenever you are getting time then only write i knw it takes hour to write one epi you knw i always loved this ffff todays episode was quite enough to make laugh and happpyy

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