Swasan….. Give me your hand to hold episode 56 part a (mahendi special)

Kritika : choco… I can’t give more episodes it will be turn into a boring ff… Then you will tell me to stop… Thank you…
Nehapriya : yaa… Thank you… Tumhari bhukh mitani wali romance??? ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ I can’t give may be… ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚I will try…
Chandu : thank you for comments…. And i will.. I mean swasan will eagerly wait for you Chandu…
Helina : hey your name is so beautiful… I will try to fulfill your wish… Thanks di…
Rabia : thank you…
Sanya : thank you…
Pinkistar : thank you…. But why you called me funny?? No no don’t think I am hurt because I love to make people laugh…
Dharani : thank you…

Mou : no… I am living in purulia… Thank you…
Swarna : Agar 30 comments ki jaga 17 comments mile to kya karun batao??? Kiske liye likhu?? It’s OK… Thank you…
Serena : no dear…. If all comments na… Mujhe lagta hai ki Han main next part likhu… But if I get less comments… To Kiske liye likhu main batao?? Likhne ki i66a chali jati hai… Sahi tarah se comments mile toh main rat rat jag kar aap sab k liye part likhti hu… Par.. Khair chodo… Thanks for comments…
Madhu : even I will miss you all… Thank you…
Sny: thanks dear…
Greeshu : it’s OK… Concentrate in your exams… I will try to give romance.. Thank you…
Tweetypankaj : thanks dear…
Anuann : thank you…
Kakali : thank you… And extra thanks for your wish…

Sanjana : it’s OK sanju… I know you are busy in exam… Yes yes swasan will wait for you all… Thanks for your valuable suggestions…
Mica : thanks dear…
Chanu : ok… Don’t make this puppy face… And thanks for your wish… I will try to fulfill… Dress code??? Suspense is waiting for you all…
Arunika : thanks dear…
Romaisa : it’s OK dear… Thank you… Not for you only… There is many kiddo like you who is reading… So..
Shan : thanks di…. Can I ask you one thing… The romance scene I gave till now is that much intense??? I mean… Wo kya kids k liye thori jada ho gya tha???
Reethi : thanks dear… I will try to fulfill your wish…
Soujanya : thank you…
Arshaanya : thanks dear… I will try to fulfill…
Kyanat : thanks dear…
Simi : thanks dear…
Divyianshri : hey…. I will give pregnancy drama in my ff don’t worry…. And thanks dear…
Niya : thanks dear…
Saheli : thank you… Ami jata vebe6i seta ami debo kina seta parer part gulor comments er opor nirvor krbe…. So… Let’s see…. Thanks for comments…
Sanji : thanks dear ..

Now… To days episode is a big surprise for you all…. Tell me how is this???…. Surprise for them… Who commented in my previous part…. So are you all ready???…
So read….
So here is the next part….
Next day…

At morning…
Swasan is sleeping peacefully in each other embrace… And cuddling with each other… Swara is hiding her face more in sanskar’s neck… Which disturbed his sleep… He opens his eyes… And see swara half on him and trying to hide her face in his neck as sunray is disturbing her beautiful sleep…. Sanskar close the curtain with remote… Swara stops hiding and peacefully sleep in his shoulder…. Sanskar slides her hair and pecks her forehead… Swara smiles… Sanskar is admiring his beautiful wife… Then his phone rings… He immediately takes it and silent it first… He sees swara… Who is still sleeping… Sanskar takes her more in his embrace… Swara hugs him tightly in sleep…. Sanskar looks at the caller ID… It’s his mom….
Sanskar (takes the phone and very very very low voice) : han mom…
Ap : wo sanskar… One minute why are you talking in this much lower voice…
Sanskar looks at swara : wo mom… Swara is sleeping… Yesterday she came late… And she was very tired… So…

Sanskar heard many laughing voice from other side….
Ap : hahaha… I told you all she is with him… Look…
Shomi : sanskar… Wake her up and you both come….
Ragini : sanskar… Swara’s room is my room… I mean we are sharing a room… So from today let her sleep in our room ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Sanskar blushes…. Looks at her and cares her face….
Sanskar : look… I am not gonna wake her up… She was tired… So she Will sleep now… And mom… Ma… Please don’t disturb her… Ok I am coming let her sleep…
He cuts the call… Then placed swara on bed very carefully and also free himself… Then pecks her Lips and goes washroom to freshen up… Sanskar comes out and sees her sleeping and smiles… Then cares her hair and covers her properly by blanket and left the room… But by mistake he lock the door from outside….
At outside everyone is pulling his legs…
Sanskar : look guys… Swara is my legally wife… She will stay with me… Bas…and you all can say anything you want… I don’t care… Arey bhai apni biwi ko apne pass Rakh raha hu… Kisi or ki biwi ko nehi… Huh… ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Here in room…

Uttara comes… As she was tried as she had night duty last night… She is very tired…. She goes to her room and sits with thud on sofa… Suddenly she sees a glass of water in front of her face… She looked up and sees sahil… Uttara gets up…
Uttara : what are you doing here??!
Sahil makes her sit….
Sahil : wo I saw you… That’s why I came here to help my friend… ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€
Uttara : friends??? Wo kab hue??? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Sahil (smiles) : nehi hue??? Toh ab ho jate hai??? ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
He forward his hand : friends??
Uttara shake hands : friends ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Uttara : i will come after fresh up…
She gets up but suddenly hits her leg with table and stumble… Unfortunately she falls on sahil… Sahil mesmerized to see her close… Some hair was in front of her face… Sahil lock Them behind her ears… They have an eye lock… Which breaks by a voice ‘ uttara’…
Uttara realize her position and departs from sahil…
Khana enters the room and sees sahil there…. She sees uttara then sahil…
Khana (cold voice) : sahil… What are you doing here beta… Go in hall… Sanskar was searching you… Uttara you go and fresh up then sleep for sometime..
Both left… But sahil stops at the door… As khana stops uttara…
Khana (same voice) : uttu…

Uttara : yes Amma…
Khana : whatever is happening that’s result will be not good…
Uttara : what mom???
Khana : you are big enough to understand that…
Sahil sees khana is turning… He left… Khana also left room… Unknowingly some tears fall from uttara’s eyes…
Here at about 10…
Swara wakes up… She rubs her eyes and finds herself in a new place… She forget that she is in hotel… She gets scared…. Room is also a bit dark as sanskar off the curtain
Swara : sanskar…. Bhaiyu… Maa…
Swara goes to the door but it’s not opening… Her eyes fills with tears…
Swara (crying voice) : sanskar… Bhaiyu…
Just then sanskar enters in room…
Swara sees him and runs to him and hugs him…
Sanskar (worried) : shona… What happened??? Why are you crying… Anything wrong???
Swara : where are we??? Where did you go leaving me alone here… I was so scared ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข
Sanskar : hahaha… Swara you forgot we are in taj hotel… Wo you are sleeping na that’s why i didn’t wake you up…

Swara : yaa I forgot ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•(innocently)
Sanskar : ok now go… Fresh up…
Swara smiles and nodes…
Swara comes out with long anarkali dress… Sanskar mesmerized…. And goes to her… And wraps her by waist… And inhale her fragrance… Swara blushes…
Sanskar : madam… Why you always trying to kill me with your beauty…
Swara : sssshhhh… Sanskar…
Swara takes her vermillion…. Sanskar still in same position…
Sanskar : swara???
Swara : hmm…
Sanskar : why are you still now applying this?
Swara : what a stupid question is this Sanskar??
Sanskar : no I mean we are again getting married so…
Swara : so what?? We are already married… And I like to apply this… Because…
Sanskar : because???

Swara turns and cups his one cheeks by one hand looking straight in to his eyes….
Swara : because this two things (show her mangalsutra) marks me that I am yours…. It’s shows everyone that I am Mrs swara sanskar maheshwary….
Sanskar overwhelms by her answer…
Swara : why are starring at me… Make me wear this…
Sanskar nodes and takes those things and makes her wear them and kiss her forehead… Then swara’s phone rings…
Sanskar : huh… Lo agayi mere romance ki dushman ka phone…
Swara smiles : han ragu…
Ragini : if your and your romeo ‘s romance get over then please come down we have to go for shopping… Today is our mahendi…
At evening…. Mahendi function… All guest has appeared… Sanlak are looking so handsome… Sanskar in Deep violet Color sherwani and laksh in red color… Both are waiting for their beloved once… Just then…. Baishali Pari kids and uttara brings swaragini down…. Swara was wearing violet Color lahenga with violet Color velveted blouse and purple color trusperant dupatta…Ragini same but color is red and golden…. Sanlak are stunned to see them… Both bride feels their gaze and blushes…. Both bride seats… And ask shomi and Ragini’s mom to draw 1st…. They did same… Mahendi is going…
Ashwi : arey this is soo boring…
Avni : han bade Papa….

‘ then we are here na to entertain you all ‘some voice came from behind….
5 girl’s back shown all are wearing different colored anarkali suit….
All are shaking their body in the bit of starting music of song bumbro bumbro …
Then the girls turn… They are none other than swarna nehapriya sanju chandu divyianshri…
Swarna (dance) : bumbro bumbro.. Sum rang bumbro…
Bumbro sum rang bumbro…
Sanju (spreads her hand like welcoming) : aye ho kis bagiya se…
Ooooo…. Ooooo… Ooooo… Tum..
Neha : bumbro bumbro… Sum rang bumbro…
Bumbro sum rang bumbro…
Divyianshri :Aye ho kis bagiya se
Chandu goes to sanlak (dance around them) : aye ho kis bagiya se…
All 5 makes circle around them : Ooooo.. Ooooo… Ooooo… Tum…
All giggles and stand aside….
Then shanmati di comes…
Shan di hugs swara : bhabre oo sham ghore.. Khushio ko sath laye…
Helina comes from behind : mahendi ki rat mein tum leke Sougat aye….
Both hugs swara side wise…
Then Adarsh : ooooo kajal ka rang laye… Najre utar neko
Bag o se ful laye raste e sabar ne ko…
Serena and kakali with broad smile : haan kajal ka rang laye najre utar neko…
Bag o se ful laye raste e sabar ne ko…
Romaisa (comes from main door) : haan mahendi ki chhao mein geet sunaye…
Sanju swarna divyu neha chandu shan di kakali helina Serena comes at middle : bumbro…
Sanju : jhoome nachein saaz gayien, Jashn manaye bumbro…
All stands like a circle start to dance together and sings : Bumbro bumbro, shyam rang bumbro

Bumbro bumbro, shyam rang bumbro
Aaye ho kis bagiya se, oh oh tum
Then comes my choco and sush…
Both comes to swara and takes her hand almost completed with mahendi…
Sush : Khil khil ke laal hua mehndi ka rang aise….
Choco (pulls her cheek) :
Gori hatheliyon pe khilte ho phool jaisa…
All :
Bumbro bumbro bumbro bumbro
Arjun :
Ae, khil khil ke laal hua mehndi ka rang aise
Gori hatheliyon pe khilte ho phool jaisa….
Sanya rabia and dharani comes and side hugs shomi :
Yeh rang dhoop ka, yeh rang chhaon ka hai
Mehndi ka rang nahin, maa ki duaaon ka hai
Swarna neha kakali : s mehndi ka rang hai sachcha, baaki saare
All : jhoote…
Greeshu comes and cups swara’s face :
Haathon se ab mehndi ka yeh rang kabhi na
All : chhoote….
Madhu and pink star comes and gives thumkas.. : 0 bumbro bumbro, shyam rang bumbro
Bumbro bumbro, shyam rang bumbro
Aaye ho kis bagiya se, oh oh tum…..

Now all : o bumbro bumbro, shyam rang bumbro
Bumbro bumbro, shyam rang bumbro
Aaye ho kis bagiya se, oh oh tum
……
Chanu arshaanya comes : Chanda ki paalki mein dil ki muraad layi
Jannat ka noor leke mehndi ki raat aayi
Mehndi ki raat ayi…..
Anuann and mica comes to sanskar : Chanda ki paalki mein dil ki muraad layi
Jannat ka noor leke mehndi ki raat aayi
Mehndi ki raat aayi….
Here arunika mou saheli sits with swara :
Rukh pe saheliyon ke, khwabon ki roshni hai
Sabne duaayein maangi, rab ne kabool ki hai…. (hugs swara side wise)…
Sny, s, soujanya : Yeh haathon mein mehndi hai ya shaam ki daali, bumbro
Chaand sitaare rehkar aaye, raat ki daali….
Adarsh and Arjun : Oh chanda ki paalki mein dil ki muraad layi
Jannat ka noor leke mehndi ki raat aayi….

Romaisa greeshu chanu goes to swara then arunika mou saheli takes her to the middle stage :
Rukh pe saheliyon ke, khwabon ki roshni hai
Sabne duaayein maangi, rab ne kabool ki hai….
Simi niya comes with Ragini and laksh and kyanat sanji comes with sanskar on stage and makes standing with their respective pair : Yeh haathon mein mehndi hai ya shaam ki daali, bumbro
Chaand sitaare rehkar aaye, raat ki daal…
All 31 girls makes circle and starts dancing…. : Haan bumbro bumbro shyam rang bumbro
Bumbro bumbro, shyam rang bumbro
Aaye ho kis bagiya se, oh oh tum
Aaye ho kis bagiya se
Bumbro bumbro, oh oh tum
Bumbro bumbro, oh oh tum
Aaye ho kis bagiya se
Bumbro bumbro, oh oh
Bumbro bumbro

Aaye ho kis bagiya Se… . …
Swasan also starts dancing and enjoying with them….
After dance all shouts and laughs….
Swara : thank you soo much guys to come here and this day special for us….
Sanskar : we know that you all come here by taking some time from your busy schedule… Thanks…
Ragini : please enjoy yourself….
Laksh : and Han don’t forget to come in other functions. ..
( now give your reply by your self…. Thanks for coming dears…. I hope I can give equal importance to everyone… If not then tell me ok)
Now pari… Now sanskar and laksh will find their name in swaragini’s hands…

All claps…
Sanskar stands in front of swara…. And starts to find….
Laksh (seeing Ragini’s hand) : arey bhai kisne banaya itni buri mahendi… I can’t understand anything… Seems like insects walked in her hand and make this design…
Ragini : your face…. Nach na Jane angan teda… Huh… Leave it… You can’t do this…
Laksh : there is nothing in this world which laksh kapoor can’t do… I have found it…
Swasanrag looks at him. .
Swara : learn something from him….
Sanskar makes faces…
Ragini : a66a??? Where??? Show me….
Laksh winks at sanskar…
Laksh : why??? Now I got it you both can’t find that’s why asking us….
Sanskar : han…. Right….
Swaragini : what??? Look we know… Ok show us…
Sanskar : no how can I believe that you know?? I am sure you don’t know that’s why you are asking us…
All are suppressing their laugh ….

Laksh : yes you are right… If You know then show us….
Ragini : aaaauuuurrrrgghh…. You idiot… I know it’s your prank… Show us or accept your defeat…
Sanskar : no….i know you don’t know that’s why….
Swara (winks at Ragini) : ok don’t show…. I am going… Bye….
End

Precap : it will be a very small part with some drama (sahutt) and some masti

So guys I am sleepy… I hope you get bored very well… I also got bored while writing… Bye good night… Thanks for comments and reading

37 comments

  1. Mica

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    naughty couple and naughty peopple.. that too with naughty writer..
    am i singing ? i bet they got fainting to hear my voice.. ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
    luv it A.S.. ty

  2. sanya

    Amazing I love it but I wanted to hug sanky๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข

  3. SHAN

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    Wow superb…. Loved it…. No dr till now u didn’t give intense romance dr…. Its perfect….. I told no for hot romance dr…. ๐Ÿ˜ƒWow i hugged swara…. Its superb…. Surely will come for other functions too….. ๐Ÿ˜œ

  4. chandu

    wowww….!! I attended and danced in mehendhi ceremony….!! Yippi…!! Loved your surprise…!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
    Epi was superb…!! Waiting for next part…!!

  5. Madhu

    Wow awesome dr….really enjoyed it…..and thanks fr adding me in ur ff….๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  6. Simi

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    Oh my god… Unique swasan mehendi with their fans… ๐Ÿ˜€ Thanks for including us…
    Keep writing..waiting for the next update

  7. Kakali

    Wooooowww what a unique n beautiful episode!!๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š… ohhh god m smiling no no no not only smiling actually smiling widely..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š thnxxx a llllllooooooootttttt dear… enjoyed the chappy n function verrry much…n a biggggggg wala thnxx for inviting us n i would love to take part in other functions..((after all its all arranged by u,,how can i miss it))…this is d besstt surprise i could ever had … Mehandi function with SWASAN RAGLAK n all d family members…wooow!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜… God bless u dear…๐Ÿ˜™..

  8. Divyanshri

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    ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚what a shock Di…..epi was awsome….. thanks for the suprise invitation……
    n Pls dnt finish the story so soon

  9. swarna

    I m very very Happy. U give us equal importance to all BT thoda jyada mujhe se diye baki kya sochengeยฟ???????? Ha ha ha jokes a part. BT a.s. I want to hug our little devils. U will not believe me I was dancing lyk mad before read ur ff n when I read ur ff ha ha ha m so happy. Thanks thanks thanks to u infinite. BT I love the scene obviously our entry BT more than DAT mrng scene n swara’s fear face.BT a.s. 31girls performance DAT too group wow so so so awesome. Love u more than before. N surprise acha hai.

  10. Serena

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    I liked my part๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
    Well don’t think its boring I really enjoyed it n I didn’t wanted it to end๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข
    But koi nhi..n dear I can understand that how it feels when u type for 2-3 hrs n get less response…I know that coz m also a writer ..but don’t worry …n I know that u have soooooo many silent readers who wait for ur story eagerly so at least don’t loose hope for them

  11. swarna

    N m also want to mehendi in my hand. Kanjus a.s. Hume aise bhej diye ยน gulab jamun toh se deti
    Ha ha ha

  12. swarna

    Am man nhn bharega chahe jitna v comment karo ha ha ha. DNR worry we r enough to make u happy after all we 31 rocker girls.

  13. Neha_priya

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    Oh god you included us…. My god thanku dear u made me dance… ๐Ÿ˜‚ this is something I don’t do much…. ๐Ÿ˜œbut you made me dance in my swasan mehendi…. Thanku ๐Ÿ˜ you so much… N regarding romance ur romance is not vulgar.. It’s intense but in a way it’s needed btw swasan…. Are no pressure for adding more…. It’s just a leg pulling type…. Do write more….. Take care

  14. Pinkistar

    Haha good one thanks I was searching my name u have split it but ok again amazing waiting fr next part upload soon๐Ÿ˜Š

  15. Arunika

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    OMG!!!Thank u sooooo much A.S di for adding me in ur ff….I loved it soo much!!!
    Off course I wanna come for the other functions too…Swasan er biye ho66e & ami ashbo na….Impossible!!
    Btw it was simply amazing!!!

  16. Arunika

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    OMG!!!Thank u sooooo much A.S di for adding me in ur ff….I loved it soo much!!!
    Off course I wanna come for the other functions too…Swasan er biye ho66e & ami ashbo na….Impossible!!
    Amazingg!!!

  17. Sanji

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    when one by one came I was waiting for my entry”””nd u did it….thank u for give me the chance for bring sanskar on stage…..oh my god I touched him….he is so hot..:-) ๐Ÿ™‚

  18. Kritika

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    Such an awesome surprise it is sweetie!!
    I love u sooo much ร!!!
    Ur ff is just fabulous!!
    ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡Blessed to read it and meet uh!
    Loved it! Post soon!
    Love ya!๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  19. Romaisa

    Nice one โค๏ธloved it โค๏ธโค๏ธ thx that you took my name in you’re ff โค๏ธโค๏ธ you know my name in Urdu is Romaisa but we write it as Romesa and here also I’m writing it as Romesa in tu I didn’t write Romesa because I didn’t know what it was and which people where here but now I know a lot nice persons here I’m so glad that I have tu here also in Switzerland โค๏ธ can I ask you something ? What’s you’re name ??

  20. saheli ghosh

    love you dear….I loved it..dil garden garden ho gaya…u r so sweettt…and plzzz tumi ja ja vebechile tai likho..comment er katha vebo na..silent reader anek ache…so plzz carry on…

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