Swasan….. Give me your hand to hold episode 55

So here is the next part….

All return Kolkata….
1st all come to GM…
All are taking rest… Suddenly swara’s phone rings…
Swara : ok I am coming…
Sanskar questions her ‘where’ through eyes….
Swara gets up : ma I am going to hospital… I have some emergency cases…
Shomi : but beta… You are so tired… Take some rest…
Arjun : han sweety… You will fall sick…
Swara : no bhaiyu.. I have no time…
She runs upstairs to change… Sanskar shook his head… He also follow her…
Sanskar comes in her room… She was taking bath… Sanskar sits on bed….
Swara comes out…. And sees him…
Swara : sanskar… Please drop me in hospital na…
Sanskar sighs and gets up… Takes her dupatta which was on bed … She was wearing simple shalwar suit…

And slide her hair on her right neck and tie her back dori… Then gives a peck on her left shoulder and then slide her dupatta around her neck… Swara was just admiring him… Sanskar makes her turn
Sanskar : jana jaruri hai…
Swara pouts then nodes in yes… Sanskar smiles and pecks her pout…
Sanskar : come…
Swara takes her file and over coat and stethoscope… And runs behind him…
She comes at hall..
Swara : ma.. Mom.. Khana… Bhaiyu… Bhabi… I am going… Bye…
She was wearing her shoes… Pari and baishali comes running…
Pari hand over her a rolled paratha… And baishali gives her a full small bottle orange juice…
Baishali : raste mein dono kha lena…
Swara : par bhabi…
Pari : no par war… Now go…

At that time sanskar horn the car…
Swara hurriedly takes foods and kisses her bhabi’s cheeks… And left…
She gets in the car… And sanskar drives away…
On road swara takes the paratha in front of sanskar…
Sanskar : no swara you eat…i will eat later…
Swara : no… One bite please…
Sanskar takes one bite and swara eat the rest… At near hospital gate… Swara hurriedly untied her seat belt and about get out from the car …she reminds something… And pulls sanskar and gives a peck on his cheek and gets down and runs towards hospital door…
Sanskar (shouts) : shona… I will come to pick up you… Please call me when you go home…
Swara (while running) : han ok… Bye….
Sanskar (smiles) : pagal…

Here in GM…
Adarsh : bhai hall is booked…
Shomi : which hall…
Arjun (smiles widely) : taj Bengal…. For grand wedding of my sweety… Mamma.. Baishali.. Pari… Pack necessary things we will shift there today itself… Sahil you call in mm and Ragini laksh’s parents also and tell that…
Shomi cares her both son’s face…
Shomi : you both are the best brother in the world…
Arjun (teary eyes) : no mamma we are the worst brother… I made my sweety cry…
Shomi : sssshhhh… Chup… Everything is now shorted out na… Now don’t waste this tears… Warna… There will be no tear left for your sweety ‘s bidai…
All gets sad thinking about her bidai…
All started to pack things….

At noon all reached to Taj… Swara is unaware of this…
Ragini and laksh goes to hospital for sometimes… They tried to meet swara but she is busy in her cases…
Raglak come back at about 6… Sanskar also return from office…
Sanskar : shomi aunty…
Shomi : call me ma…
Sanskar : ok… Ma did swara call you???
Shomi : me?? No…
Sanskar : oh god… This girl na… She is not picking up my phone…
Ragini : wo sanskar… She is very busy today .. Wo our another specialist Dr agarwal is out of town so she is handling his cases….
Sanskar : when her work will be over???
Laksh : i saw her schedule from priyal… Minimum 10 – 10:30 to lag hi jayega…
Sanskar shook his head…. And sits on his room sofa… At about 8 swara calls him…
Sanskar immediately takes the phone…
Sanskar : swara???
Swara : sanskar… I have another ot now… So it will take time… I will come by my car… It’s here only… You don’t need to come ok… And please tell ma and bhaiyu ok.. Bye… Love you…
She cuts the phone without listening sanskar…
Sanskar tells others… At 10…
Sanskar : ma mom… I am going hospital… I will come with swara… And we will take dinner outside ok…
Shomi and Ap nodes… Sanskar left…

At 11 at hospital… Swara comes in her cabin… Rubbing her the back of her neck… Closing eyes and sits on sofa leaning her back…
Suddenly she feels some familiar touch on her hair… She smiles..
Swara (still closing eyes) : sanskar…
Sanskar sits beside her… Swara Shift herself in his warm embrace… Sanskar wrap her… And kissed her forehead…
Sanskar : why you are doing this much work???
Swara looks at him : i am a doctor sanskar… And it’s my duty…
Sanskar sighs…
Swara : ummm… Sanskar… I am so hungry…
Sanskar : you didn’t take your lunch right???
Swara (puppy face) : time nei mila…
Sanskar : impossible…. Ok chalo…
Both left hospital…. And goes to a hotel…
Sanskar feed her… She was so hungry she takes every bite quickly… Sanskar smiles seeing her…. In middle… Swara stops…
Swara : arey why are you not eating…you also eat na…
Sanskar : 1st you…
Swara : no…. You eat also…
Swara also feed him… Both feed each other… Then left…

In car….
Swara : sanskar did you inform ma…
Sanskar : han… And I said her I will return with you…
Swara (excited) : sanskar let’s go for long drive….
Sanskar : na shona… Look yesterday we didn’t sleep well and then 3 hrs journey… You will fall sick…
Swara : no I am perfectly fine… Please let’s go na…
Sanskar : no it means no…
Swara (pouts)…
Sanskar takes another road… Swara grins…
Sanskar : don’t think so much… We are going taj Bengal hotel..
Swara : why???
Sanskar : because Adarsh bhai and Arjun bhai arrange our wedding there… S till our marriage we will stay there…
Swara(jumps in happiness) : oh… My bhaiyu is best…
Sanskar : i know…
Swara : sanskar please chalo na..
Sanskar (sternly) : no… Now Keep quiet…
Swara (pouts) : i hate you… I will not talk to you…
Sanskar : i don’t care…
Swara : huh… And turns her face…
Sanskar sighs then smirks… Then stop the car and pulls swara towards him…
Swara: what are you doing??? (wide her eyes)…
Sanskar 1st kiss her necks then bite her earlobe…
Swara (moans) : aaaaah sanskar…
Sanskar (huskily) : i will take you for long drive… But you have to give me whatever I want…
Swara blushes hard…
Sanskar : so ready Mrs maheshwary???

Swara looks down…
Sanskar : ok… I am taking your silence as yes… So let’s go…
Both depart but swara places her head on his chest both goes for long drive…
After going some distance… It’s started raining heavily… Sanskar stops the car at side… As he is not able to see anything in front…
Sanskar : oh shit… Now how will we go back… It’s all because of you swara… I shouldn’t listen you…
He turns but swara was not there…
Sanskar (frowns) : swaraaaaaa…
Suddenly he notice swara drenching in rain and playing… Sanskar smiles… Swara comes to his window… And tells him to come out… Sanskar takes out his coat and keep it in car… And comes out… He mesmerized to see her drenching in rain and playing laughing… He slowly goes to her and holds her by waist… Swara looks at him and smile… Swara sprinkle some water on his face… And laughs…
(guys I am a bengali you all know right… So I am using a bengali song here hope you don’t mind.)

Sanskar kiss her cheeks sensuously… Swara shies…
Sanskar : thik amn evabe (like this only ) (bilkul is tarah aise hi)
Tui theke ja sovabe ( you remain in your disposition like this) (tu rahe ja aise savab ki)…
Kisses her cheeks then necks….sucks the rain drops
Swara blushes..
Sanskar : ami bujhe6i khoti nei (I understand there is no harm) (Maine samjha hai isme hani nehi hai)
R tui 6ara goti nei (there is no place rather than you) (tere ilawa or koi jaga nehi )…
Sanskar lifts swara in arms… And makes round… And round…
Sanskar : chhue de angul (touch with finger) (chhulo is ungli se)
Fute jabe ful (flowers will blossom) (ful ughenge)
Vije jabe ga6(tree will become wet) (per vig jayenge)
Sanskar makes her stand… And sits on knees holds her hand swara smiles…
Sanskar : katha deoa thak (keep promise ) (bada Karo)
Gele jabi chokher baire na(you can go but not go outside from my eyesight) (jana hai to jao par in ankho se bahar nehi) (2times)…
Sanskar stands… He sees her lips with water drop… He comes closer… Swara closes eyes and parts her lips…. Sanskar kiss her passionately… Both lost in that… He sucks the water drop… Parts when they out of breath… But in next second they again kiss… Both departs… Swara was shivering due to cold… Sanskar takes her in arm like bridal style and places her in car and wrap her with his coat… Meantime rain stops and both back to hotel… And sleep in a room in each other embrace…

Precap :Marriage ritual starts….

Sanskar bengali song isliye gaya kiun ki uska writer is a bengali 😂😂😂just joking… Wo he lives in Kolkata to thori bengali ati hai… And uska writer ko ye gana bohot pasand aya
I thought not to give this part… But mujhe majburan dena padha… Kiun??? Wo I wanted to tell you something but tu was not posting that article… So I have to write this Unnecessary part

Guys so less comments…. I know it’s boring… But this much kya??? OK I think it’s my fault… I can’t entertain you all any more… Don’t worry… Bear me for 5-6 part… It will be end soon….
Ok I am here to invite you all in the functions and grand marriage of our swasan…. Please come and gives your best wishes to our love birds…. So hope you all will come…. And enjoy….
Now another note… I know some are very much excited for their 1st night… But I thought somethings else…. But after seeing your response I have drop that plan…. Khair chodo ye sab… Whatever it will be…. The main thing is their romance…. So for that… I wanna tell you that there many readers who are under 18 even under 16 also there…. So it’s my responsibility to think about every readers…. I will give you all there hot intense romance but for that I want all of your permission… If anyone… Anyone feels it’s wrong then please please please tell me without any hesitation… Because my ff is for you…. And this ‘you’ means each and every readers… So I want pls tell me your opinion… AND Han…. If I find less comments I will think baki readers khush nehi hai toh I will change the whole thing… Thank you…. I will come with next part soon

33 comments

  1. Kritika

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    How can i say no for romance😜😜
    Ayyy! Dont get disheartened for less comments.. some people dont understand value of ur writing..😕😒😒
    Leave them!
    Part was splendid sweety..
    I just love it!!
    Its just soo awesome …!!
    Amazing! Fabulous!
    5-6 parts?? Noo…want more 10-15 parts! Or 20😁😁😁

  2. Neha_priya

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    Hey it’s not boring… I don’t understand bengali much so the song wasn’t going with me but nevertheless I imagined my own favourite one 😛 sorry…. But kya karoon 😲….coming to swasan romance… Haaye u know about mee… Ittusa se mera pet nahi bharta… So from my side 🙈🙉🙊…..must be there… 😂…. Bye tc

  3. swarna

    Threaten n all? Kabse? A.s. Wat yaar sab ganesh preparation me busy hai toh less cmnt. Dnt feel sad n worry.

  4. Serena

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    Amazing again…u know what sometimes I just think that yaar what should I comment in ur chapters..as will u not feel bore reading same word so here m giving u a new complement n that’s SUPER SE UPAR KE UPAR😂😂😂
    N do whatever u want as we all know u r an amazing writer..😂😂

  5. Madhu

    I dont have any problem dr……..(i mean about romance)
    Part was soo lovely dr😍😍😍😍😍
    Gonna miss this ff dr…….😞😞😞😞😞😞😞
    Waiting fr next part dr👍👍👍👍👍👍

  6. Kakali

    Wonderful episode dear… thoroughly enjoyed it… ☺… n about romance i want good romance no so intense.. .. rest is up to u..

  7. Sanjanaagrawal

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    Sooooooo cute …. and my bengali queen {A.S} u rocked today ….. love u sooo much…. and I will definitely come to our heavenly couple’s wedding …. how can I miss it …. and don’t worry about comments sorry I will not able to comment in next parts …. but I will definitely comments in LAST part … LAST part se yaad aaya … u r also ending ur ff … u r soooooooo bad …… and about hot intense romance …. I have no problem but plz give a note READ AT UR OWN RISK before starting …. and again ur epi was awesome ….

  8. chanu

    hey dr dnt cl dis ff as boring i lv it vry much. rly. bt always cdnt cmnt here. im rly sry 4 dat dr. cn u plz 4gv ur fan?? (with bigg puppy eyes)

    hey dnt dare 2 end dis. plz i lv dis. dnt think abt low cmnts. v all with u.

    & cmng 2 swasan romance! ummmmm. i want their romance. nt nly 2 or 3 sceance bt in whole epi. 😉 bt dnt add toooo hot intense romance. bt add sm hot ramance. 😉 lols
    dnt drop any f ur ideas plz. im waiting 4 ur wonderfull nxt epi.

    thank u vry much 4 inviting. ill surely cm. wt is da dress code? 😉

    keep writing dr
    be happy always

  9. Romaisa

    Loved it i’m sorry i couldn’t comment on youre Last Part Clause i couldn’t Read it Full i didnt have Time because of Collage but now im gonna Read it Full and then comment in it and Yeah you Can do hot intensiv romance so for me its not a prob Cause other readers also Read and i dont want you to not Write hot romance because of me so❤️❤️

  10. Reethi

    Awesome. Awee sanskar becoming romantic singing songs not all😍😍😚😚🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈.not don’t worry about less comments. Kuchen logna writer ka mehnat nayi dekpate. Isliye they won’t comment.number I have no problem with romance scenes 🙊🙊🙊🙊bcoz I’m 18+hehe😎😎.will be waiting for next part.post asap

  11. Divyanshri

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    So soon how can u finish…. not fair u r thinking about the people who never comment but what about us…..i know sometimes I dnt comment but I havent miss a single epi of urs……u can do this Wid me…mummmmyyyyyy…….. how can u say u will finish it widin 5-6 parts…….. I want swasan kids in ur ff…..regarding romance I dnt care…..as u r right many small kids r thereincluding me…jokes apart… I am not a kid obio…..back to the stor.y as usual……. u know that

    😂😂😂😂😂I send this comment to other ff….. so sad of me
    mera popat Ho gaya

  12. Divyanshri

    |Registered Member

    😭😭😭😭😭😭So soon how can u finish…. not fair u r thinking about the people who never comment but what about us…..i know sometimes I dnt comment but I havent miss a single epi of urs……u can do this Wid me…mummmmyyyyyy😭😭😭😭😭…….. how can u say u will finish it widin 5-6 parts…….. I want swasan kids in ur ff…..regarding romance I dnt care…..as u r right many small kids r thereincluding me…jokes apart… I am not a kid obio…..back to the stor.y as usual……. u know that

    😂😂😂😂😂I send this comment to other ff….. so sad of me
    mera popat Ho gaya

  13. saheli ghosh

    tumi “something else” jeta vebechile setai lekho plzzz…btw tomar ff is tooo good…comments er kom besi niye vebo na…I think silent reader anek ache..age jemon ami chilam…

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