Swasan….. Give me your hand to hold episode 51

Ani : thank you…
Shan : thanks di…
S: thank you…
Rosey : thank you…
Unab : thank you…. I really happy today at least you commented…. Thanks for supports…
Tamanna : thanks dear…
Khushii : thank you… It’s okay… Don’t need to be sorry…
Kyanat : thanks dear….
Romaisa : thanks dear…
Swasanfan : ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆdi thanks… You are romance queen… You liked my romance scene… It’s really a great compliment for me ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜thank you…
Sanya : thank you…
Reethi : thank you….
Sny : thanks dear…
Sammy kapoor : thanks dear…
Angel ram : thanks…
Greeshu : thanks dear… I thought my previous epi is long enough to be satisfied… ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•or kitna long chahiye???

Nehapriya : what ittusa??? Tumhe swasan ka romance ittusa laga??? Oh god…. You know what I wrote that part with so much difficulty… You want more??? ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•I was also blushing while writing that part…. Lol…. And Han about brothers… Yes they can do many things when they grow up…. But you know what jab bachpan mein koi baat hamare dil mein baith jati hai na usse bahar nikal na bohot muskil ho jati hai… Think once I know swara was small when that incident happened… They threatened that little swara that they will kill her family… But when she grew up then she could tell her brothers or bhabi or her Papa about them…. But she can’t… Bachpan ka dar uske man mein tha kuch nehi kar payi… Similarly brothers were big enough to understand what had happened…. But not That much big… They also lost their mother… In my opinion… The whole fault is Shekhar’s…. Only he can do something…. But he doesn’t… And you know what my mother always says that if anyone is repenting for their mistakes then we should forgive them…. Because nothing is bigger than repenting… But if they really do a big mistake like raj parbati… Then they are worth to forgive…. Sorry for so much big gyan… And thanks… I will try to give more romantic scenes ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
G.s : r you Stella??? Thanks for the compliment….

Anu : thank you…
Mica : thanks dear… Tell me one thing you don’t know Hindi right??? OK like sanskar means cultured… Asanskari means it’s opposite…. Uncultured…
Arunika : yaaa… Thanks dear…
Chandu : oh I am really happy you love the whole episode… Thanks dear…
Madhu : oh dear… No more villain in my ff… It will be end soon dear…. Soon after marriage… And Han jealously means…. Read this you will understand…
Arshaanya :hmm I also thought to let him suffer….. But what to do dear… At the end of the story I have to forgive him right??? After all it will be a happy ending…
Anuann : thank you…

Prakriti : thanks sissy… And I love you to my kiddo…
Sanjana : sanju thank you so much… Hmm so…. My name right??? OK I am revealing my name… No no nick name… By which my family member I mean my parents call me… It’s guria… And Han My real name… Ok I will reveal that in my last epi…. Ok…
Niya : thanks dear…
Pinkistar : oh dear… Why you are not in talking term with your brother??? OK don’t tell me if it personal… But you know what I think the best relationship in this world is siblings relation… And you think you have no importance in your brother’s life!? Then it’s wrong… I sure your brother love you a lot… He doesn’t show it to you… But he does…. So don’t think like this…. Sorry if I said any wrong… It’s just my opinion…
Swrna : thank you… Sanskar went then again came for celebrating rakhi with his whole family…

So here is the next part….
All sits on dinning table for breakfast…. Swara sits in between both brothers…. They feeds her with so much love….
Arjun : sweety… Look how thin you are…. You don’t anything properly….
Adarsh : han bhai… You are right…. Pari give swara one more puri….
Swara widen her eyes… Not because of her brothers talk… Because… Because of sanskar….
He is disturbing her by his leg under table….
Swara immediately pulls back her leg…. Sanskar smirks…. Swara gives him death glare… Then swara sees that pari is giving her one more puri…
Swara : arey arey bhabi…. What are you doing…. I am full….
Arjun : what??? You only eat 2 puri…. Only….
Adarsh :han…. Now eat one more…
Swara : no bhaiyu pls…. Look my tummy will blast at any time…
Arjun : shut up…. Eat silently…
Swara looks at pari and baishali…. Signals them to stop her brothers…. Just then….
‘di…. Where are you??? ‘…. A voice came….
Baishali : sahil….
Uttara fumes in anger after seeing sahil… All comes to him….
Baishali hugs him…
Baishali : i thought you won’t come….
Sahil(cups her face) : sorry di for late…
Baishali : it’s OK… Come…
Bachcha party come…
Ashwi : ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜mamu….
Arab : mamu you came…. I was missing you…. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Sahil : ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’missing me???

Avni : han mamu…. Don’t you miss us??? ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Sahil : ๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘no….
Ashwi (pouts) : why??
Sahil : ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šarey I missed you three a Lot
So here is the next part….
All sits on dinning table for breakfast…. Swara sits in between both brothers…. They feeds her with so much love….
Arjun : sweety… Look how thin you are…. You don’t anything properly….
Adarsh : han bhai… You are right…. Pari give swara one more puri….
Swara widen her eyes… Not because of her brothers talk… Because… Because of sanskar….
He is disturbing her by his leg under table….
Swara immediately pulls back her leg…. Sanskar smirks…. Swara gives him death glare… Then swara sees that pari is giving her one more puri…
Swara : arey arey bhabi…. What are you doing…. I am full….
Arjun : what??? You only eat 2 puri…. Only….
Adarsh :han…. Now eat one more…
Swara : no bhaiyu pls…. Look my tummy will blast at any time…
Arjun : shut up…. Eat silently…
Swara looks at pari and baishali…. Signals them to stop her brothers…. Just then….
‘di…. Where are you??? ‘…. A voice came….
Baishali : sahil….
Uttara fumes in anger after seeing sahil… All comes to him….
Baishali hugs him…
Baishali : i thought you won’t come….
Sahil(cups her face) : sorry di for late…
Baishali : it’s OK… Come…
Bachcha party come…
Ashwi : ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜mamu….
Arab : mamu you came…. I was missing you…. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Sahil : ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’missing me???
Avni : han mamu…. Don’t you miss us??? ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Sahil : ๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘no….
Ashwi (pouts) : why??
Sahil : ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Šarey I missed you three a Lot
Sahil takes out many toys and chocolate from his bag and gives them….
Suddenly he notice uttara…. He remembers their incident… He just smile…. He sees her with long opened hair and dark blue anarkali… He mesmerized… But soon compose…
Baishali and pari ties rakhi…. Sahil gives them bangles and jhumka… All time he was looking at uttara…
After bf….
Sanskar : mom…. I am going to office… I have some work….
Swara : han… Ma… I have to go to hospital… I have 2 ot… Laksh Ragini chalo….
Raglak : hmm…
Shomi : bt shona…. You are still weak…

Swara : no ma… I am fine… Don’t worry….
Arjun : sweety… Don’t skip your lunch… Come home in lunch time….
Swara : but bhaiyu…. I said na I have 2 ot… I can’t….
Adarsh : then don’t need to go…. You are still weak…
Swara : i will eat something in canteen… Don’t worry…
Sanskar : swara raglak… Chalo I will drop you 3 at hospital…
Swara : ok 2 min… Sanskar… I will come after changing….
She changed in to simple kurti and jeans and scarf….. And takes her stethoscope and coat….
Shomi’s eyes fills with tears… Her dream to see her daughter as a doctor comes true…. Shomi cares her face….
Shekhar also sitting there…. Shomi goes to him…
Shomi : thanks Mr Shekhar gadodia for making my one dream true…. You make my daughter a doctor…
Shekhar : she is our daughter shomi….
Shomi : no… She is my daughter…. Only my daughter…. I just thanked you for Making her doctor….
Arjun : mamma… Please forgi….

Swara : ashwi avni Arab…. Go to your room…. (to sahil) sahil bhaiya… Please take them…
Sahil nodes…
Arab : uttu bua darling… You also come… Na… Please…
Uttara nodes and they left…
Swara : bhaiyu think about kids at least….
Arjun : sorry….
Shomi : shona you go to hospital….
Swara nodes…. They left….
Sanskar drops them hospital and goes to office….
At lunch time….

Sanskar comes to hospital… For lunch….
Swara was in ot…. Her assistant told him to sit in her cabin…. Sanskar is sitting in her cabin…. Reading some magazine… Suddenly his eyes fall in a photo frame which is kept in her table… He goes and sees his photo in the photo frame…. He smiles brightly…. Swara comes in and surprised to see him there…
Swara : sanskar you here…
Sanskar looks at her and places the photo frame on its place…
He goes to her… Swara is looking somewhat tired…. He cares her face….
Sanskar : why you are looking so tired….
Swara just place her head on his chest…
Swara : han sanskar… 1 ot and 1 emergency case tha… That’s why… And I am so hungry…
Sanskar departs her and smile…

Sanskar : hmm… So chalo have your lunch… Wo mom khana and shomi aunty sent lunch for us and for raglak…. I kept their lunch in Ragini’s cabin… Now come… Both sit on couch… Sanskar unpack the lunch… And serves for both in one plate… (ek thali mein khane se payar barta Hai and vim bar ka paisa bhi bachta hai ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚)…
Sanskar takes a niwala in front of her mouth… But swara is in deep thought…. Sanskar places it in plate and by left hand he cares her hair…
Sanskar : shona what happened???
Swara comes in sense and looks at him…
Swara (teary eyes) : sanskar… My family… Sab kuch kab thik hoga???
Sanskar : bohot jaldi… Don’t cry….
Swara : you know what sanskar… Whenever I see ma…. My heart starts to pain… She suffers a lot…
Swara starts crying…
Sanskar takes her in his embrace…
Sanskar : sssshhhh… How many times I have to tell you… That I don’t like tears in your eyes… Everything will be alright… Don’t worry… Believe in God…
Swara (looks up and innocently) : sachchi sanskar…
Sanskar smiles and pecks her lips : muchchi…
Swara smiles and beats his chest…
Swara : shameless…
Sanskar : hmm… I know… But only for you… ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
Sanskar : hmm… Now eat…
Both feed each other and spend some quality time…
After finishing lunch…

Sanskar and swara both clean the table….
Sanskar : swara??
Swara : hmm…
Suddenly her phone rings… Swara was washing her hands… Sanskar takes the and fumes in anger after seeing the caller ID… It’s anuj…
Swara : sanskar… Who is calling??
Sanskar : don’t know…
Sanskar takes the phone…
Sanskar : hallo…
Anuj : hallo swara???
Sanskar : no I am her husband… Sanskar…
Anuj : hallo sir… Wo swaru…

Sanskar : 1st of all it’s not Swaru it’s swara… And 2nd she is busy call later…
Swara (confused) : sanskar…
Sanskar cuts the call…
Swara takes the phone and check call list…
Swara : sanskar why you didn’t give the phone to me… If there was something important then???
Sanskar : i don’t care…. Man to karta hai saale ka mu tod du…
Swara : sanskar… You are impossible…
Sanskar turns other side… Her assistant came… Priyal…
Priyal : mam… You have an ot in one hour…
Swara : hmm ok… You go…
Swara call back Anuj…
Swara : hallo Anuj…
Sanskar immediately turns and gives a angry glare to swara…
Anuj : swara wo…
Swara : why did you call me… Is something important…

Anuj : han matlab…
Sanskar snatch the phone and keep it in speaker..
Anuj : wo… Can you come to the get together party of our school friend in evening….
Swara looks at sanskar…
Swara : no Anuj… Wo I have some work with my husband….
Anuj (disappointed) : ok…
Swara : BTW which hotel…
Anuj : hotel blue star…
Swara : ok… Bye now…
Swara cuts the call…
Sanskar (murmur) : idiot…
Swara : sanskar….
Sanskar : what???

Swara : nothing you go… Office…
Sanskar leaves… But stops at door… But didn’t turn…
Sanskar : i will pick up you…. Don’t dare to leave hospital before I come…
Swara smiles : ok…
Sanskar leaves…
At about 6 pm… Sanskar comes to pick up swara and raglak… All leaves…
Swara suddenly sees blue star hotel…
Swara : sanskar stop…
Sanskar : why…
Swara : wo I have some over there…
Sanskar looks at Blue star hotel and stops…. Swara gets down… Raglak also… Sanskar was still sitting in the car with angry face…
Swara : sanskar… Come down na…
Sanskar :๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Swara sighs and open his side door and drags him out…. And then 4 goes in….
Swara was literally dragging sanskar…
Swara stops near her friends…

Sima (one friend) : arey swara… Anuj told you will not come…
Swara : actually guys… I came to give you all this…
Swara hand over their engagement card… (don’t ask me from where it came…. Actually they brought it to invite hospital staff)…
Swara : tomorrow is my engagement… You all have to come…
All friends : but you are married… Right??
Swara : han wo… That was a simple marriage with out any ritual just court marriage…and my ma came back after 20 years so…
Anuj : ok ok… We will surely come…
Sanskar (murmur) : han Han… Tu to sabse pahle ayega…
Swara listen this… And looks at him….
Anuj : swara… If you came here then join us na…

Swara : no yaar… Wo I came here directly from hospital… Now I am tired… Next day ok… And Han… Meet my hubby sanskar…
All says hallo…
Kavya (another friend) : oh god… Sanskar you are soo handsome…
Swara : oye don’t flirt with him ok???
Sanskar smiles : hallo guys…
Ok… We are leaving… Nice to meet you all…
They leave….
Sanskar is now quite normal…
Ragini : swara let’s Go home… My head is paining..
Laksh : is that.??? Come i will massage your head…
Swasan smile… Raglak sits in back… Ragini rest her head on laksh’s chest… He starts to massage her head…
Sanskar takes swara’s hand and start to drive by one hand…. All reached GM…. As soon as they reached…. They shocked to see the scene…. Arjun and Adarsh sitting on stair… Adarsh is resting his head on arjun’s shoulder… Ap dp baishali pari and Shekhar sitting in sofa cupping their face with their hand… Shomi is sitting on a chair near dining table with placing her hand on her head… Kids are having popcorn…. They all are seeing something… Actually someone… Sahil and uttara… They are quarreling like Tom jerry…
Swasanraglak goes to kids…
Swara : what’s happening here??? ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Avni : film… From morning… ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Swara : what??? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

Ashwi : han… This is 37th time they are quarreling…
Sanskar : han??? Oh god…
Ragini (holding her head) : oh god guys stop them… My head is already paining…
They concentrate in them…
Uttara : u don’t know who I am….
Sahil : yes I know… A bandariya… Oh god I should call Calcutta zoo center…. I think I read in the newspaper… That a female monkey had eloped from her cage…
Uttara : how dare you to call me monkey… I…. I… I will send you jail… You know I am a Cid officer…
Sahil : is that??? Who made you Cid officer… Bandariya…
Uttara : i will arrest you…
Sahil : for what?
Uttara : for insulting a Cid officer….
Sahil : oh really… U dumbo…. I never insulted you… And moreover you are not on duty…
Uttara : you call me dumbo???
Sahil : i think you have some ear problem…. Yes I call you dumbo…
Uttara : you idiot…
She goes hold his neck….. Sanlak drags her…
All grins after seeing them…
Sanskar : uttu what happened???
Uttara : bhai… He is insulting me…
Laksh : how dare you insulting my sister???
Sahil : huh… I didn’t do anything…

Uttara : bhai… He called me monkey…
Sanskar : is that???
Sanlak goes to sahil… Like they will beat him… But…
Sanskar : sahil… You are right…
Trio burst out in laugh…
Uttara stamps her foot…
Swara : sanskar why you all teasing her… My sister in law is very sweet…
Sahil : han Han with make up… ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
Uttara :๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Sanskar : we have natural beauty… Naturally we are handsome… But you girls… You put kilos of makeup on your bhutyia face… Then you look somewhat pretty…
Laksh : ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚right…
Ragini : is that… Then why you boys always run after this bhutyia face…
Laksh : who said that???
Sanskar : han… Girls run after us… We never run after them…
Swara : is that??? Why did you run after me sanskar ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ???
Sanskar : wo tho… I just… I just…

Swara : what I just… I just… Tell na…
Ragini : hmm laksh… Why you proposed me… And said… Ragini I can’t live without you…
Sanskar : han… We just thought… Who will marryYou… That’s why we just…
Swara : oh really??? ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Laksh : han…
Swara : mom….ma…. Bhaiyu… Dad… I will not marry him… ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Ragini : han me too… I will not marry this dumbo… ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Sanlak : what??? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Swara and Ragini goes upstairs with angry face… All hits their head…
Sanskar : mom…
Ap : i don’t know anything… Go… And make them cool…
Uttara and sahil stops after seeing them….
Sanskar and laksh starts to beat sahil…
Sanskar : this is all for you…..
Laksh : han..
Sahil : arey what did I do… You only said that all thing…
Uttara laughs…
End…

Precap engagement with angry face… Swara intentionally makes sanskar jealous… Some romance…

Guys I was not in mood to right… That’s why this much boring epi… Sorry for late…. And also for this boring epi…. I hope next part will make you all happy… Sorry for this boring part… ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™thanks for reading…

31 comments

  1. Madhu

    Lol awesome dr…..last part was,superb…..oh dr update asap dr …..cant wait fr next part…..but plz dr dont end this ff so soon…..we loved this v.much…….

  2. Romaisa

    Loved it โค๏ธ from Monday / yesterday my collage has stardet now I’m waiting for the bus so I have time to comment and by us it’s 7:06 o’clock and in India I think 10 o clock and every morning i go to the collage on same time so I’m sorry if I can’t comment I will try to comment โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜žโค๏ธ

  3. Mica

    |Registered Member

    bhahahhahah.. they are just impossible
    hey tried to stop the fight but afterwhat, they drowned into the fighting itself
    luv it so mush A,S
    btw, ty for answer

  4. Neha_priya

    |Registered Member

    Hmm I understood what you wanna say… I just considered swara and I guess the way they repented…. That couldn’t be ignored keeping ur hands in ur sister’s foot…. That’s something no sister can tolerate…. Hmm Shekhar is mainly wrong here…. He was the father so he should have done the attempt of finding truth….. Anyways I know it will be a happy ending…… Ittusa yess ittusa ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ….I want more… Uttra sahil god that view would be so funny a movie going like I too would have done the same as kids… Watching with popcorn…. ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๐Ÿ˜‚

  5. Reethi

    Awesome. Hahaha sanskar is jealous of anuj. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.n last wala fight tho awesome. Hahaha ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ now mission swaragini ko mannov. Precap is interesting. Jealousy sanskar. Wow.will be waiting for next part.post asap

  6. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    I knw nd i also want happy ending… m jus saying shekhar is more wrong dan arjun n adarsh n moreover hez not doing anything for swaraz forgiveness.. make him suffer.. its lukin lyk his wife n daughter came bck n hez enjyng not even once tried sumthng lyk d brothers did… n abt d chappy it awesome loved it.. plz want more swasan romance n scenes

  7. Sanjanaagrawal

    |Registered Member

    Awesome….. and ok as u wish. …… and I think so we should one day do vim bachao aandolan ….. I mena to say one day we will invite ALL SR TU MEMBERS in dinner in ur house and we all will eat in one plate …. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    VIM BACHAO …. PAISE BACHAO…..

  8. swarna

    I have lots of talk. 1st what an epi. 4m starting Lil boring. But after anuj phn call ha ha ha wow just wowed. 2nd I love dis jealous track very much. 3rd a.s. pls whenever u will upload any new os, short story pls mentioned ur name in the heading plz it’s my request. Recent one shot revenge type sry I forgot heading BT I remember the story. Frankly speaking after ananna, neha, g.s. u r my favorite writer. So keep smile. ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

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