Swasan….. Give me your hand to hold episode 40

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Swarna : awwww…. My chweety my cutie…. Pls don’t be angry on me…. A big wala hug and lots kisses for you… Now happy??? But you told me not to drag marriage…. But dear I promise in every function you will get fans and romance…. And about first night…. I will tell you all when time come…. And how could you think I forget you…. I can’t…. So smile…
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Greeshu : thanks… Sorry Greeshu I can’t write a big part… But I will definitely post on Sunday a big part… Sorry….
Swasan : thank you…
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Sweety : thanks….
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Tvisha : thanks….
Sanya : ok… I will try to fulfill your wish….
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Khushii : thanks….

Kyanat : thank you… Is it really important to tell my name???? πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
So here is the next part….
Sanskar : ab jo bhi hu… Jaisa bhi hu… Tumhara hi hu…. So now give me or….
Swara : or what?? I won’t give….
Sanskar comes closer….
Sanskar (husky tone) : soch lo…. If you won’t give me a kiss now…. Then I will definitely kiss you in front of whole family….
Swara gets scared… But acts as brave….
Swara : i… I.. Won’t… And I know you can’t do that….
Sanskar : challenge kar Rahi ho!??
Swara (more scared) : nooo…
Sanskar :hahaha… Ok so give me….
At that time someone opens the door….

Sanskar sits in some safe distance… It’s none other than Shekhar…..
Shekhar comes in…. And looks at swara… Swara also looks at him….
Sanskar (rudely… As he doesn’t like him) : you here???
Shekhar : i want to talk with my daughter…. Can I….
Sanskar looks at swara whose eyes fills with tears and seeing her father with dull face….
Sanskar : uncle I think she needs rest….
Shekhar : bas just 10 minutes sanskar….
Sanskar (again looks at her) : hmm ok….
He was about to move… He feels a tight grip on his hand… Sanskar looks behind…. He sees swara is holding his hand tightly and pleading him to stay through eyes…. Shekhar notice this….
Shekhar : sanskar you can stay….
Sanskar sits beside her…. Wrapping his arms around her shoulder….
Shekhar sits on other side….
Shekhar : angel….
Swara closes her eyes….
Shekhar : i am sorry angel…. Please forgive your father…. I know I am very Bad father…. I am sorry….
Swara opens her eyes….

Swara (slowly) : tell me one thing… If I kill someone and then ask him sorry…. Can he forgive me??
Shekhar : i know beta…. I did really wrong with you….
Swara : Papa every relationship is made by trust right??? How could you believe that your angel a 5 years old child can push her mother??? Yes I know I said that…. But you never tried to know the truth…. Why???
Shekhar downs his head….
Swara : you just called me angel…. But you treated with your angel like an untouchable person….
Shekhar folds his hand….
Shekhar : mai mafi k layek nehi hu mai janta hu…. Firvi please forgive me….
Swara holds his hands….
Swara : no Papa…. I always craved for your love… But I can’t forget those dreadful nights which I spend in fear…. Those taunts….

I need some time please…
At that time shomi enters…. She fumes seeing Shekhar….
Shomi : Shekhar… Go from here… I don’t want anyone of you in my and my daughter’s life….
Shomi : sanskar beta please go and get the discharge paper of swara…
Sanskar : ok aunty….
Sanskar looks at swara… He wipes her tears… And left….
Shomi : shona… Chalo… I will take you in your new home…
Shekhar : new home!!??? Misti angel will go to GM na???
Shomi : no… She will go with me… In my flat….
Shekhar : please Misti… Please… Don’t do this… I know I did many mistakes… Vul ho gyi… Please…. Give me one chance please….
Baishali and pari comes there….

Baishali : mummy Ji… You can’t punish us…. I have full rights on swara… She is also my daughter…. You can’t separate me from my daughter….
Pari : and you also can’t separate us from our mother also….
Baishali : please mummy Ji…. Please…
Shomi looks at swara…
Swara : ma… I want to go home… Where I spent days with my you… With my these two ma… Please…
Shomi sighs…. : hmm ok….
All smiles…. Raglak came….
Ragini : swara…. How are you feeling…. My dear….
Swara (smiles) : absolutely fine….
Laksh and Ragini hugs her….
Laksh (cups her face by one hand) : always smile like this…. Ok???
Swara nodes…. Sanskar comes with discharge paper…. He goes to swara….
Sanskar : shona…. Khana also getting discharge…. Will you feel bad if I go with her…. I promise I will come in evening….

Swara : i want to meet with khana once… And why will I feel bad??? And Han don’t need to come at evening…. You are tired na… In fact all are tired… So take some rest and come tomorrow….
Sanskar (smiles naughtily) : hmm… Chalo I will take you there…
Swara smells something fishy…. But ignore that….
Swara and sanskar is walking in hospital corridor… Sanskar is holding swara by shoulder….
Swara : sanskar… I can walk…. Leave me…
Sanskar : no… Stay calm… I am already angry on you….
Swara : angry on me??? Why???
Sanskar : you told me not to come at your home in evening… Seems like someone is not interested to meet with me….
Swara : no sanskar… Not like that…. I just….
Sanskar : huh… I don’t wanna listen anything…. You have to bear double punishment….
Swara : double punishment….???
Sanskar : now see… Now to I will definitely kiss you in front of everyone…. No no…. Make this game more interesting… You will kiss me and will also say I love you in front of whole family….

Swara : what??? Never…
Sanskar stops…. And looks at her….
Swara : what???
Sanskar : challenge???
Swara : hmm challenge…
Sanskar (smirks) : ok my love…. If I win…. You will tell your ma that you wanna stay with me in mm tonight…. And if you win I will do whatever you want….
Swara : really… Ok then be ready to do whatever I tell
Sanskar : pahle jitlo… But I am sure you will lose…
Swara : in your dreams….
Both goes to khana….
Khana hugs swara and cares her face….

Swara : how are you….
Khana : fine….
Swara : i get three mother…. I am so lucky….
Ap and dp was also there… They smile…. Sanskar also….
After sometime all leave… But before leaving swasan looks at each other… Sanskar winks at her and gives her flying kiss… Swara smiles shyly…. Sanskar smiles… All this are noticed by shomi and Ap…. Both laughs…
End….

Precap na tum jano na hum πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œ

So how is this…. What you think who will win??? Swara or sanskar??? Will swara and shomi able forgive their family???

Sorry if you feel it bore and useless…. Thanks for comments…. Thanks for reading

31 comments

  1. Tamanna

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    It’s nice… I think sanskar should win….
    Please don’t make somi and swara to forgive their family easily….
    Waiting for next one… Update soon

  2. SwaSanFan.Goldie

    |Registered Member

    Awsum..loved it..bt end this Family Drama asap n concentrate on SwaSan Romance..hehehe..n haa I want Sanskaar to Win da Challenge..continue soon

  3. Duaa

    |Registered Member

    Yeah i’m the writer of Hidden Beast it feel so good to know that the writer you admire is your fan! 😜😜
    Coming to the part its superb .. SwaSan Challenge part was amazing i wish in this k Sanskar win 😜😜
    And shekhar stuff was just .. I hate him as a character in this story! I mean how can a father behave like this .. Khair i want Shekhar nd his twi sons to suffer more and i personally don’t want Mishti and Swara to forgive them! Let them suffer more πŸ™‚
    Hope to read the next part soon 😘😘

  4. Sanjanaagrawal

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    Awesome …. and I can’t understood the challenge can u plz tell me again ..
    and if u had time so can u read my ff – SWASAN A LOVE STORY OF BETRAYAL …

  5. Neha_priya

    |Registered Member

    Plzzz make sanskar win…. Plzz plzzz…. If sanskar wins that will be more interesting…. U know swasan will stay together then in mm…. Regarding forgiving Shekhar and family…. It’s tough…. I agree with swara how can a father believe that a 5 years old child can kill her mother n never dared to find the truth in fact treated her as no body…. How can he…. It’s very difficult…. It’s something quite impossible

  6. swarna

    1st see see everyone wants know ur name. Ask why? I will give u ans bt in next epi πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ and so much love! ! ! Thank u sooo muchhhh :-* :-* . A big tight hug 4m me to u too. Cmng to epi it was vry nyc. I mean after long tym nok jhok, challenge and love. Emotional lovely talk. Last bt nt the least abt ur reply. If u will add lots of love in mrg function then drag as much as u want πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› i have no prblm. ha ha ha πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

  7. Prakriti19

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    Hi Di…Hope you remember me…Well about episode Di…I am just speechless…You are really master mind…This much planning..Huh…Well loved your episode…I don’t want that Misthi and Swara should forgive Sanskar easily….I want Swara to win…Because in every ff Sanskar only win..So just want something different…Please show some more Swasanraglak scene….Specially teasing scene…Itne dino me baad comment Karne ke liye Sorry…Bahot Bada sa sorry..
    Bye and Take care Di…Don’t avoid your sleep too much as it will effect your health…I just want to give you advice that post on alternate days if you didn’t get time…
    Love u so much Dii..
    Sorry if I hurt your feelings…

  8. Romaisa

    Wow you’re ff is one of my fav ff’s very nice epi excited who will win I maybe can’t comment from Saturday till next Saturday because I’m going in vacation but I will try to read and comment ❀️ if I can’t read and comment I will read and comment after I come back❀️

  9. GREESHMASPANDANA1995

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    Aswsome asusual its kkk i can understand u r problem but pls update everyday with short updates also if u cant means pls inform us and sunday we want more big part nly

  10. Reethi

    Awee it’s so cute.swaSan scenes r fabulous. Eagerly awaiting to know who wins the challenge. I’m pretty sure ki sanskar hi jeetega. Wow I’m Damn excited. Plz dear post next part asap. Will be waiting

  11. Mahjabeen

    Oh dear it was rlly awesome..nd shekar does nt deserve frrgvnes..watevr he did he have to pay..nd evn his sons..let dem suffer..nd pls gv more swasan scenes…waitng fr nxt..

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