Swasan….. Give me your hand to hold episode 33

Aaushi jain : thanks….
Chandu : thank you….
Kavita : i will try to make it soon…thanks for comments
Swasan : thanks… Yaa but she is not helping him… She is helping sanskar…
Rosey : thank you….
Swarna : swarna I don’t know I named her khana…. Is this khala??? I really don’t know about it… Sorry…. I am really very very glad to know that you are liking my ff this much…. But I don’t think I am that much good writer…. You are praising me unnecessarily…. But yes I really working hard for it…. Whenever I get time I think about it only…. How I make it more interesting for you all…. I am glad to hear that you like it… And is it really needed to tell my full name??? And you all are special for me…. Thanks..
Reethi : reethi you are telling that one who kidnapped swara and planned all is a master mind…. So can I take this complement for me??? Because I one who wrote this ??????just kidding…. Thanks for reading….
Surabhi : thank you….
Aahna : thanks….
Tamanna : thanks…. Yaa it’s khana…
Praju : thank you….
S : thank you….
Dharani : thanks…
Teja : thank you…
Sanjana : thanks dear….
Sanya : thanks….
Niya : thank you…

Nehapriya : you know what there are many people who played very important role in our lives but we didn’t thank them or not feel to do so…. But they always stand for us and give their whole life for us…. This like khana…. Raj tried to buy her by money… But she thought to save her 2nd Family…she agreed only for help them to catch those culprit…. I know she has no profit in it…. But as she works there for so many years she think them as her family so she takes that big step…. Thanks for comments… And yaaa shomi and Ap loves each other a lot… So she didn’t tell this… She waited for her…
Shan : thank you…
Divyianshri : thanks for understanding…. Thanks…
Swasanfan : sorry I can’t write so much big name…. I am sooooooooooooooooooooo lazy you know…. Hahaha… BTW thank you… Sorry I can’t post a longer part…. I am bit busy with study ????????hope you understand…. Bt I am trying to post regular….
Guys I can’t reply further…. Page is not opening and I have to submit it so I will try to reply next epi…. Thanks
So here is the next part…
Sanskar comes out of his room. And watches khana doing work in kitchen…. He looks at those cameras…. Then goes out…. Khana sees him and tried to stop…
Khana : sanskar baba… Where are you going???
Sanskar : wo… U know na… I am going to search her…
Khana : but it’s too late…
Sanskar : i have no time bye…

Sanskar left…. Khana looks at him…. She is tensed….
Khana (thinks) : they will call me at anytime…. Is sanskar can’t understand those chits??? But they are very easy…. Oh god he should follow me today…. But….
She tensely start do her work….
Here sanskar sits in his car and after sometime he sees that man following him….
Sanskar : i have to escape… But how….
He increased his speed lightly…. He saw that man also increase his speed….
Sanskar : no no…. He will think I got to know about him…. What should I do yaar….
Suddenly he saw crowds at a distance…. He gets idea…
Sanskar : oh yes… Today is ratha yatra (a famous festival for bangali)…. Yes I can do that….
He looks behind and find his briefcase…. He takes it and opens it while driving….. He find a pair of clothes….. He takes that and and stops the car….. That man also stops in some distance…. Sanskar walks casually with his clothes in a plastic….
He goes to crowd…. And starts to pull the rope of the ‘rath’ (chariot)…. With other peoples…. Seeing that the guy who was following sanskar starts to walk to see Him…. At that time sanskar sees a guy is standing with a plate full of gulal (I don’t know it’s English…. If you know please tell me)…. He intentionally pushed him and the gulal spread on air…. Sanskar takes some gulal and applied in his face and also in other man’s face…. All think that all are playing… So all people take gulal and applied on each other’s face…. The guy who was following… 1st can’t see anything due to gulal but when his vision gets clear he sees many people with gulal in their face…. He gets confused also tensed…. Sanskar watch him and starts to play with gulal…. He silently move aside and hide behind a pillar of a house…. Then goes behind a bush near a park and changes his clothes and again mingle with that crowd…. Sanskar sees that man…. And confidently goes to him and applied some gulal on his face and hugs him…. That guy also awkwardly smiles… Sanskar pulls him in the crowd….sanskar comes to know that he couldn’t recognize him…. As that guy is looking at everyone’s face with full of concentration….except him…. Sanskar smirks and left that place…. He sees his watch it’s 11pm….

At GM….
Uttara came…
Ap : uttu… What did that nurse say???
Uttara : she said that they pushed her from car and left….. And she has no number also…. Otherwise she is also searching them as they didn’t pay her….
Shomi closed her eyes….
Shekhar sits with thud…. Only one day left….
Uttara : no sir only half day….
Shomi : what???
Uttara : yes mam… My men come to know that tomorrow a very big business man or can say a smuggler will come here… And I am feeling that they are coming here to meet them only….
Shomi : no no…. I can’t let this happen…. Sanskar…. Where is he…
Laksh came there at that time….
Laksh : aunty he is in mm….
Shomi : call him….
Laksh tries his phone and found it’s switch off…. Oh god….
Shomi : laksh Ragini go to mm and bring him here….
Both left….

Arjun : mom please calm down…. Sweety will be alright….
Shomi (shouts) : stop calling me mom and stop calling her sweety…. U have lost that right…. And you both just get out of my sights…. U should ashamed of yourself that you can’t save your little sister from those Devils….
Arjun and Adarsh close their eyes and goes out….
Meantime sanskar….
He takes the man’s bike who was following him…. But suddenly stop and looks at that man from some distance who is still searching for him in the crowd… He goes to him… While walking he sees a medical shop… He smiles….
He takes a deep breath and runs there and fall on the counter with thud….
Shoper gets shocked….
Shoper : hey what happened???.
Sanskar (breathing heavily and almost falling down) : give me xyz injection….
Shoper : but that very dangerous… Have you any prescription???
Sanskar (breathing heavily) : i… I….. I… Will di… Die…. It’s really…. Really… Imp…. Important…. I….have… No Prescription…. It’s…. It’s… In home…. Please…. Save…. Save me….

Shoper sees his condition….
Sanskar : if…. If u… Don’t…. Give me… Bhagwan will not…. Not… Forgive you….
Shoper thinks….: no no…. I can’t give that to you…. Bhai u stay here for sometime…. I am going to fetch a cub…. I will take you hospital….
He left and stands at the road…. Facing his back to sanskar and his shop…. Sanskar takes this opertunity and such for the medicine and find that…. He left…. Shoper comes with the driver to take him and find no one…. He confused…. And look around…. The driver scold him….
Sanskar goes to the crowd and stand behind that person…. He was looking at sanskar’s car…. Sanskar smirk and inject him on his neck…. He fall on him unconscious…. He takes him to his car…. It’s 12 am now….

In mm….
Khana is locking the door as she gets call from raj….. At that time laksh and Ragini arrived….
Laksh : khana where are you going??? And where is sanskar???
Khana shocked….
Khana : wo sanskar has gone for searching swara….
Ragini : but where are you going???
Khana (gets idea): (thinks) if I make them confused with my talk they will surely follow me…. (to them) Wo I…. I am…. I am going… Swara… Nehi wo… I mean I am going… Han I am going to a fakir baba…. He told me he will tell me where is swara….
Laksh : what rubbish…. Leave all that…. Ragini let’s go….
Ragini still starring at khana..
Laksh (bit louder) : Ragini… Let’s go….
Khana looks at Ragini with tensed face….
Ragini : han… Han… Let’s go…
Both started to walk…. Ragini still looking back… Khana notice this and intentionally sighs with relief…. Ragini confused….
Here sanskar search that person and gets a pistol two mobiles and also GPS tracker…. Sanskar takes all this and tied the man with rope and also closes his mouth…. And push him near a police station….
Sanskar left from there… Suddenly that goon’s phone started to ring…. He immediately take the and put his handkerchief on the speaker…
From other side….
Ot : yaar where are you…??? Are you following Sanskar…???
Sanskar : hmm….
Ot : boss want to meet you…. Leave him…. He can’t find the girl in his dreams also….
Sanskar : hmmm…
Ot : come here soon…
Sanskar (clear his throat) : where???
Ot : arey what happened to your voice….
Sanskar (again clear his throat and said with rough voice (the voice when someone catch cold) : cold…
Ot : oh…. Come at raj sir’s warehouse come fast… He is angry….
Sanskar (same voice) : hmm…. But that path is muddy…. How could I take my bike there…
Ot : arey…. I know there is water in Salt Lake due to rain but you can come… So hurry up…
Sanskar (smiles) : hmmm….
Sanskar’s face glowed…. He starts his car….
Here in mm… Laksh and Ragini sits in car and left…. Ragini watches through mirror that Khana is catching a cub….
Ragini : laksh stop….
Laksh : what happened???
Ragini : please follow that cub….
Laksh : why???
Ragini (shouts) : i am telling that’s why…
Laksh nodded and turns his car…

In cub…
Khana : vaiya Salt Lake… And please slowly I have pain in my back… (looking laksh’s car at mirror….) as soon as she saw him following her… She smiles and tells the driver…
Khana : no no…. Move fast… I am getting late…
Ragini message something in her phone and then concentrate on the cub….
Here shomi gets 2 message…

End….
Precap : don’t know….

So how is the epi???one message is from Ragini…. But the other one??…. Sanskar??? Or anyone else??? Are feeling it boring?? Sorry….

Ok tomorrow there is no update from me…. I will update next part Monday (hope so)…. If I can’t then Wednesday…. And Sunday as usual I am preparing another os for you all… Saturday night I will update that…. Thanks for reading and comments also

Credit to: A. S

32 comments

  1. Reethi

    Hahaha yes ur really a master mind.but Plz is peheli so solve karona jaldi.Bechari swara pata nayi kya halat huyi hogi uski. Plz try to post max on mon.will be waiting for next part.post asap. Plz plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz

  2. swarna

    No no i dnt need ur full form. I was just asking u. And next episode will b a bang. Wow maha millan(may b bt u r the god of dis writer) so lets see. And u deserve dats why m praising u so dnt told me dat its unnecessay. And sanky so smart haan. By the ratha yatra also our big festival(m nt bengali bt odia n that too 4m odisha) so thanx. And pls upld next part asap. Keep smiling. Ummmahhh

  3. Neha_priya

    |Registered Member

    This part is amazing sab master mind bane h… San’s ideas were superb…. He catched that goon so that he can’t inform Raj…. Yeah khana is a nice person… She’s doing everything for her family…. She treats sanskar as her child… Awesome.. Now I’ve to wait for so long ?

  4. sanjana (daddy's little princess)

    Oh no can’t wait till monday …
    BTW episode was superb …. awesome ….

  5. sneha

    Hi!!! Are ye mujhe lagta hai ki tum detective serialzz boht dekhti ho…haina??? Tabhi toh story ko aise suspense me ghuma ri ho…haha lol 😀
    Anywayzzz..mujhe bhi detective series boht pasand h…m bhi dekti hu…
    Nd so i love ur ff…awsome epi..aur ajj to sanky ne bhi kya dimag lagaya..hahah..
    Nice epi… 🙂

  6. Kritika

    |Registered Member

    Awsm.
    I really like it…
    Are u on fb dr?
    Actually I have a swasan page on fb, and u real fell like including this ff there..even if u are not on fb, I will give u the link and you can see comments there..
    All I need is your permission..
    Issokay if u don’t want to..

  7. Kritika

    |Registered Member

    Awsm…
    I really like it…
    Are u on fb dr?
    Actually I have a swasan page on fb, and u real fell like including this ff there..even if u are not on fb, I will give u the link and you can see comments there….
    All I need is your permission..
    Issokay if u don’t want to..

  8. Kritika

    |Registered Member

    Awsm…
    I really like it…
    Are u on fb dr?
    Actually I have a swasan page on fb, and u know really fell like including this ff there..even if u are not on fb, I will give u the link and you can see comments there….
    All I need is your permission..
    Issokay if u don’t want to..

  9. Prakriti

    Awesome Di…And Choo Solly for not commenting in previous episodes…Really you are a mystery queen…And you have asked my age na…I am 11 years old…So I am calling you Di…I know you are elder than me…
    Bye Di and take care…
    Love u Sooooo much

  10. Prakriti

    Amazing Di…I just loved it part…Oh God It is Khana…She is doing very good for Sanskar’s family…Hope Sanskar will not misunderstand her…I am 11 years old Di…So I should call you Di na..

  11. sparkle

    you’re amazing yr..why don’t you become a writer?you’re such a good writer..your story is full of suspense..and please let me know if you have written another story..i just love your ff..

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