Swasan….. Give me your hand to hold episode 26

Hi guys it’s very much disappointing to see your response ?????…. It was my 25th episode and I got so less comments…. Why??? Don’t you like my story??? Don’t you like my twist??? I never expected that less comments….. I always told you that if you don’t like it then also comment…. Tell me from where I will get encouragement to write further….. I am really very upset to see your response…. My classes has started… So I am quite busy with study…. But even so I am writing whenever I get time…… ??????so tell if you don’t like it I will stop it….. Today I am giving you short update…. Cause I am so upset…..

So here is the next part……
In hospital….
Swara is sleeping in the bed…. Sanskar is sitting on the couch…. Looking some of his office files…. Ragini and laksh comes there after handling their own works…. Sanskar look at them and smiles… They talk in signs as swara is sleeping…. Suddenly they heard swara is blabbering in sleep and trio goes to her…. Swara is sweating like hell…. She is throwing her hand and legs in air…..
Sanskar (gets tensed… Tries to wake her up) : swara… Swara…. What happened???
He holds her hand she is screaming due to pain of her head as she is stressed….
Sanskar : laksh do something…. Why are you standing like a statue….
Raglak are blank to see her like this….
Ragini (come back senses) : wake her up…. I think she again gets those night mares…..
Sanskar shook her…..
Sanskar : swara wake up…. Swara…
Swara opens her eyes…. And hugs sanskar tightly…. She is crying…. Laksh inject her something… She calmed down….
Sanskar : swara are you okay??? Don’t stress your self…. I am here na…
Swara (feeble voice) : don’t leave me…. They will kill me….
Sanskar : who will kill you my bachcha…. I am here na…. Nothing will happen….
Swara : pani….
Ragini makes her drink water…. And also make her sit… Sanskar sit beside her…. Swara sleep in his shoulder…..
Laksh brings some fruits…. Ragini give the plate sanskar… Sanskar starts to feed her….
Swara : sanskar…. I am so scared….
Sanskar : why??? Why are scared???
Ragini also sits on bed opposite to swasan and laksh sits on chair…
Ragini : swara again you got those nightmares???
Swara : han (with teary eyes)….
Sanskar : which night mares….
Swara : about my ma’s death….
Sanlak : swara you have to tell us today about that incident….
Swara gets up….
Swara : what is the date of today???
Sanskar : 5th July…. Why???
Swara looks at Ragini…. She is looking so pale…. Ragini also looking so dull….
Sanskar : what happened??? Tum dono ki chahre ka rang kiun ud gya???
Ragini : because today is the day in which…..
She stops….
Swara : in which my life totally changed…
Laksh : pls swara bolo na….
Swara : ok… You all know na 25th June is my birthday… That was my 5th birthday….
Flashback…..
Shekhar : no no only roses…. My angel love roses….
Shomi : arey arey Shekhar calm down…..
Shekhar : what calm down…. Look at them…. Ek kam thik se nehi hota…. BTW where is my angel???
Arjun : mom where is my sweety???
Adarsh : is she sleeping….
Shomi : han…. As she was soo excited…. She sleeps late at night…. Don’t wake her up…. If she wake now surely she will eat my brain….
Adarsh : no no…. I am going to wake her up…
Arjun : me too….
Both goes upstairs…. Shomi Shekhar room….
Both climbs on the bed and remove the comforter….. A beautiful cute small sleeping girl revealed….. Like an angle is sleeping…. A small fairy without wings….
Adarsh (kiss her cheeks) : shonu wake up….
Swara moves her head….
Arjun (smiles also kisses her cheeks) : sweety wake up…. It’s your birthday…
Swara opens her big big eyes and sees them…. Gets up with excitement….
Swara : bhaiyu… (hugs them)…. My birthday…. Yaaaay….
Adarsh gives her a bunch of red roses…. As she loves red roses…. Arjun gives her a big chocolate….
Swara gets happy…
Swara : thank you bhaiyu….
Kiss them on their cheeks….
Shomi and Shekhar comes…..
Shekhar : angel….
Extends his hands…. Swara jumps on his lap…..
Swara : Papa it’s my birthday…..
Shekhar : yes bachcha….
Shomi : shona now go wash yyour teeth…. Go….
Swara : ok ma…
Kiss her ma Papa…. Adarsh and Arjun takes her in their lap and also kiss them….
After sometime…. Swara gets down wearing A beautiful frok…..
Shomi gives her prasad and touch the flowers of puja on her head and chest and prays to God….
Adarsh : shonu take blessings from ma Papa….
Swara touch their feet….
At that time ‘Shekhar Shekhar… Katthe hai tu???’ a voice came….
Shekhar and Shomi runs to the main door….
Shekhar : bua Ji…. ?????I am so happy you came…..
Parbati : not only me look raj also came here….
Shekhar : what??? Raj came???
Parbati (looks at sharmistha) : ye tari lugai hai???
Shekhar : yes bua Ji…. Oh you didn’t meet her na….. After 12 years you came…. Meet she is sharmistha…. Shomi…. Or misti…. Whatever you can call…. My better half….
Shomi touch her feet….
Parbati : sada suhagan rahe….
Raj : oh someone is forgetting me….
Raj and Shekhar hugs….
Shekhar : misti….. My brother raj……
Raj : misti??? Aah you are really misti….
Parbati : raj touch your bhabi’s feet….
Raj : oh ma it’s modern age…. Bhabi ko to hug karna chahiye….
Raj suddenly hug her… Shomi feels uncomfortable….
All came at hall…. Swara Arjun and Adarsh were playing there…. Or can say brothers are pampering his lovely sweet sister…
Shomi : Arjun Adarsh…. Swara… Come here….
Trio came….
Shomi : look she is your dadi bua Ji…. And he is Raj uncle….
Arjun and Adarsh touch their feet…. Swara didn’t like them at all…. They are seems like a rakshasi and monster for her…. She makes a pout face…. And cross her hand near
Chest and looks at them with narrowed eyes….
Shomi : shona??? What are you thinking??? Touch their feet….
Swara shooks her head in negative…. Adarsh and Arjun understand that she didn’t like them at all…. Shekhar confused…
Shekhar : what happened Angel??
Shomi : shona…. ?????touch their feet….
Arjun goes near her….
Arjun (whispered) : sweety took blessings from them…. I will take you a place….
Shona smiles brightly and touch their feet…..
Raj is continuously starring at shomi…. That is noticed by swara….
Swara : ?????why are you starring at my mother??? Don’t look at her like this?????…..
All gets shocked…. Raj gets embarrassed….

End…..

I hope today you all will comment…. Please say if you don’t like it…. I will stop writing…. But please don’t be silent….. Please….. Tell me…. I will stop it ???????????….
Thanks for reading….

Credit to: A. S

39 comments

  1. Divyanshri

    |Registered Member

    A. S dnt be sad… ur ff is very nice….. now Days all the ff are getting very less comments why I also dnt know….. but I love ur ff

  2. sneha

    Hi dear… feeling low ha??? Koi ni…
    Actually m a regular reader of ur ff nd hv read each epi of it bt didnt get time to comment…
    Moreover i hv read ur three chappiezzz in one go as earlier i didnt got time as medical student so classes n all…
    Bt seeing that u r this much upset today m commentng nd vo bhi boht lamba wala…lol…
    I hv even read ur one shot…it was also awesome.. i lvd that…mere jaise boht honge jo comment nhi kr paate.. so dont get upset…
    Nd ya.. vaise my bday is also on 25th june..same as swara’s…yayyyy…haha.. 😀
    Thnxxx fr writing dr…nd sry fr not commenting..bt ab se krungi…pakkaa… 🙂

  3. Ruhi

    |Registered Member

    Hi am a silent reader don’t stop this ff it’s a very different ff I just love reading it please don’t get dishearten please continue this I just love it

    • A. S

      Look above the there is a menu option…. Click that u find a option ‘submit your article’ and then click…. There u find the instructions and place where you can write

  4. Reethi

    Don’t feel sad. It’s really very nice. C today u will get more comments. I started revealing past sequence but still so much is there to reveal. I’m do excited. Plz post next part asap otherwise I’ll die in excitement ?

  5. Rain_Lightwood

    |Registered Member

    Hey hi. I’m a silent reader of ur FF. But today I’m commenting. I hope u can reply:)

    Awesome epi. I loved it. Don’t get disheartened if ppl don’t comment. Even I write ff’s and ppl just don’t comment and it’s annoying actually. Just keep writing coz u love it and naturally you will get comments. Maybe ppl busy or r silently reading. So chil.

    U write amazingly. And even today’s epi was awesome. Keep it up:)

  6. snehal

    Dear don’t b upset. I m a house wife dear. Sometimes I read 2-3 episodes at a time and out of excitement I forget to comment. I m really sorry dear. This ff is becoming really interesting. Especially ap and do going to some lonely place where they meet mishti, uttara and shekar. And now comes today’s episode I m really excited to know what happened in the past. No TV at my home. So this is the only entertainment factor for me dear. Plz do write. Will try to comment. Ok

  7. sanjana

    Yes swara is right they look like monsters hahahaha….

    And AS Don’t be upset I comment in ur ff everyday ….

    Plz don’t storp writing it or else I will die bcoz there are less ff which I like and if u stop writing ur ff also then what will I read plz don’t stop it ….

  8. Romaisa

    Heii Plz dont get sad i Love youre ff a lot but you Know i live in switzerland and er have Different Timings and i also have Collage so its a Little bit difficult for me to comment on Every Episode but i will read all youre Episodes from 15th July My summervacation will Start, then from Ther i Can comment on Every Episode i have 1 Month summervacation so it’s easy for me to comment but Till then Maybe i Can just give small comments Upper se Ramzan bhi tha and idher roze bohot lumbhe holte Hain aut eid ki taiyarian bhi hoo rahi Thi because ajj eid hai toh im Busy today

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