Swasan ff: importance of family and friends in life….!!!!! Part 5

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Hello everyone…thank you for your lovely comments in the previous part….many of you want to know that what has happened like that…in their past…if you want to know the answer for this qstn then you’ve to wait for few more episodes….not many may be up to next 3 to 4 updates….
And today I am going to give nandini,laksh,kunj,twinkle and ragini’s entry….ragini’s entry will be in both past and present…..which means this update is going to be a pretty long one so enjoy it…and sorry to say today swasan scenes will only be in past not in present.so forgive me for this…OK now moving on…

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Recap:swasan talk and kiss,swasan first meeting in past

Continuitin of flashback:

Sanskar:I will be waiting for you in the evening here itself….don’t forget…have a Nice day (he shouted at swara who is going far from him…so that she can hear him)

Swara didn’t said anything but just turned back and gave a smile to him and went from there…..

Swara:why is he behaving so weird???
Girl beside her:I think he likes you….(by winking at swara)
Swara:offo…ragini you’ve again started your love and like wala drama….

Yes guys it was ragini who beside her..,..I said in their intro that they were bff’s

Ragini:come on swara…..he keeps waiting for you daily and by seeing you a bright smile appears on his face….
Swara:shut up ragini…..you know what I don’t think he waits for me dialy….he waited for me today only to return my book back….
Ragini:and how could you say that he is not waiting for you…he is waiting for someone else….
Swara:wo…(thinks for sometime)bcoz in this route only many of our CLG girls travel….so we can’t say that he is waiting for me only….
Ragini:OK…as you wish swara…but I can feel the love towards you in his eyes…
Swara:how ragini….I didn’t felt anything like that while I was talking to him
Ragini:bcoz almost since 3 years I mean when we were attending dance classes in this route that time we were in 9th standard and now we are in 12th….during all this time he waits there only by seeing you his eyes gets brighten up and small smile appear on his face….seriously swara???you never noticed this thing since 3 long years…unbelievable!!!!
Swara:stop it ragini….there is nothing like that,tum na stop watching those chipku love stories… Your brain is completely damaged…
Ragini:really swara…tell me one why was he asking your name and why was he wanted to see you again when you just said casually “see you bye”.tell me??
Swara:hmm….I don’t know that…you should ask him not me…i ‘be seen his face clearly today only…and you are saying that he is waiting there daily from 3 years??I don’t believe it…(by seeing other direction)
Ragini:acha…really you mean to say you’ve never noticed him bear by us since 3yrs??
Swara:ya…and why would I notice him??
Ragini:really..then tell me one thing how you’ve said that to him ‘you know my coaching class timing na”hmm tell me..
Swara:WO…I ….offo ragini stop your nonsense yaar.we are getting late to school don’t forget today in first class itself we’ve test…and tell me do you completed your assignments or not don’t forget we’ve to submit all those assignments today afternoon only….

By hearing the name of test and assignments ragini completely diverted from sanskar’s topic….

The day has completed in their CLG and now its 3.30 they went directly to the coaching class….

Coaching centre:

Here sanskar is waiting for swara….

Suddenly a guy came to him and pat on his soluder…sanskar didn’t paid any attention towards that guy…
Guy:oy…hloo I am frnd….recognised me (he shouted in sanskar’s ears)

By hearing the shout in his ear sanskar came to his senses….

Sanskar:tum…fekho an mujhe pareshan mat karna….I am waiting for her…I don’t know why but she’s late today…
Guy:because she’s not going to cone here…
Sanskar:ufff…yaar uvi..you are full of negative energy….

Yes guys he’s uvi only…he is best of sanskar and like a brother to him…

Uvi:acha…teek hai…ohh look she’s here man..
Sanskar:I said na….she said that to meet here….and remedmber she always sticks to her words….
Uvi:OK…are you going to talk with her or you are going to continue your lecture about her to me??
Sanskar:tujhe toh main dekhlunga pehle I’ve to talk to her…

He walks towards swara…

Swara:hi sanskar,how was your day???
Sanskar:ya…that was good…and I was excited complete day to meet you and talk with you…

Ragini sees swara with a smirk and “see i’be told na”look

Swara gets confused but tries to handle the situation…

Swara:oh….but you shouldn’t have waited for me like this by wasting your
time…
Sanskar:that’s fine swara….actually i ‘M here not only to meet you but also with my frnd…actually he wants to join his brother laksh here only WO he’s also studying 12th na…(he says all this while pointing his finger in the direction where uvi is waiting for him)
Swara:ohhh that’s good….actually we’ve to attend the class sorry I’ll talk to you after the class
Sanskar:OK,..carry-on even we’ve work
Swara:OK bye
(She deliberately didn’t said see you with bye)
Sanskar looked confused at her…she turned back and gave an assuring
smile to him…

By seeing her smiling at him he jumps like a kid and starts to dance in the middle of the road…

After coaching class:

Swara and ragini came out…
This time swara herself wished sanskar first

Swara:hi sanskar,you still here???aren’t your work finished
Sanskar:WO…actually hamara work complete hogayi but I was waiting for you
Swara:for me??but why….I don’t think i’ve dropped any books here…
Sanskar:you said to let’s talk after class na….if you come and wait for me then that doesn’t feels good na that’s why ibwas waiting for you….

Swara felt bad by hearing his words…because she thought he might be left now and she’ll directly go to home…

Swara:ohh…that’s really sweet of you..
Sanskar:thank you….let’s talk by walking…by that we can talk and you both can reach your home too

Swara and ragini liked his idea…

Swara:OK…but your bike?
Sanskar:actually it got punctured… When we came inside to talk about laksh’s admission then it was fine but when we came out it has got punctured…
Swara:OK..let’s go even you also have to go your home na
Sanskar:OK…let’s leave

They left from there by walking….

Swara:so what you do sanskar…I mean you look elder than us..

Sanskar was feeling happy bcoz he was thinking how to start the
but swara herself started it

Sanskar:I have to look elder bcoz I am elder than you guys…
Ragini:ohh…then what you do??

Sanskar was confused at her sudden reply and looked to swara qstng who is she..swara understood his confusion and said

Swara:oh I forgot to introduce you guys eachother….sanskar she is my best friend ragini and ragini he is sanskar you remember today morining he is the one who gave me my assignment book which I’ve dropped yesterday somewhere and thought it was lost…

Ragini understood swara is trying to shut her mouth about their conversation in morning..

Ragini:OK swara I remember him….(by looking at sanskar) hi sanskar…
Sanskar:hi ragini…

They shook their hands….

Swara:so sanskar you didn’t said what you do….
Sanskar:ya…I’m doing my b.com I’m in 2nd yr
Ragini:which means you are 19??but you didn’t behav like a teen….!!!
Sanskar:bcoz I’m not a teen…

Swara and ragini looked at him confusingly….

Sankar:OK girls dont get confused…I am 21 and coming my second year b.com I took CA for one year…but I lost interest in it which made me with in b.com second year itself while i’m 21..hope your confusion was lost…

Now ragini’s home has came…so she left by saying bye to them…
Now swara and sanskar are walking alone on the road…
Now again awkwardness took place in sanskar’s mind….

Swara:so milgayi admission??

Sanskar didn’t understand about what she’s talking…then he remembered that he said about laksh’s admission in her coaching center

Sanskar:ha woh actually they said they need to keep an entrance test for him bcoz he’s lil weak in studies..
Swara:what???don’t worry just tell them the name of manik…manik Kankipati and I am your friend then you’ll easily get the admission

By hearing manik’s name from swara’s mouth sanskar got shocked..

Sanskar:what???what did you said manik???how do you know him??
Swara:bcoz he’s my brother….
Sanskar:so you are shona…means you are the champ

Swara was surprised to listen her nick names from sanskars mouth

Swara:how do you know my nick names???
Sanskar:becoz your brother was my classmate in my 12th and he was my partner in my practicals…

Then swara remembered something and said,

Swara:means…your full name is sanskar kapoor…my brother said you are more arrogant and proud then him….but you behave sweetly…means you are acting in front of me
Sanskar:ya…I was arrogant at that time….but not now I’ve completely changed and I’m not acting infront of you….
Swara:OK…by talking with you I didn’t have noticed my home has came..OK bye see you

Then she was going..

Sanskar:hey

She turned back and said bye…

Sanskar:one sec…

She turned back and said

Swara:tomorrow mrng 7am

Sanskar:hey..wait

Swara:what??

Sanskar:thank you for the walk….

She smiled

Sankar:one min

She turned back giving look “now what??”

Sanskar:thank you for the walk….

She gave him unbelievable look and was about to go…

Sanskar:hey one sec….

She again turned back….

Sanskar:nothing….good night…I forgot to tell..
Swara:same to you…

She turned to go now….

Sanskar:hey…

She again turned back…

Sanskar:WO….nothing just wanted to see your face again…
She smiled at his antiques and said
Swara: inka po intiki nanny enni sarlu chustav??!!!paithyam!!!???(by
saying this she ran from there into her house) (how many times you’ll see my face…now just go to your home..crazy fellow)

Sanskar didn’t understand what she has said bcoz he font know Telugu he only knows Hindi and English…especially the last word she said is really confusing to him…

Soon he left from there to his house…

He didn’t slept all the night….

Next day morning:
Swara was waiting for him at the same place where he use to wait for her
daily….

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Present:

While swara was bussy in rememberibg these things…her phone started
to ring…she sees the caller ID it shows Anna (manik)

In call:

Swara:hello Anna
Manik:swara…where are you
Swara:WO…actually I was feeling suffocated in house na that’s why I
came to our colony part to feel some fresh air….
Manik:acha….com home amma is leaving to mama’s house…she wants to see you before she leaves
Swara:acha…OK I will be there in 5min…
Manik:OK…come soon

He cuts the call

Manik’s POV:

I am one whobis responsible for your this state…I am a useless brother who didn’t even can’t protect his sister and his frnd…sorry swara…sorry Alya…I know swara you went to meet sankar but you can’t say that to
me…I was the who said to him that you came India…I pleased him to not to hurt you…..I said him the truth but he’s not ready to trust me….sorry swara….I can’t save you from his hatred. I am really sorry…”

Guys remember…in sanskar’s first scenes he talked with someone in the phone and asked about the gift….it was manik only…with whom sanskar has talked.

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Soon swara came home and said bye to her mom

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Swara’s room:

Swara is arranging her clothes in her cupboard suddenly someone came and back hugged her…she was shocked and turned to see who the person is….

Swara:tum!!!!you’ll never change na,….tumne tho mujhe darahi diya…..
Person:sorry yaar,..just thought to thrill you…and look I’m succeseeded…. (That person said with a smirk)
Swara:offo nandini…stop behaving like a kid….if youu behave like this…like a kid only….then my Anna is never going to propose you….

Yes guys…she was nandini…

Nandini:but…Mr.monster manik has already proposed me…..ha not in a romantic way but ha bola hai USNR…
Swara:what…ye kab hua???kisine mujhe bataneki socha take nahin…even my Anna also didn’t told me…
Manik:I heard my name here…what is running in your mind girls…
Nandini:fogg is running manik…not only here but also in complete India only fogg is running manik…see your Sissy also bought you fogg only (she said this by throwing a fogg scent can at him)

( he catched it on time) and started running behind her…
Manik:acha bachu…abhi tumhe seedha karta hun…rukh tu vahi…
( he said this while chasing her)
Seeing both if them swara felt happy….

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A girl is shown beating a man who us b/w his 30’s….by saying..

Girl:saale….you moron,dog…how dare you to touch me…if I work for you that doesn’t mean…I am ready to sleep with you…bcoz of people like only we girls are fearing to come out of house and start carrier…you son of a…

(She said all these things while beating him only)

Then another girl came and tried to stop her,…

Girl 2:di…stop it…what if he complains to police..
Girl 1:police main complaint karega…isse pehle main hi karungi complaint…mujhe molest karne ki koshish karne keliye….
Girl 2:do…ur impossible.. Let’s leave now..
Girl 1:tum ruko ragini aisi logon ke saath size hinkarna chahiye…

Yes the both girls were twinkle and ragini while twinkle is elder and ragini is younger…

Ragini comes aside and calls someone….
In call:
Ragini:where are you??
Voice:kyun??
Ragini:yaha…di isse bhi maar rahinhain…jaldi aao..main akele used control nahi kar paa rahinhoon
Voice:OK..I am coming

After sometime a guy came there and lifted twinkle by holding her waist like we lift kids….

Twinkle:laksh…chodo mujhe…..I have beat him

Yes guys…he was laksh only…ragini’s boyfriend from last 4yrs

Laksh:stop it yaar….kehte ho ki kaam chahiye air kaam Milne pe apni hi boss ko maarne lag jaathi ho..
Is week mein ye tumhari 3rd job hai year…i’m sicked
Twinkle:I’m sorry….next I don’t beat anyone plz look another job for me…

Laksh looked at ragini while ragini also gave pleading look..

Laksh:OK..but first promise me you don’t beat him too
Twinkle:OK..then you too promise me you don’t make me hire at any kind of womanizer’s place
Laksh:OK…then I think I’ve to hire you where the people especially your boss hates woman…(he said this with a smirk on his his face by thinking something)
Twinkle: oh…OK(she said confusingly)

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A house is shown with full of male servants…

Then a dog entered that house….

By seeing that dog…that guy has started to shout at his servants…..

Then a servant came to him

Servant:sir…wt hpnd???why were you shouting…
Guy:that dog has came inside my house…I don’t like it…leave it outside of my house…

Servant got confused and looked other side where there is a dog house in that house and there are nearly 10 dogs in his house…

Servant:sir……but you like dogs na
Guy:yes I like dogs but not female dogs…

Servant gave him unbelievable look and left that dog outside…and murmured to himself “if he don’t likes female dogs then what will happen if he marry’s a girl……”

That guy heard this and came to him….

Guy:kunj reddy never do a brainless work by marrying….so you better don’t worry…

Yes guys it was kunj…..he hates woman..

Precap: swara and manan’s masti,sanskar in swara’s room in midnight (present only),swara angry on sanskar (past),twinkle and kuj first meeting….and ragini’s emotional burst out in front of laksh,manik slaps nandini

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15 Comments
  1. CrazyGirlz

    Awesome

  2. Sus

    Awesome dear

  3. Simi

    Awesome

  4. Madhuag

    Acha guys…tell me one thing….do you guys liked the part where sanskar calls swara while she is going inside her home…..plz do tell me about it bcoz it is one of the main part of their love story…so if you guys don’t like it then plz tell me I’ll change it….

  5. Nice. About that ff MARRIAGE LIFE i got only 3 chapters. Whr r others?

    1. Madhuag

      Actually in also don’t know….may be they’ve not posted

  6. Kakali

    Waaaaa I just so loved it.! SwaSan is impossible in past, I loved that scene when Sanskar called her again n again just to see her face. cuteee cuteeeee scenes.!
    At last I knew it was Syappa aueen Twinkle only..!
    Loved everything Madhuuuuuuu..!! Continue soon dear..!! Thnk u.. ;-*

    1. Madhuag

      Thank you kakali….you’ll see the same scene again and again but sanskar give otherbreasons….but the scene will be repeated

  7. Soujanya

    Awesome…

  8. Sus

    Awesome

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