Swasan FF: Entangled Love chapter 64 (last part)

Hey you all here is the last chapter….. enjoy and I want all of my readers, including the silent ones to comment….. it’s a request…..

Here is the link for all the chapters from starting to till now Click here

Previous chapter link: Chapter 63
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Chapter 64
A week later
Entire week was a rollercoaster ride for Swara and Sanskar. Pre wedding Rituals, Reception party followed by a grand gathering organized by the office staff. Although they were enjoying every bit of it but still it was tiring. Being married was altogether a different feeling for them…. Due to all this busy schedule they didn’t get any time to plan for their honey moon trip, Sanskar was guilty for not being able to take her out, because of the inauguration of the Hotel in Bhopal and few of it’s chain in Indore and Gwalior, it was mandatory for him to be there, he couldn’t leave it on anyone else as it was Adarsh’s dream project. But Swara wasn’t upset with it, she assured him not to have any guilt over it, they can plan their trip later. She knew this project holds a great importance for Sanskar…. But as compensation and to reduce his self guilt she asked him to take her to their cottage, his holiday home and he happily agreed….
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Night, at cottage site…
Swara’s face had lit up with pure joy and excitement witnessing the surrounding. Inside the cottage, it was decorated with Candles and flowers everywhere, she felt like being transported to some fairy land… with a broad smile she turned back to Sanskar who was all smiling to her….
“This is awesome, how you did all this?” she asked
“Don’t you know your husband, nothing is impossible for him…. And when my wife asked for something, how could it be just ordinary” he said with proud smile….
She hugged him tightly with affection, “thank you so much” she softly said.
“I have something for you, come” holding her hand he walked in bedroom…. Picking up the file lying on the bed he raised it towards her…. she was looking at him with puzzled eyes….
“What’s this?” she asked

“Why don’t you open and see it” he replied
As she opened the file and read the papers tucked inside, her eyes brimmed with tears…. She could only stare him with teary eyes, more gratified then ever…. Sanskar held her close. Wiping the tears she had on her cheek he whispered “this is my wedding gift to you”
Sanskar has paid all the debts of Shekhar and in return they got back their mansion and company. He transferred company and mansion on the name of Sharmishtha and Ashwin….
Sanskar: (holding her) I wanted to give you this on our wedding night but papers were not ready…. Are you happy Swara?
Swara: (staring him) you don’t know what I am feeling right now, you are a benediction to me… a blessing perhaps….
Sanskar: now Ma and Ashwin are my family and it’s my responsibility to take care of their present and future….. Swara if you can accept my family as yours then why can’t I….
His words struck him hard, touched her soul indeed. She wondered how she could have ended up with such a beautiful person….
“Sanskar I want to do something, may I?” she asked for his permission and he nodded, though little surprised…. The very next moment she bent down and touched his feet, making him gasp in shock…
“Swara, what are you doing? Pagal ho?” he blurted out, quickly pulling her up…
Swara: I am just fulfilling my promise….
He looked questionably with her and she continued…..
Swara: when I was kid, I always wonder why my Dida touches Dadu’s feet. Once I asked her and she told me because husbands are superior and after God for every wife her husband is venerated……… I laughed over it, her words were amusing for me, how a woman can worship a man? She teased me that one day I also have to follow this but I was reluctant. Then she said I will do it happily not being burdened as a ritual and I promised her that if I feel my husband worth of it, I will do it…..
Sanskar looked at her, his eyes filled with immense love. Embracing her tightly he murmured “you are crazy, what I do with you?”
“Just love me like this, always” she replied……
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Mid-night, inside the cottage….

They were reclining on the bed, holding each other, enjoying their closeness in silence….
Sanskar: (to himself) should I ask her, what if she is not ready, might be my words made her uncomfortable?
Swara: (to herself) why he is not moving forward, should I tell him I am ready but how could I, it’s really awkward….
Sanskar: (to himself) I can’t hold back more, she didn’t know how difficult it is for me to suppress my secret temptation…. It’s a sweet torture to be close with her doing nothing….. but I have to wait for her
“Swara, you want to go back?” he asked playing with her fingers…..
“It is a compensation for our honeymoon trip, So…..” she paused feeling hesitant, he stared her with bemused eyes, figuring out whether her words were meant same as he interpreted or it’s just his imagination….

“Swara, don’t play with me” he said closing his eyes….
“I am not, I want you to…..” again she is short of words but he understood what she is trying to tell him…. With intense eyes he pulled her closer and locked his lips with her…. after a small yet passionate kiss, he looked at her. Her eyes were revealing the secret of her own desire, with a tinge of coyness in it.

“I have waited for it so long but now finally……” he whispered and again captured her lips in his for a kiss, a deep and little aggressive one….. kissing her, he rolled over pinning her beneath him. The s*xual tension was brewing between them. She could see the love and passion in his eyes, something she has always wished for, in her lover…. Kissing her neck softly he pushed his hand inside her top and unhooked her bra, it was the beginning and soon all the barriers between them were discarded… to his every touch she was responding with equal delight, trying to match his passion and excitement. He crushed her to him. Although the passion he unleashed in her making her to ask for more but she was also shy with the unfamiliarity of such touch. She moved her hands to hide her bare body, Her eyes were close…
“Look at me baby” he asked softly, almost in whisper

She looked at him, his blazing eyes made her to drop down her gaze….
“I can’t, please” she pleaded…
“Remember, I told you there should be no hiding between you and me…. not even here” he said in hushed tone and removed her hand gently from her upper body… she moved closer and hugged him tightly… the color rushed to her cheek, closing her eyes, she whispered his name…. slowly the flames of desire enveloped them, making them to experience the pinnacle of pleasure…. Now they were one in every sense, their souls were celebrating for their complete confluence….
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Morning, cottage…

Sanskar was staring her silently since he woke up, she was sleeping peacefully, cuddling in his arms…. For him it was one of the most enjoyable sites to look at her innocent face….. caressing her cheek, he kissed her forehead….. she wiggled with his touch and looked at him with her half open eyes….
Sanskar: (pecking her cheek) Good morning love…
Swara: good morning
She realized their position, legs entangled, bare body…. she never thought the morning would turn so awkward after the last night, Sanskar was observing her flushed face….. he moved closer and held her from waist….

“Oh God, not again….. I have to do something to bring you out of your shell” he said making her look at him, holding her chin up… “Don’t worry I figured it out” he whispered…Swara looked at him with puzzled eyes asking through her eyes….
“We have to do it often to make you feel comfortable” he said playfully… she hit him hardly on the chest making him wince a little…
“ouch, Swara easy…” he said holding her hand and then placed his lips on hers, stopping her to say anything….
It is truly said that “Hardship often prepares an ordinary person for an extraordinary destiny”. These two souls experienced that, they met each other when they were broken, empty but ended up being panacea for one another…..
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5 years later…..

Sanskar’s POV

The day she came into my life, everything changed. Her arrival brought hope and happiness along with an eternal solace. She brought me back from the darkness I was living in. I started dreaming again. I probably felt some connection the moment I saw her first but out of my arrogance and fears, I named it as pity…. But never thought this connection would turn out into a lifelong togetherness. I am lucky to have her as my companion, her presence in my life is enough…. I don’t need anything else, she and my own small family….

“oh, you are here…” the voice brought him back from the thoughts, he turned back and gave a small smile to her, Swara suspiciously looked at him….
Swara: (coming up to him) you are here in the balcony, I have been searching you everywhere…. What are you doing?

Sanskar encircled his arm around her waist and bringing her closer kissed her forehead “happy wedding anniversary” he whispered…
“Oh God, how couldn’t I remember, is it 12!” she asked looking at his wristwatch….
“yes dear” he replied and leaned closer to kiss her but stopped in the middle hearing a knock on the door……
“She never forgets” Swara stated looking towards the door with a smile… and rushed to open it, Sanskar followed her
Siya was eagerly waiting outside holding a small cake lighted with candles “Happy wedding Anniversary Ma and dad” she excitedly wished…. It became a ritual to her, she never forget this special Day of her parents, which was equally special for her too… and always wished them in midnight, the first one to wish…..
Swara: (hugging Siya) thank you so much, my bacha….

Sanskar: (caressing her cheek) thanks Princess…
“Happy wedding Anniversary badi mom and bade papa” a sweet boyish voice came behind Siya..
Swara: (shocked) Nikhil!!!
Siya: Ma, I told him to sleep but he was so adamant to wish you two at 12 o’clock, So chachu permit him to sleep in my room…..

Nikhil, 4 year old son of Laksh and Ragini and Siya’s ardent devotee…. He blindly follows her…
Siya: come on dad, ma… cut the cake….
Swara and Sanskar moved towards, blowing the candle they cut the cake together….. Nikhil clapped in excitement….. but Siya looked at him with horrified face…..
Soon room filled with the cries, Swara looked at Sanskar helplessly….. she moved to the bed side and bend down to pick Ayan, their 9 months old son, who all woke up from the sleep with the clapping sound…. Now it will take hours to them to make him sleep again…. Swara moved towards Sanskar and handed over Ayaan to him, he embraced him in his arms “Hey champ, what happened? Stop crying”…. Rubbing his back, he walked inside the room to make him normal again, soon his cries fainted….

He was the small devil wrapped in cute, innocent, charming pelt. The most insolence kid of the house even at this age, he needs constant attention…. Swara sometimes wonder why he is like this, neither Sanskar nor she was of this nature, so from where he got this trait but Sanskar explained her every kid is different and needs different treatment… he was no doubt his father’s boy, Sanskar with Siya’s experience was much better in handling small kids than Swara, he used to do it when Swara was busy with business as she started her own small firm after completing masters…. but Siya can’t hear anything against her brother, instead brothers…. Both Nikhil and Ayaan were her most prized possessions, her darling brothers…..

Sanskar came up to them with Ayaan who was smiling back again with his two front milk tooth, which made him look cutest …. Siya fed cake to Sanskar and Swara and then to Nikhil who was waiting impatiently for his turn…. Swara took a small piece and raised it to Siya but before she could have it, Ayaan snatched it from Swara’s hand and it fell off from her hand, with little part sticking in his hand…..
“Oh God, this little devil” Swara exclaimed….
But they all burst into laughter when Ayaan placed his hand on Sanskar’s face, rubbing the leftover of cake piece on his cheek….
Sanskar shook his head with a smile… and kissed his cheek

This was just one blissful moments of their blessed life, during these five years they had ups and downs, moment of happiness as sorrows, love and fight but together they faced it as they promised to detangle the every entangle one……
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Happy ending…….

Finally It came to an end, I am feeling little nostalgic remembering the entire journey…. But this journey wouldn’t be what it is without you all, my ardent readers….. I am blessed to have one of the most honest and true readers although I was a complete stranger to you but still you never made me feel like this…. loads of love and thank to you all….. there are so many people to thank, every reader is special for me, although different, of it’s own kind but special…..

165 comments

  1. princess Tabu

    wow…wat a grt update…I will really miss ur story…..I never commented…but today I can’t stop myself for commenting….

  2. Misti

    This was one of my favourite ff…I m one of d silent reader …I know I shud comment to ur every part of dis story coz I swear I really really luv every part bt all I cud say I m sorry ….bt ya coming back to story…u r an amazing writer…emotion in ur story was always well expressed…i m ur big fan….waiting fr ur nxt story eagerly

  3. Rabia

    |Registered Member

    mindblowing bhumijaa u gave a complete and perfect ending and specially kids section was sooo sooo adorable loved itt and best of luck for your trainig and come soon with new concept 🙂

  4. Aayu

    So sad… FF FINISH ;-( ;-( ;-( ;-(… But congratz & last part was awesome 😉 …. Plz come soon with new story ……

  5. Febi

    Thank you for giving such a wonderful ff to us…..we’re gonna miss u….come back with new concept….wish u all de best

  6. xavia

    Hey dear…it wz d best story i hv ever read….too simple bt der wz smthng special in it…..d way uh potrayed der feeling der love der emotions der pain happiness……waz just amzing…..n dear i w’d luv if uh vl cm back wid season 2 ……although i didn’t cmntd regularaly…bt i never skipped any epi……uh know wt i read ua half of d story in just 1 go….n dn i realized hw cn i skip such a beautiful story…..n gd luck dear fo ua future….

  7. Haya malik

    |Registered Member

    What the….yr I just started to read…I mean just yesterday I read all the parts…and now its the last part…nooo…

    You are superbbb yr the each and every line of this ff is awesome…this entangled love of swasan has made me crazy….I love your ff a lot…I m just addicted to read more and more .. Please if possible come back with a new and awesome story again please and I m regretting not to read it earlier…
    Love you yr will wait…

    I must tell you the love in your ff was just above anything else…I loved it to core…come back soon

  8. Swasan

    All chapters were amazing never felt that u have unnecessary extended it, too beautiful written with each and every emotion, nyc support of family. Its really one of the amazing fanfiction

  9. pebby

    excellent..I’m habituated of reading your story and I’m gonna miss your story badly .Hope you’ll come up with a new one

  10. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey di,
    The ending was such a sweet one. I just feel soo attached to the ff even though I read it for a few episodes. So, from tomorrow after completing my ff I’m just gonna read one of ur episodes in free time.

    Hope to see you back soon. I’ll miss you!😘

    Loads of love.💞

  11. Needhi

    U know what, i didn’t wanted to scroll down ,thinking it will come to end….lol
    Aww……soo cute..
    Ayaan….i love the name and little devil surely managed to excel his cameo….
    It was so blissful ,with candid moments laced all around the chapter…
    Will miss it & u too….
    Swasan ,can’t get enough of them…..They r just too adorable ,meant to be each other’s destiny….
    Do come with a new ff.
    Waiting eagerly..
    Love u dear…till then be happy and enjoy your frnd’s wedding…..heartiest wishes for her marriage….

  12. Mica

    |Registered Member

    oohh Finally… Sanskar has a kid, married with a kid..gets another kid.. his life perfectly complete….and this FF too..
    well, thank you so very much Bhumija for this lovely story and my swasan love journey,
    wish you will back to us with your others fabulous idea!
    Stay blessed and have beautiful life !! Love you…

  13. Kanthi

    Yaar bhumijha!!! It’s a perfect ending.but I never wanted your ff to end! Your ff is one of my favourites.i will miss it a lot..please start a new one soon … please…please …..

  14. Madhu

    Must say dr mind blowing ff dr…..one of my favorite ff is this…..i really enjoyed while reading ……..sometimes felt happy nd sometimes felt soo much pain……
    Its heart touching ff dr….gonna miss u very badly dr……
    If u can plz come back with new ff…..
    And the last want to say thank u nd love u loads…..best of luck my dr….

  15. Stg

    It was a great story with every part engaging.I was one of the silent readers and should have commented but… a big SORRY🙏 Come back soon with a new plot. 😊 Going to miss u and ur story a lotttttt…😌

  16. Nourin

    Hai, I’m nourin. I never commented in any ff. This is first time.
    Thank you!
    Thank you so much for giving us a wonderful story.
    Thank you.
    We can’t forget you and your story.
    Hats off.
    Love you & will miss you

  17. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    OMG…..awesome. Excellent, fantastic, superb, emotional…….i m short of words.

    I m not able to stop crying….. I still can’t believe it ended…..i ll miss u so much. This is one of the best ffs i have read. I love this ff so much. I m really addicted to it.

    Plz come back soon with another ff or if possible, season 2. Loads of love!

  18. Nive

    |Registered Member

    😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭I WILL MISS UR FF BHUMIJA😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
    U end it so soon.I love ur ff.I am mad of ur ff.Today was wonderful +hot + Awesome + cute+ very charm + marvelous + great +lovely.THANK U MUCH BHUMIJA FOR A WONDERFUL FF ####### BYE I will miss u too.After ur friend marriage u have start a new FF or season 2 k😋.and till then BYE😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  19. shalini

    Superb amazing episode yr😘😘😘😄😄😄
    Last part h to thoda acha bhi ni LG raha aab pata ni KB tumhari story padhne ko milegi .😳😳😳
    Pr JB tk ek chez khtam nahi hogi to dusri start kese hogi to hum SB tumhare next ff ka wait krenge😊😊😊😊😊
    All the best for ur future
    Nd I’ll miss u ur ff nd asanskari sanky 😉😉😉😜😜😜😜😜
    And this beautiful lv story of swasan😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😊😊😊😊

  20. Vaikha

    |Registered Member

    Beautiful..!!! U know very well i just love ur ff and each of ur updates.. Reading each and every update of urs was such an awesome experience,were actually i felt that i was living with swasan and siya.. It was an awesome journey with Entangled Love.. My most favourite ff in TU and the bestest one till date..
    But today i just have a feeling of missing something.. Really bhumija im gonna miss ur ff like hell.. I cant express in words how damn im gonna miss this..
    I just want u to come back with a bang with another ff or as said earlier season 2.. I am gonna wait for ur announcement on d same.. Im sure u will be back for ur die hard ff fans like me..
    Hats off dear.. U are an amazing writer and the one with some extra bundle of talents in writing.. I was in love with ur swasan.. You had created magic with ur words..
    Let me request u.. Will u pls provide an epilogue for Entangled Love.. I dont wanna miss my favourite ff so soon.. While i was opening todays link i felt really sad reading it is gonna be the last chapter.. Now the only hope i have is an epilogue..
    I know every beginning has an ending as well.. U have made a very happy and blissful ending.. Now what else i could ask for..
    Nothing more.. Loved ur ff to the core and always will.. Always deep in my heart Entangled Love will be always remain special.. Gonna miss u dear…. Love u lots.. Take care and stay healthy… Mwaaahh😍😘

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      first of thank you so much Vaikha for your lovely words, it means a lot dear, really a lot….. and about epilogue i have thought to give the last part of kids as an epilogue but then due to lack to time i added that in this part itself….. sorry for that, but would try to come back with another story…..

  21. Dev

    |Registered Member

    Omg…cant think dat this is over….will definetly miss it……n good journey all over here….n lovd d ff……tc…..

  22. Mounika

    Superrrrr … actually i am a silent reader …. this is my first comment ….
    Coming to the episode it was fabulous …
    Waiting for your next ff eagerly
    😊😊😊

  23. Mounika

    Superrrrr … actually i am a silent reader …. this is my first comment ….
    Coming to the episode it was fabulous …
    Waiting for your next ff eagerly ………
    😊😊

  24. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    I love u bhumi Di ….. This was seriously a different ff ….. I just loved although I started reading it in middle and could not enjoy commenting initially but I read full till that episode in one go …. I’ll miss u so much ….. My eyes r brimming with tears while writing this comment…. I know I need not to say that it was a wonderful chapter and loved it ……
    I wanted to tell uu something from begining but halted but today I’ll say u know I love ur name very much …. And it reflects u in siya … As u both have Sita’s name’s synonyms ….. Love u tc😘😘😘😘

  25. Unab

    Hi. This chapter is good but I don’t want it to end this soon. Still I know that every good thing has to come to an end. But it will be ever in my good memories. Thank you for spending your time for us. Wishing you good luck and hoping to see you coming up with another ff.

  26. Paru

    What to say yaar…its a wonderful journey ….loved this last chapter also…I always waited for it fiction…yesterday also haha…now got time to read…loved this Ff from heart….I don’t know how to express….thank god I accidentally read ur fff……all the best for ur career and job stay blessed….come with another story……
    Try to post in wattpad also…it will reach other readers also….as a writer u will get more fame…exposure…… Good luck..

  27. Nisha

    Oh wow… :).. Such a wonderful update and such a beautiful end to your story.. trust me this was an amazing story.. from sanskaar thinking Swara as a kid till this beautiful end, it has been such a wonderful journey.. 😊😊… It had all the emotions… loved how sanskaar took care of her entire family in this update.. awwwww… can anyone be that sweet.. and loved the sweet part where she touched his feet… awwwwww… that is how she finally started seeing him… was something very sweet and significant… showed the progress their relation made… 😊😊👏🏻👏🏻.. loved their romance also… lol.. and the ending was also cute with Swasan and the kids… perfect ending to a perfect ff… I will miss your updates and your story ya… hoping that you will soon give us a new wonderful story… thank you for this amazing story… you are a wonderful writer… 😊😊.. Kudos to you… great story…!!!

  28. Vidhi

    Diii😭😭😭😭this journey at last ended o god u knw when u constantly took a break in between I was worried n was not sure whether u would come back or not n each n everyday I remembered u that what happened so n now how would my day go coz their was an inner feeling that today u would update Bt now it ended so… No plz …i will seriously miss u😭😭😔😔😔seriously crying right now n now u also can’t stop me from crying coz u made me cry😔😔😔😔with this beautiful ff n u beautiful soul….. Ayaan nice name n perfectly expressed their feeling hats off to u di n love u…. Will really miss u😘😍😍😘😘😍😘😍😭😭😭😭😭😭❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  29. DA

    awsmmmm……
    an amazing story finally reached its end….
    a beautiful end indeed where finally each and everyone gets entangled in love….
    hope you continue to treat us with your exceptional works….
    you are just a fab writer……
    continue writing

  30. chanu

    Wow…
    Im speechless dr…
    I hv all da feelings 2gethr.. dnt know hw 2 express.
    Im soo hpy dat they r 2gethr bt im sad bz its da end & 4m 2dy nwrds I cdnt see ur ff in tu..
    🙁 🙁 🙁
    Rly we r blessed 2 read such a beautiful ff.. u r a great writer dr.. dis is a legendary story dr..
    I cdnt 4gt dis ff in whole my life.. I lv dis ff 2 da core.. hey write a book.. im sure u will be a great writer. And u ll surely win every ones heart like here.. 😀 😀
    Im gonna miss u sooo much dr..

    Cmng 2 dis epi.. awww… lv it.. 🙂 :-*
    lots &lots f blissful moments in dis epi.
    Wow swara touched sanskars feet.. it ws ameizing..
    Sanskars pov is sweet
    finally their anniversary.
    Siya I lv u dr..
    and they hv another baby..
    sanskar silent his baby..
    aww such a lvly family.
    and laksh also hv a baby..
    hee hee poor ragini. Nw she hs 2 handle 2 kids lols.
    Rly blessed 2 read dis..

    Firstly I said dat im speechless. Bt nw I speak a lot na..
    sry 4 bore u 4m my bak bak dr.. wt 2 do im always like dis nly.

    plz cm back with another ff after ur training dr
    Keep writing

    be happy always
    Stay blessed
    all the best 4 ur future
    love u alot.
    ♥♥♥♥♥
    Bye dr..
    remember me.
    🙂 🙂 😀 😉 😉 😀 😛

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      chanu, i love u dear….. you always put so much time to give such long comments, i always appreciate that…… always remember you and miss u too, bye tc….

  31. AnuAnn

    |Registered Member

    Loved it dear.. But feeling really sad.. Really w’ll miss you and your ff .. Plzzz try to come with new ff when u get time

  32. kumu

    amazing..loved it ..perfect ending..it is one of my fav ffs..
    beautifully written..u r a grt writer..i knw im gonna miss dis ff so much..
    i knw im greedy bt plz come back with another one..
    thank u so much for dis beautiful story..will miss u..
    all d best for ur training..stay blessed..tc

  33. Swapna

    Great work !!! Short of words to describe, but really loved and lived through the entire journey:)))

    Will miss you & hoping to see you back soon…Take care;)

  34. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Wow awesome and superb ending bhumija….. 😍Loved it a lot…. I will miss this ff like hell….. K dr every ff has an end…. This too….. All the best for ur training dr…. Come back soon with a new ff dr…. Love u….. 😍

  35. chandu

    Superb….!!! It’s really sooo awesome…!! I wish I could read few more parts…!! Thank you soo much for giving us this amazing ff…!! The way you write… your explanations….your cute scenes…laksh sarcasms…everything was superb…!! This is the one the best ff’s I have ever read…!! I would never ever forget this ff…!! I hope you will come up with one more super dooper ff like this… and make us happy…!! 😀 😀
    Bye for now dude…!! We are definitely going to miss this ff…!! 😀 😀

  36. Sandhya

    Hi dear I m silent reader of ur story.. But as today u ended this story I feel like now something will.be missing in my life.. This story bought some n some time tears tooo.. I loved it so much now will miss it surely. Any ways keep writing n come with new story… Thanks for such a wonderful story…

  37. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Bhumija ur ff is one of ma fvrt…
    Loved it… happy ending😍😍… u made dis journey beautiful…👏👏👏
    Thnx for giving dis story to us.. gonna miss u..
    plz cum up wid another story….

  38. Crystal

    |Registered Member

    beautiful and lovely…………… the best journey ever……….. I love you Bhumija………. the best ff till date i have read.. i thought i was showing family in my ff……. but you are just tremendous. good work bhumija hope to see you soon

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      hey dear thank you so much, and let me know the ff you write, i would love to read……. i don’t know actually how many of u are writer over here…… Rabia told me so i have read her work, even Shan’s…….. do tell me love u too….

      • Crystal

        |Registered Member

        Mine is Swasan_Journey from being stubborn to falling in love, Raglak: Love Me Like You Do and Raglak SS_Life full of happiness…… I am again re-posting Swasan_Journey from being stubborn to falling in love in the name of Manan : Jeene Laga Hoon Pehle Se Zyaada by Crystal 😀 but nothing compared to what you have written

  39. Rosh

    I have to say you’ve written this story so beautifully that I so didn’t want you to stop…..
    I know I ‘be been irregular with comments, but if you remember I once commented that you would do it well, actually you’ve done an excellent writing,I feel proud to have read such an excellent story of such a good writer. You’ve improved, I still can’t get enough words to express my gratitude 🙂
    I hope to read more well written stories of you, I think such a talent must never go to waste,keep writing dear.
    As for this story you’ve managed to keep it genuine and perfectly blended in between the characters. I loved the several climaxes that were depicted in the story, while reading you managed to capture the attention of one who indulged in your story. This concept wasn’t new things were predictable, but your enticing way of telling a story is out of the ordinary 🙂 🙂
    Though this story might get old,I for sure know I’ll always remember it 🙂 🙂
    Now I know I can’t give a friendly hug so e- hug send to you 🙂 🙂
    Don’t know when will read another written work of you, till then take care and all the best in life 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      oh, Rosh finally you came….. i was missing you dear….. well better late than never……. thank you so much dear…… a e hug to u too, u too tc……

  40. Shani

    PICTURE PERFECT!! 😍😍😍
    Happy ending with a beautiful, cute epilogue.. Had sparks in my heart reading their simple yet elegant love making scene.. And what a beautiful scene you choose to give us to show their equal love to Siya and Ayaan.. Tremendous work Bhumija..
    And about this beautiful journey..
    Thank you so much for this beautiful, awesome love story.. It’s all about LOVE.. There’s immense love in every single relationship.. And your perfect, skilful writing style makes this reading worthwhile.. Have a blessed future dear..
    And hope we’ll meet again with a beautiful Swasan story..

  41. D.Dashni

    |Registered Member

    I read all parts and all chapters were amazing in its own way…. I am seriously gonna miss this exceptional story….You did a wonderful job dear…Thank you for an amazing swasan fiction 😘Come back soon 😙

  42. prajna

    i have no words im gona mis ur ff,but as u said draginging wouldnt work come back with a new one asap…..entangled love ill miss it …….it was very close to me bcz it was really something wch i always imagined the family wch i would love to hv someone like siya ,,in my life …

  43. @nky

    heyyy …….i just loved ur ff….i never commented on any ff…..but i think u deserve it now….its a wonderful story….i never misses ur daily episodes…..please come up with new ff….i loved ur way of writing story…..with lots of love and best wishes…!!!

  44. Roja

    Congratulations bhumija for sucessful completion of wonderful story…it’s really amazing… everyday i eagarly waited for urs update…. All the best dear… plz come back with another story
    i dont know how to express it…. its just wow…..

  45. Pramudi

    Oh no no.. I have missed a lot. You had updated the last part yesterday.. I thought u would update it today. I think i’m late & last today.. 😔 i don’t know u will see this or not.. 😔
    The journey of entagled love has ended today. And i’m becoming emotional.. Don’t know what to say yaar.. 😔
    Ok.. Coming to the last part..
    It was wonderful.. 💗 specially liked sanskaar’s pov. Loved their simple yet elegant love making scene & loved the sweet part where she touched his feet to show her love & gratitude. 😊
    ‘After 5 years’ part was mind blowing. I think u had written it as the epilogue.. They are celebrating their anniversary with their kids. Swasan have another baby.. A little devil. Raglak also have a baby boy. Siya is sweet as always.. Very well penned down bhumija.. 👏 i don’t get words to describe this part today.
    Bhumija, the whole journey was a bliss dear. I can remember the very first day i commented in this ff.. I loved this ff from that day. You are a wonderful writer. U have the ability to carve beautiful things in reader’s mind..
    So thanks bhumija for entertaining us by giving your 100% in each & every update. Thanks for this wonderful journey. Entangled love holds a special place in my heart & it always will.. Gonna miss you badly dear..
    Stay blessed.. Love u..😘
    Take care.
    Come back with a new one. Ok.. 😊

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      hey Pramudi, i was waiting for you to comment…… it’s ok dear better late than never, oh god you have put so much time for commenting…… here i got many of ardent readers who are keen observers and great reviewers….. and you are among one of them….. thank you so much for you constant support and love…… miss you too dear…. tc and stay happy

  46. NIYA

    The journey has come to an end full of surprises… Loved ur each and every chappy ..best part is u didn’t darg any topic love sanskar’s character in ur ff.
    Come back soon .

  47. Hellyholic

    loved it specially the after leap part,,,,,,,,,,,, it was really heart touching story of love b active agn soon!

  48. Dharshini

    |Registered Member

    An Amazing Ending…You are just awesome dear…
    This was not just a story for me..I got into this story and ur writing made this happen…
    Miss U and ur writing…

  49. Monami

    Amazing !!!! Fabulous…. !!! It has no doubt ….. we r all going 2 miss ur ff so much…. lovely ending………. love u dear <3 Hope so u ur back at ur new ff with new attractive concept… 🙂

  50. Sindhu_Varma

    |Registered Member

    U got a very idiotic reader I am really sorry u knw what I hardly get time to sleep properly thankfully I made time today 😊
    This is best of best parts 😍
    I love ur story nd do come back soon with a new story nd I like the name Ayan 😬🙈
    Love ur idiotic reader

  51. shiksha

    This ff is very special.it had compassion,fusion n also a mixture of everything. It is close to the realities of life. Though I was an irregular n late to give comments; This journey was indeed special for me.
    Think about coming up with a new story when u feel free n comfortable to write.
    Be Happy.
    Stay Blessed.

  52. Jammie

    it is very hard to believe that this is the last part of this FF.. you are one of the best writer dear.. I loved each & every part of this FF… I am gonna miss this sooo much.. whenever u get time please do write.. I will be very happy if u will start season 2 of this FF.. all the best for your life.. hope to see your next work soon..love you.. take care..

  53. Mahjabeen

    Woww amazing dear…u again made me sppechless..nd a perfect ending u made…i loved it a soooo muchhhh😍😘😘😘.
    But flng sad dear dat it ws da last part nd will nt b abl to rd it more…it ws rlly my favroute one..i ws habituated to read dis..i swear i will realyy miss u nd ur ff dear..amazing story it ws.
    Pls come soon with another ff
    Stay blessed dear..
    Good luck for ur coming future…
    Lots of love to u😍😍😍
    Take care..

  54. Thamiazh Magan

    Thank you so much for this lovely story which woven between the emotions of two lovely souls. Now I am terribly missing ur cover photo itself. Eagerly waiting for season 2 (if possible) 😉

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