Hey guyz, here is the next one please do read and commentβ¦.
PS: Are you guys not liking the story the way it is progressing or is it turned boring? In previous chapter I got very less responseβ¦.. if so then please let me know, because your comments, your response motivates me to give you more and betterβ¦β¦ and if you are happy with the story then please leave your commentsβ¦. Your one word means a lot to meβ¦.. I am putting a lot of efforts to give you the best, I spend my nights for thisβ¦β¦ please itβs a request to all my silent readerβs if you really like my work just let me knowβ¦.. thank you guysβ¦. Love you all
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Previous chapter link: Here
Chapter 42
Evening, Garden area, Maheshwari Mansion
Itβs almost a week to Sharmishtha in Maheshwari Mansionβ¦. Swara recovered from her injury, now she was perfectly fineβ¦. So, it was time for Sharmishtha to go back
Annapurna: (passing a cup of tea to her) So, Sharmishtha ji when you have decided to leave for Indore?
Sharmishtha: day after tomorrowβ¦..
Annapurna: (sadly) wish you could stay here for more but I know your son needs you too
Sharmishtha: exactly, what could I do? I am stuck, my one eye is here and other there in Indore
Annapurna: donβt worry about Swara, we all are here for her…..and after this incidence Sanskar is extra careful about the safety of every one, he even deployed personal bodyguards for allβ¦. I assure you she is all safe hereβ¦
Sharmishtha: (smile) I donβt know how to express my gratitude towards you and your familyβ¦. Really Annapurna ji the way you all cared for Shona is just commendable, now I am no more insecure about herβ¦
Annapurna: itβs nothing in comparison with what Swara did for us, she earned our love and respectβ¦. I must say you have given her best upbringing possibleβ¦. You should be a proud mother
Sharmishtha: (smiles) I amβ¦.
They exchanged smiles, after a silence of few second Sharmishtha spoke hesitantly βI was thinking if I could take Shona with me for few days, Ashu is so impatient to meet his sisterβ Annapurna wasnβt expecting this, she was little surprised though it was genuine, Swara didnβt visit to Indore even for once since she came here βI can understβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦.
βNo!!! you canβt take herβ Siya screamed
She heard them and before Annapurna could say anything she interrupted, both the ladies turned to her with bewildermentβ¦.. Siya hurriedly came up to them
Annapurna: (softly) Siya, itβs just a matter of few days, she will come backβ¦..
Siya: (adamantly) No, no, noβ¦.. She will stay with me here, she canβt goβ¦..
Annapurna: (holding Siyaβs hand) bacha, your Shona di has a little brother and he wants to meet herβ¦
Siya: ask him to come here, why she will goβ¦.
Annapurna: (stern voice) Siya, behave yourselfβ¦.
Broken with Annapurnaβs strict tone, she ran from there with teary eyesβ¦.
Annapurna: (looking back to Sharmishtha) please donβt mind, she is just a kidβ¦.
Sharmishtha: No, itβs okβ¦β¦ I can understand her fearβ¦.
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Siya was running in corridor, her weak cries turned into loud weeping which was audibleβ¦..Swara recognized her voice as she crossed her room, she quickly stepped out to look for herβ¦
βSiyaβ¦.β Swara called out her name but the little fiery princess was so involved in her own world that she couldnβt hear anythingβ¦.. Swara was worried, she strode behind herβ¦..
βDadβ¦.β Siya screamed as she reached study room where he was engrossed in work completely, startled by the voice he turned aroundβ¦.. the sight was displeasing for him, agonized with his daughterβs state he stood up from the chair and quickly came up to herβ¦.
Sanskar: Siya, what happened?
Her father, her panacea was there in front of herβ¦. she immediately hugged her legs while cryingβ¦.
Sanskar: (picking her up in his arm) princess, why are you cryingβ¦. Anyone troubled you?
Before she could answer, they got disturbed by Swaraβs voiceβ¦.. she was there at the door step, looking at them with anxious and worried eyesβ¦.
βSiya!!!β Swara called her nameβ¦.
Much to their surprise Siyaβs crying became more louder as she heard Swaraβ¦. little frightened with her reaction, Swara came up to herβ¦.
Swara: (caressing her cheek) what happened dear? Why you are crying?
Releasing herself from Sanskarβs hold, Siya jumped in Swaraβs armsβ¦. Clinging close to her chest she started crying againβ¦.. Swara looked at Sanskar with perplexed eyesβ¦. They were trying to figure out the reason for her behaviorβ¦.
Swara: (rubbing her back) shhhhβ¦.. you are my strong girl na, then how can you cry babyβ¦.
She made her sit on the couch and whipped her tears, due to continuous crying her breathing turned heavyβ¦. Sanskar poured some water in a glass and passed it to Swaraβ¦.
Sanskar: first drink thisβ¦..
Swara helped her to sip someβ¦.. they waited for her to calm down sitting on either sides of herβ¦.
Sanskar: (caressing her hand) Now tell me what happened?
Siya: Shona diβs mom wants to take her back to Indoreβ¦.. She was talking to dadi ma and when I said no to her, dadai ma scolded meβ¦
Sanskar and Swara both looked at each otherβ¦.. It was clearly visible on his face, he was also not pleased with the ideaβ¦. How impatiently he was waiting to divulge his feelings to her and if she will go it would only make him more restlessβ¦.
Siya: (looking at Swara) will you go??
Swara: itβs just for few days Siya then I will come backβ¦. I also need vacation just like you
Sanskar was silent, he didnβt know what to say, though his condition wasnβt as worst as Siya but not even better thenβ¦β¦
Siya: (hugging Swara) No, you canβt goβ¦.
Swara: (caressing her hair) Siya, see I am here with you for so many days, my mother and bhai missed meβ¦.. so, they also want to spend some time with meβ¦
Siya: (releasing herself from Swara) your mother is bad, I donβt like herβ¦..
Sanskar: (angrily) Siya!!! Is this the way to talk? Say sorryβ¦.
Swara wasnβt happy with his reaction, she glared him angrily and silently signaled not to acerbate the situationβ¦.
Siya: (teary eyes) sorryβ¦
Swara: fine dear, you donβt want me to go, I wonβt goβ¦. Happy!! Now stop cryingβ¦
Siya: (cheerfully) really!!…. promise me
Swara: (holding her hand) promiseβ¦.
Siya was all content and happy with Swaraβs promise, she kissed her and ran from there shouting βI will tell this to dadi maβ
Sanskar: (looking at Swara) why you gave her fake hopes, she will be more hurt when you goβ¦.
Swara: it wasnβt a fake hopeβ¦.
Sanskar: (confused) what??
Swara: yes, what I said was trueβ¦.
Sanskar: (shocked) donβt you want to go?
Swara: off course, I do but not like thisβ¦.. How can I leave Siya in such condition, it will make me restless and guiltyβ¦.
Sanskar: and what about aunty? She will get upsetβ¦.
Swara: I will talk to her, I know she will understandβ¦.
He took a deep sigh of relief, Swaraβs decision was a delight for him though somewhere he was little guilty, guilt of withholding Swara here for his self-interest but as it is said everything is fair in love and no doubt he was madly in love with this girlβ¦..
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Night, Swaraβs room
She was thinking how to tell Sharmishtha about her promise to Siya. She knew her decision would disappoint her mother but she was stuck badly, it was impossible to keep everyone happyβ¦.. She was struggling with her own feelings when she heard her motherβs voiceβ¦
Sharmishtha: (flipping the pages of magazine) Shona, I think I should drop the idea of taking you with me this timeβ¦.. I have seen Siya today, she was hurt to know thatβ¦. Poor kid
Swara was shocked to hear her motherβ¦. As if god granted her wishβ¦
Swara: Maaaβ¦.. Really!! I mean, do you really think so?
Sharmishtha: hmmmβ¦. Itβs true I wanted you to come with me but the way Siya reacted I think itβs not the right timeβ¦.. you can come on next weekend, till then you have to find a way to sway Siya because it will be difficult for me to hold back Ashu for longβ¦. He is so impatient to see youβ¦.
Swara: (hugged her mother) thank you so much Ma, you donβt know what you did for meβ¦.. I was in great dilemmaβ¦.. love you Ma…
Sharmishtha: (smiles) love you too my bachaβ¦.
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Morning, Swaraβs room
Swara sitting on the bed with a sad face, cursing her fate when Siya arrivedβ¦..
βGood morning Shona diβ Siya squealed happily
Swara looked at her and replied coldly βGood morningβ
Siya: are you ill?
Swara: No, I am fine dearβ¦..
Siya: but you are looking Sadβ¦.
Swara: no itβs not like that but you are looking very happy today, whatβs the reason?
Siya: yes I amβ¦. There are two thingsβ¦.. first is a secret I canβt tell you and second is dadβs promise, you know what he promised me that you will live here with me foreverβ¦..
Baffled with Siyaβs words, Swara looked at her blanklyβ¦.. She was confused, why he promised something like this to Siya, what he is up to?
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Precap: Surprise, surprise, surpriseβ¦..
123 Comments
it was awesome.. What’s ur age? I mean u work in a bank…. even i help my dad in his business π π
thanks dear and i am 28…..
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thanks Shan……
Superb plz try to post next soon dear and its a short one
thanks Priya and i need some time to write next….. may be day after tomorrow i could update….
No yaar…how can u tell u this is boring… My fav fiction… Sorry I couldn’t able to comment ur previous epi…I just completed it few minutes before…. Dear loved each epi…wen saw ur this epi my face light up…wow…I put msg on prev chapter plz chk……let me read this chapter… I will give u the feedback…
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Cant wait 2 read the nxt ep
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n dont worry dear we luv ur ff….
i will be a bit irregular in commenting coz my exams r near n i am in class tenth bt i surely read ur update as soon as possible….
luv u dear…
keep writing…
stay blessed…
thanks Janvi….. n all the best for your exams….
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hey Aana….. that’s so sweet of you, thank you dear…..
Hi Di. ….don’t feel that you are getting less comments. ….stry is awesome. ……u r a fabulous writer. ……i love ur stry very much. …..I have read firm the 1st episode. ….I will be waiting for u r stry. …….do u know even my frnds call me crazy. ….sometimes mad. ……..there will be many silent readers. …….i am 100% sure about it. …….as I am also one of the silnt rder????. …..cntue …..loved ……really interesting. ……..waiting for nxt episode……. ……update soon di. ….sry fr nt comntng till now………βΊβΊβΊβΊβΊ
Soo sooo sooo awesome chappy dear.. how much my Siya cried today…,,, i dont like her crying…?? i just love bubbly,chirpy,,,naughty,,,adorable Siya… awwww such a cute kid… n d way u portray her it’s mind blowing…here all r superb…but u know what she is my fav character in ur FF… ??… plzz dear i want some SWASANYA scene… if they trio r together i feel soo good… it feels sooooo goood…βΊβΊ..
thanks dear…… n i will try to give you more…….
hey in my opinion u really shouldn’t stop writing coz u r not getting many comments..ur writing is good and if u like to write…juz continue…i can assure u one thing that even if people dont comment on ur ff, they do read it and love it…its juz that they dont know what to say…
thanks dear….. and i won’t stop writing it’s just that when you get feedback on your work it makes you feel good, after all nothing is more precious for a writer than his reader’s review….
Yeepi…thanks for the chapter dear…. Too good….. Loved the way siya was handled by swara…. Sweet chapter…. Eagerly waiting for the surprise…. π love u loads ur writing s too good…don’t u have any doubt in that sweetheart…. Keep writing…. We all live ur work…. We seriously wait for ur update…. U r a gifted writer ….update soon…. Eagerly waiting for next chapter… U increased my curiosity…. π
thanks Swastika…….. your praise means a lot….
Wow….loved this one…he promised siya…I think he will do a surprise date…or proposal… Wow plz post next part soon I can’t wait….siya mera bachaa how sweet she is….remind me my childhood….
thanks Paru……
awsm..loved it..ur story is nt boring at all..it is one of d best ffs i hv ever read..dont end it..continue for ur regular readers..i always wait for ur ff..tc..
thanks Kumu…..
Ur ff is amazing dear plz continue can’t wait for next part awesome dear
thanks dear…..
Arre don’t worry we all are a crazy fan of ur ff…Be positive…Ur evry story is vry vry vry Awesome…I can’t exprss this in words..nd asusual this episode is really Amazingggggg…wht about precap???? can’t wait yaar..
thanks dear…… tysm for liking my work
It’s an awesome ff.. U showcase each n every relationship n emotions in a realistic manner… Keep writing.. N may tu update asap.. ????
From a selfish entangled love fanfan??
thanks Chris…..
We love the story. I wait for the post from the moment I complete with readers. Keep going. Love you lots and our swasan.
thanks Goldie….
u know what!!!! i have reed all 42 episodes in a single day.!!!!… at today 7am-4pm my office .. π inspite of my so much bg schedule…… i cann’t control myself to reed it…………….u r a amused writter dear… π i heard before ur story bt n’t bothered abt it….. Now i am repented !!!!!!!!! why i was being so!!! stupid me… :/ so gddddddddd night ……….. a lotzzzzzzzzzzz love & plz carry on ur story…. i will eagerly w8ing for it π
thank you so much dear…… i appreciate your eagerness to read the story in one go……. keep reading and tc….
very nive
thanks dear….
very nice
Awesome yarr and bhumi sometimes many readers may not be able to comment when they are in hurry or may be thought to comment after sometimes but they forgot u r doing exceptional job because writing more than 40 episodes is not an easy task i my self a writer but i wrote only 9-10 episodes maximum but u r beyond great hats off to your work and dont stop writing may be some readers want to read the story in a fast track ?
thanks Rabia…… you always sound so sensible, love to have you as my reader……. well it’s amazing you are a writer too….. give me the link of your work, i would love to read….
Bhumi currently im writing swasan: how they met
here is the link i hope u’ll read it π
https://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-met-ss-part-1/
and this is the link of my last one
https://www.tellyupdates.com/swara-u-r-everything-two-shots-part-2b/
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oh hi dear, soooo soooo sorry for late comments. I am guilty for not replying on each and every chappy, but what to do as now in my country we are having college summer break…..
So doing volunteering, going out with friends and family……
But sweety don’t you think I am disliking your story, for me it’s one of my favorite stories I am engrossed reading π
I love the twist and turns of the storyline, I think Siya’s part was really emotionally well written.
I like Siya’s role in the story as she is the one bringing the two opposite personages closer to each other π
I hope you don’t mind if I ask you not to rush write your story take time to unravel it on a correct pace π I love it so far, and my well wishes for you, you write well and you will keep improving π
adios ingenious writer, hope to read next chappy soon π
thank you so much rosh……… that’s so sweet of you……… and may i know from which country you are?
you’re welcome, well I’m from Suriname, former colony of The Netherlands in South America, to be precise π
Proud indo-surinamese π , one more reason I like indian serials is that I get to learn little things from diverse cultures in India, you guys mention things that I never knew before π
Ok my bak bak aside, thanks for asking though π
Awesome update……..I want a pov of siya since she met swara till now………will be glad if you think about it……..post the next part soon…….waiting eagerly for next part…….
thanks Tulina….. and definitely i will think about it…….
Sorry bhumija, i missed the previous part. & Read it now. As usual both parts were wonderful.
Eagerly waiting for the surprise.. ?
thanks Pramudi…..
superb
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thanks dear….
Awesome
thanks buddy….
Awesome yr …loved it …waiting for surprise
thank you Deeksha….
Very nice
thanks Ruhi….
omg… swasansiya will be a great family…waiting next surprise *jumping
luv it soo much Bhumija, ty
thanks Mica…..