Swasan FF: Entangled Love chapter 42

Hey guyz, here is the next one please do read and comment….

PS: Are you guys not liking the story the way it is progressing or is it turned boring? In previous chapter I got very less response….. if so then please let me know, because your comments, your response motivates me to give you more and better…… and if you are happy with the story then please leave your comments…. Your one word means a lot to me….. I am putting a lot of efforts to give you the best, I spend my nights for this…… please it’s a request to all my silent reader’s if you really like my work just let me know….. thank you guys…. Love you all
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Chapter 42

Evening, Garden area, Maheshwari Mansion

It’s almost a week to Sharmishtha in Maheshwari Mansion…. Swara recovered from her injury, now she was perfectly fine…. So, it was time for Sharmishtha to go back
Annapurna: (passing a cup of tea to her) So, Sharmishtha ji when you have decided to leave for Indore?
Sharmishtha: day after tomorrow…..
Annapurna: (sadly) wish you could stay here for more but I know your son needs you too
Sharmishtha: exactly, what could I do? I am stuck, my one eye is here and other there in Indore
Annapurna: don’t worry about Swara, we all are here for her…..and after this incidence Sanskar is extra careful about the safety of every one, he even deployed personal bodyguards for all…. I assure you she is all safe here…
Sharmishtha: (smile) I don’t know how to express my gratitude towards you and your family…. Really Annapurna ji the way you all cared for Shona is just commendable, now I am no more insecure about her…
Annapurna: it’s nothing in comparison with what Swara did for us, she earned our love and respect…. I must say you have given her best upbringing possible…. You should be a proud mother
Sharmishtha: (smiles) I am….
They exchanged smiles, after a silence of few second Sharmishtha spoke hesitantly “I was thinking if I could take Shona with me for few days, Ashu is so impatient to meet his sister” Annapurna wasn’t expecting this, she was little surprised though it was genuine, Swara didn’t visit to Indore even for once since she came here “I can underst…………….
“No!!! you can’t take her” Siya screamed
She heard them and before Annapurna could say anything she interrupted, both the ladies turned to her with bewilderment….. Siya hurriedly came up to them
Annapurna: (softly) Siya, it’s just a matter of few days, she will come back…..
Siya: (adamantly) No, no, no….. She will stay with me here, she can’t go…..
Annapurna: (holding Siya’s hand) bacha, your Shona di has a little brother and he wants to meet her…
Siya: ask him to come here, why she will go….
Annapurna: (stern voice) Siya, behave yourself….
Broken with Annapurna’s strict tone, she ran from there with teary eyes….
Annapurna: (looking back to Sharmishtha) please don’t mind, she is just a kid….
Sharmishtha: No, it’s ok…… I can understand her fear….
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Siya was running in corridor, her weak cries turned into loud weeping which was audible…..Swara recognized her voice as she crossed her room, she quickly stepped out to look for her…

“Siya….” Swara called out her name but the little fiery princess was so involved in her own world that she couldn’t hear anything….. Swara was worried, she strode behind her…..

“Dad….” Siya screamed as she reached study room where he was engrossed in work completely, startled by the voice he turned around….. the sight was displeasing for him, agonized with his daughter’s state he stood up from the chair and quickly came up to her….
Sanskar: Siya, what happened?
Her father, her panacea was there in front of her…. she immediately hugged her legs while crying….
Sanskar: (picking her up in his arm) princess, why are you crying…. Anyone troubled you?
Before she could answer, they got disturbed by Swara’s voice….. she was there at the door step, looking at them with anxious and worried eyes….
“Siya!!!” Swara called her name….
Much to their surprise Siya’s crying became more louder as she heard Swara…. little frightened with her reaction, Swara came up to her….
Swara: (caressing her cheek) what happened dear? Why you are crying?
Releasing herself from Sanskar’s hold, Siya jumped in Swara’s arms…. Clinging close to her chest she started crying again….. Swara looked at Sanskar with perplexed eyes…. They were trying to figure out the reason for her behavior….
Swara: (rubbing her back) shhhh….. you are my strong girl na, then how can you cry baby….
She made her sit on the couch and whipped her tears, due to continuous crying her breathing turned heavy…. Sanskar poured some water in a glass and passed it to Swara….
Sanskar: first drink this…..
Swara helped her to sip some….. they waited for her to calm down sitting on either sides of her….
Sanskar: (caressing her hand) Now tell me what happened?
Siya: Shona di’s mom wants to take her back to Indore….. She was talking to dadi ma and when I said no to her, dadai ma scolded me…
Sanskar and Swara both looked at each other….. It was clearly visible on his face, he was also not pleased with the idea…. How impatiently he was waiting to divulge his feelings to her and if she will go it would only make him more restless….
Siya: (looking at Swara) will you go??
Swara: it’s just for few days Siya then I will come back…. I also need vacation just like you
Sanskar was silent, he didn’t know what to say, though his condition wasn’t as worst as Siya but not even better then……
Siya: (hugging Swara) No, you can’t go….
Swara: (caressing her hair) Siya, see I am here with you for so many days, my mother and bhai missed me….. so, they also want to spend some time with me…
Siya: (releasing herself from Swara) your mother is bad, I don’t like her…..
Sanskar: (angrily) Siya!!! Is this the way to talk? Say sorry….
Swara wasn’t happy with his reaction, she glared him angrily and silently signaled not to acerbate the situation….
Siya: (teary eyes) sorry…
Swara: fine dear, you don’t want me to go, I won’t go…. Happy!! Now stop crying…
Siya: (cheerfully) really!!…. promise me
Swara: (holding her hand) promise….
Siya was all content and happy with Swara’s promise, she kissed her and ran from there shouting “I will tell this to dadi ma”
Sanskar: (looking at Swara) why you gave her fake hopes, she will be more hurt when you go….
Swara: it wasn’t a fake hope….
Sanskar: (confused) what??
Swara: yes, what I said was true….
Sanskar: (shocked) don’t you want to go?
Swara: off course, I do but not like this….. How can I leave Siya in such condition, it will make me restless and guilty….
Sanskar: and what about aunty? She will get upset….
Swara: I will talk to her, I know she will understand….
He took a deep sigh of relief, Swara’s decision was a delight for him though somewhere he was little guilty, guilt of withholding Swara here for his self-interest but as it is said everything is fair in love and no doubt he was madly in love with this girl…..
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Night, Swara’s room

She was thinking how to tell Sharmishtha about her promise to Siya. She knew her decision would disappoint her mother but she was stuck badly, it was impossible to keep everyone happy….. She was struggling with her own feelings when she heard her mother’s voice…
Sharmishtha: (flipping the pages of magazine) Shona, I think I should drop the idea of taking you with me this time….. I have seen Siya today, she was hurt to know that…. Poor kid
Swara was shocked to hear her mother…. As if god granted her wish…
Swara: Maaa….. Really!! I mean, do you really think so?
Sharmishtha: hmmm…. It’s true I wanted you to come with me but the way Siya reacted I think it’s not the right time….. you can come on next weekend, till then you have to find a way to sway Siya because it will be difficult for me to hold back Ashu for long…. He is so impatient to see you….
Swara: (hugged her mother) thank you so much Ma, you don’t know what you did for me….. I was in great dilemma….. love you Ma…
Sharmishtha: (smiles) love you too my bacha….
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Morning, Swara’s room

Swara sitting on the bed with a sad face, cursing her fate when Siya arrived…..
“Good morning Shona di” Siya squealed happily
Swara looked at her and replied coldly “Good morning”
Siya: are you ill?
Swara: No, I am fine dear…..
Siya: but you are looking Sad….
Swara: no it’s not like that but you are looking very happy today, what’s the reason?
Siya: yes I am…. There are two things….. first is a secret I can’t tell you and second is dad’s promise, you know what he promised me that you will live here with me forever…..
Baffled with Siya’s words, Swara looked at her blankly….. She was confused, why he promised something like this to Siya, what he is up to?
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Precap: Surprise, surprise, surprise…..

123 comments

  1. Paru

    No yaar…how can u tell u this is boring… My fav fiction… Sorry I couldn’t able to comment ur previous epi…I just completed it few minutes before…. Dear loved each epi…wen saw ur this epi my face light up…wow…I put msg on prev chapter plz chk……let me read this chapter… I will give u the feedback…

  2. JANVI

    it was awsm dear….
    fingers crossed for d surprise….
    n dont worry dear we luv ur ff….
    i will be a bit irregular in commenting coz my exams r near n i am in class tenth bt i surely read ur update as soon as possible….
    luv u dear…
    keep writing…
    stay blessed…

  3. Aana

    Hi Di. ….don’t feel that you are getting less comments. ….stry is awesome. ……u r a fabulous writer. ……i love ur stry very much. …..I have read firm the 1st episode. ….I will be waiting for u r stry. …….do u know even my frnds call me crazy. ….sometimes mad. ……..there will be many silent readers. …….i am 100% sure about it. …….as I am also one of the silnt rder😉😉😉😉. …..cntue …..loved ……really interesting. ……..waiting for nxt episode……. ……update soon di. ….sry fr nt comntng till now………

  4. Aana

    Hi Di. ….don’t feel that you are getting less comments. ….stry is awesome. ……u r a fabulous writer. ……i love ur stry very much. …..I have read firm the 1st episode. ….I will be waiting for u r stry. …….do u know even my frnds call me crazy. ….sometimes mad. ……..there will be many silent readers. …….i am 100% sure about it. …….as I am also one of the silnt rder😉😉😉😉. …..cntue …..loved ……really interesting. ……..waiting for nxt episode……. ……update soon di. ….sry fr nt comntng till now………☺☺☺☺☺

  5. Kakali

    Soo sooo sooo awesome chappy dear.. how much my Siya cried today…,,, i dont like her crying…😊😊 i just love bubbly,chirpy,,,naughty,,,adorable Siya… awwww such a cute kid… n d way u portray her it’s mind blowing…here all r superb…but u know what she is my fav character in ur FF… 😙😙… plzz dear i want some SWASANYA scene… if they trio r together i feel soo good… it feels sooooo goood…☺☺..

  6. Sarswati

    |Registered Member

    hey in my opinion u really shouldn’t stop writing coz u r not getting many comments..ur writing is good and if u like to write…juz continue…i can assure u one thing that even if people dont comment on ur ff, they do read it and love it…its juz that they dont know what to say…

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      thanks dear….. and i won’t stop writing it’s just that when you get feedback on your work it makes you feel good, after all nothing is more precious for a writer than his reader’s review….

  7. Swastika

    Yeepi…thanks for the chapter dear…. Too good….. Loved the way siya was handled by swara…. Sweet chapter…. Eagerly waiting for the surprise…. 😀 love u loads ur writing s too good…don’t u have any doubt in that sweetheart…. Keep writing…. We all live ur work…. We seriously wait for ur update…. U r a gifted writer ….update soon…. Eagerly waiting for next chapter… U increased my curiosity…. 🙂

  8. Paru

    Wow….loved this one…he promised siya…I think he will do a surprise date…or proposal… Wow plz post next part soon I can’t wait….siya mera bachaa how sweet she is….remind me my childhood….

  9. kumu

    awsm..loved it..ur story is nt boring at all..it is one of d best ffs i hv ever read..dont end it..continue for ur regular readers..i always wait for ur ff..tc..

  10. Mariyamul Aysha

    Arre don’t worry we all are a crazy fan of ur ff…Be positive…Ur evry story is vry vry vry Awesome…I can’t exprss this in words..nd asusual this episode is really Amazingggggg…wht about precap???? can’t wait yaar..

  11. Chris

    It’s an awesome ff.. U showcase each n every relationship n emotions in a realistic manner… Keep writing.. N may tu update asap.. 😁😁😀😀

    From a selfish entangled love fanfan😜😁

  12. Goldie

    We love the story. I wait for the post from the moment I complete with readers. Keep going. Love you lots and our swasan.

  13. Monami

    u know what!!!! i have reed all 42 episodes in a single day.!!!!… at today 7am-4pm my office .. 🙁 inspite of my so much bg schedule…… i cann’t control myself to reed it…………….u r a amused writter dear… 🙂 i heard before ur story bt n’t bothered abt it….. Now i am repented !!!!!!!!! why i was being so!!! stupid me… :/ so gddddddddd night ……….. a lotzzzzzzzzzzz love & plz carry on ur story…. i will eagerly w8ing for it 🙂

  14. Rabia

    |Registered Member

    Awesome yarr and bhumi sometimes many readers may not be able to comment when they are in hurry or may be thought to comment after sometimes but they forgot u r doing exceptional job because writing more than 40 episodes is not an easy task i my self a writer but i wrote only 9-10 episodes maximum but u r beyond great hats off to your work and dont stop writing may be some readers want to read the story in a fast track 😍

  15. rosh

    oh hi dear, soooo soooo sorry for late comments. I am guilty for not replying on each and every chappy, but what to do as now in my country we are having college summer break…..
    So doing volunteering, going out with friends and family……
    But sweety don’t you think I am disliking your story, for me it’s one of my favorite stories I am engrossed reading 🙂
    I love the twist and turns of the storyline, I think Siya’s part was really emotionally well written.
    I like Siya’s role in the story as she is the one bringing the two opposite personages closer to each other 🙂
    I hope you don’t mind if I ask you not to rush write your story take time to unravel it on a correct pace 🙂 I love it so far, and my well wishes for you, you write well and you will keep improving 🙂
    adios ingenious writer, hope to read next chappy soon 🙂

      • rosh

        you’re welcome, well I’m from Suriname, former colony of The Netherlands in South America, to be precise 🙂
        Proud indo-surinamese 🙂 , one more reason I like indian serials is that I get to learn little things from diverse cultures in India, you guys mention things that I never knew before 🙂
        Ok my bak bak aside, thanks for asking though 🙂

  16. Tulina

    |Registered Member

    Awesome update……..I want a pov of siya since she met swara till now………will be glad if you think about it……..post the next part soon…….waiting eagerly for next part…….

  17. Pramudi

    Sorry bhumija, i missed the previous part. & Read it now. As usual both parts were wonderful.
    Eagerly waiting for the surprise.. 😍

  18. chandu

    It’s sooo amazing ff…!! It’s not at all boring…!! I liked every episode of this ff…!! waiting for next part…!!

  19. Anaya

    Hi dear.. Story is very nice.. I wait everyday to read this.. Its one among the best stories.. Don’t think it’s boring.. Its really very nice

  20. Sree

    Why are u thinking to end this ff dear.. Its one of the best ff in tu… Its awesome and i love the way u write.. Pls don’t end it dear.. Continue with the way u like and im sure it will be simply superb and will love it

  21. Madhu

    No dr ur ff soo awsome dr….it diffrent from my other favourite ff….i loved the way u write……its soo nice….dont be upset dr ☺☺☺☺

    Why swara upset???? 😱😱😱😱dont shout at siya dr
    And what is snky upto….😃😃😃😃😃😃Waiting fr next partttttttt😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Update asap dr…..👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

    Part was outstanding dr….awesome…..💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

  22. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Hey don’t be sad dear… v al love ur ff..
    N coming to d chappy it was gud… i undrstnd siyaz feelings bt Ashu is also small hez jus 10.. he also need his sistr.. n d way siya rctd ur mom is bad i dun lyk her… she did so coz she finds mother figure in swara n love her so much… was feeling bad for ASHU… n abt d precap sanky wil take swara n siya to indore yippie 😉

  23. Vidhi

    Di its just awesome n not at all boring plz continue u can’t believe Bt I can’t stay without this ff that’s the only reason that although my exams r going on still I come n read this…😁😁😁😁. N the episode was awesome… Aww so sweet siya is n the promise OMG… 😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍

  24. Vidhi

    N plz don’t think of ending it plz…. 😔😔😘😘😘n the episode was amazing…. Loved it 😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍update soon n inform….

  25. Jency robert

    No no dear…..dnt be worried. ..its awesome buddy….waiting fr ur nxt update…its really interesting yaar…😘😘😘😘😘

  26. Rock Leon

    Hi dear!
    Sorry to say yar but u hurted alot by saying that we are not liking ur ff
    U know wht I’m obsessed wth ur ff
    I wait whole day for ur ff and ur saying that ewe don’t like ur ff
    Its really amazing dear !!!
    Its awesome
    U know its really diff from other ff with a new concept
    And han don’t dare to.say from now pn that we r not liking ur fanfiction
    Sorry if I had hurted u!!
    Still waiting for ur next part!!!

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      i am sorry dear, i have no intention to hurt u…….. it just that i was confused whether u all are happy with the pace and story line of the story or not……. but thank you so much for your love……. and i promise i won’t say it again….

  27. kiruthi

    in really impatient to read ur ff. Its not at all boring . Its really nice suberbbb. My morning starts with reading ur ff only. If i got up frm midnight i will check it wheather u posted or not. I dnt know y but ur ff driven me a crazy. I am always waitin for updates impateintly. Sry for not commending daily updates. And one request plss if u cant update pls tell us once when will u update because we cant wait dear.

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      thanks Kiruthi….. i can’t tell u how happy i am to know your love for my work…. and i will post next part part day after tomorrow…

  28. Prerana

    Who told you your ff is boring ah u r one of the best …its amazing what should I tell you instead of reading for exam I’m reading ur ff do u need a better example

  29. chanu

    Sry 4 late cmnt
    who said dis ff is boring??? Dnt even think dat this ffs boring. Rly this ff is one f best ff in tu according 2 me..
    We all lv ur ff.. ♥
    dnt be sad f low cmnts. Sm f ur fans may hv wrks.. 😉 🙂

    ur epi is beautiful as always
    Sanskars promise 2 siya is soo sweet..
    waiting 4 ur surprise.

    keep writing dr
    be happy always

  30. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    OMG….finally sanskar is going to propose her. Awesome chappy…loved it. Swasan-siya bonding is so amazing and so adorable. Can’t wait for d next ep.

  31. rupa

    Hey its awsome yar. u dont know how much i love ur ff .I wait for this ff daily n when i see its new part a big smile come on my face so dear post next part asasp

  32. pravee

    Bhumi cant you update next part today itself.cause my delivery date is tomorrow and before that I want to catch one more lovely update of your ff

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      i am so sorry dear….. i if you have informed me little earlier i would have definitely given u one more chapter today but it’s late so couldn’t possible…….. but promise dear i will give u more chapters in future…… all the best dear

  33. Anniya

    |Registered Member

    A big wala sorry to you bhumi di, I don’t know how I missed so many parts.
    This part is so good, little bit confusion now I going to read all my missed parts…
    Again sry…

  34. Shani

    Beautiful part.. 😍😍
    I’ll tell you a secret.. Actually I didn’t love “Siya” at beginning.. Coz I’m kinda SwaSan freak that don’t like any third party in SwaSan love story.. But you changed me.. I love the way you building up her character.. She’s so sweet to not to love.. As always, love Swasan scene superb..
    And Bhumija, don’t you dare to change the way you write.. This is a perfect story.. If someone wants a FF with whole SwaSan scenes, there’s lot lovely dovey FF out there.. But we want a beautiful, well balanced, perfect story..
    Your FF gives me a great satisfaction like I read a good novel.. So keep it up.. 😘😘

  35. Mahjabeen

    Dear relly its speechles..no words to describe da part..i love ur ff a lot..tdy swara nd siya bond ws awesome.nd i aways wait fr ur ff egrly…thanks for ur update dear..waitng fr nxt..post soon

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