Swasan FF: Entangled Love chapter 28

I know you must be in dream land, thanks for your response…… here is the next part, enjoy…………
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Chapter 27
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Chapter 28

Precap: Swara and Sanskar’s night in hotel….. and their first kiss

He was in the reception area sitting on a couch with his head on his hands, all angry and frustrated with himself, repenting for his deed. There was no one in the reception area except him. On the contrary the sky was calm now, no thunder, no rain and no storm.

Sanskar’s POV

God! I kissed her…. how can I kiss her? What had happened to me? I was damn angry on myself “are you out of your senses? You messed up everything” my brain accusing me. She is my daughter’s governess, how can I do this with her? “My Shona is very innocent and pure…she is not familiar with the real world… I am afraid people may take her advantage… please take care of her… now my daughter is your responsibility” her mother’s word echoed in my ears. Now, I was feeling guilty. She trusted me with her daughter and I broke her trust. I was not only concerned about her mother but also about her. What she must be thinking of me? Will she hate me for this? This thought was killing me. But wait! She was also involved in that kiss, she reciprocated. But she was also the one who pulled back, my mind warned me. I was restless….didn’t know what to do? The big question was “how I am going to face her?” Whole night I was struggling with my thoughts….and at a crack of dawn sleep took over me. Although many times I thought of giving a check to her whether she is fine or not! but couldn’t muster courage to move to the room.

She was sitting on the bed… her body was numb. She was trying to figure out what all happened was real or a dream? Thousands of questions were going through her mind… suddenly she felt dizzy… her body and brain were totally exhausted partially due to no food and hectic day and partially because of what happened just now. With lots of difficulty she made herself stand and moved towards the table to take water jug but she stumbled and very next moment collapsed on the floor. Everything around her was seems like spinning, slowly her vision got blurred and she became unconscious.
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Morning, 7: 00 am

His sleep got disturbed with the hustle and bustle around him. With sleepy eyes he looked around to figure out what is happening? The people were coming in and going out… few were at the receptionist’s desk enquiring about something may be room he thought. Two men were sitting in front of him, busy in reading newspaper. Then he saw a lady who was sitting at one corner of the couch next to him, looking at him with amusement. He ignored all that and made himself presentable by adjusting his clothes and hairs. Again guilt took over him as he remembered the last night incident. With that thought of Swara came to his mind. He decided to move towards the room but something stopped him. “How she will behave with me? Will she be angry on me or ignore me?” these thoughts started haunting him and he couldn’t move.
“Good morning Sanskar sir” a loud voice brought him back to the real world. He looked around and saw Mohit standing little far from him with a pleasing smile on his face.
Mohit: (came up to Sanskar) I thought you must be sleeping but you are up? I hope last night was comfortable for you.

Sanskar: (fake smile) yeah… it was.
Mohit: come lets have breakfast together… we are meeting after so long, I have lots to talk.
Sanskar: (hesitantly) actually Mohit I would love to but I have an important meeting to attend so have to leave… we will surely do it next time.
Mohit: (with smile) it’s ok sir… I can understand. By the way where is Swara?
This question brought back the memories of last night to him. A wave of mixed emotions crossed his face. But then he noticed that Mohit was waiting for his answer.
Sanskar: (sadly) she is up in the room…. (Thought for a while and said) Mohit can you do me one more favour?

Mohit: off course ask me what can I do for you?
Sanskar: please send someone to inform Swara that I am waiting for her here… we are leaving.

Sanskar’s POV

Mohit nodded and called a boy from the staff and send him to the room. I was feeling relieved because I didn’t want to face her in that room again. It will be uncomfortable for both of us. Mohit and I were talking about our life after college and now. I asked him to come home for some weekend. We were busy in our talks when the same boy to whom Mohit send to the room came running to us. He was looking worried. “Sir mam is not responding, I knocked the door many times even called her on intercom but she didn’t revert back” he said looking at Mohit. This made me shocked, I was worried will be an understatement, at that time worst thoughts were coming to me. I wasn’t even able to react thank god Mohit was there. He asked for the duplicate key of the room and we rushed from there. As soon as the door opened, I got horrified by the scene in front of me. She was lying on the floor like a lifeless body, I rushed to her and lifted her in my arms and made her lie on the bed. Her body was burning… just to confirm I touched her forehead and the very next moment I asked Mohit to call doctor. I tried to wake her up by calling her name, patting her face, sprinkling water but all went in vain. Looking at her pale face I took her hands in mine. I was cursing myself for leaving her alone in the room. “Sanskar sir….Doctor is here” Mohit’s voice broke my trance.

Sanskar: (panicked) doctor, please check her…. don’t know what happened to her.
Doctor: (in calm tone) don’t panic…. Let me check first.
Sanskar got up from bed and stood near her…. doctor checked her pulse and temperature and after examining her he spoke.

Doctor: (looking at Sanskar) she is weak, may be not had her food properly. Due to this she got fever… temperature is high 101 (looking at thermometer). I am giving her injection right now and once she gets conscious give her the medicines I am prescribing.
Sanskar: (worriedly) is something serious?
Doctor: not much but just take care that she takes proper rest and have proper diet.
Sanskar explained doctor everything and asked him that is it safe for her to travel, because they have to leave. After getting assurance about little travelling will not be harmful for her, he decide to leave.
Mohit: (confused) how it happened? You were here with her whole night then when she got unconscious?

Sanskar not knowing what to answer him just kept quiet while staring Swara…
Doctor: (worry) don’t worry your wife will be fine soon.
Mohit looked at Sanskar to see his reaction on mentioning of Swara as his wife again. But to his surprise this time he didn’t bother to explained anything about their relationship. He just gave a weak smile to doctor and thanked him.

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9:00 am

Contrary to yesterday, today it was a sunny morning…. Sanskar looked outside the window, everything seemed so fresh then he looked in the mirror to have a glance of Swara who was sleeping peacefully at the back seat due to the effect of injection. She was looking pale, her charm got vanished but still in this horrible state she was looking beautiful to him. No matter how annoying he felt with her arguments but right now he was missing that. He wanted her to speak, anything but speak.
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Maheshwari Mansion

Inside the Maheshwari mansion everybody was busy in having their breakfast. Servants were serving food to them. Laksh was talking about new recruitments for the company as they need some professionals for Sanskar’s new project. Ragini and Sujata were discussing about purchasing some new clothes for the coming wedding season. Annapurna feeding soup to Siya who skipped her school today stating that she is having stomach ache which was nothing more than a lame excuse. They got disturbed by a familiar voice calling servant’s name.
Sanskar: (Holding swara in his arms) kaka, Kaushalya kaki, come fast.
All get startled with his loud voice as they can easily made out that something was wrong. They all turned to look at him and got shocked to see Swara like that in Sanskar’s arm. Leaving everything they ran towards him, at the entrance.
Ram: (worriedly) Sanskar! What happened to her?

Sanskar: I will tell you all this later first let me take her to her room.
He moved towards her room and placed her carefully on bed, covered her with a blanket and touched her forehead to check the temperature. With worried face he looked at Kaushalya and asked her to bring a bowl of cold water and cloth strips. The whole family was present there, in daze busy in figuring out about the happenings.
Annapurna: (lost her patience) Sanskar, tell us what happened to her? She was fine when I talked to you last night then how she end up like this?
Sanskar: (with guilt in his eyes) Ma… she got drenched up yesterday in rain and even didn’t had her dinner… and got unconscious, doctor said due to weakness and cold she got unconscious.
Kaushalya: (remembering something) yesterday, it was her fast. She even denied having fruits when I asked her to have.

Everybody was shocked to know that the girl didn’t have anything since last morning, while Sanskar got little angry to know that she didn’t tell him anything about fasting.
Siya: (sat next to Swara and touching her hand) Dad, when she will wake up?
Sanskar: very soon but for that she need to take rest.
Ragini took the bowl of water from Kaushalya and started placing wet cloth strips on her head. Sujata instructed Kaushalya to prepare kadha (homemade remedy for cold) for cold. Annapurna sat near Swara and caressed her face lovingly.

Annapurna: Sanskar… have you informed her mother? They should know about it.
Sanskar: mom, let her get conscious then I will tell them… otherwise they will get panic.
While everyone’s attention was towards Swara, the pair of eyes was busy in scanning Sanskar’s face. Laksh was continuously staring his brother, observing every small emotion on his face, little astounded seeing this shade of Sanskar. As he knew him, he never showed such concern for any outsider, it wasn’t that he was rude or inhuman but life had made him to learn to suppress his emotions but today it was different. A small smile crept on his face which he tried to hide from others but Ragini noticed that and confused with her husband’s behavior which was not apt for the situation.
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Precap: Swara and Sanskar avoiding each other……

90 comments

  1. Vidhi

    O god… What to say about u di…. U r just awesome 😘😉😘the way sanskar cared for swara was just out of words…. Plz update soon I can’t wait… N di I want to share something with you that is. U knw my all time favourite tu writers were MEHER, Stella, Sanjana, jwala, namrata Bt now u became my favourite….thanks for such a beautiful ff… It’s just awesome…..

    • Vidhi

      Di its just awesome… 😘😘😍😘😘😍u made my day…. Plz update soon plz… 😉😍😊😊😍😊😍

      • Vidhi

        N di… Plz ignore such stupid people who bash u they don’t have any other work than bashing…. Plz u don’t get dishearten plz… N plz continue plz

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      thank you so much Vidhi dear……… your words means a lot to me……. and dear don’t bash the haters let them do what they want to….. because least bothered

  2. Vidhi

    O really than u r wasting time if u find this crap then why the hell are u reading it, it seems u also find interesting… First of all we don’t invite u to read this n after that coming n bashing seriously… See just if u don’t like it n plz don’t comment how can u say that n I think u are jeolous bcoz my di (bhumija) is getting more comment than ur so called ragsan writer if u can’t appreciate don’t bash is that clear…. N we love bhumija di n her ff n she is really talented than u n ur soo called ragsan writer don’t ever try to bash her

  3. yogita

    Hai ragsan fan, if u can’t accept how awesome is this ff then u don’t comment something about the ff. I love how the way it is written. Please continue writing I’m eagerly waiting fr next episode.

  4. Swastika

    Wooooow really very nice update dear…. Don’t give a damn to the haters….. dogs bark seeing a mountain…..just ignore them….. Their are hell lot of people who love ur story… Plz continue… They are just jealous tht they don’t get such worderful ff’s . Loved the episode…..update soon dear……as for the haters….let them die in their own hatred. Don’t spoil ur mood for such people….they just don’t worth it….. Keep writing and keep smiling…. Love ur writing style…..eagarly waiting for next update….do update soon.

    And to the haters….do keep ur views to urself…..nobody needs ur opinion here

  5. Madhu

    Dr it was just awesome…mind blowing….oh god…just superb dr…dont know what to say. But i must say you are GREAT WRITER…..super dr…..well done…cant wait for next part…..
    Love u and ur ff sooooo much dr…..
    Waiting fr next part……

  6. Swastika

    Seriously….what the hell is ur problem….if you really have tht talent show tht in ur ff…..nobody asked ur opinion….keep ur views to urself….. Who the hell told u to read in the first place….. spare us….keep ur senseless views to urself….. And y don’t you invest ur time in reading wht ever crap rag…………….San ff’s which are very very limited I guess…… I Never read them though….I can’t imagine my sanky with other than swara.

  7. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Shame on u…. Dont ever say that u r ragini and sanskar fan….. U r not worth to be in any fandom…. I think u dont have any work….. U r commenting in every swasan ff like this….. If u dont have any work go eat and sleep…. Instead dont post such rubbish comment….. Its not good for u…. U coward bashing behind???? Idiot…. Idiot is decent word…. Dont make me use bad words….. All writers are great…. Whether they write swasan or swalak pr raglak or ragini and sanskar ff all writers are awesome…. Have u written any ff???? Without writing dont comment like this…..

  8. rosh

    Gosh it’s not about whether it should be swasan or ragsan or whatever, it’s about the story plot itselfs. Commenting as such doesn’t make sense, alas its your opinion. If you seem to be offended then skip this story, but please you don’t have to humiliate other writers who don’t write according to you…..

  9. Mahjabeen

    Suoerb dear…sanskar emotion nd caring toward swara was rlly v.nice..its goimg day by day interesting…waitng fr nxt…post soon

    Nd u ‘ragsan fan’ if u feel dis story a carp den y u bother to rd it..no one said u to rd it..nd y u r just insulting all swasans writer..same thing u post on “swasan ss doorie sahi jaye n”…just stay away…go nd rd ur ragsan ff..

  10. Madhu

    Hey i dont know who you are (ragsan fan)
    But if u want read ragsan fan why the hell u came to here????? And one thing if u dont like this ff then ignore it dont bash bhumija…..
    We can undrestand your probler easily…..i think you guys are not getting such a good respons like this ff….you are jelouse thats why you are doing this….
    And one thing,
    Bhumija doesnt want to learn anything from who writes ragsan ff….but bhumija has her own writting skill…..
    We are proud of bhumija….
    And you dont bother about this ff….becoz we love this ff soo much….
    Dont create any scene here….
    And you (ragsan fan) dont bother about our time……and get lost…..
    BHUMIJA DONT WORRY DR WE ARE ALWAYS WITH U….
    YOU MUST HAPPY….BECOZE THEY ARE JELOUSE THATS WHY THEY ARE DOING THIS……
    DONT FEEL BAD BHUMIJA DR…..
    WE ALL SUPPORT YOU NO MATTER WHAT…..
    LOVE U AND YOUR FF…
    GOOD LUCK DR AND KEEP IT UP DR….
    WAITING FR YOUR NEXT PART….

    • Bhumija

      |Author

      hey Madhu stop wasting your energy on useless things….. i am absolutely fine with it…. you also should enjoy…. let them do what they want….

  11. Rabia

    |Registered Member

    This is the first step of jealousy iff u r too much annoyed with this story doo than goo abd write your own story and make people comment on itt and i for surr give u hundreds of negative comment on your thay story soo stop stooping soo much loww without any reason and goo and do your own work dont be soo much cheap idiot fellow and im sorry bhumija for commenting on this but i cant tolerate people bashing your beautiful hardwork without any reason sorryy

  12. Paru

    This is bz of jealously…all beautiful fan fictions as on swasan…writers also…and some Raglak fiction are also beautiful…even I don’t have any time to read fiction on imaginary couple like rag and San…if u like it do it…
    Don’t read swasan fiction…we people are here to read them…this is the most beautiful fiction I have read….loved it
    Bhujima..don’t worry about this comment.. Whenever swasan fan fiction got good comments.. They felt jealous that’s it

  13. SR

    Seriously u r mad….Laksh is not enough for Ragini…?
    Sanskar and varun is married so there is no…San……and Ragini…don’t dream for it hehe
    Stay away from our swasan fiction…
    Bujima plz ignore this bashing comments we r with u…

  14. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    U r wasting ur time bashing all the swasan ff writers bcoz we readers r not going to be affected….and don’t u get tired writing d same comment for all ffs?

  15. Mica

    |Registered Member

    oohh poor sanskar, he feel guilty toward everything, but their first kiss was worth for it, such a guilty pleasure. :3 :3
    eagerly waiting for laksh’s movement, it’s show time Laksh! I’m behind you to pull sanskar’s leg.. hahhahah
    luv it sooo much bhumija dear….

  16. stephy

    Your ff Is super. Pls dont stop writing.dont mind your ff haters.eagerly waiting for d next part 😊

  17. rosh

    awesome loved the caring nature you described, it feels genuine….
    The story is taking its own tremendous turn, I like it. Every personage fits, as in today’s chap laksh noticed the change, I was starting to think who will notice after Sanskaar’s mom…..
    keep it up and tc 🙂
    Ps. don’t mind the bashers some may not like the story and it’s their opinion, but hey guess what you have a lot more out there who love your story and dare not to take negative responds to heart….

  18. Pramudi

    Oh hello what’s the problem you have with this ff? If you don’t like this then why the hell u r reading this? If there r so many rag…..San ff’s,then go there & read them. Neither we invite u nor the writer.

  19. Pramudi

    Wow awesome bhumija dear.. loved it.💟
    Precap seems interesting.
    Want another part today..please. ..
    And Haa dear don’t take that comment to heart. Jalne waloo jalthe rahe hume kya…
    We r always with u…👭👭

  20. Jammie

    Hey Bhumi.. today only I have started reading ur ff and completed too till now.. I must say u have amazing talent dear.. ur story is awesome.. I m enjoying it fully & also in love with it.. I also love that u update regularly.. thanks for that dear.. eagerly waiting for next update…

  21. shiksha

    Well the episode was amazing,thanq for d treats of extra episodes.
    I like d stories which r like this also with d glance of relations,I really liked ur story from d starting;the story is beautifully woven,d bondings
    shown between d characters mainly.

    N don’t give importance to the comments whether it’s good or bad,less or more etc. Just write for ur satisfaction just in d way u thought about it.just take our suggestions positively & consider/implement it if u like/want it.

    My one suggestion on d story:initially u have mentioned about swara was preparing for d scholarship in masters that one,n also ashwin part.
    Be happy,stay blessed.

  22. Bhargavi

    Yar seriously how can one just comment. If you are not interested to read swasan, just don’t read, what’s the problem you have. We are loving this story.
    dìii this story is just awesome and hahaha I loved the way you were telling about laksh observing Sanskar expressions

  23. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Just loved it Bhumija..Sanskar’s care towards Swara and Laksh understanding the feelings of Sanskar..Too good.. 🙂

    Waise don’t give importance to any basher here,they are just insecure that they are not getting many FF’s of their fav couple..

    Waiting for the next dear.. 😀

  24. Tasneem

    |Registered Member

    So if you think so then why the hell are you reading this ff …. shame on you…. you are disgusting…. why are you wasting you’re so called precious time to read this ff…… If you want go to you whatever Ragsan writer and read ffs from him….. so you are calling yourself as a critic…. right!!!…. Then show us your talent and write us a better ff…. you can’t right. …. Just go and read your so called amazing writer’s ffs and don’t bother us by your disturbing comments and keep your opinion for yourself

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