Swasan fan fiction (Season 2 ) episode 42

Hi guys,last episode was posted on the 4th,couldn’t reply to a few of you,will mention those names here,comment box is hidden,so can’t respond there,so,extremely sorry and thank you very much Musku,Vaishu,Imane,Nandini,Mickey,Joya,Shani,Bhagi,Harshi,Shraddha,Sneha Grewal,,,Divya,Shabrin,Meghs,Vinita,Mrs.Jayasree(Kakoli),who is Vinita’s aunt,special thanks to you M’am for taking trouble to read,a few of you including ‘army’ and Sneha Grewal had commented multiple times,here we go….

(Recap:Swara realising after hearing his voice through the Walkman and reading the diary,deciding to find out)

Scene 1:

Swara has come out from the washroom,she is totally wet after splashing water forcefully on herself,she grabs a towel quickly and wipes her face in a hurry and goes and stands in front of her Papa’s photo,she wipes her hands and stares at the photo and tells him, “Papa,I will make Sanskaar accept my love,how,when and all I don’t know,I just know that he loves me,I cant let him go away,but you know him na,equally good and stubborn,but the later side is only towards his love,I wont let him break my heart again,in the attempt to keep me away from tensions,that boy just killed me and got got broken himself,so I have a few questions in my mind,I need to find the answers before I confront him and make him admit that he loves me,for that,as I told I don’t know where to start,but till date,I was confused,if I was snatching somebody else’s love,but now I am just going to complete our love,for that if I need to hurt him a little,I may do that,but no,I don’t think I will be able to do that,mind is blank now,just know that Sanskaar wont tell me the truth if I ask him,may be he will make some other foolish decision to keep me away which may again hurt me and our loved ones,no,I cant let anybody hurt me again,it is not a sin to love and respect yourselves at times,noPapa?just be with me,guide me,show me the way,or if it easy to bring clarity to this blurred vision of mine,let it happen soon….

Scene 2:Same day,after an hour has passed…

Mukesh has come to Swara’s room,she was seated there in front of the mirror,her hair is wet after a bath,she is having the towel in a hand and gently moving it on her hair but her thoughts were elsewhere,she had not noticed Mukesh entering the room,she stares at herself in the mirror, she touches her forehead,she recalls that she had never filled her maang after their marriage,Seema had told her about that while they were at the cottage but Sanskaar gave a lame excuse that he doesn’t believe in all that and she is avoiding it for his happiness, “do you miss Sanskaar?”,Mukesh’s voice disturbed her thoughts,she quickly gets up and goes towards him,he looks at her and says, “it is ok to miss your husband but if you wont dry your hair properly you will fall sick,saying this he takes the towel from her hand and rubs her hair using it,Swara feels happy and recalls how she had behaved with him in the past and how far her relation with her dad has progressed,she smiles at him,he notices it and asks her, “that is like my girl,this smile is what I have missed ever since you came back,so beta,I am going abroad ,for how many days,cant tell now,need to set up a new business,will come back as soon as it is done,your mom wont allow,so had not told her,but now doctor has given permission,so I told Sumi now,need to leave tomorrow,so take care,I don’t have any problem if you stay here for any number of days but in whatever situation it occurred,doesn’t matter,but he is your husband,he is not at all a bad person at heart,I know that,so he is alone there at the cottage,he is not welcomed at his home also,I know my daughter knows what is right and wrong,when you feel it is time to go back,go back to your husband….ok”,Swara just nods and hugs Mukesh,Mukesh gently pats her hair and tells her to take care,he softly kisses her forehead,tells her that he has to go to office to entrust the necessary things and leaves….Swara is in thoughts….

Scene 3:Sanskaar’s office,same day evening..

Sanskaar is seated in his cubicle,his face clearly shows that he is tired,he slowly leans back and rubs his eyes,he grabs a bottle of water and is about to drink it,he gets a call,receptionist tells him that he has a visitor,he says ok and goes to meet the person,he reaches the reception and asks the receptionist where the visitor is,she says that the person just went out,Sanskaar goes out,he has a surprised look,he sees Swara standing there,the rays of the evening sun is falling on her,she is standing there,looking at the rose garden in the compound,Swara,the roses and the sky drenched in an orangish pink shade is not less than any beautiful painting,Sanskaar smiles seeing that sight,she has a smile on her face and is immersed in thoughts ,Sanskaar goes towards her direction and asks, “are you seeing roses and sun for the first time?”,she turns and looks at him,she feels something which she has never felt before,she feels that freedom which she hasn’t felt before ,she is staring at him recalling the words she read and heard,she is in thoughts and again smiles,Sanskaar looks at her and again calls, “Hello madam,may I know why you have come this side?”,Swara quickly changes her expression and pretends to be serious,she tells him , “why, permission to visit this campus and premises is banned for outsiders or what?she raises her eyebrows and looks at him questioningly,Sanskaar notices the change in her behaviour and tone,she finds that same Swara who was his ‘friend’ before ….

Sanskaar tells her, “No no,anybody can come here,anytime,enough?”Both of them looks at each other and smiles,then there is a moment of silence between them,both looks into each other’s eyes,many words which were to be spoken is being exchanged through that glance,Sanskaar softly tells her, “Swara,come ,we will go to the cafeteria”,he goes and Swara follows him,after some time,Swara is seated on the chair and staring at Sanskaar who was standing at the counter,he turns and finds her like that,gives a “what? “ expression and comes with a tray with Swara’s favourite cold coffee and masala chips…Swara looks at it and gives a ‘good’

expression…Sanskaar serves it and asks her, “So,madam,,now you tell me the reason for this visit”,saying this he takes a bite of the chips,Swara says, “Sanskaar,I have messaged Sanju”,Sanskaar coughs hearing this and Swara hides her smile and leans forward and pats his head…she then continues, “yea,you asked me to go home ,I went ,we haven’t applied for divorce though we planned,you told Sanju is a closed chapter,my family except my mom is happy with our marriage,I am sure,she also is not really angry with you,so I thought seriously,why cant we give this relation a second chance,of course ,we have known each other for years,we were friends,good friends,actually and I had loved you for years,then,you know all what happened after that,so I don’t think it is wrong to think about it,I know,you may need some time,cos you have “never loved me’,no?Sanskaar notices that she had stressed and delivered those three words,saying this she gently sips the coffee and gently raises her face and looks at Sanskaar who is restless and is pressing his hands against each other,Swara enjoys it and continues sipping and when Sanskaar looks at her,she signshim to drink his coffee,Sanskaar quickly nods and grabs it and sips as though in a hurry,Swara thinks in her mind, “Mr.Maheswari,let me see what you will do next”,Sanskaar quickly finishes the coffee and tells her,

“actually Swara,I have lots of work,so if you’re done shall we…?”,Swara gets up and says, “yea,ok,but I am not done,yet,it is not right for married girls to stay in their own house for long,I know it is just a few days but …..so, tomorrow evening I will come this side,together we will go to cottage,I had called Seema aunty,they both have left to their place,no?wont be back soon,no problem,you are there,no?so, see you tomorrow,she turns to go,she hides her smile and turns again,she finds him,staring at her,with a confused , “has this girl gone nuts,what is she up to?’ expression,seeing Swara looking at him he brings a forced smile and Swara says bye and leaves….Sanskaar stands there with a hand behind his neck and rubbing his cheeks with the other ,not able to understand what Swara is going to do,he then nods as though it is all ok and that he will see to it later…..

(On the spot and not proof read,sorry)

Credit to: Vini(Veena)


    • Vini

      Hello Sakshi,thank you for the comment,sorry for not being regular,hope I will post regularly from next monday ,pls keep reading.

    • Vini

      Thank u Shan,next one,I will put a link under this comment column wen it gets uploaded,a lil busy now,sorry for not being regular, pls keep reading.

  1. Shopnil

    After a long time!!!! bt u write at least…. so happy 🙂 ………….. bt it’s too much short, isn’t it???????
    plz try 2 write at least 1 at a weak…… plzzzzz …….plzzzzzzzzzz ………..plzzzzzzzzz

    • Vini

      Thanks Shopnil for the comment,yea,posting one,after 16 days,I think,also,I have never been able to keep my word, but next,will be on Monday n will try my max to be regular after that,I will try to put the link wen it gets uploaded.Pls keep reading.

  2. Vinita

    Hi Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have not the read the epi till now but still I am commenting. I dont know why. I think I have gone mad after seeing your ff!!!! I am feeling so happy . Now I will read it..

    • Vini

      Hello my dear,how r u?no exams now,no?oh,this much excitement, without reading you are commenting,no probs,I don’t think this update is good..so happy to see u here.

  3. Vinita

    Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I typed a comment earlier but it is not showing up so I am writing it again. U are superb!!!!(Of course your ff is also superb) par jisne itna acha ff likha hai woh zyada superb hai!!!! so, VINI DIIIIII YOU ARE SUPERB!!!!!!! YOUR FF IS ADIPOLI,POLICHU MUTHAE see I have learnt so much of malayalam!!!!!! Vini di and sethu di opps!!! Chechi!!!! see your little sister is so multitalented(self proclaimed)!!!!!!!!!!
    Di how are you????????????????????????????????

    • Vini

      Ok dear,I read that above,may be it got uploaded late after moderation,hahaha,I am literally laughing reading this comment, oh,m superb ah,thank u thank u,how will I accept that dr,m not superb,m ordinary,ff also is ordinary?,actually those malayalam words ,wow,new gen malayalam words used to compliment,thank u thank u,and chechi,wow..yes I agree,multi talented would be archaeologist u r, ask ur bhabhi from Kerala to translate the following,” Vinita kutty,ninte comment ente mukhathu Oru chiri kondu vannu,season 1le ninte aadyathe comment orthu poyi,naadum dooravum onnum chila vyakthikale parijayapedaan Oru thadassamakillennu thirichariyunnu,public platform aanenkilum parayathe vayya,Bengal orkkumbol aadyam ormma varunnathu ninte peraanu,parijayapettathil othiri santhosham….”

      • Joya

        Hume bhi samj aaya ha kuch kuch jaise season 1,public platform,comment,bengal……dekho kitne intelligent hai hum???

        Baki ka sethooty bata degi……..

      • Vini

        Haha Joya,clever girl,found out,u naughty…?now dont translate ,let her find out .and I didn’t notice I had used so many English words,haha,I was half asleep when I typed that..

      • sethooty

        “Vinitha kutty ninte comment ente mukhathu oru chiri kondu vannu”- Vinitha bachha thumaree comment mere cheharee par ek muskurahat laya hai…
        ” season 1 le ninte aadyathe comment orthu poyi” -season 1 ke thumare pehla comment yade ayi..
        “Naadum dooravum onnum chila vyakthikale parijayapedaan oru thadassamakilennu thirichariyunnu”-
        Desh ,doore kuch bhi logom se parijith hone ke liye hurdles nehi hai ab janne lagaa…
        ” public platform annenkilum parayathe vyya “- I know its a public platform still i want to say u
        ” Bengal orkumbol adyam ormma varunnathu ninte peraanu parijayapettathil othiri santhosham”
        Bengal koo yaad karoongi thoo pehale thumare name aathi hae, bahuth khushi hai thumse parijith ( mulakath)hoonae mein.
        Oops don’t know this is the exact translation..last parts are not exact..but I tried…chappal se math mar naa Vinitha… And vini
        Vini u give her this task to translate..but I tried it to Hindi…haha…

  4. Vinita

    I AM SOOOOOOO MULTITALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(i knw I have become mad!!! I am seeing Vini di’s ff after so many days. I hope you all can understand!!)

    • Vini

      Hahaha,not over,ok ok,thank u for this comment as well,Vinita is multi talented….I agree but a lil crack now but after a bath when water falls on her head,everything will be back to normal(Oh I forgot,hope her allergy to water is alright now.)

    • Vini

      Hai dear,missed u all ,it was so randomly written,season 2 is on the spot,I don’t know ,so kind of u all,still encouraging me,Swara has no plan, (actually ,writer has no plan),but I hope it will come with the flow…,writing scenes is the task…the small thread if I write it down,will be a few sentences only…

  5. Vaishnavi

    Vini diiiii??????????? I missed u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much …..I already told but again I am saying more than ur ff we need u di …..sirf ff post karne se kuch nahi hoga hamse bath Bhi karna padega aap ko pata hai aap mujse Baath kare bin kitne din hue hai ????? mujeh pata hai aap free nahi thi sorry but kya karu I missed u soo much no dats y I reacted like dis….nd how is ur health now??? It’s very bad aap ek doctor hoke kudh ki kayal nahi Rak payi…….juju aapke kayal nahi Kar rahe kya???? unse kahiye ki vo aapki acchi si dekhbal kare taaki aap jaldi se fit nd fine hojavogi ….nd coming to epi it’s superbbbb like always ,swara’s plan is nice …Swara teesing sans is soo good….I missed dis sanskaar also

    • Vini

      Hai Vaishu baba,how r u?I couldn’t reply to u under previous,very sorry,I thought it will be injustice if I don’t reply in order,that got postponed and finally couldn’t reply,I missed you too dear,yea,but you know what,I like to read our army’s chats with each other, how you all tease n pull each other’s legs,then what,yea,m fine now dear,yea,you r right,I had food from outside n got food poisoning,haha,but jeeju took care,my parents were also there since I was at my home town that time,if I read this to him,I am sure he will laugh,just for the sake of posting I wrote this,m not at all satisfied.

  6. Vaishnavi

    Aur yeh hai army ki headlines ????hahaha 1.vinitha di bhi ek ff likh rahi hai jiska naam hai “the story of true love”. Filmy hai but acchi hai vinitha di ki type. 2.joya di bichari ri si komal si pyaari si vaishu ko pareshan Kar rahi hai????srry joya di. 3.seetu di Hindi mai bath Kar rahi hai(she knows but aaj tak kabhi Baath nahi ki na iss liye Bata rahi hu. 4.shraddha di gayabh hi hogayi hai kuch do se koi atta pata nahi hai. 5.shikha di is busy in studies 6.army is missing Niti dI nd kriya di a lot. 7.most importantly vini di ne aaj ff update ki he ….hahaha???(srry diiiii just for fun I wrote …..aakhir sabse choti hone ka hak toh jatana chahiye na???.)……..love u alll?????

    • Vini

      OMG,can’t get a better update than this, truly u r the naughtiest ,I thought Mickey alone was,but this is contagious, u,Vinita all have become too naughty,but no problem,Vinita is writing ff ,wow,I will try to read it asap,but Vinita u didn’t tell me,I am angry with u??,now we have two ffs,hers and Sethooty’s,now I can stop my ff after completing the track in my mind(don’t worry,I also will know when that will happen only when I type and see,so leave that but for this army I extended this much,I personally like short and to the point types,like a max of less than 20 episodes),then Joya is irritating you,yea,yea,’I believe you’,especially after reading this comment?,oh Sethooty and rashtrabhasha,kya baat hei..,Shraddha,come back ,army n myself is waiting for you dear,Mickey baba,ok,study well,after all you have spread your naughtiness here,I can very well see that,after doing the damage, you are studying, hmm,m coming to Jorhat with a cane?,oh yes,Niti and Kriya, missing them,hope both are fine,miss you guys,Vaishu I think you forgot Needhi,hai to her,and yea,youngest of all,you have the right, go ahead,but army members,you guys kindly buy necessary protection equipments n be ready,oh to whom m I saying,an army of innocent kids na…won’t even understand what I meant?,so thankyou Vaishu,lots of love to you too for this superb update.Tc.

    • Joya

      Yr yeh to koi baat nahi huyi ha….hume aane me thodi der kya ho jati hai yaha humre against F.I.R ki jati hai………

      Bdw aaj sab k saamne hum humri innocence prove karenge………..

      Yr hum to itne masoom hai k hume MASTI,PARESHAN KARNA,SATANA in words ka matlb tak nahi maloom??????

      Hum gandiji k tin ??? ko bachapan se follow kar rahe hai…..

      Duniya to bereham thi yeh hum jante the par vaishu tum bhi……………. Dekha nahi jata hai ab…??????????………..

      Dekho kitne tukde huye hai humre??????? uparse kil bhi chubhe hai dil me?

      Chalo joya
      Yeh duniya yeh mehfil tere kaam ki nahi tere kaam ki nahi??????????????

      • Vini

        Haha,Joya,I will come back n read but I believe you was put in inverted coma no,read once again,I teased our cute devil Vaishu…I know na Joya is an innocent girl,how will I believe the allegations against you..haha,Joya was extra decent at the start(formal ),but ever since u entered the army,I have seen multiple shades…

      • Vini

        Drama queen Joya,got it from Shraddha,I guess,yea,yea,poor thing,don’t know those words,right?what to do even I don’t know the real meaning,will check dictionary for correct meaning,Gandhiji’s good luck,such a disciplined disciple of his,I will sponsor a bucket to collect the broken pieces of your heart, oh,this won’t suit you,ok,ok,go back to your planet, right now…..don’t dare to…

      • Vini

        Oh she misses her Sanskaar and is suffering from other problems, what to do,bhook hartal n no phone,has she survived the stress,so kind of you,passed letter thru dove,how sweet,Shraddha would be weeping seeing your love,but haha,yea ,yea ,Jiju would have gone mad? (out of happiness,) yea,yea.losing weight because of her,so now ,I would request all my army members to go on the same hartal for me,need to seriously lose some kgs,Sanskar is eating my brain asking for you Shraddha,come back soon,and what a letter Joya, couldn’t stop laughing those lines..esp “Aaja na daudke”,Shraddha would have started running,no flying….

      • Vaishnavi

        Joya di yeh kya keh rahe hai aap…..F.I.R….mujeh toh pata Bhi nahi heh ki yeh kya hai.????……..aur mai ne kaha na vo headlines hai hamari army ki ,aakhir hamari army mai se kuch log matlab Shraddha di,Shikha di,vini di inn Sab ko Bhi toh pata Chalna chahiye na ki Yaha Ho kya raha hai issi liye Maine bataya…………aur kya keh rahi Ho mai besharam hu..???????? dekha phir se mujeh pareshan Kar rahi ho…………but aap kitne Bhi pareshan Kar lo hai toh meri pyaari si joya di hi ho….love u joya di??

    • Joya

      Itne din ho gaye na shraddha sanskar se nahi mili to wo bahot sad ho gayi hai…bichme sunne ko bhi aaya tha wo bhook hartal pe hai………..uska phn bhi out of coverage hai so humne KABOOTAR k pairon me letter bandhakar uske paas bheja hai…..
      Letter me likha hai,

      Dear shraddha,

      We all know that u love sanskar alot….dekho tumhari bhook hartal ki news tv pe breaking news ban gayi.yeh dekhakar vini di ka dil pighal gaya….shukr karo ki hum sab ne sambhal liya warna dil me rehne wale log beh jate to??…jijune to hum sab ki aisi class li hai ki puchho mat……

      Dekho tumhari yaadon me sanskar bhi restless ho gaya hai….vini di mentioned that in epi……bas duniya samaj thi hai ki wajah swara hai lekin hum to sachchhai janate hai……bhook hartal tum kar rahi ho…..weight hum sab ka kam ho raha hai bcz we r crying?????????
      Jaise hi letter mile aaja na ha daudke………..


      • Vinita

        Oh god!!!!!!!! What a letter!!!!!!!!! Shraddha di jaldi a jao!!!!!!!!! See a letter is waiting for you!!!!!!!!!!
        Joya di start a blog. I know that hum sab ke dil mein aap ka blog hai par ek real blog bhi start kar dijiye

      • Shraddha

        Hayyy Joyaaaaa????
        Main kitni fortunate hu ki tujjaise dost mili mujhe?? mummy??
        Yeh aasu rukh nahi rahe Joyaaaaa?
        Pata hai dostoo Joya ki bachii? bohot smart hai??
        Actually Hun dono he Sanskaar ko bohot miss kar rahe the…..
        Toh joya meri pyari behen ne mujh jaise bhukkad bacchi se bhuk hadtaal
        Yeh kaha ka insaaf hai Judge Saab?
        Miss kare dono lekin bhuki rahu sirf mai??
        Yeh apne bade honeka najayas fayda uthana kehlata hai judge Saab?
        Mai toh thehri bachii
        Iss duniya ka koi knowledge nahi toh Mene rakhli Bhok hadtaal apne Sanky ke liye??
        Aur apni joya ke kehne par??
        Abb Hume kya pata ki yeh hume bhuka rahk ke ya enjoy karne ayegi?

        Joyaaaaa tune aisa kyu kiyaaa??
        Ik u miss me but u miss sanky more than me no? Tahts why u made me do this… . this is not done I’m ur pyari pyari bachiiii ? n u love him more than me?

      • Shraddha

        Hahaha lol
        I so missed being this
        Ekra kapoir serial artist ????????
        So much drama??
        Hello everybody well I’m here itself
        Bass yeh Vini di hai Jo yaha nahi hai?

        Vaishuuu kaise gaye exams tumhare entrance tha na chennai me?
        I normally read ur comments on Anjalis ff (probably if ur the same ?whuch I think u are)
        So here’s another engg coming up guyss presenting ER Vaishuuu??

        Rups toh dikhi he nahi aaj kal ?
        Padh rahi ho Mickeyyy???
        Padho ache se padho ?

        Vinita toh filhal translation ke mare??aise hogayi hogi??
        Haha kyu Vinita
        N sethoothy wruuu
        Because I loved him
        I did bhok hadtaal toh kya hua agar Vini di ka sanky hai ya tumhara lekin sanky toh sanky haii
        Plzz abb tum bhi strike matt rakhvana??
        Mujhe khana chagiyeee????
        Mummyyy mai aurr nahi rehsakti khane ke bina??????

        N my dear Joyaaa??????kya letter hai baap re baap ek number ki shaitaan hai tu I mean tumhari bhasha me ek number ki innocent sweet nake ladki reeeeee???
        Main toh hass hass ke pagal hogayi letter dekh ke

        N BTW I saw ur letter later but abhi abhi Jo comment kiya neeche usme bhi I wrote I missed my sanky????
        So ur letter justifying (faintly????)

    • Joya

      Hey guys
      Good morningggggggggggggg………….

      Ayyyyyyoooooo shraddha…..,………..see guys hum kabhi jhooth nahi bolate………sharddha bhook hartal pe thi…….itna weight loose kiya hai ki yeh KABOOTAR pe baith k aa gayi?

      Hum bade hone ka fayda nahi uta rahe hai…..yeh aap sabko batana chahti hai ki iski age humse kam hai……Note dis point my lord?

      Ise kehte hai chori to chori upar se sinajori……my lord plz check all comments which has posted by me…kya kisi me humne kaha hai ki MERA SANSKAR?????? ????
      At least is site pe akele hum hi aise hai jo sanskarholic nahi hai????????

      Faisla kare judge sahab……….ye garib,bichari joya apke samne nyay k liye bebas khadi hai?……

      Sharddha utho shraddha…………tum khana khanese pehle behosh nahi ho sakti…………plz utho warna khane ka kya hoga?????yeh delicious dishes tumhare bina kaise jiyengi………..inki to duniya hi ujad gayi??????????????????????????????????????????
      Dekho yeh sari dishes keh rahi hai chilla chilla kar,
      Yeh nainsafi hum kateh hi bardasht nahi karengen…….ek bar hume apne muh se lagalo plzzzzzz????

      • Vini

        Haha,I was replying from bottom to top,Shraddha this is the reply to your first comment here,then one more of urs is there below n Joya’s immediately below tgat to be read,i cant wait to read those two,I would have missed this fun,really Shraddha , extravagance of emotions in words,don’t know how that face will be,so u were on hunger strike,poor girl,now drink this lime juice baba,would be really tired ,no?as far as I know it will be very difficult for a guy to impress Joya,so I don’t think she will make you fast for Sanky,u girl,y r you lieing?Joya doesn’t know how to play pranks also,no,no,never say this about Joya .So many allegations about an innocent bachi like Joya…I think Joya will be thinking if I have gone nuts,usually I speak the least to her nowadays,but Joya baba,u r special,coming to u Shraddha,missed u dear,missed this drama also,I can’t imagine how u would be at home n college,should ask the ones around you…totally mad ,I guess..but continue…it is fun to read..

      • Vini

        Now coming to sec comment,Shraddha,she will surely hire u,her drama will survive for any number of yours((if u emote like this). You can age on screen as well.So u r here,it is me who is not here, poor me,all blames on me,now,ha,what to do?good to c that u mentioned about everyone, yea,now go and dip your head in that biriyani pot,I have sent that to Hubli,then about Joya’s letter, even I was laughing,so innocent writing style but in real no.1 prankster. Actually competition between you all for the ‘GUP’,exciting prizes i have???..who is coming first,pls tell fast…

      • Vini

        Good afternoon Joya darling,yea,we know, you don’t lie at all,Miss.Honest of the army,oh I told no she would have started flying,spot on,poor Dove’s body found near the lake an hour ago,PETA filed FIR,heard there will be an arrest for cruelty towards a bird,you are right Joya,when I read even I thought the same,she was trying to say that she is younger,hidden agenda that was,Joya,I agree,have never seen u mentioning that,u were unbiased towards all characters ,even m not a Sanskarholic,I like that onscreen pair swasan,though…yea,innocence is proven… j
        Judge has produced the final verdict,simple and humble mediator ie me,has informed the media n public through this platform ,Shraddha,u should accept this,see,Joya has arranged a banquet for u,come fast n attack….Guys,after a long time,enjoying this fun with u all..more than commenting,I like to read you all chatting with each other..for that sole reason an ff which was supposed to have a max 25-30 epi is being dragged(those who don’t like that,beg your pardon),good day to u guys..stay blessed.

    • Vini

      Hai dear,thank u for the comment,hope u liked it,actually I know just three scenes n nothing much in it,glad to c u here,I have to plan the scenes though I have the small thread in my mind.

    • Joya

      Yr aaj is page k sath kuch to gadbad ho rahi hai……reply hi nahi kar pa rahe hai…….dis is 4th time i m trying to post my comment….

      Thank you guys us letter ko like karne k liye?

      Vaishu my dear i said bereham not besharam…………i think i m besharam…..hum apni chhoti vaishu ko pareshan kar rahe hai na……so socha thode sudhar jaye…..isiliye shraddha k naam letter chhoda hai……socha tumhe akele ko hi pareshan nahi karna chahiye….so ek se bhale do?

      Vinita blog…….aiyyyyyooooooo……. I m lazy girl…..3 sal pehle apni frnd k liye story ko bhi aaj tak laptop ya phn k dairy me bhi nahi likhi bas usko dene se pehle pics nikale the wo bhi delete ho gaye???

      Vini di i m going to my planet………… U said na?
      Right now ye words padhe aur humre aankhon se aansu behne lage…..aage ka kuch dikhai tak nahi diya………itna dard……………….i can not Bear dis painnnnnnnn???????????
      By guys…………i m going………….??????

      • Vini

        Yesterday all faced this prob I think,letter was so sweet even though the writer is not??,simply told,Joya is such an innocent soul,intention we understood,you should start a blog asap,we r waiting,before crying go.and read that comment,what ya,will I tell u to goveven if I feel.like?,well,I will never tell anyone to go..those valuable tears should be collected,after all draught,but if used for drinking purposes,I think….?u also think abt it.

    • Vini

      Hai Nandini,couldn’t respond under previous epi,sorry, thank u for the comment dr,I think I won’t be able to post next one this week,but Monday ,probably.After that will try max to write on alternate days at least .

  7. Natasha

    Yaaaayyyyyyyy…??????? Diiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!! U uploaded it at last..di am ur silent reader..I read both season f ur ff..Di u know wat after seeing ur ff I WS dancing like mad..my mom asked me Wat hppnd?? I just told her Vini di posted..yiiiiiiippppeeeee..?????u r very sweet di.. I love u sooooooooo much..????????? I missed u like anything..???? Di plzzz post it regularly.. at least we all will talk to u through this..Plzzzzz di post it regularly..don’t take soo much time di..I WS thinking to do a missing diary that Our Vini di is missing..?? BT I know u r a Dr..u r very busy di..I know..BT kya karu?? I miss u like hell..and u know di Am going to be a Dr..though nly 2nd Yr..????

    • Vini

      Hai Natasha,yea,your name is new here,thank u for the comment ,truly humbled and honoured after reading your comment,glad to know that u read the first season,also,glad to know that my ff made u happy,but your mom,she wouldn’t have understood,no?never make anybody read this,my ff is not worth their time,and,lots of love to u too dear,actually,I will be posting next one on coming Monday,sorry,a lil busy,and missing diary,haha,people won’t hit you for that, they will hit me,instead, many are there who dont like fan fictions and ff writers, oh,the best part of your comment,you are from the medical profession,wow,all the best dear,study well,I actually did my BDS ,planning to prepare for MDS entrance(but lazy …),so which college are you studying,where are u from?(reveal only if u r ok with it,I know that this is a public platform..)

      • Natasha

        Nooo di..np..am from Kolkata Di..and nw am studying In Kolkata Medical College (MBBS)..And I know u’ll do MDS very soon..cz My Vini di is best..?? and My mom knows u..I told her about u a lot..and c also reads ur ff..☺???? My mom-dad both are fan f urs ff..nd me!!! mad fan f u and urs ff..?? love u sooooooo much..u r the best..☺????? OK di..u upload it when u’ll GT tym..I knw hw much busy u are..same profession u knw di..???? hehehe..????am soo talkative na??..?? sorry di..??

      • Vini

        Thank u dear,so it is a govt.college,great,even m a govt. College product,that is a great life,enjoy n study well,oh my God,ur mom n dad knows about this ff,they should be thinking y m writing a stupid story like this,and pls don’t say that u r a fan,I really m not worthy of that,I address every one as my reader friends,a few who are really close ,I call them ‘army’,your writing style reminds me of Shraddha,she should be busy,no problem with so many comments,enjoyed reading,yea,I will try to upload regularly from Monday.

  8. Natasha

    Di I just commented that without reading completely.. I just CNT hld my excitement.. that’s y cmmntd..u this lil sissy has gone mad after seeing ur update..?? and today’s chap WS awesome..Love this sanky..and Swara teasing him..awww..?? Diiii plZz upload regularly..

    • Vini

      No probs dear, typing errors also fine,can understand, when I read my epi,I have also made many mistakes,like later for latter and all,m happy to read that u liked this,tc.

      • Natasha

        Yeeeeeyyyyyyyyy!!! ????Peye gechi…kolkatar kothae thako tumi????? sorry..reveal nly if u want to..cz its a public platform..

      • Vinita

        Tumi Bangali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Peyegechi!!!!!!! eto din er khoj er por bangali ke pelam!!!!!!!!!! Eto ami bhabtam ami ekjon eka je kokata theke. Ar keo Banglai neikintu aj khub bhalo lagche!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yippe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      • Natasha

        Yup Vinita..Ami Bangali…amar o darun bhalo lagche..tumi ki porcho ekhon?????? just curiosity.. arro koyekjon Bangali ache TU te..naam gulo thik mone nei..???

      • Vinita

        Ami history niye porchi!!!!!! Bhabchi archeology niye masters korbo. Tumi thik bolcho ekhane arro koyekjon ache. namm gulo thik mone porchena. Still amar khub bhalo lagche bangla te ekhane kotha bolte. Ekta aladai feeling asche!!!!!!!

    • Vini

      Thank u for reading n commenting,next one will be on Monday ,most probably,will try to be regular from that episode.

  9. shani

    Nyc epi as always vini….we missed u and ur ff both ….happy to see u after a long time…I can understand that u can’t update daily…it’s ok vini…keep writing…when u get a free time…plz.. update next part..we r missing ur ff badly dr…keepp writing..god bless u…waiting for the next part…

    • Vini

      I’m happy to see your name and read your comment,thank u for the good words,truly humbled,I will try to update regularly from next Monday,tc,God bless u too…

  10. shabrin

    Hey!!How are you…plz daily update na…its really hard to wait for long
    And episode was mind blowing…feeling really happy after seeing swara’s this side

    • Vini

      Hi dr,m fine,hope u r also good,will try my max to be regular from the next episode which will probably be posted on coming Monday,it was an on the spot episode ,so even m surprised that Swara of this ff is back to normal and friendship of swasan has revived.

  11. sethooty

    Omg..superb superb..what to know how she make him to admit his love…am eagerly waiting for their magic chemistry in b
    /w them…

    • Vini

      Sethooty,I haven’t planned anything,u know,no? M so bad at writing romance and chemistry between characters,I just wrote this randomly,but I hope the rest will come with the flow,let’s c…I didn’t think people will like this episode.

  12. Aashi

    Finally di you’re back!!….. I missed your ff like hell..-xx. … It was nice, sanskaar reaction!! Haha….just waiting for our love birds to unite soon!! ? XOXOXO

    • Vini

      Hello dr,m.glad to know that u liked,yes,everything will be fine soon,let’s c how the story and characters will get shaped up…tc..pls keep reading.

  13. Jane

    hai vini di
    its the first tym iam commenting although iam a silent reader. I was waiting for you to upload . hatthe part. you are really amazing . thank you for your really wonderfull ff.please update once in a week( i know your busy) but ho sakthe tho pls update. was missing you and your ff

    • Vini

      Thank u Jane, glad to know that you were reading this ff,thank u very much for the good words,truly humbled n honoured,I will try dear,had no plans to upload this ,but wen I came to know that m going to busy from this evening, I posted something in a hurry yesterday,I don’t know how good this is,but all your comments are so encouraging ,thank u.

  14. Joya

    M i dreaming?????

    I loved dis dream so much………..

    1st how r u vini di????

    Coming to epi….
    Very nice……swara-shekhar,swara-mukesh,swara-sanskar……so sweet………..

    Jaise ghani barish k baad kale baadal chale jane k baad aasman saaf ho jata hai waise ki kai dino k baad swara ki jindgi me khushiya laut aayi hai……..

    Very nice epi di……..

    • Vini

      Hello dear,how r u?missed u guys,exams now?or holidays?oh,hope it was really a good dream,I don’t knw cos m not satisfied,m never satisfied with what I write,it was just three scenes in this,hope u liked it, yea,that is it ,whatbyou written,now it is clean n happiness has returned in her life,(m blank ,will try to post something on Monday,in laws and cousins coming this side,will be a busy weekend),and my reply to our army is always meant for everyone in our army ok..take care dear,stay happy.

  15. Neha

    Oh vini di finally u posted…Oops sorry for calling you di all of a sudden actually last epi only got to know that u are elder than me …hehe pagal hoon i know but u know di u r very bad how long longggg gaps u take di kitni baar bola plzz upload once in a week :-|itna intezar nahi hota ur ff is just superbbbb i just love u and ur ff . U are a doctor wow amazing profession ;being a doctor u should know di ur ff is like a booster for me ..hafte mein ek baar to jaruri hua na like glucose :-Oplzzz once in a week plzzzzz plzzzz :-);-(;-(:-)

    • Vini

      No probs dear,u can address me di or by my name,no probs at all,except bad names everything will be alright ?,yes dear,it is not fair to take such long breaks,no?actually this was supposed to be a very short ff,I will try to upload regularly from Monday..thank u dear for the good, yes,boosters are required I agree.but I hope my ff is not a torture, yea,there is a Dr. in front of my name,dentistry is my stream,to be precise,take care dr.

      • Neha

        Oh ho dentist wow great then so you should know one thing more when your ff get uploaded I unknowingly show my teeths wide therefore this ff is not at all a torture for me ?love you di and plzz upload next part for sure on Monday

      • Vini

        Haha,your sec comment made me giggle as well,thank u dear for liking my ff,are u Niharika(Neha) who used to comment under season 1,then Sethooty had mentioned about ur ff,title I forgot,I am sorry for not reading it if u r the same writer, to be honest,problem is ,I wish to read from the start n m not getting time for that,sorry but m.happy to know that many good ffs n writers are here…lots of love to u too ,dear…tc

  16. Mona (ash)

    Wow after a really long time. It’s so nice. Ur season was first ever ff I have read and I have been reading it continuously and also season 2. It’s first time I am commenting on your ff, so my name will not be known to you.I was eagerly waiting for this one. So happy to read it. Update next asap.

    And talking about this chapter
    Adipoli!!! as usual.

    • Vini

      Hai Mona(Ash),yea,name is new to me,but thank u for the comment,good to read that u have read the previous season also,m happy if u liked this episode,thank u for the good words,haha,adipoli,ah?u r from Kerala?

      • Vini

        Adipoli vayichappol thonni,Oru malayaliye koodi parijayapettathil santhosham,naattil evidanu?enthu cheyyunnu,parayaan kuzhapillenkil paranja mathiye. I won’t feel bad.

      • Mona (ash)

        njan palakkattukariya , chechiyo ?
        Enikkum chechiye parichayippettathinu santgosham thanne. Ivide more malayalikalokkeyundenkilum athikam pereyonnum parichayamilla.

        Njanippo 9th grade kazhinju , Next year 10th.

      • Vini

        Hi ,ok,thank u n good to hear from u,ente sthalam Ernakulam,oh,Appo serious studiesnte varsham thudangunnu,vacation class tudangarayi kaanumallo,all the best,study well,God bless.

  17. Vinita

    Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please translate it!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cannot make out anything out of it………………..(I am not that multi talented!!!!!!!!!!) I only know njan means I , probably ninte means your, probably ente means nice and I guess kutty means child. Isse age aur kuch nehi pata!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Di, my ff is extremely childish and filmy. It is not good!!!!!!!! u all will laugh after reading thta. It makes no sense. Even I had to force my mashi to comment in my ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is exremely baaaaaddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!

  18. Vinita

    Still I guess I have translated four or five words myself!!!!!!!! That means I am actually multi talented!!!!!! Even joya di has TRANSLATED so much!!!!!!!!!! Both of us are inteligent and multi talented!!!!!!!!! hai na joya tai ??????

    • Vini

      Yea,multi talented, intelligent girl,haha Joya tai’s translation I scrolled up and read,fantastic,elastic,bomblastic…?,late to realise that my army is so so talented,my fault, all my fault…?,but a hug for your translation above ,just a small correction,ente means mine,your ff,I need some time,I want to read it at a stretch,but still angry for not telling,I opened a link ,Vidhisha ha?if I had seen that emblem,I would have caught you then n there,but so happy to read that you are writing ff,I know you will say like this but it will be excellent…keep going.

  19. Natasha

    U know di My friend passed away recently..He met WD a fatal accdnt..We are very sad di..heartbroken..???we all are quite fine..BT one f my friends is in trauma till now..cz DT incident hppnd infront f her eyes..he saved her..BT CNT save himself..nd they were childhood bestie..??we are soo bad di..we all CNT save our friend..???In CLG we were five in one group..everybody CLS us ‘Five Star’..he was also one member f our group..BT nw he is no more..? till now We all CNT blv ds..??

    • Vini

      Oh so sad to hear that dear,may his soul rest in peace,yes,I understand ur situation,big blow it will be for his loved ones,give support to the friend who survived,she should not feel guilty,after all it is not her fault,no one’s fault,certain things are beyond control and when it strikes do we realise how helpless we are ,it is tuf for the people around to overcome the loss,may God be with the bereaved family,yes,it is very sad,losing your dear friend,may God be with you all.

    • Vini

      Sneha I will reply to both your comments here itself,thank u for liking this humble attempt of mine,I had noticed all your comments under previous,couldn’t respond there,sorry,I will try to post next one on Monday n probably will be posting regularly after that,busy with certain things,sorry.Pls keep reading..

  20. Jyotii

    Ohh dii!! Wowww!! Amazing!! But agar jyada romantic hota toh aaur v maja aa jata!! This ff is driving me crazy! Splendid! I want this ff not to end!! Please stretch like a big rubber band!!! 😉
    Love uh a ton!!!

    • Vini

      Hi dear,good to c ur comment,I am too too bad at writing romance,if I try may be able to,but to be honest,all u r like my younger cousins,so writing expressive romance is a little difficult for me,I knw for writers,frankness n boldness in writing is required,but I know I wont be comfortable ,I just wrote my take on it ok,no offense,hope u will understand me,haha,already stretched it dear,most probably other readers except u and my army will hit me,but,,don’t worry,I type on the spot,so when I type the last only I also will know which is the last episode,lots of love to u too dr..I haven’t read your new ff,but I will,have to read urs,Vinita’s,Nandana’s…there are many other good ffs,in fact all will be good juat that i have lack of time..(and patience too).

  21. Sneha garewal

    Nice episode as always..hope everything will b sorted between them..pls make sankaar to confess his love .

  22. lakshmi

    hi vini
    i havn’t read ur 2 episodes. i was little busy with my exams. Today only i saw ur ff. So i am really sorry 4 not commenting. today u rocked it

  23. Vinita

    Vini di my ff is filmy and aj maine jo update kiya I fear that people will bash me!!!! Aj toh mujhpar sab rotten egs and tomatoes phekenge

    • Vini

      If u use those two words again I will really send a parcel of those to u,it is a good ff,continue..I have no right to say,because I don.have confidence in my ff ,but after reading urs will tell u,it is a good ff.

  24. oh no no noooo????????.. me toh late ho gayi di… wait??… me ff baad me pdhugi… abhi bht bg hu u knw??.. bade bhaya n unki offce se kuch log aayenge.. phir chali jayenge…

    so plz wait for me ha di

    vinita kya yr… itna chck kiya bt 2mhri ff toh mila he nhi mujhe.. n 2mne bataya v nhi.. nt fair ha

    • vaishnavi

      Kya shikha di aap uppar ke comments padhe nahi kya…aapne dekha nahi vini di ne kya kaha ….jaldhi jaake padhiye ….mai aapki reaction ki wait kar rahi hu

    • Vini

      At least u came na,late is alright,how much Vaishu missed u,why are u doing this to your little sister n big sisters,Vinita’s ff,I found by surfing ‘a story of true love telly updates’ in Google..and under each links are given to the next…

  25. Shraddha

    Am I dreaming ???

    I actually came back today in this page after few days n what a “Stupendofantabulouslyfantasticallychummeshwari” Surprise??????????????
    Ah Vini di ur so bad?? I am assuming u must be one among the late comers for coll??(just like me?)

    Oh I missed my Sanky???
    N episode was classic as always I really wish swara to be a bit mischievous like this from now?hahha
    What is this I’m so late soooooooo late ?? so many comments already
    Never mind u atleast came today n saw?haaaashh thanks vini diii u uploaded today Varna mera miss hojata?

    • Vini

      Yea yea,Shraddha Darling is back,drama queen is back,emoticon queen is back…..welcome dear,I was replying from bottom to top today,totally confused to which all I responded, ah,leave it,hunger strike,Joya had told,oh my girl,u have become like a stick,how can i look at this Shraddha ,my heart will start weeping,without wasting time, ,come home,I will cook something for you…(results no gurantee)I think lather is enough for the day,haha ,Geetha ma’s comment is coming to mind..stupendo…,no dear, yes ,I would have wished to go late to classes,but no,I’m really scared of teachers,so I go on time,at least 5 minutes before, and I don’t sleep during lectures, fear and respect both won’t allow me to overcome that,so two good student habits (late coming n sleeping) have never enjoyed,but yea,I like to sleep a lot,so if at all I get up late,I don’t go for the first hour,I sleep peacefully in my room,but calculated risks only I will take take,I will make sure that I have the required attendance,then I tell my mom,that I didn’t go, without that confession I used to feel bad,hope u got an idea of what kind of a student I was,apart from that hostel life n.college life was fun, everlasting memories,yea ,let me see if I can see that dimension to Swara’s character from now,thank u dear,had missed you,I thought u may miss this,this epi got posted at midnight,next day morning ten,I found it on the third page,many ffs are there…

  26. di this is enough to saying that this is not good.. actually its fun to see swara tease him.. n poor sanskar totally confused….
    n one more thing without romance this ff is much better.. its feel so natural n practical n that diary n his talk about how much he love swara that proved that u r much better in romance.. sethooty always say that this is okay n all..
    u know 1 thing that u all write ff is good but apart from that u see yourself then u know that u guys r convey the feelings wt r in ur heart n writing is the best way to present our emotions, thoughts n wt not..
    pls di don’t say that again.. pls

    • Vini

      I wrote it on the spot dear,thank God if u all liked it,yea,that kind of romance I m ok with writing,but when I started season 1 itself all were asking for more n they frankly told me to add mirchi masala,but I didn’t,cos I write or do things which convinces my conscience, oh,actually in my case I don’t have anything in my brain or heart,I didn’t have any plan to write season 2 ,but started only for those who posted under the last epi of season1,but now I think it was destined to meet u all and that is y it happened,thank u for the comment dear,tc.

  27. sethooty

    I just hate my phone and net connection.. How many times try to put comments god knows.. I want to join u guy’s this always happen to me when she upload her fiction…hai..my army..I think Micky and shradha is not aware of this, vini uploaded ..

    • Vini

      Hai dear,same problem me too faced yesterday,but now it is getting uploaded.. Hopw u r fine..don’t forget to inform when u post the next one.

  28. Joya

    Yr yeh humri comment falguni k comment k under kaise post ho gayi…..ek to itne der se post nahi ho rahi thi aur ab ho gayi to kaha…….

    Vaishu,vinita,vini di aapke liye to reply diya tha wo falguni k comment k reply me post huyi hai plz check there………..

      • Vini

        Me too faced same problem yesterday when I tried to respond to a comment, and Joya,u r going ah?read that comment once again,u missed a few words.

    • Joya

      Yarrooooonnnnnnn i m stilllll suffering from dis problem………

      Bdw how r u both???????????

      Thank you aap dono ne hume itni achchhi stories di…………….

      • Vini

        How r u Joya baby?m good,u asked me n Sethooty,no?then I don’t know to which all comments I responded ,if have missed out any,pls don’t feel bad guys.

  29. Vinita

    Hi di!!!! Let me tell you my story…… Last week I wanted to watch Sholay but there was load shedding and I was upset. Then I thought to write something filmy and I wrote that ff. No one knew about it but my brother wrote a comment in sethu di’s ff using my id mera izzad ka faluda karne ke liye and everybody came to knw about it!!!!!!!!! I did not tell anyone because I am sure ki sab hasenge!!! Actually I had to force my mashi to comment!!!!! ab sochiye!!!!!

    • sethooty

      I understand Dr..haha am happy veg happy.. From our team another Ff is happening I will read ur fiction Dr..I want to read it in one stretch take time..just find the links..ur name there vidhushi na

      Vinitha am translated..malayalam u pls chk haha

      • Vini

        Oh that is the story,but good job,thanks to ur bro,otherwise also army would have identified from that emblem,I read it yesterday,and that filmy touch n that easy style is the charm of ur ff…

  30. Vinita

    Di meaning bolo na pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kal chhuti nehi hai…… I am again sulking……….I want holidays!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Aap meaning bolo naaaaaa pleeeeaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • vaishnavi

      Vinitha di seetu di ne translate kar diya….aur di aap ne kya kaha’ chappal rotten eggs mat marna’ arrey di mai kyu marungi naahi aap winning party ho naahi mai opposition party jo ek dusre ke upar chappal maarte hai….arrey I enjoyed reading ur ff aur beach beach mai se vo filmy lines bolna vo bhi bahut achchi hai

    • Vini

      Hai dea,Sethooty has translated it ,Vaishu is right,why will be throw all that on u,but if u really want it to ur collection,I will do one thing,will send a parcel…

  31. Hiii chechi njn kndilarunnu
    Pnne Google search chytapoza kittiye.
    It was awesome chechi
    What’s Swara going to do
    Aa samym entanennaryan m eagerly waiting

    • Vini

      Hai dear,oh,Google search cheythu vayichathalle ,thank u,Pinne samyam Oru cheriya scene lavum..njan scenes on the spot aane but nintethu vayichappol thonni ithu njan plotl plan cheythathanallo ennu..nokkaam…ninakku ethu portion ennu manassilayal Appo parayane..Swara aduthathu enthu cheyyanamnnu njan alojikkuvaanu…

  32. vaishnavi

    Diiis aaj mere board xams ke results hai at 11am….I an dying in tension….pata hai iski vajeh se rath bar tik se soyi bhi nahi mai……

    Shraddha di yes I wrote entrance xams I wrote well but chennai jaake nahi chennai kyu javungi I wrote here in hyderabad itself (online xam)

    Ohh toh joya di vo word besharam nahi hai ohh toh tik hai par yeh beraham kya hai wat that means?? Aur kya di aap mat jana vini di ne last line par bola na “Don’t dare to go”aap ne shayad teekh se pada nahi hoga….

    • Vini

      Don’t worry Vaishu,u will come out with flying colours,pls should inform us about the results,you wrote both med n engg or engg only,may God bless u dear m grant you the best,after all he knows what is best for us in the long run,you r right Vaishu,I had typed don’t dare to..without reading that she is going it seems…Joya.. Don’t go..

    • Joya

      Vaishu just relax dear……………???????????
      Yeh khao aur tension bhagao..achchha result aayega…………

      Vini di and vaishu dis is not done ha…………….y did u both activated serious mode…….????

      I said in that comment ki jab humne Right NOW padha to aankhon se aansu behane lage….aur aage ka kuch DIKHAI NAHI DIYA (dnt dare to go yeh dikhai nahi diya???)…………

      Waise bhi i said i m besharam so dhakke bhi mare to bhi na jayr hum??????????????

      • Vini

        Haha ..will never go in serious mode baba,nature is basically so but to dear ones,never,well m not saying this about me,those who know me nicely say like that,well,just told,now,u r a self proclaimed besharam now,but for me you are that formal (at the start) turned naughty Joya, actually should tell thank u to tellyupdates,because of their break in the beginning of this yr,all became so free….

  33. Nu

    hawwwww????.. naughty? nahi yarrrr di aaapko pata h na me kitni shant thi phle… par bd me mere beheno ne mjhe shararat kar diya???????.. mene nhi kiya ha????.. mujhe toh aaaj tak nhi malum ki Naughty ka matlab kiya h.. par dekha jaye toh yeh kisi ladke ki naam hongi ryt????..(っ╥╯﹏╰╥c) jaise ki Mr. Naughty Maheswari, Naughty singhania hehe????

    • Vini

      Ayyo poor girl Mickey,turned naughty becs of sisters,right?yea yea,I know that no?
      ?,u r the only one responsible for me chatting frankly here,itherwise i would have been a very quiet person ,how peaceful life would have been?oh u don’t know the meaning of that word,now what to do?,go and stand in front of the mirror, meaning u won’t get but you can see a living eg of that word,Miss Rupsikha Naughtia ‘Gavania.'(,sorry Mickey’s elders for that stupid surname)…

  34. Nu

    haha sethhoooooo??????✌✌✌… awwwww??????phn ne prblm kr dia bht na.. oh ho ye phn v na… bht shararat h na?????hihi… 2mhre toh jane do, mera phn toh usse ek kadam aage h… har waqt pareshan krtu rhti h???… kabhi kabhi mere Ma kehti h ki 2mhre phn v bilkul 2mhre tarah hi h??.. (ঠিকেই কয়???)….. btw hw r u?? ☺☺☺

    • Vini

      Mickeeeeey,I posted for u all,I didn’t have any idea,what to type when I started,thank God he gave this when I started,I’m planning to post short updates but regularly from.next week,let’s c…

  35. Harshi

    Hai vini.. How are u..? V can expect very interesting episodes in upcoming.. Today’s episode also just fantastic.. Sorry these days am not commenting regularly.. But I’ll never miss ur ff.. I love ur story narration style.. Upload next episode asap.. Cant wait for loooooong…..?

    • Vini

      Hai dr,m fine,how r u?well,I don’t know dear,if of will be interesting,I don’t proof read nowadays cos of the fear that I myself won’t like it and so may not post also,so let’s c,thanknu so much for reading n liking my ff,I am one of the laziest ff writers ,actually fluctuating schedule,relatives are coming ,so till they arrive,I thought I will reply,will post next one next Monday,probably.

  36. Nu

    Vaishuuuuuuu??????… kya yr itne tym se wt kr rhi hu result k liye… sach me mjhe gussa aa rhi h?????????????

    • Vini

      Cool down Mickey,she should be celebrating the victory,Vaishu come here as soon as u r free with ur treat..ok.

  37. vaishnavi

    Hey didis scored 95.6% yaar …..sorry na shikha di bahut busy thi …sab log ek ke bad ek phone kar rahe hai yime hi nahi mil raha hai srry ha

  38. Vinu

    Vaishu Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Congo!!!!!
    congo!!! congo !!!!! congo!!!!!!!!
    I was so happy when saw your result!!!!!!!!!!!! A big hug and lots of kisses from me!!!!!!!
    I am coming later…….. I have to take my lunch

  39. Vinita

    I am back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yaar vaishu where is the treat???????????????????
    Sethu di thanks for the translation!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your name is so nice why dont u write your entire name?? btw what is the exact meaning of your name?????????????
    Di what u wrote is so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It really touched my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Shradha di thank god u came back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    warna yaha bhook hartal aur bhi intense ho raha tha.
    Rupsikha tomar ki khobor???????????????
    Meri pyari si achi si joya di How are you???????????????????
    Sleeping in the lcass se yaad aya when I was in class ten I do not know why during yhe physics period I always fell asleeep and in the history period my bestie always fell asleep . She used to write physics note for me and I worte the history notes. Bhagwan ka daya that that the physics teacher never scolded me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Vaishu i want a party!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • sethooty

      Hey Vinitha….my full name is ‘Sethulakshmy’
      Sethu means bridge…lakshmy u know well.
      We malayalies always used to call our loved ones, especially younger ones with kutty, I mean vini kutty, Vinitha kutty.. That’s y am sethu kutty..later it become transform to sethooty..haha..actually if i changed this name on this site..many of readers will not identity me, they r used with this name na..

      • Vini

        Vinita and Sethooty, joint reply to these two comments,Vinita, now I think u have literally crack,look at that style,I still remember that very formal Vinita who commented under Halloween theme episode of my first season n ever since became regular, but I know it is not cos you r crack now,because of the freedom u feel within your zone here,love to see that,yes Sethooty’s full name I had guessed before she had mentioned it for the first time weeks months bk,I like her name, and that which I typed in mal,wen I read your comment that time,it came spontaneously, physics n history shuttle sleep n lecture notes,wow,what a unity n concern..I just read your chapter 7,going to read 8 soon…saw a link,couldn’t read comments….

      • Vini

        Sethooty, nice name and thank u for explaining that kutty n yea,when my friends’ love for me increase all of a sudden due to some motives,I was called ‘ Vini Kutty
        ?,after the matter is done they will return to nick names..

    • Vaishnavi

      Haa di dekha Maine I felt disgusting …chi vo log Sumi ko pregnant kaise bana sakthe hai …she is old lady nd I was thinking ki kya ye log biology nahi pade kya bachpan mai , srrsly I hate dis track yuckkk

  40. Vaishnavi

    Didis thank u soo much ???aur mai yahi wish karthi hu ki aaplogon ki krupa muj pe hamesha rahe …….nd party!!! For now this is d party?????????????????☕️?????nd mai aaplogon ki mom’s ke sath milkar dinner party arrange ki hai aapke apne apne ghar pe ,so enjoy ur dinner ok???

    • Vini

      Oh thank u for the party,yea,mom had told me that u have arranged everything,so sweet of u…thank u baba…we enjoyed,haven’t had such a good dinner in a recent times..

  41. Joya

    Kya prize haiiiiii…….
    Dil pe paththar rakhakar hum apna naam competition se wapas le rahe hai…………… Fillllaaaal humra injection ka quota pura ho gaya hai due to doggiiiiii…………….so jaroorat mand logon ki help karna humne achchha lagta hai…..and shraddha to humri dost hai………..she is so weak na……..So prize goes to shraddha…………

    I m dancing……. Humra innocence prove ho gaya…….thank you vini di…………….I know my sweet vini di aap sanskarholic nahi hai……..u enjoyed that chat and u smiled so we r also happy…………..

    Hey vaishu
    Thanks for a treat and again congratulations my dear………..

    Hey sethooty
    How r u dear????
    Where r u???????

    Hey vinita i m fine….wht’ about u my dear……???

    Yr tum naraj ho kya humse?????????????

    Good evening…….stay blessed and keep smiling………

    • Vini

      Ho Joya,u r not participating,I want to give u that prize,pls …..ayyo ,didn’t realise the size of that heart,helping the needy, that too your friend Shraddha,but I dontbclose my eyes to people who sacrifice,so for my happiness, Jo baby,I will definitely give you one…oh innocence proven n girl started dancing?I was just joking,trial is to be held,court closed due to holidays, mediator informing army now…thanks Joya,for this smile as well,God bless u dear..tc..

  42. Vinita

    Areh waah!!!! Vaishu kya treat diya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nice treat!!!!!!!! Alot of dishes

  43. Vinita

    Di i did not translate that song!!!!!!!!!!! I am not that multitalented . I am a lazy child. You knw na I am such a pyari si komal si phul si bachi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When I was in class 7 or 8 one teacher asked me what are the three things that you love to do? I replied,”Maa’m I love to sleep, i love to eat and I love to read history books. Maam I am a lazy person” that maam was laughing so much afetr hearing the reply

    • Vini

      Pyaari si komal si phul si bacchi,yea,while sleeping,,no?,believed…translation was so good,so doesn’t matter who did it,u introduced it,thank u,haha,good n honest reply ,teacher would have loved,but now…she shud read these comments of yours,then, reminded me of my plus two,we had a chemistry teacher who used to be very strict during plus 1 days,but during plus 2,she melted like ice, became so so friendly n during a 10 minutes chit chat session called each one from the four squads,I was one, still don’t know y she chose me and asked a question,apart from medicine or engg ,if u would will choose a profession what that would be?my reply was ” m’am I knw the profession that I’m gonna say is uncertain but I would love to learn film direction”,you can imagine what reaction would be ,after that ,within a couple of months course ended,friends frm other classes even has written in autograph to send free tickets to them..but what was surprising is that my teacher who asked the question,was really serious hearing my reply ,I guess she was the only one in that class apart from a dear friend there,who understood that I told it seriously…ur message reminded me of those 10 minutes and the discussion..

  44. Vinita

    Yaar rupsikha jaldi jaldi packing karlo!!! Mumbai ka train nikal jayenga aur humlog yehi par reh jayenge!!!! We will miss her godhbharai!!!!!!!!!!!! Vaishu tum bhi!!!1 Celebrations choro aur packing karo warna humsab late ho jayenge

    • Vini

      Poor Sumi,her peace is gone, army is coming that side,leave the city at once if u wana survive. .

  45. haha????.. Vinita gift v chahiye na… oh my God…kitna maja aayega ns gdh bharai me sumi aunty ki haha.. chalo chalo guyz????

    joya di sooooooo sryyyyy yrrrr… me naraz nhi hu sach me.. n mne cmnt v kiya tha pr pta nhi kha gayi

    • Vini

      Dropping your plan to attend the function would be the best gift to a lady who is expecting her little one…show some mercy

  46. sethooty

    Again it didn’t posted…congratzzz my darling vaishu kutty……lots of chocolates and Mango shakes… Strawberry ice cream for u……

    • vaishnavi

      Thank u for those chocolates , milk shake nd ice …woww very yummy….nd wowww di “kutty”I love dis name di ….

  47. sethooty

    Joya Dr…actually I reached home nearly 9 pm.. Today was My Team Lead’s sent off , he is very close to me like my elder brother am very sad next week onwards he is not with us for guiding…After seeing ur comments.. All my sadness fade away….

    • Vini

      Oh,so saw the power of ur army ,no?ur mood became alright easily,I guess…this is an amazing bond n the nature of chats…others may think we r mad,but for us this is nothing else than a like minded gang…fb n Whatsapp can rest,tu doing the job here…

  48. haha?????.. yar Vinita pckng???.. par hume gift v chahiye na… oh my god sumi aunty ne dil khush kor di na.. hei dy mns hum Masi banne wali h kiya? ???

    kitne naughty h dono haha????… chori chori chup ke chup ke??

    vini di aaaapko pata h naughty kiya h.. wow????.. bappa chiki, bappa chiki yeyyyt????????.. par jo v ho aaapko yeh bat toh mnna he pdega ha.. Mickey ki bjh se kitne pyari pyari sis mil gayi aapko?????… awww dekho dekho bht he cute cute h… i knw i knw aaap mjhe thnx khna chhti h na.. bt its ok..dosti me no thanx n no sorryyy??.. hihi dekha kitni acchi h na Mickey.. bht he shant h… n yey pdhkr bhagban ji soch rhi hogi ”nahi rey mickey baba! Re yeh sunne se phle me mar q nhi gayii.. yeh kaisa din aa gaya h.. hey mickey baba utha le mjhe swarg se aur niche bhej de ”hihih????.. bt u know mickey jaisi behen kismat walo ko milti h.. aap bht lucky ho jo mil gaya mujhe?.. ??.. waise aaap kbhi Mickey se miley ho? i mn usse dkha h kbhi?

    joya di sry sry sryy????.. nhi me naraz nhi hu di.. n mne cmnt v kiya tha par pta nhi kha rh gyi yey cmnt..

    • Vini

      Mickey,devil,thank God u don’t know Sumi in real..yea,after seeing u I understood what naughty is, yea,I ageee ,because of u,got such a wonderful army,yea,was about to thank but since u told no sorry no thank u,withdrawing it,hahaha,the lines after tat about Mickey, omg,joke of the century,yea,I’m truly very very very lucky,how blessed I am,what virtue did I do to get a sis like u,omg,tears of joy in my eyes,I can’t lie more than this,yea Mickey I haven’t met,but will,once..if she permits..

  49. u know Vinita 2mhre bbate sunkr mujhe ek friend ki yaad aa gayii… Pyar ussr mntl khti hu.. Jab hun lst year new clg pr gayi thi tb usne ma’am se intro krte tym kaha tha ekdom cute se ”Ma’am i m a vry boring person.. n i lv to sleep, sleep n only sleep”.. mene kaha tha tu sach me pgl h yar?..

    bt woh last wednesday Mumbai chali gayi dnce ke kiye.. slct ho gayi wo isiliye waha chali gayi 3yrs ke liye…. Prabhasi pgl i will missss u yaarrr

    • Vini

      Oh u have such a cute friend,all the best for her career,may she become a successful and verstaile dancer,God bless her,may your friendship also grow stronger…

  50. Vinita

    Right rupsikha!!!!! We forgot to purchase gifts!!!!! Ab kya kare??? Train chala jayenga!!! We are getting late!!! Vaishu abhi bhi ready nehi hui. She is celebrating. Vaishu get ready fast!!!! Tab tak mai aur rupsikha gift kharid lete hai.

    Di I have posted epi 7

    • Vini

      Vinita,Mickey,Vaishu…shares the first prize for the day…????????????????????????,pls accept it and leave Sumi alone n stop the discussion ….I read episode 7,saw the next link also there,yet to read that, will read after responding here…

  51. sethooty

    Hi Vinitha.. Just finished ur first epi… Haha..loved it and by d way guy’s listen…joya shradha vini mickey vaishu..
    Hamari..pyari Vinitha also visited north Bengal..then she start to write Ff…kahi yeh thoo nehi kisi ko Sanskar milegaya hoo…
    Army let’s tease her….

    • Joya

      Aaaayyyyyylaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa……..yeh to breaking news hai………..

      I m feelllliiiiiing very good after reading that ur sadness fade away……………i m so selfish na……….actually i dnt know but whn sum1 smiles bcz of me,i really feel good……………

      Bdw vinita i didn’t find ch 7

    • Vinita

      Ha ha ha!!!! Sethu di this is the joke of the year!!!!!;???????
      I was laughing like a maniac after reading this comment!!! Oh my god!!!! ??????????
      You knw na that I am against love shuv in this age. I am small for those things. For now history is my first love. Actually I am not against. Against is the wrong word but love at this age is not good. For me this is distraction but your comment Is so funny ????
      Haste haste halat kharab Ho jayenga!!!????

      • sethooty

        Kisi se pyar hoone mein akhom ke ek palad ka samaye bhi nahi lagthaa bachu…
        Anyways u r like my swara she is also not believe in love relationship in b/w studies.. And you know me also have the same opinion on my college days

    • Vini

      Sethooty, yea,didn’t note that point,oh,so sudden inspiration behind the would be archaeologist becoming a writer is that.. Vinita,I didn’t expect it from u …yes like Joya said,breaking news,I want Vinita’s mom’s number,I want to inform her now..Vinita,loved your reply,,same opinion here,may call me outdated after reading the following but better not to choose on ur own,right one will come at the right time,after the studies are over,can start praying to God to bring the one who is born for us…Sethooty also has same opinion..I guess Tara had told me wen I started my season 2,not to make school going kids fall in love…even I didn’t want to,so I hurried up and also didn’t include any scenes there…just for the sake of this story I included that..I still can’t support it ,in fact I have two first cousins only who are younger to me,rest are all older,I know those two are wise enough to choose what is right and wrong n I have complete trust on them ,still I had warned them if they choose somebody during student life,I will give them good …

  52. sethooty

    Hi vinitha read all 6 chapters added comments there…but didn’t find 7 the chapter…give me the link……

    • Vaishnavi

      Now only it got uploaded …..so now u will find that epi seetu di……..waise seetu di aap na bahut sweet nd innocent ho …aur nahi toh kya ..arey u shld not that “lets tease her” but u shld directly tease her

  53. Vaishnavi

    waise Baath toh teek kaha aapne seetu di mujeh Bhi yahi laga tha episode padne ke bhad……kya vinitha di kahi aapko sach mai sanskaar jaise koi mil toh nahi gaya hai?????…bata bata sach batavo…..kahi aap apni kudh ki experience likh rahi ho kya …….haa mujeh pata hai kuch experiences aapne likhi hogi jaise ki vo prasadh Vali baath but Swara nd sanskaar’s first meet Bhi aapki koi experience toh nahi???????……………………………….arey joya di,Shraddha di,Shikha di,vini di aap sab logon ko Bhi episode padne ke badh yahi doubt aayega dekhna

    • Vini

      Haha,Vaishu,we are born to doubt,yes,yes,since Vinita explained above(yet to decide to believe or not..)we are so innocent,u shud not fool us Vinita…suddenly an ff from the vaccum,that too about romace,some burnt smell,u got it guys?or is it just me???

  54. Joya

    Vishu rups vinita tum login ki party abhi tak khatm nahi huyi kyaaaaaaa???????????????????????

    Shraddh@@@@@ kaha ho……….

    Vini di……….

    Gm guys……

  55. Vaishnavi

    waise Baath toh teek kaha aapne seetu di mujeh Bhi yahi laga tha episode padne ke bhad……kya vinitha di kahi aapko sach mai sanskaar jaise koi mil toh nahi gaya hai?????…bata bata sach batavo…..kahi aap apni kudh ki experience likh rahi ho kya …….haa mujeh pata hai kuch experiences aapne likhi hogi jaise ki vo prasadh Vali baath but Swara nd sanskaar’s first meet Bhi aapki koi experience toh nahi???????……………………………….arey joya di,Shraddha di,Shikha di,vini di aap sab logon ko Bhi episode padne ke badh yahi doubt aayega dekhna

  56. sethooty

    Hey shradha u vanished…I think joya u should again write a letter for her…kabhoothar ke pairoom mein….
    Actually my brain is literally empty have to write..my fiction next epi..

  57. Shraddha

    Oh God kya meri wazan ko lekar itne tension me ho sab??
    I’m totally fine yaaaa
    Abhi itne dino ka khana ek dum se khanemr time lagta hai na??????
    Aur upar se Vaishu ki treat extra add hogayi toh aur time lagg gaya????
    U know no I’m such a bhukkad

    N Vini di??????
    Apko toh dekh lungi main ?
    Rukho aap mera time aayega judge Saab

    N joya ?? kitni khayaaal rakhti hai reeee
    Itna pyaar toh Swaragini me bhi nahi hai????
    Aur ha bacho innocence aur Joya kahi contradicting words lagti hai nahi??
    Main toh kehti hu Antonyms for innocence me joya chap Jana chahiyeee ?
    N u know as Vini di exactly mentioned
    Shuru shuru me toh Jo tum ek dum shaant silent ladki lagti thi?
    Tab Hume iss Version ka pata nahi tha na?? n actually reason for missing is
    Mere bade bhai yani 1st cousin ki engagement thi toh from a week or 2 I was pretty busy
    Isi liye I missed many of my ffs that I follow?
    Thank God Vini di ka miss nahi hsu?

  58. Shraddha

    N ya Vini di aap toh kafi sincere student nikle?
    I mean sincere toh main bhi hu bunk wagera normally nahi karti lekin
    N u said u wanna know how this drama queen would be in real well ans is very simple
    Just imagine a face instead of theses emojis?
    Everybody calls me expression queen because main baat karte karte literally bohot expression deti hu (involuntary tough??)
    Mera bhai toh says go act in serials??
    So how I’m here the same I’m in person
    N I’m just sincere student but not obidient n polite ha???
    Since school days I ve been in top list of mischievous students like mere teachers literally used to tell my mum ki apki beti ladkonko darati hai??this was when I was very small ha? now I’m bit less ??hahahah

  59. Shraddha

    Vaishuuuuuuu???????????????????? CONGRATULATIONS dear Well done !!!!!!!
    AWESOME SCORE proud of you??????
    N vaishu Party toh tumhara virtual tha phir bhi bohotttt Shaandaar tha ha?
    I mean look at the dishes kafi badi Dawat di hai ahha?? so enjoyy your vacations now kafi mehnat ke baad yeh vacation mili hai khoob enjoy karna??

    Sethoothy im over here??
    N I guess u din read my comment above?
    Now Sethu u want me to fast for ur sanskaar also kya??
    What is this yaar ??sanky toh sanky hai no bring him soion no? n

    Vinitaaaaa ??AHEM AHEM
    Kya chal raha hai aaha?
    Dekho Vinitaaa hum sab itne acheee dost hai Hun toh tumhari badi diddis jaise hai!!!
    Hai naaaa??
    Den dekho humare saath share karlo hum kisiii se nahi kahengee God promise?

    N rups babyy????
    How are u long time!!!;;
    N btw tumhari USS friend aur mujhme kafi gehri similarities hai?
    Lekin I’m like Eat sleep Eat sleep??

  60. Shraddha

    Guys after such a long time we all are like back with this lovely chatss under comments block n I’m really
    Missing Niyati n Kriyaaa?
    Wish they could suddenly pop up over here?

  61. Vinita

    I am laughing ? like a maniac!!!???
    Has has Ke mera pet dard kar raha hai!!?????
    Oh god!! Aap log kitna hasate Ho!!???
    A full fledged competition is going on Ki kaun Vinita ka sabse zyada leg pull karega!!!?????
    Sethu di, vaishu, rups, shraddha di !!!! U ppl rocked it!! ???
    Joya di aap kaha Ho???? Aap ne iss competition Mai part kyu nehi liya!! I have to declare the winner!!??? jaldi comment kijiye!!!! Aisa chance bar bar nehi milta??????!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Vini di aap kaha Ho???
    I need to declare the winner Ki kisne mera best leg pull kiya hai??
    Didis chill…. There is nothing like that aap Sab ka kya Hal hai???? kahi aap sab ko toh koi sanskar nehi mil Gaya?? Hmm bolo bolo????

    • Shraddha

      Ohho vinitaaaa …..
      Dekho dekho itneee saree emojis dalrahe ho aajkal Pehle toh je sabb na karti thi tu choti?ibb ke hogaya??? Sanskaar milgaya ke thareko thara??? Sharmaooo matt meri jaan hum toh tumhare apne hai?
      Chaloo abb jaldi jaldi batado ki kaun hai??? N kaha Jane ka plan hai tera?

  62. vaishnavi

    Hey di same pinch yaar…hifi…..even my frnds nd all others call me expression queen mai toh baath karthe hue hi nahi balki kaathe waqt roothe waqt aur toh aur soothe waqt bhi diff diff expressions deti hu….actually I will tell u one incident which happened in this inter 2nd year (12th class)…actually our physics ko na gussa agaya toh kuch v karte hai he will take book nd throw on persons face nd wat not …toh ek baar unka class chal raha hai aur aapko ko tok pata hsi physics kitna boring hai ..toh mujeh na class mai neend agaya , unke class mai bahut log soothe hai par uss din unhone mujeh pakadh liye nd he asked hey y r u sleeping nd mai bahut dar gayi thi …achanak se vo hasne lage mujeh samaj mai nahi aa raha tha ki kya hua…..he said while laughing dat “while sleeping u kept ur expressions such a way dat they made me laugh”..nd I nd even all others r shocked that sir who is always a angry man nd scolds students who were sleeping in class didn’t scold me nd instead laughing at my expressions….tab mujeh laga ki yaar vaishu tu sach mai bahut achchi expressions dethi ho ki sir bhi tun pe gussa na hua……toh hu na mai expression queen??!!!!!

    • Shraddha

      Arey yaar Vaishuuu double Hi-fi!!!???
      Ek toh itne similar honekeliye
      Aur dusra almost same incident mere saath bhi hua tha?? but yaha meri expression skills nahi acting skills hai bass
      You know jab hum 10th me the tab teachers day ke din hum logone na sabhi teachers ki jaise ek ek student dres up karke unke jaise ramp walk kiya full on mimicry type….
      Aur next day Humari head mistress mam ne assembly me sabke samne aise mike me kaha wer is this Naughty Shraddha Woh hum rozz flag hoist karte the so hum ground me rehte the aur suddenly apna naaam sunkar toh by God I was like??
      But she just called me n said kya acting kiya ha tumne ek dum same to same that this n all n I was so shocked by all this??this one incident I’ll never forget hahaa

  63. Vinita

    Sethu di u take rest!!! Aaj kal u re affected by stress, na? Take some rest!!!!!!(refer to rupsikha’s and my comments in ch8)

    • vaishnavi

      Nahi vinu di …abhi abhi seetu di track mai ayi hai…seetu di u continue in dis way only….nd manna padega kya sataya hai hum sabh ne vinitha di ko …hey na…

  64. Vinu

    SAB SUNO!!!!!!
    Rupsikha will return after 7th of May because her exams will be going on!!!!!!!!!!
    Issliye sab usse all the best bol dijiye and rupsikha ne sab ko thank you pehele se bol diya hai!!!!!!!
    Agar kisine usko miss nehi kiya then rowdy mickey and rowdy vinita kisiko nehi chorengi!!!!!!!!

    • Vinita

      Tu yaha bi a gayi!!!!! I was supposed to announce it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Toke ami dekhe nichi!!!!1

  65. vaishnavi

    My dear diis a big doubt….how did we get d name “army”????….I donno d reason behind it I just know dat vini di named like dis but I donno y….

    • Joya

      Vaishu i know d ans of ur que…………….but i think vini di will give better answer to u of dis que……..

      Rups all the best dear…………..

    • Joya

      Naraj mat hona ha vaishu humse…………. I dnt know humra answer sahi hai ya nahi….isiliye kaha vini di sahi answer dengi……

      • vaishnavi

        Nahi di its ok….but ye vini di kaha hai…..yaar vini di kaha ho….I want ans to my question

        Seetu di kaha chali gayi hoo….yaar aaj toh sunday hai so no office no then in which work u r busy?? ..thoda hum sab se bhi baath kar lo di..apke bhi kuch experiences share karlo ya kuch toh batavo…kyu itni silent ho

    • Vini

      Vaishu ,I simply named like that,actually seeing all ur chats in January though there is no much resemblance,I remembered i had named my junior friend’s family at her ancestral home which included her grandma and her dad’s two sisters only as ” three women army”,those three lovely ppl come to my mind often,so I typed like that seeing your chats…then,my loved ones(in laws n cousins ) have come,was busy,sorry..checked simply n read a few comments at the bottom n so I’m responding..See u soon dears,tc.

      • Joya

        Vini diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

        I think we r repersenting the thinking of new generation….hum sab alag jagah se hai.language, culture, state…….sab kuch alag hai…..par fir bhi jaise vinita aur sethooty ne kaha we r best example of VIVIDHATA ME EKTA(not ekta kapoor ha???? UNITY IN DIVERSITY)…….sorry for bad joke……

        Isiliyr hum sab Army hai…so aaj se army ka naya mission “help each others to bring back humanity to the world”….☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

    • unknown

      Humne kehne me bhi sharam aa rahi hai par actully hum log episode me kya achchha laga ya vini di ne emotions,jis barikiyon k sath likha hai yeh sab comment me likhte hai na…in short Analyse…….. .so isiliye army…..matlb aisa humne lagta tha….

      • unknown

        It’s me neha ha.i just want to tell her that i really like her.i admired her.i loved her each comment.i tried to learn her writing style.and what she did with me.she insulted me at shree harini’s page.i never forgive her.i hate you.sorry friends i want to tell her look at above comment and think that how much i loved her.i know how she write and she insulted me.me.i loved you alot joya.but u hurted me alot.you are very bad person.very bad person

  66. Joya

    Shraddha innocence, bholi,niragas aise words ki khoj hi humre liye huyi hai ya☺☺

    Kismat wale ho tum log yr humne class me sone ki khushnasibi kabhi nahi mili………..

    Yaha to queens ka mela laga hai……hum to Aam insaan hai☺☺☺☺☺hai☺☺☺☺☺

    • vaishnavi

      Ohhoo joya di aap ee sab naahi kahe toh achcha hai kyu ki aap to toh ek alag hi queen ho , aap toh shayri queen ho hum apne expressions se sab ko pathate hai toh aap apni shayri se karthi hai…anyone will melt after listening ur poems….hai na shraddha di??

      • Vinita

        Exactly!!!!!!! Joya di hamari shayari queen hai..
        Par Joya di apane mujhe rula diya……….. Aapne yeh kyu kiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mai toh aapki chot behen hu na………. Apne bhi mujhe nehi choda!!!!! Maine socha koi toh suljha hua hai par aapne bhi mera leg pull kiya………… Joya di aapne mera dil tor diya aur usko chur chur kar diya!!!!!!!!! JOYAAAAAAAAA di!!!!!!!!!!! Rula diya na choti si bach ko!!
        Ab sirf ek hi hope hai , vini di!!!! Aap toh mujhpar rehem kar dena!!!!!!! Viniiii di dekhyie sab iss choti si, phul si, pyaari si bachi ko pareshan kar rahe hai!!!!!!!!
        Sethu di aap kya sach mai rest le rahi hai???

      • Joya

        Vinita vaishu tum dono apni joya di ki kuch jyada hi tarif nahi kar rahe ho??????

        Sharayi queen kehkar humari to bolati hi band kar di yr….chane k ped pe mat chadawo wo ped humra weight Bear nahi kar payega????…

        Jo feel karte hai wahi likhte hai…….achchha huaa galib,sahil ne nahi suna nahi to humri dhulai to pakki hoti…

        But guys thank you so much for dis love……thank you………

        Vaishu rups shraddha vini di sethooty and niti kriya,

        Dosto (hathon me bottle aur tank pe chadkar)
        Dekh vinita ne kya kaha………humne uska dil tod diya………..yeh kya bol dila???????
        Pehle hi narak ke compound me booking badi mushkil se mili thi…..par vinita k is iljam k baad to humne waha se bhi fek diya yammm ne………..

        Humri sab se pehle vini di ko shikayat rups ne ki……….fir vaishu aur sharddha ne to sidha coury me hi khich liya…….dosto ab tum hi batao kya humne kabhi partiality ki hai??????? Nahi na……..to vinita ko humre masoom pyar se kaise VANCHIT rakhte………..

        Sab phool se komal ban gaye aur hum gam me sharabi……waise jail me chakki pising me nahi hai na koi kharabi………..
        Kaisa sila diya hai humre pyar ka
        Ab maksad hi kya hai just jine ka…….
        Behne behne na rahi……
        Par red bulllllllllllllllllll to energy drink hai na…………?????????????????
        Tanhai me koi to sahara mila…………

        Dekho abhi geerne hi wale the tank se…………itna dard hai humre sath fir bhi kehte hai i love u allllllllll??????????????????
        Chalo ab hum chalte hai………………energy drink is waiting for me???????

  67. oooyyeeee ruko ha 1mnt k liye sb.. me iss pge ko aise he last tym chcl kr rhi thi..

    guyz yeh Vinu kaun h? i mean mujhe humesha se aisa lgta tha ki ye Vinita h nene kbhi emblm ntce nhi ki.. par aaj dhyn se dkha toh pata chala.. humari nayi sis h kiya???.. wow.. agr nhi v h toh bana lungi hihi?????

  68. Vinita

    This vinu is my cousin. Ek number Ki nautanki!!!!!!! Agar tum usse sis banaongi toh pagal Ho jaogi?? bechari thought that she will play another prank with me by commenting with my name and email id par galti se apna hi email id likh di???????????

  69. unknown

    I told in front of every one at vini’s page how much i like you.you did not even notice.you do not care about anyone’s emotions. Sorry m commenting her because i do not have any option.i know joya will check here defiantly. She has to read this.joya i will never forgive you.i hate you.

    • Vinita

      I think there is some problem in posting my comments that’s why I am again typing. Joya di is so nice??? pleaseeeee do not hate her Neha didi???? she is my cute didi??
      Neha didi maaf ksr do joya di ko but I don’t knw what she did??

    • Joya

      Hey unknown,
      I mean neha….k………………….. I agree wid u i m a bad person……..and u hate me alot.
      1st i did not insulted u.i just said ur opinion about shree is wrong..aap kisi ko aise judge nahi kar sakte…u said at shree’s page u dnt care about mine and needhi’s opinion and here u r saying u hate me…….
      I really dnt knw whn u said u like me…..agree my fault i did not notice……….i m human being not machine yrrrrrr…………….

      Is duniya me jitne log hai utni h har kisi ki soch alag hai………har kisi ki thinking aap jaisi to nahi hogi na………….i just said ur opinion about shree is wrong……humne koi insult nahi kiya hai………

      Yar guys humra to faluda ban gaya…..

      Thanks yr vinita for supporting me………………

  70. Anjali

    VINI DIII!!!!!

    I AM A HUGE HUGE FAN OF YOURS…… i just love everything about ur ff….. especially MY SANSKAAR……

    This is the first time I’ve commented in ur ff……. Am so excited to finally do it….. yayhh…..

    Woowww…. I sound like a 6 year old kid…. but I can’t help it… I just admire you soooo much….??????

    I have to learn soooo much from you….. if I ever learn to write like you, I will feel truly happy……. eeeekkkk I’m soo excited…..

    Can’t wait for ur next…..???

    I’m so happy to talk to you…. ???????

    Pls do teach me to write like you…. the way I write now…. is really different….

    • Vinita

      Anjali di I am huge fan of your ff. ?????
      I am a sanskarholic. Both vini di’s ff sanskar and your ff’s Mr.maheshwari is my favourite ??

  71. No no no yr…Neha aise mat bolo yr??…Joya di ne aaj tak kisi ko hurt nhi kiya dr??..i think 2m galat smjh rhi ho dr:)…achha 2m wohi ho na jiske sath mene sumi ke prgnncy ko lkr bht sarree baat ki thi ,kitna maja aaya tha na hume(i guess wo 2m he ho ryt)..

    Neha yeh humrai jo ek choti si grp he na,jise sb pyar se “army ” khte h,yaha ki har ek mmbr bht acchi h dr☺?..(par me nhi haha??)..sb lg ek dusre ko apni sistrs mnte h aur koi kisi ko hurt bhi krti..i think yeh blood rltn je v pyari bnd h hum sbki beeech..sorry ha par mujhe sn kar bura lga Q ki wo mere pyari sis me se ek h

    Bhul jao na dr :..???..n humari yaha shamil ho jao plzzz..i knw u r a vry gud girl:)..

    • Joya

      Hey rups and vinita i was blank after reading unknowns comment.i think she is very sensitive girl…but i did not say anything to her…….

      Achchha huaa humri koi ijjat nahi hai?warna ab tk to puri utar gayi hoti?????

      I did not understand how to react………

      Anyways leave it…..thank you rups and vinita….

  72. Yaaar me 2m sbki bina rh he nhi pa rhi hu..har wqt yaad aati h…isiliye cmnt v kr diya hihi???

    O ANJALI DI vi aayi h yaha pe wow??..mujhe v bht psnd h uski ff..par kiya karu tym he nhi milta cmnt krne k liye???…vini di ki yaha bg rhti hu na…

    Hi anjali didi?hw r u ?

  73. Haha di?????..kitna maja ata h na hume yaha pe..hash hash ke mar jaungi me agr aise he chlta rhe toh????..n now me v aur jhoot nhi bol skti di?????????…n me aapse ekdin jaroor milungi dkhna☺☺?..infct sbko,vaishu,vinita,sethoo di,joya di,shraddha,niti ,kriya sbko milungi..aur agr koi mana kare toh uski ghr chali jaungi Sanky ki Kasam??????

    • Anjali

      Lol…. aap sab fans nahi…. dost hai….

      No fans business with me…. only friends….?????

  74. Vinita

    Rupsikha and vaishu congratulations!!!! dekho humlogo ko first prize mila!!!!!!!!
    kitna sara injections mil gaya!!!!!!!!!!!
    Aur sethu di toh sach mai rest karne chali gayi………………………

  75. Vinita

    Ahem Ahem!!!!!
    Sethu di,
    Yeh kya hua chupke se……
    Pyaar hua chupke se…………..
    I guess kisi aur ko uska sanskar mil gaya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Hmmm….. sochne wali baat hai!!! issliye sethu di aajkal gayab hai…………….
    Hai na shraddha di?

  76. Re wo toh hume milna he tha first prize Vinita..jaha pe me hoti hu ,aur koi har jaye aisa toh ho he nhi skta hehe☺☺??

    Nhi rey baba mujhe injctn nahi chahiye..dar lgt ha?

  77. Wowww????..aaap kitne acche ho Anjali di..n yaha pe aaj phli bar cmnt kiya h na aapne..aaap aaj se roz humare saath baat krne k liye aa jna thik h?..bht msti krte h hum yaha pe haha??????

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