Swasan fan fiction (Season 2 ) episode 34

Hi guys,Swasan fan fiction (Season 2) episode 34…

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Scene 1:

Next day morning

Swara gets up and goes to the kitchen,she drinks some water and comes back,she notices that Sanskaar is not present there,she quickly goes to check the landphone,she tries to connect the wires but fails.She quickly checks and confirms that Sanskaar is not there and goes to his room,she opens the cupboard and checks but doesn’t find anything except a few clothes and necessary items,she suddenly turns and goes to the table,she sees a mobile phone on the table,she tries to unlock it but is not able to do that,suddenly it signals an incoming call in silent mode,she attends it and it is Lucky on the other side,Laksh is surprised and asks, “Swara,this number is with you?where are u now?Sanskaar is there with you?,since two days,aunty,Chetan,all of us were trying to get some idea about u both,why did u all do this,or is it Sanky?I saw him holding your hand and taking u away”,Swara is silent ,she understands Ragini hasn’t informed anything to Lucky,she is about to talk and Lucky says,

Swara,Ragini had two hand sets and she had told she lost this number,actually this was mostly switched off when I dialled,so how come this is with you,I simply dialled because I didn’t get her when I tried calling her to the other number”,Swara says, “Lucky,I also don’t understand many things,but do you know if my dad is fine now?you saw him?Sanskar’s family,how did they react to the news?Laksh says, “Swara,I will do something,don’t worry,uncle is in hospital,but his condition has improved,still in ICU,but doctor told that he is out of danger”suddenly Swara hears somebody’s footsteps outside the house and tells, “Lucky,I think he has reached,I have to cut the call now”she cuts the call quickly,Laksh on the other side,stares at his phone and is confused and disturbed…

Scene 2:

Swara is cooking breakfast in the kitchen,she had cut the call and ran to the kitchen and started her work,Sanskaar comes to the kitchen,he has some packets in his hand,he calls Swara,Swara ignores and he raises his voice and calls,Swara unwillingly turns,he keeps the packets and says, “I know you have just these two pairs of clothes,that too,one is sangeet dress and this is mine,so I bought some clothes for you,most of the shops were closed,so don’t know if you will like it,anyways,take it”,Swara stares at him seeing the old Sanskaar back,Sanskaar quickly says, “actually,you wont be interested in taking bath and changing clothes,but since I am also living here and this is such a small house,if you don’t stay clean,I will also have to suffer”,saying this he walks away,Swara gets angry but composes herself,

she turns and sees milk boiling,she quickly tries to remove it and a little falls on her hand,she shouts and Sanskaar hears it and rushes to her,he comes near her,just stares at her hand,finds that it is fine and says, “this is not the way to commit suicide if intention is to burn yourself,be careful,and death also wont spare your family,so better to be alive and keep such thoughts,if any,away,also,here,limited provisions and set up,so don’t waste it”.He walks away saying that and Swara is again angry and hits her hand on the kitchen slab and hurts herself and says, “No,Swara,don’t harm yourself for him,he is irritating you,but,don’t give in”

Scene 3

After some time Swara has finished cooking her breakfast,she sees Sanskar coming with a pack of noodles,she quickly rushes back to kitchen and keeps two empty pots and switch on the stove,she pours water slowly,Sanskaar’s face clearly shows that he is hungry,he understands that she is simply boiling water in two pots,he goes from there,he steps out to the work area,tries to arrange three bricks to support a vessel and light fire to cook,Swara slowly comes behind and looks in the direction of the lake and says, “limited provisions,simple set up and above all,3/4th part house is made of wood,so if some carelessness and fire….boom”,saying this she walks away,Sanskaar is embarrassed and equally angry because he is hungry,but boom makes him smile as well,he pours some water on the fire and goes inside,he takes a small pack of cookies and gives a strong look to Swara who is slowly enjoying her breakfast,he takes each bite of the cookie and looks at her,she understands but pretends as though she has not seen anything.

Scene 4

Evening around 5 pm

Sanskaar is closing all the windows,he talks as though he is talking to the wall,”lake is nearby,there are many bushes outside,especially the roots of the palms ,there is all chance for snakes to enter through the window,if monkeys are used to dealing with snakes,no problem,no need to close windows,other wise,better to close the windows”,Swara stares at him,but recalls the word snakes and quickly goes and closes the windows from outside,Sanskaar observes this and smiles but she doesn’t see it…

After some time,Sanskaar sees a car at the gate,he quickly calls the gate keeper,he asks him to let them inside,Sanskaar is disturbed and goes to the door,Swara notices this and observes,suddenly she gets up and rushes behind him,Laksh,Sanskaar’s parents and Ragini’s dad Arnab has arrived,Sanskaar is standing still,Sanskaar’s dad has a walking aid ,he stares at Swara,Swara fails to control herself seeing them and runs to him and hugs him,he supports her with one hand and asks her not to cry,Sanskaar’s mother goes near them and slowly keeps her hand on Swara’s shoulder,she turns and says, “mumma……”she breaks down in front of her too,Sanskaar’s mom hugs her and says, “we are here ,no?dont cry,dear”she calls Swara and all elders takes her to a room,Sanskaar stands there still not knowing what to do,Arnab comes and calls Laksh to the room,after some time they come out of the room,Sanskaar’s dad slowly walks and stands in front of Sanskaar,Sanskaar is unable to face him,his dad says, “We heard all what Swara said,we know it is not her mistake,now,we are not the elders who don’t give chidren opportunity to speak,If you had done this out of love,I would have supported you a little,but this is not the right way to marry your love,but here,for money,you did this?I cant belive it,so tell us ,the truth”,Sanskaar doesn’t look at him,his dad raises voice and says, “my son Sanskaar has always looked into people’s eyes when he spoke,now if he is not able to face us means,he himself knows that he has done wrong,tell me,do you think what you did to that girl is right?I am asking you Sanskaar?”,Sanskaar quickly raises his voice and says, “I did what I felt is right and I don’t want to defend or explain myself to anyone now,I don’t have answers to anyone’s questions”all others are shocked, Sanskaar’s dad calls him softly, “Sanu,you…..”,

Sanskaar shows the same angry face but is burning inside, Sanskaar’s dad turns to his mom and says, “the son who has always kept parents’ heads high,what is this,where did we go wrong,in understanding him or raising him?”,his dad’s voice is breaking in between while saying this,he continues, “You ask him,”,saying this,he stumbles and Arnab and Laksh supports him,he looks at Arnab with moist eyes and says, “what is all this Arnab?,I cant believe this is our Sanu”,Arnab is sad ,he is teary eyed as well,supports Sanskaar’s dad,Swara and Laksh are watching all this,Swara is crying more seeing Sanskaar’s parents hurt….

Sanskaar’s mom comes near Sanskaar and says, “I know you very well,I know my upbringing wont go wrong,I have faith in it, but,I don’t find any reason for you doing this in a hurry,if you loved her,you had all freedom to tell that to us,because of this deed ,one person was fighting between life and death in hospital,you may have your reasons or was it for money,I don’t know,but,I wont forgive you for the way you spoke to dad now,for the pain you gave to Swara’s family,if this had happened with your Meera,what you would have done?”

Sanskaar’s dad says, “enough Suju,we are taking Swara with us,that is it,cant let her be here,the doors of my house are closed for him but she is our daughter in law,no,she is our daughter,she will stay with us,”Swara goes near him and says, “Pappa,please,I will come there for sure,but I need some time,I need to get a few answers for a few things that happened in my life in last four days,I am very sorry Pappa,I understand your concern,but,I will come,trust

me”,Sanskaar’s dad says, “But Swara beta”,she touches his feet and says, “I need your blessings”,she touches Sujatha’s and Arnab’s feet….after some time elders starts to leave along with Laksh….Laksh leads them and makes them sit in the car,he then goes inside and takes Swara and Sanskaar along with him, Lucky goes near Sanskaar and says, “Sanky,look,bhai,we are friends ,but when Rags introduced you to me,we were in 5th standard,it is 15 years,friends have become like family,so tell me,what is bothering you?,tell me Sanky,I will help you”,Sanskaar says, “Lucky,take them home safely,don’t waste your time,I don’t have anything else to say”,Laksh gets angry seeing his attitude but composes himself and holds his shoulder and says, “yaar,Sanky,don’t say like this,we are friends na yaar,you can tell anything,,you don’t trust me?”,Sanskaar shows anger,pushes his hands away and says, “yes,we are just friends,if I don’t have anything to answer to my family,you think I will have something to tell you,no,please get out of here and never try to take this freedom again,situations have changed,I have changed”,

Laksh is shocked,sad and angry ,he holds Sanskaar by his collar and says, “Sanskaar,words once spoken cant be taken away,so all of a sudden,you have forgotten our friendship,you don’t value me,ok,ok,15 years friendship,you forgot everything, Sanskaar,good bye,then”Swara notices that Lucky has tears in his eyes while saying this,Laksh leaves his collar and goes near Swara who was watching all this with moist eyes,he just hugs her and says, “take care ,Swara,you will always be my friend and I will always be there for you,right now,I don’t know what to do,but I will discuss with elders and decide,”Swara thanks him and says, “No,Lucky,just take care of my family and his family,trust me,I will manage here,you brought them here,no?I could see them,thank you”,Laksh is about to leave but goes near Sanskaar,points his finger at him ,with pain and anger in his eyes and says, “Sanky,you…..I hate you,I will not forgive you…..”,saying this he walks away….Sanskaar quickly goes from there….

Scene 5

Sanskaar goes to the washroom,he opens the tap,he cries his heart out,simultaneously Swara is shown crying in her room,after some time,Sanskaar comes out,he goes to the kitchen,he comes out with a glass of milk,he goes to Swara’s room,she was standing near the window staring at the sky, Sanskaar calls her and says, “Swara ,drink this and take your tablets”,he stands there as though waiting for her to drink it,Swara looks into his eyes,drinks the milk and takes the tabet using a glass of water,he takes the glass and turns to go,Swara calls him from behind and says, “Sanskaar,all these days,I was totally confused if I should believe your cruel side,but today I got the answer,your voice has changed,your eyes and voice clearly tells me that you cried and now I have the hope that my friend Sanskaar is alive somewhere inside you,but ,

Sanskaar,for the tears in our parents’ eyes because of us,one life wont be enough to repay for that,you might have had problems,the gang that you said woulld have forced you to marry me for money,since you are silent about it,I may find it out later,I may not be able to do that also,but,please don’t hurt your parents..it is an earnest request”,Sanskaar just looks at her,she sees her friend Sanskaar in him,he softly says, “I am sorry Swara,shall try not to hurt you and others more,need some to sort out certain things,don’t ask me anything more……gudnight”…Swara says, “I dont know what to do Sanskaar,some time,how long should I wait ,I dont know,I am not able to be angry with you also,I cant completely forget the pain you gave to our families,but your eyes,just now,your eyes told me that you are helpless in some way,because of this one reason,I may give you some more time…but I dont know if I am right doing that….God…”,she looks up at the sky….

Credit to: Vini(Veena)


  1. Such a emotional epi.. atlast swara undrstoid that sanski has got trapped somewhr.. and feel vry bad for lucky nd sanski bond.. and all r getting hurt due to this marriage…

  2. nandini

    wat a long wait dear…. I literally surfed 2 read ur ff…why do u make us wait tis much??… Well, tis was as usual awsm,fantastic…,and praise goes on..nd..on… nd yaa want nxt update very soon…

    • Vini

      I know dear, even I had lost interest in writing cos of this gap,but I will write what I have planned and wind up,next part,on Monday n thanks yr for the good words.

      • joya

        short comment…..
        my heart is not wid me and bcz of dis my brain is not working properly …………………


        i m fine……..wht’s about u…?????

      • Niti

        ohhoooo..wow…joya darling…whose that lucky one…??? who stole ur dil..ha..?? tell me tell me…y ur dil is not with u n ur dimag is not working ha…bolo bolo…for whom u r singing this ganna..

        ” chura liya hai tumne Jo dil ko…”

        just kidding ha…now sachi me kya hua hai wo batao ??

  3. aashi

    it fabulous vini di…i missed your ff a lot…plzz upload it regularly….and the way laksh says i hate uhh to sanky was really heart breaking….when will swasan unite and all mis understanding would be cleared??

  4. Kriya

    hey vini Didi,you took test of our dhiraj,the epi was outstanding,but very heart breaking,sanskar is helpless,can’t show his pain to anyone,everyone can see swara’s pain but not sanskars,thank god swara trust sanskar,the small small moments of both were very cute n sweet,now waiting for next epi to read further.

  5. Kriya

    hello everyone,miss u all,how r u all ? finally our chat page has been uploaded by vini didi so now we can have blast in weekends,n ya one thing vini didi niyati will comment tomorrow as she is busy with her off work,she has told me but i was also busy with my CLG exams so couldn’t reply u guys earlier,ya joya i was having that watch till today but now no more as my exams hv finished today only.so wts the plan of weekends.

  6. Shraddha

    Didi……. Oh God how sad it is to not do anything n still face the worst situation….
    In my opinion the worst feeling for oneself is wen ur parents feel let down by you n bow their heads because of u?? …….

    N sankys parents situation shud be worse because the one who was their Pride all his life is giving them biggest pain…..
    Poor sanky!!!
    I really felt bad wen he raised his voice in front of his dad….. The way they trust him n can’t believe he is doing this itself shows how much good he was …….
    Very sad very sad episode for me……..
    But u gave us some sweet moments like their convo n food n Closing windows ……..
    Poor fellow smiling at his love even in such trauma?? trying hard to get optimistic both swasan ……..
    But paappp sanky he’s hungry ….??
    Di give some food ya poor fellow he’ll faint only starving starving……?? n agin last para is ur forte see always ending mast rehta hai apka……
    Swara baby?? u could see his red eyes….. After crying …… N his change in voice haaaaa shanti mili thodi see but di wonderful way u expressed all this….
    There’s still hope n I’m hoping things get fine within the range….. Unlike it happened with Lucky’s case?
    It hurts wen ur Brother says be hates u ik hell patch up still it pains …….. But didi 1 more point is u did great job while showing this because in case lucky would ve reacted other than this
    Wouldn’t do justice no because we all know how impulsive our Laksha is……. Very good now all we need to do is wen n how n what is Mukesh uncle going to do that he needs to do….. ….
    How is swara gonna find out whats his helplessness……..
    Hows sanky gonna come out of this mess trying hard not to break down………
    Fingers crossed!!!!!
    Stay tuned folks!!!
    Much more to come???✌✌

    • Vini

      Hi Shraddha dear,hw r u?haha,yea,we will make him eat something,Sanky should not starve this much ,ok,we will see to it,actually,after a gap,I forgot the one line partially,and ya ,answers to your questions at the end,yea,have to find out,partially forgot n totally lazy …

  7. vaishnavi

    Hi vinni di..in today’s epu 1stly dat fire, wood wala scene is very nice, poor sanskaar dying of hunger hahaha….any person would not let his own image damaged in front of his parents…if its our sanskaar he would never do dat….he loves his parents dat much dat ki voh apne bhachpan me hi bada banene ka kartavya nibhaya, but today for swaras dad’s promise he did dis…wow….I like his charecter ver much….nd now swara is also understanding him great….

    • Vini

      Hai Vaishu,how r u?yes,Swara can’t ignore her feelings abt his goodness, and he is just being sincere to what he has promised Mukesh..let us see.

  8. imane

    Hi Vini, hi everyone… What an emotional episode dear… First of all: you made me cry. Then: i had headache because i was crying. Then : i wondered .. How can a human being like Sanskar support this mental torture when he is sooooo kind hearted and has soo many values and qualities !!! I hope Sanky will survive to this situation ;( IT HAS TO !! 😉 😉
    Amazing episode di, i Love your writing and i wish you all the best !

    • Vini

      Oh.I made u cry,sorry dear,thank u my dear for the good words,yes,Sanskar belongs to that kind after creating whom GOd broke the mould.

    • Vini

      Oh.I made u cry,sorry dear,thank u dear for the good words,yes,Sanskar belongs to that kind after creating whom GOd broke the mould.

  9. shabrin

    Hey u uploaded it finally…awesome as always..slowly slowly swara is falling for him again and may be soon all their misunderstanding will get cleared…update soon

  10. Meghs

    Hi vini di its fabulous … It portrayed each n every character emotions very well…
    Felt bad for lucky .. N sanskar everyone misunderstanding
    But our swara somewhere still had trust that sanskar can’t do this had strong reasons behind it .. Wow awsome di ….
    I always Waiting for ur ff… I will wait for nxt part .. I am sure u will send it as soon as possible

    • Vini

      Thank u dear,trying to maintain that identity of characters,next part will be on Monday,and thank u so much for the good words.

  11. Niti

    hello my dear vini Di,

    how r u Di..? r u alright ?? when day before yesterday i check this page n not find your single epi…i was like Ohh god…what happened to vini Di..actually i was bit worried about u..hope everything is alright and nothing serious..

    i will not complaint anything like u r late or made us wait or anything…bz honestly speaking i was also besy with my offc work and will be besy till Feb end bz as i told u guys that from march onwards i will hv start my final preparations…Di plz comment karneme late hojaye ya comment na kar pau to plz apni ye choti masum behna ko maf kar dena..advance me hi sorry bol rahi hu…bz of my hectic schedules…but i will read ur each n every part for sure…

    Di ye comment na me ye vala epi padhne se pehle kar rahi hu..so i will comment about epi after sometime…offo Di app na bahut jyada bate karate ho…now let me go n read…i can’t wait much to know what happened with my sanky darling…

    • Vini

      Hi Niti,I am fine dear,was a little busy ,so couldn’t upload regularly and whenever I take that break ,I feel lazy to come back, also ,phone,since 3 weeks,some problem, so I didn’t check net frequently,then I thought I will sit and write the one line properly and then write rest of the episodes,don’t think I will be able to.post next episode today but shall definitely try tomorrow, oh,so u r also busy,finals prep is about to begin,can understand dear,his busy u would be,will miss u but won’t feel bad ok cos I can understand the situation very well,study well dear, all the best,God bless u.

  12. Niti

    Ohho Di..wt a heart touching epi..i become crying baby after reading sanky’s condition..swalak phone convo was nice..it shows lucky’s concern for everyone..

    diiiiiii…how can u do this to sanky again..huh..i am very angry…u again not let him eat anything…starving starving…vese swasan moments were very cute in that scene…but fir bhi…plz let my poor sanky eat some food..Ohh thank god u at least let him eat something from packets…

    Ohh god in any persons life it is the worst moment in fact person will chose to die before hearing sach type of thing from his or her parents…sanky’s parents view was correct at their place..their concern for Shona was very nice..Ohh my poor boy…can’t make his own stand..what he hv felt after hearing such a harsh words from his dad n mom…the boy who sacrifices his childhood and acted matured above his age for his family..now become the victim of situation and bearing all hatred…for the sin which he has not done…

    lucky’s concern for Shona and his and sanky’s convo was very heart touching…the 15 yrs friendship is at sack now just bz of one promise made by him to mukesh..lucky is also right at his place..

    Ohh Di..thank u thank u thank u thank u so much…Shona baby trust sanky…its called true love..she can read sanky’s eyes…she can understand his pain..his helplessness…wow i become very happy after reading that part…sanky also politly told her that he can’t let her know anything now till the right time come..wow end was very nice..now waiting for next part..superb epi..plz Di one request i wanna see some romantic moments of swasan..not more just small scene between their fight and painful situations..

    • Vini

      Let me read your comment about this,Sanky should be made to eat,even ,Shraddha used to tell that,ok,we shall,I torture him cos his fate s that way but he will surely get his.love as reward,actually,Sanky’s parents’ words and his regret for talking harshly with them.has affected him as well and drained his strength,that is y he cried and spoke softly to Swara,he couldn’t compose himself.and pretend.Oh dear,u know na how tuf it is for.me.to write,writing romance is even more tougher ,let me see dear,even if I don’t ,don’t feel bad,ok,actually Sanky and Swara are connected to each other’ s hearts.Swara can’t ignore her feelings ,understanding and trust,it is just that she.cant just decide whether to listen to heart or brain..emotions are a bit complicated between our leads…

  13. Niti

    Hii everyone…

    shraddha…kya comment kiya hai yar..maja agaya padhk…joya..vaishnavi..Kriya..how r u ha..?

    hey baki sab kaha hai..ha..rups..sethooty..vinita…where r u..?? sab thik to hai na…

    itna sannata kyu hai yaha ha..mere devil dramebazzo..!! Sare k sare silent kyu ho gaye hai…? Charlie chapaln ki movie dekh rahe ho kya…!!!

    • Vini

      U should come back and give a stir,I think only then the rest will.come up,yes,our Sethooty n Joya are here,already.

  14. sethooty

    Hi vini,am in banglore yeeee :-)B-)B-)
    Trip in wid.my family 😛
    Episode superb…
    Hey baki sab ..watsupppp guys?
    mickey ,sharadha,joya ,niti,vinitha,vaishnavi,kriya..goodmorng

  15. Vinita

    Hi everyone!!!!!!
    I was a lil busy.
    Superb epi di!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Joya di kaun hai woh lucky insaan?????
    Rupu kaha Ho tum…
    Mujhe highest mil Gaya!!!!!
    Mil hi Gaya mil Gaya……
    Joya di ko bhi mil Gaya
    Koi mil gaya

    • Vini

      Hi Sethooty,how are you?m very happy to see u n Joya here ..last episode was posted 5 days bk ,I thought just like the writer who lost interest, reader friends also would..but trust me,I will stop only after writing what I have planned as a short one line..but only when I sit and type ,I also will be able to know how many scenes and episodes will be required for that..hopefully,tomorrow onwards,there will be one each..

    • Vini

      Musku,I will write tomorrow, actually ,I thought most of the readers would have forgotten this ff except a small gang with whom I am in.touch but glad to c somebody outside that asking as well..thank u..sorry..tomorrow episode 35…

  16. Joya

    Vini di aaj Tuesday hai……kaha hai aap????busy hai?????

    Niti and vinita dear,
    Nothing like dt yr…….i was upset…….
    And is duniya aisa koi nahi hai jo humra dil chura k le jaye…….hehehehehe……..

    • Vini

      Hi Joya,actually this comment if yours made me scroll up,but since I have a friend who says the same thing ,she says,”it is better to be silent wen u r sure that u can’t do.something with heart”,so reading your comment above made me remember that,yes,u r right dear, hope every thing is fine now and u r happy, and as far as I know,it will be very difficult for a guy to gain some place in ur heart,he will have to earn it..so..Since I took this break from writing episodes na..falling back to track s..but since I am telling you all,I think I will write next one tomorrow.

    • Vini

      Sethooty n Joya,by God’s grace ,m fine,but not getting time to write and phone will show some hang wen I surf net and then I got irritated and stopped,haven’t updated Whatsapp also cos f these issues,I miss u guys,but,now lack of time plus laziness cos of the gap is not allowing me to write,but hopefully will write next one,tomorrow, but ,our army is there in thoughts…hope u both are fine..

  17. Vini

    Hi Mickey,Joya,Shraddha,Sethooty, Niti,Vinita,Vaishu,Kriya,Needhi,did I miss out any?..also Appu,Leku..how are you?actually whose name did I miss mentioning?… Sorry…

  18. sethooty

    Hi vini …thank god u back..really worried about u
    Tuesday reached home.mysore, lalbag,vrundhavan garden ,tippu palace,comerical street..etc.Trip was good
    Adipoli. Actually first time in bangalore.. Everywhere found malayalies..haha..its like I was in kochi…

    • Niyati

      yar sethooty..i hv also visited all the place which you hv motioned in Bangalore…i love that city u know…vrundavan garden…bannargata national park..iscon temple..this three are among best places of Bangalore…i hv many memories in my mind..

      i hv also visited maisur..ooty..kodai knl..kanyakumari..wax museum…rameshvaram..tirupati balaji..mahalakshmi temple..etc..all the places were extra ordinarily beautiful..

      • Vini

        Joya,u should try to visit Bangalore, Kerala and many places in Tamil Nadu..not now, ok,after your studies…

    • Vini

      Oh.so u had a wonderful trip,u visited a lot of places??
      , good,good,yea,even,I was surprised wen I came here,many keralites,and many shops nearby are run by them, so didn’t have problem in shopping necessary items wen my hubby was sick for a few weeks..happy to c u here,again,bk to work ,no?ok..enjoy..

  19. Joya

    Finally vini di u commented………

    Bdw vini di……
    Ur friend is absolutely ri8……….bdw humri wajah se aap humesh apki frnds ko yaad karti hai na………….so sweet yr……

    And yeh jo baki k dramebazz hai na sab ke sab us Mr.india wali ghadi ko lekar lad rahe hai……….sab k sab gayab……………………… Galti ho gayi humse jo humne wo watch purchase Ki……….

    • Vini

      Hi dear,just now I typed something n have posted the next one,not satisfied, you always remind me about her,means wat u say,has more than once reminded me of Nami..I think all have turned up ..yet to read the comments below…

  20. Vinita

    Kya karu joya di yeh Mr.india wali watch hai hi itni anokhi Ki hum sab lar rahe hai!!!!!!!! Rupu tu kaha lapata Ho gayi?? Hai bhagwaaaaaaan….
    Aap sab kaise Ho???
    Thank god di aap thik hai..

    • Vini

      Hi dear,how r u?last two weeks ,had written just two episodes,I think if I had written daily,this much silence would not have been there..then how is ur studies?exams?

  21. Shraddha

    Diiiii wer are you??????
    Actually I had been on family outing so I had no internet connection I thought ki I might ve missed ur all chats comments……. But I was like hawww di itni shaant shaant types kab se hogayi ? chalo ek baat achi hai I din miss out any episode yayyy??
    But wru di how are u all OK?
    N di I just read ur comments u said ppl might ve forgotten ut ff?????? ya like seriously thats why we Google search n see n check every now n den for any updates n wait like this ??? with open mouth???? kya di aapp bhi na …..??? chalo now jaldi jaldi bring my sanky I miss him??????oh I’m blushing….. Hahaha

    • Vini

      Helllo Shraddha dear,u bk?oh,all had gone on tour with families,I mean u,Sethooty,good,good,dear,to be honest,I forgot a few scenes that I had planned cos of this gap,but have posted something today,oh,u miss Sanky, actually, I lost interest in writing but wen I thot about u guys,I wrote one,I will surely recall n write but how many more episodes R required for that,even I don’t know..let’s c,so sweet of u all..u all search for this ff,thank u dear…

  22. Niyati

    Hii buddies….u know after almost 5 days i am visiting this page…i was like jaladi jaldi kholo..sab ne muje chod kar kitna mara kiya hoga..mene sab ki nautanki miss kardi..ye sab soch rahi thi…fir mene finally Google search kark ye page khol hi diya..n i was expecting dhamaka…but i wad shocked..no one have chated anything..this is not fair guys..i know now a days this swaragini site is flooded with ffs so its difficult to find but u can find it by Google search..aakhir humari is family ka saval hai..app log asa kese kar sakte ho..u know i can read your minds ap log yahi soch rahe hona ki ye to ase bol rahi hai jese khud activ rahi ho..but yar kya karu am really besy now a days..my class n office r going to complete soon..

    i am missing you all very much…bahot jyada rona a raha hai abhi..Di..sethooty..joya..vinita..shraddha..rupshikha..vaishu..take care u all..

    • Joya

      Oye niyati…………..

      Mat ro yar…………..

      Tumhari aakhari lines padhakar humne kuch yaad aaya hai wo kuch is tarah(hmara nahi hai),

      Koi deewana kehta hai koi pagal samjta hai
      Magar dharti ki baicheni ko bas badal samjta hai
      Hum tujhse dur kaise hai, tum humse dur kaisi hai
      Yeh tera dil samjta hai ya humara dil samjta hai…………

      • Joya

        Akya fark padta hai is site pe kitne ff hai……..aur Google search karne ki kya jarurat hai yr……..browser ki history kab kaam aayegi…..hehehehe

      • Shraddha

        Omg Joyaaaaaaaa is back n with a very faaduuuu wala Bang!!!!???
        Kya lines hai joyaaaaa dil khush kardiya tum ne?? sachi muchi bohot acha laga sunke ……

        N wat a co incidence mai aaj he free hui aur yaha msg kiya aur tum dono milgaye jhat se….??

        Yaar niyati mai bhi aisa soch ke he ayi thi mai family ke saath outing pe gayi thi…… Phir aaj dekha toh I was also in same state……
        Nyways aaj tum dono se baat karke acha laga sukoon mila types lag raha hai u know?
        .. Aur baki sab kya haal chal hai dostonn kaha ho sabbb

    • Vini

      Niti dear,how r u?busy days,no?still,u r coming this side,great,wen all of u all.gather only there will be something to read,now that 5 of u r here,I think others will also turn up,we miss u too dear,I think,if I had written daily,this much silence would not have been there…

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