Swasan fan fiction (Season 2 ) episode 30

Hi guys,I know ,I am not at all punctual in posting updates,sorry,then,though I haven’t replied to the comments under the last two ff episodes,I truly value every comment and feed back and a big thank u to all silent readers who made me realise that so many are reading this ff,then,next sentence is not meant for my friends ,Mickey,Joya,Shraddha,Niti,Vinita,Sethooty,Appu and Leku.I told so because since we chat thru comments,they must be fed up of reading what I am gonna type,from this or next episode ,the so called stupid track,as I often say is gonna begin,and,from a realistic ff(as a few readers have told),this is gonna become a predictable,messed up fan fiction,my apologies in advance,not proof read,here we go,SWASAN Fan Fiction (Season 2) episode 30……..

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http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-fan-fiction-season-2-episode-29/

Scene 1:Previous day of Swara’s wedding,Sanskar’s house

Sanskar’s mother asks him if he is not going to Swara’s house,she reminds him that MUkesh had told them all to reach there in the morning itself,she also tells him that she called Ragini’s mom,and all elders have decided to reach by afternoon, “since everything was in a hurry,Sumi is tensed,she called and told that all of us have to participate in the sangeet”,Sanskar just listens to his mother’s words,he feels every word like a stone falling on his heart,he just goes near his mom and tells her, “Mamma,I am going to take bath,after that I will leave,Chetan had called and told us to reach now,actually Mukesh unce is also busy,so,my mumma ,give me some food,I will come now after taking bath,ok”,His mom turns and tells him , “ah,don’t forget,Swara had told that day itself that u have to wear the kurtha she gifted ,so wear that or take that along with you”He says, “ok,mamma”.He comes out after taking bath,he opens the cupboard and takes the gift which Swara gave him,he remembers how Swara had come home with it,he slowly opens it and moves his hand on it and says,

“Swara,your choice is so nice yaar,except your first love,you could have opted somebody else,if u had done that,your heart would not have been broken like this,I am very sorry,my love…saying this he turns and takes the chain that he had removed and kept on the bed,he wears it ,he looks at the locket,it is the same key chain which Swara had gifted on his birthday celebration held at Ragini’s home,he remembers how she told that she had kept it safely for two years after their 10th standard tour,she, showing their names(Swara and Sanskaar) on the grain and telling him that it will remind him about a friend who considers him as her best friend,how he had incorporated it into a locket later with his pocket money,he understands that his eyes are filled,he slowly lifts it and kisses the locket and says, “Sanskaar is Swara’s,but Swara cant be Sanskaar’s ,loss is Sanskaar’s and only Sanskaar’s,but u will always remain ,close to my heart,like this,always,every beat will be heard and felt by u first,I love u Swara”he quickly wears the kurta and goes in front of the mirror,he looks at himself ,smiles and tells to himself, “one more day,have to hide my heart from her,wish I could run away from here,be brave ,Sanskaar….for your Swara,he quickly corrects,himself,no,for Aksh…ay’s Swara……….

Scene 2:Swara’s house,afternoon

Sanskar has reached,Sanraglak are actively involved in the final round preparations,Sanskaar wants to see Swara,he sees her coming down,he goes near her,he tells her, “so,all set,bride?Swara just smiles and says “,kurta suits you,handsome…all set?yes,except, heart..”,Sanskaar feels like a sword piercing his soul,he quickly asks, “where is Mukesh uncle,not returned”?Swara says, “no,hasn’t reached,dad is tired ,actually,that is my only tension,everything in a hurry,he was busy managing everything,I think hasn’t even taken his tablets properly,ah,everything will be over by tomorrow,no?Sanskaar, should once in a while come this side and meet my family,ok,”Sanskaar says, “sure ,dear,don’t worry”,a relative and family arrives,Swara excuses herself and goes,Sanskaar looks at her leaving,just then he receives a call,he attends it and quickly goes from there.

Scene 3:Beach

Sanskaar arrives ,he looks around,he dials Mukesh’s number,he goes to the other side of the road,the sea is very violent,the roaring sound of the waves disturbs him,he looks the sea and quickly goes to the car parked there,Shambu,Swara’s driver,hints to Mukesh that Sanskaar has arrived,Mukesh quickly steps out,holds Sanskaar’s hands and takes him to a side,Sanskaar sees him sweating profusely,he feels worried and asks Mukesh if he is fine,Mukesh holds Sanskaars hands and says, “Sanskaar,I need your help,I don’t know who else to ask for a favour at this last minute,Sanskaar ,will you marry Swara?Sanskaar is shocked,he is standing there not able to believe what he just heard, he calls, “uncle”,Mukesh leans on to him and says,

“I want to tell you a few things,all knows a successful business man Mukesh,but no one,not even my Sumi knows a Mukesh,who was an utter failure,who was on the verge of suicide due to debt,that time,had to accept an offer which came from Akshay’s father,I became his partner,partner in all his illegal business,all means all,it was like a whirlpool,I was forced to,didn’t have any power to resist it,later became successful,money was the only gain,haven’t slept a day peacefully after that,but had to ,to keep my Sumi and kids happy,without letting them know anything,managed all these years,when Akshay’s proposal came,wanted to say a no,but his father told that he has no interest in business,I also thought my Swara will refuse,but no,I was thinking that you both were in love,would have happily given her hand in yours,but she agreed,that time also,had a hope that the guy is good,why to bother about his dad,today,I had gone to their guest house here,saying this Mukesh shows signs of palpitation,Sanskaar gets worried,he tries to hold him,

Mukesh continues, “today,today only I heard the father son conversation,God made me hear it,that Akshay,he is a womanizer,his dad was doing a gambling by asking for my daughter’s hand in marriage,to bring his son to the right path,more than that,I heard him saying how he rescued Akshay from going behind the bars for killing his partner with whom he was in living together relationship,I couldn’t believe my ears,I don’t know what to do,I don’t have the power to fight with him,if my Sumi comes to know about this,I will lose my family,I will lose everything,also Akshay’s dad,he will do anything for his son,Sanskaar ,I know I am being selfish,I am asking for your life,marry my daughter today,please,I beg you..take her away,may be ,others will think that you were an obsessive lover,yes,that is what I am asking from you,I know,I know that I am being selfish,but please,I will arrange everything,just bring her to the place that I say,pandit and all arrangemets I will do,I don’t have the power to fight with Akshay’s dad directly,but I will protect you both and your family,that I can do,have a small gang of loyal subordinates who will manage,I will make them,already talked to them,but..trust me,give me some time,I will set everything right,need some time to settle a few things ,but cant let this marriage happen tomorrow ,at any cost”
Sanskaar holds Mukesh’s hands and says, “uncle,I don’t understand anything,it is not a film,it is Swara’s life,how can I do this to her,she values her self respect a lot,I can’t do this to her,if you want ,I will take her safely somewhere,after telling the truth,but marrying her forcefully,I don’t find any logic, uncle,this is life,she will never forgive me,she will never forgive herself for letting you all down,also,how long can we hide truth? how long can you protect my family,uncle, all this doesn’t make any sense,please,I cant,we will find some way to stop the marriage,we have a few with us,there will be some way out”,Mukesh holds his chest and says, “Sanskaar ,I know what I am going to say is not at all right,but I have to,do you remember the promise you gave in the hospital,that even after years,you will be ready to do anything for me,today,I am asking you to fulfil it,marry my daughter,today evening,please”,

Sanskaar listens to him in shock,he stands there still, the sound of waves brings him back to his senses,he holds his head,he sees Mukesh holding his chest and taking deep breaths,he holds him,Mukesh goes on pleading ,“please,please,my son,marry her and rest I will manage…I know it is not easy,but at this last moment,don’t have any other way,I want my daughter to be in safe hands,being a selfish father,I am asking for your life,for my daughter,but ,I know she wont get any one better than you,her name wont be destroyed,I will arrange everything,please,go bring her to the place that I say”.Mukesh folds his hands and pleads,Sanskaar shakes his head in a no,Shambu watches all this…Sanskaar comes and asks Shambu to give the keys and go home…

Scene 4:Swara’s room

Sanskaar comes inside,Swara turns and sees him,she notices his tension,she asks him if everything is alright,he tells her, “Swara,do you trust me?”,Swara says, “yes ,Sanskaar,why are you asking this now?”,Sanskaar says, “you should come with me,now”,Swara says, “Sanskaar,I would have happily come along with you, but this,this is not the right time,sangeet function in a short while ,Mom is already worried ,she has been trying Papa’s number,Shambu uncle also hasn’t reached,don’t know where they are,it is not right to come with you now”,Sanskaar holds Swara’s hands and says, “if you have ever loved me,come…”,Swara resists,he tightens the grip and she unwillingly follows him,he takes her out through the back door,Laksh sees them and runs behind,but before he could reach them,he sees the car moving,he stands there thinking where they have left ,he decides to talk to Ragini…

Scene 5:A large ground with a small ,minimally decorated mandap

Sanskaar holds Swara’s hands and takes her to the mandap,Swara looks at him in shock,he sees four people wearing mask,he sees the pandit,a man is pointing gun at his head,Swara stands there not able to understand her eyes,Sanskaar comes near her and says, “Swara,I am going to marry you,now”,Swara looks at him in shock, “Sanskaar,what are you saying,and who are these people,mask and gun and all this,what is your connection with all this?are you sure about what you are saying?,I need to go now,I have promised my dad that I will never let him down,please,come back to your senses,I need to go,come with me”,she turns to go,Sanskaar angrily pulls her and says, “you wont leave now,you have seen only one side of Sanskaar,these are my men,no,I am one among them,had to be part of this,was dragged into this world,why should I tell you the details,right now,I am doing what I feel is right for me,I am going to marry you,and that is it,I don’t have to explain more,don’t try to resist,wont be good for you,we need your dad’s empire and you are the key to that”,Swara stands there not able to believe what he heard,she tells him, “Sanskaar,are you the one who I have loved for 12 years,are you the same Sanky who is my best friend?,please,don’t act,trying to give me a surprise,?then where is our Raglak?she looks around,

Sanskaar comes near her,holds her hand forcefully and orders the pandit to start the rituals,Swara tries to free herself,she is not able to believe what is happening ,she tells him, “Sanskaar,I love you,I would have happily agreed ,but now it is late,what you are doing is not right,for money,no,no,Sanskaar cant be like this,my family,they wont be able to face the society,please,leave me “suddenly she pushes him and says, “Sanskaar,Sanju ,what about her?Sanskaar,your girl,don’t this to her,think about her,please for her,leave me..”,Sanskaar forcefully holds her hand and completes the rituals,Swara pleads to the pandit to stop,she sees him helpless and cries,she pleads,Sanskar makes her sit,he makes her wear the mangalsutra and fills sindoor in her maang ,Swara stares at him in shock,she feels her vision is getting blurred,she is about to hold Sanskaar’s collar ,she slowly closes her eyes and falls to a side,Sanskaar shouts “Swara “ and holds her,he tries to wake her up ,she doesn’t open her eyes,he quickly lifts her in his arms…………..”

(Guys,very sorry for this,I didn’t like this and know that it is a predictable story ,sorry once again for the stupid twist,this is why I say I am not a ‘writer’,but I am proceeding with this…you have complete freedom to be silent …”

Credit to: Vini(Veena)

198 comments

  1. yyy

    it’s awesome. u r not a writer u r a creator no one can predict wat wl hapn in ur ff just amazing….oops I’m a silent reader should hav told frst BT wat to do ur ff made me to wrt abt it frst rathr than introducing myself

    • Vini

      M happy to know that u were reading,humbled n honoured bybyour good words, thank u very much for the comment,bt ,no yaar,I’m not a writer or creator,I think many would be guessing this track,but I value your comment yaar.Thank u.

  2. Harani

    this is awesome Dr..swasan r destined to be together..whatever gonna happen…swasan r married..I am damn happy
    but it could be more amazing to see their romance which will not come now but somewhere in future..vini u r just awesome Dr …:-)

    • Vini

      Swasan got married,I think that is the only good thing in this episode today,glad to see your comment,thank u for your good words dear,even I don’t know what is gonna come,have to plan,let us see.

  3. sethooty

    Haha..vini… .for today’s episode I have no tears…rocking twist..loved that gift swara sanskar name on grain..that she made on 10th class tour awesome…but that gun and men on mask …k u will reveal that on next episode only na..can’t wait for next episode yaar..am .so excited like am jumping on d floor ..sanskar married to swara and she fainted on his arm..wow athu polichutto…
    This is d only way to left for swasan marriage bz our sanky mahan wouldn’t accept swara bz of his insecurity…

    • Vini

      Thank u dear,last sentence is very true,but I’m responsible for making him so,haha,and u liked it ,fainting,oh,gun n men are clear dear.Mukesh’s people,Swara knows a few of them, to hide it,then gift,I had hinted it in the tour episode,no?so incorporated here.Thank u being there thru out these episodes of both ffs.

    • Vini

      Thank u dear,if u happen to read this,if u don’t mind,pls mention where u r from n wat u r doing?u comment daily but I haven’t asked this.Reveal only if u r ok with it.

    • Vini

      Ur first comment,no? Thanks yaar,for the comment n for liking my ff,but,wen somebody mentions that m a writer, don’t know y I don’t consider me so..bt these ffs are just attempts to write something for all of u who read this.

      • anuhya

        yes… its my first comment. thank you vini for replying… i love ur ff surely will do the same… checking this page update for ur ff daily… eagerly waiting for ur next part… ya Happy republic day

    • Vini

      Yea,_hate will be there ,in what quantity, even m not sure_,have to plan it,thanks dear for the comment.

  4. Nidhi

    Sankar become wrong in her eyes.. I hope she trust him and understand thst he is doing this for some reason.. dont create misunderstandings btwn swasan.. and I know you make a intersting story .upload soon

    • Vini

      Well dear,some misunderstanding is required dear,and interesting story,don’t know dear,let me see ,ok,thank for the comment dear,m happy to see u here nowadays.

  5. Prit

    Dii loved it…sanky took all d blame on him…only to save swara…any way i m happy with marriage… Ragini had told sanky na only god can do any miracle… According to today’s episode god made mukesh hear those bastards( sry to use this word but I am helpless because they were going to use swara so they deserve this)…really god is there for the true lovers…nd sanky’s acting in front of swara is awesome… I hope the misunderstanding will be cleared soon….
    Finger crossed…
    Hope to see swasan without misunderstanding in next epi…
    Try to update it asap….
    Plz plz plz…
    A request from ur little sis…
    I have my exams on 27 still i am waiting for ur ff…from ds u can know how much I love it…i m refreshing this page again and again only for this…so plz give some time from ur busy schedule and update it tomorrow… Plz…
    Sry i m blabbering too much…
    Bye…

    • Vini

      Thank u dear,m happy to read this, by the way,wat exam dear,if u don mind,pls do tell where u are from n which course u r studying,anyways,all the best for ur exams,and regarding ur analysis abt Ragsan conversation n Sanky’s acting,cool,next update,sorry,ok,give me some time to plan something dear,I mean the scenes, after posting next ,I shall surely put a comment here under your comment so that I won’t waste your time,tomorrow by evening, it should come,sorry dear,since scenes r not planned ,this trouble,take care,study well dear.

      • Vini

        Ok dear,all the best,so happy to see people from various places connecting with each other thru tellyupdates site,all the best for your exam.

  6. joya

    1st of all i m very happy bcz my guess was ri8 k mukesh us promise k badle me swara ko sanskar se shadi k liye kahega……..yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……..

    so twist ha…..nice…..so many ques r dancing in my mind bcz of dis twist……waiting for next update…….

    yeh episode……

    jis tarah se apne sanskar k dard ko describe kiya hai….very nice……jaise ki he feels every word of his mom like a stone is falling on his heart,swara ur choice is nice,except ur 1st love,his correction Akshay’s swara wid pause….very nice…..wo gift and all…good…..

    swara sanskar ki baate…..hmmmm….meri family se milne aana,mukesh ki fikr……

    Beach pe………
    aayla……
    mukesh…
    ek insaan halat k haton majboor,jo apni family ko khona nahi chahta,jise apni daughter ki safety, khushiyon ki chinta sata rahi hai,apni beti ki happiness k liye kuch bhi karne ko ya sehne ko ready hai aisa father,jise apne kiye ka guilt bhi hai……..

    ek taraf sanskar
    jo in sari situations se bahar nikalne ka rasta chahta hai bina kisi ko hurt kiye,jo swara k values uski soch ko usi k dad k samne rakh raha hai,par kismat ka mara ek father jise filal apni beti ki jindgi k alawa kuch aur najar na aana……..

    jo twist aapne liya hai use puri tarah justify karne ki koshish kiya hai and that’s very very very good…………….. mukesh aur sanskar ki situation,point of view……achchhi tarik se portrait kiya hai……….

    last scene
    jise pyar kiya use keh na paya,par aaj usi k liye,uske dad k liye unki image ko bachane k liye uthaya gaya kadam…..jo swara sanskar ke rishte ki definition hi badal dega……..uljhano ki bhawar me fasa sanskar………very good…………..

    yeh to pata hai yeh twist ek new beginning leke aaya hai aur sach samne aayega to badhne wala pyar,respect,narjoka jhukna,fakr se uthane tak ka safar enjoy karne k liye hum sab ready haihai….

    • Vini

      I remember, that day couldn’t tell u bt u were the first one to mention it,that promise will be working in the opposite way,superb dear,then,I wana know those questions in ur mind,come on,shoot,rest of the lines in ur comment, perfect analysis my dear ,as always,?..every word makes me wonder if u have access inside my brain.

      • joya

        sawal……….
        actually yeh twist apke liye challenges lekar aaya hai…..i mean ab sab kuch badlega…….sab ka test hoga……swara ka pyar,bharosa,raglaksan ki friendship……..inki dosti ko aaj tak labjo ki jarurat nahi padhi sply ragsan ko………kya raginj samj payegi???? kuch din gujrenge jab sanskar ko swara apne halaton se struggle karta dekh swara sochne par majboor hogi ki shayad sanskar k is act pichhe wajah kuch aur hai…abhi wo yeh sab sochne ki halat me nahi hai……uske emotions, confusions,friendship, trust sab kuch daaw pe lagaya hai apke is twist ne jise aap kai baar filmy keh chuki hai………..sab ki najoron me sanskar ke liye hajaro sawal……..mukesh kaise face karega swasan ko iske aage…….
        new beginning for us and new challenge for u……..next update ka intjar rahega……

    • Vini

      Joya,my dear,u had said once that is our ff,yes it is ,not mine,ours n must say yours in all sense,cos,these questions many would be having but Swara’s situation that u pointed out,a big hug to u,for realising that area,rest of the points also,yes my dear,these r exactly the questions in my mind,actually wanted to write this episode after finding perfect answers to these questions but day b4 yesterday ,had told, I will post something yesterday, this I started at 8pm,simply wrote n completed by 9 pm,just for posting an episode,now,next one as soon as I get answers to these queries in my mind,not perfect but at least 25% convincing to me,I will post next one.

  7. vinita

    Superb di!!!! Did not expect this twist. Amazing!!!!!???
    Exams over!!!!!!!!!!!
    Meri pagli beheno kaha chali gayi?????
    Missing u all?

    • Vini

      Exam was there?last week u had one, no?hope it was easy,I’m not satisfied with this episode n twist but literally empty this brain is now, so thot to proceed with the one line planned n this was the track..

  8. Niti

    hmm..vini Di…this was the twist…actually..hmm…vo…umm..samaj nahi a raha what am i feeling right now…ya the story has changed from realistic to predictive..hmm what to comment now…lets start..

    when i read first line..the day before swara’s wedding..meri to jaise sanse ruk gayi…kai app swara ki shadhi karane ka twist to nahi lane vale..asa soch k…uff..

    uske bad the best part was sanky’s self talk about swara…ahh..when he said last day to hide ur feeling…jis tarah usne my love…meri swara..ye words use kiye…haye rabba kitna pyara laga…vo full scene awesome tha…swasan conversation was too cute…swara ka kehna all set except my heart..dil hai ki manta nahi…hmm too touchy..

    at last makesh promises made swasan together…yup it would be lie if i would say i like the way mukesh make sanky ready for marriage…sanky was right he can make swara understand by telling her truth n protect her from marriage…it would hv been much more realistic…i don’t want to talk much about that scene..

    Ohh god…sanky forcefully married to Shona…it hurts lil bit…but i am super duper happyyyyyyyyy that swasan got married….swara faint in sanky’s arm…while imagining that scene..i wish i could hv at place of swara..(only for fainting in his arm scene)..ha ha just kidding..

    Di till now i like ur twist…but swara sanskar ko last 12 years se janti hai….uski best friend hai..moreover sabse imp usse pyar karti hai…ab agar vo sanky pe trust nahi karegi then it would not be portrayed good…she has to has trust her best friend n her love…that there must be some reason behind his act…other wise it will again create situation of killing trust of relation…even in predictive ff also trust should be there in relationship….i know app ne ye sab socha hi hoga…par fir bhi dil ne Jo socha vo likh diya…

    Di..Kan pakad k sit up kar k..sorry bolti hu…i am soooooooooo sorry if i hurt u with my this comment…n no matter what kind of twist j insert in your story…for me you have already proved that..

    you were awesome mindblowing superb amazing writer..you are…n you will be forever…

    • Vini

      Oh thank u dear,even if my reply is short,don’t think m not understanding your comments,ok,if I had got Swara married then readers would have kicked me,actually my heart wanted to take it that way n prove that years won’t matter,then,I felt it wud be too much ,then ,yes, that wud have been realistic but trying to show how a father who is already living in stress including guilty conscience for his past n work wud think about his daughter’s life, just thot he wud rely on Sanky who he likes a lot ,who he wished if his daughter married to,who he loves as his own son, at the last minute,the only way he found right was this,it is not right,though,well,this is wat I tried yo show from Mukesh’s angle,u fainting in Sanskaar’s arms,dono how many readers will love u for that?,yea,dear,last two days,even I was thinking abt that, that trust ,how to pull that portion convincingly, still,not sure,may disappoint u totally but m going to proceed with the one line,scenes, hope something will come with the flow,no dear,I didn’t hurt me with the comment, it is the same thot many wud be feeling,so no probs,but wen u all say that m a writer,I feel ashamed ya,seriously…but whatever I have scribbled is just for u all…

      • Niti

        thank u Di for understanding my pov…ya i know mukesh did all to save his daughter by merry her with worlds best person…n sanky has done forced marriages without considering his image on swara…the mahanness of our sweet hearted boy…

        Di u might already know about my thoughts n my liking by reading my comments…till now I m loving your story very much…but just one fear about that trust issue…but no worry Di i will be there for you till last…bz my vini di is the best…

        plzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzz Di…. you have already proved that you are awesome writer…ab apke man ne na manne se ku6 fark nahi padta…to plz ab se app apna dialog bilkul repeat nahi karegi….u r just incredible…ajj bhi sanky ka jo starting ka scene tha itna beautifully written tha…just loved it..

    • Vini

      Yes dear,trust is a big thing,it is tough to break that, but sometimes people will be forced to think with brain than heart,let’s c,how Swara will handle,of course ,I know u dear,I know u will be there,so no probs.Then last sentence,ok,??happy…

  9. Shraddha

    Hello my dear let me 1st start as a reader honestly speaking I knew they were going to unite n mukeshs promise had a key role in it but never expected smthing like this!!! This I really a twist n twist n turns are great to look forward to!!! I never imagined that he will be marrying swara like this???? kya masala add kiya yaar apne back with a spicy bang I must say!!? too much curiousity since I never expected it to happen this way as in sanky being portrayed was a shock for me really n see smthing new is always fascinating so I’m very curious to see how things turn up hence forth n what for are u apologising??? ssly ? few ppl no uff!!! Aadat nahi jati dekho unki???? kya didi aap bhi? OK so this was from readers POV now comes ur Dost cum sissy hahaha wait for it ha

    • Shraddha

      So to begin with
      Dostoooo arey dekho toh apne SwaSan ki shadi hogayi!!? kin halatoh me hui Jane dete hai lekin hogayii yesss They are meant to be together!!?
      Episode starting Oh des two swara n sanskaar have taken pledge I guess like see I’m better actor than u ? so much they hide n baat toh aise karte hai like kuch hai he nahi….. But deep down in eyes they convey everything God such deep love?
      U know true friendship for so many years is bound to turn into family !!! Sumi calling them early for preps shows their bonding☺ n sanskaar s dialogues? feels so bad so much pain every dialogue of his u have written so well didi mann gaye apko sach me? Swara gifting him…. He remembering her coming home with it …. Slowly removing gift n den his words?? didi all touched me alot…. His words were beautifully penned down ssly…. Swara ur choice is great but not ur first love? sanky dear I say that’s the best choice that she made!!!!!
      Oh God he made a pendent out of that keychain oh sankyy? sanskaar is swaras but swara can’t be Sanskaar’s ? n dats his loss wat a dialogue these few lines of his I read again n again I liked it sooooo much n lastly the way wen he said

      For your swara! Den correcting himself n dat gap btm akshay Wah?
      Aksh….ay’s swara
      Conveying emotions is smthing which do fantastically!!!
      Both are in pain yet they try not to show it!!!!” So all set bride”….. All set? Yes except Heart! ?? kya dialogue hai ssly n sanky feeling like sword piercing him ?
      D mukeshs call n Sanskaar seas raging waves draw his attention momentarily tough yet it has a significance !!!! Den mukeshs confession well his not exactly wrong also inhis state but definitely selfish yet poor fellow 1st of all I’ll n helpless father wants his child to be insafe hands ….
      Den Sanky s reactions n him asking swara if she trusts him n asks her to come I liked her reply u know even tough he means the world to her yet she is mature n responsible enough n does not jsut blindly take decision in Love! The way she resisted his grip yet followed him ah no words to say! Didi I’m happy very much! Because there comes a new track !!!
      But only thing that bothers me is this mukesh uncle? why can’t he explain swara wat he explianed Sanskaar !!! Why make him take the blame OK fine may be for the world but swara why swara? Why can’t he tell her? May be he’s scared to lose his daughter? But now poor sanky swara “uski hokar bhi na hosaki” thank God it’s a holiday tomo n I’m punctual this time??heheheh BTW Happy Republic Day friends!!

    • Vini

      Shraddha dear,I wish to know,in wat way did u imagine they would get united,I wish to know what this story had hinted n that is y m asking this,haha,masala,most probably ,m going to get fried in that masala,cos in one line Sanky character change was planned,but wat all rubbish I will write, not sure,that is y I apologised, wasting ur valuable time,yea,yea,habits don’t change,haha,but dear seriously, if I was a reader ,Im not sure what I would have felt,then ,dost cum sis,let me read that too,let us celebrate,Swasan marriage,send a chocolate box to B’lore ,ok,yes,that is it,words are not always necessary, they can pretend but heart to heart connection,then analysis n portion u liked,perfect analysis,the portion u told u read again,let me read n see,sea has had relevance in this story so far,notices it today @lso,thank u,Mukesh has that inferiority complex too,that step father,losing Swara’s love which he got after years etc..brain stops working during the conflict of emotions.,dono know bt in this track yes, I tried to take it that way,rest of the lines,yes it is conveyed,happy,Mukesh is shocked, confused n immature to deal with it,in short ,that is what I concluded while typing today,his mistake is gonna affect Swasan,how,let us see…

  10. joya

    hey guys,,,,,
    humne na aap sab k liye kuch likha hai……
    dnt hit me ha…….

    swasan pe fan fiction vini di ne likha..
    andaj-e-ishq naya hum sab ne sikha..
    phool tarifon k vini di k liye khilne lage….
    comment column me yaha naye rishte banane lage……

    yaha thi shraddha,Singer aur guitarist…..
    story thi jinki woh vini di violinist…………..
    humri CA niti ka talent jab samne aaya,
    kalakaron ka hai yeh mela.,yeh joya ko samaj aaya….
    Rabindrasangit ki vinita nahi thi kisi se kam..
    in sab k kala k yaha kadardan hai hum…..
    rups ki cute-cute baton k san hai deewane….
    sethooty ki language ko vini di k alawa koi aur na jane….
    telly update and vini di ko shukriya hai hum kehte,
    batao to sahi hum sab aur na jane kaha milte…….
    likh du aasman par silsila mulakaton ka yeh saara….
    janega fir jahan, anokha dostana yeh humara.. …………

    dis is for all of u guys……..

    • Shraddha

      Joyaaaaa????
      Awesome!!!!! Sach me yaar dil chioliya tumne aaj!!!
      Behaddd khoobsoorat likha hai!!! Wakai me bohot acha Matlab itna sweet cutely likha hai… Agar tum samne hoti na toh gale laga ke gaal kheech ke kehti Sheetal meri jaan ? kya kamal ka hunar hai tera!!! Itna ache se sabke bare me likha hai very glad about meeting u all guys !!!
      Well done jo brilliant u are!

      • Shraddha

        I donno if it will fit but I’m so touched with what u wrote this is for u

        ” Tumhare alfazone chu liya dil hamara..
        Bina dekhe ek dusre ko kaisa yeh rishta hamara
        Kehte hai sache rishton ko zaroorat nahi koi nishani ki
        Tumse baat karne ke baad yeh baat hai
        humne janii
        Joya tumhara andaaz hai bada he pyaara
        Tumhari alfazon ne chu kiya dil hamara”

      • Vini

        Shraddha,forgive my ignorance, u wrote the following lines,then a big hug to u too..seriously,u guys arr ulti talented yaar…

    • Niti

      muuuuuuuhhhhhhaaaaaa….!!!! mindblowing…incredible dear…

      wowwww..meri joya rani…tu likhati hai kavita badi suhani..dil ho jata hai pani pani…ban jati hu me tumhari kavita ki diwani..

      Ohhye hello…galti se bhi ye mat sochna ki main tumhari itni tarif isss liye kar rahi hu kyuki tumne humare bare me likha hai…ye galtfamy bilkul hi mat palna…me tumhari tarif is liye kar rahi hu bzzz tum sach me iski hakdaar ho…kya mast likhati ho yar…tusi to cha gaye…dil chura gaye..loved it…

      tu likhati hai bada pyara…..
      tumhara har eke labs hota hai emotions se bhara….
      kar jata hai humare man me dera..
      bhale hi hum kitna bhi ban jaye modern modern…
      but tera likhne ka andaz bana deta hai mere dil ko garden garden…
      bas isse jyada likha nahi jayega….
      tum logo ka dimag khaya nahi jayega…
      and chappl-tamatar ka maar saha nahi jayega..
      so abhi app se alvida lete hai…
      kal ahi ake vapas milte hai..

      bubye…gn..sd

      • Vini

        Niti,u too,my goodness, wat competition yaar,one big bear hug to u ,then yes, me too not praising you all simply,u guys are amazing,can’t wait to read Mickey’s reaction to all this,I think I will have to save many screen shots now, had saved the recipe list given by Mickey n Vinita before though m yet to try it, (Mickey,Vinita ,I will,for sure).Niti, at the start seriously didn’t imagine that u r so naughty but I like it a lot…

    • Vini

      Joya,my dear,u know what I did just now,I saved a screen shot of these lines of yours,it is truly gonna be one which I would read multiple lines,since this is too good,m not saying anything regarding what u wrote abt me but about our army,perfect,perfect, perfect,u made me laugh,u made me feel,one big hug to you,also,loads of love to u dear…u should write,m ur self proclamimed fan No.1…

    • joya

      wah wah…..shraddha and niti…….kya baat hai….!!!!!!

      tum log bhi likhte ho……multi talented ha……….
      wah wah……….

      aur niti hum aisa bilkul bhi nahi sochte yr……humne jab bhi kuch likha hai tum sab ne hume saraha hai…….uske liye tum sab ka shukriya yarooo………

      bdw guys happu republicrepublic day…….

    • joya

      shraddha………..yr itni tarif k liye shukriya………………. hum to khush hai ki aap sab ko pasand aaya…….itne pyar k liye sach me Dhanyawaad.(thank u)……….

      niti,shraddha,vini di,rups……….
      i have no word guys………….duniya ki har khush sab ko mile…..

      niti and shraddha again chhupe rustam…….

      • Vini

        Happy republic day dear Joya,in fact,wishes to all of u,I was watching the tableau section of the parade in TV,u guys came to mind ,people from various states ,met thru this site,may not even see each other,still,we know a lil at least about each other,thank u guys..may all of u all stay happy n blessed.

    • sethooty

      Joya u r awesome.. Well done Dr..loved ur poem ..I can’t stop laughing wen i read that lines about me..lol..lol..
      If someone go through these lines..they will surely get an idea ,about u all guy’s ,how much talented they are…
      Lots of love Dr…I am very lucky to meet u guy’s from different places.

    • Vini

      Oh,glad that it made u happy, equally happy to see u here, daily,hope u will keep reading, thank u for the comment dear.

  11. needhi

    Di superv twist .to be honest i really like sanky in grey shaded character as in saba’s fiction but the way u potrayed sankys character is epic. I really have developed a soft corner for this character and the credit goes to u.u just nailed it down.i really love the way u carry every characters emotion without messing them up.for me ,this ff was not about the story rather it was about characters which u neatly sketched in my mind with your words ,so whatever twist u introduce ,it doesnot matter,i will always be there.it may happen due to boards i may not follow the ff regularly , but ya i will surely read each and every episode ,whenever i get time. .Physics ,chemistry and maths screw me up and gives me tons of pressure and stress but your ff really helps in releasing the tension , so big thank u from my side.keep rocking like this and ya dont say sorry because the twist is really unexpected and its awesome too.love u di.u r truly amazing.thank u for replying because no ff writer except u replies individually.

    • Vini

      Thank u for the comment dear,it means a lot,also, happy to know that u could feel the emotions of all characters, was just a humble attempt,oh dear,thank u,honestly,m humbled n honoured,I think I have seen Kashis n Saba replying to individual comments,also a few other ffs,not sure cos m not getting time to read nowadays,then,all the best for your exams dear,yea.it is stressful,can understand, even if u don’t read ff in between also,no problem,these words ,that,u will,means a lot,m yet to read comments under previous two ff episodes, then thank u being there, and if my ff (won’t be a feel good one) increases ur stress, totally ignore this ok,u can read later…n if u don’t mind,u r from which place?

      • needhi

        Di ,i am from Uttar Pradesh.i am living in Lucknow (Uttar Pradesh’s capital).i dont about kashish but ya i have commeted on sabas ff and she said a combined thank u to everyone.i can understand her as she is writing three stories simultaneously , so she is super busy and is not able to reply individually and above all she too has a life beyond these ffs.

    • Vini

      Ok dear,so glad to know abt u,ok,I thot Saba was writing 2 ffs,she us writing 3,great,hats off to her,can’t manage one here,haha,writer she is,lots of respect.then study well dear,keep in touch wen u r free.

  12. sindhuja

    i never thought he would made the key chain into a locket… that’s great… don’t worry, dear…. it’s just awesome… as the people say, no one can predict what’s next in your ff… i thought mukesh will use that promise… but, it’s too fast yaar…

    • Vini

      Thank u dear for being there,wen did u post ur ff last? I had checked in between,that key chain,simply included here,but I was thinking that it is predictable,yes dear,I know it is too early,but m too lazy to imagine something else…that is the reason dear…

  13. snehal

    Superb. I m very happy. I always check Google just for this ff. I just loved. Finally swasan married. Muah. No words for my happiness

  14. OMG?joyaaaa diiiiii yaarrrrr kitne acche lkhte ho yaarrrrrr…wah uspe mera nm v thi??wahh….

    Vinita tujhe nhi pta hum kaha chali gayi???chal bata deti hu?

    Here we go 1,2,3…..
    ”Tere liye duniya chod d h,
    Tujh pe he saans aake ruke
    Hum tujhko kitna miss kartu hu
    Yeh tu kbhi soch na sake”?????

    • Niti

      you too…kya likha rups..wow..

      btw jaise us din sab naughty bate kar ne par aa gaye the..vaise ajj sab poet n shayar ban rahe hai…whhh vahh..sab namoone eke jaise hai..

  15. vaishnavi

    Aweee….its awesome ….superbb twist …..seriously no one can expect dis …..u r not writter dear u r fabulous writter …..if u will write a book like dis na den it will bcom dat popular ki…. wat to say….excellent twist ….arey yaar thariff karne ke liye shabd hi nahi mil rahe he….par fir bhi samjoh ki mujhe toh bahut achi lagi….

    • Vini

      Thank u for the comment dear,m happy to know that u liked it but m not a writer,this is just an attempt for u guys,I didn’t like the twist,though I wrote it.But I value your comment a lot,then,if u don’t mind,where are u from?n which course are u studying?

  16. Swara.sss

    Thanks diii…At last swasan marriage. ….how when I read swara’s marriage I think this is my end….diii ini kuzhappamila eniku samadhanamyi poyi exam ezhutam …e ffinu vendi njan kathu irikukaya ayirunnu. ..so happy 4 swasan. . And di adyamayitta kadha vayichu najn karayunathu last 3 episode um njan karanju….

    • Vini

      Hello dear,thanks for the comment,then ,u r from Kerala,ok,ee kadha vayichu karanjo,@ctually,ezhuthiyathu conveyed aayi ennarinjathil santhosham,Pinne, all the best for ur exam,ethu course aanu padikkunnathu? and Keralathil evideya?reveal only if u don’t mind.

      • Varsha sss

        I am frm trivandrum. ..and course bsc computer science. …and chechi evideya..I think not trivandrum. ..isn’t. ….chechi oru karyam ariyooo najn first season vayichapol chechi keralthil ninnu annennu vijarichthe illa…but I am so proud to say we both are frm kerala………
        Chechi writer alla enu ariyam pakshe enganya chechi enne ingane karayipichachu….njan athra sensitive alla enitum….hooo a 3 divasam eniku orkane vayya….ente chetan enne ethra kaliyakiyenno
        Thnks diii

    • Vini

      Ok dear,thank u for introducing itself,Peru Varsha ennano?Trivandrum,alle,ok,njan Fort Kochiyil ninnaanu,ippo Bangalore,oh,athrakku athu feel cheyyum ennu orthilla,pettennu type cheythu post cheyyunnathanu,it got conveyed to some extent ennu ningalde commentsnnu thonnunnu..thank u for this feed bk dear,then yea,under first ff. I had not given my details till 30th episode or something,then,somebody asked if m studying n where m from n then I responded,Veena was the name under which I wrote that,not saying pen name cos m not worth it,Veena was a dear friend’s name…so take care dear,keep in touch.All the best for ur studies.

  17. swas

    really spr….the way u r going through the story is awesome….swasan marriage is Spr…but dont create any misunderstanding btw them…..

    • Vini

      Thanks for the comment dear,I wish I could write a good story,this ,I don’t like though m writing it,then, misunderstanding should be there to carry this forward,but to what extent, have to plan it..I value your comment yaar,but sorry if the track disappoint u.

  18. bhagi

    hey vinni its a nice twist i am really happy for their marriage bt the way its so disturbing yar am sry to say bt am bit dissapointed actually i am fearing that all this may effect their friendship nd their bonding which is the best thing in ur f.f bt i hope u dnt drag this track tooooo much plzzzzz yar its a request actually i cant imagine swara’s hatred towards sanky her love for 12 years so plzzzz

    • Vini

      Hei yaar ,thanks for the comment,I understood what u meant, but while writing,lots of limitations are there in pulling the story forward, may be cos m not a writer, I know it s quite boring,but if it is all zz well,then,ff will end in max 10 episodes,I had tried to keep it closer to life,but now brain is literally empty,I understand swasan fans will be hurt wen they see swasan fighting.Let’s see.

  19. nandini

    u r awsm vini… Was eagerly waiting fr ur update… And yes u r vry unpnctual… U should nt let ur frnds wait tis much… BTW plz brng out sanskar’s truth as early as possible… Can’t see swasan seperate

    • Vini

      Thank u dear,yea,I know ,swasan fans can’t tolerate swasan separation n misunderstanding, but hope u all will understand my limitations, trying to add less masala as possible,let us see,if u don’t mind,where are u from n wat r u doing?

    • Vini

      Thanks dear,hope u liked it, then I will repeat the question. Where are u frm n wat r u doing,reveal only if u don mind,next part,have to plan,after posting it,I will put a comment underneath .

      • Hey!! Actually im frm chandrapur, maharashtra. N what am I doing?? U will be shocked bt im in std 8…
        Im sry I didnt ans ur ques b4 actually I didn’t see ur reply in previous epi. Again sry!!!

    • Vini

      No probs dear,just now only I saw,good to hear from u little girl,u r little girl for us…don’t know if u liked the way I addressed u.

  20. priyanshi

    u r amazing yaar nd i agree that the story is a bit predictable but like this twist you can bring another one. ..you are an awesome writer

    • Vini

      Haha dear,liked ur frankness,not a lil,a lot predictable,, I know,another one ,haven’t planned,since we see a lot in real swaragini ,trying to keep it as simple as possible.. Ah,don’t know,let’s c,thank u for the comment.

  21. sethooty

    Vini Dr am very happy yaar..if any misunderstandings happens between dem..I don’t mind haha bz..kuch pane ke liyae thoda thoo dard sahna padegaa naa..after all this sanky hurt my swara , so he deserve some punishment na? Hahaha ( ys i knw he loves her deeply )

    Happy republic day guy’s. .

    • sethooty

      Actually I don’t want to end this Ff very early if swasan unite den story will end ..we will surely miss their romance..these are only my predictions or things comes into mind , not any demand that I want in Ff..
      .I like everything u write its suits the story and track..
      Yaar waiting for next update. sabar ka phal thooo meets hota hai…

    • Vini

      Haha,thanks dear,but don know if it be worth the wait,bt thanks dear,glad to know that u a few will tolerate misunderstanding track also,happy republic day to u too,thank u very much for this support dear,actually,even m not sure when,where n how this story will end,some times it may be abrupt,let us see..

  22. Aashi

    Vini Di it was really unpredictable…. That locket scene cute one!!!!!!?????☺☺….loved it….I didn’t even imagine.. Did could happen…..but how will swara and her family accept sanky…..???…really exited for next part… I was silent reader but uhh broked my silence…. Ur a great writer….awesome???????❤?…hats off for uhh…

    • Vini

      Oh,so happy to know that u were reading,I have seen your name,under whose ff I don’t remember,now,that wat m thinking,how to proceed exactly,m not a writer dear,just a humble attempt for u all,sorry if if the track disappoints u totally.

  23. Niti

    Ohh thank you thank you vini Di and everyone…

    i want to thank ny mamma .pappa…my sis..god for this….but truly speaking from bottom of my heart that the who have right to take credit for this are my sweet vini di’s ff family…who gave me inspiration to show real niyati…me tahe dil se app sab ka shukriya karna chahti hu…

    ha ha ha…how was my speech(its 4 giving me complement of being naughty) ….??

    ya Di i can mixed with any one but my talking will be limited n formal untill muje samne vale person se appna pan nahi milta…jab muje lagata hai ki jisse me bat karti hu vo meri thodi si mature n baki jyada pagalo vali bate dil khol k sunega..then only i can show the real me…muje sabse pehle vo apna pan app se mila vini Di…fir joya..shraddha..vinita..rups..sethooty se mila…so i am very thankful to you guys for giving me this much of apna pan..btw fayad to app logo ka hi hua na you guys got chance to meet the real Niyati…ha ha kaha tha na jyada Der serious nahi reh sakti…

    thank u sethooty for not hitting me with tomatoes n chappals..n liking it…joya said it correctly i can’t understand what you write in your comment..now a days you r writing more in English so i can understand half of your comment…so my suggestion is that you start posting 2 comments 1 for vini Di in your language…2nd for us in English..plzzzzzz

    joya..tumne humari tarif kark Hume dhnya dhanya kar diya…aree pagli ye to bas shuruat hai..humare abhi kayi shade hai Jo bahar ane baki hai..ha ha just kidding vo to ase hi likh diya yar tera likha padhke..

    hii vinita…finally exam over ha…how was it ? i am also missing you all…

    wowwww..shraddha kya likha hai tumne..tusi bhi cha gaye yar..loved it..

    hii rups…how r u ??

    happy republic day to all…jay hind..vande matram..Bharat mata ki jai..

    • Vini

      My dear,thanks giving speech brought tears,haha,as I commented above,Happy republic day dear,every year I make sure that I watch republic day parade on TV,a patriotic song always brings tears in my eyes,so u can imagine when I watch the tableau representing various states,howbI would be,and all my dearbl ones knows that I will cry,so proud to belong to this land,in fact,human beings and their emotions are the same everywhere ,no?wen I met u all thru this platform,I understood, people with same vibes exist everywhere, we are lucky that we all met thru telly site,now when Gujarat,Karnataka,Kerala,Bengal,Assam,Maharashtra comes to mind,there will be some one to remember,some one who we don’t have any idea about their appearance ,still,some memories are sure to last,waiting for your various shades ,glad that u felt that freedom to be real u,keep in touch dear..

      • Niti

        me too vini Di….i used to visit CLG for dhwaj-vandan..muje bahut achcha lagata hai..jab national anthem bajata everything i got goose bamps..n a happy tear in my eyes..at the time of school days i used participat in drama..dance..singing..n till 10 i hv given speech on this day infornt of whole school..

        you pointed out correctly…now i hv someone to remember whenever i will heard state names…i hv already gone through that you know yesterday only my offc sir told us that he is going kolkata for some Audit work…after meeting got completed..the first thought come in my mind that vinita is there in west Bengal…it will happen for u all..we all r far from each other unknow about each others appearance..but we all r sharing very beautiful bonding with each other…its true that we all r first India…after that only we r gujaraties..marathi..panjabi..Bengali..etc etc..

        i used to think ki kya gujarat k alava other states me rehne vale log Jo gujarati nahi hai vo humare jaise hi honge..?? everytime i used to give myself answer in yes only..but was not having any proof..now i hv proven me absolutely correct…see I..you..joya..rups..vinita..shraddha..sethooty..we all are almost sharing same nature..we r very comfortable with each other…bz we all r Indian only…

      • Vini

        Yes dear,same feelings here when I see flag hoisting n hear patriotic songs and I used to struggle to hide my tears,singing dancing drama speech wah…u r a very talented girl, I understood that ,now wen I read Calcutta Vinita came to my mind as well,yes dear,absolutely, how easily n unknowingly all got gelled,I think despite different nation ,creed,caste n all,human beings are the same everywhere.

    • sethooty

      Niti.. sure dr will comment only in English for u guy’s and for sometimes only for vini in my language..
      Actually after reading ur comment ,den only I came to know about joya’s lines,scrolled bak read joya’s poem..awesome lines..loved it

  24. Vini .. No need to say thanks .. In fact thank u for writig the ff and make us read such interesting ffs.. Waiting for ur next update

    • Vini

      Ok dear,by the way,if u don’t mind,where are u from n what are u doing?reveal only i f u don’t mind,ff was just an attempt ,this second one only for the reader friends who commented under last episode of my first ff.next one,have to type dear .

  25. sree

    Nice….update dear…..awesome twist….finally swasan together….i am having my exms….but still waiting for ur next update….

    • Vini

      Oh,thank u dear,study well,next update will be in the evening or tomorrow morning,have to plan it, glad that u liked it.Which course n where are u from..?

  26. vaishnavi

    Ohhoo vinni di di mai bilkul bhi bura nahi manungi apki preshn se ki ham kaha se hai …kyu ki ek na ek time pe maine bhi aapse yahi prashn puchi thi season 1 me yaad he kya…any ways I am frm hyderabad…nd I am student studying in inter 2nd year I mean 12th class

    • Vini

      Ok dear,I remember ur name n emblem but question u had asked,ah?it was under 30th episode or so,shall check it,ok dear,all the best for your studies..so.feeling like another one s getting added to our small army.Keep in touch dear,and,all the best for your studies.

  27. vaishnavi

    Now vini di of u don’t mind will u read 29 th episode par meri comment its at last its not dat imp but I want u to read it…

    • sethooty

      Hey vaishnavi nice name yaar..read ur comment on previous episode, happy to know that u want to join with us..welcome Dr..actually i rarely put comments on d chat..these guy’s mickey, joya ,shradha, niti, vinitha, vini are active members..
      Well am from kochi Kerala, working here in IT firm

  28. M fine niti…

    Di aaap v naa?..yes aaj jldi uthgi…par avi tk ek kam krna bki h?..n wo me bilkul nhi bataongi….??…chalooo bata hi dti hu…pta h yaha pe bht cold h…nahane ka mn hee nhi h???..parkya karu??…mumma gli de rhi h…soooo

    O ya n thodi c hair ki care kr rhi hu,u knw na????…

    Niti pta h me v 2mhre jaisa hu thodi thodi
    ..me v sbko apna real fce nhi dkhati jb tak mujhe yeh na lge ki wo mere jaisa he pgl h

    Shraddha beti kaha ho

    • Vini

      Haha,Mickey, I guessed it right,wen I read first line itself ,understood u r going to say u haven’t taken bath,bt no probs,holiday,cold,baba can’t be blamed,ha,hair,yea,yea,remember, abt hair cut u had mentioned,no?

  29. vaishnavi

    Toh rupsikha dii I am allowed to jion ur army…waise mai aapko didi bulasakthi hu kya kyu ki mujeh lagtah hai ki aap mujse badi hai

  30. Hooo niti mujhe shayari nhi aati yaarr..2m,joya di,shrddha kitne acche lkhete ho na…vry nice ha:)mujhe poem lkhna v nhi aati…bt ha kvi kvi stry lkh deti hu?

  31. meghs

    awsome.. nice twist.. mukesh united swasan… but i dont want swara to hate sanskar.. everyone misunderstood sanskar but not swara pls yar… swara cried alot for not getting her love now pls unite them..

    • Vini

      Thank u for the comment,glad that u liked it,but let’s c dear,some misunderstanding is required, sorry if I will disappoint u totally,bt they will be united dear.

  32. Kriya

    hii vini Di….i hv first time commented on ur epistles 28..last few days i was bit bezy..today when i got chance to read ff.i have first read your last n this epi..epi 29 was also very very heart touching.poor sanky can’t express his love. today epi..bought mixed feeling in my heart. feeling of happiness that our swasan is together.but the way they get together was very painful.awesome twist.i like it very much.plz vini Di as a reader i want to request you plz don’t make swara to misunderstand sanskar.after all its all about 12 years friendship n love.waiting for your next epi.plz update soon.i just loved it

    • Vini

      Hi dear,Mickey (Rupsikha) had mentioned above to read ur comment under 28th episode,just nw I read that,welcome dear to our army,then in that second msg there u had mentioned in two lines the essence I of this ff..thank u dear,glad to know that u got connected with it,and also very happy to read your comments,if u don mind,pls do mention,from where u r n wat u r doing…

  33. Kriya

    thank you so much rupshikha,joya,shraddha,Niti. you all have given positive response to me.i am glad if i will be able to part of your group.

    Ohh god..joya.Niti.shraddha.rupshikha.vinita you all are very naughty.sachi muchi k dramebazz. when i read all your comments i was laughing like hell..ha ha.ha..my mom asked me twice.if i m ok or not. i tried to give ranking to all on ur naughtyNess but then i given up bz ranking can’t possible. u all r hell naughty. vini di pointed it correctly agar app 5 mil jao eke jagah pe to pata nahi kya hoga..

    ha ha. Niti you want to faint in sanskar’s arm..
    joya apne kya khubsurat likha hai.sach me padhke maze a gaya.shraddha,Niti,rupshikha you also tried very well.ap sab k comment padhk sach me bada maza ata hai.

    happy republic day to all

  34. Niti

    hiii vaishnavi….i also went n read your comment on last epi..dear ye bhi koi puchneki bat hai..each n every person r welcomed in our vini Di’ small army..m i right girls..??! to tumhara vini Di ki is ff pathshala me swagat hai..all the best for your studies dear..

    sach me we all r sharing very beautiful bonding..just every one mast raho bindast raho khush raho..sab ko pareshn karte raho..apna n apni family ka nam roshn karte raho..n the most important thing dhyan se sunna….muje yad karte raho….bubye

    • Vini

      U na Niti,impossible,yaar,I had expected this madness in Mickey n Shraddha,Joya ,Vinita n Sethooty,I thought will be a lil calm ,u I thot will be even more more silent ,but now u guys,all r equally violent n mad ,haha but m enjoying ur masti…

  35. Nitiiii myyyy naughty cuteee c beeeeheeeennnaaaa????? sach me yr tujhe bht misss kya 2mhre baate sun kr???my cuteee nitu??

    N ya niti u r ryt…hmre grp me sb aa skti h yaarr…wlcme vaishnavi..

    Hei Kriya 1nce again wlcm yrrrr??…oh toh 2m bg thi ryt…tabhi me sochu pata nhi Yeh Kriya kaha gayab ho gayi…m sooo hppyy 2 c u dr???…

  36. vinita

    happy republic day !! vande mataram!!
    meri pagli joya di!!
    aap ho bari suhani aur pyaari
    aapki kavita par kar
    shabd ki kami cha gaya mere dimaag par
    aap likhte ho lajawab
    jisko parke sab bolte hai wah bhai !kya baat baat
    isko parkar koi mat khichna mera kaan

    sach mai joya di aap ne dil chu liya
    mai shayaar to nehi magar joya di jabse yeh para
    shaayari aa gayi

    pls koi chappal mat marna !!
    niti di and shraddha di u were superb!!

    • Vini

      Ah,now u too,u guys ,all pen down something, and it is superb ya,hug to u too,and republic day wishes also..ur guys r funny n I enjoy reading ur chats…

  37. Sneha garewal

    Nice twist vini..it they happily married then may be there is no more story..hope raglak have trust on himand because of this hus family not suffer and last one swaras father is genuine concern for swara and he is not a like tv serials type who change face

  38. Sneha garewal

    One more thing pls don’t create too much understanding b/w swasan..and also ragluk have trust on sanskaar plssss

    • Vini

      U have understood the crux n I think my situation too,daily soap writers can add twists n turns to any extent, since m not reading other ffs,dont know how those r proceeding,may be guys r extremely talented n so they might not be having an issue ,I think ,but my case,Im too lazy to add twists ,this one also,I am not satisfied.Thanks to u guys for supporting this ff,still.

  39. vaishnavi

    Thank u soo much diis for welcoming me into ur srry now I think I can tell ours pagal family r8??…tum sab log sach much pagal ho …tum sab longonki baate yaar sach much ithi hasi deti he mai stress free hojathi hu….vaise vinni di sach kehethi hai tum log multi talented ho….I think I am only small when compared to u all r8 bcoz I am 12th only…

    • Vini

      Haha,now u can start,ur diis have welcomed u,good to hear from u dear, tc,keep in touch..Vaishu is nice…

  40. Vini

    Guys,I am very sorry,I will be posting next one tomorrow only,I wanted to write it today but a lil busy,I will think peacefully tomorrow n type it,.once again,sorry,good or bad the episode will be,I know this waiting is tough for the readers..see u tomorrow dears..

  41. Vini

    And, correct me if m wrong,Mickey(Rupsikha) from Assam,Joya (Sheetal ) from Pune,Shraddha from Karnataka,Vinita from Bengal,Niti from Gujarat,Sethooty from Kerala,Needhi from Uttar Pradesh, Vaishnavi from Hyderabad, and Kriya from??,hope the list is complete,have I left out any??I think now I must buy a protective apron n helmet for myself.Don’t know from which all directions I am gonna get,u guys are so innocent na,don’t even know the meaning of the word Nautanki…but m so happy to see ur bond guys,most of the times I am an observer but m enjoying it..loads of love to u all…☺?

  42. Yes di maine hair cut k baare me kaha tha?…n di koi baat nhi yrrr …ab jb free rhogi tbhi updte krna thk h na…jyada strss mt lena my cute jiji..?☺??…n i knw my vini di vry well…chahe jo v ho meri vini jo v lkhte h jaisa v humesha accha hota h..?????..lvv uuu dii

    Dekho di dekho sb pgl ho rhi h yaha pe…sach me yaar VINITA ab tune v lkhna shuru kr di my god yrr????..nice ha…sbki baate sun kr pta h jor jor se smile kr rhi thi…mumma ne kaha”pgl ho gaya h kya?akle akle ho kya rha h”????

    SETHOOoooooooooTY my jaan,puchu ,Tddy bearr????? yaaarrrrrr dil khush kr diya rey …U knw me itna khush Q hui cz Meri ek frnd mujhe Tddy beat kh kr bulati h?????

    • Vini

      Haha,first para,lather,I likes it,u know something dear,I have three junior friends with whom.I share very good bond,and ur comments reminds me about one of them.I have given u her face,as though u both resemble each other…

  43. VAISHNU(vaishnavi) my lil sis awww u knw i lvvv uu??..pucho y???Q ki jb koi mujhe Di kehte h aisa lgta he ki ha yaar ab me sach me badi ho gayi hu…??…

    U knw ghr me sb kehti hi ki tu abhi chhoti h …bht chhoti …avi tak bada nhi hua h…toh me gusse se ekdom laal ho jti hu??????..n jab last year me 18 saal ki ho gayi toh nachne lgi…uski baat v phir se sb khti rhti h tu choti h…jaha v jau sb yehi khti h…arrreeeeeee yaaarrrr inlogo ko kon samjhaye ki abbb me baaddiii ho gayi hu …??????…par phir v Choti khe toh accha lgta h…hehe uske baad gift jo milte h pgli????????…

    Me 2mse i thnk 1saal bada hu…bt koi baat nhi Di kaho ya kuch aur mujhe accha lgega

    • Vini

      Oh 18 yrs,big girl ,so can’t call u Mickey baba,so Miss.Rupsikha NK,how do u feel right now meeting a few younger ones here?big girl ,it seems, u r our baby, here.

  44. U knw di u r ryt…waise thnx ha…nw mjhe pta chala kaun kha se h…bhool gayi thi..

    N di pta h me toh bht bht INNOCENT hu..???…mujhe kuch nhi pata..

    Di yeh”NAUTANKY”kya h?phli baar sun rhi hu…kuch khane ki chese h kya plz tl me na??

    • Vini

      Oh u r too innocent ,u don’t know that word,no?right guess,yea,it is a food item,specially consumed by people with the name Mickey, and u know ,the nutritional value is so high and the impact of the same is clearly visible in this section esp under the name…Rup…..

  45. vinita

    Hey bhagwan!!!!!!!!!
    Rupsikha tu muhjse Bari hai
    Mai tum sab se choti Hu … Yeh kya Ho Gaya??????
    When vaishnavi called me Vinita di I was on cloud nine. I am 17.?? ab tum bhi rupsikha di Ho gayi. I have to quote joya di ” uthale re baba koi uthale” from my dads side I am the eldest among my cousin’s par mujhe koi didi nehi bulata hai ? vini,vini bhaja,vinu aur bahut sare nasm hai….inn sab naam se bulate hai. From my mom’s side I am the eldest sis and I have two elder cousin bro. Even they don’t call me didi…? even my 5 Sal Ki bhanji calls me vinu aur phir woh once upon a time in Mumbai ka gaana gati hai it was something like pilu ….sochiye Zara!!!!!!!!!!!
    Mera khud bhai mujhe mota didi bolte kyunki my elder cousin bro taught them Ki gujrati mai elder bro ko nota bhai bolte hai so they can me mota didi didi but in Bengali mota means fat
    Hey bhsgwan iss bachi ka kya hoga?????? ????

    • Vini

      Oh u r in a terrible situation ,no one calls u di,poor girl, wat fate,na?just kidding ok,everything,especially,wat u wrote abt that 5 yr old ,so sweet,haha ,mota di,super.

  46. vaishnavi

    Ohh thank u vini ye batane ke liye ki sab kaha se hai ….koi mujeh yeh bhi batadho ki sabh kya pad rahe he??…..waise vini dii kriya is frn surat (gujarat) I read her comment….

    Setu di (setoothy) I am glad nd surprised to know dat u liked my name kyu ki yaha hyd me itne sare vaishnavis hai ki sab tang achuke hai iss naam pe …phir bhi I like my name kyu ki I am goddess (goddess name) all shld listen to me..actually I rule in my house saying dis line….

    Shikha di (rupshikha) I luv u too dear♥♥♥♥ab mujeh pucho kyu…kyun ki meri family me me hi badi hu sabse so I got irritated by seeing everyone calling me akka (dii)..but now I can call u all dii …here I am small…yeahhhhh….

    Vinitha di aap phikar mat karo aap cloud 9 par hi raho kyu ki I am not 17 I am sweet 16 years old …so u r also my dii…sryy di aapko bulane ke liye koi nick name nahi mili
    Waise aap log mujeh koi bhi naam de bula sakte ho kyu ki vaishnavi naam ke bahut nick names hai jyse vaishu, vaish, aishu many….ab me aap logon ko ek secret bata raha ho meri ek aur nick name he vo hai tony…hehehe…aap log haso mat ha…in me se aap koi bhi naam se pukar sakteh hai….

    • Vini

      Vaishnavi is a nice name,but I will call u Vaishu,haha,tony is ur nickname,my uncle’s name,it is, all Tony’s I know are boys,ah,I will write what I know,correct me if I am wrong,Rupsikha aka Mickey,B.A.English lit student from Assam,Niyati aka Niti,CA student from Gujarat,Sheetal aka Joya,network engg student from Pune, Shraddha,engg student from Karnataka,Sethulakshmi aka Sethooty,software developer from Kerala,Vinita,B.A.eng lit student from West Bengal,Kriya, b.com student from Surat,Gujarat,Vaishnavi aka Vaishu,plus one? Student from Hyderabad,Needhi.plus two student from U.P..

  47. Sree harini

    Hello didi..just read three episodes in one go and believe me they are just…just….no word suits. I don’t know why you always feel like your story is completely predictable when it is not. This twist was not expected di. Please never say like your fiction is not good. It hurts your fans…oops friends ( as you will kill me) . and I really appreciate your patience to reply each and every comment. Believe it or not but I regularly visit your fiction just to read the comments below. Though not commenting regularly, I always feel happy reading your comments and never missed any episode. Last but not least, hats off to shradda,joya,niti,rupiksha, seetothy ( sorry if I forget any) for typing such long comments which really shows your love towards veena di.. LOVE YOU ALL. ESPECIALLY DI..LOVE YOU SO MUCH. I got a stupid doubt now. Please don’t mind! Do you children di?

    • Vini

      Good to c u back,glad that u liked it,from this twist,story is going in which way,even ,I don’t know,good to that u corrected as friends,I reply at a stretch wen I get time,under season 2 except one or two episodes ,have tried to do it without fail,those left out also,I will do it ,lots of love to u too,kids,no dear,not yet.

  48. Omg vini di!! U made me laugh !!!
    Oh poor sanskar now he going get hatred from al!!!
    I thought Mukesh has accepted proposal due to some forced situation but did not except such danger background from him!!!!
    But I’m happy and really enjoyed this episode !!!! But really felt bad for our hero!!! And one dialogue”al set??? Yeah except my heart” perfect!!!! ???

    • Vini

      Actually,what made u laugh dear?good to c u here,then, yes dear,can’t proceed widot a lil drama and Sanskar is Mr.Perfect ,here have sketched him that way only,keep in touch dear.

  49. Vinitaaaa yaaarrr tu di mat bula mujhe???….bs aise nm lkr blna thk h na pgluuu

    Di whre r u??u knw me clg me hu….prctce ho rhi h Bihu dnce ki

  50. joya

    hi friends,
    itnq sannata q hai bhai yaha pe…..??????
    i can’t bear this type of Shaanti……………….

    thoda to humgama banta hai na………….

    new members r joining our Pagal family…..
    so masti bhi jyada honi chahiye…..
    so wake up……………..

    bdw ek raaj ki baat hai……hum whtp se jyada yeh paga chack karte hai………

    • Vini

      Oh,Joya dear is back,in one episode u had used the word polichu,from where u got it ,had asked u there ,I think u didn’t it there, how are u dear,me too ,more than fb and a lil less frequently than Whatsapp I check this site ..and don’t know where our ff will end,that time,I won’t be able to signal u all in advance as all will come to know,hope we will find some other ff by that time under which we can continue our chats..

  51. vaishnavi

    Hii diis….
    Kal joya di aur shradha di se meri mulakath nahi huyi…toh di mai hu vaishnavi ..naam toh suna hi hoga…..

    Waise kehna padega joya di aap shayaries bahut achi likthi ho…kal aapki tarah baaki log bhi shayari likhne lage par mujeh toh usme abcd bhi nahi aathi…par dhere dhere aapse kuch sekne ki koshish karungi

    Aur rupshikha di aap ko meri diya hua naam kaisa laga (shikha)???…aur ye bihu dance kya hai?? Acha baba toh aap bahut achi tarah se practice karna aake hame sikhana hai..

  52. Bht accha lga mera nm Vaishu…vaishu bihu Assam ki national fstvl h…yeh bht popular classicl n folk dnce h darling…waise me dnce nhi krugi…bas aisi hi frnz ki saath thodi msti kr rhi thi…dnt wrry dr hum 2mhe v sikha denge

    Joya di aaap toh khud gayab ho gayi thi na…n pta nhi yeh shraddha kha h yarr

    • joya

      hi guys……
      vaishnavi????????????
      yar kya bat hai….ha suna hai nam tumhara……abhi to tumne bataya…..bhool gayi??????
      thank you vaishnavi………….are dekho dil se kuch apno k liye likho na toh wahi shayri hai……….

      rups sorry gayab hone k liye……are wo mr.India wali watch hai na woh humne aur shraddha ne kharid li hai….humesha woh watch shraddha pehan leti hai…..kabhi kabhi hum bhi le lete hai gayab hone k liye………..hehehehehe……….

    • needhi

      Hi rupshikha di , i have seen it on t.v. its really nice and unique form of dance but i never got a chance to see it in real life. I hope that i will be able to see it in future as my fathers posting is nowadays in north east..

  53. Saumya

    Hi Vini!! You must be seeing me hee for the first time naa.. Well I came across your SwaSan Fan Fiction Season 1 yesterday only.. I usually read FFs on IF and FB. I manage a Swaragini page there. Everyone please like it. Swaragini-Colors. with 61K likes!! Godd I am promoting my page here also.. Pardon me for that.. So yeah, I read all parts of Season 1 yesterday. They were really good. And today I started reading Season 2. This was so.. ummm.. soo.. I am not getting the exact word. Understand my feelings! 😛 This is the first FF which actually made me cry! I got so addicted to this that I finished all 30 parts in one go!! Waiting for the next part!!

    • Vini

      Hi Saumya,yes ,first time,good to c u here, haha,not very active in fb,but shall like it next time wen I log in,oh,u read both,,season 1,was titled swasan fan fiction episode 1,..don’t know how you found it,glad to know that u liked it,just humble attempts,many told that my ff made them cry but may be cos m writing it ,m not feeling anything,haha..tc..

  54. Diiiiiiiiiiiiii yrrrrrrrrrrre?????????….aaap v na….??…waise ab pata sala ki ”nautanky”khane ki seez h????…hehehe…
    N bht accha lga ha aap sbse milkar…di aapko pta h log mere face ko dkh kr kya khti h???khti h kitni shant aur pyari bacchi h..n frnz khti h 2 itni bholi h yaarrr???….lkn baad me unko pta chla ki me kaisi hu????…evn jb koi tchr mjhe dkhte h khti h isshe dkho 2mlog…bht hi shnt h..???….agr aaap kvi v mjhe dkho gi na toh aaap v phle yehi khogi

    Joya di.Mr. INDIA WAali watch???hum ek hi ghr me rhte h aur aapne mjhe bataya v nhi ki kb khrda????so baddd?????….u knw me vini di se aapki aur shrddha ki baare me cmpln krugi ha….phir dkhna kya hoga????

    • Vini

      Hahaha,shant aur pyaari,later yes,you are ,but shan’t,my God, you are the one who made me talk in comments section, I mean broke the ice and brought that personal touch for the first time,Joya and Shraddha,very bad,why did u hide this from Mickey baba,look,baba is crying…haha,if Mickey gets that watch also,then,God….

  55. Hi neediii?….wow 2mne dkha bihu dnce t.v pe wahh….ok 2mhre papa ki pstng nrth est me wah

    N dnt wrry dr…kvi aana Assam me…?…1st Guwahati me aana ha n dn Jorhat Dist aana ha (my home twn)..hehehe…phir hum dono milkar bihu dnce dkhenge ok baby??….n ya one mre thng ,2m Jb v aaogi April mnth me aana thk h..

    • needhi

      Di ab to aana hi padega official invitation jo mil gya hai .aur mein april mein hi aaungi theek hai.bihu dance bhi dekhenge aur masti bhi karenge, par ek shart hai aap ko bhi Lucknow aana padega . Yahan ka kabaab aur biryani bahut famous hai , saath mein milkar khayenge .

  56. meghs

    hi vini di.. myself megha
    am from karnataka.. final bcom student.. my native is kerala.. kozhikode is place…
    di u also know malyalam na

    • Vini

      Hello dear,yes dear I know malayalam very well, after marriage only I moved to Bangalore, Kozhikode is very close to heart ,course n internship, 5 n half I lived there,medical college,did my BDS there,where is ur exact place at Calicut?I have friends there

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