Swasan fan fiction (Season 2 ) episode 29

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Hi guys,first of all,just now I went through the previous episode and I saw 67 comments,sorry in advance cos in case if I cant respond today,I will do it tomorrow for sure ,I am really happy to know that so many are reading this ff of mine,thank u very much for breaking your silence and letting me know that,hope you will keep reading…and this is not going to be a feel good ff ,ok,sorry for that too…this is not proof read..

Previous two episode links: (For both Swara and Sanskar’s characters’ perspective)

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-fan-fiction-season-2-episode-27/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-fan-fiction-season-2-episode-28/

Scene 1:Swara’s house

Sumi,Mukesh and Chetan comes to Swara’s room,Mukesh tells Swara, “just now,your mom told you have agreed for the marriage,you haven’t seen the guy,did she put pressure on you dear?,yea,we want you to marry him but if you don’t like,we wont force you,once I give my word,I cant take it back,it is better to die than doing that,Swara brings a forced smile on her face and goes near Mukesh and tells him, “I have been a very stubborn daughter,no,dad?so you are scared if my opinion will change,no?no dad,I wont let you all down,then,about seeing the guy,I know your choice wont be bad for me,so ,again,no need to ask me,you can proceed,I am ready”,she slowly moves forward and hugs Mukesh and Mukesh is surprised,he lovingly hugs her back and moves his hand on her hair,Swara softly says, “I wish I got some more time to be your daughter”,Mukesh’s eyes are filled,Sumi watches it with moist eyes,Chetan moves forward and says, “you, father-daughter duo,enough ok,too much drama is not required”,Mukesh tells him, “why, you are feeling jealous?,it is clear,I love my daughter more”,Chetan smiles and hugs Swara and says, “yes,I know dad loves you more,but I am ok with it,my sister is so sweet,so I have no complaints about that,by the way,you are going to leave this house soon,heard Akshay and family are ready for marriage as soon as they get your nod,I will miss you Di”,Swara hugs him and says, “Oh,so much love towards towards sister now,enough,ok”,Sumi and Mukesh watches this,Sumi hugs Swara,they spend some time together and leaves the room.

Swara locks the door and comes back,she stands in front of Shekhar’s photo and says, “I have always shared my pain and hurt you,no,Papa,now I am just feeling numb,they are saying,I haven’t seen the guy and still agreed,how can I tell them that if it is not my Sanskaar,then,who cares,whoever comes,it is the same,I really don’t know if I am doing right or wrong,I don’t know if I can love somebody else,I don’t know if I am going to destroy some body else’s life,but,Sanskaar,he means the world to me,I promised him,so I cant break it,he cares for me,he doesn’t want to feel guilty,or else he would have never forced me,he don’t belong to me any more but still,I get all his thoughts,don’t understand what it is ,I just know that I am blind in my love for him,and that love alone made me live all these years,now that my equation with dad has improved a lot,I am going to leave them,life has always tested me but at the end I thought it will give Sanskaar to me but no,there also,she slowly moves and keeps her head on Shekhar’s photo and says,please pray to God that I don’t go mad ,Papa,I don’t know what is happening inside my head now…….”

Scene 2:After three days,Pops and Corns

SwasanRaglak has assembled,Swara announces about her engagement the coming week and tells about Akshay,Ragini looks shockingly at Sanskaar,Sanskaar shows happiness where as Ragini is still disturbed,Laksh shakes hands and congratulates Swara,he jokingly says, “I thought you will marry this Sanky”,Swara is shocked but hides it whereas Ragini looks at both Swara and Sanskaar,Swara is trying her maximum to hide her heart and smile,Ragini asks Swara, “Swara,Congrats dear,but,didn’t expect it so early,happiness and sorrow,mixed emotions,one from our gang is going to go,oh,years flew,wish we were still in 8th”,Swara holds Ragini’s hands and says, “all are forcing,Dad is sick,so he is scared,wants me to settle down,then mom,Chetan all are happily forcing me,and also….(she looks at Sanskaar),since this is the only thing that I can give for my loved ones,I agreed…”,she tells them to order what they want as treat,she gives menu card to Laksh and says, “Oh,first time,you both are not fighting,place the order,na,Lucky?”,

Laksh smiles and says, “Swara,first time,a treat is not making me excited as well,he will take you along with him,no?Australia,no?will miss you Swara”,Ragini and Swara are on the verge of tears,Swara tells, “Ragu,now don’t cry and make me cry “,Ragini gets up and hugs Swara,both breaks down,Sanskaar says, ‘’these girls,na?will you please sit down,thank God ,other tables are free,why are you crying?”Ragini smiles, “what is your problem,heartless…”Swara looks at Sanskaar hearing that,he looks at Swara and places his hand on his chest and says, “yes Rags,it is made of stone…..”Swara looks into his eyes hearing that……

Scene 3:Swara’s engagement day

Sanskaar,Ragini and Laksh are actively participating in everything,they are helping Mukesh and Chetan with the arrangements,event management company manager comes to Sanskaaar,he is Sanskar’s family friend’s son,he asks Sanskaar regarding arrangements,Sanskaar tells him that it is beautiful ,he asks whose choice purple theme was,because,Swara’s favourite is blue colour,the man says it was totally Swara’s choice,Sanskaar understands that she opted it because it was his favourite colour,the man leaves,Sanskaar is hurt but hides it,he goes to meet Swara,all the girls leave the room when he enters,Swara is looking very pretty,Sanskar goes near her,his heart is beating faster,he tells her, “you are looking very pretty Swara,you have a very beautiful heart also,God will always keep you happy,I actually came to give you this gift,it is not very expensive,don’t think it is in return to what you gave to Sanju”,he takes a beautifully wrapped jewellery box,he holds Swara’s hand and keeps it,Swara opens it fast and sees a beautiful ring,she looks at him in surprise, she tells him, “out of friendship,made me promise ,no?being a best friend,shall I request you something?”,Sanskar says, “yes Swara,tell me”,Swara tells him, “if you don’t mind ,make your friend wear it with your hands,”Sanskaar feels his heart beat in his ears,he moves closer to her,takes the ring and makes Swara wear it,he feels that if he stays there for some more time he will fail to hide his heart,he makes her wear it and stands there holding her hands,he asks her, “my friend is happy?”,

Swara takes his both hands inside hers,looks into his eyes and lifts his hands and is about to kiss it,suddenly she realises,leaves his hands and says,”I am very sorry Sanskaar,really sorry,”Sanskaar says, “it is ok Swara,I will go now”,he leaves,Swara stares at the mirror and the ring,she is about to cry but suddenly she sees Ragini coming inside,she quickly composes herself,Ragini comes and hugs her,they chat for some time,Swara hugs her suddenly and cries,Sanskar was watching all this from the window,he wipes his eyes and goes from there,Ragini gently pats Swara’s back…

After some time,Akshay and family arrives,Sanskaar witnesses the ring exchange ceremony,he hides his pain but Ragini keeps looking at him,they pass comments about the couple,after the ring exchange ceremony ,both parents announces the wedding date,Swara’s eyes are searching for Sanskaar,she finds him in the first row,he smiles,she just looks at him,after some time,Raglaksan goes near Akshay,they meet and introduce each other,they click a selfie together,Sanskaar is standing next to Swara ,she feels him around her,she gently turns and looks at him,he looks at her,then signs her to look into the camera…

Akshay invites them all for the wedding,Laksh excuses himself and tells that he has to leave as there is another function to attend,Ragini and Sanskaar ,after the dinner are returning home,Sanskaar after reaching the gate,turns and sees Swara at the balcony looking at them,he pretends as though he hasn’t seen her and leaves along with Ragini…

Scene 4:Park ,near the beach

Ragini and Sanskaar are walking,Ragini suddenly stops and says, “Sanky,don’t dare to lie,I thought you and Swara loves each other,her case,today I got my answer,her tears told me everything,she hugged me and cried,that too in between our casual chats,you made her agree to this,no?she didn’t tell anything but I am sure,tell me Sanskar,look into my eyes and tell me,you don’t love her?,I wanted to ask this to both of you,but that day Laksh passed a joke,I had noticed Swara that day itself,but then I felt if you haven’t realised your love for each other,the thought that one is going away may make you’al realise it,but now I don’t understand anything,the way she looked at you today,why Sanky?,she would have waited if you had said a word,Sanskaar replies “No Ragini,there is nothing like that,we are just friends”Ragini says, “no more lies,she also must have understood you,must be sacrificing for you since you are silent,he says, “yes,I love her,don’t ask me how much,I cant explain what I am feeling right now,

I am letting her go because of my love dear,Akshay is from a good family,well educated,settled,I am a big zero,I have just this job but the debts and responsibilities ,I cant make her wait,life is not about love,peace of mind is very important,my family circumstances, cant give her any happiness,it is not for a day or two,for a life time,I don’t want my Swara to struggle with me,now my silence is breaking her heart,I know,but she will get happiness”,Ragini is in tears and is looking at Sanskaar in shock,she wipes her tears and says,”But,what if she cant stay happy after marriage?if she doesn’t forget you?”Sanskaar says , “it may take some time but she will move on,don’t ask me anything,she should move on,I am doing this for her,if I had invited her,may be she will be happy for some time,but,in the long journey,no,Icant trouble,this is my love,may be ,sacrifice is the name of my love Ragini,don’t ask me more”,Ragini says, “I cant agree,have to ask,she would have lived happily with you,why did you let her go?,you will regret Sanky.”Sanskaar replies, “I don’t want her to adjust,I want her to be totally happy, Ragini says, “and, you think she will be happy,you have to answer me this time”,he is sad and sits down on the park bench,holds his head and looks up at the sky and says, “u know me ,na,Ragini?

I don’t know anything,don’t ask me anything now,”Ragini hugs him,he hugs her and cries,he tells her, “If you truly loves me and Swara,you should not tell this to Lucky,if you tell him,then,you wont see Sanskaar,I mean it,I dont know what I will do,but you will lose your friend, Lucky will do anything for his friends,he will tell this to Swara if he comes to know about it”, Ragini says, “No,I wont tell anyone but first time I am seeing you cry,Sanky,how you are able to bear all this yaar,I wish,I could set everything right for you,but Sanskaar,you are so good dear,God is watching you both,he can work miracles,I will pray for you,what else can I do now”,Sanskar leans on to her shoulder and says, “I am worn out ,Ragini,”,Ragini supports him and says, “my mind says,everything will be alright,call me any time or come home if you want to share,don’t keep it within and suffer like this”,Sanskaar just nods,Ragini wipes her tears with her other hand and looks up and closes her eyes……………

Credit to: Vini(Veena)

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118 Comments
  1. Hey vinni ,i am one of silent reader for this fan fiction.This episode is more sentii and plz dont make us fell emotional

    1. So glad to know that u were reading, thank u for the comment, oh u all felt it,glad to know that.

  2. Di aapne kasan le liya hai humsabko rulane ke liye. You know now another tributary will join ganga. That tributary will start from my room and it will merge with ganga. Aapne aur Niyati di ne soch kaise liya ki Mai invite nehi karungi. That day I had to leave my comment incomplete due to some unavoidable circumstances aur aap dono soch liya Ki Mai invite nehi karungi!!! Angry angry angry ????
    Niyati di is your zodiac sign Aries ♈??????
    It is just a guess. Actually I am a zodiac freak . My bestie and me always try to guess the zodiac signs of people by observing them. Don’t laugh at me if my guess is wrong.
    Sheetal di aap ko Mai roshogolla kya chomchom khilaungi. Aap aiye to sahi .mai khud aapke liye roshogolla aur chomchom banaungi(mujhko sirf deserts banana Ata hai. Ek baar Mai omlette banayi thi par woh Puri tarike Se jal Gaya tha. The chapattis made by me always looks like world map)?

    1. nope dear..its not aries..mine is sagittarius..so u r aries ha..means intelligent..vibrant..n talkative…ufff tu deserts bana shakti hai…nahi… plz ye bat meri mamma ko pata na chal jaye ki tu mujse choti hai n u can cook something..varna shayad bhagavan bhi nahi bacha payenge iss nanhi si jaan ko….Tere hath ke roshogulla khane pakka ana hi padega..

      1. Yes Niti we should go once n have it from her home,cooking will come under yr control,much easier than CA it would be,so,chill…

    2. Haha,tributary will merge with ganga,good one Darling, so u invited us,will come to Bengal, then,hmm,let’s c,u know to make desserts,very good,so rest of the items also will come easily, and wat would be my zodiac sign,give a guess,tc dear,missing u all .

  3. Di u are a fantastic writer!!!!! I never cried after reading a ff but your ff is an exception. It will be kasam not kasan.
    Love you di!!!!!

    1. I made Vinita dear cry,oh,didn’t expect dear,that u all will feel it,if u all see me typing,u will smile,cos in that hurry I do that..

  4. Vini please upload nxt part.. I am waiting.. please upload soon..

  5. Sneha garewal

    Yeah vini,we all are waiting..pls update soon

    1. Sorry dear,I will upload tomorrow ,ok ,if I can imagine some.scenes,I will write it today,I haven’t planned, that is the problem.

  6. 28n 29 what a painful episode!!!!
    I do no how to describe ur work!!!!
    Its amazing!!!!
    I’m feeling different while reading ur story!!!!
    Pls don’t end soon its very kind request!!!!

    1. Oh thank u dear,happy to know that u all liked it,felt it to an extent,it is a predictable story line dear.Don’t know if u will like it from.next episode.

  7. Vini. Where r you? Pls upload na.. It is very difficult for me to wait for so long..

    1. Sorry dear,I will write tomorrow,brain is empty,that so called stupid track is gonna start.have to imagine the scenes.Sorry ok.Tomorrow…

  8. Joya,Shraddha,Niti,Mickey,Vinita,Sethooty ,missing u guys,I mean chatting with u all,busy busy, and Nidhi n Sneha ,ur comments I read, I don’t know wat to write in next,should imagine something ,let me see,I will try to post it ASAP but in case if I don’t post it tomorrow, pls excuse,ok.

  9. omg u have shown sanky’s unconditional love for swara it is very deep friendship, love,
    anyone will feel connected
    every time while reading your ff a mix feeling comes I become sad for swasan separation but happy by knowing their love n sacrifice bcoz swara is getting engage for sanky’s sake
    whatever u write connects directly with heart

    1. Thank u yaar,very happy to read your comment,glad to know that u felt connected to this ff,hope u will keep reading,may mess up the story,don’t know.

  10. Hi guyzzzz?????…..sorryyy ha….abhi abhi uth rhi hu….yarrrr neend me thi??….

    Niti aaj toh kuch pln nhi h yarr…n 2mne jo song lkha tha my fvrte song…???

    I think sb pgl ho gaye h na…n me toh phle se h pgl hu yaarr??..

    Diiiiii i missssssssssssssssssseeeddddd uuuuuuuuuu yaaaarrrrr!!!????…..

    Xuley sbko missss kr rhi ho,joya di,niti,vinita,sethooty,n mere pgli behen shraddha sb ko……

    Sethoootyyyy hw r u yaarrr???

    Chalooo aaj toh sunday h na???toh mera toh koi pln nhi h….aaap sbki kya kya pln h beheno bataaoon

    1. Very nice,y u got up so early,just 1.21 pm,na???missing u too dear,in fact as u said our army,then even I got up at 9 today, now going to have lunch.Busy weekend but too lazy …take care dears.

  11. ???kya kru di…uthne ka mn hi nhi krta….??

    1. Very good,enjoy enjoy,eat nicely n sleep nicely…

  12. Vinita me yehi hu pgliii?…bas neend me thi yaarrr 1:15 tak??…

    Joya di don’t worryy …hum aapko v miss krte h yaarrrr….cutieeeeeee chulbullllllliiii???

  13. Ye kya comments idhar udhar ho rahe hai?? isi liye naya start kiya dekho maine? abb bas niyati joya aaj ka topic bhi pani nahi ha dekho bohot sari cheeze hai we can’t be partial towards water oy u know? bechare durse topics left out manlenge?

    Vini di ? ya I felt so nyc seeing my behen s pyaar? ssly its become so nyc chatting like this with u all?
    N niyati u know main bhi agar jyada serious hogayi toh sablog ek dum shock hojate hai ki isko koi sadma laga kya? ??

    Vinita arey pagli tu Itne dino se Ranchi me he hai na so we all were missing u so hum bhi bharti karado chalegs?

    Joya waise acha he hua chodo dono milke swase narak ke compounds ko net banake badminton khelenge kyunki andar ghusne toh denge nahi??
    N hayy re dayya sabke sab chashmish yayy tahts why all are so hyper active double battery no?
    Hayy meri shaitaan kaha hai tu? n tum bhi chashmish ho kya rups?agar hai toh kamal hogaya yeh toh

    Vini di yea this is weekend no dats why thoda relaxation hai warna I told no punctuality me thoda prob hoga week days me?? Coll ki waje se
    So tomo again u planning to make us cry my dear didi?

  14. Sneha garewal

    Pls vini if possible pls upload today pls…i cant wait

  15. Yehi huuuu mere pyari behen
    ..no yaarr me chashmish nhi hu rey…mtlb thodi c hu…dctr ne diya h bt mjhe psnd nhi…kbhi kbhi phnti hu..xuley mere eyes bht chhoote h yarr…dkhogi toh shck ho jaogi…ekdm chinese typ???…chal ab nick nme bataaon 2mhre…nhi toh me de dunga nik nme @shraddha

    1. Thank good rupsikha tu yehi hai .Maine socha Ki tu akeli tanchi chali gayi. Tomorrow is my my exam. Highest milna zaruri hai izzat ja sawal hai…………..
      Meri joya di kaha ur chali ……..mere armano Mai pankh lagake kaha ur chali I am missing u so much……

      Niti di when did rani Lakshmi bai go to jail??????????
      My zodiac sign is not Aries ♈……… Guess karte raho……. It has something to do with Dhoni…….
      Vini di thank god aap gussa nehi hai aur punishment nehi Diya……… ..
      Kya Karu aj pagalpanti ka daura par gaya …..roz parta hai…lol?
      Shraddha di……. My behna …. kaisi Ho
      Chalo eksaath Ranchi chalte hai
      Hum hai rahi pagalpanti ke phir milege Ranchi chalte chalte

      Sethooty di aap ne mera dil khush kar Diya. Glad to know u like Tagore. Aiye padhariye. …….

      1. hellllllllooooo baheno…..Kya Hal chal hai app logo k….

        joya humka bulake tum kidhrva gayab ho gava…ha..hum ne to thari kavita n shayari padhne k khatir ye page khola par…….dil tod diya tune pagli…

        rups to tum duble bettery nahi ho ha….ye Kya ho gaya..humari toli me eke unique piece aa gaya…

        hyyyeeeee rabba…ye Kya kiya shraddha….Jo meri juban pe tha vo chin liya…mere dill kiya bat kardi tune pagli…vinita Kya tu sach me ranchi chali gayi hum sab Ko chodke…tujse ye dhokebazi ki ummid na thi hume…aree pagli zara apne history k panne ghuma…firangies (angrez) ne unhe kayi bar jail me dala tha…………..humare janam k pehle ki baate hai Hume kya….btw tu pakka top karegi…all the best sis…

        vini Di i m missing u soo much…app church ho ayi…hope is masum se nautanki bazo ne app Ko jyada tang nahi kiya hai…ya vini Di app apne hubby ko humare comment padhne se pehle inform kar dena ha plz…bahut khatara hai………..its better to be careful…..

      2. yr vinita………..kya baat kar rahi ho……..niti ne sapna dekha tha usme jhasi ki rani jail gayi thi…..real me nahi……yeh hume khud niti ne bataya ha qki tumhare armanon k pankh lagake hum niti yahi sawal karne gaye the…..hehehehe…(niti sorry yr)

        are ranchi jane ki kya jarurat hai apne apne gharon ko pagal khana banaya hai wo kam hai kya……??????
        waise bhi hum jaise paglon ko bharti kar sake aisa koi pagalkhana duniya me nahi bana aaj tak………
        hehehhehehehe…..

        shraddha very good idea…….i love badminton…… actually bada maja aayega….sun ne me aaya hai bade pakode-shakode bante narak me…test karenge khelte khelte……..

        hey rups yr kaha ho tum………?pagal ho rahe hhm sab tumhare bina……

        joke chhodo to guys tum sab ki umar bahot lambi ho………(200 saal ka offer chalega???????)

      3. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

        All d best for ur exam Vinitha..

      4. hey vinita….is it cancer trait..?? avaiyy guess kiya…

        joya dear…meri behna…tu to bewafa nikli…friend bolti hai Hume…bahen bolti hai..firbhi..chand dino me Hume sorry kehke paraya kar diya………hayeee….ye sunne se pehle mere Kan kyana faat gaye……Humne aisa to kya gunah kar diya ki tum sabhi morcha (team) leke hum masum pe attack kardiye…uprse sorry bolke dill k tukde tukde kar diye ..

        abb thoda knowledge lelo Hume…… Humne jhansi ki rani ka role kiya tha school time me drama me……n mene unki biopic dekhi thi n books me detail me padha tha unko angrezo ne kyi bar Jail me dala tha….

        btw i also love to play bedminton…..sab pair banak sath me pakode khate khate khelenge..bada maza ayega…me to abhi se utsahi ho rahi Hu……..koi to rok lo….

        chalo chalo bubye….gnnnnnnnn….sddddddd..apne apne rajkumar k sapne dekhna…me to chali shahid kapur n varun kapur k sapno me khone….so now do not disturb…

    2. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

      Hi Micky, vini ,Vinitha, joya ,shradha , niti…how was d weekend…? I hate Mondays… Y dis day always come after Sunday..haha..
      Micky darling bcy thaa yaar hangout wid cousins and shopping…

    3. niti………
      hum bewafa????????
      tumhari comment read karte wakt aisa laga jaise tum keh rahi ho ki Teri bewfai ko bhoola na sakenge,chahe bhi to kabhi muskurana sakenge…………………………….

      yar hum bewfa nahi hai yeh to kismat ne aisa majak kiya humre sath……
      q yeh iljam?????
      ab hum kisi ko muh dikhane layak nahi rahe…….pehle ka jamana hota to raat kk bahar ja sakte the lekin ab tonsab jagah lights hai….kya kare hum…….????
      itna sa bhi bharosa nahi hai hum par………???????
      bichare hum….ab chullubhar pani dundhana padega……….

      marne k liye nahi…pine k liye….

      bdw niti i dont which book u have read…..but dear jhasi ki rani ko British government ne kabhi arrest nahi kiya tha yahi sach hai…..ko 1bar bhi jail nahi gayi hai…….tum fir se book padhlo……

  16. Sneha garewal

    Vini update soon na

    1. M very sorry dear,tomorrow ,for sure..don’t think u will like it, cos 1 para I just thot n I myself didn’t like it.

      1. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

        Hi
        Take ur own time Dr..will wait for u….

  17. Hi vini di ..dat day u told na to to continue reading ur ff but di I read all d episodes of ur ff frm season 1 to season 2 each n every epi but didn’t commented dats it srsly I luved ir each n every epi some time I wonder how can u write so well ……u may think till she d commented den y did she commenting now well there r 2 reasons behind it
    1.to make u happy bcoz I know even if one comment increase u will feel happy ….nd by makong u happy atleast then u may give us happy episodes. .just kidding
    2.by seeing everyone’s frndshp seriously I luved it even I want to b part of it ….when I read all ur chats I feel happy recolecting my memories with my school frnds ….u, shradha di, rupshika di, neeti di, seethoty di, vinitha di, joya di nd writings, ur frndshp is awesome di ….even I too want to b part of it……srry I think I wrote too much

    1. Oh u have read the other ff also?glad to know that ,actually new names under ff is truly exciting,dats the only way to know how many are reading our ffs,then,bond between the names u mentioned,even,I think at times,how it happened,but m happy I met them thru this platform, then,welcome to our army.Keep in touch dear..hope others will read this too.

  18. Ohhhh m here joyaaaaaa diii

  19. Gd mrng guyzzzzz….hv a cuuuttteeeeeeeee beeaaauutttiifuuullllll dayyyyyyyyyyyy guyzz?

    Vinita sry rey m late…Bst of luck dr 4ur xm….acche mrks lna thk h na?…nhi toh pnshmnt mlgi ???…aur waise v 2m toh abhi xm hl me hogi yarrr

    Sethooo(sethooty)myyyyyyy darlinggggggg shopppppiinnggggg haaa????…chal bata mere liye kya laye ?????

    Nitiii bdminton ha…mjhe v khlna h yaarrr????…

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