Swasan fan fiction (Season 2 ) episode 28


Hi guys,Swasan Fan Fiction (Season 2) episode 28

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Episode 25
Episode 26
Episode 27

Actually,yesterday’s comments,honestly didn’t expect you all will like that episode,was randomly written n I was not satisfied,they were around 15 new names,those who comment daily,I know the names now,in reply to a silent reader under 27th episode ie. yesterday’s ,I have written,that ,now I truly wish all silent readers commented ‘once’ under my ff,it is just out of a curiosity to know how many of you are reading my ff,don’t know if u all will consider this,ah,then coming to the story,as I have quoted Christopher Booker before,there are just 7 basic plots,all stories said so far falls into it,there are debates for and against that view,I am not a writer (don’t think,I am thinking low,it is a fact),so your guesses may be right,let’s see whose guess matches closely with my thought,please keep reading,thank you for the support,Swasan will be united but how,when,where….?quite predictable ,but let us see…..

Scene 1:Next day evening,beach……….

Sanskar is waiting for Swara,Swara arrives after some time,her face clearly shows her heart ,Sanskar looks into her eyes,the puffiness around clearly conveys the amount of tears the previous night and that day witnessed,Swara asks him, “Sanskaar,one last time,I am asking,tell me,what you told me yesterday,is it a lie?if yes,I know all your responsibilities,I know you are not ready for a marriage now,but,one word,Sanskaar,please,not for me,to convince my family,if you think it is for my well being,don’t ask me to go,please,”Sanskar just listens silently and then tells her, “Swara,shall we go that side,you think I am lieing to make u go from my life?no dear”,he takes her along with him,he opens the door of a blue car parked there,a girl steps out,she looks at Swara,Swara looks at her in shock ,her eyes are filled but she is struggling to hide it,she feels like running away but composes herself and smiles,Sanskar tells the girl, “Sanjitha,this is Swara,”,he slowly turns and tells, “ Swara,this is Sanjitha”,Swara is struggling to hide her pain.she looks at her and brings a forced smile and says, “Hi”,Sanjitha responds, “Hai Swara,Sanskar has mentioned about the three of u,SwasanRaglak,that’s how he says,nice to meet you,I am so sorry Swara”,Swara says, “Oh,please don’t say sorry,I am sorry,I wished for,actually I don’t deserve,sorry,I am happy to meet you,you both make a very good pair together “her lips are shivering while saying that,she continues, “Actually,now ,I will leave,before making a decision wanted to….later ,should not feel,no?,that I went wrong,still,don’t know,if it is right or wrong ,but….have to….ok,nice meeting you Sanjitha,you are leaving this week,no?,all the best ,bye”,she turns to go,then quickly goes back and holds Sanjitha’s hands,she removes her ring from her finger and makes Sanjitha wear it and says, “you should be knowing clearly,he must have told you yesterday,I have loved your guy all these years,but it is my mistake,I should have thought from his angle too,I am very happy for you,I will also pray for all the obstacles to vanish,your parents will agree,his parents and sister,they are very nice people,wont hurt you,wont hurt any one,then,don’t know when we will meet again,this is a small gift from my side and all good wishes in advance ,she hugs her and takes permission to leave……

She calls Sanskar to a side and tells him, “I am happy that you got a very good girl,this life ,you belong to her,but in next life,will you be mine?”,a tear rolls down from her eyes,she wipes and says, “I am so silly,no?how can I ask that?,you will wish to live all your lives with Sanjitha,no?sorry,ok,may be we were not born to be together,it is ok, sorry,I am unlucky ,good wishes to both of you,today I will agree to what mom and dad told,only for you,only because you made me promise that I will agree”Swara waves a bye to Sanjitha and walks away,she goes to the direction where her scooty was parked,she is walking but crying her heart out closing her mouth with one hand and is also trying to compose herself to prevent Sanskar and Sanjitha from seeing her shoulder moving ,she reaches near her scooty and stumbles,Sanskar was watching her,seeing her going to fall,he calls Swara and moves forward but Swara is at a distance where she couldn’t hear that,he sees Swara leaving and goes near Sanjitha and thanks her..

Sanjitha tells him, “Sanskaar,tell me honestly,you brought me here to meet her because you don’t love her and wants her to move on in her life,are you sure,you don’t love her and that is why you made me pretend like this?”,Sanskar replies ,”Yes Sanju,I don’t love her,I don’t want her to wait for me,I want her to accept the proposal which her parents brought,but thank you so much for helping me,for coming to see her”,Sanjitha responds, “Sanskaar,before leaving I had plans to meet you,what you have done for me and Vicky,I cant do anything in return for that but I came and promised that I will never let Swara know the truth of our friendship for you,because you’re my good friend,if you had not supported, me and Vicky would have never been able to carry our relationship thus far,though bitterness is still there between families,atleast ,you could turn his mom in our favour”,Sanskaar smiles and says, “yea,those moments,still,don’t know ,how aunty agreed to meet you and all,ah,thank God,and,thank you Sanju ,once again ,for this big help,should I come along?”,Sanjitha continues, “You know something Sanskaar,I met your family today,na?they are so loving,Swara is right,and you just now told me that you don’t love her,but look at you Sanskaar,you are talking,you are smiling,but your heart is not here,I am telling about my friend who I have known for the past 4 years,Swara was in pain but you looked more hurt,Swara stumbled,you moved forward to hold her calling her name,I wish she noticed it but poor girl ,can understand her heart,what is it Sanskaar,is it that you haven’t realised your love for her?or am I totally mistaken ?your heart ,really,doesn’t want to stop her?please think about it, my friend,if there is a chance,don’t let her go,12 years,poor girl,accept her,na?when I return I wish I could see you both together,please think about it,now,let me leave”she leans and hugs Sanskaar,Sanskaar opens the door for her,he again asks her if he should accompany her,she tells him again to think about it,suddenly she opens the door and steps outside again,removes the ring from her finger,holds Sanskaar’s right hand and places it in his palm and tells her, “Oh,I would have left with this,the girl who walked away a few minutes back with a broken heart, doesn’t know that I don’t deserve this,but you know that,I wont take this,I feel, this belongs to that same girl in all its sense,whether you agree or not,I feel so,ask your heart Sanskaar,before it is too late,I will surely pray for you both”,she gets inside the car after saying this and wishes him bye and leaves……

Scene 2:Sanskaar is seated at the seashore

The sea is very calm,he looks at the sea,he has Swara’s ring in his hands,he stares at it,tears blur his vision,he slowly kisses the ring and looks at the sea and says, “best friend,no?very calm today,but all the waves are inside my heart,I wish I died this moment,can you help me?can you come angrily and take me along with you now?no,cant wish for that also,have a family who needs me,but,life?do you have the slightest idea about the condition of my heart now?I am tired,I am tired ,the day she came home for the first time,felt she was born to be mine,every moment spent with her made me feel,we were destined to be together,wanted to spend this life with her,wanted to give her all happiness,her name was attached to every dream that I saw,from one end I was struggling to untie the knots but from the other end destiny brings a new challenge,now lakhs for Papa’s renal transplant,his condition is bad,don’t know if his body is ready for another surgery,but have to,because I want him,all I have with me to give to Swara is my love,but that is not enough,I don’t want her to struggle with me,Akshay’s proposal is a really good one for her,let her move on,love is not always about living with the one you love,it is also about letting your love live happily,I broke her heart,but,after marriage,she will accept him,she will get all the love… now what more will you give me life?,what is new challenge in store for me,I have never complained,have I?now also,no complaints,no demands, can accept any number of pains again ,because the biggest is losing my Swara,already did,I made her walk out of my life,she is my heart,I cant accept that she wont be mine but give as much pain as you want in this life,but if there are 6 more lives,I want 6 more,to spent with my Swara,give me the blessing to give this love back to her,to hold that hand which I just now rejected,she has loved me for 12 years,I wish I could go and tell her that I have been loving her since the day she came home when we were in 8th standard,that I had understood her heart even if she had not told anything,that distance was never a problem in understanding her,because I carried her in my heart,,that I was born to be hers,life………..why are you making me helpless?,it is enough ,you broke my heart,but all my pains,God ,I am not questioning you,I know you give struggles to people who you love the most and I know you love me God,so ,please keep my Swara happy, after her marriage,let Akshay give her all the love and happiness that she deserves..he again kisses the ring and keeps it inside his fist and keeps his hand on his chest,he closes his eyes and tears roll down ,after some time he gets up and walks towards the water,he stands there still ,for a long time,then comes back,kneels down,takes the beach sand in his fist,slowly opens it and allows the sand to fall down,he then cries,looking at the sky…………….

Credit to: Vini(Veena)

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  1. Aapne phir se ruka Diya di. You ff is the best. You are a fantastic writer di. Oshadharon!!!!!!!!

    Meri pyaari si vini di don’t be angry.
    My didi Ki toli is always welcome to my house.
    Gussa ko bhaga dijiye and smile!!!?

    Exam was oshadharon I was feeling like doing bhangra. I am never tensed before exams but this time there is an immense competition . So because of this I am tensed.
    Niyati di be calm!!!! Calm down…….
    Ache se mehnat kijiye and no one can stop you from achieving your goal. All the best!!!!

    1. thank god at last you hv invited us vinita..
      thank u so much dear for your wishes..hope everything will be fine..i am going to start my actual preparation from March 2016 after getting study leave from office..

      thanks vini Di apki vajah se muje itne share achche dost mile n unki dua n wishes bhi mili..thank u so much

  2. Hi rupsikha!!! I an fine. How are you???
    Exam was good. How was singing practice????

  3. Vini di kitna rulaoge…..
    Sooooo emotional….every time I think nothing can b better than this episode n u prove me wrong.. Love u??

  4. It really awesome vini dii . uhh rocked it. It was heart touching.. Hope sanky will realise his love soon….n loved it dear….I was a silent reader but this episode made me too comment…it’s lovable n hats off and hands down for uhh….

  5. Wowww….superb. ….I’m reading it again and again…..loved it very much….polichuuuuu?

  6. Have been a silent reader up til now but loved d way u brought up the story and the emotions it doesn’t feel like fiction but don’t mind I know ki writer ka mind kahin bhi ja skta hai lekin Aisi kahani itni intensity ke sath koi tabhi la sakta hai jab vo khani me engrossed ho ye feelings uske apne ho kahin ye aapki kahani se milti julti to nhi sorry bs aise hi pucha tha BT love swasan

    1. I checked this site now,actually,had posted this yesterday by around 7pm,dont know when it got uploaded,and now 48 comments,just scrolled down,many are new names,I think you all considered the wish that I mentioned,I am happy to know that so many were reading this ff,thank you very much guys,for commenting here,today,shall respond to your individual comments as soon as possible,and I read the last one,hahaha,Vaidehi,thank u for the comment ,no yaar,to be very honest,it has nothing to do with my life,I got my first love,that is my hubby through a pakka arranged marriage through a matrimonial site,this story,I am just developing for the readers,even I dont know where this will end..just my luck that you guys liked what I wrote so far,and thank God ,he made me imagine some scenes when I sat down to type,yea,one line of the story in 5 sentences is there in my mind as I often say,but scenes,have to plan,that is why I am taking time,not getting much time to sit and imagine some thing…

      1. But the time u take is worth it loved that u replied but a lovestruck person only can be so good at expressing intensified expressions so well u are really blessed by God’s grace Nyc writing skills by the way I have this type of story even I’m 25 but yes the story started from 6 th class by reading ur story I get into flashbacks and even sanidhya my husband likes ur story

  7. poor fellow, taking too much of burden on his head.

  8. ? no words !!!
    Thank u so,much for lovely,painful episode… fabulous!!!

  9. Plzz yr don’t saperate swasan it’s a request and I’m a silent reader I have been reading all d episodes of ur ff it’s really emotional tdy u made me cry????

  10. Mind blowing
    Heart touching episode

  11. Yar emotional … I felt bad for both swasan … 12yr love can’t be separated … I am crying now i can feel both swasan pain.. Swara n sanskar both r crt at their plAce ..
    Don’t separate them for too long…
    Unite swasan i can’t see both like this.
    Don’t let swara engage to other pls yar

  12. Vinni…u made me cry..i cant tolerate the separation.swasan my babies.please unite them….plz

  13. hi guys………..

    how are u?????????
    feeling awesome na after reading today’s update……………

    bdw shraddha where r u yr??????
    ur phool jaisi sister is missing………………

    hey niti we wanna party after achieving ur gaol………

    yr vinita kabhi humne bhi rashogoll khane pe bulao yr……….

    rups chulbuli princess……singing practice and all ha……good……..

    weakened ka Holiday yr……2 din jaldi uthna nahi padega…………..

    vini di waiting for next update……….

    1. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

      Hi joya
      Fine Dr..actually vinita I like to visit Bengal , bz of Tagore, culture, traditional sari,fish, shreya ghoshal ma fav singer, bz of our didi usha uthup..and off course swaragini..

  14. Di feeling bad for them….more emotional….

  15. Awesome epi Di very emotional ur d best vini Di I lived it n sanky also lives swara I cried like hell… after this epi n yesterday’s epi I had gone through pain I can understand it pls… unite them soon n ya plzzz wish for me I m still waiting for him

  16. after reading needhi’s comment i want to share one incidence..

    i love shahid kapoor so much..i am in love with shahid since i was 11 yr old..that means i loved him n still love from last 10 years..all my friends n cousins..family member tease me wid d name of shahid very much..after joining my articleship..in office also all has started teasing me..u will not believe me even my boss also..bz i can’t hide my love towards him..i used to celebrate shahid’s bday wid my friends..whenever any of my friends or family member don’t find any special gift from me on my bday they used to gift me poster of shahid or making my photo collage with him..bz they know i will love that gift for sure..

    my life was going very very good with all this happening…fir eke toofan aya meri zindgi me..shahid married to meera in July 15..you all may be thinking me mad or whatever but i was really very upset..you know i got sympathy call n msg from each n every friends n cousins..i will not lie i cried also that day..till now my mom dad hv never tease me with shahid..they won’t like my craziness..but after seeing me really very upset..you know what papa told to mom that..now they need to find another groom for me bz their so called son in law ditched their princess after 10 years relationship..my mouth was perfectly open in O shape..i couldn’t believe my ear my dad pass comment like that..bz in past 10 years he never like my craziness towards shahid..but to cheer me up he passed such statement..i become normal then..n fir mene..dil par pathtar rakhake do tin din nikale..n shahid k better future k liye pray bhi kiya..ye thi mere phehle pyar ki adhoori kahani..

    till now i hv liked many of actors n actresses..but i hv loved..i love..may be i will love only two actors..the one is shahid kapoor..n 2nd is varun kapoor..(to my bad luck both r married)..after reading this finding me mad na..

    i am sooooooooooo so sooory for wasting ur time..i know some of u will curse me for writing such comment..but couldn’t stop my self..sorry vini Di once again..

    1. Why all Handsome and cute guys are married? 🙂

    2. awww..how cute story..so u r crazy about shahid n varun..i can understand ur craziness dear bz i am mad after arjun kapoor n barun sobti..for my good fortune they r not married..ha ha ha..but honesty speaking i was thinking that i m the biggest fan..but after reading ur story it seems ur love towerds shahid is mach more than mine for arjun..

    3. Hi niti,u r not mad instead its really sweet.i am even experiencing the same thing.u know i really like varun kapoor and mahesh babu(south actor) but both of them are married.u know what from dp to screen savers of mine is of mahesh babu .my friends and family knows about it.they dont leave any stone unturned.my mother slways keeps me remiding me that both r much elder to u and r married but my madness has no effect of it.so dear dont call yourself mad.

    4. ohhhhhhhh………….
      dnt worry some1 is better than shahid is waiting for u at any point of ur life’s way…..
      my 1 friend is also huge fan of shahid….usne na shahid ki pic wo ghar me chhota temple hota na uske upar lagayi thi and she still hate karina kapoor bcz of shahid….

      humri do friend hai.1 mahesh babu to dusri prabas ki crazy fan hai…
      u know guys i suggested prabhas’s film to mahesh babu’s fan…usko kaha ki prabhas ki us film me mahesh babu ne guest actor hai.same thing dusri wali k sath bhi ki usko mahesh babu ki film dekhne mo bola yeh kehk ki umse prabhas hai…….

      poor girls…….unhone film dekhi aur pata laga unko humne jhooth bola tha……………itni galiyan di hume ki puchho mat…….

  17. its amazing vini….
    unite swasan asap plzzz…

  18. Seriously Vini, I cried literally.. It was amazing.. Waiting for nxt part…

  19. I was so absorbed in it …. you are a magnificent writer. …hats off to you

  20. Di you are an extraodinary writer super.di im still crying and i cant see what im writing .u just conveyed it beautifully and emotionally .yar plzz unite my swasan.sanskar know that they love each other unconditionally but cant be together is the pain that no ones heart can hold it .its a very difficult pain to bear .plz realease sanskar from this pain .its a request di.and again thank u for this wonderful episode

  21. Hi niti…yes prctce…
    JOYA di aap kitne acche likhte ho yarrrr???….sach me aap bhttt cuutteeee hooo….

    Vinita m fine dr
    …n 2din tk holiday h…n mnday se clg wk??

    1. thanks yr rups……..tumne padha yr…..thanks….

  22. hello vini..i was silent reader till now..but i hv not missed any single epi of ur ff..i like ur ff very much..this epi was very heart touching n emotional..i cried today also..i agree with Niti..u r awesome writer..i hv seen that u guys used to chat also..joya..Niti..shradhdha..rupshikha..vinita..good to see that being stranger u guys hv shared many things about yourself..plz unit swasan soon..

    1. hey kriya,
      welcome in group chatting………..
      we r not strangers…… we r a Reader friends of vini di’s ff…..
      m i ri8 di????????

      1. I agree with u joya!!!! It all started with Vini di’s ff its like this necklace where in we all are pearls n the string is Vini di n her ff….. How are u all I saw epi 28 29 today Oh God so amazing? hello kriya nice name u got BTW tc……..

    2. hii kriya..ye bhi koi pu6 ne ki bat hai..i agree wid joya..we r readers friends..wow shradhdha kya likha hai yar..necklace n pearls…cha gaye guru..

      1. Thanks niyati yaar mujhe sachi me aiss he lagta hai? hum sab dost bangaye jaise ek grp form hogaya unki ff ke waje se na sooo… Phir CA madamji kyya haal chal hai,?

  23. I just read reply for my previous ff comment u dont want to plead to read ur ff its me pleading to u to more ff in a day .ya plzzzzz

  24. thank you so much vini for this beautiful n lovely ff..school life..friendship..family supports..clg life..maturity of characters..unconditional love of swasan..raglak cute love..these all things were beautifully described..i hv thought to comment many time..now at last i hv commented here..mindblowing job dear..hope you and ur army will allow me to enter in ur group chating..

  25. Really ausm mindblowing…veeeryyy emotional yaar…aajj bhii ruladiya yaar mujhee…continue yaar this ws really hrt touching…pure feelings..lv u swasans frevr

  26. super dear

  27. Wooow.
    Nice episode…waiting 4 next part..

  28. I am a silent reader from ur first ff….today I got tears while reading
    Thank u diiii 4 a nice episode

  29. such a heart touching epi..you wrote well. .

  30. Hii Kriyaà….yeh v koi puchne ki baat h kya…koi v aa skte h…plzzz dr…u mst wlcme???

  31. Niti 2mhre dono storyyy bhttt hi cute hhh yar sachme??

    1. ha ha..thanks for reading it dear..hv a nice weekends..

  32. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

    Wow so much comments..I can see new names . Atlast silent readers breaked their silence.

    1. yup..congratulations Di finally you made lots of silent readers to comment on ur ff..

  33. Its really awesome i did nt miss an episode of this series n today its the first tym i commented

  34. dear i had decided to quit up reading bt u know wat ur ff had made me so addicted that here i m again back to read ur ff…nd wat 2 say dear u made me cry…u were as awsm as alwz…luved it…

  35. Hiii di i have no words to express my feelings …it was just awesome u made me cry di..

  36. vini superb epi amd emotional, finally u let us know that sanskar has felt her love and he was in love… but im vry sorry for replying u very late… and nw wts gonna happen in swasan and raglak life… very eager to know….

  37. Oh my God didi I’m so happy for uuu!!! See told u der are sooo many who love u sooooo much now it’s clearly proved? ah now lets see yest I mean day before yest u gave me tonsils n now on top of that ur giving me ice cream softdrink gola n looks like in upcoming episodes u will provide with fried items as well eh? Irada kya hai meri maaa ?? so much pain in just 1 episode mummy??????!!!
    Swaraaaa I pity u my dear but poor sanky is rite in his own way ?
    To start with swara meeting sanjitha(hey BTW nyc name I really liked it never mentioned because u said sankys gf though I knew she’s not still had sm kind of ? feeling lol…..) Well I can imagine what swara must ve felt the moment sanju stepped out of car poor girl!!! But swara is such a nice person in spite of her pain she told such lovely things to sanjita brave girl!!!! N dat ring she gave I was like ddii stop it ? I hardly new what’s gonna come next n the way swara spoke to sanskaar I gotto know u ve made ur mind to make us cry again Wen she said am so silly no u would wish to spend all ur lives with her… …. Dat was it I started
    ? how many give reply the way she did ….
    N den came major pain till now I was feeling dat poor swara felt heart break now I was feeling oh God he has an option of choosing her but he’s letting her go ? cheating he deserves happiness how much more should he suffer……

    Sanjita spoke so well looks like wer ever sanky goes he just spreads happiness makes friends for life…. Really the way u portray him is just fantastic….. It was so good to see their friendship the way he said sanju hoe sweet!!!

    Oh God didi why do u write in so much depth ? sanky convo with his best friend is soooo deep the way he address it entire conversation gave goosebumps u know?? how can smbody be so good till now was feeling bad for swara but every time I read him addressing her as “My swara” I felt soooo bad? I can’t tell you all those lines That he spoke” i wish idied rite now but cant no ” ” i am tired i am tired” ” felt she was born for me??” every moment spent with her made me feel we were destind to be together “” her name was attached to every dream tthat i saw” his misery his dad’s condition his helplessness his selflessness? no words to describe! I’m so touched n den how he spoke to God” no complaints no demands ” have I ever complained no no?” N this one ” BIGGEST PAIN IS LOOSING MY SWARA” how can smbody love sm1 this selflessly ??? His unconditional love for her touched my heart !!!! Bravo didi u truely are a great narrator!!!?? i ve ni words to tell u how much I love u n ur ff!!!?? just glad that u wrote this 1

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