Swasan fan fiction (Season 2 ) episode 27

Hi guys,this is the 27th episode,before reading further just keep something in your mind,our lead pairs are SWASAN and Raglak and it is confirmed,I had thought to put separate pairs for Ragini and Laksh and keep Raglak as just friends,but I am not going for it,so even if I introduce some really stupid twists,please keep it in mind that it is Swasan and Raglak,here we go………

Scene 1:Next day evening,5 pm

Swara waiting for Sanskar at Pops and Corns ice cream parlour,Sanskar comes and sits opposite to her,he asks her “What happened Swara,why you wanted to meet me?,that too,without informing Raglak,”,Swara says, “actually will you come with me to a place?,it is not far from here,I got permission and dad allowed to take the car,so we can return early,”Sanskar is in thoughts, “Swara,I don’t have any problem in accompanying you,but are you alright?,you look really tensed,is everything ok”?Swara says, “Actually,I will tell u na,let us reach that place first,She walks towards the car,Sanskar asks for the keys,he drives and in between looks at her,he notices her restlessness…

Scene 2:Temple, a little away from town

Sanskar comes out,Swara joins him,there is a mild breeze,it is a little dark,temple is a little crowded,Sanskar follows Swara,Swara pays money and gets a receipt and a packet,she goes in front of the idol,she balances her bag,the packet that she just received and folds her hands and prays,Sanskar joins her,in between the prayers,he looks at her,her hair is flowing with the mild breeze ,he notices that she is immersed in prayers,he keeps looking at her,she opens her eyes and sees him,he smiles and asks, “any special list to be placed before him,what happened to you yaar?”,Swara responds, “yes,not a special list,it is the only thing for which I have always asked God,today also ,same”she walks towards the pond at a side,people are seated on the ghat,some are offering prayers standing on the last stairs,

Sanskar suddenly notices the other side,water surface has many floating elongated piece of Banana stem and two lighted diyas each on it,multiple numbers are floating in the water,he looks at Swara and sees the same items in the packet she collected,Swara takes him to that side,they stand at the last steps,she makes him hold two pieces of banana stem in his both hands,she keeps the diyas on top of it,fills oil and lights it,Sanskar sees her face glowing in the background of four lighted diyas,Swara tells him, “they wont allow these from outside,but the ones we buy from here,it floats as there wont be any cracks on it,it is a special ritual,will you join me?”,Sanskar looks at the people around,all are prayerfully and carefully placing it on the surface of the water,Swara takes one set from his hands and goes ,they look at each other and does the ritual,gets up,Swara looks lovingly into his eyes where as Sanskaar looks away ignoring that….

Scene 3:Swara and Sanskar are seated on the steps leading to the water

Sanskar tells Swara, “it is such a beautiful site,lots of floating lights,uniform size and shape,beautiful,thank you for bringing me here,I didn’t know such a ritual was there,”,Swara smiles and looks at him and says, “actually Sanskaar,it is offered on all Thursdays,don’t know the relevance of the day but it is usually for some special intention,I am doing this for the first time,actually,Sanskaar….one minute”,she opens her bag and takes a bunch of roses, Sanskar looks at her in surprise,she gives it to him and continues, “do you remember these,I mean,do u have any idea from which plant this is,you remember,a blue pot which you had painted after me planting a branch?,it went missing later,before that once when I visited your home,accurately speaking ,when you had told about changing school,the next day,you had gone for science quiz,we had come home,I walked in the garden and saw the pot painted blue ,

I asked Meera and took a branch from it and a fistful of soil from the same pot,I didn’t have any idea that it will grow ,but it did,every year I added one pot extra and planted one branch,these are 12 roses,it denotes 12 years,we met as 13 yr old kids,now going to be 25,actually,I don’t know know how to put it in words,Sanskar,you remember you took leave for many days because of chicken pox,that time I missed you like hell,I didn’t understand that feeling clearly,but since then,the only purpose of my life has been……..loving you…..Sanskar looks at her,he looks into her eyes,she looks into his and says, “yes ,you heard it right,have been loving you,silently,all these years,wanted to tell you,but,I know everything about you,I would not have told you this now also,but,parents have brought a proposal,dad’s partner’s son,(she mentions all details about Akshay and continues ),I know your situation and responsibilities,I am ready to wait any number of years,but to escape from this and similar proposals,please talk to my parents,all I need is a word,I will happily wait for any number of years after that ,until your debts,Meera’s wedding,everything is over…”

Sanskar looks at her and says, “Swara,I am sorry,I don’t know how to tell you this,12 years,I know what I am going to say will break your heart,Swara,I am in love with my college mate,actually,her parents wont agree,so ,no one else knows about it,silent love,but I have promised her that I will marry her,she will leave for U.S next week,she is coming to meet me tomorrow,I know Swara,what you will be feeling,please forgive me,I am very sorry”,Swara is looking unbelievably at him,she is struggling to believe what she just heard,she feels like the whole world around is shaking,she tries to calm herself but sits there with folded hands….Sanskar sits near her and softly calls “Swara…”,Swara doesn’t look at him but softly says, “I thought you would have understood my love even if I haven’t told,you haven’t given any hints but your presence has always made me feel something which Laksh or any other boy hasn’t,I thought the way my heart understood all what you wanted to tell even when you were away,you would be feeling mine,but,now ,I don’t know(she holds her forehead ),she quickly looks at him and says, “are you saying a lie?,to keep me away,I am getting a feel like that ,if yes,don’t do it to me Sanskaar,I told,no?I will wait for you,any number of years,please,don’t lie,I beg you”

He holds her hand and says, “Swara listen to me,you remember a promise you made ,out of our friendship,you will listen to anything that I say”,Swara looks at Sanskaar in shock and says, “Please Sanskaar,don’t ask me anything,please,I want to see your girl,only then I will believe,you told she is coming tomorrow,no?I want to meet her,then only I will believe,I used to understand you but now I don’t now anything,can’t believe your words,don’t know why,heart is not accepting,”Sanskar takes her hands in his and tells her, “I need a promise from you ,I know it is cruel but I need it,you are my very dear friend,my best friend I would say,Swara I will bring her tomorrow,but promise me ,after meeting her,you will agree to this marriage with Akshay”,Swara looks at him in shock,tears roll down her cheeks,she shakes her head and tells him , “Please Sanskar,don’t ask for such a promise,my heart cant take it anymore,

please,you don’t want me,ok,but,please don’t force me,how can I?,Sanskar holds her hands tightly and says, “Swara,he is a very nice guy ,that is what I feel after hearing what you said,your family also likes him,more than that Mukesh uncle and aunty knows them,Swara it will be a little difficult to love a new guy but it will heal your heart,you may take some time to love him,but certain things,when destiny interferes,it will be because,those things are meant to be like that,you were born to be Akshay’s girl,I feel so,for the sake of our friendship,promise me now,that,you will agree ,yes,after meeting Sanjitha tomorrow,ok,(he insists,goes on convincing her,Swara is in tears,her tells her that he will get engaged to her silently before she leaves to U.S,only if she agrees to marry Akshay,he makes her promise out of her love and friendship,Swara finally nods a yes unwillingly)

Scene 4:Swasan reaches Swara’s home

Sanskar comes out,Swara doesn’t look into his eyes,she asks him to come inside and have supper,he tells her that he has to leave as it is late,Swara tells him that Shambu uncle will leave him,he looks at Swara and tells her that he will manage that and again asks pardon for breaking her heart,he goes from there ,Swara stands there motionless,tears roll down her cheeks,she keeps staring at him leaving and runs to her room after he left,she goes and stands in front of Shekhar’s photo,she goes and after locking the door,comes back and hugs Shekhar’s photo and weeps bitterly, she tells him, “God didn’t listen inspite of me and you telling him daily,no,Papa?why ,life is doing like,this,the only hope that kept my spirits alive is this and now,I feel don’t have anything to live for Papa,

I am so dependent on my love for him,I cant accept it that he has promised somebody else,I don’t know if he will bring the girl tomorrow,but this time,I have lost all my hope,heart says,he will bring his girl,I don’t have the guts to meet them but I have to,and you heard no?he made me promise that I will move on,I know that he is doing it because he cares for me,because he thinks that if I get a partner,I will forget him,but will I be able to forget him Papa?,come and hug me,Papa,I am alone ,my soul is being stabbed…..please Papa,if he brings his girl tomorrow,I have to agree to what mom and dad told,I don’t know why I agreed to Sanskar when he made me promise,I am a fool Papa,I will do anything for him,he wants me to do this but ……….she moves her hand on the photo and falls down,sits on the floor and leans on to the wall and weeps bitterly………….

Credit to: Vini(Veena)


  1. Nandini

    omg dear back after maby days and u…..u literally made me cry….was missing your ff very badly….but need nxt update soon…

    • Vini

      Oh,this ff made u cry,never thought it will be touching cos I typed it in a hurry..Glad to read that u felt it..yes it is Swasan but not very easily.

  2. abi

    i think sanky s lying nd that too mukesh would have been asked him to do so…..its just my thought…..ur ff s very nice….i luved it….pls update ur nxt part soon….

  3. Seeba

    This is d first time, I make comment… I was silent reader..but today I am crying…o god..how painful…but i ferl tat mukesh(swara father) took promise from sanskar…bcz he made promise during his fathet’s treatment…sanskar is doing this purposely…

    • Vini

      It is truly overwhelming to c new names and to know that there are silent leaders,now I honestly feel,once, if all silent readers posted a comment,may be wen it is the last episode,if all silent readers spoke up ,ff writers can know how many were actually reading,ah,I am.very happy to read your comment, thank u,pls keep reading.

    • Vini

      Thanks yr,u r a true Raglak fan,glad to c that,if episode demands, surely there will be Raglak scenes…

  4. Nidhi

    Vini, todays episode is very nice , very emotional, i m crying while reading this. She loves him from 12 years how can he do that with her after knowing all about her feelings, I think there is no girl. swara is right. He loves her thats why doing all this or may b i m wrong. Dont know..but your story us superb, really amazing..please dear upload next part soon.. Waiting for nxt..

    • Vini

      Hei dear.Now ,your name n greyish green emblem is familiar,I never though u all will feel it,cos wen I sat to type,all I had in my mind was Swara will say n Sanky will reject,then parlour,temple,return n all ,just rushed n posted,so glad that it touched u all,pls keep reading, I repeat ,it is very simple n quite predictable,I agree,but to know how it will shape up,pls do read…

  5. priyanshi

    This was heart touching i was so engrossed in it ….hats off to your writing skills. Also you will have to give some scenes where sanskar is jealous

    • Vini

      Thank u for the good words yaar,urs is a new name under my ff,glad to see that,Sanskar is Mr.Perfect n jealousy we saw in Laksh ,no?so here….?,pls keep reading ..

    • Vini

      Hei Shanaya,good to see u bk,thank u dr,didn’t imagine u all will feel this episode,wished u all did but wasn’t satisfied with what I wrote…

  6. U r amazing!!!
    But this episode hurts lot sissy!!!
    I do no why while reading ur story im not feeling swasan in my mind I consider has its between normal boy n girl and happens in real so I cant able digest this episode!!!
    Ur this story line is realistic sissy!!!!
    Male have responsibility but always female will be noble than male!!!!
    For sure I wont get peaceful sleep today coz im reading only 1 or 2 ff during my time!!!!
    But hats off to u for showing ur thought has real which makes everyone feel!!!!
    Love u loads sissy!!!

    • Vini

      Oh thank u dear,realistic?God ,then,surely u will be disappointed with the upcoming episodes,and sorry for hurting u all thru this ff,very happy to see u bk,keep in touch dear.

  7. sonu

    just awesome yaar, u nailed it
    u made me cry
    my heart beating fast, i can’t wait for next update
    please upload it today
    it’s a big reaquest to u in pleading tone please….pleazz…….please upload it today

    • Vini

      Hei yaar,pleading tone?sorry,I couldn’t post next one yesterday,shall do it today,thanks for commenting, urs s a new name,glad to c that,Good to know that u all felt it,honestly,didn’t expect this much comments…

  8. Shraddha

    Well I was kind of expecting this since u commented yest its not going to be rose beds…. I am so moved today? mummy!ahha??????????????? swaraaaaa I can feel ur pain????? OK I’m not going in details today u rem I said I get involved engrossed actually so obviously I’m crying write now n metioning abt evwey scene will make it harder? but for the 1st time I was like didi why the hell are u sooooo good at expressing emotions it just hits u so hard directly like ur just awesome ssly…..I’ll tell I read all other ffs den came to urs because I was so damn nervous to know his reaction I used to read a line n like look here n there like omg what’s gonna happen next den finally I came to his line n I was mum… N it hit me even more harder wen she said I’m not able to believe u poor girl I’m feeling miserable for her ???? But don’t u dare start this oh its simple stupid line blablabla because this is so damn interesting I’m not mentiong scenes because it bothers me sorry ? told u know that day (monjolika my bro calls me so sorry) but ur doing fabbbbb job I’m so interested for further tracks n 1 request as a fan I’m sure all SwaSan fans are gonna start bombarding Qs like is he really committed or pretending etc even I’m eager as a reader but don’t leak anything whatever u ve planned go with it like fans are gonna pressurize but do as u ve planned OK? just thought to tell This I’m sorry for no analysis but u know lol ROFL I’m feeling as if I ve been rejected????? anyways u rock !!! N ik future tracks gonna rock as well?tc!

    • Vini

      Shraddha baba, u r an emoticon queen,extravagance of that,and I will shoot you if u use the word fan,story,what to leak my dear,quite predictable,no?ah,u should read OK, I am not saying anything since u told me not to use certain words,and I didn’t expect this response from u all because,ah,I wished u all felt while reading but honestly didn’t expect that it will touch u all,so happy that it got conveyed, mine can bring tears,oh,never thot so,u feel like u have been rejected,seriously,was it so convincing to the reader?didn’t imagine even, thank u my dear n monjolika ,oh.dat brought a smile…

      • Shraddha

        Hawwww u will shoot me???:/ lol well it’s quite clearly visible u ve soooo many fans n I’m 1 among them! Stop being modest ya Ms topper 😉 :p n regarding emoticon yea u see this is 1 more thing why I call rupshikha my sister 🙂 😀 I feel if u use them what exactly is my expression u will get to know so I use dem a Lott…. Hahaha den regarding the scenes n the track oh my god convincing enough ur asking me???? I am telling u I was literally imagining each n every scene n it’s description is sooo clear that there’s no way I could ve escaped from being touched ,…. Really it was extremely well written or should I say conveyed really fab!!!! I u say urs can bring tears for that I would completely agree with Niyatis comment on previous episodes she’s written probably all emotions with descriptions I totally agree with her u really do dat!

  9. Meghs

    Oh sanky breaked swara heart … I am crying feeling pain she felt .. She lost the one whom she loves from12 years…
    Don’t do this yar unite swasan soon….

    • Vini

      Don’t worry dear,swasan will be united but not so soon,I haven’t planned the scenes,all I know is that journey won’t be very smooth…hope u all will keep reading.

  10. bhagi

    vini u made me cry baby even i wont cry by seeing any show bt without visualisation by only narration u made ne cry…….and no sanky cannot do this to swara how could he i think he is doing this for swara’s well being nd i think may be mukesh made him do so bec sanky also promised to mukesh once that he will do anything for him i dnt know yar its really painfull

    • Vini

      Hei dear,u all remember still remember those scenes,unbelievable,mainly cos,I am not getting time to read other ff’s but u guys read many n still remember certain scenes,I never thot this episode will gain this much response, m happy reading your comments, my ff could makebu cry,oh,then it s a compliment.. Cos I never expected.

      • bhagi

        yah vinni i read so many ff’s bt ur ff is some what different frm others bt plz yar i had a request plz make swasan one dnt drag it ha am nt saying abt marriage bt just clear their mis understandings thats it

      • Vini

        Hei dear, this story is like that ,swasan united means,story almost over,so I hope u will understand me,even I don’t know what all I am going to type,so hope u all will bear me…

  11. Niti

    oooooohhhhmmmmmgggghh….!!!!!! vini Di.
    u made me cry badly..my tears r unstoppable even now also…after reading this epi..me 10-15 min yoo hi ankhe bandh karke bethi thi..after that also right now while writing this comment i hv teary eyes..
    i feel really disturbed after reading about swara’s helplessness..

    sanky got idea about swara’s restlessness immediately after seeing her..then they go to temple..i love that u choose temple for shona’s confession..the whole temple moments starting from taking packet for Pooja to place diya in pond were very nicely written..sanky looks shona while she was praying god..made butterflies in my stomach..then swara ka kehna ki mene vahi manga Jo last 12 years se mangti hu..sanky ka diye k light me swara ko dekhna..uff i feel restless by this time to read about swara’s confession n sanky’s reaction..each n every word of swara’s confession was very heart touching..u know without reading about sanky’s reaction..tears were start forming in my eyes..then the worst thing happen..sanky rejected shona’s selfless love of 12 years..i can imagine swara’s condition at that time..”pyar hai ya saza a mere dil bata..tutata kyu nahi dard ka silsilla” this songs is for shona..but i love the way sanky refuse her proposal..he very politely console her n make her understand about the situation..he was right at his place..i don’t know why but i feel sanky is doing this for shona’s better future..as he know that he can’t keep swara happy due to his financial condition n akshay can give her happy n safe life..whatever it may be but swara is suffering..he took promise from swara also..swara ka shekhar k photo ko hug karke rona..i was litterly wiping when swara spoke that my prayers..does not reach to god..very very emotional episode…

    i used to listen songs on fm while reading ff..by chance while reading this epi..humari addhoori kahani was playing on radio mirchy..so i got more emotional as i was listening perfect bg..what a co incidence..!!

    vini Di you hv written this epi very beautifully..i hv felt each n every line of this epi..this was the twist..i also hv expected something like this while u hv shown shruti n shona’s conversation..hope swasan will unit soon..just loved the epi..

    • Vini

      Hei dear,u too,cried? I wrote this episode,I agree,but dear,not a single word touched me,but I was demanding ,haha,in the sense, I wanted u all to feel it,but today many new names under comments column,truly overwhelming ,but still,somewhere not able to digest that it was good,the scenes that u mentioned,yes, I wrote it in the same sense,pair,of course our Swasan,will be united for sure,as Shraddha said not going to the details, pls do read,I know u will,and adhuri kahani song,beautiful song,na?I like those kind of songs,my bro used to tell that I have a special liking towards pain filled lyrics,haha.true to an extent,but yea,not jst pain filled..all good music without too much orchestration ,I like,ah,just shared,and dear,regarding CA ,u r preparing for it or studying that?thought to ask..

      • Niti

        me too like soft..sad..romantic..songs more than anything..whenever i feel tired..in need of energy..peace of mind..i prefer to listen soft music..

        Di i am CA final student..my CA Final exam will be in November 2016..i hv cleared entrance exam that is cpt in 2012..then ipcc 2nd stage in 2013..by god’s gress both were in 1st attempt itself..now my CA final is going on of 3years along with my articleship training..n my exam will come in Nov 16..hope n pray that i will clear it also in 1st attempt..i hv never seen failure till now in any kind of my activity..fir chahe vo study ho..music ki exam ho..competitive exam ho ya KATHAK ki exam ho..i completed bcom along with CA study in April 15..plz plz you n everyone here pray for me..as its really very tough..hoping for the best..finger crossed..

      • Vini

        Bhagi ,no dear, I completed my BDS ,u r a CA student?very good,all the best for your studies,if u don’t mind,where are u from?

      • Vini

        Niti dear,m very happy to read that,I have heard my friends saying it is very tough n also celebrating after clearing CPT,u got it in first attempts, ,very good,m too glad to read that,and also regarding other talents,m very happy dea,and sure ,u will be there in prayers,when u pass ur exam,if u remember us that time,if possible,and above all,if u feel like n is ok with it,do let me know,via a fb msg from any a/c ( I mean urs or friends’) that u cleared it successfully.

      • Shraddha

        I was actually feeling thank god joys dint go in detail ki ye Niyatis yaar Pehle he Itna emotional lika didi ne aur tum us parse ek kona Nahi choda oura ka oura episode ka update lika aur me phir se royiii 🙁 🙁 😮 niyati ur so talented yaar ek toh tum ca kar rahi ho upar se ur musical talent n u manage it with other hobbies like reading ff taking time comment !!! Really yaar bohot acha laga Dekh ke!!

  12. shabrin

    So emotional I think maybe mukesh did all this to make swara’s life secure and make sanskar promise that he would break swara’s heart

    • Vini

      U liked it? Thanks for commenting yaar,your name n this blue emblem is now very familiar, please keep reading,u will get your answer…

  13. vinita

    Omg di!!!! U made me cry. For some moments I was totally numb . Even I agree with shraddha di even I am feeling rejected.?? your ff is the best!!!!!!!!!! I am reminded of the song Jane woh kaise log thhe jinke pyaar ko pyaar Mila .. . ……
    Exams are going on. Pls pray for tomorrow di.
    Niti di u are absolutely right. Real taste of roshogolla can be only tasted in Kolkata. When u will visit Kolkata inform me iwill tell you the names of all the famous sweet shops .even vini di inform me.

    • Vini

      Hei dear,u also,cried,ah?I can’t believe,what was there in this,I wasn’t satisfied, to be honest, but was lazy to describe also,haha,u guys r feeling rejected,nice, I read msg now,now it 10.45 ,exam should be going on,prayed,ok,hope it will be easy for u all,ok,wen we come,we will contact u ,how?don’t know,haha,then not just shops,we are going to visit your house,u didn’t invite us,angry,angry…haha..??

  14. Appu

    Di so emotional .i just wanna cry.but u said na only swasan.wow conveyed swara’s pain so emotionally.good episode di but cant swara in this state .after all 12 years she have been in love with .its not easy to bear the pain of his rejection.plz unite them plzzzzz

    • Vini

      Yes dear Swasan will be united,even,I don’t know when,let us see,m happy to read that u all could feel this episode,yes 12 yrs,it is difficult though it is only a character but don’t cry,all zz well,no all ‘will be’ well..ok..keep reading .,please.

    • Vini

      Thank u dear,we haven’t talked at all thru comments,still,the support that u give for my ff ,daily,no words, thanks yr..

  15. Omg im very sad aftr reading today epi… becoz though u cleared us the doubt in starting itself im vry sad nd feel bad for swara…. no wrds vini becoz today epi brk my heart… btwn ur epi is good bt im feeling sad… for swara 🙁 :'(

  16. Omg im vry sad vini.. my heart brk aftr reading today epi.. hw cn he do like dat.. im depressed… feel bad for swara.. though u informed early itself nd cleared the doubts but im vry sad… vini im vry sad bt happy dat u have unique writing style… plz post nxt epi fast

    • Vini

      Ok dear,m glad that u could feel what I wrote, I wanted u all to,but wasn’t satisfied with what I wrote, but today’s comments,truly,made me happy,it was typed in a hurry,swasan is our lead,so they have to be united n they will,let us see..Next one,I will post it today,ok…

  17. joya

    mind blowing,marvelous,emotional………………….

    aaj k update ko analysis ki koi jarurat nahi hai…….
    kai silents readers ne bhi kholkar dil,tarif ki hai……..
    har scene,line ko har,describe perfectly kiya hai…
    alfajon ko apke,ruh se sab ne mehsoos kiya hai……..
    sach keh rahe hai aaj bas aap ka hi jadu hum sab pe chhaya hai………
    nakamyab hai aaj tarif karne ki har ek koshish….
    labjo me baya kaise kare is hasin update ki kashish……..

    bdw bahot khubsoorat episode hai yeh….jaise ki kaha ki analyze karne ki jarurat nahi hai….unka milna,pehle ragini ne bhi kaha tha ek bar aur sanskar ne bhi kaha widout informing them…means us jagah pe humesh woh charon milte hai….swara ki condition ko sanskar ka notice karna,mandir me prayer k bich me sanskar ka swara ko dekhna,uski julfon ka udna,wo water surface floating elongated and all…superb….swara ka confeconfession,sanskar ka reply,swara ki us ladki se milne ki zidd,sanskar ka swara se promise lena,unki care,swara ka shekhar ke photo se batiyana,uski halat…..perfect,heart touching, superb…………

    • Niti

      hey dear…kon kehta hai app kalakar nahi ho..app jis tarah words ka ishtemal karte ho wo shayad hi koi kar sakta hai..app poetry or shayari likhte ho ? sach me kya khub likhte ho..aur agar nahi likhte to start kardo likhna..app kavita mast likh shakte ho..eke bar gor jarur karna meri bat par..

      • joya

        thank you yr….pr seriously is tarif k hakdar nahi hai hum…qki humne kai books aisi padhi hai jinke har word se language ki khoobsurti mehsoos hoti hai….
        tumhari baaton pe gaur kar ke koshish jarur karenge dear……
        aap kehna jaruri hai??????????

        tumhe ek baat sach bataye to salasa,jazz,contemporary, hip hop,Bollywood dance form ko hum pehchan sakte hai lekin koi bhi classical me means bhartanatyam,kathak me kabhi fark samj nahi aaya humne……..bus dekhkar sukun milta hai…

    • joya

      i m really fool bcz i forgot to mention about phool (roses…)
      i really like dt 12 saal ka rishta and 12 roses…….

      hey vinita and niti,
      thank you guys…………….i will try to write………

      hey vini di,
      i m reading dis again…….
      i can feel her entreaty and distress….ur writing skill are superb….

    • Vini

      First I read Vinita,Niti n your reply comments before reading this first comment of yours,before going to what u liked,u r reading this again,ok,then,I should read this once more,I don’t use any magical words,it s like a written update if what I watched in a very simple language,still,u all are liking it,so kind of u all to support me like this,thank u my dear,and coming to your comment,you are a writer yaar,I hate others telling that they are my fans,I mean of my ff,but from heart m telling u,previous ff n under this also,u have written many beautiful lines,and I mean it ,m a fan of your writing, be it a single line or many rhythmic lines,u r amazing girl,agree with Niti n Vinita,u should write n I repeat ,I mean it,m not active in fb but I do check it on alternate days at least ,so even after this ff is completed,if u write ,should let me know via an fb message or should sent what u write thru email..I mean it…

      • joya

        simple language is more effective than magical words……..
        means i believe in that…………

        again fan………not fair ha………………
        now i have to hold my head…….
        thanks yr for liking my lines………..

        di jab hum likhenge tab aap sab ko jarur batayenge……..tab kaan mat khinchana haaaaaaa…………….

        7-8 mahine ho gaye hai humne humara fb ka ac open nahi kiya hai……i m also lazy…..more than u di…………

      • Shraddha

        Hey jo yaar Kya lika hai tumhe sachiii bohot Khoob see main phir se Bol rahi hon apnea blog kohl ek toh dekho hit hoga ek dum sachi! Aur abhi toh tum hare yeh Hunar dekh ke lagta hai ki tum “PRINTF , SCANF” ke saath bhi ache se likh sakti ho!!!!! Hahah but on serious note yeh wale comments me jo likha hai na tumne bohot sundar likha hai!!!

  18. Shona

    dr vini till now I was a silent reader ur ff is best but 2day u simply made me cry pls don’t do tis I luv swasan don’t separate them they r d best I can understand what swara might be feeling as same happened with me pls add another twist but not this pls pls pls…

    • Vini

      Hei,thanks for commenting,it happened to you?,sad to read that,hope u have moved on n is happy now,swasan is our pair n will be united for sure,pls keep reading.

  19. Prit

    Oh God!!! Dii u nailed it…. Love this…i m crying while reading….plz update next soon…awaiting yours…

    • Vini

      Is this ur first comment under my ff?thanks yr,m glad to know that u could feel it,yes,next one,today n don’t worry ,Swasan will be united,,pls keep reading to know when and how…

  20. sumi

    vini di.. when I got to knw that sanskaar is in love wid someone else than.. I am hurted more than swara (literally not more than swara) but yeh its mukesh who is doing this all.. #expected. #finger_crossed

    • Vini

      Oh ,very happy to read that most of u felt what u read in this episode, means, it was conveyed, thank u for this support n comment,pls keep reading to know the rest…

  21. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

    U made me cry…its a heart breaking episode.. Though u said on start of ff its only swasan.. still am restless..swara’s emotions touch my heart..its like am rejected.. Oh god I can feel the same pain..
    12 years 12 roses..hook
    I think sanskar may know that swara will propose him..and he is just acting..bz if Mukesh? .. Ys he gave promise to Mukesh wen his dad was hospitalized..damm sure sanskar knows everything and he intensionally rejected her.. bz he didn’t hide anything from his best friends then how it possible to hide his love relationship wid someone rite?
    U r awesome vini..hats off u..for this episode and for this tears in my eyes..

      • Vini

        Haha,ennum comment cheyyunna kurachu perodu story parayaan budhmuttundayittalla but Pinne ithinakathu baakki onnum kaanathilla…yea,we will go with the flow,we will see where ,what ,how n when of this story ,togther ..leave ?hope health is fine,Num of comments ,no probs,u mean u r an emotional person or just today u feel so?simply asked dear,I am very surprised to see many silent readers were there.Didn’t expect yaar..yea,auto correct is a problem, I had not proof read this episode,from first line there are mistakes,usually though not word by word, I go thru it before posting …

    • Vini

      Oh I made u cry,sorry dear,if I had not mentioned it in the start,now I think ,it is good that I did that, or else many would have hot me thru comments,then yaar,as Shraddha tol,not mentioning anything,u will read,no?to know how ,what n when in our swasan’s livea.,Haha,even I don’t know,story in 5 sentence is there in my mind n I call it one line but scenes, hope it will come with the flow….

      • sethulakshmy (sethooty)

        Actually these things r came in my mind automatically..I dont want any anw and justification ..njan ee episode vayichu othiri time kazhinjanu comment cheythe..njan paranjilae its made me cry..hmm, I agreed with shradha.. don’t need to tell anything u planned..as we like to go with flow..
        Innu leave anu athondu ente comments daralam Kanum..haha..actually njan highly emotional anu ..

    • Vini

      Sam,is it your first comment?thanks for the same, swasan is our pair n they will be united, how,where n when?,pks keep reading..

  22. nik

    Suppprrrvvvv di. I think whatever sanskar told swara were not his words n sm1 is behind all this. I think its swaras father mukesh .

    • Vini

      Hei Nik,m happy to c u here,oh,u guessed like that,pls keep reading,quite predictable it is ,no?still,hope u will read to know if guesses are 100% right or wrong..

  23. Vry emotional…2day u made me cryyyy di???…vry bad ha???…awesome awesome awesomeeeee epi…n i think sanky ki koi gf nhi h…wo sirf swara ko apne aap se dur rkhne ke liye ye sab kr rhi h

    • Vini

      Hei Mickey dear,where were u?missed u,haha,u became emotional,thank God it worked, I didn’t expect this response,and u will read na to know the turn of events,and u too have a nice day n we will keep smiling as u said,u also should…Mickey mouse like smile..☺☺

  24. shani

    …I read ur ff very day..I’m adictaed to ur ff…thank u for rplying to my commet.
    .it means a lot to me..keep writing
    ..all the best..

    • Vini

      Oh I see,humbled and honoured dear,yea,sure,hope u will keep reading as well, don’t know if it will disappoint u all,tc,keep in touch,even if there will be a delay,under this second season of ff ,m trying to respond to all comments,because readers taking the trouble to pause n leave a feed bk,should appreciate that,so…

  25. needhi

    Hi vini di, just amzing episode.u made me cry.u always say u r not a good writer but truhfully speaking i read all ff but i never cried and never felt touched but your ff has the power to ooze out tears from my eyes .Hatsoff to u.this was the best proposal in the world. 12 roses ,diyas and swaras words made this love confession out of the world.i feel so attached to this ff.The way u described each and every emotion i think u had a love marriage.sorry for being personal.Di its just a figment of my imagination that sanky is madly in love with her.i am saying this becuse when swara looked into his eyes he completely ignored it as if trying to hide his emotions and i have noticed in several other episodes also that he keeps on looking at her .in 1 episode he himself said that he has a love life ,he will inform her first.awesome episide ,just loved it.its worth reading.

    • Vini

      Hahaha,no dear,mine was a 100% arranged marriage through a matrimonial site ,and very frankly,I have no experience of a love before marriage,my hubby is my first love,God brought him directly at the right time,I believe so.

      • Vini

        Thank u dr for your comment,good to see u bk,I thought u had stopped reading, u r in XII ,no?busy with exams,ah?then ,glad to read that u liked this episode,happy to know that u had noticed small small moments in previous episodes,I m not a good writer dear,but if somebody writes,I think I can shoot it cos when I write though I don’t describe using magical vocabulary I visualize them acting,it is like a written update of an episode that I have watched,I know u will be busy with studies but pls do try to read up coming track to know what all I will write..haha..even I don’t know dear..let’s see..

      • needhi

        Oh thats so sweet di.arranged marriage but a perfect one ,right.may god be with u always.love or arranged marriage doesnot matter ,its just happiness that matters and i can sense out thst u r really happy on your life just like swara is nowadays in real swaragini soap.

      • Vini

        Oh,so sweet,yes dear,by God’s grace,yes,happy n thankful,yea,mine was arranged but I know friends who have chosen their batchmates as spouses,they are also happy,so,I beileve ,marriages are made in heaven..

    • Vini

      Yea yea,Sanky character had told so n he told it first to her without telling Raglak,otherwise depth of friendship will be under doubt,friendship bond s strong but as individuals they are different as well…trying to portray it that way,hope it will be justified..

  26. mehera

    Hiii vini how ru ? I’m silent reader of ur story… It is too emotional yaar …. U made me cry today…. Its supb …. Eagerly waiting for ur next update plz do it fast yaar loads of love dear❤?

    • Vini

      Hi Mehera,nice name,m fine ,how r u?oh,thank u,glad to know that u were reading,this is one episode where I got to know that there are many readers for this ff as well,thanks guys,and m happy that u liked it,next one ,today ,by evening,most probably,have to type it,loads of love to u too..keep in touch..hope u will keep reading..

    • Vini

      Oho,so u r enjoying ,good,good,we also want to hear u singing..ok..practice well n perform well,by the way,which type of song?light music??

  27. sethulakshmy (sethooty)

    Vini..next episode painful ano..sanskar us going to introduce his girlfriend to swara..hmm sathyam paranjal enikku eppolum sangadam marilla..u r an amazing writer vini..saba dae oru episode made me restless but athu pranyam onnumalla topic..vere oru level arunnu.
    ..but this time ur writting skill..enikku correct vakkukal kittunilla..situation is very resembles to our life..athayirikkam reason.
    Aarude engilum life il engane oke sambhavichittundakam..ee pain thonnuathu athavam..hmm

    • Vini

      Next one ithe kanakkakumo ennu enikku ariyilla,aavaan chance undu,vaakukal engane varumnnu ariyilla cos type cheythittilla ,oh,thank u dr,but I don’t consider me a writer,Saba ippo e sitel ezhutharille?Pinne aa restless aakiya episode ethayirunnu?onnu vayichu nokkaamnnu thonni, ithu simple aayathu kondavaam relate cheyyaan pattunnathu..namukku ariyavunna arudeyenkilum helplessness pole ,but enikku ingane aareyum parijayamilla,so I don’t know if I will mess up whole thing.

  28. joya

    sab keh rahe hai k mukesh ne sanskar se wo promise liya tha isliye sanskar ne swara ko No bola but hume lagta hai ki mukesh se sanskar ne jo promise kiya tha na mukesh us promise ko sanskar ko yaad dilakar kahi sanskar ko swara se shadi karne k liye kehega……

    • Vini

      Joya beta,u want it that way,hahaha,u all remember the promise n hints more than me…one hug for that n ur guess,haha.,let us see…

  29. sindhuja

    vini chechi, add me too in the crying babies list… oh god!!! read the last two updates in one go…. my eyes were welled up during reading it… i knew it… i knew it that day itself that you are gonna use that promise in future… and one more promise is remaining… the promise between mukesh and sanskar… does the promise do anything with sanskars this behavior?? because, in previous updates, mukesh noticed swara’s feeling towards sanskar… but he loves swara too… so he might not be a hindrance between swasan… but, something is there… i want to know it this instant but i know i can’t happen… so update soon… and i want a flashback for sanskar who wanted to hid his emotions… because we knew swara’s love towards him… want to know sanskar’s feelings too… and, my gut feeling says that sanjitha is his friend who knows more about him… and, the 12 roses scene is superb!!! i loved the way you gave hints in between the updates which didn’t play important role at that time but would play a major role in future track!!! Addicted to your ff!!! thank you so much for making me cry as well as happy with your updates!!!! that is, i hooked up with it!!! I AM WAITING!!!

    • Vini

      Oh u too,so sad ,my ff made u all cry,honestly didn’t expect it this time,all your wishes will be granted,I wish I could tell that,because,even m not sure,what all I will write,oh,thank u for the good words dear,humbled n honoured, u all noticed n remembered the hints,can’t believe, esp because there are so many ff’s in this site,pls keep reading dear n thank u for this support..

  30. Hi vinita m fine dr:) avi avi clg se aayi hu…kvi kvi bht late ho jti h yaarr…NEways xam kaisa rha?

    Diiiiii yes !!light music??…n u knw maine aaj tak dance nhi kya par aaj sb dnce krne ke liye kh rhi h…soch rohi hu kya karruuu.??

    Babyyy shraddha whre r u???aaaj itni shanti Q h bhai???…i missssss urrrrr cuteee cuttee natkhat c baat….

    Ooo di missss uuu

  31. musku

    I m typing for d first time . this episode literally made me cry???.l have never thought of crying after reading a ff.urs one is very emotional n touching …please don’t separate them. Loved it vini di☺☺

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