Swasan fan fiction (Season 2 ) episode 25

Hi guys,it is the 25th episode,last ff’s, 25th episode some reader friend by name ‘ rs’ had reminded, thank you for all the comments and feed back that you’ve given and please don’t think I am underestimating my ff readers or that I am being prejudiced,but,I bet ,many of you will not like the track from now,already many names have vanished from comments column,may be they are busy but I think another reason would be this slow and unexpressed style,but,guys,please don’t think I am being arrogant,when,I started I had told that this is an aimless ff,it is a common track,and I repeat,many may find it similar to familiar scenes,but,this I am not writing for the majority,neither am I writing for positive comments ,I know only a few will stick to this ff till the end…

SWASAN Fan Fiction (season 2) episode 25
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Scene 1:Next day,interval time,college canteen

Swara and Ragini are seated and Swara asks Ragini if Lucky had called her,Ragini shakes her head in a ‘No’,Swara continues, “but his classmates told he is on leave,no?usually,he send sms at least na when he is unwell or something,shall we call him,I had messaged him but no response came,Ragini sips her coffee and tells softly, “actually Swara,you should not go and ask anything to Lucky about this,yesterday he told me that he loves me”,Swara looks at Ragini in surprise and tells her, “seriously,he told,hei,he cant be trusted,ok,he might have told to fool you”,Ragini says, “no Swara,he was very serious and I could see it in his eyes but I didn’t encourage him,I told a straight no,also the person who was sending those chocolates and all had approached Lucky it seems,you know him,Shraavan and he wants a reply in a week it seems”,Swara says, “he,Shraavan,aree,we’ve talked to him,no?

but he had never hinted anything like this ,and so,what are u going to reply to him,also,hearing Shraavan Lucky must have felt the fear of losing you,now the picture is clear…”Ragini replies, “Swara,I have no intention to get committed so early,at school I wasn’t serious about my studies,but now I am working hard,then dance also,want to pursue,if we go for affairs and all now,we should be sincere to that person also ,no?I don’t think I will be able to ,so,I am going to say a no to Shraavan as well,it is all happening very early,better not to encourage”,Swara says, “ok,I know you are sensible,so whatever decision u have made would be after thinking about the pros and cons,so,I am with you,don’t know what Lucky’s attitude will be?”

Scene 2:Next day,college,parking area

Laksh has come early,he is staring at Ragini and Shraavan who are standing downstairs,he feels jealous seeing them together,Ragini and Shraavan have a big smile on their faces where as Lucky stands there struggling to accept them chatting cheerfully,at last,Ragini and Shraavan shakes hands and seeing that Lucky fumes in anger,Ragini comes upstairs after that and sees Lucky and goes near him,he avoids her completely and quickly goes from there,Swara watches this from behind him,Swara comes near Ragini and says, “I think he is angry with you,now how to patch up,ya,?ah,only relief is Sanky is coming this weekend,no?he may find a solution,Ragini says, “leave it Swara,let me see for how many days he will avoid me”,they leave from there…

Scene 3:After two days,college

Lucky is seated in the canteen,Ragini and Swara walks in,Swara smiles and waves a hai whereas Laksh doesn’t look at Ragini but waves at Swara,he is seated with a new gang,there are two girls and two boys with him,Ragini and Swara are seated on the other side,they can easily see Lucky’s table from there,they see him chatting happily with his new gang,he shows as though he is very close to the two girls,Swara gets angry seeing his actions ,she turns and looks at Ragini who has an expressionless face,Swara tells her, “yaar,I am losing my patience,what is this boy doing?,for the past two days,he gives me a hai for name sake,usually sends some stupid sms and now totally avoiding us,let Sanky come,should give him good”.

Ragini smiles and says, “chill Swara,why to raise our BP,he is behaving like that to show me,seeing me unaffected,he is showing off more,you leave it,it is a friendship of more than 10 years between Sanlak and me,eversince you came,we were one loyal gang,so do you think he can forget all that and form a new gang,he will come,I am sure,this is just a show,no?let baba enjoy”,Swara looks at Ragini and then gives a smile and says,”ya,true”

Scene 4:Weekend,Pops and Corns Parlour,around 4 pm..

Swasanraglak are seated ,Laksh and Ragini are ignoring each other,Swara starts the conversation, “I had called Sanky and he has an idea about what happened last week and you Lucky,what wrong did I do to avoid me completely,also Ragini,we know she is very frank,she told you frankly,you are her friend,no?why cant you understand her”,Swara turns to Sanky and continues, “You know Sanskar,I was literally going mad between these two,cold war has a limit,no?one is unaffected as though she has come from another planet,other is acting too smart with all the girls in college,I am fed up,today ,you should find a solution”,Sanskar says, “Hei Lucky and Rags,what is all this,why so much relevance to this matter,and you Lucky,you were always against a serious relationship during student life,then why all this?

Ragini says, “I don’t have any problem with him,I still consider him my friend,he is not able to understand me,what can I do?,Laksh gets angry and says, “friend it seems,then,why cant she understand me,yes,I was against,but I don’t know when I started loving this idiot,wen that Shraavan came and told,I felt disturbed,she wont understand,I couldn’t imagine her being with somebody else,it is because I want her ,because I love her,and you both,,supporting her,yea,she had shaked hands and agreed to Shraavan ,I saw,and now you four be a gang,Lucky is an idiot ,no?,I will be alone,no problem,I am going,”he gets up to go,then quickly sits down and says, “And you Ragini,it is so embarrassing to prove my love in front of others,but swasan are like my family,so

I don’t care they are here,just understand one thing,I told you in a hurry,but that doesn’t mean I am not serious,I love you means,I love you and I cant accept you with any Shraavan,but,,I cant change your decision,so here we will part ways,good bye” he gets up and goes from there,Sanskar and Swara looks at each other helplessly,where as Ragini shows the same unaffected expression,Sanskar tells Ragini, “Hei,u know you are like my Meera for me,I am not trying to influence you,it is your life and I know you will make a right decision but Lucky is so sensitive,try to be a little kind to him instead of totally ignoring him,at least talk to him softly…

Scene 5:Bar

Sanskar received a call from a mutual friend of his and Lucky’s,he reaches the place,he finds Laksh drunk and creating trouble to others,Sanskar and the other friend supports him and brings him outside,Sanskar thanks his friend and stands near Lucky and thinks to himself,”how to take him in bike,should hire a cab,but if uncle and aunty sees him like this”,he quickly calls the same friend and asks him if he can let both Lucky and him be in in his flat for a night,friend readily agrees,just then Sanskar receives a call from Ragini,she asks him if he is out,Sanskar unknowingly replies, “yea,this Lucky” …and stops,Ragini asks him,”what happened to him,tell me the truth,?”Sanskar tells the situation and asks her not to inform parents,Ragini asks for the spot and reaches there in her two wheeler,it is around 6.30 pm,she hides her disappointment seeing Lucky like that, she goes near him, Lucky looks at her and says, “drank like hell to forget her face but still that devil is coming in front of me and staring,hei,Sanky,I hate her,I hate her”,suddenly he holds his head with both hands and says, “no yaar,I love her a lot,cant hate her,tried a lot this week but…”,Ragini kneels down before him and says, “so I am devil and I am staring at you,yes I am staring at you and you are not dreaming,now,you are not in your senses,we will talk tomorrow” she turns to Sanskarr and says, “,Sanky tomorrow afternoon,lunch outside,bring him there,I will inform Swara as well”,she suggests the restaurant and goes from there…

Scene 6:Restaurant,next day

It is a good restaurant but it is not at all crowded,it is afternoon,all four have gathered around a table which Ragini had booked,Laksh is embarrassed and is struggling to hide it,he simply keeps hitting on the table with the spoon,Ragini quickly holds his hand and takes the spoon and tells him, “tabala practice ,we will do it later,now,for everybody’s kind information,I haven’t accepted any Shraavan’s proposal,and Lucky,this is not a film,it is life,you will get drunk,flirt with girls,form new gangs,to make me jealous,do you think it will affect me,sorry,but it didn’t, I am a little practical,you are the elder son,uncle is about to retire in a few years,do u have any idea about your responsibilities ?,also your academics,I need not tell you where you stand,so,this is not the time to love,first study well,pass with a proper grade,do a pg,then,that time if this love remains unaltered,I will think about accepting it,

Laksh gets excited and gets up from his seat and hugs Ragini,Swara and Sanskar bursts into laughter hearing and witnessing the whole thing,Ragini softly hugs Laksh and then meaningfully pats him and says,”you remember,na?exams are fast approaching,so instead of getting excited,go and study after this lunch,also,I haven’t agreed ,I only told that I will think about it.”Sanskar and Swara both keeps laughing where as Laksh is super excited and says, “where is the menu card,Oh,I am very hungry,all these days ,was struggling yaar”,Ragini tells, “but who is going to pay the bill,me ,no?so no need to be so excited”,Laksh shows an angry face and says, “I will pay,shut up now”,Ragini looks at him lovingly which swasan doesn’t notice,Laksh understands but pretends as if he didn’t notice it…

Credit to: Vini(Veena)

125 comments

  1. Vinita

    Hi Niyati di!!!!!! How are you??????
    Happy makar sankranti!!!!!!!!!
    So you enjoyed kite flying.
    What dishes did you prepare???
    Heard that many dishes like khaman dokhla khandvi and shrikhand are prepared during this festival.

    Hi Sheetal di!!!! I am fine. How are you???
    glad to know that u like retro songs
    and ghazals. My mom and me are

    fans of old Hindi songs. During free
    time we both listen to these songs
    and frankly speaking I think that old
    Hindi songs , ghazals are much better
    than honey Singh. The lyrics of old Hindi songs are so meaningful
    aur wo sab dil ko Chu jati hai. Actually I like any music which is soothing and h heart touching but old Hindi songs ghazals and rabindrasangeet are my personal favourites .

    • Niti

      hii vinita dear..i am super fine..what abt u ? happy makarsankaranti..
      ya i hv enjoyed a lot..we all cousins n elders also hv lots of fun..u know we all family member may meet or may not meet on other festivals..even we r not that much crazy about diwali also..but for kite flying we are mad about it..not only we children n youngster but elders also..we just rocked this 2 days..two days fully in terrace..at night Dj party on tarace..much dinner on tarrace..n what not..we do masti like hell..ya we prepared many dishes like Dhokala..khadvi..patra..panipuri..sev-usal..the makarsankaranti special UNDHIYU..(its kind of mix vegetable shabji)..n lots other..one more thing please don’t tell anyone..keep it secret..i don’t know how to cook..i can prepare maggy only..(i used to get scolding from mom 4 this..but no worry bz dad is there to save me..ha ha ha..)

      • Vini

        Vinita n Niti,enjoyed reading this,I think undhiyu recipe I saw in veg recipes of India website(I try recipes from there sometimes),Niti,no worries ya, I have stayed in hostel n started cooking after marriage only n my Hus n father in law are the victims but I refer websites n try a lot of things,thanks to spoon by spoon measurements mentioned,nothing goes wrong,credit goes to bloggers,then traditional dishes,of course,mom n aunties are the reference..

  2. Vinita

    Niti di!! Kya analysis kiya apne!!
    Sach Mai aap Sheetal di aur shraddha di superb analysts ho!!!!!!
    Keep it up!!!!!!!
    As far as voting is concerned I will always vote for long comments!!!!!!

    • Niti

      thanks vinita..i just try to cover all the point which i like the most n cut it short the epi..n joya n shradhdha r better analysist than me..all the best dear for your exam..

  3. Vinita

    Di your ff is superb don’t worry about comments. we all will read this ff till end .am I Right my dear didis????
    Love u di!!!!! Keep writing!!!!!?

  4. nik

    Hiiii….vini di. I know dat u must b thinking dat my nm is vanished from cmnt PJ n I left reading ur ff. Di plzzz…don’t think so. Actually bat ye he ki me jb bhi apke ff ka koi episode padhti hun uske bad me next episode ke liye bahut restless ho jati hun.Air baar check krti hun ki next episode updt hua ya nhi. Apni Issi problem se bchne k liye ab me 4-5days me ek bar check krti hun aur jitne bhi episode updt hue hote h sabko ek hi bar me read kr leti hun . Maine aap ko ye sb is liye bataya kyunki apne mention kiya h ki bahut sare names aapke ff ke cmnt PJ se vanish ho gye h. Meri is bad habit ke liye I m really sorry . N ya I really lv ur ff n waiting fr SWASAN trk to start.

  5. nik

    N ya I ll also read ur ff till d last episode. N if u don’t find my cmnts under ur ff don’t think dat I left coz I prefer to read 4-5 episodes at a time.

    • Vini

      Hei Nik, very happy to know that u were reading my ff seriously ,I was thinking u haven’t read most of the episodes of this season,I usually update a single episode n of I feel story requires episodes without gap,O ho for it but usually I mention it wen I type the first one, but the way you are reading is good, thank u for reading as well as for telling that you will keep reading,don’t know if u all will like it…

  6. vinita

    aap sab chupa rustam nikhle! Vini di violin, shraddha di guitar, niyati di piano and harmonium…wow even i play harmonium and guitar and took training in classical singing and rabindrasangeet for seven years. My own brothers(twins) play tabla. its really nice to know that u all like music

    • Vini

      Oh God u too,m very happy,harmonium ,guitar,classical,Rabindrasangeet for 7 seven years,bros Tabla,wow,I have just learned for 2 yrs,so I dont fall in that list,not fit to fall.oh ,so happy to know that there are many talented girls here…

  7. joya

    hi everyone……………..
    u guys are so talented…….
    niti,shraddha,vini di,vinita..rupsikha….
    plz dnt include my name in kalakar’s list…………

    hehehehhehehehe…….
    humne kuch nahi aata………….waise bhi achchha hai na hum aam hai…….
    aap sab k talent ki kadar karne wala koi to hona chahiye……………wo hum hai na……….hehehehehehheher……sorry guys…..

    sorry guys just joking ha…….

    nice yr………..i m lucky na ki itne sare kalakaron k sath mulakat ho gayi……….bade star ban gaye na aap log to plz hum jaise kadardano ko bhool mat jaana………….

    • Vini

      Oho,simple and humble Joya baba,ur writing ,m a fan of that. Then u play volley ball ,no?I think I don’t fit in that list of kalakar because haven’t touched it for years,but very happy to know that u guys are so so.talented…

  8. Thnx vinita…welll pln toh aisa kuch khass nhi thi…hmmm bs tmple gayi thi…n ya i think sb ki tlnt ek h hai yr…main gaana gti h…spcllyy clssicl…n mjhe guitr sikhne ka bht mn h par chhote bhaya mjhe uski guitr ko hath v lgne nhi deti??

    Niyati di aap piano v bja leti h???wow yr…mjhe bhttt psnd h piano…uski awaz sunkr me toh romntic ho jti hu??

  9. Hi joya diii…hw rr u???u knw mjhe v psnd nhi h Honey singh k gaane…purane ggaane accha h na…aajj shuva se me sirf ek gaana sun rhi hu baar baar…”hum toh h pardesh mein,desh me nikla hoga chand”aisa kuch thi jagjt singh ki …xuley bade bhaya ne kaha sun ne ke liye…kaha ki agar lyf me aage bdhna h aur kuch bada krna h toh yeh gaana sun lena…aur yahi nhi aise kuch insprtn dne wala gaana sunna

    Vini di hw r u??

    • Vini

      Hai Mickey,I am fine,hw r you?sorry for not replying on time,or u sing,ah?very good,u guys are really talented yaar,then yea,your bro is right,music can inspire us a lot,I feel so,take care dear,keep in touch.

  10. Vinita

    Kaun bola aap kalakar nahi ho !!!!!!
    Sheetal di aapka shabdo ka itna achcha prayog aur likhne k itni achi style aapki bahut Bari kala hai. Alfazo ko achi tarike se sajana aur unsabko ek naya matlab Dena apne aap Mai hi ek bahut Bara gun hai Jo aapme hai and I think you also play basket ball ⚽??

  11. Vinita

    Hi rupsikha!!!!! Even u learn singing ?!!!!!!!!! Wow!!!!!!!!
    I am really happy to see that you all like retro songs.

  12. Vini

    Good morning guys,so many messages to be read,good to see u all here guys,I will read and respond asap,actually,a little busy weekend, will write next one tomorrow…

  13. Vini

    Sethooty,Nidhi,Joya, Vinita,Rupsikha,Nik,Nandini, Niti,I went thru your names,comments couldn’t read completely, shall read n respond,also, next update,shall surely write tomorrow, sorry for not keeping my word.

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