Hi guys,many of you would have heard about the book,”The seven basic plots:why we tell stories”,I haven’t read it but I have read about it,the author of the same mentions about all stories, said so far , falling under seven basic plots ,now why I told this is cos,my first ff wen I wrote, it was the continuation of the spoilers and I wanted to make it a totally feel good one,I hope I succeeded to an extent,I had no plans to write another one,then after reading comments under the last one ,I came up with this,the past 22 episodes were based on the school days of our central characters and I am a little satisfied with what I have written,now our story is proceeding and from here onwards ,don’t think I am thinking low about myself,bt I know that the upcoming track is going to be a little silly,but I am planning to write according to the one line that I have in my mind,I don’t claim that it will be different or interesting because it will have similarities to many familiar scenes,I feel so,then,episode 22,was the most randomly written one ,that flower pot scene was not supposed to be there,and I chat with a few of u daily,but last episode comments column had many new names and like any ff writer,I was also happy to know that many are reading my ff,thank u for leaving your comments there,and those who give me regular feedback,no words to thank u all for the support…
Swasan fan fiction (Season 2) episode 23….
Scene 1:Laksh,Ragini and Swara ,first day at college
Laksh has come in a new look with a new hair style,Ragini and Swara laughs seeing his hair and the spike,they are laughing and walking through the corridor,Ragini tells Laksh, “Lucky,isn’t this hair style a little too much,we don’t know the seniors here,what if they don’t like all this”,Laksh says, “Oh,come on Ragini,so that is the reason why you both have come like this,dull colours,simple kurtis,what yaar ,should enjoy the freedom from uniforms after all”,suddenly they hear a whistle,a gang of four boys calls them,Laksh shows attitude and walks in the front,Swarag behaves as two innocent girls,the gang looks at Lucky from top to bottom and asks him to mention his details,he mentions his n family details,suddenly the gang leader says, “stop it,so ,what that poor man is earning ,you are spending on your shoes n T shirts,and what is this,a hill on your head?”Laksh touches his spike,the gang leader continues, “Now,imagine a road roller has passed through your head,how will it look,”Laksh looks in shock,where as Swarag struggles to control their smile,the leader boy says, “didn’t understand Mr.Laksh,road roller has destroyed the spike,show us how it is”,Laksh sadly runs his hand over his head and the boy says,”Increase the speed,road is free of traffic”,laksh obeys and the whole spike he had formed is now destroyed,the gang warns them that if they complain to authorities about ragging,they themselves will suffer and asks them to leave,Laksh and Swarag are on the way to class,Swarag looks at Laksh’s head and shows a funny expression seeing which Laksh gets angry..he raises hand to hit swarag ,but they run from there,wishing Lucky a good college life…
Scene 2:College freshers’ day
The whole seniors have assembled in the auditorium,a staff committee is there to monitor if pranks goes beyond limits,juniors were asked to introduce themselves one by one and each had to take a chit and perform what is written,Swara had to sing,Swara who is an average singer sings a Bhajan,a few teases her whereas a few applauds for her,Laksh was asked to narrate how to catch a naughty chicken,Laksh ran on the whole stage and seniors were instructing him,all bursts into laughter,later Ragini’s turn comes and she has to dance on the spot,Ragini dances beautifully,even,Lucky and Swara are surprised to see her dance on the spot like that,after dance,Swara hugs Ragini and tells her that she has good sense,though random,she didn’t miss a single beat..Ragini tells her that after this round has to perform in group,no?seeing these people and hearing their noise,m afraid if I will remember the steps,Swara boosts her confidence with her words,later Ragini and team dances to a medley of songs,a senior is watching it with full concentration,he asks his friend for the name of the girl at the centre and his friend tells him, “she is Ragini,oh,u didn’t see her introduction round,no?we played songs randomly but that girl was just awesome on stage,why man,this enquiry now?”,the other person just smiles,dance stops and everyone applauds,the senior tells in his mind, “Ragini,nice name and…nice girl”
Scene 3:After a few weeks,a weekend,Sanskar has come home,the friends decide to meet in front of their old tuition class
It is evening,Swasanraglak has come out from the tuition class after meeting their teachers,they stand under the tree where they used to stand and chat after tuitions,they decide to go for an outing the next day,Swara and Ragini tells them if it safe to go to that park where they have planned,Laksh assures them that he had checked and now the area is devoid of antisocial elements,Sanskar tells him, “Lucky,u are sure,no?if it was just about us,it is ok to go anywhere,but Swara and Ragini have sought permission and their parents allowed thinking about us,so it is our duty to assure that they are safe,”Lucky assures him that the area is now clean and many families also comes there to spend time,they decide to go to their usual parlour,pops and corns and leaves…
Scene 4:Pops and corns,same evening
They have ordered the items and is chatting,Sanskar asks them about their college life,Ragini tells, “everything is fine for me and Swara,but this Lucky has messed up with a few boys,that too soon after the freshers day,the opposite gang has members from his class as well as from senior batches,what was the need for this one to go and involve in unnecessary fights,uncle was called to office and a warning was given “Sanskar tells, “Lucky,u didn’t tell me this “ and he turns at Swara, “even u didn’t message me”.Swara looks apologetically at Sanskar,Ragini interferes and says, “why to trouble you,thought to tell when you come,after all you have your tensions there,everything is fine now,just tell this stupid to keep a check on his anger,more than studies Lucky ji is interested in other activities,”Laksh who was silent till then gets angry and tells, “nothing to worry Sanskar,it is all over,and these two,wont leave a chance to complain about me,now you are not here,no?so these two always pulls my leg,Swara has some consideration atleast but this Ragini,no way?”,Sanskar interferes and stops their fights and they decide to meet the next day at the same place and leave together for the park…
Scene 5:The Park
Ragini and Swara has bought food from home,Laksh has brought some fruits,Sanskar has bought his mom’s special pudding ,they keep their things there and decides to play some fun games,they enjoy their time there,after some time, Sanskar notices Laksh’s face changing,he sees a group of boys approaching,Ragini tells Sanskar, “Sanky,that is Laksh’s enemy gang”she turns to Lucky and says, “See Laksh,don’t lose your calm,they may taunt you to start a fight,please compose yourself”,The gang approaches and looks at Lucky,Laksh ignores them and cuts apples,one of the boys says, “see yaar,hero is cutting apple for ladies,ye,hero,look here,we know this is what is meant meant for u,being with girls,by the way,this is our dancer,no,Ragini,Ragini,cant you make friends with some better boys?,Laksh gets angry and gets up and holds the boy’s collar ,they start a fight,Sanskar asks Swara and Ragini to move and he goes to prevent Lucky from fighting,he tells the boys to leave it and that they are all college mates,one of the boys punches Sanskar on his face,Swara shouts Sanskar and runs towards him,fight continues,meanwhile a few middle aged men sees their fights and interferes,they asks them to stop,they sends the boys gang away,Sanskar takes the water bottle and goes to a corner,there is a cut on the inside of his cheek and is bleeding,he gargles,Ragini scolds Laksh and says, “I told u to not give in,see,Sanky came in between and he is wounded,Lucky,no use talking to you,come Sanskar and Swara,we will go home and do the dressing.
Scene 6:Ragini’s house
Ragini’s mother is there at home,she brings the first aid box and tells that she will bring something for them to drink,Ragini is dressing Laksh’s wound,when she applies cotton with Dettol on the abrasion on his face,he shouts,meanwhile Swara is dressing Sanskar’s wounds,Ragini scolds Laksh and asks him to look at Sanskar who is silently bearing because of him,Swara is dressing the wound and she finds Sanskar is in pain but is just tightening his fists and composing himself ,she understands and tells him softly, “physical or mental ,pain,if you suppress,it is not going to subside,nor is the wound going to heal faster,relax Sanky,relax your arms,look at u,”Just then,Ragini’s mom comes and tells them, “I have informed three of your parents,don’t worry,I haven’t added any oil,you guys can go home,they are worried but I have pacified them,now drink this soup,she gives it to them,Ragini’s bowl falls down from her hand,her mom starts scolding Ragini ,Ragini tells her,”Mom,I didn’t drop it purposely,already my head is paining,you please don’t make me angry,I will clean it”,Pooja goes from there,Sanskar moves to the balcony with his soup bowl,he has a cut inside is mouth and he is in pain while drinking the soup,Swara understands and goes near him,she asks him if it paining severely,Sanskar says, “it is ok,Swara,until it heals it will be there,bt what is this Lucky up to?Swara replies, “Yea,there are problems,his parents are worried,all wont be like u,no?You place others’ feelings above yours,ah,don’t worry,hope ,he will become responsible,and when are u going back,Sunday or?Sanskar says, “Thought to leave Sunday evening but I think I will take a leave on Monday”,Swara tells him,” then why don’t u come home tomorrow,they always enquire about you, at home”,Sanskar replies, “next time I will come,sure”,they stand there at the balcony and chat for a long time whereas Ragini goes on scolding Laksh,Laksh is seated supporting his chin with his palm and silently listening to her……….
Credit to: Vini(Veena)